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MLP: The Last Mage
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» Diamond Den Allegrezza
» Concerto Dieci Envy and Arrogance
» Chapter Ten Hiatus
» November The Dark Guardian
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» Chapter 2: The Test An Elder Power
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## Chapter: 17 » Double Rainbow

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Rainbow Dash had performed the Sonic Rainboom. She had flown faster than any other pegasus. She had literally flown through time. Impossible had become just another word to the brash mare who could do it all. And yet, this moment… it was still indescribable. Breathtaking. She was diving faster than she ever had before, hurtling toward the ground at a speed that would put Celestia herself to shame. And there was more.
She was performing a highly complex and entirely original routine with the Wonderbolts. THE WONDERBOLTS. Her lifelong idols. A stunt of this magnitude was entirely unprecedented in the history of organized flight, and she was a part of it. More than a part of it. She was the CENTER of it. She was, if only temporarily, the Captain. And there was MORE.
A magical undertaking beyond any other was in progress, again with her at the center. She couldn’t magic her way out of a paper bag, and yet here she was at the center of the grandest spell ever conceived. Beyond that, this was the first time two disciplines so unrelated had been fused so perfectly. The flight and the magic were not two cogs working together as part of a whole machine, they were one. The magic breathed new life into the art of flight even as the flight weaved sigils and crests into the air.
Rainbow Dash could see it now. The enormous symbol carved into the sky by her team. She would be there before she had time to blink again. The Sonic Rainboom had happened quite a bit higher up. Much greater speeds were required when she crossed the critical point.
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Applejack coughed one more time before going limp. Rainbow Dash pressed her ear against the farmer’s chest. She waited. She cried.
“It’s not FAIR! WHY? After everything we went through, after EVERYTHING we did for each other… why does it have to end like this… why does it have to be my fault…” Tears streamed down her face and splashed against the cold dirt. She didn’t know how much time had passed before she moved from her mournful spot, but it didn’t matter. She was Rainbow Dash. She had leapt through time to win Applejack’s heart, and she wasn’t going to let her be taken away without a fight. It didn’t matter if she had to fight herself. It didn’t matter if she had to fight Twilight. It didn’t matter if she had to fight the laws of causality. She was going to get her love BACK.
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Twilight Sparkle was suspended in place, her magic sealed off, unable to fight back. She was held almost completely still, given just enough room to breathe and was about to try to speak. Her muzzle was forced shut in a hazy purple glow.
“This is the part where you throw out a tired line like ‘You’ve gone mad!’ and I’m supposed to respond with ‘No, I see clearly for the first time and it is the WORLD that has gone mad!’ and then proceed to give the big villain speech about how wrong the world is and how I’m going to fix it. Well let me just save us both a whole lot of time… hah! Really, I thought I’d stopped using language like that. Where was I? Oh, right. No, that’s not quite the direction this is going to go. While it’s true that I can see clearly and the world is mad, it has not suddenly become that way. Everything has always been mad.”
“You’re crazy!” wheezed Twilight.
“What was I JUST SAYING? We’re not going down that road. I’m going to try to show you. I’m going to try to teach you, as I was taught. Once you cast aside the veil of time you can see reality for what it really is, what it always has been. It is chaos. The whole of existence is a big, ugly, boiling, churning, stinking wad of chaos. Ponies are only able to live happily because of how blind they are. The flaws in any one reality are insignificant and can be overcome. I have seen the answer to each timeline, and I could fix them were I given the chance. It is only when realms bleed together that everything begins to fall apart. There is too much to be controlled, and whatever cracks allowed the intrusion to begin with only spread further with each pulse. I would have been content to be a martyr, casting myself into the fire to restore the illusion. I would have been okay dying so that nopony had to see what I have seen. Your plan is noble, and I would gladly let you carry it out if only it would work. But it won’t. It doesn’t. It can’t.”
A single tear fell down into the infinite nothingness below as the mare turned away. The magic restraining Twilight began to weaken.
“Instead, it’s come to this. The delicate fabric lies in tatters on the floor, and there is no power in all of creation capable of mending it. The true nature of our existence will destroy the sanity of all living things. I have seen into that uncaring abyss, and I know it to be a fate that none deserve. But there is yet one answer to the problem. One hope against the discord... all things can stand united in the harmony of oblivion.”
The physical restraint was gone, and Twilight was capable of moving under her own power once more. But she did not move. She stood staring with determination, and she spoke.
“You’re wrong. There is no harmony without togetherness. Without friendship. Without magic. I thought the Princess taught you better, Twilight Sparkle.”
The mare turned around, her eyes burning coals of rage as her magic flared with an audible roar. The force holding back Twilight Sparkle’s magic was released. “YOU WILL NOT REFER TO ME BY THAT NAME. TWILIGHT SPARKLE IS THE ONE WHO CAUSED THIS TRAVESTY. I AM THE ONE WHO WILL END IT. TWILIGHT SPARKLE IS CHAOS. TWILIGHT SPARKLE IS DISCORD. I… I AM ORDER. I HAVE OBSERVED YOU AND YOUR FRIENDS FROM EVERY POSSIBLE TIMELINE. FROM EVERY ANGLE. THERE IS NOTHING YOU CAN DO. YOU CANNOT DEFEAT ME AND THOUGH YOUR END WILL NOT BE SWIFT, IT IS ONLY BECAUSE IT IS MY WILL THAT YOU SUFFER.”
“There is just oooone teensy little thing you may have overlooked. One element that fell through the cracks.”
“I WILL NOT PLAY THIS GAME WITH YOU.”
“Scootaloo, NOW!”

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## Comments ( 22 )

nemryn
9585 #1 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago
what
BlankFlankBrony
9591 #2 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago
Scootaloo for the tactical strike? SWEET!
Shader
9603 #3 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago RazorRaptor9 RazorRaptor9
Ok, so it a NEW Twilight? Or is it the one driven half insane by time travel with Pinkie?
DashiexX
9604 #4 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago
SCOOTALOOOOO!!! YEA!!
Soulsilver
9605 #5 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago
Oh would you look at that, some of my brain is back from evaporation and is condensing into a pear. And it can speak! It seems to be saying "Lol, what?" over and over again. How strange.
sieurin
9620 #6 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago
"Evil" Twilight would be pretty horrible, yes.
Triforce of the Gods
9627 #7 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago
Oh great, someone let Twilight look into the Untempered Schism. Where's Doctor Whooves when you need him?
HeirApparent
9631 #8 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago
*Thud, Thud. Thud, Thud.* Here come the drums.
Ok, this story took a turn for the dark and serious somewhere. I'm not exactly sure where that is, but it happened. Or maybe it hasn't happened yet, and we're just skipping ahead. ...I hate time travel.
Farnor
9647 #9 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago
wat
RazorRaptor9
9681 #10 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago
>>9603 It could be either. It could be somepony who just calls themselves Twilight Sparkle. It could be anything. But it's most probably driven to insanity by Pinkie
RazorRaptor9
9682 #11 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago
>>9603 It could be either. It could be somepony who just calls themselves Twilight Sparkle. It could be anything. But it's most probably driven to insanity by Pinkie
Lord of the Wrongs (guest)
9691 #12 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago
Uh... wait, uh...
I think Evil Twi is one that didn't get everything fixed with Pinkie's help and her reality came apart. The "Bad End" version of Pinkie Pie Twilight.
JohnPerry
9704 #13 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago
..........Waaaaaaaat.....the.....fffffff......
Me no can brain anymore. This is one insane, awesome, wicked story, but now it just got real.
I was expecting this to be your typical AppleDash story when I opened this, but this has gone WAY past AppleDash at this point.
FanOfMostEverything
9708 #14 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago
I like how you've given up any hope of narrative causality at this point. Very appropriate given the current state of timespace.
RAWRS (guest)
9713 #15 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 5 days ago
TOO SHORT.
Sporky Hooves
9850 #16 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 4 days ago
That is all.
Therouge10
9926 #17 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 4 days ago
It's 2am and I have to get up in 3 hours. I'll comment more later. Ok so the me that just said that is sleeping and I came back to finish this up real fast for him because he was a freaking zombie the next day.. Errr I was. Nvm. Ok so the story is amazing and I have faith that the author actually knows what is happening but oh god look at ... Ok so that me just passes out I'm Gina finish this as fast as possible now before the first me wakes up, ok! It makes comets sense, I have seem the sketches of the chart when the author posted them once he finished the story. I'll put a link below so everyon.. Ok that was close I was able to stop me from ruining the ending for you guys, anyhow just enjoy the story and keep in mind thAt by the end all of it will make sense, just have faith in the auth.. Ok listen up! Everyone you have to stop reading this right now! Eventually a concept is invented that makes this happen in real life by a reader who read this story, I came back to make sure nobody tries to duplicate what happens here, ok and as fir the author you must.. This post have been condemned by the Aperature Science paradox time comity. This user has violated the law against time .. Please we must stop the computers from taking over Aperature. If they discover the portal divide we're all fucked. O god I hear them. Good luck to anyone reading this, my name is
Rokas (guest)
10002 #18 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 4 days ago
Are you a fan of Bob & George? This reads like one of David Anez's time loops Taken Up To 11 and Beyond the Impossible. It's utterly insane and confusion and I love it.
Truly only Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle could rip a hole in time-space. Even if they did have help from Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow dash, Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash, Scootaloo, Rainbow Dash, Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, The Wonderbolts, Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, and Rainbow Sparkle Dash von Twilight, which is a chimera created by the two ponies fusing together to fix reality, and it/they is/are bound to show up any moment now. Except it won't, because it happened already, but didn't.
Any moment now I expect to see the Heart of Gold show up and a very hoopy frood ask to borrow some toothpaste.
understatedHyperbole
10011 #19 Chapter 17 Posted 5 weeks, 4 days ago
That narrative discontinuity. Sheewt, not as though the narrator's ever been one for making things easier for the audience, has it? I'm definitely not even going to try and parse through all these splits and loops (I'll wait for the chart) myself, I'm just going to content myself with scenes and pray for vestiges of linearity within this big ol' bowl of Time Top Ramen - Now with 20% more Torn Fabric of Causality.
Also, ScootaBomb, go!
Risky (guest)
11591 #20 Chapter 17 Posted 4 weeks, 6 days ago
Ok, so either this author is the most brilliant narrator in the history of literature and creation and has found a way to represent in writing the most complex and well developed story, one that traverses time itself, and in the context of a pony fic... or, he has just thrown caution to the wind and is mucking about as he goes with stupendous results.
Either way? I'm still confused as ever, and have never been more content! honestly, this is brilliant! this author is just superb! i can only imagine the thought that went into it...
Jegerkaj
17012 #21 Chapter 17 Posted 3 weeks, 1 day ago
What.
fairykind
19250 #22 Chapter 17 Posted 2 weeks, 4 days ago

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