Some quick explanation
 
>[EMOTION] means what I envision the art of the character to be. I.E. if I write [CONFUSED], the character should take on a confused/questioning look in the artwork, I'm not necessarily saying she's confused. OH YES, and "[HAPPY]" is just a generic smile/neutral expression.
>[SKIP TO #] or [TO #] means, well, skip the following lines until you reach that number. Trying to broaden it up.
*#.) BRANCH means that this is where a choose-your-answer option shows up. Follow the [SKIP TO] direction at the end to get where you need to be. If there is no indication at the end to skip to a specific line, assume that you are just moving onto the next subsequent line below it.
>Anything else in brackets is just thoughts, comments, etc.
 
1.) Rarity: [HORRIFIED] Oh... my! What happened to you?
 
*2.) BRANCH
A.) You: What do you... huh? [SKIP TO 3.)]
B.) You: Well, it's nice to meet you, too. [SKIP TO 4.)]
 
3.) Rarity: [APOLOGETIC] Oh, my apologies, dear. You just look like you had a nasty run-in with an angry cat, with a mane like that. [NERVOUS] But, uh, I suppose I've seen worse! [TO 5.)]
4.) Rarity: [ANGRY] No need to get snippy! I meant no offense. [TO 5.)]
5.) [HAPPY] Now, allow me to introduce myself. I am Rarity, the most fabulous Unicorn in Ponyville -- [ECSTATIC] nay, I say, in all of Equestria! [HAPPY] And you... [CONFUSED] you must be new here. [TO 6.)]
 
*6.) BRANCH
A.) You: Yes, I just got here [I don't know the VN background, insert whatever amount of time] ago. Not sure I want to stay here, if this is the reaction I'm going to get. [SKIP TO 7.)]
B.) You: A pleasure to meet you, Miss Rarity. My name is [Player name]. [SKIP TO 10.)]
 
7.) Rarity: [APOLOGETIC] I'm terribly sorry, darling. It's just that fashion is my, mmm, how do I put this... my passion. [ANGRY] I can't let crimes against fabulosity of this magnitude go unpunished!
8.) You: You know, you're not making this any better...
9.) Rarity: [APOLOGETIC] Erm, it's a force of habit. [HAPPY] But in all seriousness, you really DO need the eye of a professional put on you. [SKIP TO 11.)]
 
10.) Rarity: [HAPPY] How do you do, [Player name]? [CONFUSED] Tell me, have you ever considered having a real fashionista do you up? [HAPPY] I bet you that I could bring your eyes out with a few simple pieces from my boutique. [SKIP TO 11.)]
 
*11.) BRANCH
A.) You: Do I really have to? Not trying to be mean, but... are you asking to give me a makeover? [TO 12.)]
B.) You: You insult me, then expect to glitz me up like some kind of supermodel? I'm outta here. [TO 15.)]
 
12.) Rarity: [HAPPY] Oh, makeover, fashion reconstruction, emergency aesthetic surgery, however you want to refer to it -- [ECSTATIC] I want to make you a STAR!
13.) You: I'm sure your store has a great selection, Miss Rarity, but I'm not really in the market for new threads right now.
14.) Rarity: [CONFUSED] Hmmm? [HAPPY] Oh, no, my dear, I wasn't trying to sell anything to you. Consider it your "Welcome to Ponyville" gift from me!
 
15.) Rarity: [SAD] I really didn't mean to be cruel, [Player character]. [APOLOGETIC] Can we start again? From the beginning? I know that old hat about first impressions and whatnot, but...
16.) You: I guess. My name is [Player name]. So -- a makeover? Really? [TO 12.)]