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Original Thread
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Reviews and Comments
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Anon : keep going, you can't stop now 
Scribble : Everytime I'm online, you're online... 
Anon : so great! 
Anon : Bueno...
Anon-between-faps : holy shit man. you are really good. don't stop.
Anon : That was probably the best green text I've seen so far. 
Mister Twister : I must say, that was some quality writing. 


Anon : unf... I'm glad I stumbled across this.
Scootaloo, innocence, sex, and after sex cuddles?
10/10. I did enjoy the fact that you had a decently in character lead up to the story. I guess if I had to give criticism I'd say I feel that a bit more uncertainty or surprise from RD when she woke up would have been fitting but that's probably just a personal preference.






Roughing It by NotScribble
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>There was a gentle breeze in the night air, carrying with it a distinct scent of rain.
>The distant waterfalls could be heard only faintly, their constant bellows echoing among the mountaintops.
>A small group of ponies had set up camp here, relaxing near a warm fire that repelled the damp air.
>Scootaloo sat alone, attempting to hide the fact she was afraid of yet another one of rainbow Dash's famous ghost stories.
>Ghost stories she almost certainly stole from Twilight.
>Rainbow Dash stood just out of range of the flickering light being cast by their small fire, doing her best to mimic a zombie groan.
>"Urrrr... The zombie shambled closer and closer, but the ponies were cornered. There was no where left to run."
>Rainbow Dash crept closer and closer to the shaking ponies.
>Sweetie Belle clung to her sister, Rarity.
>Rarity did her best to stifle a few giggles and wrapped her arm around her younger sister. 
>Apple Bloom leaned closer to her sister, but attempted to hide it.
>Scootaloo was sitting alone, visibly shaking.
>She really wished she could stop shaking.
>She was tougher than this.
>She gulped. Positive thinking wasn't going to work.
>Rainbow Dash continued getting closer, walking in small and awkward steps.
>"They could only watch as the zombies drew closer and closer..."
>The light now danced across her face.
>It looked terrifying.
>Suddenly she abandoned her slow shambling walk and leaped directly at Scootaloo, tackling her to the ground.
>"Gotcha!"
>The three fillies all screamed in unison, and almost instantly afterwards tried to play it off as if they meant to do that.
>Scootaloo was still shaking slightly while she layed under Rainbow Dash.
>"H-heh, good s-story Rainbow Dash. Y-you got them r-really g-good."
>Rainbow Dash grinned as she backed off of Scootaloo.
>She flipped her hair back with her forearm.
>"Yeah, I'm pretty awesome at that." 


>Scootaloo worked her way up off the ground and hopped back onto the log she was sitting on.
>"Of course, you still can't scare me."
>She offers up a grin.
>Rainbow Dash rubs Scootaloo's hair, doing her best to mess it up.
>"Of course you weren't scared, squirt. I've taught you better than that."
>Apple Bloom shakes her head.
>"I saw you shaking over there, Scootaloo."
>Sweetie Belle chimed in as well.
>"I did too. You were scared."
>Scootaloo turns away.
>"N-no, It's just, so cold out tonight and this fire is so small."
>Applejack stretches and looks around the night sky.
>"Yeah, looks like it's bout time to be hittin the straw. C'mon, Apple Bloom."
>Rarity stands up and begins walking towards her tent.
>"Indeed. All of this damp air is going to wreak havoc on my mane. I still can not believe I let you all talk me into yet another trip into these dreadful mountains. Come along, Sweetie Belle."
>Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom are quick to follow their sisters into their respective tents.
>They don't want to be outside in the dark. Not after that story.
>Scootaloo looked around and laughed nervously to herself.
>"Yeah, you guys better go to bed, cuz you're scared, and I'll stay out here for a while, cuz, you know, I'm not scared."
>Rainbow Dash flips her tail in Scootaloo's face as she turns around.
>"Heh, don't overdo it, squirt. Come in whenever you're done proving how brave you are."
>Rainbow Dash walked into her tent and laid down on her bedroll, eager to get some sleep.
>Scootaloo continued sitting alone on her log, glancing around nervously.
>She gulps.
>"Nope... Not scared at all..."


>How much time had passed?
>Scootaloo continued glancing around.
>She couldn't hear anything, except for the falls.
>Not hearing anything was almost worse than hearing something.
>Anything could be out there.
>Anything.
>"I, uh, I think I've been out here long enough to prove I'm not scared."
>Scootaloo jumped up off the log and smiled.
>"Yeah, that's it. I'm only going inside now because I'm tired."
>She walks confidently over to the tent she's sharing with Rainbow Dash and pulls the flap open.
>She spots Rainbow Dash, fast asleep on her side.
>Snoring, as usual.
>"Aw."
>She half expected Rainbow Dash to still be awake, waiting for her so they could hang out more.
>Scootaloo begins walking towards her bed.
>She glances over at Rainbow Dash one more time as she walks by, and stops.
>Huh. 
>Her tail was raised.
>Scootaloo stared at Rainbow Dash's exposed vulva. 
>'Why am I staring? Why can't I look away?'
>Scootaloo thought to herself. 
>These feelings confused her.
>She thought she just wanted Rainbow Dash to be her big sister.
>But.
>Maybe she actually wanted something more.
>Scootaloo shook her head.
>'No. That's just weird. Now go to bed like a good little filly.'
>Scootaloo looked back over at her bed and begin to slowly move towards it, only to stop once again.
>She looked down at the ground, then back over at Rainbow Dash, still snoring away the night.
>Her heart pounded.
>She could feel an uneasy lump in her throat.
>This was a new type of fear entirely.


>'Maybe I'm just a little curious. That's all.'
>She backs up slowly and turns towards Rainbow Dash.
>'Yeah, that's probably it. I bet if i get a good look my stupid brain will be satisfied and I can forget this ever happened, and not tell anyone, ever.'
>She gulped.
>'Especially not Rainbow Dash.'
>She didn't want to imagine what she might do if she found out.
>Scootaloo carefully edged her way over to Rainbow Dash's backside, glancing over at the tent entrance all the while, afraid somepony might burst in for no reason.
>She slowly moved closer and closer.
>Rainbow Dash was clearly visible the whole way over.
>Her heart pounded harder and harder.
>She felt she might actually wake her up with how loud it was beating.
>She reached the edge of Rainbow Dash's bedroll and stopped.
>With one more quick glance around, she leaned in slowly for a very close inspection of Rainbow Dash's nether region.
>'There, see? Nothing to it.'
>She hoped that she could end this here.
>Fear gripped her tightly.
>What if she woke up now? 
>She couldn't possibly explain what she was doing.
>What if someone walked in? 
>She closed her eyes and stood there silently for a moment, contemplating all the bad things that could happen.
>Then, a scent crossed her nostrils.
>'Is that...'
>She opened her eyes and looked back down at Rainbow Dash's magnificent vulva.
>She leaned in closer and took in a deep breath through her nose.
>She shuddered slightly.
>She smelled fantastic.


>She pulled her head away in a jerking motion.
>'Wait, what am I doing?'
>She cringed.
>'Why did I like that?'
>She looked over at Rainbow Dash, who was still snoring away.
>She turned and glanced back at the tent entrance, which was still void of anypony who might see her.
>Finally she looked back down at Rainbow Dash's nethers.
>'Just once more.'
>She leaned down closer than before and allowed herself to take another deep sample of the pleasing aroma. 
>She began to salivate slightly.
>It was already so close.
>She could probably reach it from where she already was.
>'Just... Just to see how it is.'
>She licked her lips and then slowly started extending out her tongue.
>It edged closer and closer to her goal.
>Then she stopped and sucked her tongue back into her mouth.
>'You can't do this. You can't.'
>She couldn't fight herself anymore.
>'You have to.'
>Once again, she slowly extended her tongue out.
>Slowly, she worked it towards Rainbow Dash.
>Very slowly.
>Then, it made contact.
>Scootaloo stood completely paralyzed.
>She had just licked Rainbow Dash's vulva.
>She wasn't sure how she should feel about that.


>Scootaloo allowed her tongue to once again reach out and lightly lap Rainbow Dash along the ridge of her vulva.
>It... wasn't bad. 
>It made her feel strange.
>She leaned in a little closer.
>Her tongue slowly worked the lips apart.
>She pushed her tongue deeper and deeper into her vulva, until it was fully inside.
>To her surprise, it had an almost sweet taste to it.
>She didn't even notice Rainbow Dash's snoring had mostly subsided.
>Rainbow Dash moaned slightly and rolled over onto her back.
>Scootaloo flung her head up and back, nearly losing her balance in the process.
>She closed her eyes and cringed, expecting something else to follow.
>She opened one eye.
>Nothing happened.
>She glanced all around once more, afraid that somehow, someone would find out.
>There was no one else here, except Rainbow Dash, who was now resting peacefully on her back.
>Her legs were relaxed, spread apart slightly.
>Her snoring had ceased entirely.
>Scootaloo allowed herself to breath.
>'Okay, maybe I should just call it quits now while I'm ahead.'
>She nodded to herself, but her legs didn't move.
>She already knew she wasn't going to sleep anytime soon, she was just having trouble accepting it.
>She bit her lip and looked back down at Rainbow Dash.
>Thoughts of being caught started to subside as thoughts of simply licking Rainbow Dash took precedence in her mind.
>Surely she could get much deeper now.
>She grinned slightly as she edged a little closer to Rainbow Dash.
>She lowered her head and examined her.
>Yes, this should be a little easier now.
>'Here we go.'


>Scootaloo slowly pressed her head forward until her lips caressed the edges of Rainbow Dash's vulva.
>She slowly worked her tongue up and down along the opening, once more gently working along her labia. 
>A feeling of ecstasy overcame her.
>Rainbow Dash moaned slightly.
>Scootaloo ignored her and continued working her way inside, ever so slowly.
>She licked up and down in broad strokes, feeling all around inside of her with the tip of her tongue.
>Rainbow Dash moaned a little louder.
>Scootaloo continued licking up and down.
>Up and down.
>Up, and Rainbow Dash flinched slightly.
>'What was that?'
>Scootaloo attempted to lick the same area once again, and Rainbow Dash began to squirm slightly.
>Her moaning increased.
>'She must like that.'
>Scootaloo decided she would work on that area then, since it seemed to make her happy.
>Rainbow Dash began to grind against Scootaloo.
>Ever so slightly at first, but it didn't take long before Rainbow Dash was actively helping Scootaloo hit the right spot.
>Time between moans decreased. 
>They grew shorter.
>The grinding continued and Rainbow Dash began turning her head from left to right on her pillow.
>Finally she stopped moving completely.
>She slowly opened her eyes and blinked a few times, attempting to wake herself up.
>She lifted her head off of her pillow and looked down along her belly to the source of her pleasure.
>She went into shock.
>"Scootaloo?"
>Scootaloo looked up and her eyes met with Rainbow Dash, then she quickly glanced down at what she was doing before jumping up and away.
>This time she didn't catch her balance.


>Rainbow Dash just continued staring, unable to comprehend what she just awoke to.
>Scootaloo rolled over and climbed back up onto her feet.
>She looked over at Rainbow Dash.
>Her eyes widened.
>She felt panicked.
>"I'm so, so sorry, Rainbow Dash!"
>She spoke quickly with urgency in her voice, but kept it as quiet as she could.
>"I just- Well I- See, I was gonna sleep but then I saw you and then I felt curious and then... And then..."
>She looked down at the ground.
>She wished she could just disappear.
>Her eyes watered slightly.
>Rainbow Dash sat up and scratched her head, still struggling to accept what had happened.
>She glanced down at herself.
>Her nethers were thoroughly soaked.
>Not exclusively from saliva, either.
>She couldn't help but be impressed, if not still mostly in awe of the entire situation.
>She looked up at Scootaloo, who was now crying silently at the foot of her bed, unable to imagine what could possibly happen next.
>Rainbow Dash attempted to smile as she stood up and walked over to Scootaloo.
>She sat down next to her and wrapped a wing around her, pulling her in close to her side.
>"Y'know... You're alright for a squirt."
>Scootaloo sniffed and tried to breath normally.
>She continued staring at the ground.
>"I'm sorry... I won't do it again. Please don't tell anyone."
>Rainbow Dash bit her lip, unsure if she wanted to continue down this path, but she quickly made up her mind.
>"Would you even want to do it again?" 
>Scootaloo sniffed once more. 
>She looked up at Rainbow Dash with watery eyes.
>"I mean, did you like it?"
>Rainbow Dash struggled to continue looking down at Scootaloo.
>That was so direct.
>Scootaloo allowed herself to grin slightly and even chuckled once in surprise.
>"Actually... I did."


>Rainbow Dash grinned.
>"Well alright. I guess I should return the favor, then, shouldn't I?"
>Scootaloo watched as she stood up and moved back to her bed.
>"What do you mean?"
>"You'll see. Come here, squirt."
>Scootaloo stood up and walked over to Rainbow Dash.
>"Here, lay down and relax."
>Scootaloo did as she was told.
>She knew what Rainbow Dash meant now.
>She wondered what it might feel like.
>Rainbow Dash gently positioned Scootaloo in front of her so they could both lay down comfortably. 
>Despite wanting this, Scootaloo was still nervous.
>"Rainbow Dash... I-"
>"Shh, just enjoy it."
>Scootaloo took a deep breath and nodded before lying completely flat on her back. 
>She stared up at the roof of the tent.
>Rainbow Dash spread Scootaloo's legs apart a little more than they already were before going to work.
>She nuzzled Scootaloo's nethers gently.
>Scootaloo gasped slightly.
>Rainbow Dash grinned and began to slowly lick along the ridges of Scootaloo's vulva.
>Scootaloo squirmed slightly.
>She'd never felt anything like this before.
>It felt amazing.


>She grinned as Rainbow Dash continued working her way inside with her dextrous tongue.
>Now Scootaloo understood why Rainbow Dash had enjoyed this so much.
>Rainbow Dash circled around along her labia, and subtly worked her way towards Scootaloo's clitoris.
>Once she reached it, Scootaloo's legs twitched.
>Her eyes widened.
>This felt incredible.
>Her breathing sped up.
>Her heart began pounding.
>Rainbow Dash continued working expertly on Scootaloo, enjoying this new level of relationship.
>Scootaloo squirmed around beneath Rainbow Dash, who did her best to keep her as still as possible.
>"Ah... Ray... Dash... I feel weird."
>Rainbow Dash chuckled as she continued.
>Suddenly Scootaloo arched her back.
>"Ahh!"
>Her entire body shuddered with pleasure.
>It hit her, wave after wave.
>Slowly dissipating with each wave.
>Rainbow Dash sat up and licked her lips.
>Scootaloo remained on her back, breathing heavily.
>She closed her eyes and began rubbing her chest with her hooves.
>That was incredible.
>"How was that, squirt?"
>Scootaloo didn't even open her eyes.
>"Better than I could have imagined."


>Rainbow Dash giggled and walked back over to her bedroll.
>"Yeah, that's great and all, but don't you have a job to finish?"
>Scootaloo opened her eyes and grinned.
>"Oh, yeah."
>She rolled over onto her stomach and attempted to stand.
>Her legs were still a little wobbly from the recent convulsions resulting from her orgasm.
>She trotted happily over to Rainbow Dash, who had already gone ahead and made herself comfortable once more.
>Scootaloo giggled to herself as she laid back down in the position she was in before she was caught.
>This time she had permission.
>Rainbow Dash relaxed and closed her eyes.
>Scootaloo pressed her muzzle into Rainbow Dash's vulva once more and began moving slowly in circles.
>She allowed herself another deep inhale through her flared nostrils all the while.
>She loved her scent so much.
>She did her best to mimic the same motions rainbow Dash had used on her only moments ago.
>She slowly worked her tongue into her, licking slowly in all directions.
>Tasting everything.
>Savoring everything.
>Rainbow Dash began to squirm slightly.
>Finally, she worked her way back up to the sweet spot.
>She suckled on rainbow Dash's clitoris.
>Rainbow Dash gasped and began even more involuntary squirming.
>She couldn't believe Scootaloo was already this decent.
>Scootaloo did a good job of staying with Rainbow Dash, even as she moved about.
>She began moaning faster and faster.
>She had been close before she woke up, and it didn't take long to reach that point once more.
>Scootaloo lapped hungrily at her clitoris, eager to share the pleasure she received.
>Finally she let out one long moan as she pressed herself against Scootaloo.
>Her entire body shuddered over and over.
>Scootaloo wasn't sure what the fluid gushing forth from her vulva was, but it tasted delicious.
>Satisfied, she stood up to go lay near Rainbow Dash.
>Dash hugged Scootaloo close to her body and they fell into a peaceful sleep.
let out one long moan as she pressed herself against Scootaloo.
>Her entire body shuddered over and over.
>Scootaloo wasn't sure what the fluid gushing forth from her vulva was, but it tasted delicious.
>Satisfied, she stood up to go lay near Rainbow Dash.
>Dash hugged Scootaloo close to her body and they fell into a peaceful sleep.
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