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Trials 20

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  1. Read this story and all of its chapters in paragraph format with better editing, here:
  2. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/129684/the-trials
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  4. This version of the story is heavily unedited.
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  8. >"And what does Speck's shield do?" Gloomie asked, walking alongside Mosina while staring at Speck at the front of the group.
  9. >"I guess you can say it controls physics," Mosina answered, eliciting a furrowed brow from Gloomie. "You know, force. Gravity."
  10. >Gloomie whistled. "Wow. That's kinda powerful, don'tcha think?"
  11. >"It tires me out quite a bit," Speck called back.
  12. >"Yeah. When I use Wind Ruler, I feel like my breath is leaving me," Mosina agreed.
  13. >"And I pretty much blacked out when that big... monster slammed its hand against me." Speck passed a smile to Echo. "It's thanks to Echo, here, that I kept up."
  14. >Echo returned a modest smirk and blushed.
  15. >"Still, it's nice to know that we have ponies with super-powers in the group," Gloomie joked before letting letting out a throaty laugh.
  16. >"Hey, guys, look!" Speck suddenly exclaimed, causing the rest of them to look forward.
  17. >The group had walked into a fairly spacey room, and interestingly enough, the floor was tiled with smooth cobblestone.
  18. >From their entrance, two large exit tunnels faced them at each opposite corner of the room.
  19. >Standing at the dead centre of the room was the stone statue of the pony with the crossbow.
  20. "Hey, that's the same statue as was one Night and I found early on," Echo pointed out, walking towards it.
  21. >"Echo, wait," Night Watch warned, earning a curious glance from Speck. "This... doesn't seem right."
  22. >"What's wrong, Night?" Speck asked.
  23. >Echo had turned around and listened for Night Watch's answer.
  24. >"Doesn't this seem ominous to you?"
  25. "I... don't understand," Echo droned, her gaze hardening in confusion. "I think this entire cave network is ominous."
  26. >"Look up."
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  30. >All of the ponies craned their neck to look upwards at the tall ceiling.
  31. >Humungous stalactites and large cracks caked the ceiling, as though it looked like it could fall apart at any moment.
  32. >Night Watch shifted uneasily in her spot. "We should pick a path, quick. We might only get to pick one."
  33. >The rest of the group looked at her like she were a ghost.
  34. >For some reason, decisions seemed hard to make.
  35. >Echo swallowed.
  36. "Okay... let's just get out of here--"
  37. >The light from all of their light crystals suddenly blacked out.
  38. >In an instant, the group was left in complete darkness, as though something had been pulled out of their eyes.
  39. >Speck let out a whimper, and Gloomie, Mosina and Echo let out startled gasps.
  40. >That's when a distinct sound could be heard forming up, as though it were inside their heads.
  41. >Wailing.
  42. >Gloomie hopped in her spot, panicking. "Wh-what's happening!?"
  43. >"The light crystals! Why aren't they working?!" Mosina cried.
  44. "Guys! Use sound!" Echo ordered, her voice reverberating around them against the stone walls and floor.
  45. >She began to click her tongue, the sound sending waves across the room.
  46. >In a strange, sightless image, Echo could vaguely make out the ponies around her, the wailing still loudening.
  47. >It sounded as though it were not interfering with her clicks.
  48. >Speck had her shield at the ready, Mosina fumbled with her spear, Gloomie squirmed uncomfortably and Night Watch stood solidly still.
  49. >Soon, the girls processed Echo's suggestion and listened to her clicks, painting an image of the room with their hearing.
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  53. >Finally, as it had before their last encounter, the wailing noise ceased.
  54. >The ponies were bathed in silence, save for the rhythmic clicking from Echo.
  55. >"What... what's happening..." Gloomie whispered.
  56. >"Shadow ponies," Mosina muttered next to her.
  57. >All of their ears were perked up, listening intently to anything that might disturb the room around them.
  58. >Gloome spoke up again. "Maybe we should--"
  59. >A high pitched scream pierced through her words.
  60. >Through the blackness, Echo could make out even darker strands of shadows snaking along the floor and walls.
  61. >Despite her clicks, she could not make them out in her mind, until they coalesced into a single, corporeal body of a pony.
  62. >Then a second, and a third.
  63. >Her eyes widened as her clicks bounced off of their forms, allowing her to 'see' them clearer than she could with her eyes, before.
  64. >It was as though they were surrounded by a dark, evil aura, and their body matter seemed to vibrate and shift constantly, if subtly.
  65. >The wailing continued, but the bat ponies had already drawn their weapons at the ready, facing the monstrosities.
  66. >"Not this time!" Speck screamed, charging straight at the snarling figures. "Aaah!"
  67. >"Speck!" Mosina cried, running after her.
  68. >Night Watch, Gloomie and Echo charged after them, weapons ready.
  69. >That was, until a fourth form appeared behind them.
  70. >Echo didn't have to turn her head to hear it coalesce.
  71. "Gah... I'll hold this one off!" she cried, skidding to a halt on the tiled floor and turning towards it.
  72. >Night Watch gave a knowing nod before throwing herself into the fray.
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  76. >"I'm getting really tired of your shit!" she yelled, running up to one of the shadow ponies and swinging her spear at it.
  77. >With both of its arm-blades, it parried the golden spear with ease until Night Watch quickly retracted it to make another quick jab.
  78. >The shadow pony was too slow.
  79. >It let out a loud shriek as the blade sliced into the right of its jaw.
  80. >Golden sparks flared out from the contact, bathing the room in a brief, golden flash.
  81. >Bathed in darkness again, Night Watch let out a few clicks to gather her bearings.
  82. >Before she could pull away, however, the shadow pony knocked the spear out of her hooves before pouncing on her.
  83. >She gave a blind kick to its indistinguishable body, luckily knocking it to her side.
  84. >Honing in on her spear, she leaped at it and grabbed it into her forelimbs, pouncing back towards the creature.
  85. >She flew through the air and flared her wings out, her spear in front of her.
  86. >The unlucky shadow pony tried to knock away her spear before it met its body, but she had too much momentum.
  87. >"Graah!" Night Watch snarled as her spear pierced straight through its chest, golden sparks igniting inside of its body.
  88. >It wailed loudly in pain as she twisted the shaft, causing more gold sparks to spark outwards,
  89. >However, with a sudden surge of strength, it forced its body forwards, digging the spear even deeper.
  90. >Helplessly, Night Watch tried to pull her spear out, only for the shadow pony to climb down her own spear at her.
  91. >When it got close enough, it let out a scream at her before reeling back its arm-blades to mince her...
  92. >...Only for the arms to get lopped off in another burst of golden sparks and fall to the floor.
  93. >Gloomie strafed past the shadow pony through the air, her hoof-claws held in front of her.
  94. >"Thanks for the boost, Speck!" she called back to the heavily armoured pony, who had her shield held in front of her.
  95. >Another shadow pony was hot on her trail, its arm-blades slicing through the air at her.
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  99. >"W-warn me next time!" Speck cried, turning to fend off the third of the shadow ponies.
  100. >Grateful for the assist, Night Watch turned back to the screaming shadow pony in front of her.
  101. >"Fuck..." She tugged her spear sideways, causing it to slowly rip through the shadowy flesh. "You!"
  102. >The whole left side of the shadow pony burst open with an explosion of gold light, almost blinding Night Watch.
  103. >It immediately ceased screaming, toppling over onto the floor.
  104. >As it hit the ground, its body shattered into the smoky strands of shadow before retreating from the room.
  105. >Her eyes still open, Night Watch noticed that the room seemed a little brighter, the light crystal on her chest giving off a faint light.
  106. >"Hey, I can sort of see, now!" Gloomie called out from her side of the room, still being chased by a shadow pony.
  107. >"Gloomie, watch out!" Mosina cried, running towards her. She swung the Wind Ruler at the chasing shadow pony. "Hah!"
  108. >A strong gust of wind forced the shadow pony to stop.
  109. >With another strong swing of her pole-arm, she sent a powerful wave of air at it, sending it flying backwards.
  110. >Gloomie came up beside her. "Think you can launch me at it?"
  111. >Mosina blinked. "Er... yeah. Flare out your wings..."
  112. >Gloomie did as instructed, and Mosina lightly swirled the Wind ruler.
  113. >"Here goes...!"
  114. >She swung it in a horizontal arc over Gloomie, and a rolling wind immediately took over.
  115. >With her wings flared out and the wind pushing from behind, Gloomie pushed off of the floor.
  116. >As soon as she was airborn, she felt the wind guide herself through the air, and pick up speed.
  117. >Straight ahead of her was the recovering form of the shadow pony.
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  121. >"I don't know who you are..." Gloomie muttered under her breath as she quickly approached it. "But you're... uh, ugly!"
  122. >With her golden hoof-claws in front of her, she smashed straight into the shadow pony.
  123. >Her claws immediately dug into the front of its neck, the gashes in its flesh glowing yellow from the contact.
  124. >It wailed before quickly spinning in its spot, sending its arm-blades in a vertical swing at her.
  125. >Nimbly, Gloomie hopped over them and landed on the other side of the shadow pony.
  126. >"Raugh!" she snarled, strafing towards it. She twirled her body, her deadly claws spinning through the air.
  127. >They connected and gouged into the shadow pony's flesh, clipping off one of its arm-blades from the base in the process.
  128. >Desperately, the shadow pony swung again with its only arm-blade, but she dodged expertly again.
  129. >She ducked and slid underneath, coming up to the belly of the shadow pony.
  130. >With her hoof-claws at the ready, she jabbed and jabbed upwards, her claws eating away at the flesh ery quickly.
  131. >Each strike sent more sparks outwards, the golden metal burning the shadows.
  132. >Finally, it stopped wailing, Gloomie having done enough damage to its body.
  133. >Immediately, the shadow pony began to melt into the air, its body almost nearly sawed in half.
  134. >"Yeah! That's how you do it!" Gloomie exclaimed, pushing herself up and punching into the air.
  135. >The room brightened a little further, another shadow pony having been defeated.
  136. >At the other side of the room, Speck expertly blocked another blow from her shadow pony.
  137. >She effortlessly blocked every attack from it, and it seemed to only anger.
  138. >"Give up already!" she cried, only for the shadow pony to scream in rage.
  139. >Relentlessly, it swung its arm-blades, each strike deflecting off of the Keel Regalia in a purple flash.
  140. >"Alright, that's it!" Speck warned, suddenly pushing herself fowards.
  141. >Helplessly, the shadow pony tried to block with its blades, but her shield smashed straight into it.
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  144.  
  145. >Like a freight train, she sent it backwards, slamming into the wall behind it, hard.
  146. >Ominously, the ceiling shook, but none of the ponies in the room noticed.
  147. >The shadow pony leaped up and reluctantly faced Speck again, her shield proving difficult to bypass.
  148. >Mosina came up from the side, her pole-arm pointed forwards.
  149. >"Haah!" she cried, a gust of wind announcing her presence.
  150. >The force caused the shadow pony to stumble, unable to block the Umbra spear.
  151. >It pierced straight into its side, indigo sparks erupting from the wound.
  152. >Before it could respond, however, Speck came up from the front and slammed her shield into it again.
  153. >She hit like a hammer, snapping its head backwards.
  154. >Without even stepping back to ensure that the shadow pony was defeated, however, Gloomie came in from above like a missile.
  155. >"Yaah!" she cried, her hoof claws slamming into the shadow pony's neck.
  156. >Almost immediately, the shadow pony dispersed in a small explosion of shadowy strands.
  157. >The final shadow pony in the room was locked in an intense blade fight with Echo and Night Watch.
  158. >They flanked each side, fencing with each of its arm blades individually.
  159. >Each swing rung through the air, and each blade that collided gave off a loud clang.
  160. "Nngh, Night! let's face it from the front, together!" Echo called, blocking a slice from the long shadow blade.
  161. >"Alright!" Night Watch answered, blocking a swing towards her.
  162. >She hopped to the front of the shadow pony, meeting Echo who had strafed her way.
  163. >Two shadow blades lunged forward, only to be blocked by a golden sword and spear.
  164. >They returned an attack, only to be parried.
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  168. >Echo stepped forward and slashed fiercely, the shadow pony using both blades to block her.
  169. >Taking the opportunity, Night Watch thrust her spear between the blades straight at the shadow pony's neck.
  170. >It slid one of its shadow blades down Echo's sword to block the spear, only to nick it.
  171. >The spear cut through the side of the shadow pony's neck, and it let out a painful scream.
  172. "Grr... no match for us, now!" Night Watch growled, jabbing again.
  173. >This time, she pierced into the shadow pony's mouth, thankfully silencing the screams.
  174. >That's when Echo and Night Watch felt wind from behind them, only to see the Gloomie-torpedo sail past them and straight at the shadow pony.
  175. >"Wooo!"
  176. >For the third time during the fight, Gloomie slammed into her target with her claws visciously held out.
  177. >As she sailed past the shadow pony, three large, golden cuts were lined across its face.
  178. >It weakened, allowing Night Watch and Echo to get their blades loose.
  179. "Aaah!"
  180. >In one synchronized swing, they sliced the shadow pony's neck.
  181. >It crumbled, the corporeal flesh failing to hold together.
  182. >The mangled body of the shadow pony fell, melting into nothingness before it hit the floor.
  183. "Guh... that's the last of them...?" Echo asked through her heavy panting.
  184. >She looked down to her light crystal, thankful that it was shining brightly again.
  185. >"What's... that sound?" Night Watch whispered, almost to herself.
  186. >The wailing had finally stopped, but a different sound replaced it.
  187. >Gloomie touched down beside her, seeming no worse for wear, and Speck and Mosina ran up to them, panting.
  188. >The sound gradually got louder, and the bat ponies curiously looked around them to see where the source was.
  189. >However, it was through their hooves when they realized that the room was shaking.
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  192.  
  193. >As one, they looked up at the ceiling.
  194. >The cracks had largened.
  195. "Get--"
  196. >A loud bang rung out, and the rocky ceiling collapsed.
  197. >Giant rocks and stalactites fell, threatening to crush the ponies underneath.
  198. "Aaah!"
  199. >"Oh, geeze!"
  200. >"Run!"
  201. >"Fuck!"
  202. "To the tunnels!" Echo cried through the noise.
  203. >Taking the suggestion, each of the bat ponies ran for one of the entrances.