Title:           BP's first and second stories
Author:          BadPacing
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First Edit:      Sunday 3rd of November 2013 05:57:25 PM CDT
Last Edit:       Sunday 3rd of November 2013 05:57:25 PM CDT

I was drunk when I wrote my first story. It was post 5371161.
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maybe this will help the writefags get juices flowing and such
 
>day 192 in equestria
>you work odd jobs for the mane six for bits
>you hear a knock on the door
>you open the door
>see yellow quiet
>yellow quiet looks at you
>can i come in?
>she says
>um, if thats alright
>you haven't been raped by her yet, so you agree
>she enters
>she starts shaking
>you have never allowed her to be this close
>so very close
>spaghetti starts falling out of her pockets
>you look at the floor
>you just mopped it
>kick yellow quiet out
fucking yellow quiet
 
fin
 
My second story was about half an hour later. 5371440
 
>be me
>forever alone in equestria
>day 201
>you work for the mane six for bits
>only the yellow quiet one shows you any attention
>purple smart gave up on you
>she has nothing left to learn from a monkey
>blue fast is also uninterested
>you cant fly, and you arent athletic enough
>you live comfortably enough
>its your day off
>you have saved enough for a treat for yourself
>meat
>you have longed for meat for a long time
>occasionally you get some fish
>but, to the the good stuff you have to go underground
>to the bad part of ponyville
>its far
>can you make it without yellow quiet detecting your presence?
>you wonder
>that doesn't matter now
>its been too long, far too long
>you put on your hat and stand by the door
>you breathe heavily
>will this be a good day?
>you throw it open
>no yellow quiet... for now
 
1/?
>you begin walking
>not making eye contact with anyone
anyp0ny
>you correct yourself, half amused at your mistake
>the ponies ignore you
>you move with purpose
>you start to get that feeling... that dreded feeling
>you look around calmly
>nothing... just your imagination
>you too paranoid
>there it is again
>you do a 180 as fast as you can
>nothing
>you start walking again but bump into... it
>um, sorry about that
>yellow quiet says
>im just on my way to the market
>you smirk at her
me too
>suddenly you realize your mistake
>you hope she didnt catch that
>um, we could go together, if thats alright
no yellow quiet, I have... other errands to run first
>she looks down
>okay
>and runs off
>you sigh, that was too close
 
2/?
>a few minutes later you are there
>the house is run down and decrepit
>it looks like it smells
>you knock, and two eyes peer back
>the door opens, you have been here before
>no words are exchanged
>no names
>you put your bits on the table
>usually a griffon would push a small bag back toward you
>not this time
>the door closes behind you
what do you want?
>we've decided its more profitable to keep you here
>that voice
>you know that voice
>the apple family has needs, and selling scraps of meat doesn't pay the bills
>a bag goes over your head
>the last thing you feel is the ground
 
3/?
>you wake up
>theres a fire going, and it looks dark outside
>how long have you been out?
>you look around
>the room is dirty
>the bed is stained with blood, and... other fluids
where the fuck am i?
>you go for the door
>locked
>of course
>the window is boarded up.
>you look around for a weapon
>nothing
>why didn't they tie you up?
>you hear a click at the door
>too late, you've wasted your time and now they are here
>the door is unlocked, but it stays closed
>get in the corner the voice says
>... applejack says...
you wont get away with this
>get in the corner anon!
>applejack yells more forcefully this time
>you can take on a pony... maybe two
>you cant fight a griffon
>you grab the threadbare sheet from the bed and cover yourself up
>you comply
alright! what do you want?
>the door opens
>isn't it obvious sugar?
>apple jack and rarity enter
>their eyes... you have never seen animals so hungry
 
4/?
 
>they eye you
>rarity is foaming at the mouth
>you could cut the air with a knife
>now anon, yer gonna be our prize attraction
>apple jack says while walking around
>never lowering her eyes
>and we will keep you around as long as you work for us
and if i refuse?
>rarity smirks
>lets just say, you wont fit in a small box when we are done with you
>silence
>your move
>you throw the sheet at them and charge
>purple magic surrounds you
>you are thrown against the wall
>you try to move, but the magic is too strong
>you brute! we will need to teach you some manners first
>apple jack walks up to you slowly
>she puts her muzzle up to your sides
>you feel her hot breath against your skin
>ah dont want to have to teach you a lesson anon
>she puts her teeth into your side
>she bites slowly, always keeping eye contact
>a sharp pain shoots through your body
>she stops, waiting for you to scream
>always looking
 
5/?
>you clench your teeth
>you eyes are closed
>you can feel a warmness flowing
>terrified
STOP!
>you look down
>she smiles at you
>she has spared you, for now
What are you doing you crazy bitch!?
>applejack bucks you
>you can't breathe
>rarity lets you fall to the ground
>you cough, you feel a warm mist
>rarity walks over to you
>you are holding your sides
>your wound doesn't look too bad
>rarity is now over you
>you smell her sweet dampness
>this doesn't have to be so hard anon
>she growls
>we just want you to use you as we will
>you try to grab her
>magic again surrounds you
>you cant move
>do you understand?
>silence
>DO YOU UNDERSTAND?
>again silence
>you can feel your hands being crushed
>I will not ask again
>applejack is across the room
>the fire casts horrific shadows across her face
>she is touching herself
yes
>you squeak out
>I didn't quite catch that anon
YES
>marvelous
 
6/?
>you can feel the pressure around your hands decreasing
>you still cant move
>the magic forces you onto your back
>rarity positions you with your head toward apple jack
>can this really be happening?
>rarity squats over you
>her juices drip onto your face
>i dont think i need to explain that you WILL behave yourself
>rarity laughs
>apple jack moves closer
>always looking
>you nod
>good
>she lowers herself onto you
>forces her marehood onto your mouth
>the magic releases slowly
>now pleasure me
>you are breathing heavily
>they are in full control
>there is nothing you can do
>dont keep her waiting applejack says
>drool escapes from her mouth
>shes nearly on top of you
>the fire is hotter now than ever
>you close your eyes
 
7/?
>you move your mouth to please her
>please rarity
>your former friend
>shes overflowing
>you can barely contain her juices
>you cough
>you are so dirty
>rarity says deeply
>you are
>you are so dirty
>you look up
>your vision is foggy
>your eyes are watery
>from you or her? that doesn't matter now
>maybe they will let you go after this?
>rarity is panty heavily
>she forces herself onto you even harder now
>apple jacks face is just above yours
>she likes what he sees
>raritys legs clench you
>you can feel her magic fading
>shes shaking
>you cant take it any longer!
>she lets out a shriek of pleasure
>you choke from her juices
>she lazily rolls off of you, breathing heavily
>very good... very good anon
>apple jack moves over you
>her eyes burn with lust
 
8/?
>that might be fine for rarity there
>but i prefer the real deal
>apple jack rubs her face against yours
>any other day you would have liked that
>she nibbles at your ears
>she slowly moves down your body, kissing every few inches
>raritys magic isn't holding you down
>whats the point
>you will never be able to face them again
>who are the authorities going to believe?
>two upstanding ponies that saved all of equestria
>or you? some monkey?
>shes arrived at the goods
>she starts licking you
>enjoying your taste
apple jack stop
>her eyes turn to you
>that look
>please ms apple jack
>she smiles, and returns to her prize
>ah thought i made myself clear earlier
>her teeth tighten on the only thing you have left
no one has to know about this. i wont tell anyone
>she looks up
>i know you wont
>we will make sure of that
>against you will, your manhood has risen for the task at hand
>she climbs on top of you, relishing your fear and disgust
 
9/?
>Apple jack lowers herself on to you
>she teases you with her juicy parts
>you can still stop this
>you try to push her off
>she feels you struggle, and stomps your chest
>you gasp for air
>you cant stop me anon
>dont even try
>your pained breathing amuses her
>enough anon, this is going to happen
>whether you want it or not
>you feel her slowly squeezing down on you
>she lets out a sigh of pleasure
>you're bigger than i imagined
>she smiles
>she begins moving up and down
>you shouldnt be enjoying this
>ponies are disgusting
>animals
>she leans down on you
>forcing everything against your body
>you feel her hair against you
>you shouldnt be enjoying this
>your breathing matches hers
>faster now
>the room is spinning
>you grunt as you release your seed into her
>she stops bucking, enjoying every moment
>after a few moments she gets up
>rarity throws a towel at you
>clean yourself up
>they leave
>and you...
>just lay there...
10?
>day one
>you wake up on the bed
>you dont remeber getting off the floor
>was it just a dream?
>no
>this is the same room you were in last night
>where they, enjoyed you
>you have time to think now
>you remeber when you first came to equestria
>they were all so helpful
>all of the ponies
>especially apple jack and rarity
>tears well up in your eyes
>a knock at the door
>you back away
Go away!
>no answer
>a small plate is pushed under the door
>meat
>thats what you came here for
>you sob
>the dish goes cold
 
11/?
>day two
>there has to be some way you can get at the fire
>you have been looking at it
>obsessing over it
>its is behind a locked grate
>if you could just get a small ember
>...
>your thoughts are interupted by a knock at the door
>your meal
>you return to the fire
>starting at it
>worshiping it
>you can hear training going on in the next room
>you cringe
>that laughter
>you will never forget that sound
>how quickly will that pony be broken? you wonder
>another knock
>rarity walks in, with another
>you dont bother to see who
>you throw yourself to the other side of the room
>away from them
>now, now anon. that is no way to act in front of a customer
>you look up
not you...
anyone but you
>there she is
>flutter shy
>hmmm, it seems i wasnt a good enough teacher
>rarity says
>shes amused at your spirit
>then i suppose we will have to tie you up
>she uses her magic to throw you on the bed
>ropes tie themselves around your limbs
>have fun
>rarity smiles
>flutter shy replies
>oh, im sure we will, wont we anon
>she can barely contain her excitement
 
12/?
 
grimdark is over? thats boring
day 2 cont
 
>rarity closes the door
>you and flutter shy look at eachother
please help me flutter shy
>she looks down
>she walks toward you
flutter shy?
>she wont make eye contact
>shes breathing heavily
>her eyes are watering
>i cant bare to see you like this
>she says slowly
>i wanted to have you so bad
>but not like this
>she climbs on the bed
>you pull away as best as you can
>she lays her head on your chest
>i want to help you
>you relax
>she hasnt moved
>i just needed to make sure
>i didnt think they were serious
>she says
get help flutter shy
>quiet, they expect us to be
>she blushes
>doing it
>you nod
>ive paid for you all night
>you nod
>she looks up at you and smiles
>you cant hold back your tears
>she puts her head against yours
 
13/?
>day 3
 
>fluttershy is gone
>you are no longer tied to the bed
>its only a matter of time now
>until you are rescued
>just play along you tell youself
>you wait
>its night
>a knock at the door
>twilight sparkle enters
>she looks at you
>fluttershy told me everything
>you smile
finally!
>yes, we heard... everything
a dark voice adds
 
>a sack is thrown toward you
>you hear squeaks and crying
>rarity and apple jack enter
>they are covered in blood
what did you mosters do?!?!
 
>apple jack begins
>we coulda had so much fun
>you coulda had any pony you wanted
>but you had to throw it all away
>ah would have liked keeping you around
>they all smile
 
>rarity pulls out a small box
 
>you dont resist
 
>its over
 
>all over
 
fin
 
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