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- a decent start and a premise i like but not a story

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  1. >Day Alcoic in Equestrian
  2. >You are Anonymous
  3. >And right now you're in a tavern in the Crystal Empire
  4. >You're At the Crystal Empire because Twilight wanted to visit her Sister in law, and you were the only one available
  5. >Not that you minded, of course
  6. >Because, to put it bluntly, She's kinda cute
  7. >And You HAVE been here a while
  8. >Anyway, here you are in a tavern in the Crystal Empire, chillin with Twilight's brother
  9. >While his wife and sister did "mare" things
  10. >And he didn't really get much of a brake
  11. >You're no doctor, but he could really use a drink
  12. >“Anon“
  13. Yeah
  14. >“Can I tell you something?“
  15. Sure
  16. >“My sister has a crush on you“
  17. >Well Then
  18. >Not expecting that
  19. >“And I feel that you should know something“
  20. >Oh God
  21. >is he going to
  22. >“And it isn't the 'if you hurt her etc. Etc.' Speech because I think you already know that"
  23. Oh. Okay then, what is it
  24. >“First let me ask, how do you feel about my little Twiley“
  25. >You can do this
  26. She's, well...uhh..
  27. >"let me rephrase that, do YOU have a crush on HER"
  28. Yes
  29. >And You blurted out the first thing in your head, smooth, real smooth
  30. >He just simply nods as he fishes a photo out of his pocket via magic
  31. >It was an old family photo
  32. >And its also the first time you've ever seen His and Twilight's parents
  33. >However, something seems
  34. >Off about it
  35. >“You see it don't you, how different Twiley's coat and mane are compared to the rest of the family"
  36. >Well,Well,Well
  37. >She does stand out compared to her mother's white coat and her father's bluish one
  38. >"Anon, what I am about to tell you doesn't leave this bar"
  39. >You slowly turn your head towards him, and you know damn well what he's going to say
  40. >"Twiley isn't my real sister, she was left on my parent porch when she was still an infant"
  41.  
  42. I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT ELSE TO DO
  43.  
  44. Alternate story:
  45. >"Well Anon, I know someone else who has a crush on you"
  46. Really who?
  47. >"Meet Tom" he says as he releases the boulder from his telekinetic grip.
  48. >The rock falls and you are crushed beneath it.
  49. >"Nop0ny touches my sister. Nop0ny"
  50.  
  51. ********************
  52. TexAnon !!UsC+cjlldAl
  53. ********************
  54.  
  55. Bonus alternate ending.
  56.  
  57. >The boulder starts to rise into the air as you stand up, holding it triumphantly from beneath.
  58. "I am no pony."
  59. >Digging your fingers into the sides of the boulder, you rip in two halves.
  60. >Toms face is one of joy as you literally tear him in half and from within one ofhis split remains, ton after ton of delicious fruity cereal begins to pour out and bury Shining Armor who can only watch mesmerized at your power.
  61. >Then from Toms other half, a river of fresh, ice cold whole milk flows, filling the bar until the ratio of cereal to milk is enough to keep the cereal crunchy but leave enough milk to slurp after the cereals gone.
  62. >You take the silver spoon off the filly bar maids cutie mark and begin to eat from your bountiful bowl.
  63. >SA:"Can I have some?"
  64. "Silly pony, Trix are for kids.
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