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- "I think... I think we lost them," Echo whispered to the others.
- >The group had stopped in a small, open room with three entrances.
- >Echo stood at the one they came from, listening as the wails from the monsters began to recede into a faint ringing in the tunnels.
- >"Thank Luna, I don't know if I could stand to look at them any longer," Gloomie glowered, collapsing to the floor, belly up.
- >She let out a loud breath, thankful to have been saved.
- >Night Watch walked up to her, grinning.
- >"I want to ravage you."
- "Okay," Echo cut in immediately. "So, Gloomie, which way did you come?"
- >After shooting Night Watch an incredulous glare, Gloomie pulled herself off of the ground and pointed to one of the tunnels.
- >"There." She let out a sigh and her voice dropped low. "I... was alone for so long, and have been scraping by ever since we began."
- >Suddenly, Speck pulled up the white-maned bat pony in a tight hug.
- >"You're okay, now!" she beamed, suffocating her.
- >Mosina came up beside them, adjusting her spectacles.
- >"I would use this time to update my map, but... we should move, if we want to be a whole team as soon as possible."
- >The rest nodded at her just as Speck released her death grip on Gloomie.
- "Speck should take the lead," Echo suggested, glancing to the purple shield. "That Keel Regalia saved our hides, back there."
- >Her face lighting up, Speck hopped towards the opening of the tunnel Gloomie hadn't pointed to.
- >"Okay! Let's go!" she exclaimed as the others fell behind her.
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- >With a deep breath, she led them into the tunnel, her light crystal guiding her way.
- >The sounds of clinking armour and shuffling hooves populated the air for several minutes while they walked.
- >Night Watch, who was walking right behind Speck, spoke up.
- >"Do you guys think we'll pass?"
- >The whole group seemed to pause their breathing for a moment, caught off guard from the question.
- >Mosina took a deep breath.
- >"why the question, Night Watch?" she asked from the back of the group.
- >"I dunno. This just seems too... something else," Night Watch put out.
- >Furrowing her brows, Mosina responded, "Jasmine told me that her group took under a week to complete the Trials."
- >"Lieutenant Jasmine? Wasn't she in Captain Midnight Blossom's group?" Gloomie asked from ahead of Mosina, looking back at her.
- >Echo visibly winced at the name.
- >"Yeah. Though, she was incredibly cryptic about it," Mosina articulated, her eyes looking up in thought as she recalled her memories.
- >"She wouldn't say anything else, though."
- >"I heard their group was one of the best in awhile," Gloomie added.
- >"Oh yeah? From whom?" Night Watch asked, casting a glance past Echo at her.
- >"I heard a few guards talking about it. Supposedly, they knew someone in that group."
- >Mosina hummed, catching the rest of their attention.
- >"I heard they change the Trials every year or so. So, even if they were allowed to tell us anything, it wouldn't really benifit recruits."
- >She paused for a moment, digging into her memories.
- >"Jasmine did say that their... 'final boss' was tough. She heavily implied that it was nearly impossible."
- >"I bet it was a dragon," Gloomie muttered.
- >"Hey, I'd be pretty damn proud of myself if we achieved something like that," Night Watch added in.
- "I'm not surprised," Echo muttered.
- >Curiously, Gloomie, Night Watch and Mosina stared at her.
- "I mean... Midnight is one of the best. Jasmine, too."
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- >"Yeah... and it took them a under a week? How long do you think we've been here, so far?" Night Watch asked.
- >Mosina furrowed her brows, thinking.
- >"I'm not sure, time could be diluted here. But I would wager that we've only been here for a day, probably closer to two."
- >"Quit moping, guys!" Speck suddenly piped up from the front, having been silent through their talk. "We're already five out of six... right?"
- >"You never know. It could be a long time before we find him," Mosina added, grimly.
- >Speck grunted. "Yeah, well... I believe we can do it faster than Midnight Blossom's group!"
- >Echo looked at her, incredulously.
- "They were reportedly the quickest to do the Trials in over a hundred years."
- >"Why can't you guys be optimistic, for once?" Speck asked, frowing.
- >"Yeah!" Night Watch agreed, grinning while Mosina and Echo rolled their eyes.
- >She looked to Gloomie, whose eyes darted back and forth, confusedly. "Besides, we have our own devil to match Midnight, here."
- >"M-me? Why me?" Gloomie stuttered.
- >"'Cause you're damn good with those claws," Night Watch responded as Gloomie sighed. "And you get in trouble all the time."
- >"H-hey! You get me caught, most of the time!"
- >"Not including that time you had to run with a weight on your back around the castle."
- >The rest of the group snickered, the tension lifting from the group.
- >After calming down from her giggles, Echo spoke up.
- "Speck's right. We're almost a complete party now. We... might have a chance."
- >Her eyes gleamed, some sort of pressure seeming to have been lifted from her.
- >Night Watch nodded to her, solemnly.
- >"You're doing great so far"
- "I... thanks," Echo stuttered, blushing. "You guys are all great--gah!"
- >She was cut off as a turquoise mane filled her vision, Speck having slowed down to nuzzle her.
- >"Aw!" Night Watch exclaimed, leaping up to them and throwing her forelimbs around them. "Group hug!"
- >"Yay!" Gloomie cheered, joining in with Mosina, who was giggling.