- DO OR DEER -- By alquire.
- Setting: Before the Twilicorn events. The scenes
- happens on the Whitetail Forest, Ponyville streets, the Golden Oak Library, and
- Sweet Apple Acres (Inside the barn and outside the barn).
- For the song: Inside Golden Oak Library, Sugar Cube Corner, outside Ponyville
- (some random grasslands), Inside Fluttershy's cottage, Rarity's boutique, and
- the Sweet Apple Acres.
- Summary: Fluttershy discovers a family of Deers in the Whitetail Forest that
- has a Pony living with them. The main 6 must find a way to make him
- go live in Ponyville.
- Complete story:
- It dawns in the Whitetail Forest. the camera pans down to show the road.
- Fluttershy is walking in it with a group of Squirrels.
- Fluttershy: Here we are, little squirrels!. Goodness it just seems to be
- the perfect place for your new home.
- The camera zooms out and shows a scene that shows how calm the Whitetail Forest
- looks. <Other camera angle/scene>.
- Fluttershy: Maybe is this bush a good place for you to live?
- Fluttershy enters in the bush and says hello from inside.
- After checking in a bush, Fluttershy's head looms again, now with a
- Squirrel in her head. Fluttershy looks up
- with the Squirrel looking at her with a curious face. She smiles.
- The Squirrel continues watching her with a curious face for a second, untill a
- weird bush moving noise from behind some bushes. Both watch to the same direction, the squirrel
- with a curious face, and Fluttershy scared. Instantly after watching:
- Fluttershy: W-what was that!?
- The bush is shown, and the noise sounds again. The squirrels stay togheter
- frightened, and look to Fluttershy. Fluttershy watches them how scared they are, takes
- a deep breath, and says:
- Fluttershy: Don't worry, i-i will go check...(With a subtle smile, but nervous)
- Fluttershy gets out of the bush from she was hiding, and she goes check the bushes
- where the snorts sound. With the hoofs shaking of how frightened she is.
- She opens the bushes, and she checks the other side of the bushes. Fluttershy eyes open widely.
- There's a pair of deers in the other side of the bush. They're resting and
- kind of "talking" with snorts. Fluttershy's face is shown again, and the eyes
- close, making a sigh of relief. With the eyes still closed, she notices
- a snort that doesn't sounds like the other snorts at all, and she opens the eyes even more
- widely.
- The scene shows both deers and a colt appears, he's in young age, and has branches over his
- head. But he is not a deer. Again Fluttershy is shown with a "dramatic" face, the music
- finishes at the same time the screen fades to black.
- [OPENING THEME]
- The scene appears at the Golden Oak Library, with Twilight holding a book with magic
- while Spike, following her has a pile of a lot of books. Somebody knocks the door.
- And Spike looks to the door, he goes to open it and before he could catch the doorknob
- with the tail, Fluttershy opens the door with strength, knocking spike. Instantly, she says:
- Fluttershy: Twilight! Twilight! You wont believe what i saw in the woods!.
- She calms a lot, and she says with softness:
- Fluttershy: O-or i think, so...
- Spike looms in the pile of books, with a frown looking at her. When he looms, Fluttershy
- looks him for a second and then she looks to twilight back.
- Twilight Sparkle: What could it be?
- Fluttershy: I-i think i saw a Pony in the woods...
- Twilight looks stranged.
- Twilight Sparkle: Yeah...And?
- Fluttershy: It...It wasn't alone...
- With an even more stanged look.
- Twilight Sparkle: Ok...So--
- Fluttershy interrupts Twilight, and she says with a loud voice:
- Fluttershy: He was with a deer family!.
- Twilight Looks impressed.
- Twilight Sparkle: With a deer family?!.
- The camera zooms out and Pinkie Pie appears in the side of Twilight.
- Pinkie Pie: With a deer family?!
- Twilight Looks at Pinkie pie with a frown.
- Twilight Sparkle: Pinkie Pie, When did you get here?
- Pinkie Pie: I was here helping you find a book, silly.
- Everyone turns to look to Spike, and he says while he's trying to search in the pile of books.
- Spike: Yeah. And well, actually i found it when it hit my face...
- A animation of a Headache in Spike. Twilight takes the book with magic. Everyone looking at it.
- And spike gets close to the circle of ponies gathered to look at the book.
- Twilight Sparkle: I have been studying deers for a couple of weeks, and they're quite fascinating.
- (Says quite fascinating, while looking up, and with a subtle smile)
- Now the scene focus on the drawings in the book.
- Twilight Sparkle: They actually are species that likes to move from forest to forest.
- They seem to have access to magic through the trees but i'm not sure about it...Or how...
- This seems to be the season for them to change forest. (She closes the book). Fluttershy
- looks nervous.
- Fluttershy: W-what!, no!, they can't leave now!, they have a pony with them!.
- Twilight Sparkle: But Fluttershy!. Are you really sure it was a pony?
- Fluttershy: Pretty sure! please, can we just go check? Please please please?
- (Some SFX of a Rubber Ducky when smiling)
- Twilight Sparkle looks to Pinkie Pie, while Pinkie is smiling all way through.
- After that, she looks to Fluttershy again. And nods with her head.
- Fluttershy: YES!
- <Snare Military-esque Score>
- Twilight Sparkle: We should go right now, girls. They can be leaving anytime soon...
- <Fade to the Whitetail Forest>
- Appears a scene of the Whitetail Forest, with the main 6 walking in the same path.
- Rainbow Dash is flying, Pinkie Pie is jump-walking as usuall, and Fluttershy it's in the lead.
- Rainbow Dash: Sooo, let me get this clear. Are we searching for a deer?
- Applejack: No, sugar cube. We are searching for a pony that THINKS it's a deer.
- She thinks for a second, and says:
- Rainbow Dash: ...I still don't get it, why he thinks he's a deer?
- Rarity: Maybe he has never seen a Pony before, dear.
- (She looks straight with the eyes widely open)
- Rarity: Maybe he doesn't even knows what fashion is!.
- Pinkie Pie: They musn't care because they have those nice dots in their back!.
- While Rarity looks angry to Pinkie Pie, and Pinkie Pie of course
- is smiling, Fluttershy says:
- Fluttershy: I...I just hope they're still there...
- Twilight Sparkle: In fact, the time is not in our favor...Rainbow Dash, can you
- go search flying?
- Rainbow Dash: Well that's something i can do!.
- And Rainbow Dash goes flying fast to the air.
- Theres a few scenes of Rainbow Dash searching in the forest, and when she
- finds the family of deers, she goes to the surface to check if they really are.
- When she arrives the surface, Rainbow Dash says, with the eyes closed:
- Rainbow Dash: Didn't took me a second!
- When she opens the eyes, she looks suprised and the camera zooms out to show
- the Ponies are already there. Doing various things, like:
- Twilight Sparkle it's watching the hooves of the deers.
- Fluttershy it's just flying above the Deers.
- Applejack it's sitting close to the place.
- and Rarity it's watching at the "lovely design" of their back. While saying a "Ooooh!".
- Rainbow Dash: No way!, how come did you find the deers faster than i?
- Twilight Sparkle: Well Pinkie did...Uh...
- Everyone watches Pinkie while she's smelling the surface, like a dog, trying
- to track something. Everyone is watching her with the eyes widely open.
- Rarity: Uh...Whatever she did.
- Redwood: I'm not used to get visitors...Why are you here?
- Fluttershy: Oh, h-hello mister...
- Redwood: Redwood. My name is Redwood, and she is Mapleleaf.
- Fluttershy: Ok...Mister Redwood, i was asking if you could stay for a little more time in the Whitetail Woods...
- Mapleleaf looks to Redwood curious, and then looks to Fluttershy back:
- Mapleleaf: Why would we do that? We should leave today, in fact.
- Applejack: Because we think you might have a Pony in your family. I know it might sound weird, but--
- Treebark: I'm here, dad!.
- Treebark appears from behind a bush happy, and then he looks suprised to the ponies.
- Treebark: W-who...Are you?...
- He looks for a second and start walking and looking how the ponies are.
- Treebark: Why you look so...Familiar?
- After watching for a moment at the ponies, Treebark looks his dad, searching for answers.
- Redwood: Well i...
- Applejack looks Redwood, and does a gesture to calm him down. After that, she looks
- to Treebark.
- Applejack: Hey mate, wanna' come with us to Ponyville?
- Treebark: W-why?
- Twilight Sparkle: Because we SLIGHTLY think that you...Might not belong here.
- Treebark looks sad and looks down.
- Pinkie Pie: Oh just cheer up, Deer pony!. You could meet a lot of new friends!.
- Fluttershy: That's true, even a shy pony like me has a group of nice friends.
- Rarity: I could get you some REALLY good dresses to fit your style, i have to say, your
- mane fits for a new colt dress i've been designing!.
- Twilight Sparkle: And you could learn something about yourself after all. Please
- Come with us. Please?
- Treebark it's looking to the ponies, thinking. Then he looks at his parents. He looks
- again to the ponies.
- Treebark: Well if i'm like them...Then i must belong with them.
- Redwood: B-but Treeb--!
- Mapleleaf: It's ok...He's in the age now, he should be able to choose what is better for him.
- Everyone greets him, group hug, hue, etc.
- Redwood: But remember this one thing, Treebark.
- Everyone stops and looks with the eyes widely open to the Deers, in the same position.
- Redwood: You leave to live with the Ponies if you want, it's...It's ok. But remember, you can
- always come back, we will leave when it gets dark.
- They get one last family-hug. And then Treebark decides to go with the ponies. The scene fades into
- the next one. They are walking in the entrance of Ponyville.
- They enter Ponyville, and walk through the streets. Everyone looks strange at Treebark because of the
- "antlers" he has in his head.
- Twilight Sparkle: Well, this is Ponyville!. Looks like a nice place, isn't it?
- Treebark looks sad to Twilight, without saying anything at all.
- Rainbow Dash: Now you're no longer a deer, kid. You should get out those antlers, huh!.
- Rainbow Dash gets the antlers off Treebark, and leaves them in the grass. Treebark looks how
- they get away.
- Treebark: So, what can we do in Ponyville?
- Pinkie Pie: What CAN'T we do in Ponyville!, let me explain you a few things about it.
- [Song Plays]
- While Applejack is talking with Treebark outside the barn, the rest of the main 6
- are inside the barn of Sweet Apple Acres, talking about how they find
- a way to really make Treebark stay in Ponyville.
- Applejack enters the barn, to say that Treebark it's still thinking
- about just going back to the Whitetail Woods with his "real" family.
- The main 6 start to talk to him at the same time why he should stay here
- untill he just gets annoyed and escapes.
- They get upset, untill Spike appears and he says that he saw
- Treebark going into the Everfree Forest. They all get suprised, and go
- to the Everfree Forest to search for him.
- They find him trapped by a group of (Insert undefined scary creatures living in the
- Everfree Forest).
- The main 6 tries to make them leave but everything seems to be unnefective.
- It all seems lost untill Redwood appears and casts magic with his horns.
- He saves the main 6, Spike, and Treebark. Treebark says how he misses them
- and he decides to stay with him. The main 6 understands that he is what
- he wants to be, and sends a letter to Princess Celestia.
- Characters: The Main 6.
- Spike.
- Treebark.
- Redwood.
- Mapleleaf.
- Group of undefined scary creatures living in the Everfree Forest.
- Notes: The last part is REALLY unfinished, but that's what somewhat happens in my script.
- I'll update this later.
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