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- >"How long have we been walking?" Mosina asked the group as they trekked through the dark tunnel.
- "Hard to say without a watch," Echo replied, thoughfully. "Maybe nearly an hour?"
- >At that, Mosina furrowed her brows.
- >"We should be nearing the lake room, then."
- >"Lake room?" Speck asked from the rear.
- >"It's a giant room with a big underground lake. There's a single path left that we've yet to take in it."
- "And there are these dim light crystals that hang from the tall ceiliing," Echo chimed in.
- "The whole room glows a deep blue."
- >Speck's eyes glinted underneath her helmet.
- >"That sounds pretty."
- "It really is."
- >The group walked in relative silence, the only sound coming from their breaths and clinking armour.
- >That is, until Echo picked up a faint, rolling noise in the distance ahead of them.
- >Confusedly, she looked to Mosina with concern, perking her ears up.
- >The group stopped as they huddled around Echo.
- >"What is it? What do you hear?" Mosina whispered.
- "I don't know... it sounds like... it's coming from the lake room."
- >Speck uncomfortable shifted in her armour and Night Watch held a neutral expression.
- "I hear..."
- >Echo trailed off and dead silence washed over the group, until her squinted eyes widened immensely.
- >With a gasp, she muttered,
- "Screaming."
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- >Mosina yelped as Echo burst past her and began galloping down the tunnel at full speed.
- >Worriedly, she followed after her with Speck and Night Watch in tow.
- >"Echo! What is it?!" she yelled as they ran.
- "I hear a voice! Quickly, let's go!" Echo yelled back.
- >After a brisk gallop of several minutes, a faint, blue light shone at the end of the tunnel.
- >Breaking into full sprint, Echo felt a surge of adrenaline as the sounds became clearer.
- >It was the sounds of a struggle. A fight.
- >Finally, the blue light reached her and she leaped through, emerging into the large lake room.
- >The water was no longer still, and instead, forms thrashed wildly in it.
- >Water splashed everywhere, and surrounding the immediate shore were dozens of hideous creatures.
- >Many of them swam through the water, seemingly focused on something deeper into the lake.
- >Echoe stood in shock, Mosina, Night Watch and Speck appearing behind her.
- >"Wh-what are these things?!" Speck gasped, taking point in front of the group and readying her shield.
- >Dozens of amphibious, bipedal creatures moshed in a fierce frenzy to get to whatever it was they were focusing on.
- >They had long claws sprouting from the ends of their arms, and their mouths wide and vertical lined with many hooked teeth.
- >Their heads resembled venus fly traps, and seemingly had no eyes.
- >A voice yelled through the mass.
- >A bat pony.
- "Go! Help her!" Echo cried, unsheathing her sword.
- >Several of the creatures turned to their direction, barring their long teeth.
- >She charged, Speck and Night Watch at her side.
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- >More of the creatures turned, seeing their new, oncoming adversaries.
- >After deeming them hostile, the creatures charged in the dozens.
- >"Aaah!" Speck cried, launching herself forward with her Keel Regalia in front of her.
- >She smashed right into several of them, her shield brightening with each contact.
- >The squishy, fleshy bodies flew back, taking many with them.
- >Night Watch spun before meeting the fray with a flurry of swipes and jabs from her golden spear, each swing gouging deep into their bodies with ease.
- >Gold sparks erupted outwards in a display of yellowish fireworks, clawed limbs flying in every direction.
- >Echo joined alongside Night Watch, skillfully weaving her golden sword between targets and lopping off many toothy heads.
- >"Graah!" Speck cried, spinning and using the momentum to swing her shield vertically down on the head of one of the creatures.
- >A metallic gong sounded and a powerful shockwave exploded outwards from her, sending many of them flying.
- >But the creatures were relentless and many, throwing their bodies at the bat ponies.
- >Soon, Night Watch and Echo found themselves slipping until a lucky creature leaped through their swipes.
- >It collided with Night Watch, who attempted to shove it away with the butt end of her spear, only for it to latch onto the shaft.
- >Echo turned to help, but was latched onto by another.
- >Before one of the creatures could sink their serrated claws or teeth into their flesh, however, a gust of wind overtook the fight.
- >Mosina channeled her pole-arm, swishing it in elegant patterns from the entrance of the tunnel.
- >A strong wind blew the lighter creatures off of Echo and Night Watch, throwing them into the lake, beyond.
- "Mosina! We have to get to her!" Echo ordered, pointing to the concentrated group of creatures in the lake.
- >"I think I can disperse the crowd! Get ready!" Mosina called back.
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- >Echo nodded to Night Watch and Speck as the trio sprinted to the lake shore.
- >A bat pony helplessly fought away at the crowd of creatures in the water, but took down almost any that came up to her.
- >"Help!" she cried, spotting the four bat ponies who had arrived.
- >The bat pony tried to burst out of the water with a flap of her brown wings, but was intercepted by one of the creatures.
- >Twirling the Wind Ruler, Mosina brought it down to the floor and then slowly raised it upwards, vertically.
- >A powerful, spiraling wind tunnel overtook the bat pony, who tried to get out of the water again.
- >However, the wind took her a bit too easily, and launched her into the air.
- >With her, dozens of creatures flailed through the raging winds.
- "Night Watch, let's go!" Echo ordered, pushing off and joining the miniature hurricane.
- >Night Watch followed, her spear at the ready.
- >With difficulty, they flew through the storm, dodging debris and flying creatures while approaching the bat pony.
- >"I can't hold it much longer!" Mosina cried, her spear held high while she conducted the storm.
- >She felt herself begin to fatigue, her efforts draining her energy, quickly.
- "Let it go, we'll catch her!" Echo called back.
- >"Alright!"
- >With that, Mosina lowered the Wind Ruler and gasped, nearly collapsing.
- >The raging winds suddenly stopped, and all of the forms began to fall.
- >Creatures let out wails as they dropped, and the bat pony in distress tried to flap her wings.
- >However, tiredness overtook her, and her wings failed to generate enough lift.
- >Echo gasped, and Night Watch took in a steep dive towards the falling bat pony.
- >Slicing through a creature with her spear, Night Watch quickly caught up with the bat pony, tackling her and carrying her in her front legs.
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- >"N... Night Watch..." the bat pony whispered, nearly losing consciousness.
- >"I gotcha, Gloomie," Night Watch told her, turning around and making for the shore.
- >Echo fell in formation with her as they touched down on the rocky ground.