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- >Rumbles could still be felt through the stone beneath their hooves.
- >Echo let out a breath she didn't know she was holding in, glancing to her right at Speck who nodded slowly to her.
- >Puffing out her chest, she moved forwards into the room, Speck following suit.
- >Night Watch cracked her neck and started walking behind Echo, while Mosina reluctantly followed by her side.
- >As they walked, the light from their crystals pulled away from the entrance and wall behind them, leaving them on a circular, flat surface of stone.
- >The darkness hid the walls and ceiling.
- >Her heart pulsing to the point of pain, Echo kept her weapon at ready, feeling as though something could reach out of the dark and snatch them up.
- >They were in a spotlight, being eyed by something.
- >She felt naked.
- >Slowly, they walked, inching towards what they thought was the center of the room.
- >Speck had a hardened gaze, ready for anything.
- >Mosina was visibly having a hard time to breathe, and Night Watch kept a scowl on her face.
- >They were ready to fight.
- >Or die, horribly. Terribly.
- >The rumbling stopped.
- >Time seemed to literally stop between the four bat ponies.
- >They froze--in fear or anticipation, they could not tell.
- >Echo felt herself unable to breath, as if a breath could disrupt whatever lurked beyond the veil of light.
- >Night Watch snorted from behind and muttered, "Circular formation."
- >The four of them each face outwards, their backs against each other with their weapons at the ready.
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- >A terrible growl, with which Echo could only describe as gasoline, filled their ears.
- >She let out a quiet huff through her teeth, like a response, or an invitation.
- >As if to answer her, a giant, unshapely form exploded out from the dark.
- >Except, it wasn't dark--it was white, and it reflected the light from their crystals easily.
- >The entire room, hundreds of feet tall and wide, lit up upon the creature's entrance.
- >Eight giant and hairy legs landed with a loud thud in front of Echo.
- >Before even taking a good look at the beast, she yelled,
- "Here!"
- >Night Watch swung to her side and blindly thrust her blade towards Echo's call.
- >Echo lunged forward, swinging her blade at one of the legs, as Night Watch's spear collided with another.
- >In a burst of blue sparks, their weapons deflected off of the white, rocky legs.
- >They leaped backwards, Speck and Mosina at the ready behind them.
- >"Back!" Mosina called, diving to her left.
- >The others dove out of the way as well, as the giant spider slammed its body down where they once were.
- >Two giant fangs, each as long as her own body, narrowly missed Echo, slamming into the floor.
- >With a loud hiss, the spider pulled up and slammed down again, Echo diving out of the way once more.
- >Eight round, ugly green eyes stared at her with a cold desire to devour, before it pulled up again.
- >She rolled but couldn't get out of the way of the spider's superior reach, until a silver spear came up and stabbed between its eyes.
- >Night Watch's spear made a dent, but ultimately deflected off.
- >The giant spider swatted her away with one of its legs, rearing up its fangs to impale Echo.
- >She hopped up onto her hooves and leaped backwards, only to witness Speck slam her entire, armoured body into the spider's side.
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- >"Haah! Mosina, get ready!"
- >Speck's momentum staggered the spider, and it annoyingly stumbled to keep its balance.
- >With her shield, she slammed against the nearest leg, taking its grip off the ground.
- >Its body fell, allowing Mosina to hop up onto its back.
- >"Nngh! Here goes nothing!"
- >She threw her claws into it with golden sparks, only for them to merely scratch its hide.
- >Echo ran up to one of the spider's flailing legs, helplessly hacking at it with her sword.
- >However, with a small shrug, the spider sent all three of them flying in different directions.
- >Night Watch hopped in front of it with her spear pointed at its face.
- >"Guys! I think we should use the light crystals!" she muttered, keeping the spider at bay.
- >But with a grunt, the spider charged at her, her spear getting pushed aside by its hide, effortlessly.
- >It slammed into her, sending her flying, landing beside Speck.
- >"Its hide is too thick! Take to the air, we can fly in this room!" Mosina screamed from near Echo.
- "Right! Let's go!"
- >With a light push off of the ground, Echo took to the air, Mosina following after her.
- >The spider helplessly hissed at them from the ground as the four air-bourne bat ponies met.
- >"Hnngh.. I'm not sure how long I can keep this up," Speck said, flapping her turquoise wings hard to compensate for her heavy armour.
- >"Right. Well, we're off to a rough start," Night Watch remarked, as out of breath as the others, already.
- "I don't know how to use the light crystals. Th-there aren't any statues around for us to use," Echo stammered.
- >Night Watch sighed and shook her head.
- >"I guess that's out of the question."
- >"What do we do? Its hide is too thick," Speck pointed out.
- "We have to go for its mouth with a lucky stab, some how," Echo uttered.
- "Let's not take took long up here, Speck has to land soon."
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- >"I can distract it fine." Speck grunted, letting out a distraught breath. "Gotta land, now! You guys have to--"
- >A giant form fell from above, colliding with her and sending her to the ground.
- >"Speck!"
- >Night Watch dove after her, watching helplessly as Speck slammed onto the rocky ground.
- >The giant spider landed beside her, turning to her unconscious body.
- >Before Mosina and Echo could dive to help her out, another giant form collided with the two of them from below.
- >They flew through the air before stabalizing themselves, scanning the room to find the giant spider latching onto the wall near them.
- >With a confused glance, Echo stared at it and then to the one on the ground that Night Watch was quickly approaching.
- "Dear Luna, There are two!" she screamed as Mosina floated in place, shocked.
- "Guh... go help Night Watch and Speck! I can keep this one distracted, for now!"
- >"R-right! Be safe!" Mosina remarked before flying off.
- "Go!" Echo urged, watching her dive.
- >She turned to the spider on the wall as it glared up to her, getting ready to leap once again.
- >Anticipating its path, she flew out of the way as it sailed past.
- >It fell far to the ground below with a loud rumble, and Echo dove after it.
- >As she neared, the spider reared up its front legs as if to catch her.
- >Skillfully, she waved between them and skimmed her blade along its back.
- >Blue sparks sailed out, only for a linear scratch to mark the place she had struck.
- >It hopped and rotated in mid air, landing while facing Echo.
- >Crouching down onto its legs, it leaped at her with incredible speed.
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- >"Rraugh!"
- >With her spear in front of her, Night Watch picked up speed quick and aimed right for the spider's back.
- >Her wings folded against her body, she made no plans to stop.
- >The spider ejected its fangs, ready to pierce through Speck's armour like butter, before Night Watch slammed into its back.
- >She hit hard in an explosion of blue sparks and rolled off of its back, smashing into the floor beside Speck, unmoving.
- >Her spear was deeply embedded into the spider's torso.
- >It reared back in pain and let out a loud, gurgly hiss.
- >"Night Watch!" Mosina screamed, flying down to the scene.
- >Both Speck and Night Watch lay unmoving next to each other, their light crystals bathing the rearing spider in white light.
- >She quickly flew to the spear sticking out of its back and grabbed it, pulling to get it loose.
- >Feeling the new presence on its back, the spider shrugged in hopes of getting her off, only for her to hang onto the spear tight.
- >"Gaah!"
- >Every move it made, the spear dug slightly deeper.
- >Begrudgingly, the spider crouched onto its legs and leaped upwards, towards one of the walls.
- >Mosina held on tightly, still, flying with the spider.
- >It landed on the wall with a loud thud, but she did not relent.
- >She tried to twist it or pull it out, until she found it would only budge if she thrust it inwards.
- >The spider tried to shake her off, flailing madly, only for her to push the sharp blade deeper into its flesh.
- >And as the spider became more agonized with pain, it flailed harder.
- >Finally, it slammed its legs against the wall, the sudden movement prying Mosina off of its back.
- >She rolled in the air and steadied herself, finding the silver spear between her hooves.
- >A loud growl caught her attention, only for her to find two large fangs flying straight towards her.