>you open your eyes to see bright white lights
>while getting up you feel a shock of pain go through your body
>it hurts too much to get up
>you look around you to find where you are at
>there is a needle in your arm
>its hooked up to what appears to be a iv
>you didn't notice until now but there is a beeping that is in sync with your heart beat
>looking to your right you see a table with an arrangement of gifts on it
>one of them is a photo frame with you, a dog, and three people you can't seem to reconize
>you try to remember who they are but you only moan in pain
>you hear quick footstepts towards you
>a nurse looks at your eyes and says something
>In a very confused voice you say "I can't hear you"
>she walks away
>soon after a old man with glasses comes over to you
"Hello, can you hear me?"
>"I can hear you"
"ok thats good. Do you know where you are?"
>"A hospital"
"Do you know why you are here?"
>"no"
"You were in a car accident, you didn't get too injured but you hit your head pretty hard"
>"Did anyone else get hurt?"
"It was just you, now before we continue this conversation any more is it ok if I contact your parents?"
>"My parents?"
>you point your head down in dissapointment
>"I... I don't remember my parents"
"We were afraid this would happen"
>he walks over to the table and picks up the photo you saw
"Do you remember anyone in this picture"
>he points to a white woman with purple highlights in her hair
>you shake your head
"Do you reconize the blue man next to the woman?"
>again you shake your head
"They are your parents"
>your starts to beat faster
>"Why don't I remember them"
"Do you remember how I said you were in a crash?"
>you nod
"You were in a coma for 2 weeks, and you seem to be experiencing amneisa"
>so you have amnesia, great
>"Is it ok if I contact your parents now?"
>you really can't remember your parents
>"Sure, maybe seeing them will help restore my memory"
"I will call them as soon as possible, but for now try to sleep"
 
>something is chasing you
>it seemed like a giant bird but you can't tell
>in the distance you spot a cave
>sprinting towards it you trip
>you awake to a woman you remember watching over you
>"Sunset?"
"Twilight"
>she hugs you and starts crying
"I'm so sorry, I should have been driving when we were hit"
>why do you remember her but not your parents
>"it's ok, at least I think it is ok"
"The doctor told me that you couldn't remember your family"
>sunset starts to cry even more
>"Sunset its ok. I will probably remember them after a while"
>she starts wiping off her tears
"Do you promise?"
>you know that you might not get your memory back but you can't stand seeing sunset cry
>"Yeah I promise"
>she pulls you in for a painfully tight hug
"I want to make it up to you, when you get out of here the first thing we are going to do is go to your favorite cafe"
>trying to remember what cafe that was all images that come back are blank
"I will come back tommorow to see if you are doing better"
>she gives you a REALLY passionate goodbye kiss
>what
>a week has passed since you woke up
>you have regained your ability to get up
>well get up with sunsets help
>sunset
>it turns out you two have been dating for a little more than a year
>in fact you two were coming back from our anniversary when you got into that wreck
>you still can't remember much with sunset
>there was a picnic with her a few years ago
>a few random parties with her
>and when you went to the restroom to fix your makeup for your anniversary
>not much else                  
>you don't feel like you love her
>but at the same time you do
>almost all of your memory is still gone
>mostly names and faces came back to you
>a few events from high school and the last few years
>you feel like there is a pattern to all this
>and those strange dreams you have been having
>that bird
>it means something
>you keep on seeing it in your dreams
>and you could have sworn you have seen it outside a window once or twice
>but when you rub your eyes it goes away
"Twilight do you want to try it?"
>Sunset places her hand on your shoulder
>"sorry I was daydreaming, try what?"
"The doctor says you need to try and get up without me if you want to be discharged"
>the doctor set some goals for you to accomplish before you get discharged
>walk 10 feet
>walk 30 feet
>walk up a flight of stairs
>touch your feet while standing up
>sunset enjoyed that one
>and finally get out of the bed on your own
>"ok I think i'm ready"
>you put your left foot on the floor
>then the right
>you put pressure on your legs
>and you stand up
>"I... I did it"
>sunset then tackles you with a hug bringing both of you to the floor
>"OW OW"
"Whoopsies. i'm just so happy"
>Sunset helps you up
>and proceeds to give you another hug
>you have your first clues you loved her
>she is so supportive and kind to you
>plus she is really hot
>"I'll tell the doctor right away"
>she walks away
>on the corner of your eye you see the bird
>it's giving you a look
>almost like it's staring into your soul
>sunset comes back a little sad
"So the doctor said that you will be discharged first thing in the morning"
>"That's good. This place is starting to creep me out"
>you look back at the bird
>it's gone
>you are probably going crazy
>nurse redheart comes in with your "dinner"
>a nasty grilled cheese
>generic brand powdered lemonade
>and tater tots that are somehow half burnt and half frozen
>why can't they afford better food with all the expensive medical bills
>she gives the tray to Sunset and walks out
>"I can't wait to get out of here and get actual food"
"Im even sick of watching you eat that garbage"
>Sunset rips part of the grilled cheese off and feeds it to you
>you chew and swallow it
>she leans forwards and kisses you
[spoiler]>and gives a little tongue[/spoiler]
"I don't want you to have a bad taste in your mouth"
>Sunset does taste pretty good
>"I wish you would have done this for every meal"
>she gives a cute little laugh
 
"Welcome home Twilight!"
>entering the front door you see a beautiful interior
>there are a quite a few framed pictures of Sunset and you
>one picture grabs your attention
>it was from your first day at CHS
>it has your friends from high school on it
>Pinkie, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Rarity, Yourself, and Sunset
>a little bit of Sunset is cut off from the picture
"Do you remember them?"
>there isn't much you remember
>other than their names and personalities it is a blur
>but there is one thing you can clearly remember
>how you feel about sunset
>"I remember a bit of them"
>Sunset grabs you by the arm and hugs you
"Let me show you around"
>she walks down the hall
"The first door here is the library"
>she opens it to reveal a huge assortment of books
>about 80% of them are college textbooks on varying subjects
>"Where did we get the money for all these books?"
>Sunset gives you a worried look
"Twilight, do you remember how-."
>she takes a really deep breath
"I'll tell you later, I don't want to overwhelm you with this whole amnesia situation"
>she grabs your hand
"I want to show you our room"
>down from the library she opens the door
"Now I have a surprise for you that I wanted to give for our anniversary"
>walking inside your attention is immediately caught by a painting on the wall
>"Wow... This is beautiful"
>It's a sunset that is painted red, yellow, and purple
>it is almost magical how it looks
>at the bottom right you see the initials S.S.
"So do you like it?"
>pulling her in you give a tight squeeze
>"I-I love it"
"This one was hard to hide from you when you are working. That reminds me I want to show you the lab"
>next to your bedroom there is a small studio that has painting supplies and a bucket filled with dog toys
"Fluttershy has been taking care of Spike while we were gone"
>inside the studio there is a doorway leading to a small room
"Let me introduce you to your favorite room in our home"
>there is lab equipment everywhere for different uses
>several pc parts scattered about
>there is a homemade 3D printer in the corner
>you could never leave this room
>"I think I died and went to heaven"
"I want to show you something that we were working on"
>she grabs a little box off of the desk
"This is an amplified electromagnetic field projector. It can stop any projectile up to 552 meters per second"
>sunset explains that it fires trillions of photons in a set shape acting as a shield
>so it is really a force field
"You were the one who got it to fit into such a small device making it portable"
>you can't help but blush
>sunset is cute, creative, and really smart
>your stomach makes a noise so loud sunset hears it
"I completely forgot to take you to your favorite cafe and it closed an hour ago!"
>she facepalms herself in disappointment
>"It's ok I am fine eating what we have here"
"No you just got back and I want this to be special, just tell me where you want to go out to"
>to be honest you really want a really big fat all american burger
>there is that one burger place nearby owned by this weird japanese guy with these 80's glasses
>now why do you remember a weird japanese guy but you can't remember a lot of things
 
>Sunset pulls up to "The Che Burger"
>it's a very small restaurant with about 20 seats inside and 8 outside in a gated area
>after being trapped in the hospital for weeks the last thing you need is to be in a small area
>"is it ok if we sit outside?"
>the waitress grabs some menus and asks you to follow her
>you and sunset pull some metal chairs that make a screeching sound on the ground
>it makes you grind your teeth in pain
>the menu has 4 salads
>7 burgers
>5 sandwiches
>3 sides
>and a list of drinks
>a few minutes later the waiter asks for your order
>sunset orders her food
"I will have a blue cheese salad with a side of sweet potato fries"
>and you...
>you want the triple bacon cheeseburger with onion rings and extra bbq sauce
>"I will have a regular cheeseburger"
>you don't want to look like a pig in front of your girlfriend
>you hand your menu to the waiter and they walk away
>in the distance you see The Bird on a building
>why is it following you
"Twilight? Are you ok?"
>"yeah I was just daydreaming"
"You have been daydreaming a lot since you woke up, are you sure you're ok?"
>"Well I ha-"
>you are interrupted by a waitress delivering your food
"One salad, one cheeseburger, and one order of sweet potato fries"
>delicious burger you are mine,
>you take a bite of it
>you don't remember the last time you had food this good
>next thing you know your burger is gone
>you look at sunset
>she barely even scratched her food
>so much for not being a pig
>she points to her face
"You have a little something here"
>you grab a napkin
>just as you are about to wipe off the mess a flash of light appears
>it rips into pieces and flies all over the place
>you look to your left
>The Bird is coming right at you
"Get to the car now!"
>Sunset and you climb over the fence and sprint to the car
>sunset gets in the driver's seat and you only have time to jump into the back seat
>the bird keeps on hitting the car with loud thuds
>"What the heck is going on?"
"Do you remember what I did before I met you?"
>"No. What does that have to do with this bird?"
"I'll explain later"
>a beam of light hits your arm almost parallel giving you a cut
"Right when we get home we are going to run to the lab and turn on the shield"
>you don't know what is going on
>sunset pulls into the garage
"Move"
>sprinting down the hall you two enter the studio and then the lab
>sunset shuts the door and grabs the device
"Hug me"
>this is the end isn't it
>that's what she is telling you
>but she seems so confident right now
>you hug her knowing your last moment will be with your girlfriend
>sunset presses a button and a shield covers both of you
>the bird crashes through the wall and heads towards you
>it goes right into the shield
>and it just disappears
>all thats left is a charm that fell off when it flew through
>sunset presses a button and the shield turns off
>she then wraps her arms around you
"It's ok Twilight we're safe now"
>sunset pulls out a handkerchief and starts wiping tears off of your face
>you didn't even realize you were crying
>sunset put down her journal
"Twilight, I have a lot to explain to you"
>this is quite the explanation
>sunset is actually a unicorn from another universe
>she studied magic under the ruler of her country as the prized student
>eventually she escaped here in anger
>after a few years she reentered her homeworld only to find that someone had taken her spot and became a princess during that time
>you feel like all of this is familiar
>"and then you stole her magical crown"
"Yes how did you- Nevermind probably some of your memory is coming back"
>she continues about how she became a demon and how she was stopped by the princess
>later that year some magical sirens showed up at her school
>sunset contacted her old teacher by her magic journal
>but the other end was picked up by the princess
>together they stopped the sirens
>sunset takes a deep breath
"that princess was you, but it wasn't you..."
>"The Twilight Sparkle of your world?"
"Exactly, while this was all going on you were researching magic at Crystal Prep"
"Our schools have a competition every few years called friendship games"
>sunset continues the explanation
>your principal would do anything to win
>she forced you to use your magic research to win the games
>it backfired and turned you into a magic-crazed monster
>sunset turned you back to normal and you transferred to CHS
>"That's when we had the picnic"
"You remember the picnic?"
>"not much of it, all I remember is is was one of my first days at CHS"
>sunset continues with the story
>a few more magical encounters and you two decide to use magic for creations such as the shield
>"So the bird was magic"
"Yeah. It's called a Horus, a magical hitman of sorts"
"It uses targeted memories, thoughts, and dreams to track its prey"
>"That explains why I kept on dreaming about it"
"This isn't good. Someone is after you and we will stop them"
>she picks up the object that fell off the bird
"This charm it dropped, can help us find the person who sent it"
>"So how do we use it to track them"
"I never learned how to track one down but the other Twilight will probably know"
>sunsets journal starts faintly glowing
"I guess our answer is here"
>sunset opens up the book and reads it with a confused face
"It's a address for somewhere in..."
>"Is it somewhere in her world? is it somewhere dangerous?"
"No it's in..."
 
 
Due to poor grammar and this first section of the story being written on my phone I will rewrite the story so far
 
I am planning on releasing Comatwi2.0 on November 1st so look forward to that if you like my poorly written story