Had the story 'Smarty Disguise' ended with both human characters surviving, the story would have taken on a spy vs spy element.  This is a rough example of what I'd like to do.  I really don't like how this turned out, as detail and fluffy dialogue are so minimal.   >You are a fluffy abuser >You are also the smarty friend of a herd at the dump >You are late for work at the dump >You and your coworker, whom you refer to as 'the quiet guy' no longer serve any real function at the dump >The two of you raise the morale of your coworkers and inadvertantly cull the fluffy pony population >Coworkers never miss days anymore >You hurry to get to work >No telling what that quiet fuck is doing to your herd   >You arrive at your herd's camp >Your fluffies are stomping around, yelling, biting at things you can't quite make out >You grab one and demand to know what the hell they're doing >'Big fwuffy come!  Put shinies on fwoor, wake fwuffies up!  Fwuffy twy give owies, big fwuffy no see fwuffy!' >Shinies >You look closer at the ground and see there is copper wire everywhere >Your fluffies are biting at it >The wire leads out of your camp >The wire suddenly glows and all fluffies in your camp begin to scream and convulse >You dive off the wires and shield your eyes     >Smoke has cleared, time to survey the damage >Your fluffies are wandering around in a daze asking 'Where fwuffy?' >Foals that were touching the wire sizzle and pop >You catch a glimpse of the quiet guy standing next to what looks to be a dozen car batteries taped together >He salutes you comically then turns and begins slowly walking away >A fluffy tugs on your pant leg, asking 'Fwend?' >Quiet guy has reset most of your fluffies >He'll be bringing his herd to your camp soon enough >Your troops will be slaughtered >Worse yet, he'll declare this week a victory for him >You angrily stomp around your camp swinging a lead pipe, determined to not let that sorry bastard steal your kills >But then you get a better idea >He hasn't won yet >You grab five cowering fluffies by the tails and your backpack and begin running as fast as you can >You've got to beat him back to his camp   >You've arrived >He's already here, but he hasn't organized his raiding party yet >You still have a chance >You set your whimpering fluffs down, and open your backpack >A couple lengths of surgical tube >A small pylon >2 dozen fireworks >You giggle maniacly as you crisscross the tubing and tie the ends to whatever will hold them >You then place your pylon between the stretchy tubes >Your makeshift giant slingshot is ready >Now to prepare your ammo >You grab your first fluffy and dry jam a large firework up it's ass >'OWWWW!  WHY FWEND MAKE POOPIE PLACE HURTS?  TAKE OUT, TAKE OUT!' >It sobs hysterically as you load it into the pylon >The fuse sticks out the hole of the pylon >You see that the cries have garnered the attention of the quiet guy >You curse your luck, light the fuse and launch the squealing fluffy into the air >He screams into the air >You see him looking around then hear him yell 'Fwuffy fwying?  FWUFFY FWYING!  YAYYYYY!' >As he turns and begins his journey back down to earth, the rocket portion of your firework ignites >Fluffy pony is now streaking towards the ground at five times the speed he went up >He crashes into the ground in the middle of the quiet guy's camp, causing numerous fluffs to start stomping on him >That's when the first dazzling explosion happens >The aggressor fluffs are blown back in a shower of purple sparks as an ear splitting crack breaks the eardrums of all fluffs in the camp >Quiet guy is in a full tilt run towards your slingshot >As fast as you can, you load the next three fluffs and launch them to similar fates >Last one, and you don't feel like carrying any fireworks back   >As you fire the last one, the quiet guy finally reaches you >But it's pointless >He can only attack your fluffies >And the only fluffy you had is now a fluffy harbringer of fiery screaming death >The two of you stand shoulder to shoulder as the final fuse ignites >The first four fluffy fireworks shook the camp up, but casualties were few >You put your hands in front of your face just in time to see a sparkling mushroom cloud erupt from quiet guy's camp >Fluffy bodies rain down from the sky >Car windshields shatter from the fluffy hailstorm >Fluffy sized tidal waves from fluffies landing in stagnant pools of water >As your hearing slowly returns to you, you hear soft crying coming from quiet guy's camp >You both approach to assess the scene >A few fluffies stumble and lurch around the camp babbling 'Where fluffy?' >Crimson stains form beneath their eyes and ears >A fluffy grabs at your pant leg, repeating it's question and asking if you are a friend >You kick it in the stomach >It cries as it flies backwards and lands in the remains of some fluffsploded dams and their cripy foals >Both camps have fluffies that no longer comprehend their surroundings >Both camps have cooked baby fluffies just waiting to be eaten by other fluffies >Quiet guy asks if we can call this a draw and just go find new herds >You nod, and tell him you'll see him tomorrow