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  1. white room, 1/? (commentary/reaction welcome) Anonymous 04/26/12(Thu)19:02 No.1557044
  2.  
  3.     >white emptiness
  4.     >directionless pale light
  5.     >you stand on something solid but you can't even distinguish it from the ceiling, or sky
  6.     >also, you're naked
  7.     >is this a dream?
  8.     >what is this place?
  9.     >where were you yesterday?
  10.     >you don't recall
  11.     >you see a dot in the distance
  12.     >for lack of a better plan, you walk toward it
  13.     >you walk at least half an hour
  14.     >you begin to notice that the dot is a feature on some kind of wall or hillside
  15.     >you continue to approach
  16.     >it is a doorway in a vertical white wall
  17.     >you enter
  18.  
  19. white room, 2/? (commentary/reaction welcome) Anonymous 04/26/12(Thu)19:04 No.1557069
  20.  
  21.     >narrow passageway with smooth white walls shortly leads to a broad, sparsely furnished room
  22.     >a window on the opposite wall admits more of the colorless light
  23.     >a large bed, a bench of some kind, pillows
  24.     >also, perhaps unsurprisingly, all white
  25.     >but in the middle of the room you see it
  26.     >the creature resembles a horse at first glance
  27.     >a smallish one, or a tall slender pony
  28.     >white, with sparkly rainbow colored mane and tail that move in a breeze you can't feel
  29.     >you notice she also has a single long slender tapering horn
  30.     >and wings
  31.     >wtf?
  32.     >she turns to look at you
  33.     >okay, definitely NOT a horse
  34.     >as if the horn and wings weren't enough of a clue, derp
  35.     >not a horse face
  36.     >horses should have long muzzles and little beady eyes on the sides of their heads
  37.     >her face is not quite human
  38.     >eerily beautiful, though, in an alien and unsettling sort of way
  39.     >big expressive violet eyes
  40.     >for a moment you think of a young Elizabeth Taylor
  41.     >rowr, Liz Taylor
  42.     >also, horses don't talk
  43.  
  44. white room, 3/? (commentary/reaction welcome) Anonymous 04/26/12(Thu)19:13 No.1557233
  45.  
  46.     >her face is more than sufficiently human that it's obvious she's not pleased to have visitors
  47.     >you crouch by the entrance, eyes locked on hers
  48.     >"Who are you? WHAT are you?" she asks
  49.     >that is most definitely a woman's voice
  50.     >you say nothing
  51.     >you've never been asked that second question, actually
  52.     >you are a bit thrown off by it actually
  53.     >you frown and stand up
  54.     >you step slowly towards her
  55.     >she stands her ground
  56.     >you circle one another slowly, looking one another up and down
  57.     >you are a bit embarrassed at your nekkidness, actually
  58.     >not that she's wearing any more than you are, unless hair counts
  59.     >"Are you some kind of ape? Or a monster? Are you a beast?"
  60.     >finally you find your voice
  61.     >"Are you a horse?"
  62.     >her eyes narrow at that
  63.     >uh oh
  64.     >"Point taken. But I don't know what to call you, and I've never seen anything quite like you."
  65.     >"My people call our species 'human,' but I do not know whether that word means anything to you. You may call me 'Anonymous.'"
  66.     >she nods slowly. "Fair enough. Call me Tia."
  67.  
  68. white room, 4/? (commentary/reaction welcome) Anonymous 04/26/12(Thu)19:41 No.1557689
  69.  
  70.     >you are more than a bit curious
  71.     >"so... what are you, exactly? I've seen similar... creatures, but not quite like you."
  72.     >she smiles at that
  73.     >"the word is 'alicorn,' but I do not know whether it holds any meaning for you."
  74.     >you raise an eyebrow
  75.     >"like unicorn? I thought they were mythical. And invisible."
  76.     >she smirks
  77.     >the expression is rather cute on her
  78.     >you plow onward
  79.     >"What is this place? I don't remember much at all before about an hour ago. Did you bring me here?"
  80.     >she makes a movement with her wing
  81.     >instinctively you recognize it as a shrug
  82.     >"I could ask the same of you. Maybe one of us is dreaming."
  83.     >"My dreams normally run in other directions. If this is a dream, it's an odd one, though not unpleasant."
  84.     >"My, Anonymous. You're such a flatterer."
  85.     >you glance at her
  86.     >she's got that smirk again
  87.     >is she trolling you?
  88.  
  89. white room, 5/? (commentary/reaction welcome) Anonymous 04/26/12(Thu)19:58 No.1557973
  90.  
  91.     >you squat on a pillow
  92.     >"So, I'm curious. Tell me about yourself and your, um, species."
  93.     >"It's a long tale."
  94.     >"We appear to have time."
  95.     >she approaches and squats on all fours beside you
  96.     >she's... almost intimidatingly tall, and slender as a thorougbred
  97.     >you wonder idly how much she masses
  98.     >she speaks softly without looking at you, of a world of magic and wonder
  99.     >through the window, as she speaks, you see a beautiful little blue planet, with a moon nearly its size orbiting well within what some thing in the back of your brain says should have been its "Roche limit"
  100.     >and on the opposite side of the planet from its satellite is a tiny, searingly bright little yellow dwarf star
  101.     >even only the size of the moon it should be a millionfold more massive than the other two
  102.     >yet it and the moon appear to orbit the little blue planet
  103.     >interesting
  104.     >and on the planet, we see pristine, untouched forests, and mountain caves in which dragons, with their vast cool intelligences, sleep for years at a time on their hoards of gold and gems
  105.     >you are fascinated by the parallels and divergences of evolution and wonder idly if your gracious hostess, if that is what she is, would give you a DNA sample
  106.     >in a forest you recognize poplar trees and black pine, but you also see brightly colored polka-dot toadstools
  107.     >wouldn't touch those with an eleven-foot electrically grounded pole
  108.  
  109. white room, 6/? (commentary/reaction welcome) Anonymous 04/26/12(Thu)20:04 No.1558052
  110.  
  111.     >you recognize brown bear and black bear, tigers and lions, but also see a bizarre chimera that looks like a contender for heavyweight champion land predator
  112.     >its front half is a lion, its rear half is a gigantic scorpion, complete with articulated stinger tail and chitinous armor
  113.     >what the fuck, that could never have evolved naturally
  114.     >could it?
  115.     >did a wizard create it?
  116.     >you recognize bison and deer and wolves
  117.     >but also sea serpents, dinosaur-ish creatures with multiple heads, and things still less identifiable
  118.     >but never mind that
  119.     >plains creatures evolve over millions of years, she says, obviously equine, with bigger, broader heads than any Earthly horse species
  120.     >she hints that their evolution may have been guided by magic, by powers older still than the dragons
  121.     >she speaks of "the Titans" and "the Creator" and you can hear the capital letters
  122.     >you wonder how much of what she is telling you is religion and how much is science
  123.     >and in the window, the wee ponies, already some showing horns and wings, evolve sentience and speech
  124.     >they are very clever, and cooperate instinctively, as befits herd creatures
  125.     >the unicorns are apparently very dextrous telekinetics and are very skilled at making and using tools
  126.     >it makes sense, you suppose
  127.     >and in the window nations arise among them, and civilizations
  128.     >and your hostess, if that she be, lives in an old castle in one of the more peaceful parts of the world
  129.  
  130. white room, 7/? (commentary/reaction welcome) Anonymous 04/26/12(Thu)20:19 No.1558297
  131.  
  132.     >she turns to you
  133.     >my, what big eyes you've got, Grandma
  134.     >stop that, dammit
  135.     >"Your turn, Anonymous."
  136.     >you think of long-ago science classes
  137.     >you speak of a star forming in a nebula formed by a supernova billions of years ago
  138.     >"a supernova, a phenomenon where an extremely large and powerful star explodes"
  139.     >"it's rare but it's the origin of most elements heavier than helium, and almost all atomic nuclei heavier than iron"
  140.     >you don't know how to interpret the look she's giving you
  141.     >haltingly, in the window, the scene appears
  142.     >the little yellow star--vaster by far than the one in the scene she showed you, but a miniscule speck compared to some of the giants known to exist in your galaxy--
  143.     >cheerfully converts hydrogen to helium, emitting heat and light
  144.     >around it dust and gas congeal into spinning asteroid fields, then planets form
  145.     >one has liquid water on its surface and an ammonia/methane/carbon dioxide atmosphere
  146.  
  147. white room, 8/? (commentary/reaction welcome) Anonymous 04/26/12(Thu)20:21 No.1558336
  148.  
  149.     >you say that how the first life formed is uncertain
  150.     >but the composition of cometary ices and the atmospheres of other planets in your solar system
  151.     >suggest that this was what your world's atmosphere was once
  152.     >and you cite the Miller-Urey experiment
  153.     >with such a foundation, complex chemistry and eventually life are thermodynamically favored
  154.     >the window shows amoebae and paramecia
  155.     >sea spiders and sea anenome
  156.     >primitive bony fish that evolve and improve rapidly
  157.     >because, you explain, there is a struggle for survival, few of any generation survive
  158.     >random mutation and natural selection drive this vast machine
  159.     >which, over billions of years
  160.     >results in vast silent Permian forests full of giant cycad trees and two-foot-long cockroaches
  161.     >and dinosaurs then walk past the window
  162.     >and primitive mammals
  163.     >some of which, small and monkeylike, lived in trees until about three and a half million years ago
  164.     >then came down from the trees, and developed a taste for meat and a knack for making tools
  165.     >and conquered a planet with stone axes and the will to power
  166.     >she gives you a long sidelong glance
  167.     >and bats her eyelashes
  168.     >"You're not going to eat me, are you, Anonymous?"
  169.     >before you can stop yourself, you reply "Not unless you ask nicely."
  170.  
  171. Next part.
  172.  
  173. in a white room, 1/? Anonymous 05/02/12(Wed)18:12 No.1682376
  174.  
  175.     >You find yourself in a white room with scattered white pillows and white furniture
  176.     >oh, and a white horse? pony? unicorn? pegasus? creature with a rainbow colored mane and tail that move in a breeze you can't feel
  177.     >she--the face and voice are definitely feminine, though her beauty is a cold, inhuman, alien beauty
  178.     >her violet eyes are very expressive
  179.     >just now she doesn't seem pleased
  180.     >"Who are you? What are you?"
  181.     >you're too boggled to speak
  182.     >she frowns
  183.     >uh oh
  184.     >her horn begins emitting a nimbus of rainbowy light
  185.     >lifting you telekinetically (ponykinetically?) into the air
  186.     >you are finally able to speak
  187.     "What is this place? Did you bring me here?"
  188.     >"I asked first, you know. Gentlemen allow ladies to go first."
  189.     >she smirks a bit
  190.  
  191. in a white room, 2/? Anonymous 05/02/12(Wed)18:37 No.1682819
  192.  
  193.     >>1682376
  194.  
  195.     >well, okay
  196.     >the surreality of this conversation, of this white featureless place, unnerve you, though
  197.     "I am Anonymous. I am a human."
  198.     >you pause awkwardly
  199.     "I apologize, but I've never seen anything quite like you. You resemble creatures from our legends, though you also combine traits of two of them, with facial features that are, uh. not very equine."
  200.     >she blinks
  201.     >"Fair enough. Call me Tia. And I am not sure where we are, exactly. Perhaps one of us is dreaming."
  202.     >she approaches slowly
  203.     >You can't help it, you back away and crouch instinctively
  204.     "I'm not accustomed to dream visits from legendary creatures, I suppose."
  205.     >she snorts. "Oh, stand up, and let me look at you."
  206.     >You slowly stand. Her eyes linger at your groin. "Male, I take it?"
  207.     >You nod.
  208.     >she steps forward silently
  209.     >she is just an inch or two shorter than you, if we don't count the horn
  210.     >You can begin to feel the heat radiating from her
  211.     >she says, "I apologize for being so abrupt, but I think that our time here may be limited."
  212.     >"Can I interest you in a proposition? Again, it isn't ladylike to be so blunt, but--"
  213.  
  214. in a white room, 3/? Anonymous 05/02/12(Wed)18:51 No.1683079
  215.  
  216.     >>1682819
  217.  
  218.     >"I summoned you here for a particular purpose. There's something I need from you."
  219.     >oh boy, here we go
  220.     >"I have grave responsibilities every day. Without getting deeply into a description of the society I live in, let it be sufficient to say that it's lonely at the top."
  221.     >you wonders where she's going with this
  222.     >She leans forward, speaking more softly.
  223.     >"And my kind have a breeding season. Which I cannot allow to distract me from duties of state."
  224.     >oh dear Jeebus, she isn't saying
  225.     >She looks at you, staring into your very soul with her big beautiful violet eyes.
  226.     >then she blushes slightly and turns away
  227.     >she can't be
  228.     >"The need won't leave me unless I"
  229.     >she appears to be thinking hard and choosing her words carefully
  230.     >"spend some time in the company of a male mammal."
  231.     >"That is why we are here, alone. I summoned you, Anonymous. The spell chose you, perhaps, because you're not wholly unwilling, and maybe have a similar need."
  232.     >you reach out and slowly run your fingers through her mane, which is softer than you had imagined
  233.     "You're beautiful, Tia. It is an alien beauty, and I should not feel this for a female not of my species."
  234.     >she blushes at that
  235.     >"Pheromones."
  236.     "Human mating desires aren't triggered by pheromones, I thought."
  237.     >she shrugs. "Magic pheromones, then?"
  238.     >she embraces you with her wings, and you lean close to nibble at her lower lip
  239.     >she pulls back and grins, then slowly slides her truly enormous horse tongue into your mouth
  240.     >her lips are nearly prehensile, she is an amazing kisser
  241.     >and that warm, warm tongue, gently insistent
  242.  
  243. in a white room, 4/? Anonymous 05/02/12(Wed)19:09 No.1683422
  244.  
  245.     >>1683079
  246.  
  247.     >she and you kiss for a long timeless moment, then she breaks the kiss
  248.     >her cheeks are visibly flushed
  249.     >how the hell is that visible through the fine white horsehair covering every millimeter of her skin?
  250.     >it's adorable regardless
  251.     >you run your hand gently down her cheek, then her neck.
  252.     >you kiss her forehead and gently nibble her ear
  253.     "I haven't ever been with one of your, well, species, Tia. How do we proceed from here? Where are your, uh"
  254.     >"Erogenous zones?" she whispers, fluttering her eyelashes. "I'll show you."
  255.     >her horn glows again, and some kind of red glowing arrow-shaped pointer appears in the air
  256.     >a hologram?
  257.     >"Low on my belly, just ahead of my hips, we have our mammary glands. The nipples are pleasantly sensitive." The arrow follows to point them out conveniently.
  258.     >Horse Sex for Dummies?
  259.     >you kneel behind her, beneath her flowing tail, reaching up to touch her nipples
  260.     >heh, crotchboobs
  261.     >they're already quite erect
  262.     >you squeeze and pluck and pull on them firmly with your fingertips, provoking a series of small squeaks and moans and whinnying sounds from her
  263.     >you can't help but laugh at that
  264.     >she goes silent and looks back between her legs to glare at you for a moment, then begins giggling
  265.     >you decides to kiss and suckle on her nipples, gently kneading the sensitive tissue surrounding them
  266.     >oh, she likes that
  267.     >she moans softly and begins swaying her hips back and forth
  268.     >"Anonymous, that feels good. Please don't stop. Oh, you don't know, I haven't been able to do this in years."
  269.  
  270. in a white room, 5/? Anonymous 05/02/12(Wed)19:23 No.1683688
  271.  
  272.     >>1683422
  273.  
  274.     "It's been a few years for me, also," says you, softly.
  275.     >"Oh?"
  276.     "Not since my wife died."
  277.     >"I'm so sorry, I didn't know."
  278.     "It's not your fault, and if you summoned me to a dream because we both need this, I can hardly object."
  279.     >"Thank the Creators you're a gentleman. Sometimes the things the spell brings aren't anatomically compatible. Some were monstrous carnivorous things that tried to eat me."
  280.     "My species is... omnivorous," you said softly.
  281.     >"Oh my. Are you going to eat me?"
  282.     "I thought you'd never ask. Can you lie on your side, with your hind legs apart?"
  283.     >her answer is a grin
  284.     >you lies on his side, his face between her haunches
  285.     >my, what a big clitoris you have, Grandma
  286.     >seriously, it's as big as a big man's thumb
  287.     >a finger slips inside her, then two
  288.     >she's already wet inside, and soft and almost uncomfortably hot, but only almost
  289.     >she shudders and sighs
  290.     >fingers slip back out and slide over her clit forward and back, up and down its length as it becomes more pronounced
  291.     >then kiss it softly, touching it lightly with the tip of the tongue, then licking it
  292.     >she squirms and moans incoherently, her hips begining to pump up and down
  293.     >three fingers slide inside her, then the whole hand, then the clenched fist
  294.     >minus five points for anatomical incompatibility, plus several million for ingenuity and enthusiasm
  295.  
  296. in a white room, 6/? Anonymous 05/02/12(Wed)19:40 No.1684021
  297.  
  298.     >>1683688
  299.  
  300.     >the fist goes deeper, free hand plucks at her nipples
  301.     >she arches her back and makes a curiously soft squeaky sound while very powerful muscles squeeze down on his fist and forearm
  302.     >panting, she says "now I think I'm ready," with a warm smile
  303.     >she stands back up, and motions for you to stand behind her
  304.     >"Now, please put your fist inside me. I want you to punch me in the uterus. Hard."
  305.     "Anything to oblige someone as beautiful as you."
  306.     >the fist slides in against only slight resistance
  307.     >she moans, arches her back, and spreads her wings broadly
  308.     >"harder, fuck me with your fist, do it harder," she hisses
  309.     >you are nothing if not obliging
  310.     >she raises her haunches higher to meet the thrusts
  311.     >with your other hand he puts first one finger into her cheerful pink anus, then two fingers
  312.     >she moans and begins to whinny
  313.     >this is a bit distracting, but you are up to the challenge and focused on the task
  314.     >she bucks her hips one last time, clamping down on your forearm with almost crushing force, and whispers "Oh, Anonymous," then, shuddering, slides herself forward off your fist with a comically audible little "slurp" sound as it pops out
  315.     >she lies on her side panting for a long time, then turns to look at you again
  316.     "Are you all right?" you ask, concern in your voice. "I didn't hurt you, did I?"
  317.     >She grins. "Deliciously." There is a long pause. "Now, can I ask you to do something else for me?"
  318.     >you smile and nod, kneeling beside her.
  319.     >she leans forward to embrace you with her wing again, and kisses you, open-mouthed and hungrily
  320.     >"How do you feel about touching a girl's horn?"
  321.  
  322. in a white room, 7/? Anonymous 05/02/12(Wed)19:54 No.1684311
  323.  
  324.     "Horn?"
  325.     >"Yes. It's another erogenous zone for us, sort of."
  326.     "Sort of?"
  327.     >"Well, when we use our magic, a charge of energy builds up in it in a manner sort of analogous to static electricity, which makes it harder to use our magic."
  328.     >you nods, not sure if you comprehend
  329.     >"And we can't drain the charge ourselves. Someone has to touch it and stroke it for us. We also find it intensely pleasurable."
  330.     >You lie beside her, looking into her eyes, and begin touching her horn, first at the base, then stroking lightly upward with your fingertips
  331.     >she shudders and the horn almost immediately emits a few little sparks of light
  332.     >experimentally, you lean over to give it a lick
  333.     >she moans, but says "stop, stop."
  334.     Hmm?
  335.     >"when it discharges, it can be dangerous. I don't want to hurt you. For example, it could pick you up and throw you across the room, if you let it discharge into your mouth."
  336.     >"Or other, stranger things could happen. I once had a lover turn into a newt."
  337.     "You turned him into a newt?"
  338.     >"He got better. But it took a few hours for him to change back, and that put a damper on the mood."
  339.     "Ah."
  340.     >"That felt amazing, but please, for your own safety, just use your hand."
  341.     "Very well."
  342.     >and soon she is squirming and moaning your name over and over
  343.     >the whole horn is glowing and emitting little rainbow colored sparks of light
  344.     >you sense she's on the edge, and whisper to her.
  345.     "Now. Hold on tight, Tia."
  346.  
  347. in a white room, 8/? Anonymous 05/02/12(Wed)20:09 No.1684547
  348.  
  349.     >>1684311
  350.     >her wings enfold you, and you begin to stroke the horn more rapidly with both of your hands, leaning forward to press your lips against hers as well
  351.     >she screams wordlessly, her whole body stiffening, as a shower of sparks and magical flame shoot out of the tip of her horn, lighting up the room in harsh blinding light
  352.     >some of the sparks of light look like little stars and hearts, you notice
  353.     >then she goes limp, leaning against you, panting, eyes half-lidded and glassy
  354.     >then looks up at you, smiling contentedly. "Oh, that was amazing."
  355.     >"Now I think it's your turn."
  356.     "What do you have in mind? I am not sure our species are anatomically compatible."
  357.     >"True, but I can improvise too. Lie on your back."
  358.     "Yes, ma'am."
  359.     >She smiles. "Let me make you feel good."
  360.     >with one marshmallow hoof she touches you
  361.     >she shouldn't really be that dextrous with a featureless hoof
  362.     >but it is, you suppose, more pony magic
  363.     >"No, that's too impersonal. Let me do something more personal for you."
  364.     >she kisses you one more time, slowly putting her long tongue into your mouth, while you suckle on it and let her slide it into the back of your throat
  365.     >then wraps her tongue around your erection in a most lovely helical shape
  366.     >she has, obviously, done this before
  367.     >in seconds your hands are on the back of her head and you are moaning her name
  368.     >she frowns and pushes your hands away with a hoof. "No hands, Anonymous. Just lie back and relax.  Let Tia make you feel good."
  369.  
  370. in a white room, 9/9 Anonymous 05/02/12(Wed)20:19 No.1684723
  371.  
  372.     >>1684547
  373.  
  374.     >she returns to her work with a will
  375.     >it feels amazing
  376.     >in a matter of seconds you are whispering her name and she is swallowing your seed, gulping greedily
  377.     >and you are spent
  378.     >she grins at you, and kisses you chastely on the cheek while you lie together side by side, panting
  379.     >"As wonderful as this has been, I am very sorry, but I must now leave to begin a very busy day."
  380.     >"Maybe someday the spell will bring you here again."
  381.     "I'd like that," you say, softly.
  382.     >suddenly a second unicorn-ish creature appears in the room, this one dark blue, and noticeably smaller than the first
  383.     >"SISTER!" she booms
  384.     >"THOU ART LATE FOR wait what the tartarus"
  385.     >she stares at you in confusion and begins to blush, then resolutely turns her head away from the nekkidness
  386.     >"Lulu, I did tell you I was going into heat and this time I was going to have to do something about it."
  387.     >"I thought you said were going to do something about THE heat. Adjust the weather."
  388.     >Tia facehoofs. It is a very human gesture.
  389.     >The blue one, "Lulu," turns back and smirks.
  390.     >"Our Eldar friends would call thee a 'mon-keigh fucker' for this, thou knowest."
  391.     >"Our Eldar friends, by which I think you must mean Macha and Idranel, need to get laid themselves."
  392.     >"Really, sister! I never!"
  393.     >"That's not what I heard," says Tia, waggling her eyebrows.
  394.  
  395.     And on that note, I end the White Room story, which I wrote in a hell of a hurry as you can see, but the idea had been in the back of my head a while. Comments? Questions?