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- "If we do become elite guards, what do you think would be in store for us?" Echo asked the group.
- >Side by side, she walked with the other two ponies as they trekked through the dark tunnel.
- >"Well, there's initiation," Night Watch said, smirking,
- <"That's a myth, and that's false," Mosina retorted from the middle of the three.
- >"I heard one mare couldn't walk for days," Night said, disturbingly dreamily.
- "What about the incursions? The Princesses have been running all around the kingdom taking care of those," Echo said.
- >"Of course. And that would mean we would have to be by their side," Mosina added.
- >"Feh, you guys are no fun." They all chuckled.
- >As they walked, the walls continued to fan outwards slightly.
- >Eventually, the girls found themselves able to outstretch their wings, easily.
- >"How long have we been at it, now?" Night Watch asked.
- "I'd say a little over an hour and a half, now," Echo guessed.
- >"I wish we had some sort of watch," Mosina said, quietly.
- >They continued to walk in silence, and out of the darkness, strange, stringy-like substances began to hang from the ceiling.
- >The bat ponies kept their gazes upwards as the concentration of the strands of white thickened.
- >Eventually, it became so thick that they stuck together and hugged the walls.
- "Webs..." Echo said, uneasily.
- >She cast a quick glance to the other two, noticing their uneasy looks.
- >"Sh-should we turn back? Maybe we aren't ready for this," Mosina suggested.
- >"I say we continue. Didn't come this far for nothing," Night Watch said.
- ---
- "Night Watch is right. Let's just continue, and if there's something we can't handle, we'll head back," Echo said.
- >That seemed to ease the tension, a bit.
- >Mosina gave a slight gasp, having stepped on a web.
- >The ceiling, walls and floor were now covered in webs.
- >"This isn't really to capture prey," Mosina said, shakily. "It's to help the spiders move around quicker."
- >Night Watch gave a sigh.
- >"I suppose that means we're up for a chall--"
- >The hallway finally spanned out into a large room, the light from Night Watch and Echo bathing its entirety.
- >Every surface was covered with webs.
- >"Should we turn ba--"
- >Mosina was cut off as two large stones, hanging from the ceiling, unfurled their legs and landed on the ground.
- >Immediately, all three of the bat ponies drew their weapons.
- >Mosina and Night Watch pointed their spears forwards, the silvery blade of Night Watch's reaching out further than Mosina's.
- >Echo couldn't help but pass a glance to the gleaming weapon and its thin and long blade.
- >She snapped to attention after hearing another two thuds.
- >Two more rock spiders joined their comrades, each of them giving out ugly hisses.
- >"It's only four of them," Night Watch muttered. "We can take them."
- >"Right," Mosina said, mustering a stance for a fight.
- >Echo cracked her neck and gave a swing of her sword.
- ---
- >The four spiders kept their distance, wary of Mosina and Night's sears, who were flanking Echo.
- "Their skin is made of rock!" Echo told the others. "The only soft spot is its mouth, between the fangs!"
- >Night Watch lunged forward, aiming a spear thrust towards one of the spiders, but it dodged to the side.
- >She sliced her spear towards another, which jumped over the blade and towards her.
- >It collided with her face, but she quickly threw it off of her and across the room, running to chase after it.
- >Another spider lunged towards Mosina, who batted it away with her spear.
- >The two of them circled each other, looking for an opening.
- >The final two spiders quickly skittered towards Echo, who helplessly swung her sword to dissuade her attackers.
- >One leaped at her, but it smashed into the plate armour of her ride side.
- >It bounced off, but allowed the other one to come up from her front.
- >She sliced at it, swinging her blade through air before the spider met her face.
- >It wrestled her with its front legs, gripping onto her neck and attempted to pull its fangs towards her.
- >Echo sliced diagonally, hacking off one of its legs.
- >At the other side of the room, Night Watch sliced fiercly at her spider, only for it to hop out of the way.
- >It tried to leap at her, but met the butt end of her spear, sending it sprawling across the floor.
- >Night Watch leaped herself, giving a loud grunt as she smashed her spear downwards at it.
- >The spider tried to dodge, but couldn't get out of the way fast enough.
- >In a brilliant display of deep, blue sparks, the long blade of Night Watch's spear sliced through all four of its right legs.
- >She paused, caught off guard from the bright effect, and at how easily her blade minced through the rocky spider.
- >It squirmed, helpless without half of its legs.
- >"Grraah!" Night Watch screamed, thrusting her spear through the entire body of the decapitated spider.
- >In another display of blue sparks, the silver blade of the spear pierced the rocky hide with ease.
- ---
- >Echo continued to wrestle with the spider latching onto her front.
- >She tried to swing her blade, but the tight grip of the spider's front legs prevented her from moving her neck.
- >Placing her front hooves on the spider's body, she tried to pry it off of her, but couldn't.
- >It tried to thrust its fangs forward, but her hooves forced it back.
- >"Echo!" Mosina called from nearby.
- >Off to the side, she watched Echo through the corner of her eye while keeping her own spider at bay.
- >She tried to make a sprint to help Echo, but the spider blocked her path.
- >It lunged, but she jabbed back, forcing it to keep its distance.
- >They circled each other, locked in a stalemate.
- "Gaah!" Echo cried, the second spider jumping onto her back.
- >She tried to buck with her hind hooves, but it held tightly.
- "Help!" she helplessly called out, hammering the spider in front of her with her front hooves to no avail.
- >That was until she felt a pair of sharp, wet fangs dig into the back of her neck.
- "Aaaugh!" Echo screamed, her front hooves relenting a bit.
- >Venomous liquid injected into the back of her neck, and she could feel it burn her flesh immediately.
- >Her streangth weakened, the spider in front of her took the opportunity to overpower her.
- >However, it exploded in a flash of blue sparks.
- >The blade of Night Watch's spear decapitated its head, nearly missing Echo's own.
- >The spider fell limp to the ground.
- >Twirling her spear above her, Night Watch brought it down for another deadly slice towards the spider on Echo's back.
- >It sliced it in half in another explosion of blue sparks, sending it flying across the room in pieces.
- >Mosina looked up from the spider underneath her hooves, her own spear impaling it through the mouth.
- >She pulled her weapon out and rushed over to Echo quickly.
- ---
- >The venom quickly overtook her body, and Echo slumped to the floor in a twitching mess.
- "G...gah..." she muttered, her lungs out of breath.
- >Her eyes were clenched tight while she dealt with the pain.
- >Two large holes were embedded into the back of her neck.
- >Her coat was slick with sweat.
- >"Echo!" Mosina screamed, landing beside her on the floor.
- >"Quick, her saddlebags!" Night Watch said.
- >Mosina quickly undid Echo's left saddlebag, pulling out one of the glass flasks.
- >She unscrewed the cap and forced it into Echo's mouth, who just continued to twitch.
- >"Tilt her head back, she's in shock!" Night Watch said.
- >Mosina promptly did so, forcing the red liquid down Echo's throat.
- >Echo gagged, but accepted the healing potion.
- >Her eyes shot open, and her twitching lessened.
- >Eventually, she accepted the flask into her own hooves and drank it greedily.
- >Her breathing steadied and the twitching slowed to a stop, until she finished the potion entirely.
- >Mosina and Night Watch stared, their eyes full of concern.
- >"Echo, are you alright? Can you talk?" Mosina asked, placing a hoof on her shoulder.
- "Y... yeah... guh..." Echo breathed, wiping her sweaty brow with a hoof.
- "I think I need to rest a bit..."
- >Mosina nodded.
- "I think the pain is almost completely gone. Those potions work fast," Echo said.
- >"We can rest. We've had a long walk, anyways," Mosina added.
- "I'm exhausted."
- ---
- >Night Watch dropped her spear and sat, pulling her weapon close.
- >"You gave us a scare," she said, simply.
- "Yeah, well, it was really painful. I couldn't do anything--not even breath, or open my eyes," Echo responded.
- >"It's alright, now. Just rest," Mosina said. "I think that was the half-empty flask."
- >She confirmed by searching through Echo's bags and finding the full flask.
- "I guess that means a half potion can heal most wounds," Echo said.
- >"I guess so. Though, I don't like that you had to be the guinea pig, sort of," Mosina said, sort of.
- >Echo laughed.
- >Night Watch examined her spear, showing a particular fascination to the blade.
- >"This isn't ordinary steel," she said, earning a glance from the other two.
- >"What do you mean?" Mosina asked.
- >Night Watch stood up on her hind legs, taking the spear in her front hooves.
- >"It sliced through those spiders like butter when it shouldn't have," she said, casting a glance to one of the corpses.
- >"And when it came in contact with them, I could feel it almost drive itself through."
- >"Magic?" Mosina breathed.
- >"Probably. I guess this spear has some sort of special power," Night Watch responded.
- >She demonstrated by slicing at the nearby spider corpse.
- >Mosina and Echo watched in awe as blue sparks erupted from the blade on contact with the corpse.
- >After the sparks died out, the corpse was in half with Night Watch's spear in the middle.
- >"Very interesting. And the blade isn't wearing?" Mosina suggested.
- >Night Watch brought the blade in close to examine it.
- >"No, nothing. Though, this was only our first fight with it," she said.
- >"Well, with rocks for targets, you'd expect some damage," Mosina said.
- >She stood up and walked towards Night Watch, the two of them examining every inch of the weapon.
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- >Echo felt weak and unable to move.
- >The powerful venom probably cancelled out the energy boost that the healing potion gave.
- >Giving a deep sigh, she scanned the room, only to see nothing but white spider webs covering every surface.
- >Curiously, there were some protrusions in the webs that could be hidden objects or rocks, underneath.
- "Hey, guys. Maybe there is loot in the room?" she asked.
- >Mosina and Night Watch looked up at Echo.
- "Maybe a chest was buried under the webs, somewhere."
- >The other two then curiously scanned the room.
- >"Huh. Perhaps," Night Watch said, suddenly interested.
- >Mosina and her picked up their spears and began to walk around the room, looking for large protrusions in the webs.
- >Night Watch stopped before an oval shape as large as her and sliced through its webs, only to find a large rock.
- >Mosina did the same to another, only to come to another rock.
- >Echo watched the two intently, too tired to get up, herself.
- >For several minutes, they continued to cut through webs until Mosina's spear hit something that sounded metal.
- >"Here! I think I found something!" she called out.
- >She pulled away the webs while Night Watch rushed over, revealing a dull, metal surface.
- >With Night Watch's help, they hacked away at the remaining webs until a large, metal chest revealed.
- >It seemed to be nearly as large as the two of them, combined.
- "What is it?" Echo called out.
- >Mosina walked in front of the chest, putting her hooves beneath the heavy lid.
- >After a little struggle, Night Watch came in and helped her shove it off of the chest.
- >It slid to the floor with a loud clang of metal on stone, but the two bat ponies stared wide eyed at the chest's contents.
- ---
- >Resting flat on top of what seemed to be a black leather cuirass was a long, silver straight sword.
- >Its hilt was decorated with ornate embroidery, which extended with a wavy, silver vine down the blade.
- >Underneath Night Light's light crystal, it shone brilliantly into their awe-struck faces.
- >"Wow... that's beautiful..." Mosina said quietly.
- >"I think it's similar to my spear," Night Watch said, holding up her weapon to compare.
- >The two blades seemed to be made out of the same silvery metal, and had the same style of embroidery.
- >"Echo, I think we've found you a new weapon," Night Watch said, smiling.
- ---CHAPTER 9---
- >"Alright, now..." Mosina muttered, biting down on a leather strap on Echo's side.
- >She gave it a quick tug, tightening it against Echo's new garments.
- >"There we go! I salvaged the important parts of your plate armour and fit it over your new stuff."
- >Echo twisted, trying to get a good look at what she was wearing.
- >A black leather suit, similar to Mosina's, covered most of her form.
- >Fastened over it were the metal plates from her old armour.
- "At least my neck is protected, now," she said, smiling.
- >"Hopefully you'll stop getting injured, then." Night Watch laughed.
- >Echo stretched and walked in small circles, testing out the fit.
- "It's a little tight on the haunches," she blushed, instinctively avoiding Night Watch's smirk.
- >"Not much we can do about that," Mosina said. "As long as it's not too bothersome."
- "No, it's fine."
- >Echo stopped, taking a deep breath before swaing a bit.
- >"Think you can walk, now?" Mosina asked.
- "Give me a few more minutes," Echo breathed, sitting down. "Sorry, guys."
- >"It's no problem," Mosina responded.
- >"I could use a little longer for a breather, myself," Night Watch agreed.
- >The two of them sat and joined Echo, her light crystal and Night Watch's continuing to bathe the room in light.
- >On the opposite side of the room from where they came was another tunnel leading into the darkness.
- ---
- "What else do you think we'll encounter?" Echo asked.
- >Mosina's nose scrunched up before she opened her mouth to answer.
- >"Well, I'm willing to bet that those spiders were just the first. There's probably more to come."
- >Echo shuddered.
- >"Don't worry, you have your shiny new weapon, now," Night Watch said.
- >With that, Echo slowly pulled out the silver sword from the scabbard on her shoulder.
- >It gleamed against the white light from the light crystals.
- >She placed it on the ground in between the trio, each of them fixing their gaze onto it.
- "So, weapons apparently have special powers down here," Echo said.
- >"Yeah. I'm going to guess that the metal on these blades have special penetrating powers," Night said while smirking.
- >Mosina rolled her eyes.
- >"Or, they could be specifically enchanted to be effective against the rock spiders. Or rock creatures in general," she countered.
- >"Meh."
- "Spirit guardians, enchanted weapons... I wonder what other sort of perks we'll come by," Echo thought out loud.
- >"Don't get my hopes up for super powers," Night Watch joked.
- >"Actually," Mosina said, edging herself closer to the other two. "I haven't gotten hungry or thirsty since we've gotten here, to the Trials."
- >A moment of silence washed over them as they came to the same realization.
- >"...I remember overhearing some veterans talking about their Trials, and how they could block or parry impossibly tough blows," Night Watch added.
- >Echo stared at her.
- "So, we do get super powers?" she asked. Night Watch giggled.
- >"I hope we get complimentary tight--"
- >"We'll just have to see," Mosina cut in.
- ---
- >"Well, I call the pseudo name, 'Bat Mare'," Night Watch stated.
- >Echo and Mosina visibly gagged.
- >"Echo, yours can be 'Sex--'"
- "I think I'm ready to walk, now," Echo interrupted, loudly.
- >She picked up her sword and sheathed it, prompting Mosina to stand up after her.
- >"You guys are no fun," Night Watch whined before standing up herself.
- >"Seriously. We're three hot mares, alone in--"
- >"I wish there were a mute functionality in the Trials," Mosina said, falling behind Echo who took the lead.
- "Me, too," she agreed.