Feedback for this story was lacking, so I've decided to put it on hold despite my personal enjoyment for it.   >What’s happening? >Everything is… black. >From somewhere voices speak over one another. >There’s a ringing and a cold force against your body. >Are you on the ground? >Why is your head spinning. >The world doesn’t relent it’s assault on your senses. >Can’t… make out anything. >It’s bright to your vision, burning almost. >These voices, they sound shocked. >Concerned maybe? >So far away… >You try to move, only for your head to reel back. >Something isn’t… >”H-y, -h-t i- t-at --in-?” >They’re still talking. >Inderscenabley so. >Again, try again. >Force yourself up. >Do it… >Through the pain, you send a limb to the ground, straightening it. >Now stand. >Your body stretches in a foreign way, and your vision has quadrupled. >Something’s not right… >Your… >”Wh--e -id -t c--e -r-m?” >What is that? >Things are becoming less abstract. >But your appendage… >This isn’t... >”H-y! A-e -ou -k-y?” >Your body is seizing up again. >What’s going on with you? >The ground… it’s pavement. >You’re outside. >Voices, they’re shouting now. >”So-e--dy c-ll -he --ard!” >At you? >Look at them. >Why is it so hard to move? >Come on. >Your blurry vision begins to shift over. >There’s voices coming from all over. >What are those things looking at you? >So many… >They’re… >”It’s m-vi-g!” >Ponies.   >Why are they staring at you? >Your body falters once more and your face hits the pavement. >This… your body. >What’s wrong with it? >”Where are the guards?!” >Guards… >Why are they getting guards. >Your head can’t make sense of the situation. >It pounds against the inside of your skull, quaking within you. >Such pain. >Again, your limbs fail you as you’re only able to roll onto your back. >The sky… >It’s blue color stretches across your vision. >How long do you spend staring at it? >They still holler at you. >You can see them now, up in the sky there are clouds. >Spinning around and around and around… >Eventually, their paths grow shorter as they encircle one singular spot. >And your vision is back. >”Stand, creature!” >The voices have returned, and now you understand them. >”By decree of the Princess, we order you to stand!” >Princess? >Why do they shout at you? >They want you to stand. >Your legs... how do they work? >Head still pounding. >”Stand!” >Do it! >Your legs give out and you fall forwards onto your knees, catching yourself with your… hands. >You look up and see the armored ponies before you. >They’ve backed away a bit, and look more afraid than anything, like they’ve never seen you before. >Why’s everything wrong? >Again, you try to support yourself on two legs. >There’s a rapturous murmuring amongst the crowd around you. >The guards eye you carefully. >You’re in the city, the white one. >What’s its name? >Why is everything so hard to remember all of a sudden? >Something isn’t right with what’s happening… >Somehow, you made it onto your feet.   >”Follow us. We are not afraid to take action if necessary.” >Why are they acting like you’re a threat? >A spear is pointed at your back. >They want you to follow. >Your steps are heavy, and you stumble. >These guards, they’re leading you somewhere. >The castle, it’s a castle. >Everything is flying by you in a daze. >Stares, words, aches and pains. >Your feet are unsteady, like an infant learning to walk. >Something’s off… >You're in the castle now. >It’s grand halls stretch before. >Everything’s happening so fast. >This place is… >Those double doors. >What can’t you remember?! >The doors open… >Your eyes dilate at the impossible sight before you as time crawls to a halt and the banging in your head pounds against your skull one beat at a time. >”Princess, we found him.” >”Thank you, Stonewall. Would our guest like to introduce himself?” >You, they’re talking about you. >Himself? >The Princess is approaching you now. >”Please, tell us,” her voice is slow and intoxicating. “What is your name?” >Before you is a snow white alicorn, adorned in a golden crown and jewelry. >Your mouth opens in abject horror at this sight. >This is not possible. >Why is this happening?! >Slowly, you form one, single, solitary name. >A name you have not uttered for thousands of years. “Anonymous...” >”Hello Anonymous,” she smiles, baring her teeth, her gaze narrowing in on you “I am Princess Celestia.” >This… >Now you know what is wrong. >You are Princess Celestia, and you are not in your own body.   >No, this can not be happening... >You’re staring straight into your own eyes, through another’s. >It’s a horrifying experience. >These legs and arms… you look at them in exasperation, the pounding in your head not helping the situation. >Your foreign hands reach for your face, making contact with alien flesh and hair. >This is sickening. >You dare to look back into your eyes, but no, they aren’t yours anymore. >There’s something else behind them now. “How… How did you-” >The words are hard to choke out. >Slouching over, you gasp for breath. >Your mind is racing, the strange heart inside of you is beating out of control. >”Anonymous, are you okay?” >His voice, your voice, feigns false sympathy, but is subtle enough to go unnoticed by the guards. >Once again, your eyes move up to your imposter, narrowed in pain and anger. >Your puppet-body devilishly smiles back for a split second before returning to the previous false concern. >”Guards, please, fetch a medical team immediately! All of you!” >The two of you never break eye contact as the uncertain shuffling of hooves is heard behind you. >And then the doors close. >”Hello, Celestia. Having fun today?” “Anonymous-” >”Uh-uh,” he silences you before you can continue. “We don’t have much time alone Celestia. Make it count.” >With the sense of urgency, your voice returns with newfound strength. “Is Luna okay?” >Your voice quivers with the question. >Anonymous is caught off guard, pausing, before smiling. >”Oh Celestia, always the selfless one.”   >He begins to slowly pace around you, confidence rushing through his stolen body with each stride. >”Your sister is fine, I assure you. But please, show some concern for yourself. After all, I’m in control now, aren’t I?” “Why are you doing this?” >Continuing to encircle you, he responds in his demeaning voice. >”Insurance, Celestia. What’s the fun in making demands if no one will listen to them?” >You’re sickened at the prospect of obeying any demands from this monster. >He begins to walk away from you and towards your throne. >”Just think of all the things I could do to your ponies. I wonder…” >Reaching the throne he sits down, facing you once more. >”How easy is it to do something like… declare war on the griffins?” >The absolutely terrified look on your face makes him laugh. >”Oh, it’s good to be the Queen! But wait… that’s right,” he says, his mistake made on purpose. >He descends from the throne, approaching your still form until he is a mere few inches away. >”You’re not the Queen, are you, Princess?” >Laughing once again, he walks over to a window, his back facing you. >”But I’m sure you’re curious how I did it, right? I mean- who wouldn’t be?” >As all of this happens, your stomach leaps. >You don’t want to be here; this must be a nightmare. >Any moment now you’ll wake up and everything will be okay.   >”Do you remember how long?” >He expects a response from you. >Mustering all your strength, the most you can do is a weak whisper. “Yes…” >In a moment, he’s upon you, shouting. >”Because I do!” >All too quickly he regains his composure, backing up from you. >Your heart is racing and your head is pounding. >”Three thousand two hundred and eighty-six days,” he states coldly. >”Sorry I couldn’t wait for an anniversary. I’m not like your sister.” >The stranger’s hands at your sides become fists, tense with rage. “Don’t you dare ever make that comparison!” >The teeth in your mouth are grinding against themselves. “She is nothing like you.” >You spit each word through gritted teeth. >Anonymous looks at you curiously through your eyes. >”Oh- did I strike a nerve? Sorry Celestia.” >His sympathy is dry and fake. >”Even you must be able to see it though. Where did you gain your sense of humor for punishments from?” >”Discord, the being of chaos made up of so many different animals, turned to uniform stone.” >”Your sister, whom only wanted ponies to love her moon, banished to her crown jewel.” >”And then there was me… not that I can blame -you- for that one.” >”But as I was saying, when one spends so much time in the ethereal realm, they pick up a few tricks.” >The ethereal realm… it should have been impossible to escape from there. >Should have been. >”Do you know what it’s like there? Simply dreadful, I wouldn’t recommend it for a vacation. You can’t tell up from down; everything’s such a blur of color there. Almost impossible to distinguish one thing from another…”   >The sickening smile returns to his face. >”But I found you. And I spent oh so long learning how to kick out your spirit.” >So that’s what he did then: he used his banishment to grow in strength. “Then why didn’t you just leave me there?” >His careful pacing around you resumes. >Where are the guards? >This feeling of being helpless… you want to escape it. >You want to curl up in a ball and let all of this be over. >For the first time in years, you’re scared. >”Because Celestia, I don’t have a vendetta against you personally. And remember, I do need you.” “I’d rather die.” >Your words came out naturally. >The last thing you would dare do would be to help this monster. >And then the seizing in your body returns in full force. >You fall to your knees and grasp your head, tears beginning to form from the pain. “What did you do to me?!” >Your shout of horror only serves to make Anonymous chuckle once more. >”Oh please, Celestia, I didn’t do anything to you. In fact, you weren’t supposed to wake up as soon as you did, but color me impressed. You’re a strong one.” >He stops in front of you, looking down at your pathetic form. >”Besides, I’m far too attached to my body to harm it in away. While yours isn’t quite as cozy, I promise not to damage it too much.” >Turning away from you, he looks back and says all he has to.   >”Your ponies however… they’re a bit more expendable.” “Please-” >The first tear rolls down your fleshy cheek. >Your breathing grows haggard. >In not but a mere whisper, you submit. “What do you want?” >”That’s the spirit!” Anonymous cackles, turning back around to look at you properly. >”Oh poor, broken, lost, Princess Celestia...” >He begins to approach your sullen body. >You can’t take this anymore. >The world begins to lose it’s color. >”As I said before, you’re not the Queen, are you Princess?” >Slowly, he crouches down to face your slouched head. >Your head is on the verge of collapsing. >Delicately lifting your head with a hoof, he looks you in the eyes. >”Where is your mother, Celestia?” >At last, you know what he wants. >Revenge. >And then the double doors opened, and you slipped away. >”Anonymous! A-e yo- o-ay?” >”Pr-nce-s, w- -ad t- -- all -he -ay t- --e b-r-a-ks... >”Ano-y--s!” >”Is -- -ll --ght?” >”G-ar--, -ui-ly! T-k- --m t- --e i--irm--y!” >All too quickly, the world falls out beneath you, fading to black. >Your headache goes with it.