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an intresting start, no bin and name given

By: unwantedmlp on Apr 3rd, 2013  |  syntax: None  |  size: 4.78 KB  |  hits: 19  |  expires: Never
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  1. >A village of horses
  2. >strange mutant horses
  3. >here you are, anon, overlooking this village
  4. >four days ago you were in the woods near your home
  5. >all you brought along was a utility knife, pair of binoculars, and the clothes on your back
  6. >you were just going to head right out and back
  7. >suddenly a white light, and you were in this world
  8. >a day of walking led you to this place.
  9. >and after fighting off some particular mean animals you aren't too interested in trying your hand here.
  10. >the days since you have discovered the place have been spent studying them, the nights spent raiding the apple orchard at the end of town
  11. >yo still know nothing of these things
  12. >They don't seem violent, but they could be dangerous
  13. >Some fly, some have strange magical powers.
  14. >For now, the sun has gone down, time to eat.
  15. >Same routine as always
  16. >Orange horse comes in from the field, meets its family and goes to bed
  17. >The thought it strange, a horse meeting it's horse family then going inside it's horse home
  18. >you shrug off the thought and move to the trees
  19. >after a bit of looking you find a good tree
  20. >climbable, with plenty of juicy red apples
  21. >You take off your jacket and lay it on the ground
  22. >after climbing the tree you begin picking, and tossing them down onto the jacket
  23. >suddenly you hear footsteps approaching
  24. >someone is coming
  25. >"Now, ah know ah saw something over here"
  26. >You see it now, the orange one
  27. >It approaches your tree and you freeze on the limbs
  28. >"What in tarnation?"
  29. >It's found your jacket
  30. >oh shit oh shit
  31. >It starts looking around before squinting up into your tree
  32. >Your breathing slows
  33. >"Hey, you must be the varmint eatin mah apples!"
  34. >Yup, she spotted you
  35. >before you can react she turns and gives the tree a kick
  36. >everything starts shaking and you tumble out, hitting the ground with a roll
  37. >"stop you"
  38. >Nope, time for running.
  39. >Your mind focuses as the adrenaline kicks in
  40. >all you hear is your breathing, and the combined sound of your feet and your pursuer, merely steps behind you
  41. >you can tell it is faster
  42. >of course it is, it's a damn horse
  43. >You start zigzagging and running around trees
  44. >this can't last forever
  45. >but you can't let yourself get caught
  46. >You here it muttering angrily as it tries to catch you
  47. >suddenly you run out of trees and stop at the edge of a steep hill
  48. >it didn't get the message
  49. >it slams into you knocking you both down the hill
  50. >You both go tumbling, ending with your head colliding with a rock
  51. >You start falling out of consciousness.
  52. >"What are ya?"
  53. >It asks standing over you
  54. >the last thing you feel before passing out is her pulling you back to the house
  55. >You awake to find yourself staring at the roof of what looks to b the barn
  56. >You can't move
  57. >It seems you are tied down to a bench or table
  58. >You begin to struggle, no use
  59. >Your knife!
  60. >You move your hand toward your pocket
  61. >it's still there
  62. >you being trying to get it when you hear voices outside
  63. >they are coming in
  64. >you decide to act as if you're still asleep
  65. >As they enter barn it sounds like a group
  66. >"Ah found it rummaging threw mah apples. I think it's been taking them the last few nights."
  67. >"What is it?"
  68. >"Ah don't know, Fluttershy, you're the animal expert."
  69. >"Well, umm I don't know. It's not quite like anything i've seen."
  70. >You can feel them around you, studying you, you try to keep up the act.
  71. >"I've never read about any creatures like this either, let's head back to the library, maybe I can find a book to help"
  72. >you hear the group leave
  73. >after they leave you go back to pulling the knife out and begin the long task of freeing yourself.
  74. >It took awhile, but you're free
  75. >You sprint toward the door
  76. >locked, of course.
  77. >Franticly you search for another exit
  78. >up top is a window
  79. >you climb to th top and look out
  80. >it's a long drop
  81. >before you can build up the courage you see the group coming back
  82. >6 of them
  83. >you hurry back down
  84. >gotta find a place to hide
  85. >nothing good
  86. >what kind of a fucking barn is this
  87. >panic is building
  88. >they're at the door
  89. >you pull the knife out and decide to confront them
  90. >as the barn door swing open the six just stand there, staring at you.
  91. >"Hi" the pink one says
  92. >They start walking toward you
  93. >you take a step back, raising the knife
  94. >they freeze
  95. >After a moment the yellow one moves closer alone
  96. >"It's ok little guy, we're friends"
  97. >You nervously take another step back
  98. >the others seem worried, but not this one
  99. >she keeps walking toward you
  100. >suddenly you feel the knife yanked from your hand
  101. >it flies into the wall, burying itself
  102. >The blue pegasus slams into you, pinning you to the ground
  103. >"Girls don't hurt him, he's just scared" The yellow one says
  104. >"Get off of me you damn horse" You scream
  105. >They all look stunned
  106. >giving you a chance to toss the blue one off you and get up
  107. >"Ohh, ohh it talks." Pink one says excitedly.