Original Thread
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http://archive.heinessen.com/mlp/thread/S17885848
 
 
 
Reviews and Comments
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Anon : Please join us in the AiE threads, we need more writers. Also you should put your stories on pastebin so we can find them easily.
NotScribble : hope you fags enjoyed it.
   >Anon : Yes.
   >Anon : More than I should've.
 
 
 
Rainbow Falls by NotScribble
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>Any writefags around? Can we get a rainbow dash pissing on anon story?
>Seconding this motion
>Third for this.
>Fourth. There are too few pissing stories lately.
>Fifth for this.
fine.
 
 
 
>Rainbow Dash struggled not to puke. The taste was absolutely awful.
"Hurry up and swallow it you wimp."
>Anon relished in her misery. After the things she had made him do, it was about time he enjoyed some payback.
>Rainbow Dash attempted to shoot a glare an Anon, but her focus quickly returned to simply not puking the vile concoction Anon had created up.
>If she did, she would have to start over.
>Her eyes watered intensely.
>So close.
>She finally managed to work up the willpower to overcome her body's reflexes to spew up the horrid substance, and she swallowed.
>She collapsed to the ground and made many audible gagging sounds.
>Anon, sitting a few feet in front of Rainbow Dash, fell backwards, laughing contently.
>Rainbow Dash pushed herself up onto her forelegs and wiped her mouth.
>She glared at Anon once again.
>"Just what was in there, anyway?"
>Rainbow Dash fought back another gag.
>The aftertaste wouldn't go away.
>Anon finished his fit of giggles and sat back up.
"Eh, you know, a little of this, a little of that, a bunch of squishy rotting stuff I found lying around..."
>Rainbow Dash fought back yet another gag reflex.
 
>"How do you know... Urf, none of that... Gah, was poison?"
>Anon shrugged.
"I don't."
>The two of them were, more-or-less contently, playing a game of honor, will and guts in Anon's backyard.
>Which is to say, they were seeing who could take the most punches in the arm, and the first to give up had to accept a challenge made by the other.
>It was probably a horrible idea, but Ponyville is boring.
>Anon had lost most of the punching bits, considering Rainbow Dash had the advantage of hooves.
>An advantage he probably should have considered before beginning this stupid game in the first place.
>"Whatever. I lost, so I'll start the next round."
>Rainbow Dash stood up and spit a few times on the ground.
>Anon wiped a tear from his eye and stood up as well.
"Yeah, yeah. Let's go again."
>Rainbow Dash grinned at Anon and turned around. She pushed up and balanced on her forelegs, readying a hearty buck.
>Anon stepped back slightly.
"Hey, wait now, we already decided on no kicks."
>Rainbow Dash lowered her hind legs back down to the ground and turned her head around to see Anon.
>"Ugh, fine..."
>Suddenly, she grinned.
>What a marvelous idea.
>She jumped up off the ground and flew up high into the sky.
>Anon blocked the sun from shining in his eyes as he attempted to spot her.
"What is she..."
>Then he found her, heading directly towards him.
>She was sure moving fast.
>Holy shit.
"No, hey, no! You can't do that!"
>Anon shouted in protest, but Rainbow Dash replied in kind.
>"Can't do what? I'm gonna use my foreleg to hit you, just like we decided."
>Anon grit his teeth as Rainbow Dash rapidly approached him.
>If she hit him at that speed, his arm would likely shatter.
>His organs might explode.
>Oh shit.
"Fuck, you can't hit me like that!"
>"Here it comes!"
>Rainbow Dash said, mocking Anon.
>Anon dropped to his knees right before Rainbow Dash reached him.
"Fine, I give up!"
 
>Rainbow Dash landed directly in front of Anon.
>The force of her speed caused air to rush past him.
>She shot him a very satisfied grin.
>"You know Anon... I wouldn't really have hit you going that fast."
>She flipped her hair back behind her head with her foreleg.
>"Buuut, seeing as how you gave up, I guess that means it's my turn to challenge you."
>Anon glared at Rainbow Dash.
>Great.
>He didn't even get to enjoy his victory for a full minute.
>Note to self, don't play this stupid game again.
>Rainbow Dash sat down and started thinking.
>What could she do that was worse than what he did?
>It had to be disgusting.
>It had to humiliate him.
>Her eyes lit up as the idea filled her mind.
>Oh yes... She knew of something good.
>Rainbow Dash looked directly at Anon and began to laugh to herself.
>Anon glanced around nervously, knowing full well he wasn't going to enjoy this.
"Uh..."
>"Alright Anon. I want you to lay down on the ground."
>Anon stood there a moment, attempting to quickly process what he knew in a vain attempt to figure out what her plan was.
>"Go ahead."
>Anon swallowed. No way was he going to back out.
>They both had too much pride riding on this game for either of them to back out now.
 
>Anon did as he was told and laid down flat on his stomach.
>"No, roll over onto your back."
>Again, he complied and rolled over onto his back.
>He could only guess at what sort of painful thing was about to happen.
>What if she jumped on him?
>His stomach clenched in anticipation for the assault.
>He looked up and noticed Rainbow Dash backing up towards him, starting from his feet.
>Shit, she's going to use her hind legs to do it, too.
>Rainbow Dash backed up until her hind feet were lined up directly with Anon's waist.
>No... No, not there.
>Anon clenched his fists and looked up at Rainbow Dash, waiting for her to lift her legs and knock his innards out.
>Moments pass, and she was just standing there.
>Then, her tail began to rise.
>Rainbow Dash giggled lightly to herself.
"Wait, are you-"
>No sooner had Anon begun to speak than a steady flow of urine came gushing forth from her vulva.
>The stream landed directly on his stomach with a large splash.
>It was getting everywhere.
"You bitch!"
>Rainbow Dash grinned to herself and began slowly backing up.
>The stream edged its way up his chest, getting closer and closer to his face.
>Anon wasn't prepared for this.
>He simply closed his eyes and his body tensed up as he awaited the inevitable.
 
>Anon felt the stream reach his neck.
>He took a deep breath through his nose and held his breath.
>The stream weakened as it reached his face, but there was still plenty of it left.
>Anon rocked his face back and forth, attempting to lessen the collateral damage.
>It was no use.
>By the time he felt the stream stop, he was already thoroughly soaked.
>The odor was overpoweringly musky.
>He looked up as Rainbow Dash attempted to push out any remaining drops.
>It caused her vulva to wink repeatedly.
>Only a very slight amount of liquid was left, and Anon watched as it leaked down her leg and into the dirt.
>Satisfied, Rainbow Dash walked off of Anon and turned around to get a good view of her work.
>"Bwahaha!!"
>She rolled backwards onto the ground, laughing hysterically.
>"You should- You should see your face Anon, haha!"
>Anon worked his way up to his feet, still dripping from the warm fluids that now completely covered his body.
>Rainbow Dash sat up and attempted to stifle some of her laughter to get another good look at Anon.
>As she gazed up and down his body, she noticed something interesting.
>"I see you learned something new about yourself today, Anon."
>She grinned slyly as she pointed towards his crotch.
>That was very clearly a bulge.
>A full one at that.
>Anon looked down and sighed to himself.
"What the fuck is wrong with me?"
>Rainbow Dash continued laughing to herself as Anon waddled his way into his house, ready to take an extra long shower for multiple reasons.
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