Title: In the Mind's Eye chp.1 Author: shankedCircuit Pastebin link: http://pastebin.com/Yp3BTwye First Edit: Thursday 18th of October 2012 12:34:43 AM CDT Last Edit: Thursday 18th of October 2012 12:34:43 AM CDT >Black >All you can see is black >If black had a sound, you're hearing it >You try to speak >If black had a voice, you have it. >You see something >Light >Like a pin hole off in a distance, and it's growing >From the light you begin to hear something >A ringing in your inner ear >Getting louder like a freight train roaring in your ears >God, this hurts your head >Finally your eyes open >And you immediately shut them >That fucking sun is out for you, you swear! >And then you feel it's warmth >All is good in the world >Your forehead throbs painfully as you grab it gently >Adorning your forehead is a rather large, obnoxious bump, the size and shape of half of a baseball >It takes you a bit of pained hissing through your teeth to calm this bump down >You'll check it out later, for now, lets just see about your situation Brain, I need a sit-rep, what's my situation. >Static Brain? >We're sorry but the number you have dialed is currently not available What the hell?  Brain! >Sorry cap'n we don't know shit! Fuck...Well lets start from the top.  My name is...my name is...my...name is.  What's my name? >It would come as a surprise but you appear to have amnesia, perhaps you should do the sensible thing and panic I would but there's no point to panicking >You gather yourself and check around your surroundings >Hey!  It's a rucksack! >You take a peek inside and find some things >An iPod, a pen and paper, a flask, some strange stone and a feather? >What are these for? >Are these even yours? >You don't remember, maybe it'll come back to you later >You've acquired a bag of stuff that might be yours >You don't know if it's yours but you're willing to check >The iPod! >You pull the black and silver device, the white ear-buds dangling haphazardly >You turn on the small device and are greeted with a swipe screen and an 8% battery life >You want to make this quick so you swipe the screen and a password screen pops up >Without thinking, muscle memory takes over and you punch in a password >8239 >And it unlocks with a soft click from the ear-buds, did you always have it so loud? >The device, and by proxy the materials in the bag must be yours, however you quietly chastise yourself over the volume. >Were you always so destructive to yourself? >You'll have to fix that >This device is clearly yours, you think, but with that low of power you want to keep things ready, so you lock it and put into hibernation. >Right, so this bag of stuff is yours, lets give the location a gander >You look around you and realize you're in a clearing of a forest with a single large oak in the middle of the vale. >Then you hear something >Snoring? >Suddenly you're on edge >Where is the sound coming from? >The tree, more specifically in the branches >Cautiously you look up into it and see a very peculiar thing. >It looks like a clump of rainbow colored hair hanging over a particularly wide branch, obscuring it's owner What is that?  No creature I know of has rainbow colored hair like that. >you think aloud >You jump when the source of the snoring snorts loudly and yawns >Curse your habit of thinking aloud, the creature is stirring >You brace yourself to run, you do not feel up for a fight and flight seems very appropriate, but your curiosity is far to piqued by this strange rainbow colored hair >The hair recedes over the branch as a strange cyan creature sits up, yawning once more >You have never seen a creature like this before and you cant help but voice this accordingly What the hell is that!? >God you suck, you can't even control your surprise, and your sudden outburst caught the things attention as it turns it's head over the branch and stares at you >It has the biggest eyes you've ever seen, and they're magenta, you know you've never seen a creature like this before >Rightly nervous you start backing up, the thing staring at you silently >The moment you step out from under the canopy of the tree it drops to the ground >Standing before you is a waist tall, rainbow haired, cyan...horse? >You aren't quite sure. >The size of the creature puts you slight ease but you do not lower your guard >It narrow's it's gigantic eyes at you >Seriously, those are big eyes >"I don't know who or what you are, but you interrupted something super important, ya know." >Wow it...she has a raspy voice "First off, I'm a human, second what do you mean important, you were sleeping in a tree." >Are you doing this? >"Exactly, super important." >You are, aren't you "How is sleeping in a tree important, more importantly how did you get up there? >You're arguing with it >You think >She smirks and unfurls a set of wings, shaking them out >Okay, so she's a winged...something >"These babies let me fly up there and sleeping just is that important." >Wow what a juvenile response, eliciting a glare from you >"But it's okay, you clearly don't know me and you clearly aren't from here.  The name's Rainbow Dash and I live in Ponyville." >Rainbow Dash?  Ponyville?  Ponyville...Ponies? >What kind of name is that, on both accounts? "What kind of name is that?" >You just voiced what you thought, you have about as much subtlety as a bull in a china shop with lit firecrackers lashed to it's tail >Rainbow Dash snorts loudly and glares, "Oh like your name would be any better." >You raise your finger and open your mouth to retort but stop short "Can I take a rain check on that answer? >Her eyes narrow again, "Now that isn't fair!  I told you my name, why don't you tell me yours." "Because I don't quite remember what my name is..." >She cocks her head and her eyebrow >"Don't remember, how do you not know your own name?" >Trying to remember only gives you a headache bringing your hand to your forehead "Ugh!  When I try and remember, my head just hurts" >Rainbow Dash starts hovering in front of you with her hoof, you guess, on her chin and looking at your head, specifically your forehead >"Hmm, well ya got some kind of bump on your forehead.  Maybe you hit your head and that gave you that thing-that-Twilight-talked-about-that-one-time." >She states extending a leg towards it, lightly touching it >You scream in agony, your voice echoing in the nearby woods >"Oh jeez, oh Celestia, I'm sorry!  I didn't mean to hurt you" >It takes all of your willpower to keep back tears >Instead you just get a line of snot running out of your nose "Oww, d-don't touch it...that felt like you punched me in the eye." >"Okay okay, I won't touch it...still got to figure out a name for yo-" >She gets cut off mid sentence as you sneeze and unleash a vicious snot-rocket to the ground >"Nasty...but it sounded like you said something with that sneeze, it sounded like you said 'anon'" >You look up, sniffing and rubbing your nose "Anon?  That's short for Anonymous.  Yeah that'll work, I think.  Hello...Rainbow Dash, was it?  I'm Anonymous." >You try and be cordial and extend a hand towards her >She stares at your hand for a bit, examining your fingers before placing her hoof into it >You grip her hoof, grinning like an idiot "So tell me, Rainbow Dash, what are you?"   --End of Chapter 1--