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Living with Echo

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  1. Pastes for all my bat pony one-shots.
  2.  
  3. Prologue: How Echo and Anon meet.
  4.  
  5. >You are walking through town talking with Mayor Mare, discussing your future house.
  6. >"So Anonymous, what are you looking for in a house?"
  7. Not much. I just want something that looks nice, and I need to be able to walk through the doors with having to duck.
  8. >The mayor squints her eyes at you.
  9. >"I see..."
  10. >She turns and starts walking in a different direction.
  11. >You follow her since you need a place to live.
  12. >After a few mintues you finally arrive to a darkish building.
  13. >It is navy blue and is one story tall.
  14. >The door seems tall enough for you to walk through it with ease.
  15. >Why would they design a door like that if they didn't know that humans existed?
  16. >"Do you like what you are seeing, Anonymous?"
  17. >You nod.
  18. Yeah, it looks pretty nice. How much is it?
  19. "A hundred bits per month seems appropriate."
  20. >She pulls out a contract and a pen.
  21. >Knowing how these things always work, you push it away.
  22. I'm going to need to check out the house first before I agree to anything...
  23. >Mare nods.
  24. >"Go right ahead, Anonymous, but don't take too long."
  25. >You nod and turn towards the building.
  26. >Alright, time to see what this place is made of.
  27. >You open the door and take a step inside.
  28. >*Insert noise of a wooden object breaking into two*.
  29. >You look down and damn, this house is a mess.
  30. >The table is flipped over, the fridge is open, there's trash all over the floor, broken glass, etc.
  31. >Holy shit.
  32. >How and why would a house be in a condition this...crappy?
  33. >You walk outside and look for the Mayor.
  34. >She was standing right in front of the house, so she wasn't that hard to find at all.
  35. >"So...did you like it?"
  36. >Sweat drips down her cheek.
  37. No, I don't like it.
  38. >You point at the insides.
  39. It's a fucking mess!
  40. >Mayor Mare walks into the house.
  41. >"I'm sorry Anonymous, but I did not actually expect anyp0ny to buy this house in a long time. It is an old building, and it is considered unattractive by the citizens."
  42. >You hear some mumbling about a haunting, but it's too quiet for you to fully comprehend it.
  43. >She walks back outside and turns to you.
  44. >"This IS the only building with doors that you can easily fit through, so if you don't like it, I'm afraid there really isn't anything I could do about it."
  45. >Damn it.
  46. Alright, I'll pay for it.
  47. >The contract is shoved into your face.
  48. >"I'm glad you are seeing things my way, Anonymous."
  49. >You grunt and grab the pen from her hoof, proceeding to sign it.
  50. >Mayor Mare smiles and slowly backs away.
  51. >"OK, I'd love to stay and chat, but I really need to go to my office, kthanxbye!"
  52. >And she sprints off, leaving behind the contract and pen.
  53. >Huh, wonder why she would do that...
  54. >When you come inside of your new home, pull a garbage bag from your ass(not literally) and proceed to pick all of the trash up.
  55. >Maybe the trash is the only problem.
  56. >As you finally pick up the last piece of trash in the living room, the wind pushes the backdoor open, revealing a trash can.
  57. >Thank you, mother nature.
  58. >After all is said and done when it comes to the kitchen and the bathroom, you decide to check out the room you will soon be sleeping in, and
  59. >Wow, it's even worse than the rest of the house.
  60. >The blankets are on the floor, the pillows are stuck in a hole in the wall, and the bed is flipped sideways.
  61. Just fucking great...
  62. >"What's great, mister?"
  63. AH!
  64. >You fall on your ass in shock.
  65. W-What?
  66. >In the darker side of the room, a pair of eyes open up.
  67. >They move closer to you, and reveal...
  68. >A dark colored p0ny.
  69. >Except that her wings look different from the usual Pegasi's.
  70. >And she is upside down, smiling at you.
  71. >And she has fangs.
  72. >"I'm Echo!"
  73. >She falls down and faceplants onto the floor, then gets back up, still smiling.
  74. >"What's your name?"
  75. I'm Anon...
  76. >"Well, I'm a bat p0ny!"
  77. >Her wings make a POMF sound, and she turns her head to the right in an attempt to look cool.
  78. >It doesn't work, and she bumps her head into the wall.
  79. >"Ow..."
  80. >You roll your eyes and cross your arms in an attempt to seem strong.
  81. Get out.
  82. >Echo tilts her head in confusion.
  83. >"Why would I leave? I live here, silly!"
  84. >You facepalm.
  85. No you don't. I just bought this house.
  86. >Echo laughs.
  87. >"Then why have I been living here?"
  88. Because you're doing it without anyone's permission!
  89. >You pull out the contract.
  90. See? I even have proof that I live here!
  91. >A helmet falls from the ceiling and lands on Echo's head, and she jumps onto your head.
  92. >"I was here first!"
  93. >A barrage of punches start to hit you in the cheeks.
  94. Ah, get off of me!
  95. >You try to pull her off, but damn, her grip is strong.
  96. >Echo hisses.
  97. >"I live here, and I'm going to stay here!"
  98. >Her fangs go straight into your scalp.
  99. AHH!!!
  100. >The pain goes through all of your body and causes you to drop to the floor, head first.
  101. >When you finally hit the ground, Echo rolls off of you, panting.
  102. >"Ha...I...win..."
  103. >You put your fingers over the area that was bitten to see if there is any bleeding.
  104. >There are mild holes, though there is no blood.
  105. >At least there's a plus to all of this...
  106. >Echo approaches your tired body, pointing a hoof at you.
  107. >"I beat you, and that means I get to stay!"
  108. >After an initial struggle to get back up to your feet, you choose to sit with your legs crossed instead, staring at Echo with no expression.
  109. >Echo is jumping around you, screaming about how she is going to live with you.
  110. >"Yay!"
  111. >You grab her with one hand and set her down.
  112. Stay put.
  113. >Her smile fades and she looks down.
  114. >"OK..."
  115. >You sigh.
  116. First things first, why do you want to live in a house like this?
  117. >Echo produces a big grin.
  118. >"Because it's really pretty!"
  119. >You tilt your head.
  120. Is that it?
  121. >Echo starts to move her hoof along the ground in a circle.
  122. >"And I don't have anywhere else to go..."
  123. >She looks up, and hugs you.
  124. >"I'm sorry for attacking you, Anon..."
  125. >Tears go down her face, going onto your shirt.
  126. >...Why would a bat pony cry about someone she just met?
  127. >"C-Can I please stay with you?"
  128. >You pull away and look into those big tear filled eyes.
  129. >A small bag falls out of her hair.
  130. >Echo grabs it and brings it up to your face.
  131. >"I-I can pay rent..."
  132. >A rat passes by your foot and Echo instantly grabs it and cracks it's neck.
  133. >"And I'll take care of all of the pests..."
  134. >You feel your pants being pulled, and look down.
  135. >"Please?"
  136. >Tears start to go down her cheeks.
  137. >You sigh and brush her mane with your hand.
  138. Alright, you can stay.
  139. >"YAY!"
  140. >Echo jumps around and turns to you, and hugs you.
  141. >Her grip on you gradually gets tighter, and you start to lose your breath.
  142. E-Echo...you're...choking...me...
  143. >She releases you.
  144. >"Sorry Anon..."
  145. >The end.
  146.  
  147.  
  148. Echo's very first catch:
  149.  
  150. >You wipe the sweat from your head as you finally get home.
  151. >You smile cheerfully as you can now take a nap after having to endure the hard labor of picking apples for 10 hours.
  152. >It's tough, but there's no other job in P0nyville for you.
  153. >You open the door and find that Echo is sitting down one foot away from you, with an adorable grin that takes up half of her face.
  154. >She looks up, and flies up to your face.
  155. >"Anon! You'll never guess what happened today!"
  156. >You pat her head and walk inside.
  157. What happened?
  158. >Echo proceeds to dig into her pockets to pull out...
  159. >A rat.
  160. >"I caught it myself!"
  161. >She drops to the floor, staring at it as if it was an important treasure.
  162. Um, is there anything special about it, or...
  163. >"It's the first thing I ever caught!"
  164. >She digs her fangs into it, getting blood all over the carpets and walls.
  165. Echo!
  166. >She looks up, ears flattened.
  167. >"Oh, sorry."
  168. >She brings the rat to your face, grinning again.
  169. >"Did you want some?"
  170. >You turn and go to your bedroom, facepalming the whole way.
  171. >Echo continues to happily eat/drink the rat while you go to sleep.
  172.  
  173. Echo steals apples:
  174.  
  175. >The sun sets as you finally bring the last basket of apples from the trees to AJ's house.
  176. >She said to bring them there and that she'll take them to her applestand the next day.
  177. >You set the the basket, and the door opens up, revealing a smiling cowgir-er, cowmare.
  178. >"Nice job, Anon. Ya did mighty good, today."
  179. >She approaches the basket, and kicks it, pushing said apples towards you.
  180. >"Ya can keep these. It's mah gift to ya."
  181. >You nod, grab the apples, and make your way home.
  182. >When you make it home, you open the door to find your roommate Echo growling at a picture of a cat.
  183. >As usual, you lightly tap her when she does things like this.
  184. Uh, Echo? What are you doing?
  185. >She turns to you, smiling.
  186. >"Anon!"
  187. >She rushes and wraps her hooves around you, nuzzling your neck.
  188. >"I missed you..."
  189. >You roll your eyes at that statement.
  190. Echo, I do this everyday.
  191. >She pulls away.
  192. >"I know, but you leave for so long everyday! What am I supposed to do when you're gone!"
  193. >You sigh.
  194. I don't know, get a job? Or just hang out with another p0ny?
  195. >Her ears flatten.
  196. >"But I don't know anyp0ny here..."
  197. >She looks back up to you.
  198. >"But you're here now! And that's all that matters!"
  199. >You pull away from her, and-
  200. >Wait.
  201. >You had apples with you when you walked inside.
  202. >Where did they go?
  203. >You look down and see all of the apples on the carpet.
  204. >Echo picks one up, and tilts her head.
  205. >"Anon...what is this?"
  206. >You grab one yourself, and chew into its juicy insides.
  207. Well, Echo, *swallows the apple chunk* this is an apple. It is a fruit that is normally grown in this town, and it tastes great.
  208. >Echo sniffs the apple, and moves it away from her face.
  209. >"It smells awful."
  210. Just taste it.
  211. >She bites into it and-
  212. >"OHMYGOSHTHISISAMAZING!"
  213. >Echo proceeds to chew the rest of the apple.
  214. >She even chewed through the middle as if it was nothing.
  215. >"That was...fantastic..."
  216. >She turns and notices the apples on the floor.
  217. >"MINE!"
  218. >And all of the apples are now somehow in Echo's mouth.
  219. >Even the one you bit into.
  220. >Great.
  221. >You go to sleep, and dream about nothing.
  222. >Day Apples in Equestria.
  223. >You wake up, and notice that there is some weight on your chest.
  224. >Looking down, you see
  225. >Apples?
  226. >What the hell?
  227. >As you get off of your bed, you trip on something and fall onto the floor, creating a mini-explosion.
  228. >...
  229. >Why was there a mini-explosion?
  230. >Echo flies into your room, gasping.
  231. >"Anon!"
  232. >She moves towards you, and pushes you.
  233. >"Why did you hurt the poor apples?"
  234. >She grabs a half-smashed apple and brings it to her cheek.
  235. >"It's ok, little apple...Echo's here to help..."
  236. >You get up, and-
  237. >There's fucking apples everywhere.
  238. >You turn to Echo.
  239. Echo...what did you do...
  240. >"I went to that apple place and grabbed every apple I saw! Isn't that great?!"
  241. >After you get back up, you slowly tip-toe your way around the house.
  242. >Almost every inch of the floor has an apple on it.
  243. >God damn it Echo.
  244. >There is a furious banging on your door.
  245. >"ANON! OPEN THE DANG DOOR!"
  246. >Sounds like Applejack.
  247. >Just perfect.
  248. >As you slowly approach the door, it comes flying straight at you.
  249. SHIT!
  250. >You duck and the door smashes into the wall, shattering into a billion pieces.
  251. >When you get up to scream at Applejack,-
  252. >She's running towards you.
  253. >"Why did you steal mah apple-"
  254. >She trips over an apple and face-plants onto the floor.
  255. >Ouch.
  256. >She gets up and looks  at all of the apples on the floor.
  257. >"What the hay..."
  258. >You sigh.
  259. Echo, come out and apologize to Applejack.
  260. >Echo comes flying out of your bedroom eating an apple.
  261. >"You really need to have one, Ano-"
  262. >Echo looks up and sees Applejack.
  263. >She notices that there are apples as her cutie mark.
  264. >Oh...shit...
  265. >"APPLES!"
  266. >Echo goes into the air and bites Applejack's flank.
  267. >This causes Applejack to run out of your house, screaming a bunch of random things.
  268. >And Echo is still attached to her flank as this happens.
  269. >...Fuck this, you're going back to sleep.
  270.  
  271. Anon learns about bat pony eating habits:
  272.  
  273. >"Hey,what do you think happened to the changelings we captured?"
  274. >"No idea. Princess Luna had her guards take care of them,so whatever happened to them must be terrible."
  275. >They both nod and wait around their posts for a few more seconds.
  276. >"Hey, wanna go see what the punishment must be?"
  277. >"Sure."
  278. >The two of them proceed to walk into the darker side of the castle.
  279. >For some reason, the back half of the castle that Celestia rules is colored a dark shade of blue so that Luna would be happy.
  280. >"Hey...this is...really creepy..."
  281. >"I agree..."
  282. >The two guards continue to walk deeper into this part of the castle for a few minutes until there is a screeching noise..
  283. >"Uh, what was that?"
  284. >"I have no idea."
  285. >*SCREECH!*
  286. >The two guards fall to the ground, shaking.
  287. >"L-Let's get out of h-here!"
  288. >"No! Besides, you were the one that wanted to see what the punishments were!"
  289. >There is a crash that sends the guards flying into the wall.
  290. >As they get up, they see...
  291. >Echo with a changeling?
  292. >"W-What the hell?"
  293. >Echo ties the changeling up with rope, then looks up at the two guards.
  294. >"Hi guys! I was just *hmph* taking care of this changeling that escaped!"
  295. >The changeling looks up at Echo and whimpers.
  296. >"There, there, little changeling. I'm going to take care of you..."
  297. >She licks her lips.
  298. >The two guards sigh in relief, then one if them starts chuckling.
  299. >"Holy crap, I can't believe I actually thought something bad was going to happe-"
  300. >Echo digs her fangs into the changeling, causing blood to erupt all over the flood and onto the two guards.
  301. >Their jaws slam into the ground as Echo makes a meal out of the prisoner.
  302. >When she finishes eating, she notices that the two guards are shaking. A lot.
  303. >"D-Did I do something?"
  304. >The two of them stare at the corpse.
  305. >"Oh, you guys wanted some too."
  306. >Echo chuckles and scratches the back of her head.
  307. >"Sorry I didn't share..."
  308. >She proceeds to bounce her way out of the area, whilst the two guards are standing there, frozen in fear.
  309. >...
  310. >"And that's why I was assigned here and not in the castle, Anon!"
  311. >Your eye twitches as thoughts of Echo eating a full grown creature while it is still alive start to enter your head.
  312. >"Uh, Anon?"
  313. >She pokes your nose a couple times.
  314. >Echo, a silly bat pony that you live with, is capable of eating a full sized animal...
  315. >"Anoooon..."
  316. >When you look up, she's gone.
  317. >"Anon!"
  318. >You fall to the floor from the sudden increase in Echo's voice.
  319. >When you turn around, you see that she is hanging upside down.
  320. >A bug flies by her and she grabs it instantly.
  321. >She throws in into her mouth, and chews it.
  322. >"I was*swallows the bug* forced to go here because apparently, I was too 'Eat first, ask later'."
  323. >Echo's smiles turns to a frown.
  324. >"Why would they send me here?! There's aren't any giant bugs in this friggin town at all!"
  325. >Another bug flies past her, but she just smacks it out the window.
  326. >"Well, I'm going to go to sleep. Night Anon!"
  327. >She boops your nose and bounces out of the room.
  328. >You lie down onto your bed, shaking at the thought of a female bat pony eating a creature as big as her.
  329.  
  330. Future Love sub-plot:(This takes place WAY after the previous events and is a work in progress):
  331.  
  332. >It's been a while since you and Echo have started living together.
  333. >She is still that overzealous bat pony that you met, and she still gets on your nerves, though you are getting less annoyed by her antics.
  334. >Hell,some of her actions are kinda cute.
  335. >Well, time to start the day.
  336. >You wake up, like you always do.
  337. >You slowly make your way out of your bedroom, hoping you don't get caught by your roomm-
  338. >"Anon! My toothbrush is floating!"
  339. >Damn it.
  340. >You walk into the bathroom to see Echo staring at the mirror, holding her toothbrush in fear.
  341. >Since she's a bat p0ny, she can't see her own reflection.
  342. >When she turns to you, she immediately latches onto your arm.
  343. >"I'm scared..."
  344. >You roll your eyes.
  345. Echo, this is a mirror. It is supposed to show the reflection of things.
  346. >The two of you turn to it.
  347. >There is a reflection of yourself and the toothbrush, but not one of Echo.
  348. >"Then why can't I see myself?!"
  349. >You sigh.
  350. Because your a bat p0ny. Bat ponies don't have reflections.
  351. >Echo moves away from you, scratching the back of her head.
  352. >"Heh, forgot about that."
  353. >She proceeds to bounce out of the bathroom.
  354. >Things like this are why you always forget why you are living with her in the first place...
  355. >You proceed to do your typical morning routine, and as you walk out of the bath, you hear a *keekeekee* noise.
  356. >That's Echo's laugh...
  357. >Time to discover whatever crazy scheme she could possibly have.
  358. Echo?
  359. >No response.
  360. >...This could be worrisome.
  361. Echo...
  362. >Still no response.
  363. >Maybe she's in your bedroom.
  364. >And of course, once you go into the bedroom, you don't find a single trace of her.
  365. You're starting to scare me Echo...
  366. >A crash is heard an-
  367. FUUUUUUUCK!
  368. >Pain goes through your foot and into soars into the rest of the body.
  369. >You look down, and notice that there is a rat trap attach to your left foot.
  370. >So she's trying to catch a rat, eh?
  371. >...
  372. >She managed to catch a rat with lightning reflexes, and she still needs to use a trap to catch a rat?
  373. >You pull it off and your left foot turns red in response.
  374. >Just fucking great.
  375. >At least it's not bleeding.
  376. >Wait, that would be hell.
  377. >If you had a bleeding foot and Echo was around...
  378. >Oh God...
  379. >"Anon!"
  380. >Echo flies into the bedroom, staring at you.
  381. >"Why did you set off my rat trap?! I needed it!"
  382. >A pair of rats jump onto your bed and laugh at the two of you, then proceed to skimper away.
  383. Those were able to cause you trouble?
  384. >"Well, yeah! They're smart!"
  385. >You sigh, and walk outside to go to work.
  386. >Echo follows you with worry.
  387. >"Wait! Where are you going?!"
  388. I'm going to work, like always.
  389. >"Oh..."
  390. >She stops moving and you go to the apple farm.
  391. >...
  392. >You start to walk away from Sweet Apple Acres after an...interesting day...
  393. >The barn broke down, was rebuilt, got taken down again, and ended up getting replaced in the span of 6 hours.
  394. >After that, the apples wanted to reward you with an apple dinner for all of your..."hard work."
  395. >You didn't do jack shit, you just sat down and ate ice cream the whole time.
  396. >Note to self: Never tell Echo about ice cream.
  397. >You open the door and see that Echo is tied to a chair with rope.
  398. >"Heh, hi Anon."
  399. >You facepalm and proceed to free her.
  400. >"I tried to get him, Anon, but he's really good!"
  401. >You proceed to take a shower, because farms make you smell.
  402. >When you finish, you see that the moon is up, it is dark outside, and Echo is wearing her helmet and other guard equipment.
  403. >Guess she's going to "work".
  404. >How she manages to get paid for doing what she does, you will never know.
  405. >"Anon...what are you staring at?"
  406. >You shake your head to regain your thoughts and turn to Echo.
  407. >She is grunting, struggling to put her horseshoe on.
  408. >"Can you help me with this, Anon?"
  409. >You go down and adjust it so that it goes on her hoof with no problem.
  410. >She gives you another cute smile in retaliation.
  411. >"Th-Thank you."
  412. >When she walks outside, she comes back inside with a dark blue saddle, blushing.
  413. >"Anon? Do you wanna...um, how do I say this..."
  414. >She looks down and moves her right hoof around in a circle.
  415. >"Would you like to ride me while I'm on the job? It gets really boring and I'd like some company."
  416. >You try to see if you have any plans for tonight, but alas, you didn't schedule anything.
  417. >Oh well, it's a free ride.
  418. Sure, I'd like to join you.
  419. >Echo squees and is now right next to you.
  420. >"What are you waiting for?! Hop on!"
  421. >You comply with her wishes and get on her back.
  422. >She takes off and your head bangs against the ceiling.
  423. >Maybe you shouldn't have started this inside...
  424. >Once the two of you finally get out of your house, and soar into the air, you look down to get a glimpse of the night.
  425. Wow, this is...
  426. >"Beautiful, right?"
  427. >You nod.
  428. It sure is...
  429. >When you turn to Echo, you notice that she is staring down at the ground.
  430. Echo?
  431. >She slows down and looks at you.
  432. >Damn, she looks...really cute...
  433. >"Yes, Anon?"
  434. Wh-What were you looking at?
  435. >She points at a group of mares on the ground.
  436. >"I was looking over some of the citizens. It IS my job, after all."
  437. >She turns and continues to fly at her original pace.
  438. >It catches you off guard and you end up squeezing Echo's flank.
  439. >"Oh, Anon!"
  440. >You blush and move your hands away from her.
  441. I-I didn't mean to do that!
  442. >She turns to you, frowns, then giggles.
  443. >"It's ok, Anon. Don't be embarrassed if this height is scaring you."
  444. >You breath in and out to calm yourself down, put your arms around Echo's neck, and rest your head on her mane.
  445. >This is...marvelous.
  446. >Echo's hair is really soft.
  447. >That counts her fur as well.
  448. >You yawn and turn to your bat p0ny.
  449. Echo?
  450. >She slows down again and shows you her gorgeous smile.
  451. >"Yes, Anon?"
  452. How do you know how to give someone a ride?
  453. >She chuckles.
  454. >"The edgy fillies and colts used to always try to get me to bite them, assuming it would turn them into a bat p0ny."
  455. >Echo produces a grin.
  456. >"I gave them all rides instead!"
  457. >Her speed abruptly returns to its original pace, though it doesn't startle you like before.
  458. >The wind hits your face, though you really don't mind it.
  459. >Echo continues to fly the two of you for a little while then lands back onto the ground, with you still on her.
  460. >Surprisingly, she was able to find your house from all the way up in the air.
  461. >Oh right, she's nocturnal.
  462. >That...explains a lot.
  463. >You start to run your fingers through her mane.
  464. >You can hear your heart beating right now.
  465. Th-This was really fun, Echo.
  466. >She turns and smiles.
  467. >"Y-Yeah. I-I'm glad you came with me, Anon."
  468. >Her face starts turning red.
  469. >"Anon?"
  470. Y-Yes?
  471. >"I-I really need to tell you s-something."
  472. >You look her straight in the eyes.
  473. I-I'm listening.
  474. >"I-I *mumbles*"
  475. >You tilt your head.
  476. What did you say?
  477. >"I said that I really *mumbles*"
  478. >She looks away from you.
  479. >"Nevermind, it was just something stupid."
  480. >Guess it's now or never.
  481. >You grab her head and turn it towards you.
  482. Echo, I think you're really cu-
  483. >"THE RATS!"
  484. >Echo gallops after the same rats from earlier in the day, knocking you off of her and causing you to face-plant onto the ground.
  485. >There was a rock in the way, so you slammed into that and passed out.
  486. >Echo proceeds to chase after the rats while you lie on the ground unconscious.
  487. >Fucking bat p0ny...
  488.  
  489. Echo learns about blood in an erection: (Clop, and has no associations with the other stories).
  490.  
  491. >You walk into town, looking for the jewelry store.
  492. >With five hundred bits in your pockets, you are going to buy a gift.
  493. >For whom, you say?
  494. >Echo, the bat pony.
  495. >She's cute, silly, an amazing fighter, and has a beautiful mane.
  496. >You would spend hours at night, cuddling and brushing that majestic hair on her head.
  497. >Since she's nocturnal, it would always end with your falling asleep, lying on that soft fur of hers.
  498. >You wouldn't know what you'd do if you weren't with her right now.
  499. >The two of you have been dating for months, and it's about time you finally get her a gift that isn't just blood.
  500. >Rarity walks past you with gold earrings as your thoughts start to distract you.
  501. >Obviously, she'd know where the jewelry story is.
  502. >You repeatedly tap her on the back, and she turns.
  503. >"Did you want something, anonymous?"
  504. >You scratch the back of your head.
  505. Uh,Rarity? Where's the jewelry store?
  506. >She tilts her head.
  507. >"Why would you want to go there? None of the products would fit you."
  508. >Commence the facepalm.
  509. Rarity, I want to get a gift for my marefriend, Echo, not myself.
  510. >All of a sudden, your arm is grabbed and you are now being dragged by Rarity.
  511. >"Anon, if you are going to get a gift for a mare, then you should've come to me!"
  512. >She is moving at an incredible pace compared to usual.
  513. >In fact, it's starting to hurt your arm.
  514. R-Rarity? You're grip is really t-tight...
  515. >"Nonsense! The jewelry store won't be open for much longer, anyway!"
  516. >After a few seconds of the arm pain and quick movement, the two of you finally make it to the insides of the building.
  517. >Rarity runs to a table full of necklaces.
  518. >"Which one would a mare like Echo like?"
  519. >Your head is grabbed and turned towards all of the ornaments.
  520. >One of them shines and forces you to turn away.
  521. They're too bright.
  522. >Rarity moves the shiny one away, and taps your shoulder.
  523. >"I removed it, Anon. Now tell me, which one would Echo like?"
  524. >She turns your head back to the table, and
  525. >They're all silver.
  526. >Damn it.
  527. Rarity, Echo would hate all of these. They are too light.
  528. >You turn to a navy blue table, and
  529. >YES.
  530. >All of them are variations of black, blue, and purple.
  531. >They're all perfect, but which one would be the best?
  532. >A mare in a suit approaches one.
  533. >"So, which one would you like to buy, Mister Anonymous?"
  534. >Rarity steps over and puts her hoof in front of the mare.
  535. >"I'll pick one out for the gentlecolt."
  536. >She glances over the pieces with her hoof up to her chin.
  537. >"Hm...this one would match her mane, but the other one would match with her armor, and that one would match her eyes..."
  538. >"AHA!"
  539. >Rarity grabs a navy black necklace with a blue crystal in the middle.
  540. >"Anonymous, if you give your bat pony this, she will love you forever!"
  541. >You pull out the bag of bits, and present it to the mare in the suit.
  542. How much for this?
  543. >"It'll be five hundred bits, counting tax."
  544. >You nod and give her the whole bag, and proceed to head out with rarity.
  545. >The sign on the outside changes from open to closed.
  546. >A sense of nervousness takes over as the two of you walk through town.
  547. Are you sure she'll like this, Rarity?
  548. >She turns to you and scoffs.
  549. >"Are you implying that I, Rarity, the creator of fashion styles, would pick something bad out?! That's preposterous!"
  550. >That gets you to shut up, since you can't think of anything to say to her.
  551. >The rest of the walk is just lifeless silence.
  552. >After a few minutes, the two of you arrive at rarity's clothing store/her house.
  553. >"Well, this was a fun day. Good night, Anonymous. Hope things go well for you."
  554. >She opens the door and trots inside.
  555. >Alright, time to go visit your marefriend/roommate/bat pony.
  556. >...
  557. >When you finally arrive, you open the door to see that Echo is tidying everything up.
  558. >As the door closes,she eeps and turns to you.
  559. >"A-Anon! You're early!"
  560. >She fumbles and the dustpan that was in her mouth.
  561. >"Oops, heh."
  562. >You take a couple steps towards her, hiding the necklace behind your back.
  563. >"Uh, Anon? What are you holding behind you?"
  564. >Damn.
  565. >Guess you won't be able to surprise her.
  566. I got you a necklace.
  567. >You bring it to her face and her eyes dilate.
  568. >"H-How can you afford this?"
  569. >You grin.
  570. I saved it up over the course of the last few months. Do you like it?
  571. >Echo stares at it for about a minute-
  572. >"I LOVE IT!"
  573. >She rushes and hugs you tightly.
  574. >You wrap your arms around her, stroking her mane.
  575. >Thank you, Rarity.
  576. >Echo pulls away, giving you bedroom eyes.
  577. >"Let's go to the bedroom, Anon. I REALLY want to show you my gratitude for this."
  578. >Your hand is grabbed by her hoof and you are dragged again.
  579. >When the two of you walk into your bedroom, Echo pushes you onto the bed.
  580. >"Wait here, I'll be back, sweetie."
  581. >She walks out of the room with the necklace.
  582. >She's probably going to put it away.
  583. >A minute later, the door opens and reveals Echo staring at you seductively in her armor.
  584. >She slowly takes a couple steps forward, grinning.
  585. >Damn, she looks good in that suit.
  586. >"You're going to love me after this, Anon."
  587. >She lowers her hoof and slowly removes her boots.
  588. >After a quick ninety degree turn, you are given a side view of her flank.
  589. >It's so...round and...oh, god, that armor just compliments it...
  590. >Echo smirks as you start to drool.
  591. >"You like what you see, eh?"
  592. >She puts her hoof to the rest of her armor, and removes it to reveal her black underwear, containing a hole for her tail and said hole is surrounded by a modest stitch of her wings.
  593. >Her tail sways back and forth, touching the button on your pants.
  594. >Another ninety degree turn, and now,
  595. >HOLY CRAP, DAT PLOT!
  596. >It's just...perfection.
  597. >It's roundness is in the magnificent shape, not a circle, and not an oval, just...damn.
  598. >Her moon/cloud cutie marks on her sides look fan-fucking-tastic.
  599. >The firmness of it could match Applejack's, and those curves,
  600. >Those curves.
  601. >Cars could drift for hours on those curves.
  602. >The hairs on her butt start to rise up for some reason.
  603. >It still looks nice.
  604. >Echo proceeds to smack her own ass, causing her skin to jiggle a little.
  605. >There is now a red mark on her flank.
  606. >Oh, the things you'd do to that bat...
  607. >She leans against you, grinding her ass against your crotch.
  608. >"I bet you like that, don't you?!"
  609. >The friction gradually gets faster and faster as time goes on.
  610. >Eventually, it becomes too much for you, and you can feel your shaft trying to come out of your jeans.
  611. >Echo looks down, and grins.
  612. >"Time to get this started."
  613. >She quickly pulls off all of your clothes and throws them onto the floor.
  614. >Your member stands loud and proud, ready for attention.
  615. >"I should take these off before I start this..."
  616. >Echo grabs her panties and slips them off, giving you a great glimpse of her vagina in the process.
  617. >She winks with it, then turns around, staring at your dick.
  618. >Her hoof raises up, and pokes it.
  619. >"Heh, you're kinda big, Anon. And hard, too."
  620. >She starts to move her left hoof up and down your manhood, and rubs her right hoof all over your testicles.
  621. >Holy...crap...
  622. >Her stroking speed increases and you produce a moan in response to it.
  623. >Echo looks up at you, and chuckles.
  624. >"I knew you'd like that."
  625. >Up and down, up and down, her hooves go to town on your cock.
  626. >After a minute of more strokes, she moves her hoof away, and licks her lips.
  627. >Echo proceeds to drag her tongue along your length, starting from your balls all the way to the tip.
  628. D-Damn...
  629. >Saliva comes from her tongue as she pulls away.
  630. >"My, I'm not sure if I could take all of it in..."
  631. >She tilts her head and wraps her tongue around your member, covering a fourth of it.
  632. >"YmP litk that?"
  633. >You nod.
  634. Yeah...that's great...
  635. >She bobs her head up and down, stroking your hose with her tongue.
  636. >Faster and faster, her tongue goes up and down your shaft, and you grab the covers of the bed, hanging your tongue out.
  637. >Her tongue starts to swerve along the length of your wang.
  638. >"You like that, don't you, handsome?"
  639. >How is she able to talk with her tongue out like that.
  640. >"Well, how do you think about..."
  641. >Echo's tongue starts to extend further than before, eventually covering all of your dick.
  642. >The pressure that is being produced down there is starting to make you throb. A lot.
  643. >It's enough for Echo to take notice of it, and she puts her glorious tongue back inside her mouth.
  644. >"Now, now, my dear, we can't have you cumming yet."
  645. >She leans towards your ear.
  646. >"I haven't even started the blowjob yet."
  647. >Echo drops down and grabs the bottom of your throbbing cock.
  648. >"Heh, it's even harder than before..."
  649. >She licks her lips yet again and slowly takes the head into her mouth.
  650. >Inch by inch, more of your dong goes down Echo's marvelous throat.
  651. >She starts rubbing one of her hooves along the parts of your rod that weren't enjoying the luxury of being sucked off by a bat pony
  652. >You can't help but start to let moans escape your throat.
  653. Oh...Echo...
  654. >You put your hands on top of Echo's head and squeeze some of her mane, hoping it's not enough to cause her pain.
  655. >She pulls away, and looks up, smirking.
  656. >"Grip as hard as you want, Anon."
  657. >And now her she is back to dragging her tongue up and down your penis again.
  658. >And it's still as good as before.
  659. >Your grip starts to increase and your mouth opens up with your tongue hanging out.
  660. >It starts to produce drool, and some of it gets onto Echo's hair.
  661. >She stops the licking and pokes your hammer again.
  662. >"Anon? How is it that your cock is so hard and throbbing like this?"
  663. >You look down, with drool dripping to Echo and the bed.
  664. It's...because...blood goes...down there...when I get turned on...
  665. >Echo's eyes widen and she starts to drool along with you.
  666. >Sweat starts going down her cheek.
  667. >"A-Anon?"
  668. Yes...beautiful?
  669. >She releases her grip on your manhood.
  670. >"C-Can I s-suck the b-blood from it? I haven't had it in a while..."
  671. >Your dick pulsates, throbbing even faster than before.
  672. >It's almost as if it has a heart of it's own...
  673. >You nod your head, sweating with her as well.
  674. Y-Yes...I-I need to finish anyway...
  675. >Echo nods and slowly leans towards your handle.
  676. >"I'm sorry if this hurts..."
  677. >She quickly latches onto your dick, and dig-
  678. OH CELESTIA!
  679. >The pain from her fangs going into your penis while it wants to explode is more than enough to completely finish you.
  680. >A mixture of blood and cum exit your body and go down Echo's throat.
  681. >There is a slurping noise, and then Echo leans away, grinning.
  682. >"Anon...you...taste...really freaking good..."
  683. >She falls over on the bed, and nuzzles you.
  684. >"This was really fun..."
  685. I...agree...
  686. >Once you regain your breath, you turn to Echo and drag your fingers through her mane.
  687. Echo?
  688. >She looks at you straight in the eyes.
  689. >"Yes, Anon?"
  690. I love you.
  691. >"I love you too, Anon."
  692. >The two of you proceed to fall asleep together, cuddling.
  693. >End.