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Trials 25

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  1. Read this story and all of its chapters in paragraph format with better editing, here:
  2. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/129684/the-trials
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  4. This version of the story is heavily unedited.
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  8. >With a little tug, Gloomie fit the white leather hood-cap over her head.
  9. >"And that's it. This is all incredibly comfy."
  10. >She twisted her body and stretched out her legs, feeling her new leather armour morph itself around her body.
  11. >"Mmf..." purred a voice from behind her.
  12. >"Night Watch."
  13. >"White really shows your curves more," the ogling mare said, flashing a toothy grin at Gloomie who turned around.
  14. >"I'm walking last in line from now on," Gloomie retorted, frowning.
  15. >"I call being in the middle," Mosina edged in.
  16. >Night Watch chuckled. "No fun. You guys are no fun."
  17. >Mosina took a deep breath. "You all ready to move on?"
  18. >She cast a glance to Gloomie in paricular.
  19. >"Heck, yeah! I feel energized now, even after those darts."
  20. >Gloomie practically hopped in place, her body movements notably silent. "Geez, I feel like I could run for miles in this thing!"
  21. >"Ah, about those darts..." Night Watch interrupted, her brows lowering into a serious expression.
  22. >She pointed to the sunken stone tile in the middle of the room that had triggered the trap. "Take a look at that pressure plate."
  23. >"Huh." Curiously, Mosina walked over to it with a surprisingly giddy Gloomie in tow.
  24. >Upon seeing the carved, laughing face on the stone plate, her eyes widened. "...Disturbing."
  25. >"What is that?" Gloomie asked, finally standing still and dipping her head to examine the carving.
  26. >"It's the same face that was carved onto the wooden keys we used to get to the giant spiders," Mosina answered, adjusting her spectacles.
  27. >Gloomie pursed her lips. "Well that's dumb."
  28. >Mosina looked to her with a questioning glance.
  29. >"If all the trap plates are labeled with this, then we know what not to touch."
  30. >"Hey, we fell for it the first time. This place might have more tricks up its sleeves," Night Watch pointed out.
  31. >"Night Watch is right. We should be wary, regardless," Mosina agreed. "That being said, we should get a move on."
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  35. >Night Watch grinned then rolled her eyes. "Fine. Which way should we go?"
  36. >Mosina twisted her head to look at each entrance of the room, until her eyes settled on the purple powder she had sprinkled onto the floor.
  37. >"I said we should go right, so let's go that way," she said, pointing towards the entrance to the right of the purple powder.
  38. >"Alright." Night Watch began walking towards the dark passageway, her light crystal feeding into the hallway as she crested the door frame.
  39. >Mosina followed after her with Gloomie trailing behind, the three of them barely able to fit through the hallway single-file.
  40. >"Watch where you guys step," Mosina warned, her eyes scanning the walls, floor and ceiling all around her.
  41. >"Hey, I'm first. If anything, I'll die first," Night Watch chuckled, earning a disgrunted sigh from Mosina.
  42. >Several minutes into their uncomfortable walk between the rough, stone walls, faint sounds of skittering on rock could be heard ahead.
  43. >"Hmm..." Night Watch's ears perked up as she stopped in her tracks, intent to listen to the noise.
  44. >"What is it, Night?" Mosina whispered from behind, arking her neck and trying to peek over Night Watch's silver helmet.
  45. >Nothing but darkness met them several feet down the corridor.
  46. >Night Watch spoke slowly. "Sounds like... small creatures. Claws. Lots of 'em."
  47. >Gloomie audibly shuffled behind them. "I hate claws."
  48. >"But you're wearing claws," Mosina said, glancing behind her and perking up an eyebrow.
  49. >"Yeah, but when they're on other creatures... ugh." Gloomie shook her head.
  50. >"Let's move, but quietly. I bet we're up for something up ahead," Night Watch urged, beginning to walk again.
  51. >Mosina followed, and Gloomie took a moment to compose herself before moving.
  52. >Soon enough, they found themselves in a room not unlike the first they had encountered.
  53. >The skittering was loudest, and it could be heard coming from all corners of the room.
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  57. >Water was puddled on the floor, and the sound of rushing water could be heard beyond the opposite entrance.
  58. >Mosina and Gloomie took their spots beside Night Watch, who had frozen in place.
  59. >"What's going--eew!" Gloomie yelped, almost walking into a giant, slimy egg almost the size of her.
  60. >Ugly blue eggs dotted with black spots filled the entire room.
  61. >They lay in clusters and their shells were leathery, covered with slime.
  62. >Night Watch slowly drew her spear, and Mosina did the same.
  63. >Around the cluster of eggs in front of them, a group of lizard-like creatures with long claws were huddled in a group.
  64. >Their eyeless heads featured long mouths with dozens of long, curved teeth.
  65. >"Not these guys again..." Gloomie whined.
  66. >Cracking her neck, she stepped forward.
  67. >"I've got a bone to pick."
  68. >She lifted up her front hooves and stomped on the ground, the white claws of her hoof-blades ejecting with a loud ring of metal.
  69. >Mosina stepped forward, towards her. "Wait. They haven't noticed--"
  70. >"Yaaah!" Gloomie cried, immediately launching herself forward at the reptillian creatures with her claws pointed forward.
  71. >Several of the creatures turned her way, only for their faces to be sliced into four sections by her sharp blades.
  72. >Two slumped to the floor immediately, followed by another two who were cleanly cut in half through their midsections.
  73. >Finally, the rest responded, letting out gurgling cries and throwing their own bony claws at the white-clad bat pony.
  74. >"Not a chance!" she yelled, blocking a blow from one creature with her right hoof-blades.
  75. >She flicked her hoof and the blades sliced right through the creature's claws, following up with another jab from her other hoof.
  76. >In a flurry of cuts, the creature was diced into pieces, followed by one next to it.
  77. >A head was torn off, and then were the limbs of another.
  78. >Blueish blood covered the tiles beneath the dancing Gloomie, diluting with the puddles of water.
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  82. >Before long, the numbers thinned until not one creature was left standing.
  83. >Standing on top of the pile of bloodied corpses was Gloomie, letting out deep breaths.
  84. >Upon seeing the stupified and grossed out expressions of Night Watch and Mosina, she gave out a cheeky smile.
  85. >"Heh... I might have over-done it."
  86. >"Nyeh..." Mosina said, her face slightly greener than usual. "The smell... oh dear."
  87. >Night Watch gave a grin. "You must be crazy in be-"
  88. >A thin object flew past her, cutting her off and missing her head by mere inches.
  89. >Without hesitating, Night Watch ducked and urged the others to do so.
  90. >"Get down!" she screamed.
  91. >Mosina followed, and Gloomie hopped off of the pile of bodies next to them, following suit.
  92. >"Is it another trap?!" Mosina said, her eyes wide, scanning the blue room around them.
  93. >"I don't know..." Night Watch muttered.
  94. >A clicking noise echoed down from the empty hallway at the far side of the room from them.
  95. >"Dodge!"
  96. >The three bat ponies rolled in different directions, and a single crossbow bolt struck where Night Watch had just been.
  97. >"Get behind something!" Mosina cried, standing up and stepping towards the dark exit.
  98. >Gloomie ducked behind a pillar and Night Watch hid behind a giant egg, crouching low.
  99. >"That's no trap," Mosina muttered under her breath, holding the Wind Ruler firm.
  100. >Silence stretched for seconds that felt like hours, until another telltale click pierced it.
  101. >"Raah!"
  102. >She dodged to the right and swung her spear horisontally, a small gust of wind throwing itself in front of her.
  103. >A crossbow bolt had flown itself into the path, the wind knocking it aside.
  104. >Another click sounded that came much quicker than the last, and Mosina dodged again with a swing of her Umbra spear.
  105. >Another gust of wind knocked an oncoming bolt away.
  106. >"Mosina!" Gloomie called from behind her pillar. "Keep it busy!"
  107. >Mosina shot her a knowing glance and nodded, dodging another bolt.
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  111. >Immediately, Gloomie charged forward from behind the pillar, galloping with all her might.
  112. >In less than a second, she made it to the other side of the room and put herself against the wall adjacent to the hallway.
  113. >After another click followed by a bolt shooting out from the passage, Mosina leaped out and stormed down the hallway with her claws ready.
  114. >However, she was met with total darkness, the light from her crystal failing to light up her surroundings.
  115. >She glanced down, only to see it still shining--the darkness seemed too thick for it to penetrate.
  116. >Another click--sounding much closer to her--sounded, and she dodged.
  117. >A bolt flew past her, missing her by only a scant few inches of air.
  118. >Blindly, she lunched forward with her claws, only to meet nothing.
  119. >"Graah!"
  120. >She continued her charge, until she was met with a pair of green slitted eyes that pierced through the darkness.
  121. >"H-huh--"
  122. >The eyes disappeared to the sound of a loud bang, and the darkness seemed to recede itself from around her.
  123. >Whatever was just in front of her had disappeared into thin air.
  124. >She turned back to the room, only to hear the clanging of metal weapons.
  125. >"Dammit..."
  126. >Gloomie charged back into the room, only to see a shadowy figure locked in a fight with Night Watch.
  127. >A purple hoof-blade with a single long, curved blade clashed against the gold of Night Watch's spear.
  128. >Space seemed to bend around the hooded pony, and the darkness that had filled the hallway seemed to follow them.
  129. >Similar to the shadow ponies, long, snaking strands of blackness waved around its body.
  130. >Mosina came from behind the figure with a calculated jab from her spear.
  131. >However, right before her spear met them, it teleported away with another loud bang, the darkness dissipating.
  132. >Above Night Watch, the pony re-materialized and flew down at her with its blade outstretched.
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  136. >"Hrk!" Night Watch grunted, parrying the blade and following up with a jab, hoping to use the pony's momentum to fall into the spear.
  137. >But before the pony met the blade, they disappeared again, another loud bang ringing the room.
  138. >Gloomie heard them reappear behind her, and she didn't hesitate to swing her claws at them.
  139. >Her white right claws met the purple blade, bright white and purple sparks exploding out from the contact.
  140. >She threw her left claws, only for them to be expertly parried again.
  141. >Despite only having one blade, the pony met her jab-for-jab.
  142. >A gust of wind overtook the pair and Mosina leaped in, swinging her spear at the hooded pony.
  143. >They let out a stallion-esque grunt as they parried the spear, the two Umbra weapons meeting in a display of purple sparks.
  144. >Gloomie tried to intervene, but her face was met with the other outstretched hoof of the pony.
  145. >Attached to their leg was a hoof-crossbow, and it was loaded.
  146. >"Gaah!" Gloomie cried, throwing her right hoof in front of her.
  147. >Her blade made contact with the wooden stock of the crossbow, knocking it aside and shattering it down the middle.
  148. >The pony immediately retreated their arm and spun his body before clutching the weapon.
  149. >He desperately backstepped from the quickly-advancing Gloomie and Mosina.
  150. >"Nngh..." the pony growled, seeming like he was going to teleport again.
  151. >"Oh no, you don't!" Night Watch screamed from the side, colliding with his figure and tackling him into the ground.
  152. >She pinned him down with her hooves.
  153. >Through his black aura, she looked straight into his green eyes.
  154. >"Aux! What are you doing?!"
  155. >He let out a grunt in response.
  156. >Mosina and Gloomie came up to their sides, warily staring at the wrestling ponies.
  157. >"You almost killed us!" Night Watch screamed, only to recieve more pained grunts.
  158. >She pulled his hood off, and a messy black mane popped out.
  159. >Gloomie's eyes widened and Mosina let out a gasp.
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  163. >Black veins spread from his eye sockets along his grey furred face.
  164. >Night Watch stared dumbfounded, only for her grip on him too loosen.
  165. >The possessed Aux pushed her off and stepped back from the trio, giving them angry glares.
  166. >However, instead of continuing to fight, he turned away and disappeared from the room in a loud bang.