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Trials 14

By: zee66 on Sep 18th, 2013  |  syntax: None  |  size: 6.89 KB  |  hits: 29  |  expires: Never
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  1. Read this story and all of its chapters in paragraph format with better editing, here:
  2. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/129684/the-trials
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  4. This version of the story is heavily unedited.
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  8. >Echo pivoted her wings downward, causing her to lose some air just as the giant spider sailed overhead.
  9. >It landed on the ground, coming to a skidding halt with its eight legs.
  10. >Tirelessly, it crouched, ready to leap again.
  11. >She pivoted her wings to do a short dive towards it, breaking to the right just as the spider sailed past.
  12. >Her hooves hit the ground and she faced the creature now far away from her.
  13. >Loud breaths escaped her lips, fatigue taking its toll on her quickly.
  14. >It charged her, closing the distance between them quicker than she anticipated.
  15. "Hrk!"
  16. >Echo threw her body to the side in hopes of dodging, only for one of the spider's legs to clip her own.
  17. >She was sent in a spin to the ground, her mouth losing grip on the sword as it went skidding.
  18. >Weaponless, she desperately pawed at the ground in front of her to approach her sword, but the spider was quickly upon her.
  19. "Hah!"
  20. >One of the spider's legs held her down and she could feel its weight loosen a bit, the spider raising up to stab down with its claws.
  21. >She tried to shrug it off, knowing she wouldn't be able to, until the leg completely lifted off of her.
  22. >Surprised, Echo rolled to face it, only for her to see Speck having thrown herself into its side.
  23. >"Aaah!" Speck cried, shoving with all of her might.
  24. >The heavy, protective armour threw the spider off balance.
  25. >She reeled back, only to ram herself into the spider's side again, shield first.
  26. >Miraculously, the spider flipped over and Speck jumped on top of it, pummeling at the spider's face with her shield.
  27. >Over and over again, she smashed it downwards, the fangs failing to penetrate the thick plate.
  28. >Despite its protective, rocky skin, the tip of one of the spider's fangs chipped off.
  29. >It hissed, its legs flailing while it tried to regain the upper hand, only for Speck to keep it down.
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  33. >Echo leaped in with her sword in her mouth, coming up in front of the spider's upside-down face.
  34. >"Now! Stick it now!" Speck screamed, smashing her shield down once more.
  35. >With that, she wedged it in between the fangs, exposing the spider's unprotected mouth.
  36. "Hraugh!" Echo growled through her hilt, shoving the sword down.
  37. >The blade sliced right through its maw, pushing itself halfway into the flesh.
  38. >It hissed loudly, nearly deafening the bat ponies before flailing its limbs madly.
  39. >Speck was thrown off and Echo was knocked back, the spider flipping itself over.
  40. >With its front legs, it desperately tried to pull the blade from its mouth, its large limbs unable to grasp it.
  41. >Echo slid across the ground, hitting her head.
  42. "Augh!" she groaned loudly, throwing her hooves up to clench her head.
  43. >Speck landed roughly, managing to roll once and set her hooves on the ground, firmly.
  44. >"Aaah!" she screamed, charging at the occupied beast.
  45. >While it still desperately tried to remove the blade, Speck collided with its front head on.
  46. >With her shield, she launched herself straight at the hilt of the blade with the shield.
  47. >Like a hammer, she drove the rest of the blade in, eliciting another painful hiss from the spider.
  48. >Before it could do anything, she rose her shield and slammed it down again, splitting the mouth open and spilling green blood everywhere.
  49. >"Die!"
  50. >With one, final smash of her shield on the blade's hilt, the blade sliced through the spider's face, cutting it effectively in half.
  51. >She reeled back from the splatter of blood, watching the spider go limp.
  52. >It slumped to the floor in a messy heap of limbs and green blood.
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  56. >Mosina couldn't see anything as she tumbled through the air with the spider.
  57. >Not having a light crystal herself, it was difficult to see beyond the light from any of her companions.
  58. >The last thing she remembered was it leaping towards her with its fangs pointed out.
  59. >She felt the spear in her hooves embedded into some part of the spider, so she held onto it tightly.
  60. >It was in obvious pain, as every time she budged the spear, the spider spazzed and its limbs flailed.
  61. >Finally, the body of the spider slammed onto solid ground, absorbing the bulk of the hit.
  62. >Mosina still held onto the spear, feeling it drive even further upon the impact.
  63. >Holding her breath, she clung, until she realized that the body was no longer moving anymore.
  64. >With a few grunts, she unfurled herself and nudged a few spider limbs that were on top of her.
  65. >"Whoa..." she breathed, seeing the head of the spear driven deep into one of the spider's eye sockets.
  66. >It had penetrated through the underside of its head and out through one of the eye holes.
  67. >She tried to pull it out, but the golden hoof-claws got in the way.
  68. >Sighing, she pulled them off and tossed them aside, gripping the spear as tight as she could and heaving.
  69. >"Grrh!"
  70. >Her eyes held closed and she gritted her teeth as she pulled, but to no avail.
  71. >Taking a moment to breathe, she loosened her grip on the spear, only to feel another pair of hooves latch onto the end of the spear, behind her.
  72. >She opened her eyes, the world flooding her with light.
  73. >"C'mon, let's pull at the same time," Night Watch said from behind.
  74. >Mosina couldn't surpress a relieved sigh, turning around and smiling at Night Watch's smirking face.
  75. >"You wanna do something?" Night Watch asked, grinning and waggling her eyebrows.
  76. >"Okay, let's pull," Mosina muttered, sighing.
  77. >"No fun," Night responded, giggling as she helped her pull the spear.
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  81. >With one heave, Mosina and Night Watch managed to dislodge the spear and tumbled backwards in a heap of hooves and leather.
  82. >Mosina yelped, feeling Night Watch's weight on top of her.
  83. >She opened her eyes, only to meet a pair of half-lidded magenta ones.
  84. >"No-mmph!" she squealed, Night Watch sealing her lips against hers.
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  86. >"Echo! Echo, are you alright?!" Speck exclaimed worriedly, sprinting to her friend and coming to a skidding stop beside her.
  87. >Echo was belly-side up and breathing hard as though she had just run a mile.
  88. "Yeah... Thanks to you, Speck, I'm alive," she said, giving a friendly smile.
  89. >Speck blushed, returning the smile.
  90. >"We took that ugly spider on, easy! As a team!"
  91. >Echo giggled, moving up to her hooves.
  92. "Quick, let's go find the others."
  93. >"I think they're okay," Speck pointed out, pointing her hoof towards an orb of light at the other side of the room.
  94. >Nodding to each other, they took off in a brisk gallop.
  95. >As they neared, they could make out the form of the other giant spider, laying on its back in a pool of its own green blood.
  96. >Slowing to a stop, they found Night Watch standing with her spear in her hooves and Mosina laying down behind her, her face flushed red and mouth open in shock.
  97. >"Are you guys okay?" Speck asked, curious.
  98. >Night Watch gave a large grin.
  99. >"A bit roughed up but..." She glanced to Mosina behind her. "...Yeah."