mlpvn outline - Ergo/Botnet

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CLASSROOM

*bell rings*

Anon and Twi talk about the lesson

Twi: By the way anon, I have a favor to ask you. Can you meet me here after school?

>Whoa, is she asking me out?

 

--CHOICE--

1. say sorry, I can't

Twi: O-oh, okay. Sorry for bothering you.

-YOU'RE A LOSER-

BAD END

 

2. say yes, of course

Twi:Great! I'll see you then!

 

TRANSITION TO SCHOOL, NIGHTTIME

Anon sees Norman and Twi

>Huh? You mean this wasn't a date after all?

Norm: Hey, anon! Glad you could make it.

Anon: Twi, what's this about?

Twi: You're going to help me break into the library.

Anon: What?

Twi: I forgot to check out a copy of Human Reproductive Anatomy, and they took my keys when I got fired from the library.

Anon: Human Repro-

Norm: Anyway, we need you to distract Scruffy while I go get the keys.

 

--CHOICE--

1. No, I'll get the keys

TRANSITION TO SCRUFFY'S OFFICE

Now, where are those keys?

 

---SUBCHOICE---

a. look in the drawer

You comb through all the shit in the drawer. Damn, Scruffy has a lot of porn.

BAM

The door opens, Scruffy has Norman in tow.

BAD END

 

b. look in the boot

Ugh, it smells disgusting. You find the key. Skip to THE LIBRARY

 

 

2.Sure

You wait in the corridor.

Oh shit! There's scruffy in the distance!

 

---SUBCHOICE---

a. Talk to him

HE KICKS YOU OUT FOR BEING AT SCHOOL AT NIGHT

BAD END

b. I actually have no idea

it succeeds

Norman comes out with the key

 

TRANSITION TO THE LIBRARY

Twi: Ah! Here it is!

>That book is obscene. It's practically porn.

Anon: Great, now let's get out of here.

Twi: Anon, you can't just take a book out of the library without checking it out! That's wrong!

Anon: Well, check it out and let's go.

Twi: The librarian isn't here.

Anon facepalms

Twilight happily reads book for a next several hours.

INSERT HI-LARIOUS CONVERSATION WITH NORMAN

Norm: Jesus, I've had it with you two. Are you just going to sit here until morning? At least Rarity knows how to have a good time. I'm off.

Norman leaves.

 

It's just you and twi now.

The tension increases.

You think about her, her adorkable personality, her bright mind, her lewd body

Slowly pan up a splash of Twilight's voluptuous body sitting and reading

She notices you

Twi: . . . Anon?

Anon: Ah! S-sorry twi, I wasn't .  . .

Spaghetti meter goes up

Twi: Anon, you know why I asked you to come instead of one of my other friends . . .

 

---CHOICE----

1. Because you want the dick.

Twi: You fucking know it!

Screen goes black, moaning ensues for ten pages

PARTY END

2. I don't know.

Twi: Because I've seen you, you're always so aloof like you don't want to look awkward in any situation. It's like you're so afraid of others judging you, you're determined not to show anything for them to judge you on.

But anon, you don't have to do that. I'm your friend, anon, and I want to be close to you. I know that you care about your friends, and that you're funny, and reasonable. i like the way you think about things. I like you. Anon, I . . .

Twilight gets closer

BAM

SCRUFFY IN DA HOUSE

Twi: Oh no! I might lose my job!

Anon: Twilight, you already lost your job.

Twi: Oh yeah.

Anon: RUN!

Splash screen of Twi and Anon holding hands and running from scruffy

 

DEMO ENDS