hello readers, just making another note.
I couldn't sleep tonight, so I went through and did some major editing work on my stories.  The biggest changes are to chapters 3 and 4
There are only gramatical changes to chapters 1 and 2
there is a new ending to Chapter 3, and I handled the situation of Caroline's identity in Chapter 4 much differently.
I might also find time to start posting on the AiE threads tomorow from the school IP adress, so there's always that.  I have not yet started chapter 5, but I will soon