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- >There was a movement several years back, put forth by some students at one of the prestigious Canterlot Universities.
- >It was a petition to the Princesses to change the name of my species.
- >Apparently, 'bat pony' sounded a bit too much like a racial slur, similar to calling a pegasus, a 'bird pony'.
- >The word they were going for, for my species? 'Thestrals.'
- >Threshstralls? Test strolls? Flush stalls?
- >Funnily enough, none of those 'social justice warriors' were bat ponies themselves.
- >I didn't see a problem with 'bat pony', honestly.
- >It was simple, straight-forward. Blunt. The image of a 'bat pony' immediately popped up in your mind.
- >I heard that Princess Celestia was caught off guard by the movement--she had stayed silent for a good minute before composing herself to respond to the movement's representative.
- >When the petition was heard, they held a vote all across Equestria.
- >Thankfully, Celestia mentioned in the fine print that if over eighty percent of all bat ponies voted for 'yes' or 'no', it would go in our favour.
- >In just a week, over ninety-five percent of all bat pony votes were for 'no.'
- >I guess you can call my race as the type who doesn't care for such complications, as long as we're not hurting anybody.
- "Interesting... you are one of the bat ponies, no?" the voice purred through the darkness.
- "I... yes... wh-who are you?" the bat pony stammered, a pair of crude, iron hoof-claws attached to the end of his forelimbs.
- "I've been waiting for one of your kind..."
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- >I don't blame us, to be honest.
- >Ever since the very beginning, bat ponies have been a proud race--proud, meaning a rival to the pegasi, one way or another.
- >We can be just as cocky, and just as brash.
- >According to the history books, we were once sworn enemies to the feathered race of ponies.
- >Mirroring their warrior society was ours; a society bred of soldiers, mainly to fend off predators and enemies.
- >When the pegasi found Equestria with the other two races, and when the Princesses came, the hostilities towards our race stopped.
- >Naturally, we served under Princess Luna.
- >But then she went rogue and betrayed ponykind.
- >Thankfully, we were forgiven, but were still scorned by the rest.
- >Worse, a terrible, magical backlash from Luna's banishment event seeded into our home... the Everfree.
- >And for years, the cancer spread throughout the vegetation and fauna.
- >It was a hundred years before it became inhospitable, and the bat ponies migrated to two main locations.
- >Half of us went south, taking refuge in a large, dark gave in the Equestrian Badlands.
- >The other half of us went north-east, finding another forest that felt just like home.
- >It had such a thick canopy, that the forest floor was always bathed in an almost eternal night.
- >And where the leaves met the sun, delicious fruit like mangoes and lychee grew.
- >Perfect for our nocturnal, fruit-loving kind.
- >We called it, the Hollow Shades.
- "You see, I have this strange relic..." the voice teased.
- It seened to come from every direction.
- The poor bat pony felt helpless, trembling terribly in his spot against the cave wall. "I d-don't want your relic! I..."
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- >Fast forward to nine hundred years later, you have my generation, still upholding the tradition of training to join the Night Guard.
- >Echo, Speck and I were good friends all throughout school.
- >Night Watch always liked to tease me, though.
- >It was Echo's determination and Speck's kindness that convinced me to join them in the Guard.
- >I don't know how I felt about Night Watch following us, but I lived with it.
- >Anyways, that's where we met Mosina and Gloomie--both from different parts of the world.
- >Mosina liked to travel, and Gloomie grew up in a rural village among earth ponies, pegasi and unicorns.
- >I heard Gloomie's parents were prestigious, though.
- "I have one of your Umbra weapons," the voice spoke in a tempting tone. "This one..."
- Through the darkness, a lone, seclusive light shone on a pedestal.
- Levitating above it was a single, purple hoof-blade with one long, curved blade protruding out.
- The bat pony shuddered, a strange feeling creeping up his spine.
- "Umbra... N-no... I won't!"
- "Serve me... and it's all yours..."
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- >That's when I learned that Echo wanted to be part of the Elite Night Guard.
- >Speck, Night Watch, Gloomie and Mosina all agreed with her, and I reluctantly agreed.
- >Crazier yet, despite our newby status in the Guard, we were allowed to participate in the Trials.
- >A tradition, a test, for Princess Luna to choose who guards her, personally.
- >Crazier yet, with the rise of the incursions, Elites were needed now more than ever.
- >With her running around Equestria and surrounding nations so much, she needed a sizable roster, if only just for her personal guard.
- "You want to serve her, don't you? You want to live up to your race's standards?"
- "...Yes..."
- "You don't want to disappoint your friends... your family..."
- "No..."
- "Tell me, little bat pony, what is your name?"
- "...Aux."