Excellent journal entry opening, you brought up and explained many problems and dismissed the issues by explaining them as being from propaganda/brain washing/fear mongering The magical folding armor makes a comeback, not sure I like that plate armor folds up neatly, seems like that would induce stress points on the joints and lead to issues with protection Tragic past for Bernard is tragically forced. Do tell me he will become the man in the black mask later and get revenge Enclave wide active lying and info control in effect based on Grace’s words, I find this entertainingly topical but for reasons well separate from your writing. You handled that seen well, continue to write like that. Huh good thing I didn’t call that caterer for the family reunion. Would hate to have lost the deposit on such a thing. Good world development there, explains the shoot first attitude, low population and general hostility of the region with the invasion by the Enclave. This radio they have so much faith in, did they ever ensure its functioning ahead of time? From the way you are writing, it sounds like it’s a comfort item more than an actual rescue device. On wings of vengeance we ride To rescue this buck’s foal Glory and honor shall be ours And lesbian sex shows for all Bernard is, interesting. You developed him much better than most character tragics. Oh you, going off and making a valiant stab at the tyranny of undergarments. Work on it better, I laughed more than anything for its certain awkwardness with phrasing. Have fun though with reading clopfics, I suggest fading to black as more sanity preserving. Ah Redeye, the pony the wastes need, and frequently deserve. All hail the power of industry and the titan it has wrought from the base mother earth Happy snow playing fun, well done Walking, walking, walking roll clip! http://youtu.be/Wl7B034tVKg?t=3m15s Ouch the terminal entry, you wrote like something I could see in the game. Zombies, Ghouls everywhere! And now we have somepony capable of dexterity checks Good show with the horde clearing of the ghouls