AUTHOR'S NOTE                                     --------------- This is my first attempt at a multi-part story. Experimenting with something people call "suspense". Something that I only thought was used in Bridges and intense Political Speeches. And also character development. Don't be mad if it's bad. Or you can get mad, I won't stop you. It's all for the greater good. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   >Day It Begins in Equestria >Wake up and stretch >Scratch the back of your head, yawning >Kick off the covers and get dressed >Walk into the bathroom and start brushing teeth >A note stuck to the corner of the mirror says "Barricade house today" >Grunt in acknowledgement >Finish up and head downstairs to get some food >A toolbox sits on the kitchen counter >Groan at the thought of the coming day >But it's got to be done, unless you want to risk damage >Chew on an apple and head out the backdoor to your shed >Unlock the shed door and open it >Fluttershy is stood in the cramped space >"G-good morning! Is illogical breaking and entering your fetish?" Fluttershy how did you even do this? >Look behind her and see a huge hole with a dirty shovel resting next to it Oh. >She beams at you >"I did it because I love you!" >Stare at her Fluttershy, you wouldn't know what love was if it hit you in the face >"W-well if you spray your seed all over my face I'll know what it is... And what it tastes like..." God damn you're a foul creature. >Her ears go flat >"I just want to love you, Anon!" And do you? >"Yes!" Then why are you breaking into my she- fuck, How long have you been digging this tunnel? Where does it lead? >"M-my cottage." That's at the other side of town, Fluttershy. >"It's taken me a few months... But it was worth it for you!" >Rub your temples Look. We have to prepare for the storm today. Have you fixed up your cottage? >"Oh yes. I left Angel bunny to do it" You left a rabbit in charge of home security >"He's very smart for a bunny."   1/?   >Reach over her head and grab a few planks of wood led against the shed wall >She takes the opportunity to bury her face in your crotch and sniff loudly >She shudders Can you not do that? It's really creepy. >"S-sorry" No you're not. >"Oh... Sorry" Stop apologising >"Right. Yes. Sorry." >This horse. >Grab a few more planks and rest them over your shoulder >"Anon?" What. >"C-can I help you?" Sure, I guess. Just try not to break anything. >You go around the house with the planks, hammering them over windows and making sure there are no leaks in the roof >The whole time, Fluttershy pretends to work, when really she's just staring at your sweaty body >At one point you have no choice but to remove your shirt because of the heat, upon doing this you hear Fluttershy whimper and fall off the roof >Roll your eyes and carry on hitting the roof with a hammer. >You have no idea what you're doing up there, but it feels like you're making progress. >Climb down the ladders and look at the house with your hands on your hips >Everything looks great, as far as you can see >Turn to Fluttershy, who is drooling at your shirtless chest Well, Fluttershy. You did fuck all, can't hold a hammer, were completely useless to me and only stared me while I worked for about- >Check your watch 4 hours. Thanks for your help >"N-no problem, Anon. If you need anything else I can help you" >She throws down her hammer >"Oh no! Let me just pick that up" >She leans over the hammer, presenting herself to you You're deranged, Fluttershy. >"If being in love makes you deranged, then I don't want to be ranged" That's not even... Go home. >"Okay..."   2/?   >After she leaves you jog into town to get some food >It's market day, despite the coming storm, and ponies are hurredly selling their wares and nervously looking at the sky >Pegasi have begun creating massive cloud formations, the sky turning black with volatile storm clouds >You watch as a Pegasi is too rough with one, and it spits out a static charge back at her >She shakes herself off and more gently moves it around >Look away and carry on jogging up to a stall >A bright blue Earth Pony with a green mane smiles at you >"Hey there, Anon! Here for some cucumbers?" You know it, Greenthumb. How much do you want for 3? >You always smile at the idea of her parents calling her GreenTHUMB. Since ponies lack them. But it's just another one of those strange occurences in this increasingly bizzare world. >"Oooh, well I'd normally say 5, but for you I can make it 4." >Her smile widens >You grin back and wink at her as you pass her 5 bits 4 for the food, 1 as a tip. >She blushes slightly >"T-thanks, Anon... You be careful with the storm yeah?" I will be, bye! >Continue hopping from stall to stall, filling your bag with foodstuffs and other delights >You have the bits to afford it all, since you're constantly working around town. >No concrete job placements, but ponies know what you can do with your hands so you've done everything from pruning bushes to sewing >The pay is good as well. You try to make a good impression and it's payed off, ponies respect you and greet you with a smile. >It's a good life, apart from Fluttershy. >But even she is somewhat tolerable. You just wish she'd stop with the fetish guessing >Last week she actually froze herself in a giant icecube >You found her on your doorstep, her face frozen in a half-blink, that made it look like she was in the middle of sneezing when she flash-froze herself >A note was hammered into the ice that read "Is hypothermia your fetish?" >Spent the whole afternoon chipping away bits of ice to get her out before she died.   3/?   >With a bag full of vegetables and the storm clouds above starting to rumble, you decide to head back >Your house comes into view and you see a familiar being stood in front of your door, shuffling nervously Oh for... >Fluttershy looks around and sees you heading towards her >She flies on over and you can see worry in her eyes >"Anon! I umm... Have sort of a- uhh. Problem... Help..." >Don't answer, just motion for her to follow you inside >Sit down in the living room and beckon to a chair facing you >She takes a seat, but sits in an upright position >She seems incredibly nervous, maybe even scared. What's wrong? >"Umm. Well I got back to my house and Angel bunny hadn't made my house safe..." >The rabbit didn't perform manual labour on command? What a shock. Please don't say what I think you're going to say. >"And I was wondering..." Don't. >"Since my house isn't safe from the storm... Can I stay with you tonight?" God dammit. >Stand up and look down at her >She peers up hopefully, a small smile on her face >"Please?" Aren't you worried about your animals? >"They'll be fine. They'll shelter in the Everfree while the storm happens... Weather here doesn't affect that area" >This is beginning to sound like a poorly constructed rape attempt >If you went over to her house now, you risk getting caught in the storm >You wish you could call her bluff be she looks genuinely scared >Either she's a brilliant actress or she was actually dumb enough to ask a rabbit to make her house safe   4/?   >It's just one night. You can survive it. Alright, Fluttershy. You can stop here while the storm is happening, but as soon as it's over you're out. >"Yes! Thank you, Anon! You're so generous..." >She lunges at you and squeezes your middle tightly, rubbing her face into your belly >Sigh and pry her off >Point a finger at her No funny business. I just want a normal evening, and hope that the barricades hold. Okay? >She salutes with a serious look on her face >"Got it" >The serious face dissolves and she gains a look of bliss >She begins bouncing around the room happily >"Oooh, we can do so many fun things! I heard about a slumber party that Twilight once had and it sounded wonderful!" >Roll your eyes and take your bag of food into the kitchen >Fluttershy bounces after you, still firing off "fun" activites for you both to do >"W-we can tell each other scary stories, and read by the fire, and snuggle, and practice k-kissing! Oh this is going to be so much fun!" >Try and ignore her as you stock the fridge >"Ooh~... And if the storm gets too scary... We c-can huddle together under the bed covers and keep each other safe!" >Oh hell no We are NOT sleeping in the same bed. We're sleeping in separate rooms >Her ears go flat >"P-please? I promise I won't do anything..." That's a lie and you know it. >She mumbles something under her breath >You're about to ask what the hell she just said but a flash outside lights up the room, followed by a distant rumbling >The storm has begun   5/?   >Fluttershy launches herself into your chest, shaking. Oh come on, you're not scared of thunder, are you? >"Y-y-yes" >Let out a frustrated groan >Look at the clock on the wall >6 o Clock >You pull Fluttershy off you and walk into the living room again, picking up a book as you walk >You read it by lamplight as Fluttershy watches you >The minutes tick by and Fluttershy continues to gaze at you, occasionally sharing highly thought provoking words of wisdom >"I-if you came inside me, do you think we'd have foals?" >Look up at her and regard her with the most uninterested expression you can muster >"Is that a yes?" No. Biology doesn't work that way, Fluttershy. >"Oh. Okay..." >She looks down >You continue reading >"I bet if we got married, you'd be so happy with me" >Look at her again And why do you think that? >"Because I would do anything for you, mister. I just want to make you h-happy." Fluttershy. 2 months ago I woke up tied to my bed, with you trying to get me hard. That's not love, nor does it make me happy. >She looks hurt >"B-but I offer you everything! F-food, companionship, sex... What do I have to do?" You need to let this go. I'm not interested in you, Fluttershy. You can't force someone to be attracted to you. Even if I spent the rest of my days with you I wouldn't become attracted to you. >Fluttershy jumps of her chair, lip trembling >"O-okay, Anon. If that's what you want." >She heads of towards the stairs slowly Where are you going? >"To bed" >Damn, you really hurt her this time. >It's her own fault though. She can't take no for an answer   6/?   >Another hour of quiet reading passes >You look towards the clock >10 o Clock >Time flies. >You decide to call it a night, the storm still raging outside >You shudder at the noise of the howling wind and rain lashing against the windows >Peer outside into the gloomy darkness >Trees are nearly bent in half from the force of the wind, and a branch breaks off one, spinning wildly into the night, carried by the wind >Walking upstairs, you hear a faint sobbing over the sound of the wind >Stop outside the guest room >Listen for a while >Gently push open the door and peer inside >The room is dark, save for the occasional lightning bolt illuminating the room >A dark shape is led on the bed, facing away from the door >It sobs again and trembles >Lets get this over with >Step into the room and sit down on the bed >Fluttershy's head raises to look at you, her face streaked with tears >You offer a smile and rub her ear >She sniffs and positions herself so that you can rub more What am I going to do with you, Fluttershy? >"L-love me?" You know I can't do that. >Her lip trembles again >"It hurts, Anon. Every time you reject me. It hurts so much" >You pull her in close and shush her I know it does, Fluttershy. >Sit there stroking her, listening to the sounds of the storm for a while >Look down >Fluttershy smiles up at you All better? >"Yes..." >Lay her down and pull the covers over her >"C-can I have a good night kiss?" >Shake you head and let out a short laugh You never change, do you?   7/?   >She smiles nonetheless and closes her eyes >"Good night, Anon. I'll get you some day." >At that she falls into slumber. Dreaming Fluttershy dreams. >You walk across the landing to your room and lay down on the bed, listening to the near-monsoon outside >Another flash creates shadows at every part of your room, followed by the boom you had grown accustomed to over the course of the night >Staring at the the ceiling from your back, you find that you can't sleep >Get up and go over to the window >Watch the storm blow outside through the gaps in the wood >Entire branches are being torn off trees >You watch in shock as one such branch collides with the side of your house, bouncing off the wood over a downstairs window >The impact sends a loud bang through the house, and you hear a scream from Fluttershy's room >You walk over to her room and see her sat up, trembling with wide eyes >She sees you enter and jumps into your arms again >You carry her into your room, and lie her down on your bed Try and get some sleep, Fluttershy. >She nods fearfully and you go over to the bathroom >You splash water on your face and look in the mirror >You become lost in thought for a while then turn around and see Fluttershy watching you Come on Fluttershy, go to slee- >The house shudders as a huge branch smashes straight through the window barricade, colliding with the side of Fluttershy and launching her into the opposing wall >You stare in horror at the place she was sat for a second >The wind and rain begin pouring into the room, and another flash of lightning reveals Fluttershy's crumpled body in the corner of your room, crushed under the branch >You run over to her, screaming her name >Ignoring the freezing wind chilling you to the bone, you try and move the branch off her >After much effort you shift it from on top of her and shake her body with a hand >She's not moving >Her eyes are distant and glazed over, an expression of shock on her face >Tears form in your eyes as it hits you >She's gone.   8/?   >You start openly crying as the storm howls outside, cradling Fluttershy's lifeless body in your arms I'm sorry... I'm so so sorry...   >Morning comes >You haven't said much to anyone since the events of last night >Practically everyone broke down and cried upon hearing the news, except Applejack. >She stayed strong and nodded with a trembling lip >As for you, you headed home and started to fix the damage, from installing a new window to cleaning the blood from your bedsheets and wall >You sit in your reading chair that night, staring into space and thinking about Fluttershy >Hours pass of nothing but silence >Eventually you decide it's time to go to bed and you slog upstairs, trying not to stare at the corner of your room as you climb into bed >You turn away from the wall and stare at the window you fixed >Tears form in your eyes and you feel yourself start to cry again >As you weep you hear someone speak >"Anon? Why are you crying?" >Your eyes widen >That voice >Oh god no. >You've gone mad with grief >You sit up and stare at the source of the voice >Fluttershy is hovering at the foot of your bed >You can see straight through her, and her entire body is floating without use of wings >"H-have I done something wrong?" >Stare at her slackjawed Are... Are you real? Am I not going insane? >She looks around confused >"Why, what's wrong?" >She looks down and inspects her body >"Oooh... Okay... That." >You still can't quite believe this Fluttershy. Y-you're dead. >She looks at you and smiles >"I guess." >She ponders for a second >"Are Hauntings your fetish?" AAAAAAAAAA-   9/9 End part 1