PiE #5: Reborn Again Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)10:40:18 UTC+9 No.4824186
Replies: >>4825665 >>4832426 >>4851276
 
Last PiE thread got deleted or pruned. I haven't found a new 5th thread, so I will make it. Here are the pastebins (copied from thread #3):
 
 
Ponyville Apartements
http://pastebin.com/u/ChocolateChipPancake
 
Pillow Case: She likes Cloth
http://pastebin.com/HtNbiz2s
 
The Roseluck Chronicles
http://pastebin.com/u/Fourdak
 
Motor City
http://pastebin.com/u/Mortimer_Mouse
 
First thread:
http://pastebin.com/v4JgQzCv
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)10:53:47 UTC+9 No.4824426
Replies: >>4890397
 
 
File: 1349229227016.jpg-(199 KB, 1261x1117, lyra_in_earth.jpg)
 
 
<-- a Lyra's one shot-off stories by some anonymous from the previous thread
 
 
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 Dakan 10/03/12/(Wed)11:56:54 UTC+9 No.4825665
 
>>4824186 (OP)
Thank you anon! was just looking to see if i was going to have to make another post...
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)12:20:15 UTC+9 No.4826176
 
I won't let you die PiE!
 
 
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 LeStrange 10/03/12/(Wed)14:00:04 UTC+9 No.4828173
 
Oh gosh, i should have stayed on the thread more longer!
 Q.Q
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)16:16:23 UTC+9 No.4830248
 
Not letting this die again, bump.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)16:46:24 UTC+9 No.4830573
 
Poor pie thread #4 we hardly knew yee
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)18:16:04 UTC+9 No.4831365
Replies: >>4832260
 
one hour Bump!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)18:18:33 UTC+9 No.4831389
 
Yay, it's back!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)20:16:06 UTC+9 No.4832260
Replies: >>4832298
 
>>4831365
2 hour Bump!!
 
 
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 Esp 10/03/12/(Wed)20:22:13 UTC+9 No.4832298
 
>>4832260
I need moooooooore
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)20:39:14 UTC+9 No.4832426
 
>>4824186 (OP)
Who is this (I don't come around these parts often)? So cute.
 
 
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 Dakan 10/03/12/(Wed)20:51:40 UTC+9 No.4832521
 
That's pillow case. The original pony on earth...
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)20:57:07 UTC+9 No.4832564
Replies: >>4833230 >>4916914
 
Any more stories? Any archive of PiE? Seems interesting.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)22:33:16 UTC+9 No.4833230
Replies: >>4833268 >>4838511 >>4838754
 
>>4832564
not of that i know of since PiE is still fairly new..
but i think someone did write a fanfic featuring each Mane 6 with Anon individually in some AiE thread a while back...and if someone has capped those stories..pls post it here because i think those stories might be the ones that give birth to Ponies In Earth (PiE) thread.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)22:37:01 UTC+9 No.4833268
 
>>4833230
and oh yeah when i mean featuring each Mane 6 with Anon..i mean specifically in Earth individually!
 
 
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 A Conflict of Disinterest Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)22:39:55 UTC+9 No.4833293
Replies: >>4833319 >>4834016 >>4834431
 
First time doing one of these. Hope it doesn't suck.
 
>You're walking through Grand Central Termainal with your idiot friend, Rich
>You're honestly not sure why you're friends with the guy, but you've known each other since middle school
>His royal bitch of a girlfriend has "invited" you to a baby shower for one of her friends whom you barely know
"So who is this again? That fat girl she used to make fun of back in high school?"
 
>It's hard enough dodging other people in the crowd, and having to constantly look out to make sure you don't trample a pony only adds to the difficulty
>It's not uncommon seeing them anymore, especially in such a large city, but it still draws attention
>There was a bit of a political firestorm when the decision was finally reached to rip space-time a new hole over on Ellis Island, but it's largely died down now
>All that new business from inter-dimensional travel has a way of shutting up the detractors
 
"No, this is one of the girls that was on the cheerleading squad. You've met her once or twice, remember? The one with the red hair and the great ass?" Rich says. He almost has to yell to be heard over the din of the crowd.
>You don't bother trying to dig up something you know you'll never remember in the first place
>You're too busy wracking your brain trying to come up with a semi-plausible excuse not to go.
>Just as you're about to resort to dick moves, the sight in front of you grabs your attention
>It's a dark grey pony with coal black hair and violet treble clef on its back legs, trying and failing to pull an overloaded luggage cart with its teeth, and it appears to have a guitar case slung over its back
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)22:42:08 UTC+9 No.4833319
Replies: >>4833344 >>4834016 >>4834431
 
>>4833293
>You just stand there, staring like a slack-jawed moron, entraced by the pony's almost futile efforts to pull the cart
>It finally manages to find a position where it can gain some purchase and begins to carefully drag the cart along with it, constantly checking to make sure it doesn't hit anyone
>It's like watching a turtle trying to cross a busy street, you think to yourself
>The poorly stacked luggage begins to wobble after only a short distance, and a set of what looks like little saddlebags falls off. The pony doesn't even notice.
>Ignoring your better judgement, you follower after and pick up the fallen bags. This pony looks like it has enough problems without losing its luggage already.
"Excuse me, miss... uh," at least, you think it's a miss, "miss pony? You dropped your bags." you say as you catch up to her.
 
>She lets the handle go from her mouth and turns to face you. She looks a little startled.
"Oh! You have my thanks. This thing is proving more... challenging than what I had initially expected." the pony says to you. Her voice carries a comforting, refined tone.
>Here comes that awkward moment you were trying to warn yourself against...
>She moves toward your outstretched hand and opens her mouth hesitantly. You're not sure if she wants you to place the bag's strap in her mouth or if she's going to say something
>Trying to keep this from getting any worse, you place the bags back on the cart and re-arrange a few pieces so she shouldn't have to worry so much about dropping anything
"Don't worry about it."
>She only nods her head subtly and turns back to continue on her way.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)22:45:05 UTC+9 No.4833344
Replies: >>4833371 >>4834016 >>4834431
 
>>4833319
>You turn and start back towards Rich, only to stop dead in your tracks again.
>A plan has already begun to form in your desperate mind. An entirely do-able, if somewhat devious, plan.
>With a quick about-face, you turn back to the grey pony
"Beg your pardon again miss, but do you need some help with that?"
>She still looks very nervous. You figure she's fresh from the other side and still not used to seeing humans. The culture shock is probably hitting pretty hard.
"I... do. If could just help me out to the street, I would be very grateful." It seemed like something she wasn't comfortable admitting.
>You sling the saddlebags over your shoulder and grab the three awkwardly stuffed duffle bags she has on the cart
>You see a bit of envy flash through her eyes at how easy it is for you to carry what she had so much trouble with
"Sure thing. C'mon, maybe we can get you a cab without a too much trouble if we hurry."
>That's not your real reason for wanting to hurry, but she doesn't need to know that
 
"There you are! Come on man, we're going to be late as it is. I don't want have to take another ass chewing..." Rich's voice rings out behind you.
>Dammit dammit dammit
"Sorry Rich, change of plans. The lady here needs some help, and I can't just leave her!" you say, each word dripping with sarcasm as you move further away from him, "Just go
 
on without me! Mallory won't miss me, and I assure you, the feeling is mutual!"
"Well what do I tell her?" he yells back
"Tell her I hope she chokes and dies!"
>Thankfully, the crowds swarm between you at this point, so you don't have to continue making an ass out of yourself.
>But your cover's still blown
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)22:47:16 UTC+9 No.4833371
Replies: >>4833381 >>4834016 >>4834431
 
>>4833344
"Did I... interrupt something?" the pony asks
>Well, the cat's already out of the bag. You might as well just shoot it.
"No, you saved me from one incredibly boring afternoon with people I can't stand."
"Oh... I see?"
>Smooth save?
"If you have some time, would you be willing to show me where a place called Avery Fisher Hall is? If you're familiar with the area, of course."
"Over at Lincoln? Yeah, sure, we can go if you want. It'd be easier if we dropped your bags off first, though."
"Of course. The man who arranged everything said the apartment was over at some place called "Riverside South". I have the address in my saddlebags there."
 
>She's staying at freaking Trump Place?
>You set her saddlebags down off your shoulder and she begins to look through them for the address
>While you're trying to flag down a cab, you start to wonder just who the hell this pony actually is
"Ah, here it is!"
>She presents you with a small piece of paper with a key hanging from it
>You take it and keep failing to hail a cab
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)22:48:21 UTC+9 No.4833381
Replies: >>4833395 >>4834016 >>4834431
 
>>4833371
>Several minutes in, and still no luck
>The pony is sitting on her haunches now, looking in awe at the buildings and traffic around her
"Your first time here, I take it?" You might as well try to strike up some conversation if you're going to be a while
"It is." she says, distracted by a bus with an advertisment plastered across its side
>That explains why she's so trusting of strangers, at least.
She turns to face you "Truth be told, I was little unsure about coming here to Earth."
"What made you decide?"
"I accepted a position with the New York Philharmoic. I was a fan of their performances back in Equestria, and when they came looking for new talent, I simply couldn't resist the challenge. A few auditions later, and here I am."
"What position, if you don't mind me asking?"
>She looks nervous again, and glances at the case on her back.
"P-principal cello."
 
>A cab finally pulls over
"That's a very prestigious position. You should be proud." you say, picking her over-stuffed bags back up
"I am, it's just..." her voice trails off, as if she's searching for an expression she can't quite pick out
"More than what you were expecting?"
"To say the least." she smiles warmly
>You load her bags in the trunk and she props herself up beside you to lay her cello in alongside them
"Well, don't fret it. You'll be spittin' and cursin' with the best of us in no time."
"I would certainly hope not!" she stammers out, shocked at the very idea
>You have a laugh at her expense and open the cab door for her, so she wouldn't have to fight with trying to open it with hooves
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)22:49:42 UTC+9 No.4833395
Replies: >>4834016 >>4834431 >>4834950 >>4837751 >>4890407
 
>>4833381
>Heading around to the other side, you begin to wonder what the hell you've gotten yourself into
>Spending the afternoon showing - what you assume is - a classy, rich pony around the west side of Manhattan is not what you thought you'd be doing today
>Still better than the alternative, though
>You tell the cabbie the address, and he starts on the way without a word
>It's a very silent trip, with only some god-awful music blaring from the speakers to fill the void
>You look over at the pony, who is firmly glued to the window
>It must be nice being able to see the city with a sense of awe like that, you think to yourself.
"I cannot believe I have forgotten my manners to much." she suddenly says "We've been here this whole time and still don't even know each other's names."
>You never thought about it, but she's right.
>After you give her your name, she smiles and replies
"I'm Octavia. It's a pleasure to meet you."
 
 
All I've got so far. Probably should've done it in something other than Notepad as it likes to fuck with the formatting.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)23:43:43 UTC+9 No.4833882
 
clear...
*BUMP*
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/03/12/(Wed)23:59:16 UTC+9 No.4834016
 
>>4833293
>>4833319
>>4833344
>>4833371
>>4833381
>>4833395
 
woah..pretty nice story i might say..a beginning to a something beautiful..
 
and oh yeah you should put this story in a pastebin..just in case..
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)00:42:44 UTC+9 No.4834431
 
>>4833293
>>4833319
>>4833344
>>4833371
>>4833381
>>4833395
Moar, moar moar!
Anon, you got my attention; here, an anxious spectator.
 
 
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 Spart 10/04/12/(Thu)01:34:36 UTC+9 No.4834950
 
>>4833395
great work ! keep it up!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)03:04:22 UTC+9 No.4836100
 
bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)04:51:51 UTC+9 No.4837751
 
>>4833395
Nice story you got there anon, looking forward to more!
 
 
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 Dakan 10/04/12/(Thu)05:49:52 UTC+9 No.4838511
Replies: >>4838633 >>4842923 >>4842981
 
 
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>>4833230
Those weren't the birth of PiE.
 
PiE started bofore those started. They were in a seperate thread and then they were disscussed in the original PiE thread about mergin here. (See line 4324 of the PiE pastebin) It unfortunatly appears that none of the writers from that thread showed up here. I do have some of the stories though, I'll post them here.
 
Fun fact: That thread inspired me to become a writefag and start posting in PiE
 
 
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 Dakan 10/04/12/(Thu)05:51:18 UTC+9 No.4838531
 
 
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 Dakan 10/04/12/(Thu)05:53:30 UTC+9 No.4838569
 
 
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 Dakan 10/04/12/(Thu)05:54:35 UTC+9 No.4838583
 
 
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 Dakan 10/04/12/(Thu)05:55:19 UTC+9 No.4838594
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)05:55:51 UTC+9 No.4838605
 
Here's the link to the first thread if anyone wanted to see how it played out.
http://archive.heinessen.com/mlp/thread/S4164403
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)05:56:37 UTC+9 No.4838617
 
Holy shit this became a thing.
BRB saving fucking everything
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)05:57:52 UTC+9 No.4838633
Replies: >>4842981
 
>>4838511
The whole thing started 3 months ago, in a "post ponies with clothes" thread. Someone posted >pic related and then posters there started liking it. (Pillow Case). In that thread they (we) had a brainstorming to create a story where that OC came to the earth.
2 months later or so, that anon delivered, this way was born Pie: The First.
 
 
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 Mr. Blue 10/04/12/(Thu)06:05:08 UTC+9 No.4838754
Replies: >>4839110 >>4842981
 
>>4833230
As the one that started PiE,
 
A while back someone made a thread for "ponies with clothes". Someone posted that picture of Pillow Case. We all made up a backstory and name for her before the source of the image was found. Everyone kept saying they'd write a story about her but no one did. Another clothes thread was made way later, I posted that pic and some others. A few people brought up the first thread and that we needed a story for that character. I decided I'd write something. when I posted what I wrote I thought I'd try the idea of making it a thread for any stories about ponies on earth and called it PiE.
 
Then I sort of ran out of ideas for my Pillow Case story and haven't contributed to these threads in a while.
 
I'm thinking of rewriting it in prose and seeing if that helps me think of anything. If it does I'll try to wrap it up into a one shot because I promised someone on fimfiction I would and then I'd post it there.
 
Anyone else can use PC for their own fics. The idea in the first clothes thread was for her to be like the Anon in AiE, and the only requirements were her name and something to do with her liking clothes.
 
If no one does and I run out of story ideas... maybe I should make an ask tumblr for her? I don't even like those but feel like making one for the character.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)06:06:33 UTC+9 No.4838775
 
 
File: 1349298393806.gif-(91 KB, 720x720, hytg.gif)
 
 
These stories are simply divine. I must read them all!
 
 
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 Spart 10/04/12/(Thu)06:30:08 UTC+9 No.4839110
Replies: >>4839443
 
>>4838754
can i find you under the same name at fimfiction ?
 
 
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 Mr. Blue 10/04/12/(Thu)06:52:43 UTC+9 No.4839443
 
>>4839110
Nope. I don't have anything there at this point anyway. I was going to post my story from the TF threads but had some trouble and need to rework it a bit.
 
My username there is BG. I'm going to rewrite my pillow story, write a chapter or two for my main fic, and then do a short FO:E thing I've been saying I'd write. I promise way too many people stories and then can't keep it all up.
 
 
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 the guy that did that Octavia fic 10/04/12/(Thu)09:15:57 UTC+9 No.4841458
Replies: >>4841899 >>4970188
 
 
File: 1349309757142.png-(110 KB, 916x836, 1348416402435.png)
 
 
I pastebined it here in case this 404s or something.
http://pastebin.com/u/CriticalAssdamage
 
I've almost got the second part done, but I'm just too tired to finish it right now. Should be up tomorrow or by Friday at the very latest.
 
 
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 Spart 10/04/12/(Thu)09:38:48 UTC+9 No.4841899
 
>>4841458
saved for other threads
thanks for putting it up the guy that did that Octavia fic ... you should total work on your nickname haha
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)10:43:52 UTC+9 No.4842923
 
>>4838511
wait..where's the first part?..i remember there's a first part of this stories..
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)10:48:04 UTC+9 No.4842981
 
>>4838511
>>4838633
>>4838754
 
good and i like it
someone should put up a pastebin for this and named it like " A History of how Ponies in Earth (PiE) thread came to be"
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)11:30:48 UTC+9 No.4843771
Replies: >>4843861
 
Ok...I am liking this PiE Stuff..Loving the Roseluck works.
 
And starting on the Ponyville Apts. Story now...
 
But...has anyone given any real thought as to maybe writing a main story to focus these around?
 
Stuff like, the first ponies on Earth, why they came, how that was fixed, if ever. Challenges and such with a new sentient race on the planet..
 
I mean, I'd read the crap out of that.
 
I suppose, I could give it a try...but would I want to tell it from an Anon perspective...or pony...perhaps both? And which pony?
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)11:35:04 UTC+9 No.4843861
Replies: >>4844006
 
>>4843771
How all the ponies came to earth, implications and such?
Actually, not a bad idea there. A story which functions as the "genesis" of all this "genre".
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)11:42:50 UTC+9 No.4844006
Replies: >>4844086
 
>>4843861
 
 
Indeed. A central hub, if you will. Not saying they'd all have to base stuff off it, but it would be a good starting point for new writers to jump off of.
 
Might make a good read.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)11:47:11 UTC+9 No.4844086
 
>>4844006
That's the part I love of these stories. The culture shock, awkward moments, the behavior of the ponies when they are all new into this new world, how they react when characters explain how things works on this planet and such. I love those details.
 
I'd love a story like that. Yeah.
 
 
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 Parasite Steve 10/04/12/(Thu)11:57:23 UTC+9 No.4844291
 
Sorry if I made this on another thread but I think Imma get started on mine.
 
 
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 Loscil 10/04/12/(Thu)13:44:42 UTC+9 No.4846702
Replies: >>4846876
 
Almost midnight bump.
 
 
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 Esp !!ksgqP3bcb1b 10/04/12/(Thu)13:53:56 UTC+9 No.4846876
 
>>4846702
bamp
 
 
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 Hazardus_Havard 10/04/12/(Thu)14:00:58 UTC+9 No.4846992
Replies: >>4847154
 
 
File: 1349326858230.jpg-(61 KB, 640x434, man-silhouette-question-mark.jpg)
 
 
Well, this is strange.
 
Accidentally left a thread and returned to continue posting, click this one by mistake and leave it open for later.
 
It's another iE thread, what's posted here may I ask?
 
 
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 Anona 10/04/12/(Thu)14:11:20 UTC+9 No.4847154
Replies: >>4847369
 
 
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>>4846992
stories of daily live of ponies in Earth of course!
adventures and misadvantures,hapiness and tragedies , ups and downs and a lot more..
 
 
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 Hazardus_Havard 10/04/12/(Thu)14:26:23 UTC+9 No.4847369
 
>>4847154
 
Oh.
 
OOOOOOHHHH!
 
Ponies in Earth, okay, strange but okay.
 
So it's an opposite of the AiE threads, how interesting.
 
I'm not sure if I personally would write here since, well, I can't seem to find any ideas at the top of my head here for such a story, and I don't see anyone writing to read some stuff myself.
 
Sad, peaked my interest here to possibly read some new bins and/or posts.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)16:41:58 UTC+9 No.4849025
Replies: >>4850143
 
Bump.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/04/12/(Thu)18:32:59 UTC+9 No.4850143
Replies: >>4850722
 
>>4849025
Bump again, I'm going to bed.
 
 
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 Esp !!ksgqP3bcb1b 10/04/12/(Thu)19:49:26 UTC+9 No.4850722
 
 
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>>4850143
brump.
 
 
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 Esp !!ksgqP3bcb1b 10/04/12/(Thu)20:52:35 UTC+9 No.4851154
 
 
File: 1349351555396.png-(161 KB, 792x500, HSLi6.png)
 
 
one more bump and headed to bed.
 
Good night you fucks.
 
 
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 Pancakes 10/04/12/(Thu)21:08:36 UTC+9 No.4851276
 
 
File: 1349352516593.jpg-(7 KB, 226x223, I brought you a pastebin.jpg)
 
 
>>4824186 (OP)
Glad to see this is still alive. Been sick for a while, but I should start Chapter 5 of Ponyville Apartments soon. The next one might be a little different from usual, but I'll try to maintain the slice-of-life feel.
 
That said, I'd love to see a a story with Lyra sometime soon. I believe she'd fit a comedy series fairly well.
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Prelude, part 2 CriticalAssdamage 10/04/12/(Thu)22:12:39 UTC+9 No.4851745
Replies: >>4851753 >>4854138
 
Here's the second part of that Octavia thing. Properly named this time. Pastebin's already been updated, too.
 
>After waiting over an hour in the lobby with Octavia's luggage while she finalized the details with the building manager, you're just happy to be moving again
"This is so much easier. If this were Canterlot, we'd have to take the steps all the way up. I could really get used to this." Octavia says happily
"Yeah, this high up, I imagine the stairs would get old fast." you reply
>She's a lot easier to talk to than what you'd first thought
>The elevator gives a high pitched ding as you reach the 18th floor and door slides open
>Now it's your turn to be awe.
 
>The hallway alone looks nicer than your whole apartment.
>A thick, dark blue carpet covers the floor and the walls are painted in a more soothing shade of the same
>Sensible wall sconces are spaced a few feet apart, bathing the hallway in a warm light
>A few end tables playing host to potted plants placed near the thick oak doors round out the decor
>You can't even hear Octavia's hooves on the floor as you come up to the third apartment on the right
"Ah, here we are." She says, motioning for you to stop
>She holds the magnetic key card carefully between her front hooves and balances herself precariously as she slides it through the reader by the door
>Turns out that key with the address was only to the lobby door.
>As she nudges the door open, your jaw drops
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/04/12/(Thu)22:13:42 UTC+9 No.4851753
Replies: >>4851760 >>4854138
 
>>4851745
>Her apartment is much, much larger than yours
>Better furnished, too
>To you, it could easily pass for a presidential suite - fancy wooden furniture, painted porclain flower pots, extremely plush chairs and couches
>Not to mention a television that's larger than you are and a spectacular view of the skyline
"Well... they said it was furnished, but I wasn't expecting anything like this."
>Octavia heads in and you follow behind, making sure to close the door
>You set her bags down by the couch, next to her cello
 
>Turning back to her, you see Octavia busily examining the large welcome basket on the table
"Do you think you'll like it here?"
"I... don't know. But I like it so far."
>At least she's honest.
"Well, at least you don't hate it. That's as good a start as any. Now, do you still want to head on over to Lincoln Center?"
"Of course! But, if you don't mind, could we maybe walk? I'm tired of riding around everywhere."
"Yeah, it shouldn't be a problem. It's only a few blocks away."
 
>The walk over was pleasant enough, and you learned a little more about Octavia's time back home.
>Appearently, she was a very well respected performer on the other side and had even played for royalty on numerous occasions.
>It's no great wonder to you that the Philharmonic had sought her out after hearing that story, even if she was very modest about it.
>You briefly wonder if you'll ever get the chance to hear her play... before laughing at the sheer absurdity of that idea.
>You'll probably never see her again after today
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/04/12/(Thu)22:14:31 UTC+9 No.4851760
Replies: >>4851775 >>4854138
 
>>4851753
>Tired of pacing aimlessly around while waiting for Octavia to finish taking care of whatever she's doing inside, you sit down at a patio table, only to have your phone ring
"What?" You already know who it is.
"Horsefucker." Rich's voice lilts from the other end with all the maturity of a twelve year old.
"Have you looked at what you're sticking your dick in? You don't have any room to be throwing that word around."
"At least I get to stick it in something."
"At what cost, though? She's got you so pussywhipped you have to ask permission to go the bathroom."
"Everyone's got his price, man. I'm comfortable with mine."
>You have no idea how he manages to get you off onto these tangents.
 
"So did you want something, or did you just call to be ass?"
"Nah, just thought I'd shoot the shit for a little while. The baby shower's finally over. Mallory says you should jump off a bridge, by the way."
"Charming as always..."
"Hey, is this thing right? What the hell are you doing at Lincoln Center?"
"Waiting on Octavia to finish whatever it is she's doing."
"That's the pony?"
"No, it's a magic talking dog. Of course it's the pony, idiot."
>You hear laughter erupt from his end of the line.
 
"You just met her, and already you're waiting on her while she runs errands! Yeah man, I'M the one that's pussywhipped."
>Damn, he's sort of got you there
"Tell me you at least got her number."
>You jerk the phone away from your ear and just stare at it for a second
"I don't understand you some times."
"It's why we work so well together. Now tell me. Did. You. Get. Her. Number?"
"No."
>You decide against telling him she brought you up to her apartment
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/04/12/(Thu)22:15:47 UTC+9 No.4851775
Replies: >>4851779 >>4854138
 
>>4851760
>He responds with mock outrage
"WHAT! Dude, you have to start tapping that immediately, before anyone else beats you to it!"
"I'm hanging up now."
"Dude, just hear me out on this! You have an in with a girl that, from a glance, looks to be WAY out of your league! Pony or not, you HAVE to follow this through!"
"Goodbye, Rich."
 
>Just when you're sure he's not going to bother you again, you hear Octavia's voice behind you
"I cannot thank you enough for waiting."
"Ah, don't worry about it. They give you everything you needed?"
"Yes. It's quite a weight off my shoulders knowing how to get here now. Plus, they gave me all the schedules and the sheet music we'll be doing at the next show. In fact, we're starting practice on Monday."
>She plops a heavy manilla envelope down on the table and climbs up into the other chair.
>She fidgets uncomfortably before finally settling on just laying her forelegs on the table. It's cute in how awkward it looks.
"That looks like a lot to get familiar with."
"I know it looks that way, but this is fairly normal for a routine performance. And it will be quite challenging to play something new for a change. I must say, I'm looking forward to it. Plus, the atmosphere here is much more relaxed than at Canterlot. It's all a very refreshing change of pace from what I'm used to."
>You never pictured concert musicians as a loose bunch, but you take her word on it, and her enthusiasm is endearing, to say the least
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/04/12/(Thu)22:16:41 UTC+9 No.4851779
Replies: >>4851801 >>4854138
 
>>4851775
"Is there anything else you'd like to do?" You ask as you put your phone away.
"Oh, n-no, I couldn't possibly take any more of your time. You've been a real life saver with all of this. I imagine I'd still be trying to pull that accursed cart without you."
"You're very welcome. Besides, this has turned out to be a pretty enjoyable day." you say, standing up.
>Octavia hops down, looking very glad to out of that chair
"Well then, I'm glad we've both been able to help each other."
>By the time you even notice, you're already halfway back to her apartment
>She hasn't brought it up and you're not about to, either
 
>Before you know it, you're back at the steps to Octavia's building.
"Well, let me be first the say welcome to New York. I really do hope you'll enjoy it here." you say to her
"You know, I think will." She flashes that warm smile again.
You smile back, "Well, so long Octavia."
>As you turn to leave, she calls out one last time
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/04/12/(Thu)22:18:57 UTC+9 No.4851801
Replies: >>4854066 >>4854138 >>4863097 >>4885003
 
>>4851779
"Before you go, I noticed you had one of those little talking boxes earlier. They gave me one when I came here, but I didn't really have anything to use it for at the time.
 
Most of my friends are still back in Equestria. If you don't mind, could I call you if I have any more questions?"
>You can barely believe what you just heard. Surely, some supernatural fuckery is at work here
>But still, there's no reason to refuse
>You quietly curse Rich and his entire family as you pull the pen from your pocket
>You quickly exchange numbers and say your last goodbyes before heading towards the bus stop
 
>As you're passing over the Williamsburg Bridge into Brooklyn, your phone rumbles with a waiting message
>Probably Rich again
>Checking it reveals Octavia's number
"I guess no one told her about the three day rule, either." you mutter to yourself
>Looking at the message, it looks like it was stomped out by an angry elephant
>After a great deal of deciphering and linguistic gymnastics, you can barely make out
"Would you like to meet for breakfast in the morning?"
>You type out a simple yes and that you'll be by around 10
>For the sake of your sanity, Rich must never know
>You're still unsure of what exactly to make of Octavia, but you can at least try to be a friend to her
 
And that's it for now. Notepad did better this time, but it still sucks.
 
 
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 Anona 10/05/12/(Fri)00:28:18 UTC+9 No.4852898
 
uhh 2 hour bump..
 
 
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 Loscil 10/05/12/(Fri)02:31:51 UTC+9 No.4854066
 
>>4851801
Very nice, I hope you write more.
Waiting for the next part.
 
 
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 Spart 10/05/12/(Fri)02:37:56 UTC+9 No.4854138
Replies: >>4855879
 
>>4851745
>>4851753
>>4851760
>>4851775
>>4851779
>>4851801
haha nice work!
 
 
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 Spart 10/05/12/(Fri)04:56:21 UTC+9 No.4855879
 
>>4854138
bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/05/12/(Fri)06:37:34 UTC+9 No.4857303
Replies: >>4861141 >>4863097 >>4867633
 
 
File: 1349386654615.png-(153 KB, 650x600, Anon and Rose.png)
 
 
bump with pic
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/05/12/(Fri)08:50:29 UTC+9 No.4859330
Replies: >>4860523
 
Evening bump.
 
 
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 Spart 10/05/12/(Fri)10:09:39 UTC+9 No.4860523
 
>>4859330
time 2 bump
 
 
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 Dakan 10/05/12/(Fri)10:41:36 UTC+9 No.4861141
Replies: >>4862423
 
>>4857303
Wow... thats awesome!
 
(sageing because of recent bump)
 
 
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 Spart 10/05/12/(Fri)11:42:16 UTC+9 No.4862423
 
>>4861141
2nd that ^^
 
and good night bump it's fucking 4AM here ...
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/05/12/(Fri)12:14:54 UTC+9 No.4863097
 
>>4857303
Wow, thats nice!
 
>>4851801
And so is this. Looking forward to seeing where it goes!
 
Sage because too early for a bump.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/05/12/(Fri)14:06:25 UTC+9 No.4865313
 
Bump
 
 
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 q.q LeStrange 10/05/12/(Fri)14:32:32 UTC+9 No.4865709
 
I've scrapped so many PiE stories.. writing a story will be the death of my hand...
 
 
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 Anona 10/05/12/(Fri)16:41:51 UTC+9 No.4867633
Replies: >>4868814
 
>>4857303
woah..that's some good art right there!
 
and in another notes
>bump!
 
 
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 Spart 10/05/12/(Fri)18:11:39 UTC+9 No.4868814
 
>>4867633
bumb b4 404
 
 
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 Anona 10/05/12/(Fri)20:41:06 UTC+9 No.4870141
 
ok..i'm bumping again
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5:Inlaws Pt1:The Train Ride Dakan 10/05/12/(Fri)21:23:17 UTC+9 No.4870426
Replies: >>4870432 >>4870546 >>4873770 >>4878762
 
Next part of the Roseluck chronicles starts now.
I'm going to finish the rest later but here is what i have
 
>The suburbia landscape flashes by before your eyes
>The hum of the train car vibrates the seat beneath you
>The soft touch of a head on your shoulder breaks your stare
>You reach out instinctively and wrap your arm around Rose
>She rubs her head against you and starts to stare out the window as well
>It has been 4 months since that night on the roof
>Between school, work, and planning a wedding your plates been full
>But some of that has just changed
>You finally have your degree
>It has been a long time coming
>Now you just need to figure out what to do with it
>You have some ideas, nothing concrete yet
>You have a feeling though that you want to get out of the city
>You have been discussing the idea with Rose
>She agrees that it would be nice to get out into the country
>She never did seem like the city girl type
>But that’s not the reason for this train ride
>You mind drifts back about a month ago
>You and Rose were discussing the wedding
>Mostly you were discussing the guest list
>You had both decided that it should be a relatively small affair
>Only close friends and family members
>She was talking about her friends that would attend
“Let’s see, Lilly and Daisy are at the top of the list.”
“Perhaps Lyra also.”
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt1 Dakan 10/05/12/(Fri)21:24:05 UTC+9 No.4870432
Replies: >>4870546 >>4876396
 
>>4870426
>”I’ll probably have Rob be my Best Man, he’ll bring Lyra as his date”
“Excellent, I don’t have much in a way of family. What about you Anon?”
>”Huh?”
“I was asking about your family, anyone that you want to invite…”
>You were hoping to avoid this as long as possible
>Maybe even make it through the wedding without including them
>But it looks like it’s time to face the music
>”Nope, no family.”
>Rose gives you a strange look
“Don’t lie anon, I have heard you talking on the phone to your mother plenty of times.”
“You also frequently ask about your father and sister.”
>Right, fuck… gotta dodge this
>”They all live pretty far away; they won’t be able to make it…”
“Anon… whats wrong, you know that I know that you used to live just outside of the city…”
>You really need to stop digging yourself a hole
“Maybe we should go visit them before the wedding… so that way you can introduce me…”
>Terrible Idea
>”I don’t think that’s the best idea, we are pretty busy as it is.”
“But your almost done with school, we could both use a nice vacation way to relax, meeting you parents would be nice also…”
>You’re not going to escape this very easily
>Maybe just telling her the truth…
>”There’s a reason, why I don’t want you meeting them, or them at the wedding.”
“Oh, are you sure? I think that they would love to see their son get married”
>”It’s not that, I’m sure they would love to see me get married”
>You swallow hard prepping yourself the next bit
 
 
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 Spart 10/05/12/(Fri)21:38:45 UTC+9 No.4870546
Replies: >>4871461
 
>>4870426
>>4870432
guess Anon's familie is not happy with ponies
 
 
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 Spart 10/05/12/(Fri)23:38:53 UTC+9 No.4871461
 
>>4870546
2 hours bump
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/06/12/(Sat)00:36:32 UTC+9 No.4872040
Replies: >>4872436
 
I need to hurry and get caught up with Ponyville Apartments so I can start reading Roseluck!
 
I'm working on the next part of the Octavia thing, but I haven't made a whole lot of progress so far. I'll try to have to have it up by no later than Monday.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/06/12/(Sat)01:16:12 UTC+9 No.4872436
 
>>4872040
I hope you write more, I can't wait for the next part.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/06/12/(Sat)02:44:05 UTC+9 No.4873411
 
Might as well bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/06/12/(Sat)03:19:12 UTC+9 No.4873770
 
>>4870426
Whoo, more Roseluck! I was worried after the thread 404'd...again
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/06/12/(Sat)06:02:43 UTC+9 No.4875309
 
bumpa
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt1 Dakan 10/06/12/(Sat)07:31:46 UTC+9 No.4876396
Replies: >>4876413 >>4878700
 
>>4870432
>”You see my parents aren’t as… open minded as some humans.”
>Rose gives you another strange look
“What do you mean Anon, do they hate ponies or something?”
>”Oh no, they don’t hate the ponies, it’s just that…”
>You take a pause
>”My parents are really religious.”
“I still don’t follow anon, what does their religion have to do with us getting married?”
>”Everything…”
>You get up and walk across the room and pull open a drawer
>You reach inside and pull out an old leather bound book
>The golden letter on the front of it identify the books name
>The Holy Bible
>You walk back over to Rose and start flipping through the pages
“What book is that Anon?”
>”This is the Bible; it is a religious text that hold the history and laws of the Christian faith.”
>”My parents religion.”
>You start reading several verses from the Bible
>All of them that you quote deal with the consequences of relations between man and beast
>You finish and look at Rose
>”My parents believe this unquestionably. They think it’s a sin.”
“Ok, but from what I understand, that was written a long time ago”
“They would have no idea that an intelligent pony race would come to Earth.”
“Besides, I bet they were referring to the animals of this Earth.”
“I am not exactly from here, am I?”
>She playfully snuggles her muzzle against your cheek
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt1 Dakan 10/06/12/(Sat)07:32:39 UTC+9 No.4876413
Replies: >>4876427 >>4881004
 
>>4876396
>”You have that right, but my parents don’t see it that way.”
>”I still remember a conversation with my mother about people who were just dating ponies.”
>”She had a few choice words to say on the matter.”
>You sit with Rose quietly for a time
“I still want to meet them, and want them to come to the wedding.”
>”I know, but I don’t think I can change their opinions on the matter.”
>Rose gets a devious smile on her face
“I have an idea Anon…”
“Tickets, tickets please!”
>The sound of the conductor’s voice jolts you back to the present
>You quickly find your tickets and hand them to the conductor
>That’s why I’m here
>The plan was to visit with your parents for a few days
>Your sister was also staying with them
>It was also so convenient
>You would show up and present Roseluck as a close friend
>You would then try and convince your parents about your intentions
>Sounds simple enough…
>What could possibly go wrong?
>You sigh as you continue to stare out the window
>Everything that’s what
>But honestly what is the worse that could happen
>Your parents shun you; call you a horsefucker and prune your branch from the family tree
>Maybe you could recruit some help from your sister
>She, like you, was never big into religion
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt1 Dakan 10/06/12/(Sat)07:33:14 UTC+9 No.4876427
Replies: >>4876453
 
>>4876413
>Plus being the stoner that she is
>She is open to all kinds of new ideas
>Right?
>You sigh again
>”This is a huge mistake…”
>Rose tries to reassure you the best she can
“Don’t worry; everything will turn out for the best.”
>”I know, I just am still worried about what my parents will think”
“Anon, I know you want your parents to accept out engagement.”
“But, why should you be worried? Even if they don’t approve, you still have me?”
>That thought does bring a smile to your face.
>That is all that you have to remember
>No matter what happens over the next few days
>At the end you will still have the mare you love
>Those thoughts hang in your mind as the brake for the train engage
“Last stop everybody! Welcome to Fox Grove!”
 
 
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 Dakan 10/06/12/(Sat)07:34:41 UTC+9 No.4876453
 
>>4876427
End of Part 1
Pastebin updated...
 
What can returning home to a religous family that may or may not accept your engagement have in store. I sense Drama and Shenanigans on the horizon!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/06/12/(Sat)09:37:20 UTC+9 No.4878293
 
2 hours bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/06/12/(Sat)10:01:06 UTC+9 No.4878700
Replies: >>4878762
 
>>4876396
>>You get up and walk across the room and pull open a drawer
>>You reach inside and pull out an old leather bound book
>>The golden letter on the front of it identify the books name
 
 
<-- wait what ? inside a train ?
beside that, very nice, let's see how ponies deal with religious fanatics, oh i mean ultraconservative Christians
 
 
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 Dakan 10/06/12/(Sat)10:03:34 UTC+9 No.4878762
Replies: >>4878964
 
>>4878700
see>>4870426
 
>Your mind drifts back about a month ago
 
hope that helps
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/06/12/(Sat)10:13:27 UTC+9 No.4878964
 
>>4878762
total missed that line >__< damn
nice work !
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/06/12/(Sat)11:57:52 UTC+9 No.4881004
 
>>4876413
>that feel when I have religious parents
>that feel when if I ever get married, I'm pretending my parents are dead
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/06/12/(Sat)14:17:53 UTC+9 No.4883868
Replies: >>4884907
 
Bump
 
 
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 Esp !!ksgqP3bcb1b 10/06/12/(Sat)15:25:38 UTC+9 No.4884907
 
 
File: 1349504738286.png-(240 KB, 852x476, ogubl.png)
 
 
>>4883868
brrrrump after getting out of bed to piss.
 
 
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 Esp !!ksgqP3bcb1b 10/06/12/(Sat)15:30:56 UTC+9 No.4885003
 
>>4851801
Much enjoyed by the way. Please keep up the wonderful work.
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt2: Hometown Dakan 10/06/12/(Sat)16:31:11 UTC+9 No.4885843
Replies: >>4885854
 
>The train slowly rolls into the station
>You get up and first help Rose out with her saddle bags
>You collect the rest of your things and disembark the train
>Fox Grove, been a long time since you’ve been here
>While this isn’t your home town, you did spend a good majority of your time here
>This being the next biggest town and the only once with a grocery store and a movie theater assured that.
>The place hasn’t changed a bit
>You take a look around looking for your sister
>She was supposed to be here right around now
>You sigh, she is probably late, again
>Most likely she got high and forgot the time…
>Might as well show Roseluck around the local scene while you wait
>”Looks like my sister is going to be late. Let’s get something to eat. I know a great local dinner.”
>Rose looks up at you and nods and follows you into town
>The local diner isn’t far from the train station
>“The Crossing” is just like you remember it, filled with a bunch of old railroad stuff and little toy trains
>You walk in and sit yourself down at one of the booths
>A familiar looking woman walks up to your booth
>You recognize her as a childhood friend
>You smile politely
>”Hello Amy”
>She is shocked that you know her name
>She stares at you for a second
“So, anon, you finally come back for a visit.”
>She turns to Rose
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt2 Dakan 10/06/12/(Sat)16:32:07 UTC+9 No.4885854
Replies: >>4885867
 
>>4885843
“And you brought a friend”
>She shakes her head
“Why am I not surprised…”
 >What is that supposed to mean…
>”Nice to see you to Amy, just two salads please.”
>Amy walks off, you can’t help but notice that she stops and whispers other waitress behind the counter
“Who was that Anon?”
>”She was an old High School friend. We will probably run into more of them while we are in town”
>Another reason to get out of here
>You check your phone, nothing from your sister yet.
>You quickly shoot off a text asking her where she is
>You turn back to Roseluck
>”So what do you think so far.”
“I like the small and cozy feeling of the town, it’s nice.”
“There’s just one thing, I haven’t seen very many ponies since we left the city.”
>She is right of course, you just came to realize the besides the ponies who got off the train with you; you may have only seen one maybe two other ponies.
>It makes sense though, most ponies lived in the cities.
>But that was unicorns, most earth ponies should be out her
>But this is a far cry from the country
>Maybe very few ponies settled in small towns like this
>The vibration from your phone interrupts your thoughts
>You check it, it’s a message from your sister
‘Sry bro, brt. :)’
>Thought so…
>Your food arrives a few seconds later
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt2 Dakan 10/06/12/(Sat)16:32:44 UTC+9 No.4885867
Replies: >>4885879
 
>>4885854
>After a nice quiet meal and a little wait your sister walks in through the door
>Your sister Katy, she’s about a foot shorter than you with blonde hair and blue eyes
>Most guys would call her a babe
>But you see her as your younger sister, you being two years older
>You get up and give her a big hug
>Your nose is assaulted by a familiar aroma
>Your sister never ceases to amaze…
>”Good to see you Katy, how are you doing”
“Just fine Anon, sorry I lost sense of time.”
>As she pulls away you can’t help but notice her eyes are bloodshot
>”Yeah, I wonder how that happened…”
>She laughs a little too hard at your joke.
>She stares past you at Rose
“So, who’s your pony friend?”
>Your sister walks over to Rose and kneels down in front of her
>”This is my friend Roseluck; Roseluck this is my sister Katy.”
“Nice to meet you Katy.”
“Nice to meet you too Rose.”
>Your sister holds out a hand and Rose lifts her front hoof to shake
>you pay the check and follow your sister out onto the streets
>Parked in front of the restaurant is your old truck
>”Glad to see you taking care of my truck.”
“I needed some way to get around, besides you were off in the city at college.”
>You throw your bags and Rose’s saddle bags into the truck bed before climbing into the cab
>”I’m driving Katy”
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt2 Dakan 10/06/12/(Sat)16:33:29 UTC+9 No.4885879
Replies: >>4885889
 
>>4885867
“Aww, but I’m perfectly straight Anon.”
>”Right… my truck, I’m driving”
>She huffs and tosses you the keys
>Rose climbs up beside you and your sister sits in the passenger seat
>The cab is pretty packed
>Thankfully it’s a relatively short drive back to your house
>You try your best to drive in the cramped positions
>Your sister and Roseluck start talking
“So what do you do for a living Katy?”
“Oh, some here and there jobs, I’m currently going to the community college for classes”
“That sounds nice, what are you going for?”
“Dunno.”
>You sigh and shake your head
“So, Rose whats your “special talent”.”
>She actually uses air quotes
“Oh, I grow all different kind of flowers and sell them. My favorites to grow are Roses.”
“Do you also grow herbs?”
>Oh no, not that direction
>”Katy…”
“What? I’m taking an interest on your friend’s natural talent with growing things.”
>”No”
“College changed you bro, you used to be so laid back, I remember a time where you would ask the same question…”
>You immediately blush
“What does she mean Anon?”
>”Nothing Rose, my sister is just trying to dig up some old skeletons from my past.”
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt2 Dakan 10/06/12/(Sat)16:34:08 UTC+9 No.4885889
Replies: >>4885905
 
>>4885879
>Rose leans her head against your shoulder
>You appreciate the closeness
>Until the thought that your sister is in the car comes to your mind
>You quickly glance over at your sister who seems to be preoccupied with the passing landscape
>Thank god for stoner concentration
>You eventually enter into the township of Spring Lake
>A significantly smaller town than Fox Grove
>Spring Lake has a school, a post office, a gas station, and a small general store
>A few farms on the outskirts
>At least that’s what you remember of it
>Since you’ve been gone some of the farms have sold their land to housing developments
>Spring Lake is now only slightly smaller than Fox Grove
>All it is missing is a movie theater and a train station and they would be roughly equal to each other.
>You remember the way home like the back of your hand
>You eventually arrive at your childhood home
>A smallish house
>It has a living room, kitchen, basement, and a second floor with a bathroom and three bedrooms
>A nice house
>Quickly get out and start unpacking the car
>Your sister charges up to the house and inside
>Knowing here she’s going to hide her stuff
>You slowly walk up to your childhood home with Rose
>When you enter the house your sister charges down the stairs with a big smile
“I’ll let Anon show you around, I’ll be in back if you want to chat later.”
>Note to self, don’t let Roseluck go to the back alone
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt2 Dakan 10/06/12/(Sat)16:35:04 UTC+9 No.4885905
Replies: >>4885914
 
>>4885889
>You give Roseluck a quick tour of the house
>When you come to your room you pause
>The last time you were here…
>You opened the door
>Yep, like you feared it’s exactly the same
>Posters for video games and comics cover the walls
>A bookshelf filled with sci-fi books and graphic novels on one wall
>Oh god, I was such a geek through high school
>Roseluck follows you into the room
>She a quick look around and turns to you
>”I know, its looks really geeky, but I can explain…”
“It does, but it’s your life. Plus, I like it.”
>You smile, how did you get such a great mare
>Time for some bad news.
>”Until I tell my parents about us, it might be best if we don’t sleep together.”
>She looks hurt by this…
“I understand…”
>”I’ll make it up, I promise.”
>She starts to leave and looks back at you
“Oh you will, am I sleeping on the couch then?”
>Before you can answer you hear the sound of the front door opening
>You swallow hard because you know what it means
>Your parents are home…
 
 
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 Dakan 10/06/12/(Sat)16:36:11 UTC+9 No.4885914
Replies: >>4885922
 
>>4885905
End of Part 2
Pastebin updated
 
I have a long weekend this week, so I hope to get alot done as far as story goes, stay tuned...
 
 
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 Esp !!ksgqP3bcb1b 10/06/12/(Sat)16:36:46 UTC+9 No.4885922
Replies: >>4886668
 
 
File: 1349509006532.png-(107 KB, 640x640, nhtbrv.png)
 
 
>>4885914
Oh god. I can't wait.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/06/12/(Sat)17:42:57 UTC+9 No.4886668
 
>>4885922
nor can I, this is getting good
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/06/12/(Sat)20:21:28 UTC+9 No.4887994
 
Just read through the octavia story so far, and I'd have to say I'm quite interested
 
 
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 Dakan 10/06/12/(Sat)21:05:00 UTC+9 No.4888330
Replies: >>4888342 >>4889800 >>4889833 >>4890157 >>4890568 >>4890940 >>4891884 >>4893251
 
Hey all, Im probably going to post the next part tommorow morning. But, that isn't the purpose of this post. I am here to pose a question.
 
I have been doing alot of thinking about the next set of stories I am going to write for this thread. I have alot of Ideas that I think would be good, but I want you guys to decide what you want to read. You are the intended audience after all...
 
so here it goes:
A:A boy and a pony make a wish at the same time, this wish brings the pony to our world. (Mixed percepective)
 
B:A boy discovers that one of his class mates is a pony in disquise (Anon Percepective)
 
C: A soldier discovers that he is guarding ponies that are being experimented on by the government (Anon pecpective)
 
D: A man is manipulated into helping an invasion of Earth by the changeling Queen (Anon percepective)
 
E: Mystery Box the contents of which shall be revealed if this option is choosen.
 
I'll leave this up over night and see what the results are tommorow morning.
 
 
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 Esp !!ksgqP3bcb1b 10/06/12/(Sat)21:06:51 UTC+9 No.4888342
Replies: >>4895359
 
 
File: 1349525211396.jpg-(9 KB, 260x194, images.jpg)
 
 
>>4888330
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/06/12/(Sat)22:40:07 UTC+9 No.4889091
Replies: >>4889123
 
What the bloody fucking ass dick nigga cunt willy wong bitch shit fuck nugget prick wanker does fucking PiE mean you fat shitty bitch shit penal inserting fuckers.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/06/12/(Sat)22:44:42 UTC+9 No.4889123
 
>>4889091
Ponies In Earth...
 
 
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 Anona 10/07/12/(Sun)00:05:57 UTC+9 No.4889800
 
>>4888330
i choose A..but B kinda interesting too
and the Mystery box..feels like it calling me..
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/07/12/(Sun)00:09:35 UTC+9 No.4889833
Replies: >>4895359
 
 
File: 1349536175740.jpg-(Spoiler Image, 57 KB, 460x333, b7e.jpg)
 
 
>>4888330
There is only the box.
 
I've made a little more headway on the next part of the Octavia story. I may have it up sooner than what I expected.
Pic is very related.
 
Also, morning bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)00:48:53 UTC+9 No.4890157
 
>>4888330
C or D can't decide !
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/07/12/(Sun)01:03:44 UTC+9 No.4890257
Replies: >>4890267 >>5021739 >>5103307
 
 
File: 1349539424835.jpg-(26 KB, 463x341, 46.jpg)
 
 
And now, something different. Let's switch our point-of-view to someone else in the city for a while...
 
> I awake with a start, in a cold sweat.
> That dream again! That horrible dream...
> A strange and foreign world, far from this one,
> Full of dangerous creatures and beasts,
> And ruled by the deadliest of beings.
"Equestria," I whispered.
> I once thought of the place as just an old fairy tail,
> A story told to children to keep them out of the forest at night.
> But I was wrong. I was so very wrong.
"Crazy stories my ass!" I muttered darkly.
> I sigh loudly as I get up from bed.
> After washing up, I take a moment to go online.
> Check my emails. Check the website. Check the forums.
> A number of photos (clearly doctored), but still no confirmed sightings.
"Nothing interesting today, either."
> I turn on the television set as I prepare to make breakfast.
"Last night, gunfire and explosions were heard all over the east side of the city."
"A number of vehicle wreckages were found, with unlicensed firearms abandoned nearby."
"Witnesses say that gang violence has reached an all-time high in the area."
"The major has been asked to make a statement-"
> I turn the TV off. Looks like this city is going to hell, as usual.
> But what else is new?
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/07/12/(Sun)01:04:34 UTC+9 No.4890267
Replies: >>4890277 >>5021739
 
>>4890257
> As I head to work, I pull out something from my pocket:
> A black notebook, old and beaten.
> But perhaps, this is the last reminder of my sanity.
> I turn to the page I dog-eared and silently read.
"They refer to themselves simply as 'ponies'."
"But they are unlike any equine on Earth."
"They can speak, and they are certainly sentient and self-aware."
"As the dominant species in Equestria, they have developed their own civilization in this vast land."
"And they have laid down their own rules."
> The entry continues on, but I stop there.
> I turn several pages, to a later entry.
"There are three major types of pony:"
"The first is the 'earth pony'."
"They are the most ordinary-looking of the ponies."
"However, looks can be deceiving."
"They are very strong for their size, and they are surprisingly sturdy."
"Their unique connection to nature allows them to grow plants and survive in the most difficult of terrain."
"In combat, physical attacks are their specialty."
"With or without weapons, they can easily take down an adult human being."
> With or without weapons. I shudder slightly at I read those words again.
> I definitely don't want to meet one of these things on the road.
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/07/12/(Sun)01:06:33 UTC+9 No.4890277
Replies: >>4890284 >>5021739
 
 
File: 1349539593885.jpg-(23 KB, 444x563, 47.jpg)
 
 
>>4890267
"Howdy, Mister!"
> I look up in surprise. Well, this is new.
> Never had a girl call out to me before.
> At least, not one as pretty as this blonde-haired beauty.
> I check behind me, but no one else is there.
> "Uh, hi?" I reply, still a little unsure.
"Would you mind helping me out with some directions?"
> So that's it. My heart sinks slightly, but I nod anyway.
> Normally, I wouldn't give the time of day to anyone wearing a cowboy hat in this city.
> But for some reason, it suits this girl quite well.
> "Where are you headed?"
"Ah, I'm supposed to be doing an errand. You see, I was given this here map and-"
> She hands over a piece of paper with a handwritten map of the area.
> After a couple of minutes, I get the gist of it.
> "You headed to the post office?"
"That's right! Got some things to deliver by human mail!"
> Human mail? That is a strange way to put it.
> But I decide not to mention anything. None of my business, after all.
> I hand back the map to the girl.
> "To get to the post office, just cross the street from here and take a right at the next stoplight."
"Thank you, kindly!" says the girl.
> She grabs my hand and shakes it roughly.
> This girl's got quite a grip. But that's not all.
> Her hand is so soft! Almost like it isn't a human hand.
"Nice to know that y'all still have some good folk in this here city!"
> I watch her cross the street. Looks like she can take care of herself.
> Then, to my suprise, she turns around and gives me a little wave.
> I return the gesture awkwardly before going my way.
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/07/12/(Sun)01:07:55 UTC+9 No.4890284
Replies: >>4890332 >>4890917 >>4949485 >>5021739
 
>>4890277
"Well, that's new. Why so early today?"
> The guy smiles as I come inside. I give him a shrug.
> "I don't really have anything better to do."
"That so? I thought you'd be out hunting for those pony-aliens or whatever. Y'know, like those folk posting pictures on the internet."
> He grins widely as we head in the back room.
> I quickly change into my convenience store uniform.
> "Don't lump me in with those crazies."
"Yeah, I hear you," he says. "But wouldn't it be pretty neat if it was all true? Magical pony creatures and all that."
> "Maybe," I say. "Maybe not."
> Ponies are dangerous.
> If he's only seen what I've seen.
"Well, I'll be heading off now."
> He gives me a wave as he leaves the store. Not a bad guy, really.
> Never takes things too seriously. Always smiling.
> I'm still surprised he acts pretty cool about my interest in "ponies".
> Others would look at me like some kind of lunatic.
"Oh yeah! Let me know if you want to go for a drink or something. We can work out the shifts with the manager."
> He pops inside again just to say that.
> "Sure, whatever."
> After one last wave, he finally leaves. I wait a few minutes.
> A glance tells me that we have no customers yet.
> I pull out the black notebook to kill time.
"The second is the 'unicorn pony'."
"They are characterized by a single horn on their forehead,"
"And their unique ability to perform magic."
 
 
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 Pancakes 10/07/12/(Sun)01:14:56 UTC+9 No.4890332
 
>>4890284
Ending here for now. For those just picking this up, finish at least the first chapter to better understand the context of the mane six in the story.
 
Pastebin for previous chapters:
http://pastebin.com/u/ChocolateChipPancake
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)01:24:08 UTC+9 No.4890397
Replies: >>4890561
 
>>4824426
Holy shit balls someone actually screen capped that? I'm honoured!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)01:25:08 UTC+9 No.4890407
 
>>4833395
Be great if you continued dude. Also pastebin this.
 
 
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 Anona 10/07/12/(Sun)01:45:54 UTC+9 No.4890561
 
>>4890397
yeah..i'm the one who screen capped that story just for our PiE readers...
 
 
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 Pancakes 10/07/12/(Sun)01:47:08 UTC+9 No.4890568
Replies: >>4895359
 
>>4888330
Cannot resist the Mystery Box!
 
 
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 LeStrange 10/07/12/(Sun)02:39:03 UTC+9 No.4890917
 
>>4890284
http://youtu.be/EvaoeqNLNtM
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)02:43:14 UTC+9 No.4890940
 
>>4888330
A. I love the pony perspective.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)04:12:03 UTC+9 No.4891884
 
>>4888330
A. The idea of only a single pony being dropped in Earth is interesting. I also like mixed perspective.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)04:54:13 UTC+9 No.4892471
Replies: >>4892516
 
What does PiE stand for?
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)04:57:15 UTC+9 No.4892516
Replies: >>4892542
 
>>4892471
Ponies in Earth.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)04:59:04 UTC+9 No.4892542
Replies: >>4892668
 
>>4892516
Aren't they already ON Earth?
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)05:05:48 UTC+9 No.4892668
 
>>4892542
On earth as in on our world, with humans and such.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)05:51:06 UTC+9 No.4893251
Replies: >>4895359
 
>>4888330
The box, who could pass up the mystery box? Though D seems good too.
 
 
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 Dakan 10/07/12/(Sun)08:08:25 UTC+9 No.4895359
Replies: >>4896064
 
 
File: 1349564905271.jpg-(11 KB, 231x220, operatorsymbol.jpg)
 
 
>>4893251
>>4890568
>>4889833
>>4888342
 Ok, with the decision of for votes the Mysterbox is the winner!
 
I wonder what inside...
>Dakan grabs a box cutter and begins to cut the tape
>He struggles a bit against the duct tape, but finally cut throught
"You know its strange, I didn't even make this box. I found it on my door stop this morning."
>He opens it up and finds just a simple piece of paper
>He pics up the paper and examines it
>He flips it over
>His eyes fill with fear
"No, not that! Anything but It!"
>Dakan screams are cut short
>The box drops to the floor
>All thats left is the box and a piece of paper
 
>pic related
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)08:37:38 UTC+9 No.4895864
Replies: >>4896064
 
I am writing a story people, its just taking a while.
 
Anyways here's a preview of what I've done so far, its a first draft btw
 
>You sluggishly walk up the stairs to your new apartment hoping that the blackened burned stairs wouldn’t give way under your weight.
 
>Your old place of residence was burned by dragons a few months back
 
>So much has changed the past year, a world of technocolour ponies, dragons, griffons, celestial goddesses and other assorted mythological shit kinda merged with Earth. After the initial chaos and confusion, what was left of the world decided to work with Celestia and Luna to build this new world.
 
>And the weird part was how nobody found the whole situation surreal anymore.
 
>Everyone and everything is used to seeing a Griffon in the street drinking coffee on the way to work. Or a pony reading the paper on the train. Hell seeing a dragon didn’t even raise eye brows these days. Are we that jaded that we don’t really care that we share the world with two goddesses?
 
>Anyways you make a leap of faith when the stairs start to give way you find yourself in front of your new apartment. You fumble about with your keys trying to open the door when “Hey are you my new ROOMIE” came a over excited voice from behind.
 
 
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 Anona 10/07/12/(Sun)08:50:05 UTC+9 No.4896064
Replies: >>4897283
 
>>4895359
okay..totally didn't see that one coming..
 
>>4895864
don't worry..just take your time..
 
 
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 Spart 10/07/12/(Sun)10:18:13 UTC+9 No.4897283
Replies: >>4899863
 
>>4896064
bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)12:56:16 UTC+9 No.4899863
 
>>4897283
2.5 hour bump.
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt3:Dinner with the Rents Dakan 10/07/12/(Sun)13:26:13 UTC+9 No.4900410
Replies: >>4900428
 
>You leave you room and make your way downstairs
>As you come insight of the front door you see your mother and father standing there
>Your mother, slightly shorter than you with black hair. She looks young for her age, 51.
>Your mother never competed high school; she has always help odd jobs.
>She was a cleaning woman for a while, eventually she got a job as a cashier at one of the local supermarkets.
>She has always regretted never finishing high school. She tries to keep a clean house and enjoy yard work and gardening.
>Your father, slightly taller than you with blonde hair slightly receding. A tad older than your mother, 53.
>He completed high school and some college. Never put any of it to use and got a job with Metra as a conductor.
>He retired before you left, he now works part time as a mechanic down at a local garage.
>You rush over and give them both a hug
“Glad to have you home Anon”
“Good to see you son, how has college treated you?”
>”Glad to be home mom, college was fine dad, just glad it’s over.”
>The sound of approaching hoof steps interrupts the reunion
>You turn around and notice that Roseluck is standing behind you, smiling politely
>You smile back at her
>You father coughs a bit
>”So, who is the pony?”
>”Mom, Dad, this is Roseluck. She is friend of mine from the city.”
>Your Dad only nods
>Your mother on the other hand walks forward and kneels down before Rose
>”We don’t get many ponies out here, there are very few that moved here. It’s nice to meet you Roseluck.”
>Your mother and Roseluck shake hands/hooves
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt3 Dakan 10/07/12/(Sun)13:27:07 UTC+9 No.4900428
Replies: >>4900438
 
>>4900410
>Around this time your sister comes in through the kitchen
>She looks a little surprised to see your parents home
“Mom! Dad! How was the trip to the store? I’ll be right back!”
>Your sister immediately runs upstairs
>Your mother shakes her head and your father sighs
>Both of your parents know about your sisters “habit”
>You really don’t know how, but she somehow got them to believe that she does it do deal with anxiety
>You hope that you can use that to your advantage when it comes time to tell you parents about you and rose
>But for now you are left standing in the living room with your parents and Rose
>Someone needs to break this silence
>You pat your stomach
>”How I didn’t realize how long of a day it’s been, whats for dinner mom?”
>You mother chuckles at this comment
“You haven’t been home for four years, and the minute I walk through the door you want something to eat, you haven’t changed Anon…”
>You shrug slightly
“Dinner will be ready in a bit”
“Actually do you mind if I bring your pony friend along with me?”
“I have never cooked for a pony before.”
>You wonder if it would be the best idea to leave them alone together, but Rose interrupts your thoughts.
“I would love to help you in the kitchen Mrs. Mous”
>You watch as Rose follows your mother into the kitchen
>Which leaves you…
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt3 Dakan 10/07/12/(Sun)13:27:42 UTC+9 No.4900438
Replies: >>4900456
 
>>4900428
>Alone, in the living room, with your father
>You turn to your Father and put on a bright smile
>”So, what do you want to hear about first? College or just life.”
>Your dad walks over to the big easy chair in the corner and sits down and starts watching T.V.
>He turns back to you
“Sit down Anon, and relax, your home now.”
>You give a nervous smile and take a seat on the sofa.
>While dinner is being made by your mother and Rose, you and your father catch up
>You tell him about college and how great it was to finally get a degree
>He asks the same question everyone asks about your plans now
>You ask him about how work down at the shop is
>He complains about how idiotic people can be with their cars
>Overall it is a good chat getting caught up with your father
>You are thankful that he doesn’t ask any questions about Roseluck
>You don’t know how you would answer them.
>Before long you start to smell the aroma of food come from the next room
>You sister comes bounding down the stairs soon after
>Exclaiming how hungry she is
>You chuckle to yourself as you, Katy, and your father all make their way into the kitchen
>The table is crowded with 5 people seated around it
>You glad that you and Rose are sitting next to each other
>Your mom brings big steaming pot of vegetable stew over.
>You also notice a plate of meat sitting on the table
>You look over at Rose and motion towards the meat
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt3 Dakan 10/07/12/(Sun)13:28:40 UTC+9 No.4900456
Replies: >>4900474
 
>>4900438
>She shrugs and shakes her head
>You mom takes her seat and then looks around the table
“Anon, please say grace.”
>You groan slightly, it’s been awhile since you have done this
>You bow your head and close your eyes
>Everyone follows suit including Rose
>”Dear Heavenly Father, we thank you for this meal that you have provided for us. I also thank you for helping bring my family and friends together so we can enjoy this meal with each other. In our saviors name we pray. Amen”
>Your mother smiles over at you
“That was great Anon.”
>Your mother then quickly changes the subject to Rose
“So tell me Rose, how did you and Anon meet?”
>Oh god…
“Well when I arrived here, I found myself in a dumpster, your son saved me.”
“Oh, my son is such the hero!”
>Ok, so far so good
“You two seem to be pretty good friends”
“We are, we are currently roommates”
>FUCK!
>You cough a bit on some stew going down the wrong pipe.
“Roommates? Anon, you never metioned that…”
>*cough,cough* “It didn’t seem like relevant information…”
“I see…”
>You mom stirs her food a bit more
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt3 Dakan 10/07/12/(Sun)13:29:30 UTC+9 No.4900474
Replies: >>4900482
 
>>4900456
“I don’t really know much about ponies, but from what I understand you all have special talents, whats yours?”
>Rose smiles, she loves telling people about her talent
“I grow and sell flowers, my favorites are Roses.”
>For some reason you notice your mothers eyes light up
“Oh! Maybe you can help me in the garden tomorrow! I have been having some trouble with some of my flowers.”
>Rose smiles politely
“I would love to help anyway I can.”
>This is going better than expected
>The rest of the dinner goes by with some minimal conversation
>You help your mother clean up the dishes and start getting ready for night
>You set up Roseluck on the couch before retiring to your own room
>Before you leave her you take a quick look around
>With no one in site you give her a hug and a kiss on the cheek
>You have a hard time getting to sleep that night
>About halfway throught the night you wake up from a nightmare covered in sweat
>You don’t remember it, but it causes you to get up and go check on rose
>As you open your bedroom door you discover that rose is standing outside of it
>She looks up at you with worried eyes
>you whisper quietly in the night
>”Bad dream”
>She nods
>You step aside and allow her into your bedroom
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt3 Dakan 10/07/12/(Sun)13:30:11 UTC+9 No.4900482
Replies: >>4900550
 
>>4900474
>It is the dead of night
>Everyone is asleep
>Everyone expect you and Rose
>You didn’t mean for it to happen
>But the smell of her, coupled with the warmth of her body pressed against you sends you into over drive
>It is hard to fight a force like that
>But it helps as you and Rose lie exhausted in each other’s arms
>You both slowly pass into the realm of dreams.
 
 
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 Dakan 10/07/12/(Sun)13:34:36 UTC+9 No.4900550
Replies: >>4903115 >>4904379
 
>>4900482
End of Part 3
 
For those of you that may be confused about what the reveal means, Ill break it down for you.
 
After Roseluck is competed the next set of stories I shall write shall be based apon the Slenderman Mythos. Or should I say the Slenderpony Mythos. it shall be told in a first pony percepective. It shall follow a pony who friend mysteriously disappears leaving behind nothing expect a series of notes. This pony shall try to uncover the myster behind his friends dissapearance. But as he goes deeper something evil shall start following...
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)15:47:57 UTC+9 No.4903115
 
>>4900550
bump for interest
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)15:49:35 UTC+9 No.4903142
 
Bump.
 
 
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 Anona 10/07/12/(Sun)17:19:14 UTC+9 No.4904379
Replies: >>4905949 >>4906795
 
 
File: 1349597954734.png-(119 KB, 463x463, mlfw6260-80072lyraartists(...).png)
 
 
>>4900550
ohhh a mystery-type stories..this is going to be interesting..
 
 
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 Anona 10/07/12/(Sun)19:27:39 UTC+9 No.4905949
 
>>4904379
and of course..the usual bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/07/12/(Sun)21:24:20 UTC+9 No.4906795
Replies: >>4907682
 
>>4904379
Think of it as a mystery/grimdark/horror
 
bumpdate gonna stay up late and work on the next part. Also if anyone pays attention to the OC threads, I made something for the slender story
 
 
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 Dakan 10/07/12/(Sun)21:25:03 UTC+9 No.4906801
 
Its so late, I forgot my own name...
 
 
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 Anona 10/07/12/(Sun)23:30:19 UTC+9 No.4907682
 
>>4906795
oohh..
that means it's gonna be much much more interesting! *insert maniacal laugh here*
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/08/12/(Mon)02:25:18 UTC+9 No.4909455
Replies: >>4912838
 
BUMP!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/08/12/(Mon)05:23:08 UTC+9 No.4912838
 
>>4909455
Re-bump.
 
 
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 Slashy 10/08/12/(Mon)05:29:08 UTC+9 No.4912962
Replies: >>4913797
 
(I don't get it, is this a RP thread or a create a story and add on to it thread?)
 
 
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 Spart 10/08/12/(Mon)06:04:41 UTC+9 No.4913797
 
>>4912962
no, you write a story and put it up here
like AiE
 
 
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 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)06:16:23 UTC+9 No.4914062
 
Hey all, I know that I said I was going to stay up late last night and write. But I found myself writing more with my forehead than with my hands. Writing this morning. Hope to have something soon
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt4:A Slow Boil Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)07:42:17 UTC+9 No.4915989
Replies: >>4916012
 
And its done!
 
>You wake up in the morning still slightly tired
>Rose is still fast asleep next to you
>You carefully get out of bed attempting not to wake her
>You succeed and make your way downstairs
>As you enter into the kitchen you sister is already up standing at the back door
>No big surprise, she’s holding a small glass pipe in her hands
>She takes another hit from the pipe and lets hit out coughing a little
>She turns to you and smiles
“Hey big bro, wanna hit; you know, for old time sakes?
>”If you think I am going to do that, you must be high.”
>”Oh wait, you are!”
>She chuckles a bit and takes another hit
>You start to make yourself a pot of coffee
“So how did you sleep last night, stallion?”
>You start to formulate an answer in your mind
>But something stops you
>Stallion…
>Huh, only Rose calls you that…
>But, how could she have heard it the last time Rose said that was…
>Last night, in your room
>Which happens to share a paper thin wall with your sister’s room
>…
>Well fuck…
>”What did you hear last night?”
>Your sister smiles mischievously
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt4 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)07:43:08 UTC+9 No.4916012
Replies: >>4916039
 
>>4915989
“Enough to know you were railing a pony last night”
>For some reason those words bring your emotions to a slow simmer
>”She has a name you know…”
>Your sister must have heard it in your voice because she backs off immediately
“Honestly, I had a hunch before last night though”
“You can’t ignore the way she looks at you, plus I got a call from your friend down at the dinner.”
“So, my brother, the horsefucker; I wonder what mom and dad will think.”
>”You can’t tell them! It’s the reason why I came home.”
>Your sister tilts her head to the side
“You came home to tell mom and dad that you’re a horsefucker?”
>”It’s a lot more complicated than that, and can you stop using that word!”
>A few seconds later you hear the distinct sound of hooves coming down the stairs
>Roseluck comes down the stair and enters into the kitchen
“Oh, good morning Anon and Katy, I was just using the bathroom.”
>”She knows about last night Rose, I was just about to tell her the rest.”
>Rose looks slightly embarrassed and avoids eye contact with your sister
>”Katy, me and Rose are engaged.”
>You sister stops and stares at you and Rose
>She starts to laugh hysterically
“Oh! I am going to want to be blazed for this!”
>”Thanks for the sympathies sis.”
>She smiles and puts the pipe away
>She walks over and does something unexpected
>She kneels down and hugs Rose
“Don’t worry, I accept this, sis.”
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt4 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)07:44:13 UTC+9 No.4916039
Replies: >>4916060
 
>>4916012
>Well that went better than expected
>One down two to go
>The rest of the morning goes relatively smoothly
>Breakfast is made and devoured
>Your mother and Roseluck disappear out into the garden
>Your dad asks you to come with him to the store to get a few things
>You agree and hop into your truck and drive into town
>While shopping the conversation quickly turns to Rose
“So, about that pony that you brought home.”
>”She does have a name dad.”
“Right Roseluck, you two seem close.”
>”She is a good friend of mine.”
“Yes, a good friend…”
“I just want to know if it goes further than that.”
>It’s ok, he knows nothing, just play dumb.
>”What do you mean?”
“I want to make sure that you are not one of them horsefuckers.”
>”It’s nothing like that dad, me and Roseluck are just good friends.”
“That good because you know what the Bible says about…”
>Your dad launches into a sermon about bestiality.
>Your brain turns off halfway through the sermon
>It’s going to take a miracle to convince him otherwise
>You sigh and continue your shopping though the store
>The rest of the shopping trip and the car ride home are eerily quiet
>You are thankful when you finally pull up to your childhood home
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt4 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)07:44:56 UTC+9 No.4916060
Replies: >>4916073
 
>>4916039
>You gather the groceries and head inside
>When you get inside you see you sister and Roseluck sitting on the couch
>”Hey Katy, what’s up?
 “Nothing just hangin out.”
>You look to Roseluck who has her head inside of a bag of potato chips
>That’s odd
>You bring the groceries into the kitchen and start putting them away
>”So, is mom still out in the garden”
“No, she went down to a neighbor’s house.”
>Wait…
>”How long ago…?
>You hear your sister giggle
“Oh about an hour ago.”
>Rose has been left alone with your sister for an hour
>Shit…
>You walk back into the living room
>Rose still has the bag of potato chips
>”Rose, are you ok?”
>You hear a muffled giggle and what sounds like a yes come from the bag
>You walk over and pull the bag off of her muzzle
>Rose looks up at you with a goofy smile on her face
“I’m fine sweetie how are you.”
>You turn to your sister who has the broadest smile on her face
>”Katy, what did you do?”
“Nothing…”
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt4 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)07:45:33 UTC+9 No.4916073
Replies: >>4916088 >>4921053
 
>>4916060
>You look back to Rose
>She spring forward and gives you a hug
“I’m so glad your back, I missed you.”
>”Rose, my dad is home, he could walk in at any minute…”
>You hear a cough behind you
>Fear runs through your veins
>You didn’t hear the door even open
>You turn to see your father standing in the door way
>He doesn’t look happy
>Not happy at all
“Son, looks like we have a lot to discuss.”
 
 
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 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)07:46:22 UTC+9 No.4916088
Replies: >>4916253
 
>>4916073
End of Part 4
Pastebin updated
 
More Roseluck later today
 
 
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 Spart 10/08/12/(Mon)07:53:33 UTC+9 No.4916253
 
>>4916088
yeah, as sad as it is, it's also damn funny, poor Roseluck
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/08/12/(Mon)08:25:02 UTC+9 No.4916914
Replies: >>4917738 >>4920901 >>4947361
 
>>4832564
Dovapony's Equestria in Anon is (I think) the only complete "Pony on Earth" story from AiE.
http://pastebin.com/u/Dovapony
Anon Moose's Cheerful Kindness is a new story, but it's being updated often.
http://pastebin.com/u/Anone_Moose
There was an Applejack story recently but I can't recall who wrote it.
All the other PiE stories are incomplete and unlikely to be completed.
 
 
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 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)09:10:47 UTC+9 No.4917738
Replies: >>4918737 >>4925543
 
>>4916914
Speak for yourself. I am nearing completion on Roseluck. And i have several more stories to tell. I'll be damned if I let PiE die.
 
 
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 Spart 10/08/12/(Mon)10:07:49 UTC+9 No.4918737
 
>>4917738
good to hear hehe
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/08/12/(Mon)11:55:04 UTC+9 No.4920901
Replies: >>4925543
 
>>4916914
They will be completed. I hope so.
PiE still being "young" but they eventually write more.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/08/12/(Mon)12:03:20 UTC+9 No.4921053
 
>>4916073
I saw this coming, but even so my blood ran cold when I read it. Poor Rose, poor anon
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/08/12/(Mon)13:00:16 UTC+9 No.4921978
Replies: >>4923069
 
Midnight bump
 
Next part's done, but I'm in no mood to format this late. I'll have it up sometime tomorrow, I promise.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/08/12/(Mon)14:02:09 UTC+9 No.4923069
 
>>4921978
Right on man, can't wait to read it
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt5:Boiling Point Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)14:06:50 UTC+9 No.4923142
Replies: >>4923166 >>4924149
 
It's that time again!
 
>You were able to calm your dad down enough to hold of the talk
>For now
>You take Rose up the stairs to your bedroom
>Your sister bounds along behind
>You close the door and flip on the T.V.
>You quickly find some cartoons to preoccupy their minds
>you start to think about how you are going to handle this
>There really is no way to handle this
>Either your parents accept it or they don’t
>You just need to state your case and leave it at that
>But they have their “doctrine” behind them
>While you can always have some argument against it
>You remember that most people won’t readily abandon their religious beliefs
>It doesn’t look good for you and Rose
>You look over at your sister and Rose
>They are laughing at the latest episode of Adventure Time
>You can’t exactly blame Rose for trying it
>She has always been curious about trying new things
>There is no way she could have known what would happen
>But your sister on the other hand…
>You sigh
>Can’t blame her either
>Sure she should have known better than to give pot to Rose
>But then again Rose probably questioned her about it…
>Your sister would have agreed to let her try some…
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt5 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)14:07:47 UTC+9 No.4923166
Replies: >>4923188 >>4924149
 
>>4923142
>Such a mess
>In a way you envy them
>You wish that you could just escape from this situation
>Just let your mind float and forget about the whole thing
>Let the problem fade away in the background
>And just rest in the bliss that is ignorance
>It would be easy…
>Your pretty sure that your sister has some still on her
>Just crack open the window
>Take a few hits
>And just fade away…
>But you can’t, someone had to face this
>And hopefully Rose will be sober when that time comes
>You begin to wonder what time you mom will get back
>As if on cue you hear the muffled sound of the front door opening
>The comes the muffled words of your mother and father
>Followed by of course by your father screaming obscenities
>”Horsefucker!”, “Deviant!”, “Pervert!”
>It isn’t the words that hurt you the most
>It’s what you can barely make out under the words
>Your mothers quiet sobbing
>It starts to break your heart
>It’s your fault…
>You hurt your mother and made her cry
>Why couldn’t you just be a normal human?
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt5 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)14:08:50 UTC+9 No.4923188
Replies: >>4923202 >>4924149
 
>>4923166
>Why did you have to fall for a pony?
>Why did they have to come here?
>The thoughts spin in your head
>Your vision start to cloud
>You find yourself unable to think straight
>Put your face into your hands
>You feel the heat buildup in your face
>The tears come slowly
>But they don’t stop
>Your breath shorten as you gasp for air
>You feel weak all over
>You feel alone
>Then something reaches out and touches you
>The distinct feeling of an arm around your shoulder
>It pulls you down until your laying down on someone’s stomach
>The warm fur against your face and the smell of roses confirms the owner
>You bury your face into your fiancés fur and let the tears flow
>All the while you feel the reassuring touch of her hoof on your back
>It gives you strength
>You can face this
>As long as it is with her
>You feel yourself calming down and your breathing slowing
>You get up and look into Rose’s eyes
>They are still blood shot
>But you can see that sobriety is returning to her gaze
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt5 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)14:09:27 UTC+9 No.4923202
Replies: >>4923216 >>4924149
 
>>4923188
“I’m sorry Anon, I shouldn’t have…”
>You pull her into your arms
>”It’s ok Rose, we were going to have to face this eventually”
>You give her a kiss on the head and then turn to your sister
“Aww isn’t this sweet…”
>”Katy, I should really be more pissed with you.”
“Hey bro she asked…”
>”I could have guessed… but now we have to deal with the consequences…”
>”And you are going to help.”
“Whoa! This isn’t my fight, it’s yours.”
>”You got my fiancé high; it’s your fight now.”
“Pfft, fine, but only because I like your pony. She’s cool.”
>”Are you ready Rose?”
>She nods
“I think so…”
>You all get up and exit your room
>So see your parents both seated on the couch
>The bible lays open on the table in front of them
>Your mother’s eyes are red and puffy from crying
>You find it hard to read your father’s expression
>You sit down opposite of them
>Rose sits down next to you
>Your sits seats herself of to the side in-between you and your parents
>Your dad opens with the first shot
“Anything you have to say for yourself, horsefucker?”
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt5 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)14:10:21 UTC+9 No.4923216
Replies: >>4923231 >>4924149
 
>>4923202
>You smile
>”That’s a pretty derogatory term for a Christian man to use.”
>That may not have been the best thing to say
>You dad’s face flushes red
“You know what we think about human-pony relationships…”
>”Yes and it’s close minded and old fashioned!”
>You dad picks up the Bible
“The Old Testament says…”
>”We both know that the Old Testament became invalid when the new Covenant was made.”
“That doesn’t matter! The Bible says that a proper relationship is between a man and a woman”
>”She is a woman, Dad!”
“Wrong! She is a Mare! Nothing but a filthy animal!”
>It appears it’s Roseluck turn
>She is up and fighting at these words
”Mr.Mous, I don’t know much about your religion, but I do know I am more than a filthy animal!”
“Stay out of this!”
“No! I love your son! We came here to tell you about our relationship and to invite you to our wedding.”
>Incoming shitstorm!
“WHAT?! YOU’RE MARRYING THIS THING?!”
>You slightly shrink away from your father’s outburst.
>”Yes dad, me and Roseluck are getting married.”
>It is around now that you notice one thing
>Your mother hasn’t said a word about this…
>”Mom, what do you have to say?”
>She stares blankly at you.
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt5 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)14:11:00 UTC+9 No.4923231
Replies: >>4923253 >>4924149
 
>>4923216
“Your fathers right Anon. The bible is clear what happens to horsefuckers.”
>You nod, even your mother…
>Rose speaks up
“Mrs. Mous, we had such a great time in the garden together. Could an animal help you like that?”
>Your mother’s eyes fill with tears
“Th-that was be-before…”
>Go with this…
>”Ponies do things that animal are incapable of. They talk, they use tools, and they feel emotions.”
>”They are capable of understanding other for their differences”
>”The only difference between Rose and a human is that Rose looks like a pony.”
>”There is no other difference.”
>Your mother is quietly sobbing now.
>Your father looks down at the floor avoiding eye contact with you
“Leave…”
>”What… dad wait…”
>”Leave my home this instant! You are nothing more than a dirty horsefucker! Take your mare, I never want to see either of you again!”
>Sadness washes over you…
>You look to your sister
>She sits there her mouth agape
>”Thanks for the help, can you at least drive us back to the train station.”
>She nods her head wordlessly
>You and Rose pack up your things
>And leave your parents behind…
 
 
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 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)14:12:05 UTC+9 No.4923253
Replies: >>4923279 >>4923619 >>4923962 >>4924169
 
 
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>>4923231
End of Part 5
 
I'm so sorry...
 
 
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 Esp !!ksgqP3bcb1b 10/08/12/(Mon)14:13:33 UTC+9 No.4923279
Replies: >>4923345
 
 
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>>4923253
 
Why did you do this to me? I want to curl up and die in a corner after reading this. Please make it better.
 
 
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 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)14:16:50 UTC+9 No.4923345
 
 
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>>4923279
Again I'm sorry, but I promise everything gets better...
 
with time...
 
 
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 Spart 10/08/12/(Mon)14:30:57 UTC+9 No.4923619
 
>>4923253
wow the first kind of sad story i like to read
heart breaking but not as mind breaking as others
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/08/12/(Mon)14:53:53 UTC+9 No.4923962
 
>>4923253
My feels. This part was really enjoyable man
 
 
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 Anona 10/08/12/(Mon)15:06:30 UTC+9 No.4924149
 
 
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>>4923142
>>4923166
>>4923188
>>4923202
>>4923216
>>4923231
 
oh my god..that makes me cried on the inside..
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/08/12/(Mon)15:08:05 UTC+9 No.4924169
 
>>4923253
Ouch, that hurts. I knew it would happen, but that didn't help much.
Looking forward to the next part.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/08/12/(Mon)16:48:11 UTC+9 No.4925543
 
>>4917738
>>4920901
I meant the Pony on Earth stories from AiE.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/08/12/(Mon)17:30:58 UTC+9 No.4925931
Replies: >>4925941
 
 
File: 1349685058137.png-(47 KB, 830x650, Final .png)
 
 
I know its not Roseluck, Think of it as a prologue to the Slenderpony series... Also introducing the protaganist! (pic related) Currently his name is Writer's Block. But I want your opinion on it.
 
>’I have to get away…’
>This thought plays over and over again in his mind
>’If I don’t nop0ny will ever know the truth
>He picks up his pace as his gallops through the forest
>The moonlight plays tricks with his mind
>Throwing long shadows off of each tree
>Any one of the shadows could be it
>’Can’t stop, I know it’s there…’
>His hooves dig into the soft earth beneath him
>The dark shadows hide many dangers in the forest
>One of them being the roots of trees
>The Pegasus trips over a root and crashes to the ground
>He curses his luck as he tries to pick himself up off of the ground
>How much easier it would be if he could fly
>The thought of his broken wing sends shivers down his spine
>This thing was smart
>He looks at the surrounding area
>There is nothing there
>’Maybe it gave up…’
>’No I know too much, it’s just playing games…’
>’Now’s my chance, maybe I can get a message out…’
>”Call Writer’s Block (placeholder).”
“Connecting…”
>The ear piece in his ear rings
>’Come on… pick up…’
 
 
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 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)17:31:47 UTC+9 No.4925941
Replies: >>4925953
 
>>4925931
“Hello?”
>”Writer! It’s me Specs!”
“Oh, hey whats up?
>”Quit the small talk, I found something big!”
“Really? What is it this time? Let me guess, Big Hooves?”
>”No, just listen…”
>The line fills with static
>’No, not now’
“Specs you there? I can barely hear you?”
>”I have no time! Go to my house, all of my notes are there!”
“What was that? What about your house?”
>”Go there everything is there!”
“Specs call me back when you get a better signal.”
>Click, the line goes silent
>It’s close
>All he can do is run
>He turns to flee
>He screams echo through the forest before abruptly cutting off
>The shadows melt away back into the forest
>Their secrets are safe
>For now…
 
 
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 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)17:32:44 UTC+9 No.4925953
Replies: >>4926986
 
>>4925941
And that it, just a short little something...
 
Forgot my name in the first post.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/08/12/(Mon)19:43:03 UTC+9 No.4926986
 
>>4925953
bump
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Four Seasons CriticalAssadamage 10/08/12/(Mon)21:07:09 UTC+9 No.4927465
Replies: >>4927478
 
"Nothing is right with the world anymore."
>You tell yourself this as you crawl out of bed at 7am on a Sunday morning
>All because you wouldn't say no
>At least the roaches still have the decency to scatter when you flip the switch as you stumble into the bathroom
>The silverfish, however, remain steadfast in the defense of their bathtub kingdom
>You're in no mood for their shit, so you just turn the water on let it run - it takes a long time to heat up to a decent temperature anyways
 
>Several minutes and the water is still ice cold
>Damn pilot light must be out... again
>Your apartment building is practically ancient, and maintenance stopped caring long ago
>At least the silverfish have retreated for the moment
>Small victories
 
>One ice cold shower later, and you're ready to face down the day before the sun has even risen
 
>You flip on the tv to the early morning news as you pull up the city map on your phone
>There's a Starbucks close to her place if she hasn't already picked a place out
>You dread having to wade through a sea of hipsters, but she'd probably feel more comfortable there than at a greasy corner diner
>The next order of business is to get her a stylus before she destroys that poor phone
>Maybe by then, you can jump ship before the situation gets any more complicated
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Four Seasons CriticalAssadamage 10/08/12/(Mon)21:08:34 UTC+9 No.4927478
Replies: >>4927485
 
>>4927465
>You wonder if ditching that baby shower was really worth it in the long run
>Sure, it would've sucked, but it would've been over in a few hours
>And your friends may be a bunch of nerve-grating assholes, but at least you can relate to them
>Now you're already knee deep into another relationship with someone you have literally nothing in common with, not even species
 
>But still, she said most of her friends were over on the other side
>She's practically all alone in a new world
>If you were in the same boat, you'd like to think at least someone would look out for you
>Stupid golden rule
>Maybe you should at least give her a chance
>She was pleasant enough to talk to yesterday, after all
 
"It's too early for this shit..." you mutter, drowning your conscience with a swig of bad coffee
>After a trip to pick up the morning paper that took much longer than it should have and spending half an hour looking for you keys, you can't put it off any longer
>You hold off continuing your argument with yourself on the train ride over
>It'll play out however it plays out
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Four Seasons CriticalAssadamage 10/08/12/(Mon)21:10:13 UTC+9 No.4927485
Replies: >>4927495
 
>>4927478
>As you approach Octavia's building, you notice she's already waiting for you by the steps, wearing a midnight blue dress that looks absolutely perfect on her
"You look nice."
>Octavia looks around for you. She was entranced by the traffic again.
"Oh, thank you." she says happily when she finally notices you. "I understand it's customary to wear clothes all the time here, but... am I doing something wrong? Everyone keeps looking at me."
>She's either baiting you, or her self-awareness is pitiful. Still, you're not touching this land mine.
"Maybe they're just not used to seeing ponies still. It's been a while, but I don't think the shock's quite worn off yet for either side."
"Hmmm." she nods to herself as she walks down the steps to you
 
>Crisis averted?
"So, is there anywhere in particular you wanted to go?"
"Actually... I was hoping you might know somewhere. I spent most of last evening going over the scores."
"There's a coffee shop not too far from here, if that's alright with you."
>She's already at your side
"That sounds perfect. But, could we walk if it isn't too far? I'm still not quite comfortable with those 'car' things."
 
>After a quick detour to pick up that desperately need stylus, and the two of you arrive to a relatively empty Starbucks
"Oh thank the princesses!" Octavia says, darting for the nearest empty booth. She climbs into the side and sits on her haunches
"I don't see how you can sit in those hard little chairs. Just the thought of it makes my back hurt."
>You share a laugh and go about eating breakfast
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Four Seasons CriticalAssadamage 10/08/12/(Mon)21:11:41 UTC+9 No.4927495
Replies: >>4927509
 
>>4927485
"So, how was your first night here?"
>That doesn't sound creepy at all.
"It was a bit disconcerting." she says, looking up at you from her food. "There were no stars out, and I couldn't see the moon anywhere. But the all the lights in the city at night... rarely have I seen something so beautiful."
"They were out, but those lights were why couldn't see them. Only way you'll see the stars in a city this big is if there's a blackout. Or if you go way out into the countryside."
"That's disappointing. The nights back home were always breathtaking."
 
>You go about eating before she perks up with another question
"Why does the sun rise at different times?
"That's not exactly easy to answer. The short and simple version is that the day length varies with which season it is. Is it not the same where you're from?"
"Not exactly. The royal sisters raise and set the sun and moon at the same time every day. The seasons are on a strict schedule as well. Equestrian society is very orderly."
>The thought of magic horses controlling the heavens makes your head hurt.
"But seems as if chaos is the rule here, rather than the exception."
 
"Ah, you're only seeing the surface of it, though. Just give it some time and you'll see there's an order to stuff here, too. It's not like we just go burn down the city whenever we feel like it."
>You've both finished eating by now, but neither of you make a move to leave
"There's a lot that we have no control over, though, and most of us have accepted it. As long as you deal with what you can control, the rest usually plays out alright, too."
>You heard that on Dr. Phil, but Octavia doesn't need to know that.
"I'll keep that in mind." she says, finally climbing out of the booth
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Four Seasons CriticalAssadamage 10/08/12/(Mon)21:13:18 UTC+9 No.4927509
Replies: >>4927517
 
>>4927495
>As you exit back onto the street, Octavia turns to you
"You know, I still don't know anything about you, other than your name."
"There's not really much to know."
>Wait a minute
>If you tell her about yourself, she'll see you're blue collar working class scum and therefore not worthy of her refined presence
>Then you'll never have to deal with her again and everything will back to normal
>Your logic is infallible
 
"You don't honestly expect me to drop the issue that easily, do you?"
"I plan to convince you to on the way. C'mon, I'll show you Central Park while we're out this way."
>She continues trying to pry out details about you on the way
>Once you arrive, however, she does drop the issue
"This reminds me of the royal gardens back in Canterlot. I could spend all day here!"
>She does seem more at ease here than out on the streets
 
"Now, are you going to tell me about yourself, or am I going to have to keep pestering you about it?"
"Fine, fine, you win." you say in mock exasperation. "I live over across the river in Brooklyn. Lived there all my life. As for a job, it's nothing fancy like yours, but I work at the harbor."
>Octavia looks quite pleased with herself for being able to coax even that tiny bit of information from you
"What is it like? I imagine it's quite difficult work without magic. Most shipping in Equestria is handled through skyships, but I've not seen anything like them here."
"It's not the easiest thing to do, but most of it's handled by cranes and other machinery. We have a few unicorns on staff and they're a huge help, but from what I understand, it's difficult for them to use magic here."
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Four Seasons CriticalAssadamage 10/08/12/(Mon)21:14:33 UTC+9 No.4927517
Replies: >>4927527
 
>>4927509
>The consequences of having constantly open portals to a place where magic was very much real were still being debated
>"Magical bleed-through" had replaced global warming as the hot-button issue of the day and there was seemingly no end to the theories it spawned
>Scientists and researchers on both sides had been fascinated by the issue as well, and the integration of science and magic had become their new holy grail
 
>Octavia continues her little back-and-forth with you for some time as you both wander aimlessly around the park
>What was meant to be a short trip ended up dragging on well into afternoon before either of you had realized it
"I had no idea it was this late already. I hate to do this, but I really have to get back. I wanted to go over the music a bit more before practice tomorrow."
"Do you remember how to get back from here?"
"I should be able to, yes. I've really enjoyed today, too. I... I'll talk to you again soon."
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Four Seasons CriticalAssadamage 10/08/12/(Mon)21:15:38 UTC+9 No.4927527
 
>>4927517
>After bidding her goodbye, you grab something to eat at one of the nicer cafes before heading back home yourself
>The train ride home is quiet, if nothing else.
>As you enter your apartment, you notice another message on your phone
>It's a much more legible text from Octavia letting you know she managed to make it back to her apartment without incident
 
>So that's the end of that. Right?
>Everything's back to the way it was before. Right?
>The world may not be the same anymore, but you're going to hold on to your little piece of normalcy
>You drop down into your favorite chair and flip on the tv, already starting to feel sleep tugging at your eyes from getting up so early this morning
"Top of the third and the Mets are down by seven!"
>At least some things never change
 
 
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 CriticalAssadamage 10/08/12/(Mon)21:18:03 UTC+9 No.4927555
Replies: >>4927569 >>4927606 >>4927631 >>4927664 >>4929259
 
 
File: 1349698683442.jpg-(15 KB, 250x249, lens5977382_1247962210mets.jpg)
 
 
Good End
At least until I get done moving this week.
 
Pastebin's been updated at - http://pastebin.com/u/CriticalAssdamage
 
 
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 Esp !!ksgqP3bcb1b 10/08/12/(Mon)21:20:17 UTC+9 No.4927569
 
>>4927555
Trips mean you have to continue this. I want to see a beautiful relationship blossom from this. It really is well written and I am enjoying it quite a bit. You do good work!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/08/12/(Mon)21:24:33 UTC+9 No.4927606
 
>>4927555
Keep up the good work man, I like where this is going
>>The silverfish, however, remain steadfast in the defense of their bathtub kingdom
Lost my shit here, I can relate so hard it hurts
 
 
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 Loscil 10/08/12/(Mon)21:27:52 UTC+9 No.4927631
 
>>4927555
Nice, I want to see more of this.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/08/12/(Mon)21:32:22 UTC+9 No.4927664
 
>>4927555
I like where this is going, looking forward to more.
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt6:Aftermath Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)21:32:24 UTC+9 No.4927665
Replies: >>4927673
 
Late night Roseluck? Why not...
 
>The drive back to the train station seems longer than usual
>Everyone in a the car is dead silent
>There are no words to say after all
>You parents just disowned you
>You were told that the person that you chose to love and cherish was immoral
>Even worse, she was compared to a filthy animal
>This trip couldn’t have gone worse
>There still a part of you that wants to leave this entire situation behind
>Just to forget about you family and live in ignorance
>But you can’t
>You know deep down that your father’s words are going to haunt you for a long time
>Horsefucker, filthy animal, it…
>You put your arm around Roseluck and pull her close
>She doesn’t show it right now, but you know she is hurting just as much as you are
>Even your stoner of a sister
>The one who usually has a smile on her face or a witty remark…
>Even she is dumbfounded by the whole situation
>The car ride drags on and on
>Eventually you reach the train station
>You visit the ticket counter and buy two tickets back to Chicago
>Your train is two hours out
>Plenty more time to sit and sulk
>You sit on a bench with Rose lying next to you
>Her head resting on your lap
>You absent mindedly run your fingers through her mane
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt6 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)21:33:28 UTC+9 No.4927673
Replies: >>4927677
 
>>4927665
>Your sister stands next to the bench leaning on a wall
>The time creeps steadily by
>It is as if the whole world has muted itself
>There is barely any sound of traffic or wind blowing
>Just you and your thoughts
>You never understood the phrase “Silence is deafening” until now
>Some needs to say something
>It is your sister who finally speaks
“Anon, I really am sorry about everything”
>You sigh and lean back
>”It isn’t your fault the discussion was going to happen anyways.”
“But I was the one who gave Rose pot and got her high. If I didn’t do that dad wouldn’t have seen…”
>You cut her off
>”All that did was change the presentation, it didn’t factor into the conversation at all.”
“But I should have done more to help…”
>”Drop it Katy…”
“But…”
>”I SAID DROP IT!”
>Wow, what’s wrong with you…
>You have never snapped like that at your sister.
>You hang your head
>”I’m sorry, It’s just…”
“I know, it’s everything…”
>The silence returns, but is quickly broken
“You know, It looked like you were getting somewhere with mom.”
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt6 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)21:34:18 UTC+9 No.4927677
Replies: >>4927687
 
>>4927673
>You shake your head
>”You heard what she said, she agrees with dad.”
“But, she hesitated about it.”
“Look, I’ll continue to work on mom, I think I can bring her around.”
“Maybe enough to at least get her to come to the wedding.”
>You don’t know if it will work, but at this point you don’t have much else
>”Thanks sis.”
“No problem, bro”
>You look down at Roseluck
>She looks so sad lying in your lap
>She looks back up at you
>The look in her eyes is the same look that she gave you the night at the college
>Utter sadness and despair
>Her eyes shimmer with tears that have yet to fall
“Anon, I’m so sorry, this is my fault…”
>No anything but that
>”This is nowhere near your fault Rose.”
“But I…
>”You did nothing wrong…”
>Rose pushes herself off of you
“No Anon you will listen to me.”
“I did this! This is my fault!”
>Tears start to streak down her face, but there’s something else…
“I convinced you it would be a good idea to talk to your parents.”
>Is she loosing color?
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt6 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)21:35:11 UTC+9 No.4927687
Replies: >>4927697
 
>>4927677
>No the sky is darkening, it looks like rain…
“I didn’t listen to you when you told me about your parents.”
>No you’re sure of it now, she is greyer.
“I caused you to bring me her and caused your parents to disown you!”
“Maybe your parents were right, I’m no better than the filthy animals!”
>This brings you to your feet, rage starts to course through your veins.
>”No! I don’t accept that!”
“How can you not! It’s all there out in the open!”
>”Because it’s not true! You are different! Fuck my parents! I have you!”
“Wrong Anon! You are better off without me! You don’t need me! I just cause more trouble!”
>She start to turn and walk away
>No, you are not losing her
>You run forward and throw your arms around her
“Let me go Anon!”
>”I’m not letting you go Rose, you are too important to me!”
>It begins to rain
>She fights back against your embrace
>But as she fight you just hold her tighter
“I’m nothing to you! This whole this was a mistake!”
>”You don’t believe that Rose! This isn’t you!”
>The rain falls harder
>”Rose think back to our first real date, at the college.”
“The one where you broke my heart on the dance floor?”
>The rain continues to grow in strength
>Ok not where you were going with that…
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch5 Pt6 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)21:35:48 UTC+9 No.4927697
Replies: >>4927705
 
>>4927687
>”Yes, there was that. But after words, what happened?”
>You feel her relax a bit in your arms
“You came after me, and told me you didn’t care what anybody else thought. That you wanted to be happy with me.”
>”That’s right, nothing has changed Rose. We are going to get married. And we are going to be happy.”
>She fully relaxes in your arms; her color starts to come back to her coat.
“Anon, I’m sorry, I don’t know what came over me, I was just so angry at your parents…”
>”Shhh it’s ok Rose, a lot has gone on today…”
>The rain has soaked you both
>You lean in a begin to kiss Rose
>She leans into you kissing back
>You sister stands there with her arms crossed watch the spectacle
“You know guys, I’m all for Notebooky fight and make up scenes in the rain. It’s all very romantic and what not. But can we move the fuck inside! I’m getting soaked!”
>And there’s the wit…
>You and Roseluck begin to laugh as you head inside the station
>The rest of the time practically flies by
>The train arrives and you bid goodbye to you sister
>She gives Rose a big hug before you depart and promises to be at the wedding when it happens
>The train begins to depart the station
>Rose looks at you with still some concern
“Are you sure it will all be alright Anon…
>”I know it will; everything gets better…”
>”With Time…”
 
 
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 Dakan 10/08/12/(Mon)21:36:40 UTC+9 No.4927705
Replies: >>4927714 >>4929326 >>4932176
 
>>4927697
End of Part 6
End of Chapter 5
 
Some more tommorow, bedtime for me...
 
 
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 Esp !!ksgqP3bcb1b 10/08/12/(Mon)21:38:15 UTC+9 No.4927714
 
 
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>>4927705
Bravo. So ponies can get discorded without him around, eh? I feel a bit better now about all this and hope things look up for Anon and Rose. Sleep well.
 
 
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 Anona 10/08/12/(Mon)23:59:35 UTC+9 No.4928713
 
bump time!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)00:55:39 UTC+9 No.4929259
 
>>4927555
Moar pls
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)01:01:15 UTC+9 No.4929326
 
 
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>>4927705
 
Dakan, you glorious son of a bitch, take all my money and allow me to orally pleasure you.
>these feels
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)03:57:44 UTC+9 No.4931578
 
Bump for stories
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)04:42:45 UTC+9 No.4932176
 
>>4927705
bump
 
 
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 Dakan 10/09/12/(Tue)07:02:37 UTC+9 No.4934798
Replies: >>4935073 >>4935106 >>4935656
 
Goodmorning Bump!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)07:19:33 UTC+9 No.4935073
 
 
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>>4934798
 
Good morning Dakan!
 
 
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 Esp !!ksgqP3bcb1b 10/09/12/(Tue)07:21:44 UTC+9 No.4935106
 
 
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>>4934798
Can't wait to see what is in store for the couple now.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)07:57:26 UTC+9 No.4935656
 
>>4934798
>tfw I was the Anon that told Dakan to delete the "moan" from the first chapter.
>tfw I though he would be a hopeless scrub since he can't pace for shit.
>tfw he is actually one of the three reasons I lurk this thread constantly. the other two are Mr. blue and CriticalAssDamage, too bad that pervert PC story veered off-course
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch6:All Good Things Pt1:Looking Back Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)08:52:06 UTC+9 No.4936608
Replies: >>4936625
 
>Come on, just calm down
>How can you just be calm?
>Especially in a situation like this
>You pace the room back and forth
>Your chest feels tight and your breathing is short
>Anon, you need to calm down; it isn’t that big of a deal!
>Wrong this is huge; this is the biggest thing you’ll ever deal with.
>Maybe if you sit down
>As you take a seat in the chair, you realize it is a big mistake
>Now that you’re less focused on walking; you are now more focused on today
>You grow weak and sick to your stomach
>You head ache returns and start to pound inside your brain
>You immediately stand up again and start pacing
>You look down at the note cards in your hands
>Why does your writing looks so small now?
>Your hands begin to shake
>The cards fall one by one to the ground
>You are not prepared for this
>Your body is not ready…
>Your mouth runs dry
>Oh god
>You rush over to a trash can in the corner
>You retch violently into it
>The smell of strong alcohol mixed with bile causing you to just hurl more
>You finish emptying your stomach and quickly search the room for something to clean yourself up.
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch6 Pt1 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)08:53:01 UTC+9 No.4936625
Replies: >>4936642
 
>>4936608
>you slowly wipe the mess from your face
>Think about something else
>Anything
>Fine let’s review…
>In a magical event felt across the world; ponies arrived on Earth…
>This event was met with surprise and confusion
>But overall most people adjusted quickly to the new visitors
>That same night, you would save one of the ponies from a dumpster
>Roseluck…
>You would take her home and give her a place to stay
>As the days marched on you slowly taught her about humanity
>And in return she taught you about Equestria
>You both became friends
>At the time you didn’t think anything of your friendship
>But something grew between you
>These feelings would eventually come to a head
>One night at a dance
>She expressed her feelings and you pushed her away
>She ran from you and you quickly gave chase
>It was in this moment that you came to terms with your own feelings for this pony
>You were able to see past all the difference and found love
>That same night she told you about the truth
>Her world destroyed, her people displaced, alone in this world
>But no longer
>That night…
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch6 Pt1 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)08:53:58 UTC+9 No.4936642
Replies: >>4936655
 
>>4936625
>You stop for a moment to dwell on that time
>Reliving every kiss, every touch, every sound
>Save it for later…
>Where were you
>A few months later would come the next most important day
>It was hearts and hooves day for the ponies
>Valentine’s Day for humans
>The day you gave Rose a garden
>And asked for only one thing in return
>Her hoof in marriage
>She agreed making you the happiest man in the world
>But this event would make for its own complications
>The day came when you and Rose agreed to tell your parents about your engagement
>Through a series of hilarious and unfortunate event
>The situation came to a boil
>Your father would disown you as a son
>Your sister became good friends with Rose
>Your mother became a wild card that your sister insisted she could convince to accept us
>Later that same day you came close to losing Rose
>But you quickly reminded her of your love and promised her things would get better
>Time has passed
>Which leads to today
>Today
>…
>You feel yourself grow weak again
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch6 Pt1 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)08:54:42 UTC+9 No.4936655
Replies: >>4936666 >>4936720
 
>>4936642
>Well that didn’t help at all
>Just as you are thinking about making a break for it a knock comes at the door
>You answer it
>Rob stands on the other side of the door way
>Smiling from ear to ear
>The tux he wears matches your own
>A rose sits in his lapel
>Seeing you, his smile fades from his face
“Dude, you look like shit.”
>”Thanks for the obvious, something wrong?”
“Well it is almost show time; I came to check up on the big star!”
“From the looks of things I am glad I did.”
>He enters into the room
>He looks at the trash can on the floor
“No surprise there, you did have a lot to drink last night…”
>”I can’t do this.”
“What? Nonsense! You’ll be fine!”
>”No, I’m serious, I can’t do this.”
>Rob sighs and shakes his head
“I know all about pregame jitter man, but you need to get over that and just remind yourself of the important things.”
>”Help me…”
“There is a beautiful pony on there who is expecting you to perform. She is just as nervous as you are.”
“I’d actually be willing to bet more so judging from the way that Daisy, Lilly and Lyra are running around.”
>This brings a slight smile to your face
 
 
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 >Well that didn’t help at all Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)08:55:22 UTC+9 No.4936666
Replies: >>4936720 >>4957006
 
>>4936655
“There we go, you’re feeling better already.”
>He walks over and fills a paper cup with water and hands it to you
“Drink this, man up, and let’s get this show on the road.”
>Your hands still shake as you take the glass and drink it
>You knees feel weak as you stand up and follow Rob out of the room
>Why are you so nervous?
>It’s only your wedding day…
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)08:57:54 UTC+9 No.4936720
Replies: >>4936743
 
 
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>>4936666
End of Part 1
 
btw
>>4936655
>>4936666
Double dub and quads?
 
 
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 Dakan 10/09/12/(Tue)08:59:20 UTC+9 No.4936743
Replies: >>4936772 >>4937409
 
>>4936720
What happened to my name... I don't even...
 
 
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 Esp !!ksgqP3bcb1b 10/09/12/(Tue)09:01:26 UTC+9 No.4936772
 
 
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>>4936743
Bravo
 
 
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 Spart 10/09/12/(Tue)09:33:20 UTC+9 No.4937409
Replies: >>4937478
 
>>4936743
what its not yours ?
 
 
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 Dakan 10/09/12/(Tue)09:36:54 UTC+9 No.4937478
 
>>4937409
No it's mine, I just thought I was posting under it. Not as anonymous...
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Refrain CriticalAssdamage 10/09/12/(Tue)10:26:33 UTC+9 No.4938622
Replies: >>4938659
 
"How could I let the time get away from me like that?" You scold yourself as you enter your apartment. Dresses litter the floor from your quest to find one that actually looked presentable this morning.
>You felt bad enough leaving your friend alone in the park like that, especially after he had taken the time to meet you this morning after you had asked
>But going into practice on Monday morning having no clue as to the music you're performing simply would not do. You had a reputation to live up to, after all.
>He'll understand, won't he?
>You'll find some way to make it up to him later.
 
>You take out your beloved cello and after warming up with a few old favorites, you select a piece at random from the ones you'd be performing
>It's a duet with a... saw?
>You had heard humans were adaptable in the extreme, but this is altogether unexpected.
>Still, this is one of the reasons you had decided to come over - to get out of the complacency you had found yourself and find something new and challenging, something worthy of your skill
 
>Taking a deep breath, you draw your bow and begin to play http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Vh2fr4d3UU
>It's a light, happy tune that stands in stark contrast to the somber pieces you're so used to playing
>For the first time in a long while, you actually enjoy what you're playing.
>At least, you do until your phone rings.
>You drop your bow and rush over to it, only to feel an odd tinge of disappointment when you don't recognize the number.
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Refrain CriticalAssdamage 10/09/12/(Tue)10:27:44 UTC+9 No.4938659
Replies: >>4938680
 
>>4938622
>You tap accept with that wonderful little pen your friend got you and say hello.
"Tavi! It's about time you came over. Now we're all back together!" a familiar, overly cheerful voice rings out.
"Lyra? Is it really you? I saw your name on the roster, but I wasn't sure it was actually you. And how did you get this number?"
"Of course it's me! Do you really think there could be more than one of me!?"
"I certainly hope not..."
>One of her is trouble enough - you dread to think what multiples of her would do
"And the conductor said he would give it to me if I would leave him alone."
>It seems all her time over here hasn't changed Lyra in the slightest.
>Lyra was one of the very first to cross over into the human world, as well as a very vocal supporter for establishing formal diplomatic and economic relations.
>And she had countless failed attempts at certain other relations as well.
 
"Wait, what do you mean 'all of us are back together'?"
"Do you keep up with anything Tavi? Vinyl came over not long after I did. She owns a club downtown"
>That little question said in jest hits a nerve.
>It really is embarrassing how out of touch you are with your friends - old and new.
"We should go see her some time. I'm sure she'd love you see you again!"
 
>It's rare when you're presented with a second chance like this.
>Your old friends are all back together and your new friend is only a few taps of that pen thing away.
>You're not going to let everything drift apart again.
"You know, I'd like that a lot. Do you think you could get another ticket for me, though? I have someone I'd like to introduce to her."
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Refrain CriticalAssdamage 10/09/12/(Tue)10:28:36 UTC+9 No.4938680
Replies: >>4947412 >>4970138
 
>>4938659
>A squeal from the other end of the line assaults your ears. You can practically hear Lyra jumping up and down, too.
"Youhaveahumanfriend? Already? CanImeethim? CanIcanIcanI? PleasecanI?
>She must really like meeting new people.
"Of course. I'm sure he'd like to meet you, too. He's very nice. He helped me move in yesterday and showed me around the city a bit."
"You had a human alone in your apartment? Just the two of you? You know, I uh... have to go do... things. I'll see you at practice tomorrow Tavi!"
>It's probably best not to think about it.
 
>Speaking of him, you should probably let him know you made it back okay.
>You tap out a quick message and send it off much easier than pounding at the keys with your hooves like yesterday.
>Looking at that little pen only seems to reinforce that it's the little things that make all the difference.
 
>Your practice continues uninterrupted into the evening.
>Deciding it's time for a break, you spread out on the couch and turn on the tv to the evening news
>It may not be the best way to keep up with things, but it's a start
"And in sports news, the Mets managed to pull off a huge upset in this afternoon's game..."
>Change is good.
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/09/12/(Tue)10:29:48 UTC+9 No.4938714
Replies: >>4940226 >>4941054 >>4944280
 
 
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I'm tired of packing already, so you guys get a bonus scene.
 
 
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 Spart 10/09/12/(Tue)11:35:41 UTC+9 No.4940226
 
>>4938714
thank you sir, i like where this is going, so i hope you manage to move fast to your new place!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)12:10:31 UTC+9 No.4941054
 
>>4938714
Coolness, keep the nice work.
 
 
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 Anona 10/09/12/(Tue)14:36:10 UTC+9 No.4944280
 
>>4938714
woah..thanks for the new chapter!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)17:04:05 UTC+9 No.4946249
 
Bump!
 
 
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 Dakan 10/09/12/(Tue)19:13:15 UTC+9 No.4947306
 
Bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)19:24:14 UTC+9 No.4947361
 
>>4916914
I just remembered who wrote the AJ story
http://pastebin.com/u/Hobbypony
 
 
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 Esp !!ksgqP3bcb1b 10/09/12/(Tue)19:31:55 UTC+9 No.4947412
 
>>4938680
Much enjoyable seeing it from a different point of view!
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/09/12/(Tue)21:33:04 UTC+9 No.4948317
Replies: >>4948398
 
 
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Morning bump while I put off doing what I should be doing.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)21:44:48 UTC+9 No.4948398
 
>>4948317
hurrah for procrastination
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/09/12/(Tue)23:28:31 UTC+9 No.4949224
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/10/12/(Wed)00:04:22 UTC+9 No.4949485
Replies: >>4949511 >>5021739
 
 
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>>4890284
"Excuse me, but do you sell cold medicine here?"
> I jump a bit in surprise. Didn't hear her come inside.
> In fact, I don't think I've seen this girl before.
> She has neat, straight hair with a pinkish purple highlight.
> "Yes, we do. You can find them over in that aisle."
"That's great!" she says with a smile. "Oh, and do you also carry, umm..."
> The girl pulls out a long list from her bag and checks it.
> Looking closer, she's actually pretty cute.
"Analgesics, Antipyretics, Decongestants..."
> She goes on for a few minutes more before looking up at me.
> I raise an eyebrow. Is this some kind of joke? I'm no pharmacist.
> But the girl just smiles patiently as she waits for my response.
> Well, those do all sound like types of cold medicine.
> "I think you'll find those in the same aisle."
"Thank you so much!" she says happily.
> The girl heads off to find her medicine.
> I return to where I left off in my reading.
> Something about unicorn ponies, I think. Where was I?
"Just a little bit, closer. And... got it!"
> Suddenly, I hear a loud creak. I look up at the cold medicine aisle.
> The shelf starts to tip over toward the wall.
> "Aww, hell..."
"THUD!"
> Really? Did that just happen? Really!?
> I curse under my breath as I run toward the aisle.
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/10/12/(Wed)00:08:32 UTC+9 No.4949511
Replies: >>4949752 >>5021739
 
>>4949485
"I am so sorry!" says the girl.
> I stare blankly, still unable to understand.
"I-I just wanted to grab a bottle from the topmost shelf,"
> This doesn't look right. This can't be right.
"So I climbed up on it a bit and the whole thing just feel over!"
> The girl continues talking, but the rest doesn't register in my head.
> She is standing in front of me, apologizing.
> Beside her are all of the bottles of cold medicine.
> They are stacked neatly, sorted by brand and type.
"I know that it isn't enough, but I'd like to help put these back on the shelf."
> I look at the shelf, then at the stacks of bottles beside her.
> Not a single bottle looks damaged. Not even a scratch.
"B-but I don't know how they are organized, so I'm not sure how to-"
> I raise my hand to interrupt her.
> "How did you do that?" I ask carefully.
"Huh? Do what?"
> "How did you catch all of those bottles by yourself?"
"Oh, that's easy! I just used a little magi-"
> Suddenly, she pauses.
"Err, I used a little imaginative movement and my natural human agility!"
> I stare at her disbelievingly. She just gives me a nervous smile.
"Yep, that's it! I just move really fast, you know?"
> The girl tries to do a little running motion, but she clumsily trips on her feet.
> I sigh to myself and push the shelf back in place.
> Maybe I really am starting to lose my mind...
 
 
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 Esp !!ksgqP3bcb1b 10/10/12/(Wed)00:28:25 UTC+9 No.4949659
 
beeemp
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/10/12/(Wed)00:41:06 UTC+9 No.4949752
Replies: >>4949759 >>5021739 >>5084397
 
>>4949511
> Still can't figure out how that girl did it.
> Some sort of magic trick? An illusion, maybe?
> I pull out the black notebook from my pocket and glance at it.
"Levitation is among the most common spells used by unicorn ponies."
> My eyes widen. I quickly glance around the store.
> However, the girl is nowhere in sight. Well, of course she's gone.
> She just paid for her medicine a few minutes ago.
> I shake my head. This is bad. Am I turning into one of those crazies?
> If I'm not careful, I might become one of those pony-hunter nutjobs on the net.
> The park is nearby, and I need to clear my head.
> I close up the shop for now. Then, I pull out the notebook again.
> After some thought, I skip to the next page to relax.
"The third type is the 'pegasus pony'."
"Pegasi are born with wings for flight,"
"And they have the ability to manipulate the weather."
> Manipulate the weather, eh? That sounds mighty handy.
> I turn to the next page.
"In Equestria, a number of pegasi are charged with managing the weather."
"They move clouds to towns and villages that need rainfall,"
"While maintaining a strict system of scheduled weather events."
> And come to think of it, we've been having pretty good weather lately.
> Maybe there are pegasi right here in the city?
> "Yeah, right." I mutter.
 
 
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 Pancakes 10/10/12/(Wed)00:41:46 UTC+9 No.4949759
Replies: >>4949899
 
>>4949752
Just a short update for today. Busy week.
 
 
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 Spart 10/10/12/(Wed)00:56:13 UTC+9 No.4949899
Replies: >>4951139
 
>>4949759
thanks Pancakes!
 
>"Err, I used a little imaginative movement and my natural human agility!"
all my lols
 
 
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 Spart 10/10/12/(Wed)02:53:07 UTC+9 No.4951139
Replies: >>4952274
 
>>4949899
bump up the jam
 
 
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 Spart 10/10/12/(Wed)04:31:16 UTC+9 No.4952274
 
>>4951139
noon bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/10/12/(Wed)06:33:28 UTC+9 No.4954263
Replies: >>4956882
 
Bump.
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/10/12/(Wed)07:04:59 UTC+9 No.4954749
 
 
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>mfw I'm already done packing and don't move until Saturday
 
Guess it's time to start making shit up for the next part!
 
 
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 Spart 10/10/12/(Wed)09:01:42 UTC+9 No.4956882
 
>>4954263
bumpa
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/10/12/(Wed)09:07:40 UTC+9 No.4957006
 
>>4936666
Most enjoyable, good sir. Looking forward to the next part.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/10/12/(Wed)12:01:31 UTC+9 No.4960039
Replies: >>4965908
 
bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/10/12/(Wed)14:50:39 UTC+9 No.4963316
 
Bump.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/10/12/(Wed)17:12:36 UTC+9 No.4965908
 
>>4960039
Bump before bed, 'night bitches
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/10/12/(Wed)18:33:27 UTC+9 No.4966992
 
>>4965784
Anon Moose's Cheerful Kindness just updated
 
 
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 Anona 10/10/12/(Wed)20:54:29 UTC+9 No.4968500
 
bump!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/10/12/(Wed)23:53:55 UTC+9 No.4970138
Replies: >>4970188
 
>>4938680
You got a pastebin?
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/10/12/(Wed)23:59:03 UTC+9 No.4970188
Replies: >>4972727
 
>>4970138
See
>>4841458
 
 
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 Spart 10/11/12/(Thu)02:29:35 UTC+9 No.4972727
Replies: >>4975845
 
>>4970188
bump
 
 
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 Spart 10/11/12/(Thu)05:12:51 UTC+9 No.4975845
 
>>4972727
bump again
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/11/12/(Thu)06:23:19 UTC+9 No.4977631
Replies: >>4978287 >>4978353 >>4980885
 
 
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Parking/lurking for a little bit while I work on the next part.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)06:48:46 UTC+9 No.4978287
Replies: >>4978433
 
>>4977631
Parking? Sage for off-topic.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)06:51:38 UTC+9 No.4978353
Replies: >>4980149
 
>>4977631
Parking is a AiE tradition. Don't feel so well about it being applied here.
 
 
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 Spart 10/11/12/(Thu)06:54:22 UTC+9 No.4978433
Replies: >>4985846
 
>>4978287
can someone enlight me ? what is this parking stuff ?
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)07:51:50 UTC+9 No.4980149
Replies: >>4985846
 
>>4978353
I'm all for it if it means well can get our thread to be half as active as theirs.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)08:14:43 UTC+9 No.4980885
 
>>4977631
that's the most intense drug deal I've ever seen
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)10:52:16 UTC+9 No.4985578
 
Bump.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)10:53:15 UTC+9 No.4985613
 
Probably needs a bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)10:59:53 UTC+9 No.4985846
Replies: >>4986041 >>4986433
 
>>4978433
I believe a really well known AiE writer known as Shermanator coined the phrase because every thread he was posting in he would "park" with a gif or picture of a Sherman tank and the joke was "Oh, Sherm can never find a place to park that thing!" The rest of AiE writers decided to use it for WHATEVER reason. Maybe they're just unoriginal when it comes to that kind of thing.
 
>>4980149
Yes but that's not actually activity and I'd prefer we not use it
 
 
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 Spart 10/11/12/(Thu)11:05:13 UTC+9 No.4986041
 
>>4985846
i've seen this guy on /k/ ....
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)11:15:37 UTC+9 No.4986433
Replies: >>4988035
 
>>4985846
Nowadays they seem to use it to "let lurkers/readers know they're in the thread" in case someone needs to ask them a question or something.
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/11/12/(Thu)11:55:37 UTC+9 No.4988035
 
>>4986433
That was my intention. I won't do it anymore if you guys don't want it here.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)12:46:41 UTC+9 No.4990148
 
Bump.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)12:49:06 UTC+9 No.4990251
Replies: >>4990384
 
What is the difference between PIE and AIE?
 
 
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 LeStrange 10/11/12/(Thu)12:51:41 UTC+9 No.4990384
 
>>4990251
Ponies in Earth
Anon in Equestria
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)14:30:06 UTC+9 No.4994154
Replies: >>4995765
 
bump
 
 
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 Spart 10/11/12/(Thu)15:17:16 UTC+9 No.4995765
Replies: >>4997293 >>4997408
 
>>4994154
maybe you guys can help me: why is /mlp/ so obsessed with the posting number ? did i have to lurk more on other boards ?
 
 
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 Anona 10/11/12/(Thu)16:02:59 UTC+9 No.4997293
 
>>4995765
all of /mlp is trying to reach the 5 million post..that's what i saw..and it's gonna be soon!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)16:06:34 UTC+9 No.4997408
Replies: >>4998293
 
>>4995765
They'd be interested in it regardless, but the fact that it could coincide with the shows anniversary really made the board want the 5M get to occur today.
In order to accomplish this, /mlp/'s post rate has almost tripled for today. We even invited other boards over to help accelerate our post rate. Looks like we'll get to 5M before the last time zone hits midnight.
This get is a special case, normally it's not nearly as much of an event here.
 
 
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 Spart 10/11/12/(Thu)16:39:11 UTC+9 No.4998293
 
>>4997408
some story post would be nice then haha
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)17:22:03 UTC+9 No.4999757
 
Bump.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)21:22:29 UTC+9 No.5002304
 
bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/11/12/(Thu)23:42:18 UTC+9 No.5003101
Replies: >>5004412
 
Off to work, if you gentlemen will excuse me
 
Also, bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/12/12/(Fri)02:02:06 UTC+9 No.5004412
 
>>5003101
Bump!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/12/12/(Fri)06:06:38 UTC+9 No.5007599
 
Bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/12/12/(Fri)07:59:37 UTC+9 No.5009522
Replies: >>5011929
 
bump
 
 
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 Spart 10/12/12/(Fri)09:55:15 UTC+9 No.5011929
Replies: >>5012903
 
>>5009522
bump
 
 
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 time and again. LeStrange 10/12/12/(Fri)10:40:38 UTC+9 No.5012903
Replies: >>5013004
 
>>5011929
It's always kinda sad when I see a page full of bumps 'stead of stories.. I suppose it's no one's fault really. People are busy, but still. I just wished we had more writefags sometimes 'stead of a depressing wall of bumps.
I was never really on /mlp/ I just hung around /f/ and /mu/ and sometimes /r9k/. When I came here I saw this thread and it caught my interest for some reason. I also remember the times I skipped out on my sleep just to read and wait for the next part of "the story". I don't regret a thing coming here and making /mlp/ my home. I just hope this thread doesn't die out and people forget it in the future. Pancakes and Dakan and other writefags..thanks for keeping the days interesting for the months that passed by (kinda sounds like a goodbye in my head..heh) and I hope this continues on.
BUMP! XD
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/12/12/(Fri)10:46:51 UTC+9 No.5013004
 
>>5012903
Writefags will come in time as they get inspired by the thread's concept. It'll just take some time. I agree though, I really hope this doesn't die out. These stories are awesome.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/12/12/(Fri)13:46:20 UTC+9 No.5016671
Replies: >>5019309
 
Bump.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/12/12/(Fri)16:38:05 UTC+9 No.5019309
 
>>5016671
Bump!
 
 
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 Dakan 10/12/12/(Fri)18:38:49 UTC+9 No.5020419
 
Bumpdate, Hey everybody, next update will come later tonight. Having a bit of a time writing it however. trying a different percepective.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/12/12/(Fri)18:45:09 UTC+9 No.5020466
Replies: >>5020805
 
STORY TIME!
I lied, bump time.
I'm starting to think we should merge with AiE....
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/12/12/(Fri)19:40:05 UTC+9 No.5020805
Replies: >>5025650
 
>>5020466
They won't let us
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Impossible Duet CriticalAssdamage 10/12/12/(Fri)19:53:17 UTC+9 No.5020924
Replies: >>5020939
 
>The shift change bell rings out through the cramped office space overlooking the dockyard
>You're nowhere close to being done, though
"Is there anything I can help with?" the unicorn asks as she props herself up on your cluttered desk
"It's okay, Dewey. It's just a few manifests. You can go on home."
"Are you sure? I could drop them off on my way out, if you want. Might save you a little time."
"It's fine. I'm still not done checking them yet, plus I've got to do turnover with third shift."
"Oh... okay. Well, I'll see you tomorrow, then." She's looking back at you from the doorway.
"Yeah."
 
>You know Morning Dew just wanted to help you, but you don't have the time to hoof hold her through checking manifests.
>Especially not when DHS is frothing at the mouth to start tearing your last ship apart.
>One little incident with parasprites last year, and they went ape-shit. Now any ship carrying Equestrian goods is basically impounded until they're sure it's clean.
>There have been more and more of them showing up recently, too.
>The only group that seems to oppose trade is the nation's few remaining farmers who see their produce threatened by a vastly superior product.
>Tariffs have done little to curtail demand, however, and the farmers have little chance of being heard over all the coins clinking in the coffer.
 
>Nearly two hours later and you're finally on the way home when your phone rings.
"Where the hell are you at, man?"
>You were supposed to meet Rich to watch the game until work got in the way.
>Like it always does.
"I got caught up at work. Had Dewey under foot all day and I couldn't get everything done and train her at the same time."
"Well hurry up and get over here. You haven't missed anything yet, but it's starting to get good."
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Impossible Duet CriticalAssdamage 10/12/12/(Fri)19:54:44 UTC+9 No.5020939
Replies: >>5020949
 
>>5020924
>Rich and Mallory's apartment reminds you of a hospital. It's so white and clean to the point of looking sterile.
>At least Octavia's place looked like people actually lived there.
>You don't bother knocking and as you enter, you're greeted by Rich yelling at the tv.
"How the hell could he miss that! It was right to him!"
"If you yell louder, they just might hear you."
"Oh! Hey, man. They just tied up a few minutes ago. Looks like we're in for extra innings the way it's going.
 
"Where's Mallory at? I don't see her slime trail anywhere." you yell from the kitchen as you pour yourself some coffee
>Rich always makes the best coffee - tastes like piss and goes down like gravel.
"She had to go out of town on a consult. That's why she was so insistent on having that shower Saturday. She was gone before I even got up yesterday."
"So you had the place all to yourself and it still looks like this? What,she threaten to keep your balls if you messed anything up?
"Believe it or not, some of us like to keep a clean home. Plus, I wasn't exactly productive yesterday."
"I do, too. It's just that it upsets the roaches when I move their things without asking them.
 
"So what happened with you yesterday? I tried calling you to see if you wanted to do anything, but you never picked up."
>You reach over and take the remote from him so he'll quit flipping channels while they're showing commercials.
"I ended up crashing most of the afternoon. I got up way too early and had breakfast with Octavia."
"So you did get that pony ride!"
>Probably should've thought that out more before saying it.
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Impossible Duet CriticalAssdamage 10/12/12/(Fri)19:56:44 UTC+9 No.5020949
Replies: >>5020956
 
>>5020939
"No. No, no, no, no, no. I went OVER to her place to meet her, then we went to get breakfast. Then we ended up spending the rest of the morning and a good part of the afternoon in Central Park."
>Rich's eyes light up like a school girl at a slumber party.
"You're better at this than I gave you credit for! Granted, the park move was a bit cliche, but I'll give you a pass since you're out of practice. Not bad for a first date!"
>You're just digging yourself deeper...
"It was NOT a date. It was breakfast."
"Bullshit! I can prove it, too."
"No, you can't, because there's nothing to prove. Fuck's sake... just watch the game."
 
>He does so, at least until the next round of commercials.
"So what is it that's got you so hung up? It's not the whole 'pony' thing is it?"
"It's the fact we have nothing in common. It's two different worlds. Literally and figuratively."
"Shit, that's all? You think Mallory and I had anything in common when we met? You've already spent the whole weekend with her, so there's obviously something there. And the more time you spend with her, the more it's going to grow."
"Like a tumor?"
"I'm just saying man, take a look at what you have before you decide to throw it away. You're not going to be working that job forever, and I don't want you looking back on your life when they force you into retirement with only a plaque to show for it."
 
"You have a case coming up soon, don't you?"
>Rich looks at you incredulously.
"How'd you know?"
"Because you sound like you're pleading to a jury that's got you dead to rights. Now shut up and watch the damn game."
>Thankfully, he leaves the issue alone and directs his anxiety at the tv, leaving you free to enjoy your terrible coffee.
>What he said, however, quietly gnaws at you.
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Impossible Duet CriticalAssdamage 10/12/12/(Fri)19:58:08 UTC+9 No.5020956
Replies: >>5020963
 
>>5020949
>As the game stretches into the third set of extra innings, you've had enough.
"I'm heading out."
"Alright, man. I'll talk to you later."
>Why can't all your conversations be that simple?
 
>The walk down to the station is quiet and uneventful, as is the train ride itself.
>When you open the door to your apartment, there's only more silence. No roaches scurrying across the floor, no rats clamoring through the drywall. Only silence, and a looming feeling of emptiness that hadn't been there before.
>Just as you sit down and start to take your boots off, you jump at the sound of your phone going off.
"What the hell does he want now..."
 
>You simply sit there, staring at Octavia's number as your phone continues to ring.
>It seems to echo throughout the apartment, along with Rich's words echoing in your mind.
>You just can't bring yourself to hit ignore or let it go to voicemail.
>With a haggard sigh, you finally answer.
 
 
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 Octavia's Song - Impossible Duet CriticalAssdamage 10/12/12/(Fri)19:59:31 UTC+9 No.5020963
Replies: >>5020977 >>5022277 >>5025546
 
>>5020956
"Hello?"
"Oh! H-hello. I didn't wake up you up did I?" Her warm voice cracks. She must not have been expecting you to pick up.
"Nah, I was just in the other room. What's up?"
"Oh, nothing important. I... just wanted talk. I met an old friend again at practice today, but it's still lonely knowing hardly anyone here."
"I know what you mean. So tell me, were you two good friends? And how was your first day?"
 
"Oh yes, Lyra and I studied together at the Royal Academy of the Arts back in Canterlot. We've known each other for quite a while. In fact, she's already pestering me to introduce the two of you."
>She seems awfully cheery all of a sudden.
"And performing all those new pieces was wonderful... I simply cannot wait to play them in front of an audience. Our next concert is still quite a ways out, though."
>All your weariness and stress from the day begins to vanish as the two of you continue on well into the night.
>And whether by fate or by chance, two voices quietly begin to sing one song.
 
>End of First Movement
 
 
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 Esp !!F9TLlH7ntMb 10/12/12/(Fri)20:03:08 UTC+9 No.5020977
 
 
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>>5020963
That ending bit was perfect. You are good at this.
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch6 Pt2:The Other Side Dakan 10/12/12/(Fri)21:11:32 UTC+9 No.5021546
Replies: >>5021555
 
>Calm
>Why am I so calm?
>Roseluck stares into the mirror
>Her image in a wedding gown stares back
>The image almost looks surreal
>She slowly turns to lyra sitting in the corner
“You look great.”
>Roseluck pauses for a second
>”How did you know what I was going to ask?
“You have already asked me 5 times.”
“Next you’re going to ask if anon will like it…”
>”Do you think he will?”
>Lyra sighs
>She gets up out of her chair and walks over to Rose
“He’s going to love it. You need to calm down.”
>”But, I am calm that’s the problem”
>Roseluck sighs again
>It doesn’t make sense I should be fluster right now
>Making sure everything is going off without a hitch
>But all of the pieces were falling into place
>Anon and her friends had made sure all the planning had gone smoothly
>Speaking of her friends…
>”Lyra, where did Lily and Daisy run off to?”
“Hmm, I believe that they just checking a few final things.”
>”Ok, I just hope they aren’t causing a ruckus, I don’t want anyp0ny getting the wrong idea.”
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch6 Pt2 Dakan 10/12/12/(Fri)21:12:26 UTC+9 No.5021555
Replies: >>5021558
 
>>5021546
>Roseluck turns to admire the dress again
>Rarity had done a great job
>It was a plain white dress with a wreath of roses on top of her head holding the veil
>Rarity had said something about wishing for more gemstones to put on the dress
>But the plainness of the dress suited her just fine
>It said something about simplicity
>She sighs again
“He’s going to love it, I promise”
>Rose giggles at Lyra’s insistence
>Just then Lily and Daisy walk into the room giggling
>Both were already in their brides maid dresses
>Simple red dresses styled like roses
>Lyra turns to them as they enter
“Everything ok ladies?”
>Daisy speaks up
“Everything is perfect”
>Lily joins in
“We were just talking about the party last night…”
>They both giggle again
>Roseluck smiles remembering the events last night
>Lyra had thrown her a very nice bachelorette party
>”Yes, thank you Lyra, the party was great.”
>Lily speaks up again
“What did you think about that stallion last night?
“He seemed like he took a particular interest in you…”
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch6 Pt2 Dakan 10/12/12/(Fri)21:13:08 UTC+9 No.5021558
Replies: >>5021566 >>5021599
 
>>5021555
>Roseluck blushes at the thought
>There had been a stallion at the bar they went to last night
>He got very friendly with everp0ny at the party
>”He was nice, but Anon is my stallion.”
Lily continues
“I don’t know why you are marrying this human anyways, seems a little weird.”
>”How can you say that? Anon has been nothing but great with me.”
“I’m just saying that anyp0ny would draw less attention.”
>”But, anon isn’t like everyp0ny. He sees past everything. Lyra understands.”
>Lyra looks surprised at the mention but smiles anyways.
“Rose is right; some humans are just as good if not better than somep0nies.”
 “You both are still a little weird for doing this.”
>Roseluck tries to keep her composure
>She realizes that she has chosen probably the hard path
>But it is the path that she loves the most
 >”I hope Anon is doing alright”
>Lyra puts a hoof around Rose for reassurance
“Robert is with him, I’m sure Anon is handling this just fine…”
 
 
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 Dakan 10/12/12/(Fri)21:15:04 UTC+9 No.5021566
Replies: >>5025546
 
>>5021558
End of Part 2
 
I don't know, didn't feel right while writing it...
Chapter 6 might end up being short. I orginally didn't plan on have chapter 6, I was going to go to the epilouge and talk about the wedding there...
 
But anyways. writing through the weekend.
 
 
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 Esp !!F9TLlH7ntMb 10/12/12/(Fri)21:20:07 UTC+9 No.5021599
 
>>5021558
Yay. So happy to see this.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/12/12/(Fri)21:43:23 UTC+9 No.5021739
 
 
File: 1350045803167.jpg-(109 KB, 640x469, 1339909814671.jpg)
 
 
>>4949752
>>4949511
>>4949485
>>4890284
>>4890277
>>4890267
>>4890257
>Pancakes updates
Just when I tought I would be able to sleep...
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/12/12/(Fri)22:44:55 UTC+9 No.5022277
 
>>5020963
COOLNESS!
I want moar!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/13/12/(Sat)01:07:31 UTC+9 No.5023521
Replies: >>5025415
 
Bump.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/13/12/(Sat)03:55:24 UTC+9 No.5025415
 
>>5023521
2.5-hour bump.
 
 
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 Spart 10/13/12/(Sat)04:03:59 UTC+9 No.5025546
 
>>5021566
>>5020963
great work CAD and Dakan!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/13/12/(Sat)04:10:20 UTC+9 No.5025650
 
>>5020805
I saw no strong opposition, not to mention both Anon Moose and Dovapony and others did a PiE story,
TL;DR WE NEED MORE WRITEFAGS.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/13/12/(Sat)07:46:30 UTC+9 No.5029123
Replies: >>5031999
 
Morning Bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/13/12/(Sat)10:46:16 UTC+9 No.5031999
 
>>5029123
3-hour bump.
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/13/12/(Sat)11:23:50 UTC+9 No.5032620
Replies: >>5043215
 
 
File: 1350095030320.png-(89 KB, 293x200, 1349753346507.png)
 
 
I won't have much free time this weekend with the move and everything, but I should be able to start on the next part by Monday or Tuesday.
 
It means a lot to me that you guys like this so much. I never expected a little greentext I wrote on a whim to kill a couple of hours with to turn into what it has.
 
 
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 Dakan 10/13/12/(Sat)13:34:48 UTC+9 No.5034887
 
Bumpdate
 
Working on the next part as I type, These parts are going to be incredibly short and so is the chapter. I apologize up front for this. Should have the next part ready soon.
 
 
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 Anona 10/13/12/(Sat)15:27:34 UTC+9 No.5036955
 
2 hour bump..
 
 
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 Dakan 10/13/12/(Sat)15:52:31 UTC+9 No.5037413
Replies: >>5037431 >>5037458
 
>You follow Rob down the hallway and out of the building
>The garden outside is beautiful in full bloom
>There is where the wedding will take place
>You are glad that you and Rose had settled on an outside wedding
>But then again it was only going to get hotter as the sun rises into the air
>Off in the distance you can hear the distant buzzing of cicadas in the summer breeze
>It won’t be long until the start of the wedding
>But you have some time o go around and greet a few guests
>Not that there are many to greet anyways
>The guest list was very small
>Close friends and family
>You meet a few ponies that you haven’t met before
>You say hello to a few humans from your side that decided to show up
>Some colleagues from work, a few friends from school, and you mother and sister.
>…
>Mom?
>You immediately stop in your tracks when you glimpse your mother and sister sitting near the front
>You rush over and give your mother and sister a hug
>”Mom, I thought…”
>You feel your mother squeeze you tightly in the hug
“I know anon, I’m so sorry about everything.”
>”Its ok mom, I understand, what about dad is he here?”
>You feel her grip loosen as she pulls away from your embrace
>The look on her face is somber
“You father is still…”
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch6 Pt3: Unexpected Guest Dakan 10/13/12/(Sat)15:53:35 UTC+9 No.5037431
 
>>5037413
>You nod before she can finish
>”I understand, Dad can be stubborn at times.”
>Deep inside the thought of your dad sitting at home alone pains you
>He choose this, he doesn’t want to be here to share this day with you and the rest.
>His loss
>You put on a happy face for your mom
>”Rose is going to be so happy you’re here.”
>Your mother only nods
>For some reason you think that she still hasn’t fully accepted it yet.
>At least she showed up to support you
>That’s what counts right
>You turn to your sister, who is absolutely beaming
“Told you I could it bro.”
>”Thanks sis, I really appreciate it.”
>You feel a hand on your shoulder
“Let’s go bro, it’s time for the main event!”
>You give another hug to your mother and sister before leaving
>You stand at the front of the small audience
>You swallow hard as your nerves rise up once again
>The music starts to play
 
 
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 Dakan 10/13/12/(Sat)15:54:54 UTC+9 No.5037458
Replies: >>5039646
 
>>5037413
End of Part 3
 
As I said, very short...
 
feels like Im just tying up the loose ends...
 
captcha: useful welcome
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/13/12/(Sat)18:44:31 UTC+9 No.5039646
 
>>5037458
Seems like the appropriate thing to do at this point in the story is to tie up the loose ends. It feels right so far.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/13/12/(Sat)21:08:32 UTC+9 No.5041086
 
Bump-a-doodle-doo
 
 
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 Anona 10/13/12/(Sat)23:29:31 UTC+9 No.5042234
Replies: >>5042271
 
2 and a half hour bump!
 
 
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 LeStrange 10/13/12/(Sat)23:36:27 UTC+9 No.5042271
Replies: >>5043647
 
>>5042234
>bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/14/12/(Sun)01:11:45 UTC+9 No.5043215
 
>>5032620
I appreciate the story, seems pretty interesting.
Can't wait for the new part.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/14/12/(Sun)01:43:43 UTC+9 No.5043647
Replies: >>5045502
 
>>5042271
lin tje middle of the night bump, i thought you left out thread, glad to see you didn.t
 
 
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 wut up?! LeStrange 10/14/12/(Sun)04:40:07 UTC+9 No.5045502
 
 
File: 1350157207718.jpg-(48 KB, 620x571, on the wait..jpg)
 
 
>>5043647
I love this thread so much I drew something on paint.
>pic related.
 
 
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 PonyGone !RAGT.LOVE. 10/14/12/(Sun)05:36:22 UTC+9 No.5046326
 
 
File: 1350160582360.png-(76 KB, 240x180, porygon ride.png)
 
 
Seems like PiE isnt receiving and LOVE!
 
I'll give PiE a shot.
 
 
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 PonyGone !RAGT.LOVE. 10/14/12/(Sun)06:37:55 UTC+9 No.5047273
Replies: >>5047434
 
>It was a dull night.
>Much like any other night.
>Surfing the internet.
>Eating some potato chips, and drinking a can of soda.
>It wasnt too long ago that school finished.
>College, all 4 years, and still only working at Target...
>It was a good job, the pay was fine, and your co-workers seemed to like you.
>*sigh*
>You turn to look at the almost full trash bin.
Might as well.
>You toss your empty cans into the trash, and make your way out to the dumpster.
>The nightly joggers were out to greet you, and your catholic freak neighbor was "glad" to see you at this time of the day.
>"WHATS IN THAT BAG? HUH?!"
Just my trash Miss-
>"WHAT? ITS NOT EVEN FULL! YOU WASTE BAGS THAT WAY!"
>You let out a sigh, and continue to the dumpster.
>Red graffiti was on the sides.
>The smell of dirty diapers and rotten food surrounds it.
>With one wind-up, you toss the bag into the bin.
>"OW!"
>...
>Is someone in there?!
>Probably a hobo...
>It cant hurt to check.
 
 
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 PonyGone !RAGT.LOVE. 10/14/12/(Sun)06:47:11 UTC+9 No.5047434
Replies: >>5047696
 
>>5047273
>You hoist yourself up.
>Empty?
>You jump down, and wipe your hands on your shorts.
>Must have been your-
>"HEY, THAT REALLY HURT YA KNOW!"
>You turn back at the dumpster.
Hello?
>A twirly hat can be seen.
>SHIT, A KID!
>You hoist yourself up once again to get her out.
Are Ok-
>...
>A toy pony?
>It was a small purple pony, about the size of your leg.
Um...
>You poke its forehead
>"AH!"
WOAAAH!
>You fall back, landing on your back.
Did...
>The purple pony toy peaks its head out of the bin.
>"..."
How?
>"That is NO WAY to treat the queen of evil!"
...
>"HONESTLY! Not only did you toss a bag of trash on me, but you poked me! POKED ME!"
...
>She jumps out of the trash bin.
>"You are going to pay..."
>You try to sit up, only to be jumped upon by the little purple horse with the twirly hat.
>With further examination, you can see that its eyes are swirls, and its flank has a baseball and screw on it.
>"PUNISHED!"
...
 
 
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 PonyGone !RAGT.LOVE. 10/14/12/(Sun)07:02:04 UTC+9 No.5047696
Replies: >>5047784
 
>>5047434
>"Kekeke!"
>What a weird laugh...
>"As punishment, YOU shall be my servant of EVIL!"
>Evil?
>No wonder this toy was thrown away.
>It is creepy as hell!
>You grab the toys hat.
>"HEY! THATS MINE!"
>It takes it out of your hands.
>"You big meanie!"
...
>You pick up the toy, and place it gently back into the trash bin.
>"..."
>They toy looks at you in confusion.
>You walk away, trying to forget about what just happened.
>A strange buzzing sound can be heard following you.
> Every time you turn, it vanishes.
>Almost back to your apartment.
>"THE DEVIL! IT FOLLOWS YOU!"
>You sigh.
Miss, I asure you, there is no-
>"Kekeke"
...
>The old lady falls back.
>"I KNEW IT! YOU ARE ON SIDE WITH THE DEVIL!"
 
 
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 PonyGone !RAGT.LOVE. 10/14/12/(Sun)07:07:05 UTC+9 No.5047784
Replies: >>5047986
 
>>5047696
>The toy flies over to the old lady.
>"BOO!"
>She faints.
>"Kekeke!"
>That twirly hat seems to be what is keeping it in the air.
>The toy flies over towards you.
>"You think that your servitude is finished?! You've still got a good 200 years!"
>You grab the toy in mid air.
>The twirling stops.
What... Are you?
>"Im a pony! The Daughter of Chaos! The queen of EVIL! THE ONE TO RULE ALL OF EQUESTRIA! I AM SCREWBALL!"
>ScrewBall?
>Really?
>That mark on her flank is probably why.
>You let her go.
>She drops to ground, landing on her hooves.
>Should you ignore this... Thing?
>What would a normal person do in a situation like this?
>You turn and kneel down to the... Pony.
So... You are the queen of evil, and I am your servant?
>"You've got it! Now open that door, and let me see my throne!"
>...
>She stands tall, striking a pose.
>You stand back up, and look over to see if the old lady next door is fine.
>KO'd
>Well, it wouldnt look good if you are the only one here so...
>You quickly opened your door and went inside.
 
 
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 PonyGone !RAGT.LOVE. 10/14/12/(Sun)07:19:56 UTC+9 No.5047986
Replies: >>5048239 >>5048285 >>5054699 >>5058049 >>5061347 >>5069171 >>5078527
 
>>5047784
>As soon as you opened the door, the little pony zooms her way inside.
>Just gonna play along with it...
>You've got nothing better to do.
>You lock the door behind you, and make your way to your computer.
>"She" was already there.
>"AH yeah, I LOVE this stuff!
>She grabs your half eaten potato chip bag, and poors it down her throat.
>"THATS THE STUFF!"
>She falls back.
>Her hat falling off in the process.
>She mane can be see more clearly now.
>A dark purple, with streaks of white.
>Very curly.
Hey now.
>She falls asleep.
>...
Crap...
>You lift up the sleeping "pony" and place it on a pillow on side of your bed.
>What are you gonna do with her?
>You place her hat next to her.
>Shutting the lights off, you hear her whisper.
>"Daddy... I miss you daddy..."
>You can't help but feel sorry for the "pony"...
>It reminds you of a dog... That can talk...
>*sigh*
>You fall back into your computer chair and shut your eyes.
Man... What "am" I gonna do?
 
END
For now
 
 
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 Spart 10/14/12/(Sun)07:34:25 UTC+9 No.5048239
 
>>5047986
hahaha great !
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/14/12/(Sun)07:36:50 UTC+9 No.5048285
 
>>5047986
Am I feeling a touch of MLD? You know because >pet.
Anyway, let's see how things turn.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/14/12/(Sun)10:46:25 UTC+9 No.5051417
Replies: >>5053284
 
Bump
 
 
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 Spart 10/14/12/(Sun)12:08:17 UTC+9 No.5053284
 
>>5051417
bump
 
 
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 LeStrange 10/14/12/(Sun)13:08:34 UTC+9 No.5054699
 
 
File: 1350187714765.jpg-(Spoiler Image, 23 KB, 500x549, 1346137998178.jpg)
 
 
>>5047986
>"Daddy... I miss you daddy..."
wowzers.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/14/12/(Sun)15:01:13 UTC+9 No.5056958
 
Bumping for PiE
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/14/12/(Sun)16:16:12 UTC+9 No.5058049
 
>>5047986
Well this looks fun
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/14/12/(Sun)19:08:39 UTC+9 No.5060126
 
 
File: 1350209319449.png-(283 KB, 500x543, screwball and eggs.png)
 
 
Bump
 
 
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 Anona 10/14/12/(Sun)21:46:38 UTC+9 No.5061170
 
bump again!
 
 
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 Lulzies 10/14/12/(Sun)22:09:32 UTC+9 No.5061347
Replies: >>5062528 >>5065304
 
 
File: 1350220172232.png-(67 KB, 908x869, 1347987179259.png)
 
 
>>5047986
PonyGone, get the fuck back in AiE!
 
 
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 Spart 10/15/12/(Mon)00:08:18 UTC+9 No.5062528
 
>>5061347
can't ponygone write for all of us ?
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/15/12/(Mon)02:38:47 UTC+9 No.5064480
Replies: >>5068577
 
I think I should bump this.
 
 
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 LeStrange 10/15/12/(Mon)03:32:39 UTC+9 No.5065304
 
 
File: 1350239559977.png-(117 KB, 285x296, 1349918816339.png)
 
 
>>5061347
you okay?
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/15/12/(Mon)06:01:47 UTC+9 No.5068577
 
>>5064480
Bumping again
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/15/12/(Mon)06:24:55 UTC+9 No.5069171
Replies: >>5070598
 
>>5047986
It gave me the gigglies
 
 
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 Esp !!F9TLlH7ntMb 10/15/12/(Mon)07:31:58 UTC+9 No.5070598
 
>>5069171
bamp
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/15/12/(Mon)07:33:22 UTC+9 No.5070633
Replies: >>5073425
 
Bump.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/15/12/(Mon)09:57:10 UTC+9 No.5073425
Replies: >>5080451
 
>>5070633
2.5-hour bump.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/15/12/(Mon)11:35:17 UTC+9 No.5075247
Replies: >>5076006
 
 
File: 1350268517663.jpg-(3 KB, 125x93, 1344365480740s.jpg)
 
 
spiderbump
 
 
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 LeStrange 10/15/12/(Mon)12:15:32 UTC+9 No.5076006
 
>>5075247
I'm just starting the Roseluck ch.
what do you think of it?
I'm liking it so far.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/15/12/(Mon)14:19:08 UTC+9 No.5078527
 
>>5047986
I haven't read that much Screwball, and I like this setup. Interested to see where it goes.
Also bump.
 
 
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 Spart 10/15/12/(Mon)16:15:12 UTC+9 No.5080451
Replies: >>5081983
 
>>5073425
bumping
 
 
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 Anona 10/15/12/(Mon)18:17:04 UTC+9 No.5081983
Replies: >>5083357
 
>>5080451
2 hour bump!
 
 
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 Anona 10/15/12/(Mon)21:00:50 UTC+9 No.5083357
 
>>5081983
another bump
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/15/12/(Mon)23:20:47 UTC+9 No.5084397
Replies: >>5084438
 
 
File: 1350310847991.jpg-(27 KB, 606x488, 49.jpg)
 
 
>>4949752
> After a few minutes of walking around, I find an empty bench in the park.
> I sit down to have lunch. There aren't that many people here today.
> "Pegasi, huh?" I mutter to myself.
*snore*
> Winged ponies that could control the weather?
> According to the notebook, they could even create hurricanes.
> Very dangerous creatures, indeed.
*snore*
> I quickly wolf down the hotdog I bought earlier.
> And after washing it down with a soda, I look up to watch the clouds.
> Or at least, that's what I had planned.
*snore*
> My eyes widen in surprise. I rub my eyes and look again.
> In the tree right above me, a girl is sleeping among the branches.
> She looks quite comfortable, curled up and snoring softly.
*snore*
> This girl has the most oddly colored hair,
> Like all the colors of the rainbow.
> "A musician?" I mutter to myself. "An artist? Or perhaps, a cosplayer?"
*snore*
> I continue watching her, entranced by the sight.
> Her chest rises and falls as she breathes softly.
> A peaceful, almost hypnotic rhythm...
*snap*
> Then, in a single moment, it all falls apart.
*CRASH!*
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/15/12/(Mon)23:23:46 UTC+9 No.5084438
Replies: >>5084496
 
>>5084397
"Ugh! Dumb tree," says the girl.
> I grunt painfully in response. She isn't that heavy, but it still hurt.
> The rainbow-haired girl now sits on my back as I lie on the ground.
"Good thing I landed on something soft!" she cries happily.
> The girl quickly gets up and stretches her arms.
> Then, she finally notices me on the ground.
> "A little help here?" I grumble.
"Heh heh, sorry about that," she says.
> Without hesitation, the girl grabs my hand and helps me up.
> Her touch is surprisingly soft and delicate. Are all girls this soft?
"I didn't think that the branches would break so easily. Maybe I should have picked another tree, after all."
> "Another tree?" I repeat.
> The girl is actually quite pretty, if not a bit tomboyish.
"Yep," she says with a yawn. "Haven't been able to get a good night's sleep lately. I just can't get used to sleeping so close to the ground, you know?"
> I frowned. Too close to the ground?
> Maybe she's a foreigner. I never understood tourists.
> "Ugh, sure," I said. "Glad you're alright after falling from that height."
"Oh, that?" she says. "That's nothing! You wouldn't believe the stunts I did back in Equest-"
> She suddenly covers her mouth and stares at me nervously.
> I raise an eyebrow. Then, she coughs several times.
> "Eckwest?" I repeat.
"Y-yeah! That's right!" she stammers. "Back at good old Eckwest! Ahahaha..."
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/15/12/(Mon)23:28:53 UTC+9 No.5084496
Replies: >>5084552 >>5122066
 
>>5084438
"Oh yeah!" says the rainbow-haired girl. "Do you know what time it is?"
> I give her a shrug.
> "A little past noon, I think."
"Past noon!? Oh my gosh! I'm going to be late!"
> Without another word, she runs off and is soon out of sight.
> Ugh! Third cute girl today and I still don't know her name.
> Well, it's not like I had a chance with her or anything, but-
"Um, excuse me?"
> I turn around to see the rainbow-haired girl standing right behind me.
> Wait, what? How did she even-
"I forgot to ask," says the girl. "But do you know where I can buy some donuts?"
> I shake my head in disbelief.
> "There's a donut and coffee place near the intersection."
"That's great, thanks! I promised a friend of mine that I'd get some on the way home."
> Before I can say anything, the girl gives me a little wave and dashes off.
> I stare blankly as she vanishes with inhuman speed.
> "..."
*snap*
> The sound of twigs breaking under my shoe returns me to reality.
> Never mind. Let's not dwell on such useless things.
> I pull out the black notebook from my pocket,
> And I begin to read to clear my head.
"Equestria is home to a number of other dangerous creatures:"
"Dragons, Hydras and Manticores are but a few examples."
"But more dangerous still are those who manage to tame them..."
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/15/12/(Mon)23:32:31 UTC+9 No.5084543
 
 
File: 1350311551413.jpg-(11 KB, 500x282, meh-1.ro6867.jpg)
 
 
I must say, I rather enjoy the ponuville apartments.
 
 
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 Pancakes 10/15/12/(Mon)23:33:20 UTC+9 No.5084552
Replies: >>5084574 >>5084604 >>5097614
 
>>5084496
Another short update. Should have more time to write this week. Pastebin also updated, for those who prefer to read it there.
 
 
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 Esp !!F9TLlH7ntMb 10/15/12/(Mon)23:36:07 UTC+9 No.5084574
 
>>5084552
 
 
Yay. I loved the update.
 
 
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 Spart 10/15/12/(Mon)23:38:53 UTC+9 No.5084604
 
>>5084552
thanks pancakes !
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/16/12/(Tue)01:35:00 UTC+9 No.5085595
Replies: >>5087659
 
2 hours bump.
 
 
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 Spart 10/16/12/(Tue)04:30:16 UTC+9 No.5087659
 
>>5085595
top gear bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/16/12/(Tue)07:07:39 UTC+9 No.5089857
 
 
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>tfw you really liked Mortimermouse and he had no interest to continue.
 
I hope he's happy doing whatever he's doing now...;_;7
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/16/12/(Tue)09:50:35 UTC+9 No.5092884
 
Bump for cute ponies doing cute things. In Earth
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/16/12/(Tue)11:43:45 UTC+9 No.5095297
 
3 hours bamp
 
 
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 LeStrange 10/16/12/(Tue)11:44:47 UTC+9 No.5095327
Replies: >>5098065
 
 
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The Roseluck Chronicles.
Wow, I finished it and I was on the edge when I finished it. So many "d'aww's" and "oh ho ho" Then the thought came to mind..
What happens when they want to consider a kid/filly/hybrid?
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/16/12/(Tue)13:05:08 UTC+9 No.5097169
 
Bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/16/12/(Tue)13:28:35 UTC+9 No.5097614
Replies: >>5097995 >>5103307
 
>>5084552
I know this is a dumb question, but whose point of view is this chapter being told from? Is it a new character or was everything just a dream?
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/16/12/(Tue)13:52:25 UTC+9 No.5097995
Replies: >>5103307
 
>>5097614
I think it is a new character, yet so I can´t prove it.
 
 
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 Dakan 10/16/12/(Tue)13:57:40 UTC+9 No.5098065
Replies: >>5099007
 
>>5095327
It's not fully finished yet. I have a few more parts to the current chapter and then an epilogue. Don't worry, you question will get answered.
 
 
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 LeStrange 10/16/12/(Tue)14:47:40 UTC+9 No.5099007
 
>>5098065
Coolio, I can't wait.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/16/12/(Tue)15:55:23 UTC+9 No.5100388
Replies: >>5102464
 
Bump before bed.
 
 
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 Anona 10/16/12/(Tue)18:55:51 UTC+9 No.5102464
 
>>5100388
3 Hour Bump!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/16/12/(Tue)20:31:15 UTC+9 No.5103307
Replies: >>5110688
 
>>5097614
>>5097995
See >>4890257
>And now, something different. Let's switch our point-of-view to someone else in the city for a while...
 
So far, I'd say this Anon doesn't like ponies very much. Also, he can't see through the disguise spell thing.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/17/12/(Wed)00:33:50 UTC+9 No.5105120
Replies: >>5107414
 
Thread needs a bump.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/17/12/(Wed)03:48:45 UTC+9 No.5107414
 
>>5105120
Re-bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/17/12/(Wed)07:11:01 UTC+9 No.5110688
Replies: >>5113669
 
>>5103307
I was reading from the paste bin and I didn't see that line.
 
 
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 LeStrange 10/17/12/(Wed)10:01:13 UTC+9 No.5113669
 
>>5110688
Well that makes sense.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/17/12/(Wed)13:05:39 UTC+9 No.5117061
 
3 hour bump.
 
 
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 World Wonder. LeStrange 10/17/12/(Wed)15:11:22 UTC+9 No.5119062
 
 
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>I came to this world thinking that I would find love and friendship. The wildlife was different from where I came from..a lot different.
>I suppose I should start my light plight of somewhat woe and delight.
>I lived in a special planet with special beings of life.
>Taking resources for granted, but still very much intelligent beings.
>I am what you may call a "human". There are so little of my kind now a days. A disease struck and killed off most of our kind. We now look for a new planet, hopefully with life and new resources to survive.
>My name is Anon, and I am one of four humans that has survived "the disease".
 
I don't know where I'm headed with this.
But I'll do my best to make it interesting.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/17/12/(Wed)16:00:55 UTC+9 No.5119814
Replies: >>5122031
 
bump before bed
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/17/12/(Wed)20:11:33 UTC+9 No.5122031
 
>>5119814
Much needed bump
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/17/12/(Wed)20:16:41 UTC+9 No.5122066
Replies: >>5122200
 
 
File: 1350472601749.jpg-(27 KB, 647x455, 50.jpg)
 
 
>>5084496
> On the way back, I decide to take a shortcut through an alley.
> Bad idea. I soon come upon a dangerous scene.
> A girl with long pink hair stands with her back to the wall.
"Umm, excuse me?" she says. "Could you please let me through?"
> She is surrounded by three full grown men.
> They do not look like her friends.
"T-that is, if you don't mind," she adds.
> The three laugh menacingly. Poor girl.
> But I'm no hero. These guys are huge, compared to me.
> If I tried anything, I'd just add to their victims for the day.
> With a sigh, I prepare to turn around and find another way back.
"Well isn't this cute?" says one of the men.
"Maybe we should let her pass," says another.
"Oh, thank you!" says the girl. "Now if you would be so kind..."
*glint*
> Something shiny catches my eye. One of them just pulled out a knife.
> He holds it behind his back while smiling. The girl doesn't have any idea.
> I stop in my tracks and try to tell myself that this isn't my problem.
"Just a sec, Miss!" says the man with the knife. "I have something to show you."
"Something to show me?" repeats the girl.
> Curious, she takes a step closer. I plant a palm upon my face.
> I am no hero. And this is not going to end well.
> But my mouth speaks without regard to my own safety.
> "There you are!" I cry out loudly. "We've been looking all over the place for you!"
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/17/12/(Wed)20:35:59 UTC+9 No.5122200
Replies: >>5122389
 
>>5122066
> I run straight at the girl with a forced smile on my face.
> "Everyone's waiting for you!" I cry.
"Eh? But I-"
> The girl looks at me like a stranger.
> Technically, I am. But I grab her hand, nevertheless.
> "C'mon! We're going to be late!"
"Late?" repeats the girl.
> Somehow, I manage to lead her for a few steps.
> The three men watch us silently, taking careful glances at the street.
> "That's right! You don't want to miss the movie, do you?"
"The movie?" she repeats. "What movie?"
> I laugh nervously. Does she not understand the danger she is in?
> "Your favorite movie, of course!"
"Oh, I see now," she says.
> The girl sighs in relief. She smiles at me gently.
> Finally, she understands! Or so I had thought.
"You must have me mistaken with somep0ny else," she says.
> I stare at her blankly. Is she really this naive?
> Oh wow. This cannot possibly get any worse.
"You see, this is actually my first time out alone in the city."
> At those words, the three men start smiling widely.
> They quickly walk toward us. I curse under my breath.
> And so, this is what I get for playing hero...
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/17/12/(Wed)21:00:35 UTC+9 No.5122389
Replies: >>5122677 >>5123291
 
>>5122200
"Hey, kid!" says the biggest of the three. "Don't you know how to mind your own damn business? Curiousity killed the cat, y'know?"
> Ah shit. If I'm going down, I'm going down in style.
> "Better than breathing the same air as you shitheads!"
"Oh you didn't just-"
> The big guy suddenly kicks me in the stomach.
> I crumple down on the ground, helpless.
"-get smart with me, did you?"
"He done pissed off the boss!" says one of the others. "Big mistake, dude!"
"Yep," says the third. "Now, we're going to have to kill you!"
> Somehow, their words still register in my brain.
> Well, that's it, then.
> I wish I could say that I had a good run. A good life.
> But if there is anything I still had in this world, it was regret.
> Regret at coming to this city to work myself through college...
> Regret at encountering those pony creatures, firsthand...
> Regret at losing the love of my life...
> ...
> Wait, what? Where did that last one come from?
> Ignoring the pain, I search my memories.
> But I recall nothing. No face. No name.
> Well, that is probably for the best.
> This is the end, after all.
> And nothing of value was lost.
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/17/12/(Wed)21:45:57 UTC+9 No.5122677
Replies: >>5122716
 
>>5122389
> I hear someone call out to me:
> A soft, gentle voice, like a bird's song.
> I feel someone shake my shoulder:
> A tender, warm sensation, like being held as a child.
> Very slowly, I manage to make out the words.
"Hey! Can you hear me?"
> I open my eyes. The pink-haired girl looks down at me with worry.
> Then, I cringe at the pain. My side still hurts badly.
"Oh my! Are you alright?"
> Somehow, I am still alive. That realization almost brings me to tears.
> Plus the pain, of course. I check myself for other injuries,
> But there are none aside from a large bruise from that kick.
> Which reminds me! I quickly glance around, but the three men are nowhere in sight.
> "Huh? Where did those muggers go?"
"There, there," says the girl. "You don't need to worry about those mean old humans! I took 'good care' of them, myself."
> She says this all with an innocent smile. I find myself laughing at the irony.
> Rather than the hero, sounds like I played the role of the dumbass-in-distress.
> "Well, that was embarrassing," I mutter.
"Oh no! Not at all!" says the girl. "You were very brave! I had no idea that they were bad humans. I'm not sure what would have happened if you didn't try to warn me..."
> There is no trace of sarcasm in her voice.
 
 
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 Ponyville Apartments: They Canter Among Us Pancakes 10/17/12/(Wed)21:50:48 UTC+9 No.5122716
Replies: >>5122778
 
>>5122677
> "You're kidding, right?"
"It was very kind of you, and I would like to return the favor somehow." she adds.
> I quickly get up and brush off the dust from my clothes.
> This scenario is getting ridiculous,
> Almost like a scene from some TV show or comic book.
> But I suppose I can play along, if she likes.
> She did save my life, after all.
> "Go home. Tell your family what happened. And be more careful."
"Eh? But I-"
> "Do that, and I'll consider the favor repaid."
> With those words, I walk off and head back to the store.
> Once or twice, I thought about looking back,
> But that would spoil the scene, would it not?
 
> I arrive at the convenience store without incident.
> After treating myself with the first-aid kit, I take my place behind the cash register.
> Still no customers. I decide to kill a bit more time.
> I pull out the black notebook from my pocket and begin to read.
"I learned something important today from a unicorn pony I had befriended."
"The researchers at Canterlot say that they discovered a way to travel to Earth."
"While I should be overjoyed at the prospect of returning home,"
"I feel that there is something amiss about all this..."
 
 
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 Pancakes 10/17/12/(Wed)22:00:50 UTC+9 No.5122778
Replies: >>5123100 >>5123121
 
>>5122716
Done for today. Two more ponies to meet before we end the day for our little clueless human. Let me know what you think so far.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/17/12/(Wed)22:53:52 UTC+9 No.5123100
 
>>5122778
Oh cool, Pancakes update. Reading' time.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/17/12/(Wed)22:58:04 UTC+9 No.5123121
 
>>5122778
:3
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/17/12/(Wed)23:20:46 UTC+9 No.5123291
 
>>5122389
> Regret at losing the love of my life...
Second line so far that made me stop and scratch my head. I don't know where we're going, but I shall follow you there you beautiful bastard
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/18/12/(Thu)03:08:12 UTC+9 No.5125517
 
Near 4 hour bump.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/18/12/(Thu)03:47:22 UTC+9 No.5126085
 
>tfw CriticalAssdamage is taking a lot to update
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronincles Ch6 Pt4:Vows Dakan 10/18/12/(Thu)05:37:24 UTC+9 No.5127919
Replies: >>5127933
 
>You stand next to the Pony minister with your best man Rob by your side
>The wedding procession begins
>First comes the brides mares, Lily and Daisy
>Next comes the Mare of Honor, Lyra
>Finally the doors open and your heart skips a few beats
>There is you bride to be, Rose
>Beautiful as ever
>She slowly walks down the aisle towards you
>as she approaches you kneel down to her height and smile
>she smiles back at you lovingly
>The minister clears his throat and begins
“Fillies and Gentlecolts, Ladies and Gentlemen; We are gathered here today to celebrate the union of Roseluck and Anon Y Mous.”
“This couple before you today proves that our species, while different, are in many ways the same”
“We are both capable of understanding and feeling love for one another and are able to live in harmony.”
“The betrothed have decided to forgo traditional wedding vows and write their own personal messages for each other.”
>The minister turns to you and nods
>You take a deep breath and begin
>”My dear Rose, it has been almost a year since we first met. It was the night that all the ponies came to Earth. I didn’t know it then, but everything would change.”
>”The following day, I made you a promise, to help you. It would be the first of many promises I would make to you.”
>”Today I make more promises, and just like the one before, I will keep these.”
>”I promise to love you with all my heart; from now until the end, no matter what the future holds. It is the best promise I can make to you Rose. It is one I will keep.”
>The minister turns to Rose and nods
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronincles Ch6 Pt4 Dakan 10/18/12/(Thu)05:38:09 UTC+9 No.5127933
Replies: >>5127969 >>5147284
 
>>5127919
>Rose turns to you and stares deeply into your eyes and starts
“My sweet Anon, when I arrived here, I was so confused and lost. You found me and helped me in my greatest time of need.”
“For those first few weeks, the only things that occupied my mind was trying to get back home to Equestria.”
“As time went on, I slowly started to fell in love, and those thoughts soon disappeared. I soon realized that being sent here might not be all bad.”
“Now I look back, and I see that this is now my home, I am where I belong, by your side; for as long as we are together, I promise to be with you and love you.”
>The minister smiles and looks to Lyra and Rob
“The tokens please.”
>Rob nods and pulls out a jeweled rose and hands it to you
>Lyra nods and levitates a ring in front of rose
“Repeat after me Anon, ‘With this I make you my wedded wife.’”
>”With this I make you my wedded wife.”
>With those words you place the jewel into Rose’s hair
“Repeat after me Rose, ‘With this I make you my wedded husband.’”
“With this I make you my wedded husband”
>Rose nods to Lyra you levitates the ring onto your finger.
“I now pronounce you, Husband and Wife. You make kiss your bride.”
>You lean forward and kiss your bride
 
 
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 Dakan 10/18/12/(Thu)05:40:02 UTC+9 No.5127969
Replies: >>5128205
 
>>5127933
End of part 4
Pastebin updated
 
Looking at writing one more part. Then epilouge. It has been a good run. Any questions that you guys might have that I could answer in the epilouge would be great.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/18/12/(Thu)05:53:17 UTC+9 No.5128205
Replies: >>5131410
 
>>5127969
That was a good update, made me feel.
A resolution to the parents issue would be nice.
Maybe a look into their future too, and how society had come to accept ponies over time maybe?
 
 
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 LeStrange 10/18/12/(Thu)08:30:43 UTC+9 No.5131410
Replies: >>5131644
 
>>5128205
^
that and I wanna know what happens to Rob and his companion.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/18/12/(Thu)08:40:38 UTC+9 No.5131644
Replies: >>5136861 >>5142417 >>5144433
 
>>5131410
They fucked.
No seriously, it was the single most meaningful experience in Lyra's life, Rob's hands, lack of flare, lack of sheath, ability to bottom-out (thus giving us the advantage over ponies in dick length) and the fact that humans have x20 times the stamina of stallions brought her to bliss endless times, everytime she lonelily fantasized and "fapped" on /mlh/ still did not prepare her for the intimacy of that experience, all she could do was moan his name over and over.
He was all that mattered at that moment, he was her world and she was his.
It was... Beautiful.
 
Captcha: Ymoten Discord
Even he approves
 
 
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 CriticalAssdamage 10/18/12/(Thu)09:09:46 UTC+9 No.5132231
Replies: >>5134832 >>5175589
 
CAD phoning it in here.
 
Should have interwebs up and going by Friday sometime hopefully. So I'll try to have something up by this weekend, even if it's just something short.
 
 
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 Spart 10/18/12/(Thu)09:18:33 UTC+9 No.5132402
 
hell yeah, you guys made this a better day ! thank you very much everyone !
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/18/12/(Thu)11:37:17 UTC+9 No.5134832
 
>>5132231
Please! I can't wait for more grey pone in grey city!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/18/12/(Thu)13:27:56 UTC+9 No.5136861
 
>>5131644
Pfft haha. I'd believe that
 
 
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 Dakan 10/18/12/(Thu)16:57:07 UTC+9 No.5140273
 
After work Bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/18/12/(Thu)19:35:25 UTC+9 No.5141653
 
Bump before passing the fuck out
 
 
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 Spart 10/18/12/(Thu)21:15:54 UTC+9 No.5142417
Replies: >>5143321
 
>>5131644
don't you want to write more ?
 
 
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 Dakan 10/18/12/(Thu)22:36:16 UTC+9 No.5143321
Replies: >>5143830
 
>>5142417
If he doesn't, I might do a side story about it... I just had a massive head canon brain storm...
 
 
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 Spart 10/18/12/(Thu)23:14:23 UTC+9 No.5143830
Replies: >>5144433
 
 
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>>5143321
here have this, you deserve it !
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/18/12/(Thu)23:35:52 UTC+9 No.5144032
 
taking a slice of Pie...
 
 
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 A RC Side Story: Lyra's Magic Pt1: Arrival Dakan 10/19/12/(Fri)00:46:44 UTC+9 No.5144433
Replies: >>5144441
 
>>5131644
>>5143830
It is 12:45 AM local time... Look what you made me do...
 
>A day at school a nice relaxing evening at home
>Rob’s life was near perfection
>Carefree college kid just working his way through his course load
>He loved the college life
>He ran through the day in his head again as he stepped out of the shower
>As he exited his bathroom he journeyed to his bedroom to turn in for the night
>However as he layed his head down on the pillow something tugged at his mind
>Had he forgotten to do something?
>What were these thoughts about that kept him awake?
>The answer soon came in form of a crash from his bathroom
>What the hello could that have been?
>He wonders to himself as he gets up to check what the noise was
>He approaches the bathroom door and throws it open, wondering what to expect
>What greets his is a scene of chaos
>His shower curtain in the tub constantly moving as if wrapped around a living animal
>He stands back as the curtains continue to thrash about until a rip appears in them
>A horn protrudes through the hole in the curtains
>The curtains slowly stop moving all together and lay in a heap
>The horn protruding from the curtains takes on a soft glow
>The sound of tearing fills the bathroom as the curtains are ripped to shreds
>Rob is dumbstruck by what he finds witnesses
>A small aquamarine horse stands in his bathtub shaking off the remaining curtains
>Its horn attached to the center of its head still glows
>Several pieces of curtain have the exact same glow around them
>These pieces magically levitate through the air and drop off of the horse
 
 
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 Lyra's Song Pt1 Dakan 10/19/12/(Fri)00:48:01 UTC+9 No.5144441
Replies: >>5144447
 
>>5144433
>Rob rubs his eyes again to make sure he is not seeing things.
>When his eyes focus on the horse it is staring straight at him
>”Um… easy there…”
>The horse’s mouth drops open as if in awe
>Maybe horse wouldn’t be the right word
>What was the mythical beast with the horn called?
>Ah yes a unicorn!
>The unicorn’s eyes appear to light up
>This is crazy, unicorns aren’t real… and they don’t look at people in awe…
“Human!”
>Before Rob’s brain can comprehend the full situation the unicorn has bounded out of the tub and has tackled him to the ground.
>He tries to catch his breath as the tiny creature jumps up and down exclaiming all different sorts of things.
“Ohmygoddess! I can’t believe it! HUMANS ARE REAL! I KNEW I WASN’T CRAZY! I WAS RIGHT! YES YES YES!”
>Rob tries to get a few words in between each jump
>”Um…excuse…me…but…do you…mind…I…can’t…breathe”
>The unicorn stops jumping and stares down at Rob again
“Oh my! I’m so sorry! I just got so excited!”
>The unicorn gets off of rob and stands next to him
“Here let me help you!”
>Rob feels an eerie sensation come over him as he suddenly begins to rise
>He soon finds himself standing on his own two feet again
>Rob looks down at the unicorn who stares up at him with the biggest smile on its face
>”Thanks… I think…”
“Lyra! Lyra Heartstrings!”
 
 
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 Lyra's Magic Dakan 10/19/12/(Fri)00:49:18 UTC+9 No.5144447
Replies: >>5144456
 
>>5144441
>”Um what?”
“My name silly! Oh what’s yours?”
>”Robert Anderson…”
“Such an interesting name! Tell me more!
>I must be going crazy…
>I’m standing in the bathroom talking to a pastel unicorn named Lyra…
>That or I’m more tired than I thought
>Rob turns around and exits the bathroom and head for the bedroom with Lyra following close behind
“Ohh where are we going? Is it someplace interesting?”
>Rob crawls into bed and puts his head on the pillow
>Maybe some sleep will make the delusion disappear…
>Suddenly it feels like something is in the bed with him
>He rolls over and discovers Lyra face to face with him
>The unicorn stares at him intently
>”Um… ok this is a bit awkward, but I’m going to bed now… so…”
“Right! Its night isn’t it! Don’t worry I won’t say anymore! I’m quite tired myself!”
>The unicorn closes its eyes are drifts off to sleep
>A unicorn, in my bed, sleeping
>Maybe I should have taken a creative writing class this semester…
 
 
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 Dakan 10/19/12/(Fri)00:51:14 UTC+9 No.5144456
Replies: >>5145517
 
>>5144447
End of Part 1
Pastebin updated
 
So, no clop yet, that comes later...
Don't worry still workin on the end of Roseluck...
Just got inspired, This will last no more than a chapter...
Happy reading and good night...
 
 
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 Spart 10/19/12/(Fri)02:49:07 UTC+9 No.5145517
Replies: >>5148117
 
>>5144456
thank you so much! nice work!
but why only one chapter ? its really good you know?
 
 
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 World Wonder.1 LeStrange 10/19/12/(Fri)04:40:55 UTC+9 No.5147035
Replies: >>5147076
 
 
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>"ANON, RUN!".
>Running past the wasteland of sand I reach a path that leads to..well..I don't know but I'm going somewhere that has been that might have help.
>My legs are getting heavy from running 2 miles straight. But I still see the beast over the hills charging for my brethren. I tell myself I can find a way to help them but I know it's not possible.
>I see a small town with cherries and..lots of horses?
>I pass out a quarter-mile from the town
>I wake up to the rumbling wheels hitting the dirt. A pastel vanilla colored horse is murmuring to itself in what I can hear..english?
>The horse turns it's head and looks at me in surprise.
"Oh?! You're finally conscience? You had me in a scare don'tyouknow. Hold on we're almost nearing the doc's place. Just rest."
>I felt dazed and confused. I thought I was hallucinating from dehydration.
>passed out again
>I wake up this time in a bed with a horse sitting next to my bed on a stool. It appeared to be worried.
>I regain some strength and barely utter words
>"W-Where am I?"
"Don't worry, you're safe",said the vanilla horse.
>"What kind of drugs did you people give me that talking horses are well...talking?!"
"We aren't horses we're ponies. And well, heh, I thought I was on some type of drug when I saw you laying on the sand bleeding out."
>we both say this in unison
"What are you?"
> I chuckled a bit, then I stared at the ho-"pony" and cleared my mind for a second.
>"Okay, let me go first. My name is Anon Twist. And I think you may want to know what kind of species I am so I'll just say it. I am human."
>"Now it's your turn."
"Fair enough, The names Jack and that's a fact. As you know already I'm a pony."
 
 
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 World Wonder.2 LeStrange 10/19/12/(Fri)04:43:34 UTC+9 No.5147076
Replies: >>5147109
 
 
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>>5147035
"I don't think that I've ever heard of a "human" before. Can you explain what that is for me please?
>"Um..uh.. do you know what gorillas or monkeys are?"
"Yup, I know of those critters"
>"Let's just say we are like them but just a bit more..advance."
"Heh, advance? If you say that, then where's your tail? It's like a 5th hand to them"
>"Well, we got to a point where tails are obsolete and intelligence grew more along with reason and creativity."
"Us ponies have intelligence and all that other whatnot and we still have our tails."
>"I see that but do you have these?"
>You show him your hands. The pony was frightened at first thinking you were going to harm him.
"Well, golly. What are those things?"
>You explain to him the purpose of hands
>The doc enters the room
"I see that you're alive and well. How are you?"
>"I'm good thank you".
>you finally grasp what's going on. you reached a new planet with new forms of intelligence.
"You needed alot of attention when we first found you. Took us hours just to figure what was wrong with you. But luckily for us, a well known pegasi came along and treated you to a full recovery. She would be here right now but I'm afraid to say that she was too scared to look at you when you finally awaken as were we. But now it seems that you are harmless.
>slowly reaches his hoof for your hand
>you gently and cautiously reach for his hoof and shake hands/hoofs.
 
 
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 LeStrange 10/19/12/(Fri)04:45:25 UTC+9 No.5147109
Replies: >>5147354
 
>>5147076
that's all I go so far. I don't know what to think of it so far. Help if you can. ty
 
 
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 Boris_? !!eONAbwb0QE1 10/19/12/(Fri)04:56:06 UTC+9 No.5147284
 
>>5127933
Oh god... Well now I've gotta go clean my rifle.... Get rid of all these feels..
 
 
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 Spart 10/19/12/(Fri)05:00:41 UTC+9 No.5147354
Replies: >>5147511
 
>>5147109
where is lyra ? when she hears about a "human" haha
oh but for now it reads more like AiE? wonder how you twist this hehe
 
 
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 LeStrange 10/19/12/(Fri)05:11:53 UTC+9 No.5147511
Replies: >>5148117
 
>>5147354
I hope it's okay since this is a AiE thread.
 
 
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 Dakan 10/19/12/(Fri)05:50:22 UTC+9 No.5148117
Replies: >>5148408 >>5148558 >>5151272 >>5153944 >>5156477
 
>>5147511
Well, technically it is PiE. Ponies in EARTH. It stories about ponies coming to earth.
 
>>5145517
The reason for one chapter...
Well originally I was just going to write a one off clop scene between Rob and Lyra. Then I decided that I wanted something more than just a one off and decided to build a short story around it. How they came to meet, and how they fell in love.
 
The second reason is that i feel if wrote this story out into a full series I would end up sounding like a just re wrote RC and just replaced Rose with Lyra. Esecpially since they are in the same city and end up being friends near the end of RC.
 
But hey, if you want me to i could flush it out a bit more... but then I would put slender on a back burner.
 
So vote. Lyra or Slendy
 
 
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 Spart 10/19/12/(Fri)06:07:09 UTC+9 No.5148408
 
>>5148117
vote for Lyra !
 
 
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 LeStrange 10/19/12/(Fri)06:16:30 UTC+9 No.5148558
 
>>5148117
My bad I typed it wrong I didn't notice my mistake.
I think my story may cross between both AiE and PiE.
 
Lyra or Slendy
It would be nice just to have 2 chapters for Lyra (that's just me being selfish though)
but it seems like Lyra already took the initiative and Rob is alright with her being a talking pony
but then again I can wrong since he was tired. One chapter to sum up the whole thing doesn't seem like a bad idea.
I vote Slendy.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/19/12/(Fri)09:20:46 UTC+9 No.5151272
 
>>5148117
Lyra, please
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/19/12/(Fri)11:17:03 UTC+9 No.5153944
Replies: >>5156477
 
>>5148117
While I like the idea of having another month or two of feels, I think it may be too soon for another full on romance story. Slendermane on the other hand would full more fresh and may even breathe some new life into this thread. I vote for the horror story (though I'd gladly read the clop, sound funner'en hell)
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/19/12/(Fri)13:03:53 UTC+9 No.5156477
 
>>5148117
I'd love a Lyra story in that world and hope we see one eventually, but like >>5153944 said, a horror story would add some spice and variety to this thread.
My vote goes to Slender.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/19/12/(Fri)14:24:55 UTC+9 No.5158224
 
Bump
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/19/12/(Fri)15:19:32 UTC+9 No.5159431
 
 
File: 1350627572477.png-(189 KB, 800x600, You'll never guess.png)
 
 
"And uh... I'll have a large popcorn."
>"Ooh ooh! And a blue icee!"
"Pinkie, please."
>"And Sweet Tarts! Lots and lots of Sweet Tarts!"
"Pinkie I only have enough for a popcorn for both of us. Tickets were expensive enough, I can't-"
>Pinkie jumps onto your head, pointing a hoof at the acne ridden teen behind the concession stand.
>"You! Do you have any Twizzlers?"
>"Uh...yeah?"
>"I'll take five boxes of those, as well as a chili dog!"
"Pinkie this is ridiculous."
>Pinkie looks at you with a smile while sitting on your head, booping your nose with a hoof and giggling.
>"Oh Anon, of course I'm ridiculous! I'm Pinkie-"
"-Pie, yes I know. We have been over this many, many times."
>The kid at the concession looks utterly fucking confused.
"Look just give us a large popcorn and a root beer."
>"But Anon what about the-"
"And a box of Sweet Tarts."
>Pinkie lets out a delighted squeal as she grabs your cheeks and mushes them about.
>"Yaaaaay! Now we can go watch Up! Yaaaaaay!"
"Yay."
>It never ends, this shit.
 
 
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 One-Of-Three-Names 10/19/12/(Fri)16:20:33 UTC+9 No.5160449
Replies: >>5160524 >>5162868 >>5172659
 
 
File: 1350631233197.png-(328 KB, 1097x1059, 1344287389304.png)
 
 
Greetings from the TF threads.
 
I have a question.
 
If I were to write a story from the perspective of a pony where an Anon came to Equestria, but then brought said pony back to Earth with him. Would I put that here, or in AiE? Not sure when I would actually make this happen, but I'd like to.
 
Please don't make me go to AiE.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/19/12/(Fri)16:27:03 UTC+9 No.5160524
Replies: >>5160596
 
>>5160449
That would fit in just fine here.
Focus of the thread is ponies on earth, so as long as they end up on Earth and the major plot takes place there, I see no problems with that story. Sounds like a neat concept too.
 
 
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 One-Of-Three-Names 10/19/12/(Fri)16:33:19 UTC+9 No.5160596
Replies: >>5160650
 
>>5160524
Alright, neat. You guys are cool with prose, right? I've tried doing the greentext thing before, and regretted it each time.
 
I'm thinking of going for a Stargate few-months-after-first-contact kind of story. Still working out the details, but I think it could be fun.
 
And yes, the majority would be on Earth. Only the first few bits would be in Equestria.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/19/12/(Fri)16:38:45 UTC+9 No.5160650
 
>>5160596
No one's done actual prose here yet, but I doubt that would be a problem either. Go for it.
 
 
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 Dakan 10/19/12/(Fri)17:56:10 UTC+9 No.5161403
Replies: >>5186582
 
Just got home, gonna work on the next part or Roseluck and an update to Lyra, voting stays open until I post the next part.
 
Current standing
Slender: 3 Lyra: 2
 
 
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 Spart 10/19/12/(Fri)20:41:26 UTC+9 No.5162868
 
>>5160449
yay, the more writers the better it is for us readers!
 
 
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 Anona 10/20/12/(Sat)01:01:56 UTC+9 No.5165045
 
4 hour bump..
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/20/12/(Sat)04:07:48 UTC+9 No.5167018
Replies: >>5169253 >>5176662
 
OP here, I'm going to be out and won't have access to a computer for a while and can't be keeping an eye on thread (and keeping it alive, a lot of those bumps are me) and I was wondering if anyone else will keep the thread alive.
 
 
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 Spart 10/20/12/(Sat)06:13:58 UTC+9 No.5169253
 
>>5167018
we have an eye on it
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Ch6 Pt5:Ending, and Beginnings Dakan 10/20/12/(Sat)08:21:50 UTC+9 No.5171574
Replies: >>5171624
 
>The wedding is over
>The reception was a small affair
>A nice dinner with family and friends
>You and rose shared a few dances
>It was no surprise when Lyra ended up catching Rose’s bouquet
>The look on Rob’s face was priceless
>You both left the reception for a quiet spot in the country
>A little out of the way place where you can spend of some time alone
>Late that night you both sit under the night sky and stare up at the stars
“This is perfect.”
>Rose leans against your shoulder and sighs
“So where do we go from here?”
>That actually a pretty good question
>You still are working for the same business you have been
>You still live in the same apartment
>Maybe it’s time for a change
>”I have a few ideas, don’t worry. It will be great.”
“I’m not worried; I know we will be fine.”
>You stare off into the night sky
>Only time will tell where you shall end up
>But you have all the time in the world
>With her by your side…
 
 
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 Dakan 10/20/12/(Sat)08:24:37 UTC+9 No.5171624
Replies: >>5172032 >>5189024
 
>>5171574
Sorry for being short. But there wasn't much more. The rest is for the epilouge. Which will be later today.
 
Lyra update in a few, i just going to stop the vote now. Slender is the winner. Dont worry though Lyrafags, the side story will continue... just slender takes priority.
 
Slender update by the end of the weekend
 
 
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 Spart 10/20/12/(Sat)08:50:20 UTC+9 No.5172032
 
>>5171624
yay ! thank you so much Dakan
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/20/12/(Sat)09:34:26 UTC+9 No.5172659
 
>>5160449
Please post here!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/20/12/(Sat)12:27:47 UTC+9 No.5175589
 
 
File: 1350703667828.png-(482 KB, 960x828, 115474 - artist raikoh14 (...).png)
 
 
>>5132231
 
Thank you for your story sp far. Can't wait for the next part. Feeling alot from it.
 
 
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 Spart 10/20/12/(Sat)13:29:16 UTC+9 No.5176662
 
>>5167018
short after midnight bump
 
 
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 PonyGone !RAGT.LOVE. 10/20/12/(Sat)14:17:52 UTC+9 No.5177552
 
Thread still going? Cool beans
 
Gonna throw up more of my story then
 
 
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 PonyGone !RAGT.LOVE. 10/20/12/(Sat)14:32:32 UTC+9 No.5177800
Replies: >>5177939
 
>The morning sun's rays beamed down onto your cow.
>'Naw, its just hot...
>The hell?!
>Its WINTER!
>You throw the blankets off of you and see that ScrewBall was right next to you.
>Her mane was in a mess, and her breathe smelled...
Hey.
>"Whaaaat?"
Time to get up.
>"I don't wannaaaaaa."
...
>You get out of bed, ScrewBall clinging to your side.
Hey.
>She doesnt respond.
HEY!
>She crawls up your side, and lays on your head.
>"Queen's seat."
*sigh*
>"Whats for breakfast?"
>Breakfast? Hmm....
>You usually make pancakes, but now that you have another mouth to fill-
>Wait... Does this "thing" even eat pancakes?
>Shouldn't it eat like... Hay?
'Ya like Pancakes?
>Her eyes sparkle and gleam with joy.
>" I LOVE Pancakes!"
>You pick her off of your head and set her down on the couch.
>She begins to jump around, kinda like a child would...
>"YIPEEE!"
>As you reached down to grab the remote, you notice ScrewBall's hat next to it.
>Her... Twirly hat...
>You pick it up.
>She was flying around with this...
>You place it on your head.
>...
>"Haha! You look funny!"
>ScrewBall climbs up your back and onto your shoulders.
 
 
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 PonyGone !RAGT.LOVE. 10/20/12/(Sat)14:42:13 UTC+9 No.5177939
Replies: >>5178089 >>5178127
 
>>5177800
>"Kekeke"
>She places it on her own head.
>"Only the QUEEN OF EVIL can use the HAT OF-"
>You drop her.
>"HEY!"
>Time to make pancakes!
>You walk to the kitchen.
>"Quit ignoring your queen!"
>Preparing the delicious cakes of pan, you feel your pajama pants being tugged on.
>...
>She is JUST like a little girl!
>Needing ALL the attention.
Yes?
>She strikes a pose.
>...
What?
>She puts on a "disappointment" face.
>ScrewBall turns on the t.v. and watches Spongebob.
>Seriously she is going to be the end of you....
 
 
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 Spart 10/20/12/(Sat)14:51:48 UTC+9 No.5178089
 
>>5177939
hahahahaha
>ScrewBall turns on the t.v. and watches Spongebob.
nice played
 
 
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 PonyGone !RAGT.LOVE. 10/20/12/(Sat)14:55:02 UTC+9 No.5178127
Replies: >>5178593
 
>>5177939
Stopping earlier WAY EARLY then planned.
 
http://pastebin.com/K2n98cy6
 
 
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 Lyra's Magic Pt2: Filly's Tale Dakan 10/20/12/(Sat)14:59:45 UTC+9 No.5178189
Replies: >>5178203
 
>Rob lays in his bed on the edge of consciousness
>He slowly opens his eyes
>And there it still is
>An aquamarine unicorn
>He fall out of the bed out of surprise
>This wakes the sleeping unicorn
>It peeks over the side of the bed at the sprawled out Rob
“What are you doing down there?”
>Rob stares back at her blank expression
>”You don’t exist, you’re an impossibility.”
>Lyra laughs and shakes her head
“That’s what my friends said about humans!
>She hops down off the bed and stands next to Rob
“They are just an old filly’s tale! Humans don’t exist!”
>She beams down at Rob
“But yet here you are...”
“Or should I say, here I am…?”
“Where is here?”
Rob slowly gets to his feet
>”Um Chicago…”
>Lyra looks confused by his statement…
>”America?”
>Lyra shakes her head, not having an idea what Rob is talking about
>”Earth?”
“Oh, so that means…”
 
 
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 Lyra's Magic Pt2 Dakan 10/20/12/(Sat)15:00:45 UTC+9 No.5178203
Replies: >>5178220
 
>>5178189
>Rob interrupts her statement
>”I’m sorry, but I must be tripping or dreaming or something.”
>Lyra looks confused again
“What do you mean?”
>”I’m talking to a unicorn!”
“And I’m talking to a human! Isn’t it great?”
>Rob facepalms himself
>“You don’t understand animals don’t talk!”
“Of course animals don’t talk! But I’m not an animal; I’m a pony, huge difference!”
>Rob walks out of the bedroom and into the kitchen
>Lyra follows close behind
>”There is no difference, ponies are animals!”
“How dare you! Ponies may have our faults, but we are just like humans!”
>Rob shakes his head
>”You talk like I should know about you…”
“Well, don’t you?”
>”Why would we? There are stories about unicorns, but none of them talk!”
Lyra looks surprised and hurt by this
“You mean your stories aren’t about ponies and humans working together…”
>Rob moves to get a cereal box and a bowl
 >”Nope, no mention…”
>Lyra looks down at the floor
“Oh…”
>She looks at Rob as he pours himself a bowl
“You seem unphased for talking to something that you say shouldn’t exist…”
 
 
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 Lyra's Magic Pt2 Dakan 10/20/12/(Sat)15:01:31 UTC+9 No.5178220
Replies: >>5178231
 
>>5178203
>Rob shrugs and puts a spoonful of cereal in his mouth
>”I see at as two possibilities”
>He holds up one finger
>”One, you’re not real, this will end soon. No reason to freak out”
>He holds up a second finger
>”Two, you’re real, I have a talking unicorn named Lyra who can do magic. That’s awesome!”
>Lyra stares at the two fingers that Rob is holding up
>Rob notices her odd stare
>”What, what’s wrong about my fingers?”
“They are just so interesting…”
>”They are just fingers…”
>Lyra holds up her hooves
“I have hooves, everp0ny I know has hooves; they look so useful…”
>Rob picks up a handful of cereal and kneels down and offers it to Lyra
>Lyra smiles and walks over to Robs outstretched hand
>Just as Rob thinks Lyra’s going to do it he notices her horn begins to glow
>A spoon full of cereal floats down and into Lyra’s open mouth
>”Ok, I have hands, but you have magic”
>Lyra shakes her head
“It’s not that same, I can’t feel the object through magic
>Rob nods
>He grabs the bowl and an extra spoon and heads over to the couch
>He sits down and Lyra sits down next to him
>He looks over a Lyra’s peculiar posture
>It almost as if…
 
 
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 Lyra's Magic Pt2 Dakan 10/20/12/(Sat)15:02:15 UTC+9 No.5178231
Replies: >>5178253
 
>>5178220
>”You really are obsessed with humans”
>Lyra smiles at him
>Rob turns on the TV and what he sees surprises him
>Ponies
>Looks like this is real
>And he is not the only one
>Rob turns to Lyra who appears to be looking at his hand more intently
>”Your friends?”
>Lyra nods and continues to examine his hand
>She is surprised when he lifts it up and moves it towards her
>She doesn’t pull away from the touch of his fingers
>He runs his hand over her head and down through her mane
>She leans into his touch…
>”You seem to be obsessed with my fingers also”
“It feels so much better than hooves.”
>Rob pulls his hand away in surprise
>”Right…”
>They both continue to sit in silence and watch the news unfold
>Ponies on Earth, this is going to change everything…
 
 
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 Dakan 10/20/12/(Sat)15:04:01 UTC+9 No.5178253
Replies: >>5178593
 
>>5178231
End of Part 2
 
Epilouge later tonight of Rose.
 
Really liking the Screwball story PonyGone
 
 
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 Pinkie in Earth. Bizzles !RaPEMaNrwA 10/20/12/(Sat)15:31:34 UTC+9 No.5178577
Replies: >>5178655
 
>Day 3 in Earth.
>You are Pinkie Pie.
>And you are freezing.
>The Earth's crust isn't as fun as you thought it would be.
>You start to dig .
It is the only way out.
>You dig down with out realizing it.
>You begin to warm up.
"Oooooo, this isn't so cold, it-"
>You dig into a cavern of magma.
Bad End
 
 
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 Spart 10/20/12/(Sat)15:32:35 UTC+9 No.5178593
 
>>5178253
>>5178127
somewhat i'm happy that the paintball for sunday is canceled ...
but just because you guys work so hard for your readers
 
 
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 PonyGone !RAGT.LOVE. 10/20/12/(Sat)15:37:32 UTC+9 No.5178655
 
>>5178577
Lost mah sides
 
 
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 Flutter Shy in Earth Bizzles !RaPEMaNrwA 10/20/12/(Sat)15:41:00 UTC+9 No.5178702
 
>Day 8 in Earth.
>Twilight told you there would be nice animals here.
>Sadly, there doesn't seem to be any animals at all..
>Darkness.
>That is the only thing you are aware of.
"Oh my.. What am I going to do?"
>You begin to walk down the dark path a head of you.
>You start to get sleepy.
>Your breaths begin to get shallow.
>The natural gases take their tole.
Another Bad End
 
 
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 Tales of First Contact: Prologue One-Of-Three-Names 10/20/12/(Sat)17:29:43 UTC+9 No.5180238
Replies: >>5180241
 
 
File: 1350721783693.jpg-(21 KB, 270x274, First contact.jpg)
 
 
Alright guys, this is going to be crazy. I wrote a lot more than I expected. Here's to a promising start!
 
Your first day in Manehattan is going pretty well so far.
Sure, you know absolutely nop0ny here; and you have to find someplace to work within a week or you'll run out of money, but the stallion at the train station was very nice!
 
Manehattan is BIG. Really big, definitely the biggest city you've ever been in. You've been in big cities before; in fact they are usually where you get most of your jobs, but this place is an absolute maze! You can definitely understand why the map making business is so big here, and you're very glad that you purchased one. Not that it's helping much, you probably should have payed the extra five bits for the 'YOU ARE HERE' enchantment.
 
You levitate the map in front of you again and try to figure out where you are exactly, but it's all a jumble of cross streets and tiny labels that you cant make sense of. Maybe you should hire a guide or something, you saw a couple of them back at the train station. But going back the way you came strikes you as counterproductive, and your supply of bits is dangerously low as is. You really cant afford to spend money on anything you don't absolutely need, and if that means a couple of hours wandering around looking for the hotel you're supposed to be staying at then so be it. You're a grown mare now, if you get lost, then you'll just have to get un-lost using your uncanny sense of direction and keen problem solving skills! So what if you're in one of the biggest cities in Equestria that you've never been to before, and all the streets look the same, and its eerily quiet, and its starting to get dark, and oh Celestia you definitely need help.
 
 
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 Tales of First Contact: Prologue One-Of-Three-Names 10/20/12/(Sat)17:30:17 UTC+9 No.5180241
Replies: >>5180255
 
>>5180238
You sigh and fold up the map with your magic, slipping it into one of your saddlebags, and start looking around to try and find somep0ny who looks like they might be willing to help a poor filly out.
 
-And find that you're standing almost completely by yourself in the middle of a crossroads, with a growing crowd of ponies gathered in a circle around you. Many of them are muttering or whispering in hushed tones to each other, but all of them appear to be staring at you. Startled, you just sort of stand there blinking and looking at everyp0ny. Why were they all looking at you? Did you do something wrong? They don't seem angry. You must have done something really silly. You should have been looking where you were going! Stupid stupid stupid. Maybe you can just slip away and get lost in the crowd, forget any of this happened. You pause for moment when that thought hits you, furrowing your brow. Forget what though? What exactly had you done?
 
A loud crackling noise causes you to squeak in surprise and whirl around, then stiffen in shock. A sizable area of space about ten hoofsteps away appears to be rippling, as if in an exaggerated form of heat distortion. Not only that, but it appears to be radiating power in such a strange way you're shocked you didn't notice it before. Another crackle causes your fur to stand on end as the space seems to bend and warp further, even tearing open for an instant before smashing back together and producing that electric crackling sound. It takes a few seconds, but you manage to recover enough from the surprise to realize that whatever this thing is, it's likely dangerous, and that you should keep away from dangerous things. You start to slowly back away from the rippling space, keeping your eyes fixed on it as you do so.
This tendency to freeze when scared is probably going to get you hurt someday.
 
 
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 Tales of First Contact: Prologue One-Of-Three-Names 10/20/12/(Sat)17:30:54 UTC+9 No.5180255
Replies: >>5180263
 
>>5180241
BANG!
 
You feel your entire body lock up as the loudest sound you have ever heard reverberates through your skull. It actually takes you a moment to realize that you've just been blinded by a massive flash of light. You blink rapidly as sight slowly starts to return, along with a very high pitched ringing in your ears. You're just able to start making out the outlines of things again, when-
 
BANG! BA-BANG! BANG!
 
You think you might have screamed a little. Sun and stars that hurt your ears, and your eyes! What in Equestria is going on? You need to get out of here! You take a few blind steps forward, then remember that forward is going TOWARDS whatever the thing is, and hastily try to change direction mid-step, succeeding only in tangling your legs up and falling over. You start full on panicking now, and scramble to your hooves again, deciding to wait until your vision returns before running off into a wall somewhere. Blinking seems to hurry the process up somehow, or at least you think it does. It might just be your imagination, but you like to think that you're accomplishing something other than just standing here waiting.
 
Your hearing returns before your sight though. At first all you can make out is ringing, but soon enough you can hear muffled noises, and there's a lot of it. You cant make heads or tails of it at first, but then something clicks in your head. Screaming. Everyp0ny is screaming. Right about now seems a good time to start hyperventilating. You blink harder, almost jogging in place in your anticipation to get out of there. You can see large shapes moving around in front of you now, but not quite enough to trust yourself to run. You realize that there are voices speaking over the crowd, loud and powerful voices barking what you think are orders. You didn't notice them before, but they've been speaking the whole time. They sound very official. You really hope the police are here already.
 
 
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 Tales of First Contact: Prologue One-Of-Three-Names 10/20/12/(Sat)17:31:34 UTC+9 No.5180263
Replies: >>5180273
 
>>5180255
"-epeat, do NOT fire!"
 
"My God. What in the nine hells is this?"
 
"Definitely not what I was expecting."
 
"Doctor? Doctor!"
 
There's five of them, and they are huge. Much too large to be diamond dogs. They almost look like minotaurs, but they are definitely not minotaurs either, the proportions are all wrong. They each carry a long tube-like contraption with them in their hands, and they are wearing some kind of elaborate green body armor with large backpacks that you've never seen before. Their helmets are bulky things with round opaque orange reflective visors concealing whatever features lie beneath. You wonder how they can even see. Two have crouched down around the others facing outwards, and are pointing the tube-things at the surrounding ponies who are all desperately attempting to run away. You should probably try to run too, but you don't because your legs wont let you.
So you take solace in the fact that at least you know one thing for absolutely sure. They are definitely not the police.
 
One of the creatures who had been looking a little unstable suddenly falls over, and another one kneels down beside him.
 
"Doc is out cold, but his suit says he's fine."
 
"Typical." Another one says.
 
"What exactly ARE these things? They almost look like horses. Very small horses."
 
"Definitely intelligent at least, looks like we're in the middle of a city!" The one closest to you says.
 
"Sentient life. Good lord. I can almost understand why the doctor fainted."
 
"I don't think anyone expected this."
 
"What should we do? The doc was supposed to be the diplomat on the off chance we actually DID encounter any alien life."
 
 
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 Tales of First Contact: Prologue One-Of-Three-Names 10/20/12/(Sat)17:32:15 UTC+9 No.5180273
Replies: >>5180290
 
>>5180263
For some reason you find yourself transfixed, utterly fascinated with their conversation. It's like you're so scared that you've just overloaded. You cant do anything but stand there and stare.
 
"I guess.. We try and make first contact?" The creature crouching over the one they called 'Doc' says.
 
"They seem more interested in running away. Cant really blame them, we must look terrifying."
 
It was true, most of the other ponies had already vacated the area, but there are a few still stumbling around. Maybe they're still having trouble seeing. You notice quite a few pairs eyes peering out at the scene from the windows of surrounding buildings though.
 
"Not this one."
 
You snap your attention back to the creature closest to you, who you think is staring directly at you, but you cant tell with that bizarre helmet it's wearing. You really hope that's a helmet and not its face. It slowly lowers the tube-thing its carrying, letting it hang from its body with a strap. Then it raises its hands in what you assume is supposed to be a placating gesture. The things minotaurs have are called hands, right?
 
"Hey there. You're a brave one, aren't you?" The things voice takes on a softer tone as it takes a step towards you.
 
Finally it seems your brain is done being overloaded, and it permits you to feel the oncoming wave of fear wash over you in its full intensity. You find yourself shaking your head rapidly in response to the monsters question. You are definitely not a brave pony. You are just a terrified pony who is too stupid to run when you're supposed to.
 
 
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 Tales of First Contact: Prologue One-Of-Three-Names 10/20/12/(Sat)17:33:29 UTC+9 No.5180290
Replies: >>5180306
 
>>5180273
One of the other things near the back speaks "Jake, are you sure we shouldn't just-"
 
"Sshh." the creature who had been coming over to you shushes the other one. Apparently its name is Jake.
 
"Give yourself some credit." Jake says to you. You think it's a he, it sounds like one. "I probably would have run away screaming if I were in your place." You find yourself trembling as it takes another step towards you, then another.
 
"N-not from lack of trying." You are surprised to hear your own voice. Talking to this thing was just going to encourage it to come closer. Why cant you move your stupid hooves?
 
"It speaks English!?" One of the other monsters exclaims in surprise.
 
Jake actually chuckles a little, and confirms your worst fears by closing the gap between you entirely. It crouches down in front of you, bringing its head to almost the same level as yours. The most you can do is lean as far away from him as possible, still shaking with terror.
 
"As you might of heard from my friend Nichael over there, my name is Jake. Jake Armstrong. What's yours?" He says, pointing behind him with one of his hands appendages when he says the name 'Nichael'.
 
"What are you?" Instead of answering his question, you pose him one. You aren't even entirely aware of what you're doing at this point, it's as if your body is acting on autopilot. The entire situation has started to feel incredibly surreal. Is this even happening? Perhaps it's a dream. It certainly feels like one.
 
"I could ask you the same thing." He responds. "Though I suppose we are the uninvited guests here. Only polite for me to answer first." He reaches up to the side of his helmet and does something that causes the reflective orange part of his visor to slide up, revealing clear glass underneath.
 
 
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 One-Of-Three-Names 10/20/12/(Sat)17:34:35 UTC+9 No.5180306
Replies: >>5180333
 
>>5180290
You cant help but narrow your eyes and peer into the darkness inside his helmet, curiosity getting the better of your fear as you try to get a good look at his features. What you do see surprises you. It isn't the grotesque mottled thing you expected. Instead you see a smooth, hairless, blue eyed face smiling down at you. It's flat, entirely devoid of a muzzle aside from what you think is its nose that juts out slightly from the center of its face. It's overall design strikes you as very outlandish and streamlined. You might even say elegant.
 
Now that you know what they look like, some of their their names, even their gender, they seem a little more pony-like to you. Maybe they aren't here to harm you at all. You actually find yourself starting to calm down a little.
 
"I am a human being, and we are a species from another world. We came here through a rift in space as explorers, and we certainly didn't expect to find another sentient species here. I'm very sorry if we've scared you." His tone is soft, and kind. It reminds you of somep0ny you once knew.
 
"Mirror" You squeak.
 
"What?" Jake asks, tilting his head in his helmet.
 
"Mirror" You repeat, with a little more confidence this time. "M-my name is Mirror. But my friends call me Mira. I'm a unicorn." Then after a seconds pause you add "And this is Equestria."
 
Jake's smile becomes a grin. "Well, Mira of Equestria. May I take this opportunity to say that it is an absolute pleasure to meet you. And it is my greatest honor to extend to you on behalf of my entire race: Salutations and well wishes from the people of planet Earth!" He extends his hand towards you, still grinning and looking at you expectantly.
 
So, without having a clue of the meaning of what he just said, you slowly raise your hoof, and make first contact with Equestrias first alien visitor.
 
 
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 One-Of-Three-Names 10/20/12/(Sat)17:36:36 UTC+9 No.5180333
Replies: >>5180837 >>5180900 >>5181093 >>5182486
 
>>5180306
And that is all for now! It's still in Equestria, but next chapter will bring it to Earth.
 
Like I said before, that turned out much longer than I first intended. I wonder what I've gotten myself into.
 
Commends and feedback appreciated.
 
Pastebin is here: http://pastebin.com/u/One-Of-Three-Names
 
 
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 Dakan 10/20/12/(Sat)18:25:40 UTC+9 No.5180837
 
>>5180333
All I have to say is that triple 3 confirm, your here to stay. I like the story. Please continue
 
 
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 Spart 10/20/12/(Sat)18:32:09 UTC+9 No.5180900
 
>>5180333
haha nice
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/20/12/(Sat)18:58:06 UTC+9 No.5181093
 
>>5180333
Wow that was great I can't wait to see what happens next.
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Epilogue: Time Marches On Dakan 10/20/12/(Sat)20:31:32 UTC+9 No.5181594
Replies: >>5181600
 
>The sounds of running feet, hooves and laughter fill the house.
>You sit at the computer screen and stare at the blank page before you
>It’s not going to write itself
>You put your fingers to the keyboard and start typing
>’It has been roughly ten years since the day the Ponies came to Earth.’
>’Two years after their arrival they finally announced the truth to the rest of the world.’
>’Some of the population was outraged for being lied to for so long.’
>’They often wondered why the ponies hadn’t come out and told us outright.’
>’The ponies said that they had their reasons.’
>’Most of the population though looked upon the ponies with sympathy.’
>’An entire civilization that had lost their home to a climatic event.’
>’Although by the end of it nothing had really changed.’
>’It was soon after that announcement that we also discovered something new about ourselves.’
>’It was a shock that it wasn’t discovered before then, but most people contend that it needed time to sink in.’
>’The day the ponies came to Earth, magic also came with them…’
>’They say that only a third of the humans will develop some kind of magical ability.’
>’But it just goes to further show how the ponies have changed out world.’
>’Mostly for the better.’
>’Things are a lot more, friendlier.’
>’Sure there are still disagreements, but for the most part the world is a nicer place.’
>’Maybe what the ponies day is true.’
>’Friendship is Magic’
>’You are probably wondering about me and Rose’
>’Shortly after the wedding we sold my apartment in the city and moved out into the country.’
>’We found a tiny pony community and settled in there.’
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Epilogue Dakan 10/20/12/(Sat)20:32:30 UTC+9 No.5181600
Replies: >>5181605
 
>>5181594
>’Why a pony community?’
>’Well at the time, our marriage wasn’t exactly “legal” by human law.’
>’The ponies on the other hand were rather accepting of our marriage.’
>’It would be several years until interspecies marriages would be viewed as equal.’
>’But I think it was better that we moved where we did anyways.’
>’It allowed me and Rose to fulfill our dreams.’
>’It allowed Rose to start her garden again.’
>’She spends almost all of her free time there, singing to her flowers.’
>’When I’m not managing the business I often join her.’
>’I am not much of a gardener myself, but I love to listen to her sing.’
>’Almost forgot about the business.’
>’I finally figured out what would be perfect for me and Rose.’
>’When we moved to this community we bought and empty store front and set up a floral shop.’
>’Most of the ponies who live here come and order flowers mainly for food though.’
>’But, like us, there are a few humans that come in and will by the flowers for decoration.’
>’Rose grows our entire product line that we sell in her garden.’
>’And I get to enjoy running a business, like I have always dreamed.’
>Before you start on the next sentence the sounds of hooves and feet our right outside of your door way.
>In burst a tiny filly being chased by a little boy.
>They run around your office a bit before the filly jumps into your lap
“Daddy! Protect me!”
“No fair, you can’t have outside help!”
>You laugh a bit and put the filly back on the ground.
>”James, Marigold you both know you shouldn’t be running around the house like that.”
>They both look up at you will disappointment and answer in unison
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Epilogue Dakan 10/20/12/(Sat)20:33:24 UTC+9 No.5181605
Replies: >>5181611
 
>>5181600
“Sorry Dad.”
>”Its ok, go outside and play, just don’t leave the yard.”
>Before you know it James chasing Marigold out of the room and outside into the yard.
>You chuckle to yourself and turn back to your computer
>Now where were you…?
>’I suppose you are wondering about kids…’
>’About two years of being together me and Rose had given up on children.’
>’We figured that it was a long shot that two different species would be able to have kids anyways.’
>’That was until one day Rose started complaining about cramps’
>’She had been fighting a flu for about a week so we figured that it might be part of that.’
>’When the cramps didn’t go away we got worried and we decided to visit the doctor.’
>’He came back with amazing news.’
>’She was pregnant.’
>’We both couldn’t believe it.’
>’I honestly still don’t understand it until this day how it happened.’
>’A few months down the road Rose gave birth to our son, James.”
>’I was kind of surprised that James was human.’
>’But by then news was reaching us that other cross species relationships were having children.’
>’Both humans and foals.’
>’I made promise to Rose that we would try again for a foal.’
>’Two years later I delivered on that promise.’
>’Our daughter Marigold was born.’
>’I was surprised when Rose insisted on the name.’
>’But, I suppose it was for the best.’
>’Marigolds were my mother’s favorite flower.’
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Epilogue Dakan 10/20/12/(Sat)20:34:19 UTC+9 No.5181611
Replies: >>5181613
 
>>5181605
>’My mom and dad…’
>’My father never did come around to the idea of me and Rose together.’
>’Took his beliefs with him to the grave.’
>’I guess there is something to be said about a man who will stick by his beliefs.’
>’He was a stubborn man.’
>’My mother slowly accepted both of us.’
>’After my father’s death she made regular visits to our home, her and Katy both.’
>’She got to meet both of her grandchildren before her passing.’
>’Oh god how I wish she was still here…’
>’My sister eventually cleaned up her act.’
>’Got a community college degree.’
>’She works as a graphic design artist for some kind of company.’
>’The last time we talked she said she was dating a pony herself.’
>’A regular horsefucker family it seems.’
>You lean back in your chair and look out the window
>You kids are playing with Rob and Lyra’s son.
>You almost forgot
>’Rob and Lyra eventually got married and moved to the same town we did.’
>’Even with his college degree Rob got himself a job as a farm hand at the local apple farm.’
>’Lyra found herself performing in a local band.’
>’I didn’t even know she had musical talent.’
>’Must have been what the lyre means.’
>’Anyways they had a son, Philip.’
>’Lyra seemed perfectly fine with just having a human son.’
>’She is weird like that.’
 
 
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 The Roseluck Chronicles Epilogue Dakan 10/20/12/(Sat)20:35:04 UTC+9 No.5181613
Replies: >>5181637 >>5182234 >>5183522
 
>>5181611
>’Obsessed with humans from what Rose told me.’
>You hear the subtle sound of hoof steps behind you
>You know who’s there but you just like to give her the surprise that she wants
>You feel to hooves wrap round your neck from behind and her head rest on your shoulder
>You smile as the smell of roses fills the air around you.”
>”Hello sweetie, how are you?”
>She nuzzles the side of you face
”Doing well, just got finished in the garden; what are you writing?”
>”The story of our lives. I’m almost finished.”
“When you’re done come help me set up for lunch.”
>You turn your neck and she turns to face you
>You give her a kiss
>”I’ll be right there. Love you.”
>She smiles
>”Love you too.”
>She leaves the room, leaving her scent still on your shoulder
>Oh Celestia how you love that mare.
>You turn back to your writing.
>’That about covers the last ten years, but that isn’t the end of it’
>’I’m sure there are more stories that lie ahead for both of us.’
>’But for now, dear reader, this is the end.’
>You copy down what you have written a post it to the board
>The message ‘Post successful’ flashes on your screen.
>You get up and exit the room to go help your love.
>It feels like your life is just beginning…
 
 
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 Dakan 10/20/12/(Sat)20:38:52 UTC+9 No.5181637
Replies: >>5182227 >>5183146 >>5185161
 
>>5181613
End of Epilogue
End of TRC
 
Thank you all for reading and sticking with me. I really appreciate it. You know I was going to make a really long post about how it was writing Roseluck, but now it seems really redundant.
 
Lyra update:Tommorrow
Slender Start: Tommorrow
Super Secret Special Story?: ...
 
 
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 Spart 10/20/12/(Sat)22:14:24 UTC+9 No.5182227
 
>>5181637
wow great work Dakan
 
 
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 Esp !!F9TLlH7ntMb 10/20/12/(Sat)22:15:24 UTC+9 No.5182234
 
>>5181613
Brav-fucking-o
 
I loved it.
 
I wish more people would attempt PiE
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/20/12/(Sat)22:53:06 UTC+9 No.5182486
 
>>5180333
Awesome, I like it!
Hope see more in the future, I can't wait for the next part.
 
 
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 Anona 10/21/12/(Sun)00:05:05 UTC+9 No.5183146
 
>>5181637
i give you a standing ovation for a good and awesome story!!!!
hope to see more of your stories in the near future!
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/21/12/(Sun)00:42:35 UTC+9 No.5183522
Replies: >>5183551
 
>>5181613
Pastebin plox?
 
 
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 Spart 10/21/12/(Sun)00:45:21 UTC+9 No.5183551
 
>>5183522
http://pastebin.com/u/Fourdak
 
who ask shall receive
 
 
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 PonyGone !RAGT.LOVE. 10/21/12/(Sun)02:42:07 UTC+9 No.5185161
 
>>5181637
Super Secret Special Story?
Seems interesting
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/21/12/(Sun)04:16:36 UTC+9 No.5186582
Replies: >>5188896 >>5189024
 
>>5161403 add another vote for Lyra.
 
 
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 Anonymous 10/21/12/(Sun)06:02:39 UTC+9 No.5188896
Replies: >>5189024
 
>>5186582
add me for Lyrakins as well.
 
 
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 Dakan 10/21/12/(Sun)06:08:57 UTC+9 No.5189024
 
>>5186582
>>5188896
I'm sorry guys, but the vote was over way back here >>5171624
 
As I said though, don't worry, Lyra is still getting her time in the lime light. it is just not as long as Roseluck
 
BTW, probably going to go ahead and start the next thread, we are getting close to the bump limit. Any objections?