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  5.  PiE Thread Pillow Case 08/24/12(Fri)22:04 No.4115172
  6.  
  7. this was by request and a long time coming. I present to you /mlp/, the reverse AiE.
  8.  
  9. She Likes Cloth
  10.  
  11. >It's weird traveling between worlds. It's one of those things I never imagined doing.
  12. >It's like when you're little and you see an older pony with braces, and you think you'll never get them yourself.
  13. >Suddenly you're Thirteen and wearing them and it's somehow normal.
  14. >You know what I mean?
  15. >Now I'm getting off a train at the portal dock to earth.
  16. >Perfectly normal. A lot of ponies do it all the time.
  17.  
  18. >I got a letter from a friend last week.
  19. >I haven't seen her since she moved to earth with her family.
  20. >We were both just fillies back then.
  21. >We used to write all the time and always said we'd be best friends forever.
  22. >I guess I forgot to keep writing. I hadn't heard from her in so long.
  23. >She heard about the us losing the shop and offered me a place to stay.
  24. >It was that or try out for the town weather team.
  25. >Dad always said I was too delicate for cloud kicking.
  26. >Too soft.
  27. >Maybe...
  28.  
  29. >I just saw my first human in real life while waiting in line for boarding.
  30. >He—I think it's a he, can't tell with humans—he's punching everyp0ny's tickets and checking their passports.
  31. >So much clothes... They really do wear a lot of them.
  32. >A lot of these ponies are wearing clothes too. Weird.
  33. >You know how everyp0ny talks about how cool it is watching them use their hands?
  34. >The way they say it you think you'd have to stop from staring. I don't get it.
  35. >It's neat I guess, but their faces are weirder. This human's nose is, it's so big and flat.
  36. >And those eyes, so tiny and beady looking. He's kinda funny looking.
  37. >All the humans in the pictures I've seen looked much prettier.
  38. >Oh gosh I'm staring and he just noticed!
  39. Replies to this post:
  40. >>4115191 >>4115835 >>4150945 >>4162580 >>4268342
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  42.  Pillow Case  08/24/12(Fri)22:05 No.4115191
  43.  
  44. >>4115172
  45.  
  46. >I duck behind the tall Stallion in front of me.
  47. >Oh gosh, he's next in line! I'm after him.
  48. >Calm down Pillow, nop0ny's going to eat you. No matter what Granny says about humans.
  49. >Just be polite and show the nice stal—Man your ticket.
  50. >I dig through my smaller saddlebag for it.
  51. >Ah, there it is! Tucked into my passport book.
  52. "Tickets and passport miss." A bored voice asks.
  53. >Oh gosh! I'm holding up the line.
  54. >"Em forry" I said holding up my passport in my teeth.
  55. >Why does is that making him smile?
  56. >Oh gosh he just grabbed it with his hands! Eww! No way I'm putting it in my mouth again now.
  57. "Here you are miss."
  58. >"Thank you.
  59. >I'll just hook it in my hoof and slip if back in my bag. There we go.
  60. "Platform 4, welcome to earth."
  61. >"Umm, thank you."
  62. >Looking back I can see the ponies behind me passing him their passports.
  63. >Not even the earth ponies are using their teeth.
  64. >Oh...
  65. >Oh gosh, there was a human just four places behind me in line! And another!
  66. >I think that ones a Woman, she's pretty.
  67. Replies to this post:
  68. >>4115214 >>4133383 >>4150945
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  70.  Pillow Case  08/24/12(Fri)22:06 No.4115214
  71.  
  72. >>4115191
  73. >Flatform 4, right. There it is! 'Platform 4: Chicago, Illinois, USA'.
  74. >There are too many places on Earth. I wonder if this city's close to London.
  75. >I read a book about that place once. It sounded neat.
  76. >Oh well, this is where Strawberry Jam said she lived. She said it was nice enough.
  77. >Weird. This platform is really crowded.
  78. >I guess a lot of ponies do commute.
  79. >Dad always said he felt like work and home life were different worlds but I don't think he meant this, it's just weird.
  80. >Oh no! they're boarding already! "Wait!"
  81. "No rush miss," A unicorn by the gateway says. "You have five more minutes before we close the gate again. Ticket?"
  82. >"Oh yes sorry" I hoof him my ticket, he takes it with his magic, punches it, and passes it back. I tuck it under my wing.
  83. "Here you are, make sure to keep your passport on hoof for immigration. Just fallow the green line after you pass through."
  84. >The gateway starts glowing and sparkling. It remind me of a unicorn's horn lighting up but more sparkly and swirly.
  85. >It's so crowded. Hey, stop pushing!
  86. >Oh no, I'm getting close to the gate. Everyp0ny is just disappearing inside.
  87. >I once saw a unicorn teleport but this is just creepy. It's the same but, like, in slow motion or something.
  88. >Come on, you can do this, just a hop, skip, and a jump. You're going to hold everp0ny up if you stop.
  89. >...Or they'll just push you. Oh no I'm not ready! I don't want to go to Earth yet!
  90. >"No, please, Waaaiii—"
  91. >...
  92. >Oh, I'm through already.
  93. Posting as I write but that's all I had to start with.
  94. Replies to this post:
  95. >>4115735 >>4116092 >>4150945
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  97.  Pillow Case  08/24/12(Fri)22:28 No.4115735
  98.  
  99. >>4115214
  100. >Humans! Everywhere! Aaaauugghh!
  101. >They're gonna eeeeeat meeee!
  102. "Welcome to America miss."
  103. >AAUGHHHH! "Oh, um, thank you." AAAAAUUGGHHH!!
  104. >No! Calm down Pillow! Nop0ny's going to eat you. No human. Whatever.
  105. >Just relax. There's no going back anyway, that portal was way creepy.
  106.  
  107. >This place is big! I bet this is the biggest building in the whole city.
  108. >It's definitely bigger than any build I've been in.
  109. >There are just as many ponies here as there are humans.
  110. >Oh, 'this way to immigration', and there's the green line. So helpful.
  111.  
  112. > Immigration wasn't so bad. There was actually a pony working in one of the lines.
  113. >I wonder if he commutes too.
  114. >It was real boring though. It took me almost an hour just to get my turn.
  115. >Everything checked out though,
  116. >I already got all the paperwork and stuff done a month ago.
  117.  
  118. >Strawberry said to wait at this place afterwards because it's right outside.
  119. >It's good because there's no way I'd see her with all these po-people around.
  120. >It's a nice little resteraunt. They opened a few of them in Equestria.
  121. >I went to the one in Manhatten when visiting granny.
  122. >They had those awesome tofu patty sandwich things.
  123. >They come in little buns with ketchup and mustard, cheese, and pickles and all that.
  124. >They also come with a soda and either hay fries or those potato fries that are really good.
  125.  
  126. >I got in line to get some food. Strawberry sent me some human money to use.
  127. >Weird, I thought they were all the same, but this one only has one type of soy burger. All the others are...
  128.  
  129. >Oh. OH! Oh..
  130. Replies to this post:
  131. >>4116219 >>4150945
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  133.  Anonymous  08/24/12(Fri)22:33 No.4115835
  134.  
  135. >>4115172
  136.  
  137. I have to say, that is a terribly cute OC, OP.
  138. Replies to this post:
  139. >>4116429
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  141.  Loscil !LoscilARtE  08/24/12(Fri)22:35 No.4115859
  142.  
  143. Hello OP. I think I remember you.
  144. Replies to this post:
  145. >>4116429
  146. >>
  147.  Durriken !DurrynNlSA  08/24/12(Fri)22:39 No.4115926
  148.  
  149. Holy shit....I remember this....
  150. Replies to this post:
  151. >>4116429
  152. >>
  153.  Anonymous  08/24/12(Fri)22:45 No.4116060
  154.  
  155. Keep going. I like it.
  156.  
  157.  
  158. But AiE is told in 2nd person
  159.  
  160. Unless this is also reversed
  161.  
  162. POST MORE
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  164.  Anonymous  08/24/12(Fri)22:45 No.4116074
  165.  
  166. So what? Is that it?
  167.  
  168. I was enjoying that too, oh well.
  169. Replies to this post:
  170. >>4116092
  171. >>
  172.  Anonymous  08/24/12(Fri)22:46 No.4116092
  173.  
  174. >>4116074
  175. see spoilers>>4115214
  176. Replies to this post:
  177. >>4116127
  178. >>
  179.  Anonymous  08/24/12(Fri)22:48 No.4116127
  180.  
  181. >>4116092
  182. Didn't notice that until now, thanks.
  183. >>
  184.  Loscil !LoscilARtE  08/24/12(Fri)22:52 No.4116200
  185.  
  186. This is by far, the best OC I have seen in all my life.
  187. Brb, I'm posting the sauce of this.
  188. Replies to this post:
  189. >>4116250 >>4116429
  190. >>
  191.  Pillow Case  08/24/12(Fri)22:53 No.4116219
  192.  
  193. >>4115735
  194.  
  195. >I bought a sandwich anyway. I could smell the... other things cooking.
  196. >I'll just try to eat and ignore the smells.
  197. >Except the smell of fries. Those smell reeeeeal good.
  198. >Not many ponies like them, mom said they were too greasy for her.
  199.  
  200. >Why do humans use weird green paper as money?
  201. >I guess not just anyp0ny could copy the designs on them.
  202. >I pick up the tray in my teeth and find a table to sit at.
  203. >The chairs and tables are all so high up.
  204. >Humans always make things too tall.
  205. >They just like to pretend they're bigger because they stand on their hind legs.
  206. >Freakishly long hind legs...
  207. >I'm pretty sure that's cheating. If I stood on my back hooves...
  208. >I'd still be shorter than that human at the counter.
  209. >I'm not a good example though, I'm the smallest in my family even.
  210. >Second born with four brothers and they're all bigger than me. Mom is too, even though she's also a pegasus.
  211. Replies to this post:
  212. >>4116429 >>4150945
  213. >>
  214.  Anonymous  08/24/12(Fri)22:55 No.4116250
  215.  
  216. >>4116200
  217. Just out of curiosity, is her special talent biting the pillow?
  218. Replies to this post:
  219. >>4116429
  220. >>
  221.  Loscil !LoscilARtE  08/24/12(Fri)23:02 No.4116388
  222.  
  223. File: 1345863763893.png-(686 KB, 2049x1294, arianna_turnsheet_by_ric_(...).png)
  224.  
  225. This is the "humanized" version. The ponified version came before.
  226. Replies to this post:
  227. >>4116429
  228. >>
  229.  Pillow Case  08/24/12(Fri)23:05 No.4116429
  230.  
  231. >>4115859
  232. >>4115926
  233. >>4115926
  234. Yes, hello.
  235.  
  236. >>4116200
  237. My favorite is Sunflower from Project Sunflower on fimfiction.
  238.  
  239. >>4115835
  240. I agree.
  241.  
  242. >>4116250
  243. Everyone jokes that it's because she's good in bed but that just makes her blush a lot.
  244.  
  245. >>4116388
  246. The whole idea for this character came up in a thread after someone posted that first pic. Pillow Case and that OC are entirely different characters but Pillow's look is based off of her.
  247.  
  248.  
  249. >>4116219
  250. >These chairs are hard to sit in. I should ahve picked one of those booths. I can barely fit here on my haunches.
  251. >I'm munching on the fries and trying to unwrap the sandwhich with my mind.
  252. >Why would they seal the paper with a sticker? It's sort of hard to open with hooves guys!
  253. >You and you silly hats and polo shirts.
  254. "Pillow! Squeeee!!"
  255. >Wow! Strawberry's changed a lot! "Stawberry!"
  256. >I stumble off the funny human chair just as she gets to me, dodging around the humans and occasional pony in her way.
  257. "Oh wow, it's really you!"
  258. >She pulls me into a hug, I hug her back.
  259. >It's weird seeing her now, she had her red mane styled and cut weird. It's combed over her head more.
  260. >I haven't seen her since before she got her cutie mark but I still can't see it under the dress she's wearing.
  261. >Did all ponies here wear so much clothes or was it just really cold outside? I hope not. I've heard what Earth weather was like.
  262. >It's good to see you too Berry
  263. Replies to this post:
  264. >>4116473 >>4116677 >>4136771 >>4150945
  265. >>
  266.  Loscil !LoscilARtE  08/24/12(Fri)23:08 No.4116473
  267.  
  268. http://ric-m.deviantart.com/
  269. The artist's DA account and hes tumblr:
  270. http://ric-m.tumblr.com/
  271. Requests are closed.
  272. He got some nice artwork.
  273.  
  274. The pic you see is the only picture of that OC.
  275. >>4116429
  276. Yep, I posted that OC. Good times huh? The idea was there. My fucking brain can't into creativity.
  277. Replies to this post:
  278. >>4116677
  279. >>
  280.  Pillow Case - As written by Mr. Blue  08/24/12(Fri)23:19 No.4116677
  281.  
  282. Throwing up the name I usually use when writing stuff here.
  283. >>4116429
  284. >I stepped back to look her over, "It's great to see you too Strawberry. Wow. I can't believe it.
  285. "I know! This is great. Ok, so how was your trip? Tell me everything!"
  286.  
  287. >We made our way through the Gateway building to the strain station.
  288. > Supposedly it started underground or something and eventually went out again. Something like that.
  289. >It was a weird train though. Big, silver colored, and box shaped.
  290. >I was so distracted with all the humans and sounds and talking to Strawberry that I forgot I left my lunch at the table.
  291. >I wasn't ready at all though for my first view of the human city...
  292.  
  293. Well that's all I have time for now, sorry. I'll try to save this and post more tomorrow. If anyone else wants to do one the rules of the game are simple: Pillow Case the pony, who really likes clothes, somehow ends up on earth. That's all. Have fun if you try it.
  294.  
  295. >>4116473
  296. Yep. I can't believe I waited so long to actually write this.
  297. Replies to this post:
  298. >>4116909 >>4117463 >>4136771 >>4150945
  299. >>
  300.  Anonymous  08/24/12(Fri)23:30 No.4116909
  301.  
  302. >>4116677
  303. >Tripdubs on the way out.
  304. Nice.
  305.  
  306. I'd write something OP but I can't seem to think of anything. Someone should check back and bump this thread later so it doesn't get lost.
  307. Replies to this post:
  308. >>4117044
  309. >>
  310.  Loscil !LoscilARtE  08/24/12(Fri)23:35 No.4117044
  311.  
  312. >>4116909
  313. I'm keeping this shit alive!
  314. >>
  315.  Anonymous  08/24/12(Fri)23:37 No.4117085
  316.  
  317. >Chicago
  318. This better end with her getting raped by niggers
  319. Replies to this post:
  320. >>4117181
  321. >>
  322.  Chronicler  08/24/12(Fri)23:42 No.4117168
  323.  
  324. I support this thread.
  325.  
  326. As a liason from AiE, I wish all of you good luck in your stories.
  327. >>
  328.  Loscil !LoscilARtE  08/24/12(Fri)23:42 No.4117181
  329.  
  330. >>4117085
  331. My suggestion was Manhattan Because Manehattan, lol when this idea was starting.
  332. NY seems to be an interesting place for this story, don't you think?
  333. Replies to this post:
  334. >>4117205 >>4117395
  335. >>
  336.  Anonymous  08/24/12(Fri)23:43 No.4117205
  337.  
  338. >>4117181
  339. Manhattan is a shitty place too. It better end with her getting raped by niggers.
  340. >>
  341.  Anonymous  08/24/12(Fri)23:47 No.4117264
  342.  
  343. PiE: Ponies in Earth.
  344. I support the idea. Keep going.
  345. Replies to this post:
  346. >>4125244
  347. >>
  348.  Anonymous  08/24/12(Fri)23:54 No.4117395
  349.  
  350. >>4117181
  351. I like that it's in Chicago and not in New York like every other piece of fiction ever made.
  352. Seriously. I am sick of seeing New York in books, fanfictions, comicbooks, television, movies, etc.
  353. Plus I can relate more to Chicago; I've been there several times.
  354.  
  355. My captcha was a sound. What the hell?
  356. Replies to this post:
  357. >>4117419
  358. >>
  359.  Chronicler  08/24/12(Fri)23:55 No.4117419
  360.  
  361. >>4117395
  362. It's called the "Big Applesauce" for a eason.
  363.  
  364. Loving the story so far, Mr. Blue!
  365. >>
  366.  Durriken !DurrynNlSA  08/24/12(Fri)23:58 No.4117463
  367.  
  368. >>4116677
  369.  
  370. Excellent work, my man. Can't wait for the continuation.
  371. >>
  372.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/25/12(Sat)01:16 No.4118840
  373.  
  374. I like this thread. I might write something, though I don't consider myself an ~author~. Hopefully it'll still be fun.
  375. Replies to this post:
  376. >>4120395
  377. >>
  378.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)02:37 No.4120395
  379.  
  380. >>4118840
  381. >write
  382. >not an "author"
  383. You gonna write us some phat rhymes, dawg?
  384.  
  385. But cereal, wha'ch'you talkin' 'bout; writin' 'thout bein' no author?
  386. >>
  387.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)06:56 No.4123441
  388.  
  389. bump
  390. >>
  391.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)07:31 No.4123620
  392.  
  393. Been a while since I wrote, but this looks like an interesting concept. Let's see if I still remember how to do this thing.
  394.  
  395. I'll be doing something slightly different in a bit. Hope you don't mind sharing the thread.
  396. >>
  397.  Pancakes  08/25/12(Sat)07:51 No.4123767
  398.  
  399. "Knock, knock, knock!"
  400. > I open my eyes slowly to the sound of someone knocking on my door.
  401. > It sounds like some idiot knocking coconut halves on wood.
  402. > Goddamnit, I'm not in the mood for this shit. I try to close my eyes.
  403. "Knock, knock, knock!"
  404. > What time was it, anyway? I glance at the old clock on my table.
  405. > 11:00 AM. The alarm wasn't on.
  406. > Of course it wasn't on. I didn't set it last night.
  407. "Knock, knock, knock!"
  408. > After all, I lost my teaching job at the university three days ago.
  409. > "Early Retirement Package" my ass. At this rate, I'd go bankrupt in a couple of months.
  410. > I really should have joined the corporate world years ago, like most of my friends from college.
  411. > What kind of idiot was I? Thinking that I could really make a difference with today's youth.
  412. "I brought you a letter!" cries someone from the door.
  413. > I forced myself from bed. Might as well see who that is.
  414. > Hope it isn't any of my old students.
  415. > "Heh, yeah right," I mutter to myself.
  416. > Like any of them would even notice I was gone.
  417. Replies to this post:
  418. >>4150945
  419. >>
  420.  Pancakes  08/25/12(Sat)08:11 No.4123892
  421.  
  422. File: 1345896683091.jpg-(7 KB, 226x223, 1.jpg)
  423.  
  424. > I don't bother getting dressed and head to the door.
  425. > Best get this done quickly so I can go back to sleep.
  426. > A gray winged pony with a blonde mane and tail stands outside my apartment.
  427. > Its eyes light up in delight when it sees me. In different directions.
  428. "I brought you a letter!" she says excitedly.
  429. > The pony's voice sounds just like a regular (if not slightly dopey sounding) human girl.
  430. > I watch as she pulls out a large sealed envelope from a satchel on her back.
  431. > She holds it out to me with the brightest of smiles.
  432. > Using her mouth.
  433. "Thanks, I guess?"
  434. > I take it from her without looking at it.
  435. > Those eyes... I can't tell if she's looking at me or not.
  436. > But I feel strangely entranced by them.
  437. "Your welcome!"
  438. > And with that, she closes her satchel and flies off into the sky.
  439. > She changes directions a few times, as if confused.
  440. > Eventually, she disappears from sight.
  441. > I'm not sure how long I stood there in shock before returning back inside.
  442. > Maybe I've been sleeping just a little too much lately...
  443. Replies to this post:
  444. >>4150945
  445. >>
  446.  Pancakes  08/25/12(Sat)08:49 No.4124172
  447.  
  448. File: 1345898950987.jpg-(54 KB, 851x938, 2.jpg)
  449.  
  450. > The next day, I find myself standing before an new apartment building at the other side of town.
  451. > I pull out the letter from my jacket to confirm the address.
  452. Number Thirty Four, Sixth Street. Ponyville Apartments.
  453. > I frown for a moment. This was beginning to get really weird.
  454. > But then again, the stress from losing my job must be getting to my head.
  455. > I quickly shake off my doubts. Finding work is very difficult these days.
  456. > I'll take anything that can pay the bills until I can get my life back on track.
  457.  
  458. > I push the button on the intercom and speak into it confidently.
  459. > "Excuse me? Is anyone home? I came about the apartment manager position."
  460. "Aha! You've come to the right place," says a calm, female voice. "Now let me,"
  461. "Is that the human everyp0ny's talking about," cries another voice from the intercom.
  462. "Ohmygosh! Ohmygosh! Ohmygosh!"
  463. "Yes, he is! Now get off me Rainbow!"
  464. > Sounds of a slight commotion come from the intercom.
  465. > It quickly dies down, but I swear I heard clopping in there.
  466.  
  467. > A loud beeping noise. Then the apartment gate opens.
  468. > Someone's head pops out, looking around cautiously.
  469. > Then, she spots me.
  470. "Ah, there you are! This is going to be SO GREAT!"
  471. > Too shocked to react or say anything.
  472. > The purple pony is all smiles as she leads me inside.
  473. > The apartment gate closes behind us ominously.
  474. Replies to this post:
  475. >>4124182 >>4124764 >>4150945
  476. >>
  477.  Pancakes  08/25/12(Sat)08:50 No.4124182
  478.  
  479. >>4124172
  480. Taking a break to eat. Let me know what you think so far.
  481.  
  482. Kind of rusty.
  483. >>
  484.  Durriken !DurrynNlSA  08/25/12(Sat)08:58 No.4124254
  485.  
  486. Bumping for Pillow Case.
  487. >>
  488.  Happy Hole's Ass Farm  08/25/12(Sat)09:48 No.4124650
  489.  
  490. Pillow Case is so adorable! ^3^
  491. I could seriously just pick her up and cuddle her sexually non-sexually.
  492. >>
  493.  Pancakes  08/25/12(Sat)10:02 No.4124764
  494.  
  495. File: 1345903356605.gif-(135 KB, 200x200, 3.gif)
  496.  
  497. >>4124172
  498. > The purple pony leads me inside a small office. She quickly introduces herself and demonstrates her talents in exposition.
  499. > After spending half an hour with Twilight Sparkle, I finally get a gist of what's going on.
  500. > "So, you are a unicorn pony."
  501. "Correct."
  502. > "You've travelled here with your friends from the land of Equestria in order to observe human behavior."
  503. "That's right."
  504. > "And in order to do that, you need someone like me to teach you ponies how to act like humans during your stay here."
  505. "Wow, you're really getting it!"
  506. > Riiight. Assuming that what she's told me so far is true and I am not crazy, there is one huge flaw in that plan.
  507. > "No offense, Twilight, but you definitely look like ponies to me. How do you plan on blending in?"
  508. "Oh, that? I've casted a spell that makes all of us ponies look like regular humans. It's the only way we can go outside without danger of getting caught."
  509. > "I see. Why is it that I can see you, then?"
  510. > Twilight frowns a bit, staring at me sadly.
  511. "You are... different."
  512. > "..."
  513. "A-anyway, so what do you think? Will you take the job?"
  514. > She pulls out a scroll and hands it over to me.
  515. > I take a minute to read it. Looks like a fairly normal contract for an apartment manager.
  516. > Minus the clauses on "Client Secrecy" and "Restrictions on Termination". Or some portions written in some strange language.
  517. "Those are just standard clauses back in Equestria. Don't worry about it."
  518. > I stare at her, hard. She just returns a nervous smile.
  519. > But then again, I didn't really have any other options right now.
  520. > I mean, I need the job. The pay is surprisingly good. And I don't have anything to lose.
  521. > What could possibly go wrong?
  522. Replies to this post:
  523. >>4125320 >>4136305 >>4150945
  524. >>
  525.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)10:58 No.4125244
  526.  
  527. >>4117264
  528. I think the joke is that P can stand for Pillow as well as Pony, sort of like the A for Anon in AiE
  529. >>
  530.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)11:06 No.4125320
  531.  
  532. >>4124764
  533. Go on...
  534. Replies to this post:
  535. >>4125685
  536. >>
  537.  Pancakes  08/25/12(Sat)11:37 No.4125685
  538.  
  539. >>4125320
  540. Gotta step out a bit, but I'll drop in later and consider any suggestions on the first resident to visit.
  541.  
  542. Derpy isn't a resident.
  543. Replies to this post:
  544. >>4125712 >>4125880
  545. >>
  546.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)11:39 No.4125712
  547.  
  548. >>4125685
  549. Applejack!
  550. Replies to this post:
  551. >>4126743
  552. >>
  553.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)11:51 No.4125880
  554.  
  555. >>4125685
  556. What about Fluttershy?
  557. She don't know nothing about this world and she needs help to get more involved in this world with people and how things works.
  558. >>
  559.  Durriken !DurrynNlSA  08/25/12(Sat)13:00 No.4126743
  560.  
  561. >>4125712
  562.  
  563. This, heh.
  564. >>
  565.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)14:09 No.4127529
  566.  
  567. bump for Pancakes and Pillow Case.
  568. >>
  569.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/25/12(Sat)15:37 No.4128762
  570.  
  571. File: 1345923451322.png-(421 KB, 1280x1280, oRrY3.png)
  572.  
  573. Hay! So, I'ma take a stab at this. Lemme know what you think. (Oh, fyi we're not in Chicago or wherever Pillow Case is hanging out. Also first person time!)
  574.  
  575. >If there's one thing that's immediately clear being on earth for oh...five minutes? It's denim.
  576. >In the crowd waiting for the train, I can only see sort of see the green glow of the portal behind me, and a sea of human legs around me
  577. >and by Celestia do humans *really* like jeans. Half of them at least, the other half is in business clothes, it looks like
  578. >tucking my passport back into my bag with my wing, my eye catches on another pony in the crowd, a pinkish unicorn mare
  579. >She has a nervous face, but smiles when she sees me and winks
  580. >I'm about to say something when the train suddenly pulls into the station, brakes screaming. I can see the top of the train over the crowd, it dwarfs any Equestrian train
  581. >but I guess humans are big, so they need a big tr- OW!
  582. >>
  583.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/25/12(Sat)15:40 No.4128804
  584.  
  585. >The whole crowd started walking forward, and a human walked right into me and kicked me.
  586. >jump forward to keep pace with the crowd, looking back and up to see if the human's mad
  587. >He's tall, like REALLY tall, and is looking back and forth for what he hit, until he looks down and spies me.
  588. >"OH! Oh my god I'm so sorry! This is gonna sound so stupid but like, you're like completely out of my vision. Seriously if I'm looking straight ahead I can't see you."
  589. "I-it's fine! I'll be more careful, I promise!"
  590. >"....uh, what are you apologizing for? I'm the one who walked into you."
  591. >Shoot, he can totally tell that I'm nervous. I bet every person can. Not cool not cool
  592. >Finally reach the train, super-relieved that the crowd's breaking up and heading into different cars
  593. >Now I won't get stepped on!
  594. >>
  595.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/25/12(Sat)15:42 No.4128835
  596.  
  597. >Step onto the train, one of the last to board
  598. >Most of the seats look taken...
  599. >I don't wanna start wandering around and look like I don't know what I'm doing. Where is an open seat? Are they assigned or can I just take anything?
  600. >"FINAL CALL FOR OLD TOWN. NEXT STOP SANTA FE DEPOT, PLEASE STAND CLEAR OF THE CLOSING DOORS."
  601. >Huh, I wonder where that voice came from
  602. >Suddenly, hissing behind me, and the door starts making a noise like a high pitched cry, like an upset bird
  603. >Whip my tail out of the way as the doors slam shut on their own
  604. >Feel my face flush red. I hope nobody saw that.
  605. >Look down the train car...everypon...one is staring, and then all look away and pretend they're busy when I stare back
  606. >THEY TOTALLY ALL SAW! Ahhhhh this is embarassing notcoolnotcoolnotcoooooooooooooooooooool
  607. >I think I'll just...find another train car to sit on
  608. Replies to this post:
  609. >>4130829
  610. >>
  611.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)17:00 No.4130084
  612.  
  613. bump.
  614. >>
  615.  Loscil !LoscilARtE  08/25/12(Sat)17:49 No.4130829
  616.  
  617. >>4128835
  618. Proceed.
  619. Also bump.
  620. I might write something later.
  621. >>
  622.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)18:45 No.4131839
  623.  
  624. tl;dr anyone who can explain this thread?
  625. I'm not really into OC's, I hate most for them, but his one, I just lived it..
  626. Replies to this post:
  627. >>4131963
  628. >>
  629.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/25/12(Sat)18:49 No.4131963
  630.  
  631. >>4131839
  632. It's stories of ponies coming to earth and interacting with people. Take it anywhere else you want from there.
  633.  
  634. Anyway!
  635.  
  636. >Enter the next car as the train picks up speed
  637. >This one has a screen mounted on the wall, pictures of humans babbling away flitting by on it, totally ignored by most of the riders.
  638. >Little screens, big screens, humans LOVE screens!
  639. >See a pink hoof dart into the air is it...
  640. >..it is! Unicorn from the train platform!
  641. >She's wearing a pony-sized version of a human's business suit, complete with
  642. She motions to a seat beside her
  643. >What the, this seat is gigantic, my hooves don't reach the floor!
  644. >Standing back up will be fun
  645. Replies to this post:
  646. >>4132090
  647. >>
  648.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/25/12(Sat)18:55 No.4132090
  649.  
  650. >>4131963
  651. Wait, this one's fucked.
  652. *
  653. >She's wearing a pony-sized version of a human's business suit, complete with skirt.
  654. >She motions to a seat beside her
  655. >>
  656.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/25/12(Sat)19:20 No.4132644
  657.  
  658. >"Morning! First time in America?"
  659. "Yeah. Howdja know?"
  660. >She leans in. "You look like a first-timer. Nervous."
  661. >Great.
  662. "I um...yeah. You're not?"
  663. >"I'm Pepper Press. I actually work here, for FedEx."
  664. >Clearly I'm giving her a blank stare. she continues
  665. >"What I'm doing is figuring out the best way to get shipped stuff packed up right, so it's easy to shove through the portal to Equestria. Right now, somep0ny has to just carry it in by hoof."
  666. "...Oh. Well that's kinda cool though! So you work with humans every day?"
  667. >"Yeah, I...." her eyes get wide. "Hey! Look look! You're on TV!"
  668. >I turn, and the screen hanging on the wall is playing yesterday's events.
  669. >>
  670.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/25/12(Sat)19:34 No.4132969
  671.  
  672. >"-atest financial news, U.S. Bank has partnered with Bank of Equestria, with the goal of serving as the first link between what have been two seperate financial systems."
  673. >The screen changed, showing a pudgy, suited man standing at a podium in Canterlot, his frame totally dwarfing the little podium. Behind him stood a collection of various official-looking human and pony figures...and me!
  674. >"We at U.S. Bank and Bank of Equestria, believe that by forging this bond, we can bring two worlds closer together, benefitting all wh-"
  675. >"Blahblahblah. Was that guy THAT much of a blowhard in person?"
  676. >I start giggling, first time all day.
  677. "Yeah, he talked for EVER. I think he likes his own voice."
  678. >"Pff, forget him then. You gimme the rundown on what a little pegasus pony like you is doing bumping elbows with that crowd."
  679. >...I forgot to introduce myself!
  680. "Oh! Of course! I'm Sky Bright. I'm one of the top clerks at BoE, and they needed somep0ny to come to the meetings here because they can't do...um, the thing with the screen that works both ways?"
  681. >"y'mean email? Skype?"
  682. "I guess? Point is, my boss needs a fly on the wall in America to sit in on meetings, hear what they're saying, and if he needs something said, *I* say it."
  683. >>
  684.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/25/12(Sat)19:50 No.4133256
  685.  
  686. File: 1345938656846.jpg-(183 KB, 1255x700, 73755__UNOPT__safe_pinkie(...).jpg)
  687.  
  688. >"Oh! Liason. Makes sense. Are you gonna be at the big office on Columbia and A?"
  689. "Not sure."
  690. >"Oh. Where you gonna be living here in the city?"
  691. ".......not suuuuuuuuuuuure. I mean I have a place but haven't looked how to get there."
  692. >"Sweetie, you might be in a little bit of a pickle if you don't know your way. Here."
  693. >She magics open her purse, and gives me a card. It's got her name, an orange-purple logo, and a lot of numbers.
  694. >"My phone numbers on there. If you're having trouble call me, I was new once!"
  695. "Thank you so much! But, I don't have a thing to call you with..."
  696. >"everyone and I mean EVERYONE else does. Just ask, people are nice."
  697. >Not really looking forward to bothering humans I don't know to make that call. Hopefully I don't have to do that.
  698. >"NOW ARRIVING, SANTA FE DEPOT."
  699. "Huh, I'm not sure which is my stop..."
  700. >"THIS IS THE FINAL STOP. THIS TRAIN IS NOW OUT OF SERVICE, EVERYONE MUST EXIT."
  701. "Oh."
  702. >Join the crowd stumbling off the train. Get kicked, TWICE.
  703. >I was a little nervous about suddenly flying because it might startle everyone, but if this keeps up....it's flying or a bruised flank.
  704. >"Sweetie! I'm going this way towards the docks! I think the bank is THAT way. Good luck! And seriously, call me if you get stuck! Pony buddies!"
  705. >She's nice, but I'd rather today just go okay than needing her help.
  706. >Now... my first day of work. If I can find it.
  707.  
  708. Alright so that was a bunch of establishment, but next bits will up our action amount, as well as some funny convos. BTW, anyone figured out what city we're in?
  709. >>
  710.  Chronicler  08/25/12(Sat)19:55 No.4133327
  711.  
  712. >moar PiE
  713. Yes.
  714.  
  715. I shall have to do a few little one-shots for this.
  716. >>
  717.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)19:58 No.4133383
  718.  
  719. File: 1345939099536.jpg-(7 KB, 259x194, welcome to erf smug fuck.jpg)
  720.  
  721. >>4115191
  722.  
  723. WELCOME TA ERF
  724. Replies to this post:
  725. >>4133514
  726. >>
  727.  Durriken !DurrynNlSA  08/25/12(Sat)20:04 No.4133514
  728.  
  729. Words cannot express my love of this thread.
  730.  
  731. >>4133383
  732.  
  733. Also, my sides are gone.
  734. >>
  735.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)20:15 No.4133703
  736.  
  737. File: 1345940152028.png-(315 KB, 1399x792, molestie.png)
  738.  
  739. YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOU HAVE STARTED
  740. MORE
  741. I NEED MORE
  742. Replies to this post:
  743. >>4133829
  744. >>
  745.  Mr. Blue  08/25/12(Sat)20:23 No.4133829
  746.  
  747. File: 1345940613130.png-(99 KB, 320x320, 110171 - Artist StaticWav(...).png)
  748.  
  749. >>4133703
  750. I know exactly what I've started and don't worry, I have plenty more. This thread has been a long, long time coming.
  751.  
  752. I got a decent amount to update but no time to post it suddenly. I'll be back in an hour or two with a good story dump so stick around. About 2-3 pages of greentext written on a google doc to start posting.
  753. Replies to this post:
  754. >>4133892 >>4133963 >>4133985 >>4134634 >>4134995
  755. >>
  756.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)20:26 No.4133874
  757.  
  758. >mfw when this thread looks absolutely amazing and I'm not reading it because im lazy
  759. >>
  760.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)20:27 No.4133892
  761.  
  762. File: 1345940829235.jpg-(43 KB, 645x428, oh gosh.jpg)
  763.  
  764. >>4133829
  765. >>
  766.  MrSilver  08/25/12(Sat)20:31 No.4133963
  767.  
  768. >>4133829
  769. Fuck yeah.
  770. >>
  771.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)20:32 No.4133985
  772.  
  773. >>4133829
  774. I have readied my body.
  775. >>
  776.  MrSilver  08/25/12(Sat)21:06 No.4134634
  777.  
  778. >>4133829
  779. It's getting close to epic story time.
  780. >>
  781.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)21:09 No.4134713
  782.  
  783. oh my god this is so cute. I kinda want Ponies in Equestria to be a new thing now.
  784. Replies to this post:
  785. >>4134732
  786. >>
  787.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)21:10 No.4134732
  788.  
  789. >>4134713
  790.  
  791. fuck
  792.  
  793. >Earth
  794.  
  795. ...
  796. >>
  797.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)21:11 No.4134757
  798.  
  799. File: 1345943497836.png-(181 KB, 500x445, 1344028932704.png)
  800.  
  801. I like this thread better than AiE. Those got so self indulgent and escapist. This is more "I like real world, I like ponies."
  802. >>
  803.  Loscil !LoscilARtE  08/25/12(Sat)21:15 No.4134819
  804.  
  805. I've read all the stories and they are awesome, I never thought this would be a thing. Keep going!
  806.  
  807. Also, we needed something new, don't you think?
  808. >>
  809.  MrSilver  08/25/12(Sat)21:23 No.4134995
  810.  
  811. >>4133829
  812. One-hour mark.
  813. Replies to this post:
  814. >>4135234
  815. >>
  816.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)21:33 No.4135234
  817.  
  818. >>4134995
  819.  
  820. Beat me to it....
  821. >>
  822.  Pancakes  08/25/12(Sat)22:23 No.4136305
  823.  
  824. Guess we'll start with some AJ.
  825.  
  826. >>4124764
  827. "Well, howdy do, little human! I'm Applejack! A pleasure makin' yer acquaintance!"
  828. > She grabs my hand with both hooves and shakes it vigorously.
  829. > "T-the p-pleasure's a-all m-mine," I manage.
  830. > Damn, this pony has a powerful grip. She's a lot stronger than she looks.
  831. "We've always watched you folk from afar, y'know? But it's great to finally meet one of you critters! And looks like Twi's picked out one that's easy on the eyes!"
  832. > "Uh, thanks? You look quite pretty yourself, with that blonde mane and tail. Especially, that, err, hat?"
  833. "And such a charmer, too! I'm sure that everyone back on the farm would love to meet you!"
  834. > Twilight clears her throat to interrupt.
  835. "Remember, Applejack: He was selected solely for his skills and availability," explains the purple pony. "Don't get any silly ideas."
  836. "Of course not! I'm just being neighborly, 'is all. Why don't you both come inside so I can fix you both a little snack."
  837. Replies to this post:
  838. >>4136329
  839. >>
  840.  Pancakes  08/25/12(Sat)22:24 No.4136329
  841.  
  842. File: 1345947862641.jpg-(75 KB, 1280x1279, 4.jpg)
  843.  
  844. >>4136305
  845. > The orange pony serve us each a slice of apple pie and some apple juice.
  846. > They are surprisingly well made, tasting even better than some fancy places I used to frequent.
  847. > Then, Twilight and I spend a bit over an hour chatting with Applejack.
  848. > I learn that Applejack manages a farm back in Equestria.
  849. "I even brought a few seeds from Equestria to start a lil' garden in this here apartment building!"
  850. > Applejack proudly points to a cart full of various seeds and gardening implements.
  851. > So many seeds! Is she planning to start her own farm within the city?
  852. > I just smile politely and nod.
  853. > "That's, uh... great?"
  854. "'Course, it is! I'm sure that once the rest of you humans taste the produce that the Apple family makes, y'all be comin' back to us for more!"
  855. "Umm, Applejack," says Twilight. "Don't forget that we're here to learn more about humans. Not to start a new branch for your business."
  856. "Sure, sure. I gotcha."
  857. > Soon after, Twilight and I head out of her room.
  858. > Suddenly, I feel a gentle tug on the sleeve of my shirt.
  859. > I turn around to see Applejack motion for me to stay quiet. She lowers her voice as she speaks.
  860. "Could you teach me a lil' about how the soil works around these parts? I mean, when y'have some time, 'course."
  861. > I glance at Twilight. Doesn't seem like she noticed us.
  862. > "No problem, Applejack."
  863. > The orange pony smiles and ruffles my hair playfully.
  864. "You and I are gonna get along just fine, sugarcube~"
  865. Replies to this post:
  866. >>4136665 >>4138309
  867. >>
  868.  Durriken !DurrynNlSA  08/25/12(Sat)22:28 No.4136454
  869.  
  870. Annnnd parking right here.
  871. Replies to this post:
  872. >>4136590 >>4137038
  873. >>
  874.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)22:34 No.4136590
  875.  
  876. >>4136454
  877. Durriken i thought you were in the AiE thread.
  878. Replies to this post:
  879. >>4136620
  880. >>
  881.  Durriken !DurrynNlSA  08/25/12(Sat)22:36 No.4136620
  882.  
  883. >>4136590
  884.  
  885. I think I may have stopped by once or twice, bud.
  886. >>
  887.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)22:37 No.4136665
  888.  
  889. >>4136329
  890. Orange pony? Oh well, proceed.
  891. >>
  892.  MrSilver  08/25/12(Sat)22:39 No.4136698
  893.  
  894. Come on, Mr. Blue, don't let us down!
  895. >>
  896.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)22:40 No.4136729
  897.  
  898. This thread better be alive in 12 hours' time
  899. >>
  900.  Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth Mr. Blue  08/25/12(Sat)22:42 No.4136771
  901.  
  902. File: 1345948958780.png-(407 KB, 1280x720, 1328676705114.png)
  903.  
  904. >>4116677
  905. That ending was rushed because I was out of time. I'm skipping to the one before it.
  906. >>4116429
  907. >>4116429
  908. Here we go I guess.
  909.  
  910.  
  911. >Seeing Strawberry again just made everything so much more surreal.
  912. > “It’s good to see you too Berry.”
  913. >She stepped back and looked me over.
  914. “Oh, Casey, you’re still the same as I remember, just a little taller. And I totally love your cutie mark! I totally laughed when you told me what it was but it suits you so well!”
  915. >She wasn’t the first to laugh at it...
  916. >I glance at her fabric covered flank trying to remember what exactly she had said hers was. It was some sort of cup glass with a strawberry or something.
  917. >I’m don’t know.
  918. > “Yeah well... Yeah.”
  919. >It seems like more people were coming through the station.
  920. >Everywhere I look there were tall humans striding around with a few ponies mixed in the crowd. The humans towered over them enough though that there could have been more.
  921. “Are you ok PC?” She glances around at crowd behind her. “Oh I know what you’re feeling. I know right? Humans everywhere! Almost everyp0ny feels intimidated their first time on Earth. You get used to it.”
  922. > “You’re right, at least I’m not some poor little filly moving here with her parents before I got my cutie mark. Tragic!”
  923. “Oh, if you think that sounds bad,” She says giggling. “try imaging my first day of school! At least on the trip over I had my parents around to hide behind. There were a few other ponies in my school but not in my grade. It took me forever to get used used to the clothes too.”
  924. > “Clothes? Oh, yeah, you mentioned that.”
  925. Replies to this post:
  926. >>4136843 >>4150945
  927. >>
  928.  Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth Mr. Blue  08/25/12(Sat)22:45 No.4136843
  929.  
  930. >>4136771
  931. >She did mention it, in her first letter forever ago. I figured it was a school uniform or something. I remember writing to ask if they were human clothes or pony clothes.
  932. “I did? Wow, I don’t even remember. Yeah, I had never even had a formal dress before and suddenly I’m always wearing something.”
  933. > Really? “Even outside of school?”
  934. “Oh yes, my parents insisted I even wear more at home just to get used to it. And no, it’s not the weather. Honestly all my relatives make that joke when they visit, but they’re always coming in the fall so they think it’s always cold here. It took me forever to explain to my aunt that the seasons change on their own.”
  935. >My wings twitched just thinking about that. “I’ll never get how humans stand not controlling the weather, it’s so wild.”
  936. “Usually by rolling up the windows and ignoring it. After a while here you’ll forget what a reliable weather forecast is like. You just put on a raincoat if it’s bad enough.”
  937. Replies to this post:
  938. >>4136866 >>4150945
  939. >>
  940.  Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth Mr. Blue  08/25/12(Sat)22:46 No.4136866
  941.  
  942. >>4136843
  943. > “Wait, but I thought you said it wasn’t because of the weather?”
  944. “Oh no, I mean, not always. Sometimes it is but that’s not the real reason.”
  945. >I think I could guess. Humans seemed to have a thing for clothes. No that’s not it, I read about it before.
  946. >It’s because they don’t have fur so it has to be really hot out for them to be comfortable without anything on,
  947. >but they’re so used to wearing clothes they have all sorts of taboos against not wearing them in public.
  948. >I guess if you hang around humans long enough they’ll get angry and get mad at you until you start wearing something.
  949. “It’s just hard to be taken seriously on Earth without clothes.”
  950. > Wait, hold on...
  951. “People here don’t mind ponies not wearing anything, or at least they’ll say they don’t. But trust me, it’s usually only tourists that go around naked. If you dress like you’re used to wearing clothes it’s much easier fitting in.”
  952. > “Oh.”
  953. >I’m not sure if that’s right but I’m also not sure no humans going to eat me, so I’ll just take her word for that.
  954. Replies to this post:
  955. >>4136882 >>4150945
  956. >>
  957.  Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth Mr. Blue  08/25/12(Sat)22:46 No.4136882
  958.  
  959. >>4136866
  960. >She was right though. I think I was the only pony to step through that gateway without so much as a hat or a scarf.
  961. >No wonder everyp0ny was staring at me then. I must have stood out like wings on a unicorn.
  962. >Now that I think of it, no one stared at Strawberry like they did me. Somehow she just blended into the crowd of humans.
  963. > Oh Celestia! Which bag did I pack my sweater in! Did I even bring it? I feel like I’m walking around without fur.
  964. “PC, you ok?”
  965. >No I’m not ok Strawberry!
  966. >My voice is a slight and urgent whisper, “I’m not wearing anything Jam! Everyp0ny is staring at me!”
  967. >Hey stop laughing!
  968. She kneels down a little to hide her laughing fit. “We-w... heehee, w-hahaha” She takes a deep breath before spitting it out, “Welcome to earth Pillow.”
  969. > I don’t get it.
  970. > “I don’t get it.”
  971. “Oh you will soon enough. Now don’t worry, I told you no one will really mind. And I’d hate to see you cover up that adorable little pillow on your flank.”
  972. >There was a weird noise coming from a small purse she had hanging over her back. I hadn’t noticed it there with the dress.
  973. >It sounded like a swarm of bees trying to sing their way out, and I swear I saw the bad move too!
  974. “Hold on, let me get this”
  975. >Sitting on her haunches, she reaches her hoof into the bag and slides out a weird little black book hooked in her hoof.
  976. >No, wait. it’s not a book. It’s hard, made of rubber and plastic, humans make everything out of plastic.
  977. >The front of it has a glass screen with a bunch of glowing words and shapes. She taps one of the words with the other hoof and holds it to her ear.
  978. Replies to this post:
  979. >>4136954 >>4150945
  980. >>
  981.  Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth Mr. Blue  08/25/12(Sat)22:49 No.4136954
  982.  
  983. >>4136882
  984. “Hello?”
  985. > “Hello?”
  986. >Strawberry flashes me a look like I did something silly.
  987. >Oh wait. Is that modern human tech? Like the things rish ponies in the cities like to buy?
  988. >The only human tech I ever got to see was supposedly outdated, like the computer dad bought.
  989. >It was all really expensive too, something about their more complicated technology not working well around Equestria’s high magic levels.
  990. >They have to be specially made I think, which means they’re not as good as the stuff they make on Earth, usually years behind.
  991. >Usually they just take their older devices and remake them to work in Equestria.
  992. >It cost a lot of bits to get anything as good as what they had on earth but even in a town like ours it popped up.
  993. >Dad’s computer was a lot of fun, even if it was supposedly years behind earth computers. How much could they change in fifteen years anyway?
  994. >I wonder if Strawberry has a computer. She probably does.
  995. >I bet she has games too. If she does, I hope she has Frogger.
  996. “No Michael, I’m picking her up now.”
  997. >Michael? That’s a human name right?
  998. “No, don’t worry, Em is picking us up at the station.
  999. >Hold on is that a telephone? Where’s the cable then?
  1000. “Yeah I know.” Pause. “I know, we’re just going to drop by and then head out to show PC some of the sights.”
  1001. >I can hear a voice coming from the device but can’t make out what it’s saying.
  1002. “No not downtown, we’re already downtown. You know how ponies are their first time here. I don’t want to overwhelm her with the culture shock.”
  1003. >Ha! It's a little late for that Strawberry.
  1004. Replies to this post:
  1005. >>4136992 >>4136997 >>4150945
  1006. >>
  1007.  Mr. Blue  08/25/12(Sat)22:51 No.4136992
  1008.  
  1009. >>4136954
  1010. “That’s very rude Michael.” Her voice is stern and her she starts frowning. “No... No, It’s a slur! I don’t care if Star uses it all the time, it’s still a slur.” her smile starts to come back after a pause. “It’s alright, just don’t use it again please. Uhuh... no. We’ll be out late... Ok, just as long as it’s not at our place, I just cleaned up... You too, have fun with the guys. by... No it’s fine... I said it’s fine! Goodbye Michael!” Her hoof hits the glowing screen on her ‘phone’ thing.
  1011. >“So what is that?”
  1012. “That was Micha-”
  1013. > “No not who, what.” I point a hoof at the black device she’s slipping into her bag.
  1014. “You’ve never seen a smartphone before?”
  1015. > “No, only regular telephones. You know what it’s like back home”
  1016. “I keep forgetting how behind Fetluck is. I thought they’d at least have cell phones by now. Wow. Well deary, it’s sort of like a really small and compact computer that also makes phone calls.”
  1017. >She gives me a worried look.
  1018. “You do know what a computer is right?”
  1019. >Hey! “Of course. Dad bought one ages ago. I use it all the time.”
  1020. Replies to this post:
  1021. >>4137040 >>4150945
  1022. >>
  1023.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/25/12(Sat)22:51 No.4136997
  1024.  
  1025. File: 1345949517626.jpg-(11 KB, 480x360, 0.jpg)
  1026.  
  1027. >>4136954
  1028. MOAR
  1029. Replies to this post:
  1030. >>4137125
  1031. >>
  1032.  Chronicler  08/25/12(Sat)22:53 No.4137038
  1033.  
  1034. >>4136454
  1035. >Parking
  1036. My god, Shermanator has transformed /mlp/ forever.
  1037. >>
  1038.  Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth Mr. Blue  08/25/12(Sat)22:53 No.4137040
  1039.  
  1040. File: 1345949601726.png-(368 KB, 972x541, 131930750951.png)
  1041.  
  1042. >>4136992
  1043. >From the look on her face that answer wasn't impressive enough.
  1044. "Did you at least get internet?"
  1045. > "That's where you plug in the phone line and other ponies can see what's on your computer right?"
  1046. >That wasn't the right answer. I've only ever seen anyp0ny smile like that to foals who've said something... foalish.
  1047. >I probably shouldn't tell her that I taught myself C++. I bet Nop0ny even uses that anymore. Oh ponyfeathers.
  1048. >She's still giving me that "You're such a silly little filly" look. Oh come on! I get enough of that at home!
  1049. > "So that smart phone... Does it have any games?"
  1050. She rolls her eyes and laughs, "Yes. Yes it does. But we'll have time for that later, we've got a train to catch."
  1051. > "Oh. Okay."
  1052. >We start walking towards the crowd. I try not to get nervous from all the humans surrounding us.
  1053. >That reminds me... "So is 'My-kell' a human friend of yours?"
  1054. "You could say that, yes. He's human and a kind of friend."
  1055. >Strawberry and her silly recursive speak, she still hasn't changed. "Oh? What kind of friend is that?"
  1056. "He's my boyfriend."
  1057. > A what now? "Oh. Wait..."
  1058. "It's the human version of a coltfirend Casey."
  1059. >Oh. That makes sen- "WAIT, WHAT?!"
  1060. Replies to this post:
  1061. >>4137194 >>4150945 >>4160199
  1062. >>
  1063.  Mr. Blue  08/25/12(Sat)22:57 No.4137125
  1064.  
  1065. File: 1345949820059.jpg-(193 KB, 814x721, 1343626946141.jpg)
  1066.  
  1067. >>4136997
  1068. Sorry. All outta juice. That's all I got finished right now. I could maybe keep writing and post as I do but I won't get to another good stopping point for some time. I'll see if I can have more by tomorrow.
  1069. Replies to this post:
  1070. >>4137142 >>4137209 >>4137211
  1071. >>
  1072.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)22:57 No.4137142
  1073.  
  1074. >>4137125
  1075. Enjoying it so far!
  1076. Replies to this post:
  1077. >>4137213
  1078. >>
  1079.  Chronicler  08/25/12(Sat)22:59 No.4137194
  1080.  
  1081. >>4137040
  1082. You mean "Special Somepony", I wold think.
  1083. Replies to this post:
  1084. >>4137213
  1085. >>
  1086.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/25/12(Sat)23:00 No.4137209
  1087.  
  1088. File: 1345950035493.gif-(644 KB, 640x360, 1344751257828.gif)
  1089.  
  1090. >>4137125
  1091. I like the DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNN you ended on there. I'm excited for where that's going.
  1092. >>
  1093.  Durriken !DurrynNlSA  08/25/12(Sat)23:00 No.4137211
  1094.  
  1095. >>4137125
  1096.  
  1097. Course, of course!
  1098. >>
  1099.  Mr. Blue  08/25/12(Sat)23:00 No.4137213
  1100.  
  1101. File: 1345950053632.png-(183 KB, 516x428, 1334163664333.png)
  1102.  
  1103. >>4137194
  1104. Yeah I should have gone with that. I've been reading too much other fanfiction and now it's going to my head.
  1105.  
  1106. >>4137142
  1107. Me too!
  1108. Except now everyone in the TF Story thread is going to be upset that I'm spending time with this while my main writing project there is on hiatus.
  1109.  
  1110. I'm going to get back to working on that and see about more Pillow stories in the morning.
  1111. >>
  1112.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)23:33 No.4138021
  1113.  
  1114. Oh god yes!
  1115. All my favorite fanfictions update today at once and then this happens.
  1116. >>
  1117.  Pancakes  08/25/12(Sat)23:43 No.4138309
  1118.  
  1119. File: 1345952619528.jpg-(40 KB, 900x630, 5.jpg)
  1120.  
  1121. Next up is Fluttershy.
  1122.  
  1123. >>4136329
  1124. "This is Fluttershy's room. She's been a little bit nervous since we came here, so please be patient with her."
  1125. > Twilight knocks on the door three times with her hoof.
  1126. "GO AWAY! NOP0NY HERE! MEAT-EATING HUMANS NOT WELCOME!"
  1127. "Uh, Fluttershy? It's me, Twilight."
  1128. > The door slowly opens, revealing a yellow winged pony with long pink hair.
  1129. "It is you. Oh, and a human."
  1130. > She stares at me for a moment. Then, her eyes widen in horror.
  1131. "Human?" she repeats. "Aaahhh!"
  1132. > The door shuts behind her. I hear the sounds of at least three locks click.
  1133. "Sorry about that. She has some trouble adjusting," says Twilight.
  1134. > The purple pony lowers her head and aims her horn at the door knob.
  1135. > Her horn glows for a moment. Three clicks.
  1136. > Then, she let's herself inside Fluttershy's room.
  1137. > Wait, did she just unlock that door? With magic?
  1138. "Now, Fluttershy! That is no way to treat our new apartment manager."
  1139. > Yep, I have either gotten myself into something really strange.
  1140. > Or I have begun to go completely insane.
  1141. > Or both. I shake my head as I follow Twilight inside.
  1142. > The moment I step in, I hear another door shut.
  1143. "Ahaha, wait right here," says Twilight.
  1144. > She heads over to the newly shut door. Her horn glows again.
  1145. > This time, the door opens by itself.
  1146. > And out floats the frightened pony with a faint glow around her.
  1147. > The yellow one tries to struggle, but her efforts are futile.
  1148. > Twilight smiles awkwardly as she levitates her friend over to me.
  1149. "Fluttershy, won't you say hello to our new apartment manager?"
  1150. > The yellow pony forces a smile and whispers to me in the tiniest voice.
  1151. "Umm... hi?"
  1152. Replies to this post:
  1153. >>4138477 >>4139158
  1154. >>
  1155.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/25/12(Sat)23:45 No.4138346
  1156.  
  1157. Moar Sky Bright.
  1158.  
  1159. >Ohkay, which way did Pepper point? It was...it was...kinda east. Maybe north. Let's go with north.
  1160. >Start walking. I know what the building LOOKS like from the brochure...let's see if I see it!
  1161. >I don't want to stop and look in my bag...because I realize I'm getting stared at
  1162. >Most of these humans have probably never seen a pony in person before...
  1163. >still unsettling. Not a big fan of it, and what's worse is I can't tell human emotions easy
  1164. >Why is a species so big have such little faces? Especially their little eyes. It's so much harder to tell what a human's thinking!
  1165. >At least you can tell when they start talking. Not that I've had long conversations with humans, yet
  1166. >I can't blame them for staring...plus, I'm staring at everything. Even two story buildings are massive compared to home, and the nickname "sky scrapers" makes a lot of sense now
  1167. >suddenly, my stomach almost turns. WHAT IS THAT SMELL
  1168. >...Oh yeah, this species eats meat. Creeeeepy.
  1169. >Those are chickens in that window. Dead chickens. Ewwwwwwwwwwwwww
  1170. >I wonder how many chickens humans eat a year. I bet it's like a bajillion
  1171. >....How long have I been walking? Nothing here says U.S. Bank. I went in the wrong direction! Why didn't I check the address or ask for directions!? Notcoolnotcool notttttttttcoooooooooooool
  1172. >Now I have to stop a human and ask for help. Pfffffffrgh
  1173. >>
  1174.  MrSilver  08/25/12(Sat)23:47 No.4138385
  1175.  
  1176. FINALLY! I FINALLY FOUND THE THREAD! THANK GOD!
  1177. Replies to this post:
  1178. >>4138477
  1179. >>
  1180.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/25/12(Sat)23:49 No.4138440
  1181.  
  1182. >Okay, I'll go just a little further. If I don't see something THIS block, I'll ask.
  1183. >Sidewalk ends, have to cross the street. I wonder if humans trip more often with only two fee-
  1184. >"PONY! STOP!"
  1185. >before I can even turn around, YANK
  1186. >Someone's got my tail and is pulling hard. I scream as I stumble backwards back onto the curb
  1187. >turn around, a guy has my tail in both hands.
  1188. >"Yo, I'm sorry, but you were gonna get fuckin' HIT."
  1189. "Hit by what!?"
  1190. >HAAAUUUUNK Oh Celestia why was that car so big.
  1191. >"Your ass 'aight?"
  1192. "...what?"
  1193. >"I yanked you real hard, I was just scared you were gonna get hit."
  1194. >I realize there's a lady peering around this guy. He's kinda fat if he can hide an entire person behind him. "Damn, you scared the shit outta her!"
  1195. >She crouches down, holding out her hand, smiling. "Don't worry, it's okayyyyyy." She's speaking all calming and singsongey. "Need us to help you find your mama?"
  1196. >How old does she think I am? Well I already look like an idiot, might as well ask about the bank
  1197. "Actually, I'm looking for U.S. Bank."
  1198. >"Awe, you got sent out on a big girl errand?"
  1199. "Nono, It's for work. I just transferred from Equestria and I'm sort of on corporate ambassador duties."
  1200. >The man speaks back up. "Wait, what the fuck how old are you?"
  1201. "23."
  1202. >Girl again. "Damn. Do ponies stay this tiny ya whole life? I thought you were as big as like...ponies."
  1203. >The heck does that comment even mean
  1204. >>
  1205.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)23:50 No.4138477
  1206.  
  1207. >>4138385
  1208. Have 4chan X, type W, bookmark it.
  1209. Profit?
  1210. You must know this. So I'm assuming you just forgot to put it in the thread watcher.
  1211.  
  1212. >>4138309
  1213. Yes! Now we are talking!
  1214. >>
  1215.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/25/12(Sat)23:51 No.4138519
  1216.  
  1217. "But no, seriously. I need to get to the bank office. Where's that?"
  1218. >"U.S. Bank owns one of the towers downtown, so I guess there?"
  1219. "And this isn't downtown?"
  1220. >"Nah, you're in Little Italy."
  1221. "I'm in ITALY!? Isn't that like, halfway around Earth!?"
  1222. >Why's that funny why are they laughing what did I do
  1223. >"Nah, that's like, that way. WAY that way." He's pointing at one of the towers. I couldn't have been more in the wrong direction
  1224. >"It says U.S. Bank on the top of the other side of the tower. But that's GOTTA be it if you're doing buisness. When do they want you by? Like what time?"
  1225. "Oh. they said nine?"
  1226. >".....Y'all should haul ass, cause it's eight fifty."
  1227. >WHAT
  1228. >"You wanna a cab?"
  1229. >I pop open my wings and take to the air. "Oooh! No WAY, that's so cool!" Cries the lady.
  1230. "Thanks, but I think I can make it!"
  1231.  
  1232. That's all for now I think
  1233. Replies to this post:
  1234. >>4147652 >>4161858
  1235. >>
  1236.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)23:52 No.4138535
  1237.  
  1238. File: 1345953153033.gif-(Spoiler Image, 96 KB, 200x225)
  1239.  
  1240. I think im gonna stay here in this thread, AiE has run its course and is obvious by the current state of the thread. I put my faith in you PiE.
  1241. Replies to this post:
  1242. >>4138626
  1243. >>
  1244.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)23:55 No.4138626
  1245.  
  1246. File: 1345953343685.png-(170 KB, 592x670, Moon Pie.png)
  1247.  
  1248. >>4138535
  1249. I'm waiting for someone to come in here with a Pinkie PiE.
  1250. Replies to this post:
  1251. >>4138641
  1252. >>
  1253.  Anonymous  08/25/12(Sat)23:56 No.4138641
  1254.  
  1255. >>4138626
  1256. Anon, Pinkie PiE gonna be so goddamn interesting.
  1257. >>
  1258.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)00:07 No.4138920
  1259.  
  1260. DON´T YOU DARE TO DIE ON ME
  1261. Replies to this post:
  1262. >>4139080
  1263. >>
  1264.  MrSilver  08/26/12(Sun)00:09 No.4138978
  1265.  
  1266. I would try and contribute, but..
  1267.  
  1268. a)Working on a fic already
  1269. b)On a tablet atm
  1270. c)Tired as fuck
  1271.  
  1272. Yeah.
  1273. >>
  1274.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/26/12(Sun)00:13 No.4139080
  1275.  
  1276. File: 1345954389288.jpg-(65 KB, 414x362, 40780__safe_fluttershy_me(...).jpg)
  1277.  
  1278. >>4138920
  1279. I'm gonna do a bit tomorrow, I know I've got time.
  1280.  
  1281. (also FEEDBACK PLEASE ERRBODY EVEN IF YOU HATE IT)
  1282. Replies to this post:
  1283. >>4147096
  1284. >>
  1285.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)00:16 No.4139158
  1286.  
  1287. >>4138309
  1288. > After several minutes, things calm down somehow.
  1289. > I find myself seated with three others around a small table.
  1290. > Twilight has just finished explaining my duties to the other two.
  1291. > Fluttershy sits there, silently listening.
  1292. > Her eyes dart between me and the apartment door several times.
  1293. > And beside her sat a little white rabbit named Angel.
  1294. > This "Angel" just glared at me angrily the whole time.
  1295. "And that's about it," says Twilight. "Do you have anything to add?"
  1296. > "Not really. I was a teacher ever since I graduated. Up until a few days ago, I -"
  1297. "You're a teacher?" cries Fluttershy. "Oh, my goodness! Does that mean that you work with human children everyday?"
  1298. > "Well, not exactly. Though a number of my students did act like children at times."
  1299. "Can you take me to one of those human schools? Umm, that is, if you don't mind..."
  1300. > "Err, I don't think you understand. I teach at a uni-"
  1301. "I just love little humans! They are sooo cute! I'd really looove to take one of them home with me~"
  1302. "Ahaha, excuse me for that," interrupts Twilight. "Fluttershy seems to have forgotten that you don't work as a teacher anymore. And that OUR primary purpose here is to observe humans."
  1303. "But I'm sure we can observe them more closely if I can take home a few of the little ones back to Equestria."
  1304. "No Fluttershy. Like I said for the hundredth time, no human-napping!"
  1305. "Oh. Alright, Twilight."
  1306. > Fluttershy sighs sadly, losing her energy.
  1307. > She sits quietly for the rest of the evening, until it is finally time for us to leave.
  1308. Replies to this post:
  1309. >>4139179
  1310. >>
  1311.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)00:17 No.4139179
  1312.  
  1313. >>4139158
  1314. > I hear the tiniest squeak from behind me as Twilight leaves first.
  1315. > When I turn around, Fluttershy stands by the door. She speaks to me in a barely audible voice.
  1316. "Whenever you have time, would you mind accompany me to places full of human children. That is, if you aren't too busy, of course."
  1317. > "Umm..."
  1318. "You see, I really like learning about all living creatures, big and small. And I'd love to study humans more closely."
  1319. > "I see."
  1320. > For some reason I can't place, something doesn't feel quite right.
  1321. > But she is giving me a look that is simply too cute to refuse.
  1322. > I find myself smiling before I realize it.
  1323. > "Alright, I'll guide you around the city sometime."
  1324. > Fluttershy's eyes practically glow with excitement.
  1325. "Yay~"
  1326. Replies to this post:
  1327. >>4139291 >>4139427 >>4140202
  1328. >>
  1329.  MrSilver  08/26/12(Sun)00:22 No.4139291
  1330.  
  1331. >>4139179
  1332. Moar.
  1333. >>
  1334.  Durriken !DurrynNlSA  08/26/12(Sun)00:27 No.4139427
  1335.  
  1336. >>4139179
  1337.  
  1338. Keep...going...please....
  1339. >>
  1340.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)00:53 No.4140091
  1341.  
  1342. more more! I can't get enough!
  1343. >>
  1344.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)00:57 No.4140202
  1345.  
  1346. And now some exposition pony.
  1347.  
  1348. >>4139179
  1349. "And with that, I think we're done for today. You can meet the rest of the residents tomorrow."
  1350. > "Thanks Twilight. Guess I'll head home now."
  1351. "No need. We've already made all the necessary arrangements. Right after you signed the contract, in fact!"
  1352. > "Wait, how did you-"
  1353. "All of your things have been packed and moved to the empty apartment on the first floor. It's right beside the entrance."
  1354. > Twilights hands (hoofs?) over the key to me with a smile.
  1355. "I live on the first floor, too. It's the apartment beside the stairs."
  1356. > "Thanks, but-"
  1357. "We've already updated your new mailing address with the post office, so don't worry about lost mail."
  1358. > "Wait, what about-"
  1359. "Everything you need has been taken care of. Don't think about it too hard."
  1360. > Twilight gives me a big smile.
  1361. Replies to this post:
  1362. >>4140278
  1363. >>
  1364.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)01:00 No.4140278
  1365.  
  1366. File: 1345957219942.jpg-(41 KB, 900x652, 6.jpg)
  1367.  
  1368. >>4140202
  1369. > But that doesn't change the fact that something still feels off.
  1370. > "Do you do all this for every human you meet?"
  1371. > Her smile wavers a bit.
  1372. "Err... not exactly."
  1373. > "Because this almost seems like a dream to me. And the moment I wake up, it'll all vanish into thin air."
  1374. > Twilight slowly frowns and looks me in the eye.
  1375. "Don't ever say that again!"
  1376. > Without warning, she gives me a tight hug.
  1377. "It's taken too much time," she whispers. "And too much sacrifice to make it this far. To finally reach into your world."
  1378. > "Sorry about that," I manage.
  1379. > She holds on to me for a little longer before finally letting go.
  1380. > Twilight wipes something from her eyes. She was crying?
  1381. > "Umm, Twilight?"
  1382. "F-forget about it. I'm just a little tired today."
  1383. > She turns around and walks toward her room.
  1384. > "Good night, Twilight!" I call out. "And thanks for everything."
  1385. "Good night. Take care of yourself."
  1386. > And I as I headed to my new apartment, I thought I heard her say something.
  1387. > But I didn't catch it.
  1388. "Welcome back."
  1389. Replies to this post:
  1390. >>4140378 >>4147385
  1391. >>
  1392.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)01:03 No.4140378
  1393.  
  1394. >>4140278
  1395. Done for a while. Next up is the introduction of the rest of the residents. Again, will consider your suggestions on who to meet next.
  1396. Replies to this post:
  1397. >>4140682 >>4140694 >>4141585 >>4144380
  1398. >>
  1399.  MrSilver  08/26/12(Sun)01:14 No.4140682
  1400.  
  1401. >>4140378
  1402. Best Pone
  1403.  
  1404. Pinkie Pie
  1405. >>
  1406.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)01:15 No.4140694
  1407.  
  1408. >>4140378
  1409. >>4140378
  1410. >>4140378
  1411.  
  1412. CMC.
  1413. >>
  1414.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)01:57 No.4141574
  1415.  
  1416. bumping the thread before going to bed.
  1417. >>
  1418.  Durriken !DurrynNlSA  08/26/12(Sun)01:57 No.4141585
  1419.  
  1420. >>4140378
  1421.  
  1422. Pinkie Pie?
  1423. >>
  1424.  Durriken !DurrynNlSA  08/26/12(Sun)02:33 No.4142435
  1425.  
  1426. Bump before bed.
  1427. >>
  1428.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)03:16 No.4143098
  1429.  
  1430. http://vocaroo.com/i/s05EcOwqewmM
  1431. >>
  1432.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)04:46 No.4144380
  1433.  
  1434. >>4140378
  1435. Pinkie Pie!
  1436. >>
  1437.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)07:51 No.4146005
  1438.  
  1439. Page 4? Not on my watch!
  1440. >>
  1441.  Durriken !DurrynNlSA  08/26/12(Sun)09:18 No.4146452
  1442.  
  1443. Bumparoo.
  1444. >>
  1445.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)10:48 No.4147096
  1446.  
  1447. >>4139080
  1448. Proceed I like it.
  1449. Just link the parts of your story.
  1450. >>
  1451.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)11:12 No.4147348
  1452.  
  1453. >>4147323
  1454. MOAR
  1455. >>
  1456.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)11:15 No.4147385
  1457.  
  1458. Reposting because of the dumb.
  1459.  
  1460. Time for pink party pony!
  1461. The CMC aren't residents yet.
  1462.  
  1463. >>4140278
  1464. > "Ugh! What the hell was that dream?"
  1465. > I slowly get up, disoriented.
  1466. > "So many ponies all over the city. And everyone else was acting like it was normal."
  1467. > I glance at my alarm clock. 5:00 AM.
  1468. > "One of them even asked for directions. Man, what a crazy world that was-"
  1469. "Crazy? What's so crazy about it? That actually sounds really, really, fun!"
  1470. > "Fun? You best be joking-"
  1471. > I pause mid-sentence and stare at the pink pony that now stood in my room.
  1472. "Of course it would be fun! We'd play games and have parties with all of the different kinds of humans of the city! Like the tall ones, the short ones, the big ones, the little ones..."
  1473. > "Umm, excuse me?"
  1474. > She just continues talking very quickly.
  1475. Replies to this post:
  1476. >>4147396 >>4147457
  1477. >>
  1478.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)11:16 No.4147396
  1479.  
  1480. File: 1345994169158.jpg-(101 KB, 1145x1600, 7.jpg)
  1481.  
  1482. >>4147385
  1483. "... the vanilla-colored ones, the chocolate-colored ones, the peach-colored ones, the blue berry-colored ones..."
  1484. > Then, I remember about yesterday's strange events.
  1485. > Right, ponies. This one somehow reminds me of cotton candy.
  1486. "... ones in business suits, ones in fancy dresses, ones in school uniforms, ones in jungle camouflage..."
  1487. > "Excuse me," I repeat. A little forcefully this time.
  1488. "Oh, sorry about that!" says the pink pony. "When I get excited, I start to talk really fast and it's really difficult to stop. Just like earlier when I overheard you talking in your sleep. The others were all like, 'That's just an old pony's tale!', but I'm pretty sure that it isn't crazy at all even if they don't believe me."
  1489. > "So, ponies and humans living together isn't crazy?"
  1490. "Of course not! All you have to do is look up (or even down a little bit later) and you'll see that it is really, really, really, really, really, really, really-"
  1491. > Without warning, she whispers the last word right beside my ear.
  1492. "Possible~"
  1493. Replies to this post:
  1494. >>4147457 >>4147592
  1495. >>
  1496.  MrSilver  08/26/12(Sun)11:21 No.4147457
  1497.  
  1498. >>4147385
  1499. >>4147396
  1500. Fuck yeah.
  1501.  
  1502. Best Pone
  1503. >>
  1504.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)11:37 No.4147592
  1505.  
  1506. >>4147396
  1507. "Sorry about that," says Twilight. "Pinkie here just got a little bit too excited when I mentioned that we have a new apartment manager."
  1508. > "I think I got the gist of it now. But I was quite surprised that you showed up so quickly at my doorstep."
  1509. "I heard the racket all the way from my room, so I just had to make sure that you're alright."
  1510. > "I see..."
  1511. > This apartment building is actually located in a pretty safe neighborhood. Not like some other parts of the city.
  1512. > And she's giving me that nervous smile again.
  1513. > But I guess I shouldn't press any further.
  1514. > Twilight probably has her reasons.
  1515. "Oooh!" cries the pink pony. "What's this? And this? And that? I haven't seen THAT before!"
  1516. "Please be careful!" says Twilight. "He clearly hasn't finished unpacking. Your playing around could cause an accident!"
  1517. > Still, there is something else I don't understand.
  1518. > "Pinkie Pie, was it? Could I ask you something?"
  1519. "Sure thing! Just ask away!"
  1520. > "How did you get in my room? I'm pretty sure I locked the door."
  1521. > She stopped hopping around for a moment and turned around.
  1522. "Don't be silly now! I was in the room since the beginning, silly~"
  1523. > Wait, what?
  1524. Replies to this post:
  1525. >>4147794
  1526. >>
  1527.  Chronicler  08/26/12(Sun)11:43 No.4147652
  1528.  
  1529. >>4138519
  1530. I really like the "Culture Shock" direction you're going so far. I also like the general feel of your story, not dark at all,mfairly light-hearted but realistic. Very "Coming to America", really.
  1531.  
  1532. Keep writing. This is a great story and I love it.
  1533. Replies to this post:
  1534. >>4151184
  1535. >>
  1536.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)12:00 No.4147794
  1537.  
  1538. File: 1345996826575.jpg-(46 KB, 819x976, 8.jpg)
  1539.  
  1540. >>4147592
  1541. > "Alright. I'll see you both later."
  1542. > I watch as the two ponies head back to their rooms.
  1543. > Then, I close the door behind me. I better finish unpacking and-
  1544. "Oh! Hi again!"
  1545. > I pause mid-thought and stare at Pinkie Pie.
  1546. > The pink pony is inside my room again. Right after I closed the door behind me.
  1547. > She smiles cheerfully as if there isn't anything strange about this.
  1548. "Sorry about surprising you. But I just remembered something. Something really, really important!"
  1549. > "Uh, okay? What is it?"
  1550. > She walks closer and whispers to me.
  1551. "Could you do me a teeny-tiny-little favor?"
  1552. > I can clearly see a mischievous glint in her eyes as she says that.
  1553. > "What kind of favor?"
  1554. "I'd like you to show me the best party places in the city!"
  1555. > "The best party places?"
  1556. "That's right! Don't tell anyp0ny else, but someday, I'd like to throw the biggest, most wonderful party anyp0ny's ever seen! And this huge city is the perfect place for that!"
  1557. > "Err, I'm not sure if that's such a good-"
  1558. "Oh please?" she says. "Oh please? Oh please? Oh please~"
  1559. > "... Fine."
  1560. "Alright! You won't regret this! This is gonna help me take partying to the next level! Just you wait and see!"
  1561. Replies to this post:
  1562. >>4147827 >>4148092 >>4161192
  1563. >>
  1564.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)12:06 No.4147827
  1565.  
  1566. >>4147794
  1567. Ending here for now. I'll continue with the rest of the residents when I get home.
  1568.  
  1569. Would appreciate feedback on the story so far. It has been some time since I've written anything.
  1570. Replies to this post:
  1571. >>4148186
  1572. >>
  1573.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)12:39 No.4148092
  1574.  
  1575. >>4147794
  1576. I wonder how Pinkie Pie would react when she discover "our" parties are way too different than hers.
  1577. And the story, it's really good. I love all the details which these stories have like the culture shock between two worlds.
  1578. I hope more of this.
  1579. Replies to this post:
  1580. >>4148186
  1581. >>
  1582.  Durriken !DurrynNlSA  08/26/12(Sun)12:47 No.4148186
  1583.  
  1584. >>4148158
  1585.  
  1586. Honestly, I'm surprised no one said this sooner.
  1587.  
  1588. >>4147827
  1589. see this, my thoughts exactly.
  1590. >>4148092
  1591. >>
  1592.  Apf  08/26/12(Sun)13:51 No.4148940
  1593.  
  1594. Bump.
  1595. Replies to this post:
  1596. >>4149814
  1597. >>
  1598.  Apf  08/26/12(Sun)14:32 No.4149414
  1599.  
  1600. Custom bump.
  1601. Replies to this post:
  1602. >>4149814
  1603. >>
  1604.  pecuniarianism  08/26/12(Sun)14:41 No.4149554
  1605.  
  1606. too bad this thread had to die, I was really enjoying it..
  1607. Replies to this post:
  1608. >>4149814 >>4149920
  1609. >>
  1610.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)14:45 No.4149608
  1611.  
  1612. Just wanted to add another post to demonstrate interest in this
  1613.  
  1614. Also fuck Barcelona
  1615. Replies to this post:
  1616. >>4149814 >>4149920
  1617. >>
  1618.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)14:49 No.4149690
  1619.  
  1620. I am still here.
  1621. >>
  1622.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)14:57 No.4149814
  1623.  
  1624. >>4148940
  1625. >>4149414
  1626. >>4149554
  1627. >>4149608
  1628.  
  1629. This thread isn't dead you morons; it's slow. Our writefag friends, surprisingly, have lives.
  1630. And don't bump the thread every hour if you are trying to save it from 404'ing. A general rule of thumb on /mlp/ is that threads 404 after seven to eight hours of inactivity.
  1631. Replies to this post:
  1632. >>4149920 >>4149942
  1633. >>
  1634.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)15:05 No.4149920
  1635.  
  1636. >>4149814
  1637. Uhh Apf was bumping every hour, >>4149554 was the only one who called it dead, and I hardly think I was implying it was dead with >>4149608
  1638.  
  1639. Who's the moron now?
  1640. u
  1641. >>
  1642.  Mr. Blue  08/26/12(Sun)15:06 No.4149942
  1643.  
  1644. >>4149814
  1645. What this guys said.
  1646.  
  1647. If I post anything it will be later today and others are likely to write something. Stop bumping the thread every 20 minutes, let it sit a couple hours at least unless you have something to contribute. Jeeze.
  1648. >>
  1649.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)15:57 No.4150945
  1650.  
  1651. >>4115172
  1652. >>4115191
  1653. >>4115214
  1654. >>4115735
  1655. >>4116219
  1656. >>4116429
  1657. >>4116677
  1658. >>4123767
  1659. >>4123892
  1660. >>4124172
  1661. >>4124764
  1662. >>4136771
  1663. >>4136843
  1664. >>4136866
  1665. >>4136882
  1666. >>4136954
  1667. >>4136992
  1668. >>4137040
  1669.  
  1670. okay sir, where did i get this in a better formate ? oh and the rest of the story of course !
  1671. Replies to this post:
  1672. >>4151184
  1673. >>
  1674.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/26/12(Sun)16:10 No.4151184
  1675.  
  1676. >>4147652
  1677. d'aw my ego thanks you. I've got more but wanna do it in one big post.
  1678.  
  1679. >>4150945
  1680. They're writing these stories on the spot, they probably exist nowhere other than here.
  1681. Replies to this post:
  1682. >>4152163
  1683. >>
  1684.  Mr. Blue  08/26/12(Sun)16:55 No.4152163
  1685.  
  1686. >>4151184
  1687. Eh, I have a gmail set up for some other writing stuff I do on this board. I'll make a page for this. I'll also make a hub page to post pastebin links from other writers and previous threads, assuming this all takes off.
  1688. >>
  1689.  MrSilver  08/26/12(Sun)19:05 No.4155192
  1690.  
  1691. HURRY UP WRITEFAGS
  1692. Replies to this post:
  1693. >>4155268
  1694. >>
  1695.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)19:08 No.4155268
  1696.  
  1697. >>4155192
  1698. Calm down. They will write sometime. We can give our feedback and ideas meanwhile.
  1699. Saging because I don't wanna waste the bump limit.
  1700. Replies to this post:
  1701. >>4156782
  1702. >>
  1703.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)19:40 No.4156002
  1704.  
  1705. File: 1346024425287.png-(1.1 MB, 999x799, Ladybuggirl.png)
  1706.  
  1707. Holy shit this idea sounds interesting. It's a pretty needed twist on the AiE threads.
  1708.  
  1709. Though, it'd be nice to see the OP's story in a form other than greentext. It really sort of felt like it would flow better if it was arranged normally.
  1710.  
  1711. Also, what does PiE stand for? If AiE is Anon in Equestria, does that mean that PiE is Pony in... Earth? Shouldn't it be Pony on Earth or PoE in that case? Just a thought. Keep up the awesome work!
  1712. >>
  1713.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)20:15 No.4156782
  1714.  
  1715. >>4155268
  1716.  
  1717. >Saging because I don't wanna waste the bump limit.
  1718. Sageing a post does not preserve the bump limit. It is still a post, only it doesn't bump the thread. Once there are 500 posts, threads autosage and can't be bumped. Saged posts count towards the total post number. Just so you know.
  1719.  
  1720.  
  1721. Total posts -1.
  1722. Replies to this post:
  1723. >>4156822
  1724. >>
  1725.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)20:16 No.4156822
  1726.  
  1727. >>4156782
  1728. Let's not turn this thread into a discussion of posting methods.
  1729. >>
  1730.  MrSilver  08/26/12(Sun)21:17 No.4158024
  1731.  
  1732. Please, writefags...
  1733.  
  1734. Please ;-;
  1735. Replies to this post:
  1736. >>4160199
  1737. >>
  1738.  Anonymous  08/26/12(Sun)22:43 No.4159859
  1739.  
  1740. Bump
  1741. Bump
  1742. Sugar lump rump
  1743. >>
  1744.  Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth Mr. Blue  08/26/12(Sun)22:58 No.4160199
  1745.  
  1746. >>4158024
  1747. Okay, okay. Gosh guys calm down. Write something yourself, it's not hard. Make a short one-shot greentext thing. Past, present, whatever tense, who cares. I'm going to do one of those post as I go things now. Now sure how long I'll keep it up and I might end suddenly.
  1748.  
  1749. I missed my chance at getting some real life work done last night with that Neil Armstrong thread last night. Had to make up for it today.
  1750. ...It was worth it though...
  1751.  
  1752.  
  1753. >>4137040
  1754.  
  1755. >We make it to the part of the underground building place, whatever, that has the trains in it.
  1756. >I've read about the underground human trains before. They're suposed to be smaller than normal trains and for getting around huge cities.
  1757. >They sound much more fun than the street cars in Manehatten.
  1758. >no, not now, stop getting distracted Pillow, we got a cirsis here. Bfffl is dating a pipedal carnivore. What the hay.
  1759.  
  1760. > “You have a special somepony. And he isn't even a pony."
  1761. >Is that even legal?!
  1762. > “I... How does that even work?”
  1763. “It works very well. Really he’s a nice guy, and plenty of pony/human couples work just fine. Most states even let them get married. Even this one.”
  1764. > “Yeah but... with a human?” That last sylable was a squeak and my voice lowers to a whisper. “I just don’t get how anyp0ny could like humans'that' way. What is it you even like about them?”
  1765. >Strawberry sighs.
  1766. "Look, PC. I've lived here most of my life now, ok? Here, ponies are the minority. Most of my friends have been human. That's why I loved getting letters from you so much for a while you were the only pony friend a had. It's not as weird as people make it out to be. We're just two 'people' who are very happy together."
  1767. Replies to this post:
  1768. >>4160236
  1769. >>
  1770.  Mr. Blue  08/26/12(Sun)23:00 No.4160236
  1771.  
  1772. >>4160199
  1773. carry me to Avalon and back gracious dubs god!
  1774. >She stopped and stared ahead of her and her voice became softer than mine.
  1775. "Also their skin so so smooth..."
  1776. >Ewww! No, you're giving me creepy, bad-gross thoughts Strawberry! Ergh.
  1777. >Great, now I've got the mental image of Strawberry nuzzling a human.
  1778. > ...Her hoof running accross his long bare legs.
  1779. >His hand combing her mane, blunt claws scratching her back softly.
  1780. >Her presses his big nose against her snout, beady eyes staring gently into hers as he tickles her ears...
  1781. >EEEEEEEEWWWWWwwwww!!! Nononononononono! Stop! Stop thinking! Thinking about... cats now. Cute fluffy kittens. They're chasing some string.
  1782. >...
  1783. >...
  1784. >...The little tabby has a bow in her hair. Awwww...
  1785. >...
  1786. >Strawberry looks over at me. I must have had a weird and conflicting look on my face because hers turns to a frown.
  1787. >I don't want to push her on this. She's sort of right I guess, on some things, and I really don't know anything about humans do I?
  1788. Replies to this post:
  1789. >>4161763
  1790. >>
  1791.  pecuniarianism  08/26/12(Sun)23:08 No.4160457
  1792.  
  1793. Mr. blue, maybe it's because I'm fucking tired, but I swear if I had any shred of creativity I would definitely add to this thread. sorry bro
  1794. >>
  1795.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)23:37 No.4161192
  1796.  
  1797. We now proceed with Rainbow Dash. And some plot.
  1798.  
  1799. >>4147794
  1800. > The rest of the morning is uneventful.
  1801. > I take some time to unpack the rest of my things.
  1802. > Ponies, eh? Still not sure if I'm hallucinating.
  1803. > Well, at least they know how to stay out of trouble-
  1804. "BANG! BANG! BANG!"
  1805. > I jump in surprise. Almost drop a box, too.
  1806. "MR. MANAGER, ARE YOU IN THERE? YOU GOTTA COME, QUICK!"
  1807. > Sounds like an emergency.
  1808. > I quickly stop what I'm doing and rush to the door.
  1809. > "What's wrong? Is there a fire or-"
  1810. "NO TIME TO EXPLAIN! COME WITH ME!"
  1811. > I feel two hooves grab my arm tightly.
  1812. > Suddenly, I am dragged out of the room and into the air.
  1813. > The next moment, I feel my feet touch the ground.
  1814. > My head is still spinning. As if I just took a rollercoaster ride.
  1815. > Except that it lasted only 5 seconds and moved at least 5 times faster.
  1816. > "Uh, my head..."
  1817. Replies to this post:
  1818. >>4161244 >>4161247
  1819. >>
  1820.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)23:39 No.4161244
  1821.  
  1822. File: 1346038762543.jpg-(59 KB, 900x813, 9.jpg)
  1823.  
  1824. >>4161192
  1825. "THERE ISN'T ANY TIME TO WASTE! HURRY!"
  1826. > I feel myself pulled into another room. Finally, the hooves let go of my arm.
  1827. > I wait for my vision to clear. Sure enough, standing before me is another pony.
  1828. > This winged one is blue with the strangest colored mane and tail I've seen so far.
  1829. > Rainbow-colored. Reminds me of Skittles.
  1830. > She has this confused, scared look on her face.
  1831. > And more importantly, I think she's crying.
  1832. "I-I'm not sure what to do," says the blue pony. "I mean, I've tried everything! But the water just won't stop! At this rate, my room is gonna get flooded!"
  1833. > No time for introductions. After giving her a quick nod, I rush inside.
  1834. > I follow the puddles into the bathroom.
  1835. > The whole place is soaked, and the water level is quickly rising.
  1836. > "Oh, wow."
  1837. > Did she just break the faucet handle AND the showerhead?
  1838. > I sigh to myself as I start looking for the supply valve...
  1839. Replies to this post:
  1840. >>4161329
  1841. >>
  1842.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/26/12(Sun)23:39 No.4161247
  1843.  
  1844. >>4161192
  1845. Why is it that exactly the moment I'm gonna post something, YOU show up? It's fuggin' scary man. I'll wait my turn
  1846. Replies to this post:
  1847. >>4161366
  1848. >>
  1849.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)23:42 No.4161329
  1850.  
  1851. >>4161244
  1852. "I'm really sorry about that," says Twilight. "She didn't mean to add to your workload."
  1853. > "No worries. I used to live alone, so I'm familiar with household repairs. Good thing that there were some spare parts among my things."
  1854. "And as for you, Rainbow. What were you thinking?"
  1855. "But I was just trying to make the water come out faster. I didn't mean to-"
  1856. "Not that!" interrupts Twilight. "You were FLYING! Didn't I explain it clearly enough to you?"
  1857. "Relax, Twi. I'm sure that nop0ny was looking-"
  1858. "You know that the spell only affects your appearance! How would we explain a human flying around the apartment building?"
  1859. "Well if I was a human," says Rainbow. "I'd think that was pretty awesome, actually."
  1860. "You could have been seen! You could have been caught! You could have been... UGH! UGHHH!"
  1861. > And with that, Twilight stomps out of the room.
  1862. > I've never seen Twilight so upset. And by the sounds of it, she has all the reason to be.
  1863. Replies to this post:
  1864. >>4161441
  1865. >>
  1866.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)23:43 No.4161366
  1867.  
  1868. >>4161247
  1869. Was thinking the exact same thing. Give me a sec, just one more.
  1870. >>
  1871.  Pancakes  08/26/12(Sun)23:46 No.4161441
  1872.  
  1873. >>4161329
  1874. > I turn to the blue pony left alone in the room.
  1875. > Apparently, this one is called Rainbow Dash.
  1876. "I was just trying to help," she says quietly. "Not all of us are like Little Miss Smartypants, you know."
  1877. > Before I realize it, I find myself patting her on the head.
  1878. > She kinda reminds me of one of my old students.
  1879. > "Don't worry about it. I know you meant well."
  1880. "T-thanks, I guess. And sorry about showing you that really uncool scene back there."
  1881. > "To be honest, I personally consider flying through the air at that speed as a pretty 'cool' experience."
  1882. > She quickly wipes her eyes and smiles at me.
  1883. "Heh, thanks! Y'know, I thought you were pretty cool earlier, too. Walking straight into that room and fixing things without even a word. It's like you knew exactly what to do the moment you came in here!"
  1884. > "Let's just say that I've learned a number of practical skills, thanks to a crazy roommate of mine back in college."
  1885. "Sounds like a human who knows how to have a good time to me."
  1886. > "Yep. We certainly had some good times."
  1887. > Good times, indeed.
  1888. > "Well, I better get going. Now don't forget to turn the handles slowly next time."
  1889. Replies to this post:
  1890. >>4161960
  1891. >>
  1892.  Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth Mr. Blue  08/26/12(Sun)23:57 No.4161763
  1893.  
  1894. >>4160236
  1895. 'm such a doormat.
  1896. "You're a silly little filly Casey but don't beat yourself up. My parents reacted worse to my first human boyfriend. And his flipped out when he told them. This is your first time on earth and dealing with humans and you haven't said one racist thing yet. You're already lightyears ahead almost anybody else."
  1897. >Lightyears measures time not distance. No, wait, that still makes sense I guess.
  1898. "Ok, you've only ever seen those old Equestria railways right? Not even th new electric rails?"
  1899. > "Um, yeah. Also the streetcars in Manehatten."
  1900. "Right, well check this out then!"
  1901. >She leads me to the right and into a different long hallway, excpet it's not a hallway.
  1902. >It's a street with big metal buildings on either side.
  1903. >Wait...
  1904. >Sweet Celestia, those aren't buildings! They're trains! I thought these were supposed to be smaller trains. They're way to tall.
  1905. >I guess they're not much bigger than the one I took this morning, relative to human I that is.
  1906. >They're just so shiny...
  1907. >She's eating up my reaction, sitting there smirking at me. Yeah, yeah. Make fun of the country pony in the city.
  1908. > "So..." My voice doesn't want to come out. I think part of me is still in aww. "So, which one's ours?"
  1909. "This one right here. It shoots straight out to Cumberland and then my friend Emily is picking us up from there."
  1910. > "Also human..?"
  1911. "Yes. She is. I've known we were roommates in college."
  1912. Replies to this post:
  1913. >>4161815
  1914. >>
  1915.  Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth Mr. Blue  08/26/12(Sun)23:59 No.4161815
  1916.  
  1917. >>4161763
  1918. > "You went to college?"
  1919. "For tow years, yes. Emily started at a different school though, she's working on a bachelors."
  1920. >Wow. I guess it's easier if you're already in the city. I wasn't nearly a good enough flyer for a scholarship in Cloudsdale Academy like mom.
  1921. >Oh and we're boarding now. Ok.
  1922. >The automatic doors are scary. The way they just hiss open like that. What's to stop them clamping down on somepony's tail when they close?
  1923. >It's too crowded in this train. I guess it's easier if you're human. You take up all your space vertically.
  1924. >They stand so talla nd striaght.
  1925. >I saw a bunch standing in line for tickets further behind us. I wonder if you pushed one of them would they fall like dominos?
  1926. >I'm giggling now. Strawberry is rolling her eyes.
  1927. >I'm like a little filly getting all silly on a train.
  1928. >Eww these seats are dirty. And old looking.
  1929. >Maybe that's the real reason ponies wear clothes here.
  1930. >Then again, Manehatten's streets weren't the cleanest either.
  1931. Replies to this post:
  1932. >>4161824
  1933. >>
  1934.  Mr. Blue  08/26/12(Sun)23:59 No.4161824
  1935.  
  1936. >>4161815
  1937. > "Woah!" We're moving. That was sudden. Wow, we're gaining speed so fast.
  1938. >Now Strawberry is giggling at me.
  1939. "Just wait. You're about to see the best part in a little bit."
  1940. >Alright fine.
  1941. >Wow there are a lot of humans in here. They can pack so many into such a small space.
  1942. >Are those other ponies there?
  1943. >Awww a unicorn filly and with her mom. She has such a cute little dress.
  1944. "Pillow Case! You're missing the it!"
  1945. > "Missing what?"
  1946. "The city you silly filly. I let you have the window seat for reason."
  1947. >Oh wow! I didn't even notice we were above ground already!
  1948. >You can see forever here. Back home was flat too but it was all fields. It's like they're growing buildings here.
  1949. "That direction PC, the way we came from."
  1950. > "Yeah I know-OMIGOSH! THEY'RE HUGE! HOW ARE THOSE BUILDINGS SO HUGE?!"
  1951. >It's like if you took the tallest building in manehatten and stood it next to these buildings
  1952. >it'd be like standing a little pegasus like me next to a tall human.
  1953. > "Stop laughing Strawberry! Those are a lot of buildings!"
  1954. "Hee hee. Silly little country pony... I'll never get tired of that reaction."
  1955. Replies to this post:
  1956. >>4161876 >>4161940 >>4310426
  1957. >>
  1958.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/27/12(Mon)00:01 No.4161858
  1959.  
  1960. File: 1346040080743.png-(336 KB, 640x480, 58004__safe_lyra_meme_sit(...).png)
  1961.  
  1962. A'ight my turn. LITTLE update since apparently get REALLY antsy. Y'all keep it up and I'll make it an OCxSethisto fic.
  1963.  
  1964. SKY BRIGHT WORKIN' IN AMERICAN OFFICE SPACE ALSO THIS IS GOING SOMEWHERE I PROMISE
  1965. >>4138519
  1966.  
  1967. >So my rule on not flying unless I have to didn't last long!
  1968. >At least I have a target now. Big black tower here I come!
  1969. >Fly about 2 or 3 human stories in the air, good flyer but not a GREAT one so I usually don't hang out all that high
  1970. >have to do a little bit of weaving and dodging around some buildings, plus antennas and other metal humans seem to LOVE to have jutting up
  1971. >Making good time, I might ACTUALLY make it there being only slightly late instead of horribly late
  1972. >Oh hey, is that a school? Awe lookit all the little human kids, they wear clothes like adults!
  1973. >Aaaaaaaaaannd they're all screaming. And pointing. At me. Sheesh.
  1974. >Wait, are they smiling? ....Oh, they've never seen a pegasus before! Hi kids! Sure I'll wave back!
  1975. >Oh wait right JOB. Shoot bye kids
  1976. Replies to this post:
  1977. >>4161940
  1978. >>
  1979.  Mr. Blue  08/27/12(Mon)00:02 No.4161876
  1980.  
  1981. File: 1346040126871.gif-(842 KB, 701x464, 131930877806.gif)
  1982.  
  1983. >>4161824
  1984. Aaaaand that's all for tonight I think. I hate rushing these so much. Typos everywhere. I didn't even reread most of it after writing it.
  1985.  
  1986. No promises on when I'll write more. Tomorrow's a Monday. Not a fun day.
  1987. >>
  1988.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/27/12(Mon)00:04 No.4161940
  1989.  
  1990. File: 1346040271260.png-(300 KB, 900x554, 51487__safe_lyra_human_bo(...).png)
  1991.  
  1992. >>4161858
  1993. >HERE! Finally!
  1994. >Fly straight up the tower, I think they have me working on a high floor so I'll just duck in a window.
  1995. >Loop around the building once....twice....why are none of the windows open?
  1996. >Realize I'm a complete idiot...in Equestria, all the high windows open so pegasi can come and go. But on Earth it's just a safety hazard!
  1997. >Drop back to the ground level and sheepishly go in the front door
  1998. >Hover a few feet off the ground so I can actually SEE the desk guy
  1999. >He's got his nose buried in a screen. Kinda spotting a trend here
  2000. >He looks up, looks down, then looks back up again with his eyes all big. Well, human big.
  2001. >Dude. Guy. Talk. Manners. SAY SOMETHING. Fine, I will.
  2002. "Uhm, hi?"
  2003.  
  2004. >>4161824
  2005. Oh great, now I'm stepping on this guy's toes.
  2006. Replies to this post:
  2007. >>4162101 >>4162110
  2008. >>
  2009.  Pancakes  08/27/12(Mon)00:05 No.4161960
  2010.  
  2011. File: 1346040323448.jpg-(13 KB, 322x322, 10.jpg)
  2012.  
  2013. Ugh, missed one.
  2014.  
  2015. >>4161441
  2016. > I pick up my tools and start heading back to my room.
  2017. > Then, I feel a hoof on my shoulder stop me.
  2018. "Just wait a sec."
  2019. > "Eh? Anything else, Rainbow?"
  2020. "I, umm... could I ask you for something?"
  2021. > She lowers her eyes and pokes at the floor with her hoof.
  2022. > Her voice becomes quieter.
  2023. "Y'know, since you're a human and all. And I'm a pony who clearly has no clue how this city works."
  2024. > She starts taking deep breaths.
  2025. > I wait patiently for her to continue.
  2026. > Her voice is almost inaudible now.
  2027. "Would you mind showing me some of the 'cool' things in this city?"
  2028. > Ah, so that's it. I smile a bit.
  2029. > "Sure thing, Rainbow."
  2030. "R-really? Ohthankyou! Thankyou! Thank-"
  2031. > She suddenly stops mid-sentence and clears her throat.
  2032. "I mean, that's cool. Later."
  2033. > And as I head back downstairs, I can't help but smile.
  2034. > Rainbow's excited squeaks could be heard all the way here.
  2035. "BEST. HUMAN. EVER!"
  2036. Replies to this post:
  2037. >>4162110 >>4162500 >>4165935
  2038. >>
  2039.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/27/12(Mon)00:11 No.4162101
  2040.  
  2041. >>4161940
  2042. >"....Oh." He rubs his face. "Thought I was tripping there for a sec. Can I help you?"
  2043. "Yeah, I'm here for work. I'm meeting with Mr. Archer."
  2044. >"You know Mr. Archer?"
  2045. "Well, we've met in Equestria and I'm representing Bank of Equestria."
  2046. >"...huh. Well, I'll buzz you up to the office of the CEO, elevators are down that way."
  2047. >Good, information that I have no idea what to do with. I'll just smile and wait for him to yammer more.
  2048. >"....If you, um, get on one of them, I'll just send you to his floor."
  2049. >Oh, go get on something down the hall.
  2050. "Alright, thank you!"
  2051. >Head up the hallway and just KNOW human eyes are boring into the back of my head. Whip around real fast
  2052. >Staring doorman jumps back and trips over his chair and lands on his flank. Busted
  2053. >Ohkay, and I get on the what? There's doors. Lots of d- That door opened! I guess I get on what's inside. Except it's empty. I'll go inside and- MORE doors that close on their own. What is WITH humans and doors that shut on their own?
  2054. >Now I'm stuck in here. What's that dinging, and do I suddenly have a heavy feeling in my belly?
  2055.  
  2056. (Mini dump over for now, I'll finish this one out tomorrow)
  2057. >>
  2058.  Mr. Blue  08/27/12(Mon)00:12 No.4162110
  2059.  
  2060. File: 1346040724488.png-(185 KB, 750x750, 74725 - artist atticus83 (...).png)
  2061.  
  2062. >>4161960
  2063. >>4161940
  2064. You guys are golden. Keep writing!
  2065.  
  2066. One of us should live in a different time zone though, just for the sake of post timing.
  2067. Replies to this post:
  2068. >>4162272 >>4162711
  2069. >>
  2070.  breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/27/12(Mon)00:19 No.4162272
  2071.  
  2072. File: 1346041196201.png-(151 KB, 700x700, 53385__safe_lyra_human_ar(...).png)
  2073.  
  2074. >>4162110
  2075. I love you too.
  2076.  
  2077. Now THIS, this at left here, is the story I'm just waiting (but also dreading) someone writing.
  2078. Replies to this post:
  2079. >>4162646
  2080. >>
  2081.  Pancakes  08/27/12(Mon)00:31 No.4162500
  2082.  
  2083. >>4161960
  2084. Also done here for now.
  2085.  
  2086. Would be interesting to see more writers start different variations of PiE as well. The concept has so much potential.
  2087. >>
  2088.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)00:34 No.4162580
  2089.  
  2090. >>4115172
  2091. "She likes cloth:". That's a good band name.
  2092. Replies to this post:
  2093. >>4169421
  2094. >>
  2095.  pecuniarianism  08/27/12(Mon)00:35 No.4162600
  2096.  
  2097. Guys, this thread is the chemo that is curing /mlp/.
  2098. >>
  2099.  Mr. blue  08/27/12(Mon)00:37 No.4162646
  2100.  
  2101. >>4162272
  2102. You know what's scary? I've already read something almost like that on fimfiction. Look up "All American Girl" and suffer through the soap opera type drama the side stories have to see it. Lyra marries a human and they have pony/human babies. Like regular babies but with green hair.
  2103. >>
  2104.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)00:40 No.4162711
  2105.  
  2106. >>4162110
  2107. Or you could work on your other story.
  2108. Replies to this post:
  2109. >>4162892
  2110. >>
  2111.  Sneaky !9hxdci9Eg.  08/27/12(Mon)00:44 No.4162788
  2112.  
  2113. Why was this never thought of before?
  2114. Replies to this post:
  2115. >>4162807
  2116. >>
  2117.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)00:45 No.4162807
  2118.  
  2119. >>4162788
  2120. I think people thought of it, they just didn't do anything about it.
  2121. Replies to this post:
  2122. >>4162863 >>4162892
  2123. >>
  2124.  Sneaky !9hxdci9Eg.  08/27/12(Mon)00:47 No.4162863
  2125.  
  2126. >>4162807
  2127. Well I sure hope it catches on. Lot of talented writers in AiE, it's just that its becoming a little redundant.
  2128. Should I try my hand at this?
  2129. Replies to this post:
  2130. >>4162912 >>4162924 >>4163576
  2131. >>
  2132.  Mr. Blue  08/27/12(Mon)00:49 No.4162892
  2133.  
  2134. File: 1346042956381.png-(74 KB, 600x505, maybe_i_don__t_want_to_be(...).png)
  2135.  
  2136. >>4162711
  2137. I'm trying! I'm sorry! I just have too much to do on all my projects now! I'll get a new chapter in on High Flyer sometime this week and try to be more regular with that again.
  2138.  
  2139. >>4162807
  2140. And when it was mentioned in a different thread the other night someone talked me into finally doing it so I did.
  2141. >>
  2142.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)00:50 No.4162912
  2143.  
  2144. >>4162863
  2145. ¿Por qué no?
  2146. Replies to this post:
  2147. >>4164127
  2148. >>
  2149.  Pancakes  08/27/12(Mon)00:50 No.4162924
  2150.  
  2151. >>4162863
  2152. Go ahead. We're still at the early stage where the readers keep bumping for fear of 404.
  2153. Replies to this post:
  2154. >>4164127
  2155. >>
  2156.  PonyGone !Gi8l6ezzXk  08/27/12(Mon)01:11 No.4163364
  2157.  
  2158. PiE... Brilliant! Is this with PC's or anyp0ny?
  2159. Replies to this post:
  2160. >>4163456
  2161. >>
  2162.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)01:16 No.4163456
  2163.  
  2164. >>4163364
  2165. Mascot for the thread is Pillow Case the OC who loves wearing soft and comfortable clothes. The original idea before was that people could use her like Anon is used in the AiE, but they don't have to. Anyp0ny can go to Earth.
  2166.  
  2167. That's what I remember from the original Ponies Wearing Clothes thread. So far there's only one story with Pillow in it, the others have more well known ponies.
  2168. >>
  2169.  Sneaky !9hxdci9Eg.  08/27/12(Mon)01:20 No.4163544
  2170.  
  2171. Sorry if I'm taking awhile. I'm just trying to conjour up an interesting story. I think you'll like this. It should be ready in a few.
  2172. >>
  2173.  TechyConversant !!P7jUy82ixIX  08/27/12(Mon)01:21 No.4163576
  2174.  
  2175. >>4162863
  2176.  
  2177. Did someone say talented AiE writers?!
  2178.  
  2179. ...I'll see myself out.
  2180. Replies to this post:
  2181. >>4163703
  2182. >>
  2183.  Ponygon !Gi8l6ezzXk  08/27/12(Mon)01:27 No.4163703
  2184.  
  2185. >>4163576
  2186. Thats funny Techy, last I checked You are an AMAZING AiE writer, that is missed by many
  2187. >Im writing some PiE right now, you should too!
  2188. >>
  2189.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)01:39 No.4163908
  2190.  
  2191. I just stopped by to tell all of you guys I love your stories.
  2192. Keep calm, take your time and I´ll see you on your next update.
  2193. >>
  2194.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)01:41 No.4163958
  2195.  
  2196. Any decent Rarity stories?
  2197. >>
  2198.  Sneaky !9hxdci9Eg.  08/27/12(Mon)01:50 No.4164127
  2199.  
  2200. >>4162912
  2201. >>4162924
  2202. Alrighty then
  2203.  
  2204. So. This is Philadelphia.
  2205. It's a lot like Los Pegasus. Crowded with large buildings.
  2206. The humans' buildings are much taller in comparison to the pony buildings.
  2207. Hello there, anyone who might be reading my thoughts. My name is Angel Wing. In case you didn't know, Angel is a stallion's name. Because I'm a male. My name also has to do with my appearance; I have humongous wings. They often touch the ground. If I let them, they will drag, but I don't do that because dirt shows up on white like a sore thumb. Now that I'm talking to myself anyways, I might as well go over my life's story.
  2208. About 20 years ago, Celestia got knocked up and had a bastard son, me. No one knows who my father is; not even me. Mom said that it would very well ruin reputations, and not just hers.
  2209. When I was born, it was realized that the product of an alicorn and a pegasus equals a mutant with huge wings. I guess I'm a kind of scientific marvel. Aunt Fluttershy suggested I be called Angel after her bunny. That bunny was from the fiery pits of the sun, I swear. And I sure hope to Celestia that's where it goes.
  2210. Anyways, it was also found that my horn formed inside my head. Normally, that would pose a problem, but my genetics apparently were designed for that, so I turned out okay.
  2211. Replies to this post:
  2212. >>4164189
  2213. >>
  2214.  Sneaky !9hxdci9Eg.  08/27/12(Mon)01:53 No.4164189
  2215.  
  2216. >>4164127
  2217.  
  2218. Even though I was obviously different, I had a lot of friends growing up. And special someponies. Many fillies, especially pegasi, took a liking to my wings. On pegasi, wings are kind of like sexual spots. They cause arousal. On unicorns, it's horns.
  2219. Anyways, I had a pretty good childhood. But then I became 18, and had to do something with my life. I was pressured by my mom to find something in politics or royalty, like her. I wasn't interested, but knew it would crush my mother. My aunt Luna was always the person I went to advice for. When I told her the situation, she said she was severely disappointed, but that I should do what I wanted nonetheless. I couldn't just live out my years in unhappiness (and considering I'm part deity, that's a lot of years.)
  2220. There was one thing that interested me. Humans. I wanted to go to Earth, and learn about them, possibly even change them.
  2221. This was a heartbreak to everyone I knew. But no one stopped me, so I went to a place where ponies were allowed: the city of brotherly love.
  2222. The goodbyes were bittersweet. At the station, my mother hugged me tearfully. Luna wasn't one for hugs, but we shook hooves. I could still see the sadness in her eyes.
  2223. >"All aboard to Philadelphia!"
  2224. I waved goodbye and got on the train to Philadelphia.
  2225. And that's where I am now.
  2226. Replies to this post:
  2227. >>4164272
  2228. >>
  2229.  Sneaky !9hxdci9Eg.  08/27/12(Mon)01:57 No.4164272
  2230.  
  2231. >>4164189
  2232. So, should I continue this one? Pastebin-worthy or no?
  2233. Replies to this post:
  2234. >>4164466 >>4164689
  2235. >>
  2236.  Sneaky !9hxdci9Eg.  08/27/12(Mon)02:07 No.4164439
  2237.  
  2238. And don't judge by my illiterate writing. I usually go over it a couple times; this time I didn't
  2239. >>
  2240.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)02:08 No.4164466
  2241.  
  2242. >>4164272
  2243. I say continue, we have the backstory for your character now get to the meat of it - interactions with our world.
  2244. Replies to this post:
  2245. >>4164862
  2246. >>
  2247.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)02:20 No.4164689
  2248.  
  2249. >>4164272
  2250. I've never actually written one of these. But it's easier to read when thoughts and actions start with > your speech begins with " and other characters speech begins
  2251. with >"
  2252.  
  2253. Again, that's just me.
  2254.  
  2255. As for your actual story, I was instantly turned off from it when you mentioned being Celestia's son. It's 2 in the morning and I'm too tired to explain why that's a bad idea when it should be obvious. You also mentioned your birth potentially ruining her reputation and others. Why would that ruin her reputation? She's a literal god and every living being on the planet depends on her for raising that life giving sun and it's warmth. Then you went straight to saying you had a pretty good childhood, even when realistically you should've spent it being shunned if your birth "would very well ruin reputations."
  2256. Replies to this post:
  2257. >>4164741 >>4165038
  2258. >>
  2259.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)02:24 No.4164741
  2260.  
  2261. >>4164689
  2262. For the sake of world limit I'm going to assume that all of these stories involve the portal to Earth already being open and ponies already being on good terms with humans.
  2263.  
  2264. Afterwards you mention adulthood, and wanting to go to earth to learn about humans and possibly even change them. Change what? WHAT? You're a prince. What do you want to change about an entire other species?
  2265.  
  2266. Finally you end it with a sappy, anti-climactic goodbye and a really flat ending.
  2267.  
  2268. None of it really made me want to read more.
  2269. >>
  2270.  Sneaky !9hxdci9Eg.  08/27/12(Mon)02:31 No.4164862
  2271.  
  2272. >>4164466
  2273. K. Revisions have been made.
  2274. http://pastebin.com/u/Sneaky
  2275. >>
  2276.  Sneaky !9hxdci9Eg.  08/27/12(Mon)02:42 No.4165038
  2277.  
  2278. >>4164689
  2279. You make some good points. First really 'constructive' criticism I've seen in awhile.
  2280. In defense of the story: 1. Even though she is the most powerful being in Equestria, she is seen as basically perfect and needs to keep that. It's more about who she got knocked up by than that she has a bastard child. But nobody knows who his father is, so he isnt discrimantednagainst. I supposed I could've emphasized that better.
  2281. 2. Basic young peoples dreams. It shows that he isnt exactly perfect, but at the same time does a foreshadowing.
  2282. 3. I have nothing to say about the ending. I agree with you there.
  2283.  
  2284. And also since the while thing was flashback with basically no talking, I didnt borrow with the >.
  2285. >>
  2286.  Sneaky !9hxdci9Eg.  08/27/12(Mon)02:45 No.4165085
  2287.  
  2288. *discriminated against
  2289. *whole
  2290. Damn its hard to type on ipod sometimes
  2291. >>
  2292.  Pancakes  08/27/12(Mon)04:00 No.4165935
  2293.  
  2294. File: 1346054426495.jpg-(14 KB, 405x359, 11.jpg)
  2295.  
  2296. Suddenly, surprise updates! And Rarity.
  2297.  
  2298. >>4161960
  2299. > I knock politely on the door. It opens. Another pony.
  2300. > This one is a unicorn like Twilight, but white with violet mane and tail. Not surprised.
  2301. > But I wonder how they turn door handles with their hooves?
  2302. > Well, this isn't the time to think about that.
  2303. > "Hi there. I'm the new apartment manager here and Twilight asked me to-"
  2304. "A human? Oh, you've come at the perfect time!"
  2305. > "- ask if you can help with her spell."
  2306. "I've been dying to examine one of you up close ever since we arrived."
  2307. > "Err..."
  2308. "I must say that you are quite the specimen. Perhaps Twilight does have some good taste, after all."
  2309. > She seems to be in her own world.
  2310. "Those legs! I've never seen such natural balance and poise."
  2311. > I sigh loudly.
  2312. "And those appendages! You could fit three, four, no, FIVE rings on them!"
  2313. > "Excuse me, but-"
  2314. Replies to this post:
  2315. >>4165981
  2316. >>
  2317.  Pancakes  08/27/12(Mon)04:04 No.4165981
  2318.  
  2319. >>4165935
  2320. "That makes TEN rings for both hands! This changes the game completely!"
  2321. > "Umm... Miss Rarity?"
  2322. "I can see it now! The next fashion statement - smaller, but more elegant accessories."
  2323. > "You aren't listening, are you."
  2324. > She stops and pouts slightly at me.
  2325. "Now darling, when a designer such as myself sees potential, she must simply exploit it right away!"
  2326. > Her horn glows. Huh? I can't feel the floor with my feet.
  2327. > I look down to see myself levitate a few inches from the ground.
  2328. > Somehow, I am surrounded by a faint glow of light.
  2329. "Now, I shall have you try out my latest creations."
  2330. > Then, I'm dragged into the room by an unseen force.
  2331. > Rarity is positively beaming at the idea.
  2332. > This cannot end well.
  2333. Replies to this post:
  2334. >>4165989
  2335. >>
  2336.  Pancakes  08/27/12(Mon)04:06 No.4165989
  2337.  
  2338. File: 1346054764960.jpg-(43 KB, 900x747, 12.jpg)
  2339.  
  2340. >>4165981
  2341. "Next, we'll try this one. What do you think, Opalescence"
  2342. > Her cat just meows as it watches me with pity.
  2343. > I cannot express in words how frustrated I feel right now.
  2344. "Oh, you're right, Opalescence. This definitely clashes with the color of his hair."
  2345. > Clearly, these unicorn ponies have a certain aptitude for magic.
  2346. "Perhaps we should try something different..."
  2347. > Or I would have run away much earlier.
  2348. > Right now, I am completely helpless at the hands (hooves?) of the one called Rarity.
  2349. > And I am being forced to try out a number of ridiculous outfits.
  2350. > Each of them more gaudy than the last.
  2351. > Some of them don't even fit. And yes, Rarity.
  2352. > The human body isn't supposed to bend this way.
  2353. Replies to this post:
  2354. >>4166105
  2355. >>
  2356.  Pancakes  08/27/12(Mon)04:20 No.4166105
  2357.  
  2358. >>4165989
  2359. "Are you alright?" cries Twilight. "I'm really, really sorry that I didn't make it in time!"
  2360. > "Don't worry about it. Nothing hurt but my pride."
  2361. > And maybe my left arm. But I don't want to worry her more.
  2362. "Rarity! You're supposed to help me refresh the human illusion spell! Not start your own personal fashion show!"
  2363. "Well, excuse me, Twilight," says Rarity. "But I just couldn't leave him alone, now that I've seen the future of Ponyville fashion."
  2364. > Rarity points a hoof towards me proudly.
  2365. "Human style! I can see it now, everyp0ny is going to go crazy over such eclectic designs."
  2366. "I'm starting to think that I'm the only pony who isn't crazy," Twilight says. "We're supposed to keep ourselves secret from humans, remember?"
  2367. "But not forever, I hope. That would be such a waste."
  2368. > While I'm thankful for Twilight's timely rescue, this could turn ugly between them.
  2369. > I've seen something like this before in one of my classes.
  2370. > Need to quickly change the subject.
  2371. > I clear my throat to grab their attention.
  2372. Replies to this post:
  2373. >>4166126
  2374. >>
  2375.  Pancakes  08/27/12(Mon)04:22 No.4166126
  2376.  
  2377. File: 1346055728423.jpg-(53 KB, 838x954, 13.jpg)
  2378.  
  2379. >>4166105
  2380. "Excuse me, but I'd like to hear a bit more about that spell you mentioned, since I can't see its effects myself."
  2381. > As if on cue, Twilight's eyes begin to sparkle.
  2382. "Finally! Someone who is interested in my work!"
  2383. > Rarity sighs and starts putting away her outfits.
  2384. "Talk to you later, darling," she whispers as she walks past.
  2385. > I get the idea. This might take a while.
  2386. "You see, I was able to create a new type of magic while doing my research on humans! By carefully adjusting the light around the subject with the ambient energies radiated from subject's core, we can actually..."
  2387. > Twilight explains the spell in far more detail.
  2388. > After twenty minutes, I get the gist of it and interrupt.
  2389. > "So basically, any human who sees you would see a human-equivalent version of yourself instead of your pony form."
  2390. "Wow," says Twilight. "You really DO get it. That's impressive!"
  2391. > "I was part of the academe myself, you know. But that leads me to another concern."
  2392. > I pause for a moment to carefully word my next question.
  2393. > "What do you ponies do about human clothes?"
  2394. Replies to this post:
  2395. >>4166133
  2396. >>
  2397.  Pancakes  08/27/12(Mon)04:23 No.4166133
  2398.  
  2399. >>4166126
  2400. "That's where I come in," says Rarity.
  2401. > She is now standing in front of a mirror while wearing a fancy hat.
  2402. "Oh, don't be shy. Come closer and look at the mirror with me."
  2403. > "I don't see how this helps explain-"
  2404. > Then I see it. I can hardly believe my eyes.
  2405. "What do you think? I wasn't known as the best designer in Ponyville for nothing."
  2406. > This is what everyone else sees when they look at these ponies?
  2407. "With Twilight's help, my brilliant mental designs become actual clothes for all to admire!"
  2408. > There isn't any better way to say it.
  2409. > She looks like a princess right out of a storybook.
  2410. "It's still an illusion, of course. But these early consumer tests should give me enough ideas for the real thing."
  2411. > "Uh, right," I mumble.
  2412. > It isn't just the dress.
  2413. > Rarity looks like a damn model in the mirror.
  2414. > And as a normal heterosexual male, I can't help but lose myself in her gaze.
  2415. > Just, wow.
  2416. > I'm not sure how long I stood there.
  2417. > But Twilight finally pulls me away from the mirror.
  2418. Replies to this post:
  2419. >>4166142
  2420. >>
  2421.  Pancakes  08/27/12(Mon)04:24 No.4166142
  2422.  
  2423. File: 1346055864722.jpg-(26 KB, 530x432, 14.jpg)
  2424.  
  2425. >>4166133
  2426. "This is exactly what I meant, Rarity!"
  2427. > "Huh? What? What happened?"
  2428. "The other males reacted the exact same way the other day! We need you to take your illusions down a notch! Right now, we grab too much attention to ourselves."
  2429. "Hmm," says Rarity. "Perhaps you may have a point. How about this, then."
  2430. > Her horn flashes once more. I turn to the purple pony uneasily.
  2431. "Go ahead," says Twilight.
  2432. > When I take a look again, I see the human Rarity wearing normal street clothes.
  2433. > She still looks really beautiful, even without wearing makeup.
  2434. > But this time, I manage to maintain my composure.
  2435. > "Still looks pretty good, but I think most guys can handle this without making a fool of themselves."
  2436. "This is perfect! Rarity will refresh the spell on everyone using similar clothes. Then, we won't stand out so much!"
  2437. "I suppose you're right, Twilight." says Rarity.
  2438. "That settles it, then! See you later, you two!"
  2439. > Rarity doesn't argue any further, but she looks fairly disappointed.
  2440. Replies to this post:
  2441. >>4166152
  2442. >>
  2443.  Pancakes  08/27/12(Mon)04:25 No.4166152
  2444.  
  2445. >>4166142
  2446. > Here I am, watching Rarity put away her things.
  2447. > For some reason, I feel like cheering her up a bit.
  2448. > Even if she did treat me like a human mannequin.
  2449. > "Don't dwell on it. I'm sure that it's for the best"
  2450. "..."
  2451. > "Twilight just doesn't want any of you to get into trouble."
  2452. "..."
  2453. > "And I'm sure you can still learn all about human fashion even without a fancy illusion like that."
  2454. "..!"
  2455. > Rarity stops in her tracks and turns around.
  2456. > Her eyes begin to light up excitedly.
  2457. "Darling, that's a positively brilliant idea!"
  2458. > "I mean, your human form is already really-"
  2459. "Of course I don't need this illusion! All I need to do is learn more about human fashion from the humans themselves!"
  2460. > Then she gives me a wink.
  2461. "And I'm sure that someone like you would be a perfect escort as I visit all of the human centers of fashion, art and culture!"
  2462. > "Uh, wait a sec..."
  2463. "In fact, you must take me around the city"
  2464. > "I didn't mean..."
  2465. "You must, must, MUST!"
  2466. > I sigh to myself. I just know I'm going to regret this.
  2467. > "... alright, I guess."
  2468. > Rarity positively squeaks in delight.
  2469. > Well, maybe I won't regret it that much.
  2470. Replies to this post:
  2471. >>4166178 >>4187395
  2472. >>
  2473.  Pancakes  08/27/12(Mon)04:28 No.4166178
  2474.  
  2475. >>4166152
  2476. And that's it. I can almost see the light now.
  2477.  
  2478. See you Space Cowboy...
  2479. >>
  2480.  Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:22 No.4167951
  2481.  
  2482. >PiE
  2483. So there's a thread for this now? I wrote a "Anon on Earth" story which was basically this, think you'd all wanna read it?
  2484. Replies to this post:
  2485. >>4167993
  2486. >>
  2487.  Mr. Blue  08/27/12(Mon)08:27 No.4167993
  2488.  
  2489. >>4167951
  2490. Sure.
  2491. >>
  2492.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:32 No.4168021
  2493.  
  2494. Okay, I present to this thread, "Anon in Earth"
  2495.  
  2496. [Press Start]
  2497. [New Game]
  2498. >You wake up in a dark alley, lying on your side.
  2499. >You can taste dirt from the ground on your teeth, mixed with the rusty taste of blood.
  2500. >It feels like you fell down and hit your head.
  2501. >You don’t remember exactly what you were doing before you fell.
  2502. >You’re not even sure where you are.
  2503. >Unmoving, you examine your surroundings.
  2504. >You’re flanked by two bricked buildings; the ground is indeed dirt with clumps of grass here and there.
  2505. >The exit of the alley is ahead of you by, you estimate, about 30 hooves away. You can make out a dark path beyond with shadowed figures passing by.
  2506. >You blink hard and awkwardly try to stand.
  2507. >Your head is pounding and you can barely bring yourself up past your knees.
  2508. >You stop for a brief moment, taking a breath, and then force yourself to a full stand.
  2509. >There’s a knocked over trash bin to your left. How fitting, as you feel like complete garbage.
  2510. >A shattered mirror lies on the ground next to it, among the many other spilled contents.
  2511. >You slowly turn towards the mess. There is a shard big enough that you can get a good look at yourself.
  2512. > [Customize Character Screen]
  2513. > [Default Appearance]
  2514. > [Default Name]
  2515. > [Confirmation y/n]
  2516. >y
  2517. > [saving progress]
  2518. Replies to this post:
  2519. >>4168027
  2520. >>
  2521.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:33 No.4168027
  2522.  
  2523. >>4168021
  2524. >You take in your appearance and make sure everything is still there.
  2525. >If you did fall, it looks like your face caught your landing as evident by your black eye and bloody lip.
  2526. >At least your horn is still in place. Al though, some kind of paper cup has been skewered by it.
  2527. >You use your magic to levitate it off your horn and toss the cup in the tipped-over garbage bin.
  2528. >Suddenly, a realization occurs to you.
  2529. >You are missing something valuable... something personal.
  2530. >You can’t remember what it is but you know it’s important.
  2531. >It’s stuck in the back of your mind like a bad itch.
  2532. >You trot anxiously in place, considering your options.
  2533. >You decide to look around; maybe this important memory will return if you were to come across something similar to it.
  2534. >It’s the middle of the day so it can’t be too dangerous, you think.
  2535. >Your head is starting to clear up as you walk to the alley exit, leaving the garbage bin mess behind.
  2536. >You exit the alley and the ground is suddenly as hard as a rock.
  2537. >A light grey colored path made of a type of stone you’ve never seen before.
  2538. >It’s so hard that it’s uncomfortable to walk on. Seeing as there are no other options you try to ignore it.
  2539. >Looking around, you don’t see any other ponies.
  2540. >You do however; see a few strange creatures walking about on two legs.
  2541. >There are two of them standing on another grey path across a large, black patch of a different kind of rock.
  2542. >The two creatures appear to be chatting with each other. One has black fur on his head and the other is wearing some silly-looking hat.
  2543. >They give occasional glances around their surroundings.
  2544. >As you observe, one of them eventually notices you and gives a wide eyed stare.
  2545. Replies to this post:
  2546. >>4168035
  2547. >>
  2548.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:33 No.4168035
  2549.  
  2550. >>4168027
  2551. >You’re trying to identify these creatures a strange kind of familiarity washes over you.
  2552. >You know you’ve seen these creatures before but they look… different somehow. They remind you of your favourite cartoon, My Little Human.
  2553. >Then it hits you. These must be humans.
  2554. >Holy crap, Humans! Two of them! Two real live breathing male humans! (At least you think they’re male) No more than 15 hooves away from you.
  2555. >The black-haired human that noticed you motions to the other with the silly hat. They both stare at you.
  2556. >You give a wide smile. You just have to talk to them.
  2557. >You begin to cheerfully trot towards them, crossing over the black path.
  2558. >You’re about halfway when suddenly….
  2559. >”HOOONK! SCREEEEEECH.”
  2560. >A roaring noise erupted from your right and with a jump you see a big monster sliding towards you.
  2561. >You scream and immediately cast your shield spell, a recommended survival instinct for surprise attacks.
  2562. >The monster slams into you.
  2563. >The barrier, while effective in preventing any major injuries, is unable to keep you on your feet and you’re sent flying through the air, the shield dying out from sudden trauma mid-flight.
  2564. >You crash and tumble on the hard black path, rolling and skidding to a stop, ending up on your back.
  2565. >The wind is knocked completely out of you and the whole world spins above. Unable to move any more than fierce trembling, tears begin to fill your eyes.
  2566. >You remain still, trying to get your breath back and crying quietly.
  2567. Replies to this post:
  2568. >>4168041
  2569. >>
  2570.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:34 No.4168041
  2571.  
  2572. >>4168035
  2573. >The two humans who were staring at you before are now above you, Black-Hair kneeling and Silly-Hat standing, holding some strange device beside his head.
  2574. >Black-Hair’s mouth is moving but you can’t make out what he’s saying.
  2575. >Another human rushes over to you, an older male with grey hair, He looks flustered and like he’s about to faint.
  2576. >You gasp and shake your head, your hearing starting to come back.
  2577. >Black-Hair turns to the Elder-man “No, it don’t look dead! Looks like more damage was done to your car.”
  2578. “Wh-What’s going on?” You ask.
  2579. >The three humans all turn to you with shocked expressions.
  2580. >“Well, I’ll be a monkey’s uncle. A talking horse!” Black-Hair belts out.
  2581. >“Oh goodness,” The Elder-Man moans, “I ran over a talkin’ horse. I nearly killed som’tin special.”
  2582. >“Damn right you did!” Black-Hair squints at you. In addition to your aching body, now you feel like they’re singling you out as the strange creature, “I ain’t ever seen a horse like this one, such a bizarre coat and mane, plus, it’s got some kind of cone on its head. Maybe it’s a kind of birth dee-fect.”
  2583. >“…We’re on the crossroad of Lincoln and Roosevelt….” Silly-Hat speaks to his device. He suddenly closes it and turns to the other humans, “animal control is on their way.”
  2584. >You suddenly have an empty feeling in your gut.
  2585. >“Good, they’ll know what to do with this thing. If it’s hurts too bad, then they’ll put her down,” Black-Hair drones on.
  2586. >The Elder man looks even paler than before.
  2587. >Your heart stops. Put-down… They’re going to put you down like some kind of sick animal…
  2588. Replies to this post:
  2589. >>4168047
  2590. >>
  2591.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:35 No.4168047
  2592.  
  2593. >>4168041
  2594. >Suddenly, you’re scared. You need to escape before they put you down.
  2595. >With a gasp, you roll over and lurch to your feet.
  2596. >Your body hurts but it doesn’t feel like anything is broken, just some scrapes and bruises.
  2597. >”Whoa, there, she's standing up!” Silly hat points out.
  2598. >The Elder man seems to brighten up “Th-Then she’ll be okay?”
  2599. >Black-Hair gets up and approaches you, “Easy there, girl. You can understand me right? Animal control is gonna come and take you to safe place.”
  2600. >He reaches for you and you jump back.
  2601. “I-I’m sorry, leave me alone!”
  2602. >You slowly back away from them. Your head is pounding again and your whole body is shaking.
  2603. >”Don’t let her get away, hold her before she runs off and gets run over again!” Black-Hair orders Silly-Hat, who quickly darts to you, arms outstretched.
  2604. >You tense up and focus your telekinesis.
  2605. >Silly-Hat shouts, “Whao, I can’t move! Her cone’s glowing and I can’t move.”
  2606. >You throw him back and he crashes against Black-Hair
  2607. >The Elder-man, upon seeing this, faints.
  2608. >The two still conscious humans are quickly returning to their feet.
  2609. >You immediately dash away from them, running down the path, on the grey part and away from the black one.
  2610. >You run as fast you can, tears rolling down your cheeks, your body in pain, fuelled by fear and adrenalin.
  2611. >You don’t want to be ‘put down.’
  2612. >This isn’t going at all like you thought meeting a human would.
  2613. Replies to this post:
  2614. >>4168053
  2615. >>
  2616.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:35 No.4168053
  2617.  
  2618. >>4168047
  2619. >You’re lost, alone, and you don’t know what to do. You just run away as fast as you can.
  2620. >You dart down alleyways, hoping not to run into a dead end.
  2621. >You exit and enter a series of dirt roads beside houses lined up along another black path.
  2622. >Another giant monster roars by on the black path.
  2623. >Not wanting to be attacked again, you divert your path on the grassy lawns beside it.
  2624. >You don’t have time to wonder why there are no grey paths here.
  2625. >There is some kind of metal fence ahead of you. It looks like a series of metal wires linked together.
  2626. >You’re about to jump over it when a large dog appears on the other side,
  2627. >A big dog, almost as big as you. It snarls and barks loudly at you, only the fence stopping it from chasing you down.
  2628. >You feel your heart stop and twist towards the black path. It’s the only way you can go that’s away from those humans.
  2629. >You don’t see any more of those big monsters so you run down the black path.
  2630. >This black path runs to a dead end.
  2631. >Oh no, where can you go now?
  2632. >In a hurry, you see small pathway beside a red house.
  2633. >You run down it.
  2634. >You’re exhausted at this point. You’re not sure how much further you can keep going.
  2635. >The pathway leads to a boxed in patch of grass. You’re about to run into the area when you suddenly crash into something.
  2636. >You fall to the ground and find yourself covered in even more garbage. You’re going to need a bath.
  2637. >You hear a harsh grunt from behind you.
  2638. >Lifting your head from the garbage, you look back.
  2639. >Oh Celestia, another human!
  2640. >You try to lift yourself out of the garbage, but you’re so tired, you just trip over your own hooves.
  2641. Replies to this post:
  2642. >>4168056
  2643. >>
  2644.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:36 No.4168056
  2645.  
  2646. >>4168053
  2647. >The human sits up. You see he has wiry brown hair, green eyes and light skin. He looks annoyed about being knocked over. He looks towards the mess of garbage and notices you.
  2648. >You watch him with fearful eyes as he stares with wide ones at you.
  2649. >He gasps loudly, “Oh my god! It’s you… you’re a pony!”
  2650. >He didn’t call you a thing, a birth defect, or a horse.
  2651. “W-wait, you know me?”
  2652. >He stammers, “W-Well not ‘you’ exactly but… are you from Equestria?”
  2653. >He knows about Equestria! you suddenly feel a lot more at ease.
  2654. “Yes! Yes… Please help me, the other humans ran me over and now they are chasing me and they say they’re going to put me down… they called me things and I’ve been running, and that dog scared me and…and…“
  2655. >You start to cry again.
  2656. >He speaks calmly, “hey, it’s okay, let me take you inside…” He rises to his feet and approaches you.
  2657. >You contemplate running again but decide to let him grab you.
  2658. >He pulls you out of the garbage and holds you gently in his arms.
  2659. >You silently shiver and pray to Celestia that everything will be okay as he opens his door and takes you inside his house.
  2660. >It’s clean inside, everything is organized and the colors of the house are easy on the eyes.
  2661. >He sets you on his couch, a soft white cotton couch. You can’t tell if it’s particularly high quality or not. It is at least comfy.
  2662. >Still trembling, you curl up in the corner by the arm and watch him expectantly.
  2663. >He reaches for an odd chair with wheels and sits on it, facing you.
  2664. >”Now then, are you okay?”
  2665. “I… No…”
  2666. >You sniff and wipe your cheeks. Your heart is still pounding and your breath is unsteady.
  2667. ”I wanna go home…”
  2668. Replies to this post:
  2669. >>4168061
  2670. >>
  2671.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:37 No.4168061
  2672.  
  2673. >>4168056
  2674. >The human’s face falls into a concerned smile. “Do you know how got here from Equestria?”
  2675. >You take another breath.
  2676. “No… I don’t remember. I was…”
  2677. >You still can’t remember what you were doing when you were last in Equestria.
  2678. “…I only remember waking up one morning and going about my usual routine in Ponyville. It gets hazy after breakfast…”
  2679. >The human nods contemplatively. “You don’t have to talk right now, if you don’t want to. You look pretty beat up.”
  2680. “It hurts…”
  2681. >”Where does it hurt?”
  2682. “…Everywhere.”
  2683. >Nothing’s broken but you are covered in scrapes and bruises. Your head is still pounding after being hit by that monster…that “car” still feels like it’s rattling your body. You’re intensely thankful that you are able to remember your spells. Too bad most of them are Telekinesis-based.
  2684. >You wonder if you could find a spell to remember everything, or even teleport back home to Ponyville.
  2685. “…But it’s nothing serious, I’ll be fine...”
  2686. >”If you say so.” The human crosses his arms and stands from his chair. You watch him curiously as he leaves the room.
  2687. >You appear to be in the living room, other than the couch… there’s a small table, a desk, and a big cabinet across the room. You wonder what’s inside it.
  2688. >He doesn’t seem to be royalty so you don’t feel like you need to worry too much about manners. But he is letting you hide from those other humans and you can’t help but feel comfortable in this room.
  2689. >The human returns, holding a small box with a straw in it.
  2690. >>
  2691.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:38 No.4168077
  2692.  
  2693. >He sits in his chair and holds it in front you, “Here, drink this, it should make you feel better.”
  2694. >You feel sceptical about the drink.
  2695. “Wh-what is it?”
  2696. >”Carrot juice.”
  2697. >You stare at him softly.
  2698. >”I like carrot juice.”
  2699. >You take that as an acceptable answer and hope it’s safe.
  2700. >You grip the box with your telekinesis and bring the straw to your lips.
  2701. >With a small suck, the juice splashes on your tongue.
  2702. >Bliss. The juice tastes amazing! You never appreciated carrots much back home but it feels nice to have something that tastes familiar and refreshing.
  2703. >The human smiles at you calmly. Somehow, you feel safe; maybe everything will be okay now.
  2704. >”So, my name is Jack,” he states.
  2705. “Jack?”
  2706. >He nods, “What’s yours?”
  2707. >It looks like he doesn’t know your name. You feel disappointed because when you think about It… you can’t remember it also.
  2708. “I…”
  2709. >He frowns, “Don’t remember that either, eh?”
  2710. >You huff and try to think of what to call yourself. You look over your bruised body. Among the cuts, your sight lands on your flank…
  2711. >You have no cutie mark.
  2712. “Wh-what?”
  2713. >Jack leans forward, resting his elbows on his knees, “You weren’t always a blank-flank?”
  2714. “N-No, I...”
  2715. >You feel your heart rise to your throat.
  2716. “…I don’t remember that either. I-I had one but now it’s…”
  2717. >You feel sick. No name, no cutie mark, can’t remember how you got here. You feel like everything unique about yourself has been stolen from you. It’s like you don’t even exist anymore, no identity for yourself.
  2718. >You try to hold back any more tears. On the upside, you come up with a name to call yourself for now.
  2719. “C-Call me, Anonymous.”
  2720. >>
  2721.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:39 No.4168079
  2722.  
  2723. >Jack raises an eyebrow and smirks, “Anonymous? How about Anon for short?”
  2724. “Anon…”
  2725. >You sit up straight and take a deep breath. You are Anon. In Earth.
  2726. >It’s almost like you’re in one of those crappy fanfics you and your old friends read.
  2727. >Regardless, you feel a little bit better having something to call yourself.
  2728. >You finish off your carrot juice and hold the empty box out towards Jack.
  2729. >More trash. You remember that you were covered in garbage not so long ago.
  2730. “J-Jack? I’m sorry about the garbage on your couch…”
  2731. >He grabs the juice box from your telekinetic grasp, “Don’t worry about it, it’ll wash out… Speakin’ of which, you look like you could use a bath. It might be a good idea to take one before your cuts get infected.”
  2732. >The idea of a bath is immediately appealing to you. You nod enthusiastically.
  2733. >He smiles, “You look happier already, at least you’re not trembling and crying anymore.”
  2734. >You can’t help but grin. You have calmed down but you still feel like you’re going break down any second. Also, now that your heart isn’t pounding against your chest, your body aches even more.
  2735. >”Do you think can walk?”
  2736. >You look up at him, he looks worried and tense.
  2737. “I’ll try…”
  2738. >You huff and put your hooves under yourself. It feels like your muscles are going to explode and your bones may crack. You do manage to stand on the cushion but when you try to reach for the floor, you suddenly collapse.
  2739. >Jack manages to catch you before you hit the floor. Holding you in his arms, he carries you out of the room and into the hallway.
  2740. >You’re thankful for his assistance but, as much you regret it, it makes you feel a little useless.
  2741. “Y-You don’t need to carry me.”
  2742. >>
  2743.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:40 No.4168087
  2744.  
  2745. >”Hey, don’t worry about it. You were hit by a car today; you don’t need to exert yourself.”
  2746. >You flatten your ears and feel your cheeks flush. You’re not about to tell him, but this was also a bit of a fantasy of yours; to be carried around in a human’s arms. You know it’s childish and a bit silly but you enjoyed thinking about it. Sometimes, you wonder if you’re too much of a fan of ‘My Little Human’…
  2747. >You both enter a white room with a toilet, sink, and a bathtub. It’s not so different from the bathrooms back in Equestria, you don’t recall if they ever showed what a human’s bathroom would look like in that cartoon of yours.
  2748. >Looking at the tub, there is one thing you are sure of. You have no idea how to work that thing.
  2749. >He sets you in the tub and he reaches for a knob above the water faucet.
  2750. >With a twist, water pours out and slowly fills the tub. The tub feels really big to you; most of the ones back home wouldn’t even rise to half your height.
  2751. >The warm water feels great as it rises past your waist. You see jack reach for some strange device that looks like a faucet at the end of a thick string.
  2752. >”Alright, don’t look directly into this.” He holds it above you and a stream of warm water sprays against your mane.
  2753. >It catches you by surprise and a little ‘eep’ escapes from your lips. Your wet mane is covering your face but you feel great as the warm water soothes your aching body; even though it strings when it hits your scrapes.
  2754. >”Alright, so I’ve got some shampoo that should be safe for you to use, its animal tested after all. No offense, of course.”
  2755. >You know he didn’t mean it; you ARE a different species after all. It still hurts though.
  2756. “I’d love to get this smell off of me.”
  2757. Replies to this post:
  2758. >>4168094
  2759. >>
  2760.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:41 No.4168094
  2761.  
  2762. >>4168087
  2763. >You give him a small nod and he squeezes a cold gel on your head, just above your horn.
  2764. >You shut your eyes and let him run the shampoo through your mane. Even though it stings worse than the water on your scrapes, the feel of his fingers threading through your hairs and tickling your supple skin underneath is a feeling you never experienced before, you’re really enjoying it. You bite the inside of your cheek to remind to yourself not to get too excited. You don’t want this to get awkward.
  2765. >You decide to talk to keep your mind of things,
  2766. “Jack? How did you know I was from Equestria?”
  2767. >His fingers run under your ears, “Well, if I can be frank, you don’t look a thing like horses in our world. You’re much smaller and well…brighter.”
  2768. >You find yourself wondering what a horse on Earth looks like.
  2769. >”Also… this might sound weird but… I watch this cartoon called ‘My Little Pony”
  2770. >You stiffen up and look over at him.
  2771. “Really!?”
  2772. >Then you remember the thing about not opening your eyes as the shampoo starts to burn you.
  2773. “Ouch… Well, back home I watched a show called ‘My Little Human’!”
  2774. >Jack suddenly snorts and chuckles, “You don’t say? What a coincidence! MLP doesn’t tell us that part.”
  2775. “Well, MLH doesn’t tell us about… cars.”
  2776. >Just thinking about that monster roaring into you sends a shiver down your spine.
  2777. >”You okay?”
  2778. “Yeah… But isn’t this interesting, Jack?”
  2779. >”You could say that again.” He replies as he sprays a wave of warm water over you. When he’s rinsed you off, he reaches for the stopper and the waters slowly drains.
  2780. Replies to this post:
  2781. >>4168101
  2782. >>
  2783.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:42 No.4168101
  2784.  
  2785. >>4168094
  2786. >This whole process doesn’t help in making you seem less like a child but you feel a lot better after that. You step out of the tub and he starts to dry you off with a towel, taking extra care with your bruised and scraped body.
  2787. >”I’ve got some bandages you can use.” He pulls open a cabinet beside the sink and pulls out a first aid kit.
  2788. “Thank you, Jack…”
  2789. >”No problem, Anon…” He pulls out a brown bottle and some cotton balls. He dabs them in a liquid from the bottle and holds them to your wounds, “Now this’ll clean your cuts and prevent infection but it is going to sting for a second…”
  2790. >You nod. Each time one of those disinfected ball touch your scrapes, you have to bite your lip and hold your tears back, but the process ends as soon as it started.
  2791. >Jack places the bandages on your wounds.
  2792. >You feel like a million bits. Sure, you were still a little sore but you may be able to walk now.
  2793. >Jack puts the kit away, “It’s about 8 o’clock now; the news will be on soon.” He steps out into the hallway.
  2794. >’On’? You wonder what he means by that. You do wonder if your accident earlier that day will be announced. This subject does remind you of another question you had in mind.
  2795. “Jack, how do you watch MLP?”
  2796. >”Why, on the TV of course, sometimes, the computer as well,” he answers when stepping into the living room.
  2797. “What’s a ‘TV’?”
  2798. >You enter the living room to catch him opening the cabinet. “Equestria doesn’t have television? How do you watch MLH then?”
  2799. “We watch them on crystal orb powered by our magic.
  2800. >He nods and mutters “Seems legit.” He coughs, “Well, a TV is a box with a screen that’s powered by electricity, you know, like lighting or something like that.”
  2801. “Seems legit…”
  2802. Replies to this post:
  2803. >>4168109
  2804. >>
  2805.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:43 No.4168109
  2806.  
  2807. >>4168101
  2808. >You discover the object in question; it indeed looks like a black box with a flat screen across it.
  2809. >Jack reaches for it and presses a button on its bottom right side.
  2810. >The screen flickers to life and you see a human woman wearing a sharp suit sitting at a desk, speaking to the viewer. You wonder if she can see you.
  2811. >Jack pushes his chair back to his desk and sits on the couch, holding a plastic device in his hand.
  2812. >You follow, and sit beside him on the couch. You find yourself rather transfixed by the so-called TV across the room.
  2813. >The screen leaves the woman at the desk and shows two crossing black paths. A hole sinks in your chest when you see a mangled looking monster, or ‘car’, resting at the side of the street.
  2814. >”Well look at that, you made it on the news… Damn, Anon, that car got more busted up than you.”
  2815. >You’re not sure how much you appreciate the humor, it was the shield spell that saved you from getting killed, but you still got pretty hurt.
  2816. >That thought slips from your mind when you see that human, Black-Hair appear on the screen. Silly-Hat is standing beside him.
  2817. >You whimper and press yourself against Jack.
  2818. “That’s them…the two who were chasing me and saying I was going to be…put down…”
  2819. >You start to tremble again but Jack rests a hand your shoulder. He looks into your eyes calmly. You don’t know why but that makes you feel better. You lean forward and rest your front hooves on his leg and watch the TV.
  2820. >”So you say you saw a candy-colored pony, sir?” the TV blares on.
  2821. >Black-Hair speaks, “Yessiree! And it spoke! And had a cone-shaped horn on its head, why it threw my buddy clear across the street, what have ya!”
  2822. Replies to this post:
  2823. >>4168119
  2824. >>
  2825.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:45 No.4168119
  2826.  
  2827. >>4168109
  2828. >Silly-Hat shoves his shoulder, “You dumb sum' bitch! If you weren’t talking about her being ‘put down’ she wouldn’t have flipped her shit, you knew she could understand yew!”
  2829. >”Um Gentlemen, you can’t speak like that on live television…”
  2830. >Jack rubs your head, “I know those two guys, and they work at the junkyard. Not the sharpest tools in the shed but they’re not bad guys. I’m sure everything was all a misunderstanding.
  2831. >You still don’t feel any more comfortable about them; at least you know they aren’t looking for you right now.
  2832. >On the TV screen, it shows the Elder man who crashed into you. Somehow, he looks he even more flustered than before, looking almost like a cherry. You can’t figure out why he’s grinning like an idiot though as he holds his hands in front of himself as if he were holding something, “I’m not saying it was magic…But it was magic.”
  2833. >Suddenly “HOOOOOOOOOOOOONK!” blares in the room
  2834. >Your heart stops and you shriek, immediately casting your shield spell.
  2835. >Jack rushes to his feet and storms to his front door and opens it, “Hey shut the fuck up! Don’t honk your fucking horn in front my house motherfucker!!”
  2836. >”Hey, fuck you man!” you hear in the distance
  2837. >“Fuck you!” Jack retaliates, “You’re on private property! Get out of here before I call the cops!”
  2838. >You hear a bit of a screeching and a fading roar. Jack closes his front door and approaches you. He holds your shielded shoulders, “Anon, it’s okay, calm down!”
  2839. >He shakes you a bit and you finally come to your senses. You dissipate your shield and begin sobbing uncontrollably.
  2840. Replies to this post:
  2841. >>4168125
  2842. >>
  2843.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:46 No.4168125
  2844.  
  2845. >>4168119
  2846. >You feel ashamed that you shielded yourself on instinct like that when it wasn’t necessary, embarrassed that you reacted that way, in front of Jack. You don’t think you’ll ever get used to hearing that noise or even looking at a car ever again.
  2847. >“Anon, it’s alright. The car’s gone.” He lifts your chin so you’re looking at him.
  2848. >Seeing him there, you can accept that you’re not going to be sent flying through the air or sent to some strange place to be put down or be called a ‘thing with a birth defect’.
  2849. >You take a deep breath and let your heart calm down. You look away and wipe your cheek dry.
  2850. “I’m sorry…”
  2851. >”You apologize a lot. You sure you aren’t a yellow Pegasus?” He asks teasingly.
  2852. “..I don’t understand.”
  2853. >He chuckles to himself, “Never mind, it was a little joke on my part.” He pats your head and rubs his hand down your mane, “You’ve had a rough day Anon.”
  2854. “I…I need to find a way back home. I don’t belong here.”
  2855. >”I don’t disagree with you. I think I’d want the same if I was in your position. Until you find a way home, you can stay here. This house is on the far side of town so there’s not a whole lot of traffic here.” He motions to his door, “That little incident is not common, just some redneck who got lost maybe.”
  2856. “Thank you, Jack, for being so generous to me.”
  2857. >”No worries, Anon.” He looks away at a clock hanging on the wall, “It’s getting pretty late. I think some sleep will do you good. Be right back…” He leaves you on the couch and exits the room.
  2858. Replies to this post:
  2859. >>4168130
  2860. >>
  2861.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:47 No.4168130
  2862.  
  2863. >>4168125
  2864. >It’s dark out and you suddenly feel alone. What if another car comes by? Comes crashing though Jack’s windows and hits me. This world is a scary place, not at all like Equestria.
  2865. >Jack returns with a blue blanket. “Here Anon, you can use this.”
  2866. >He gives you the blanket and you hold it in your mouth, you don’t feel like using magic after that episode. The idea of you sleeping in the living room alone occurs to you. It frightens you. Even though it makes you feel like a weak child, you don’t want to sleep alone.
  2867. “Jack…Can I sleep in your room?”
  2868. >He gives a hearty grin, “Of course, Anon. Come on”
  2869. >You follow Jack into his room, holding the blanket in your mouth still, its end dragging on the floor beside you.
  2870. >You enter his room. There is a desk beside a bookshelf. On the desk, you see what looks like another TV but there is a panel with rows of buttons in front of it. Under the desk, a black rectangle with flashing lights alongside its front. There is also a bed on their side of the wall, a wide bed that was made for two.
  2871. >You suddenly wonder if Jack is in a relationship or not. You don’t understand why he would need a two-person bed if he was single.
  2872. >Then, like the silly pony you are you play the idea of you both in a relationship. Another one of your silly fantasies, you’re pretty sure this is already awkward enough for him as it is.
  2873. >Then, Jack removes his shirt and tosses it on the floor. You find yourself eyeing his body. Your little cartoon never did go into detail on a human’s body; it was a little fillies show after all, so as far as you can tell, he looks pretty normal for a human.
  2874. Replies to this post:
  2875. >>4168139
  2876. >>
  2877.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:48 No.4168139
  2878.  
  2879. >>4168130
  2880. >Jack slips under his blankets and rest his head against the pillow. He lifts a glowing clock that was sitting on an end table beside his bed and examines it. It is pretty late now…
  2881. >You hop on the bed beside him, pulling your blanket over the edge and tossing it above yourself. It lands on your face and you have to walk round in a circle before you finally slip out from under the cover. You watch Jack with a grin on your face.
  2882. >”Sweet dreams, Anon.” Jack says to you with a calm smile.
  2883. “Good night, Jack…”
  2884. >The human flicks off the lamp beside his bed and the room is plunged into total darkness.
  2885. >Despite being tired, you can’t seem to fall asleep. You feel anxious about your situation; still know your forgetting something, other than your name and how you got here. It’s like you’ve misplaced whatever it is you’ve lost. You don’t know what to do next.
  2886. >You sit on your blanket, thinking about your options for what feels like hours. You try to close your eyes and sleep but you just can’t relax... You wonder if Jack can give a hint or something.
  2887. “Jack?” You ask but you receive a light snore in return. He’s already asleep. Darn it all. What to do...
  2888. >A minute passes and suddenly, you realize you’re in bed with a human. No, it’s not in “that way” but still…
  2889. Replies to this post:
  2890. >>4168145
  2891. >>
  2892.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:49 No.4168145
  2893.  
  2894. File: 1346071763387.png-(2.04 MB, 1600x1000, 1334293036040.png)
  2895.  
  2896. >>4168139
  2897. >You carefully step closer to him, you want to cuddle him but you’re not sure if it would be a good idea. Face it, it’s something you’ve always wanted to do but now that you can, you feel a little stage fright setting in.
  2898. >What if he gets mad or thinks you’re some kind of creep? Then again, he might understand, maybe he would find it adorable. You just don’t know.
  2899. >You decide however, to just go for it.
  2900. >Oh so gently, you lean over him and extend a hoof across his abdomen. Then you place the side of your head against the side of his chest, under his arm. With your ear against him, you hear a strange sound.
  2901. >’thump’ ‘thump’ ‘thump’.
  2902. >You can hear his heartbeat. It’s an intriguing thing; you want to keep listening to it for the rest of the night.
  2903. >You lay behind Jack, letting your head rest on his side and hug him close. Hopefully, he’ll think you just happened to move this way in your sleep and won’t get mad.
  2904. >’thump’ ‘thump’ ‘thump’.
  2905. >Counting each heartbeat in your head, you close your eyes. At about 74, you slip into unconsciousness…
  2906. > [Save Your Progress y/n]
  2907. >y
  2908. > [End Chapter]
  2909. Replies to this post:
  2910. >>4168188 >>4169412 >>4193028
  2911. >>
  2912.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)08:57 No.4168188
  2913.  
  2914. >>4168145
  2915. Yes that's it. Let me know what you think, I love criticism,
  2916.  
  2917. OP, if this becomes a regular thing, you should set up a list of contributors, their pastebins, like how AiE does
  2918. Replies to this post:
  2919. >>4168274 >>4168498
  2920. >>
  2921.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)09:14 No.4168274
  2922.  
  2923. File: 1346073258524.gif-(540 KB, 400x300, SlowClap2.gif)
  2924.  
  2925. >>4168188
  2926. You amazing bastard.
  2927.  
  2928. Moar.
  2929. Replies to this post:
  2930. >>4168315 >>4168388
  2931. >>
  2932.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)09:21 No.4168315
  2933.  
  2934. >>4168274
  2935. You liked it? If you want to read more of my things, this is my pastebin: http://pastebin.com/u/Blazang
  2936.  
  2937. I did write a second chapter of this but it's terrible, I think. Bad attempt at feels.Also, I think going with a continuous is probably the wrong approach to it. If I decid to write with story again, I'm gonna try something different
  2938. >>
  2939.  Durriken !DurrynNlSA  08/27/12(Mon)09:33 No.4168388
  2940.  
  2941. >>4168274
  2942.  
  2943. I concur heavily...seriously.
  2944. Replies to this post:
  2945. >>4168435
  2946. >>
  2947.  Anon In Earth Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)09:40 No.4168435
  2948.  
  2949. File: 1346074841996.gif-(2.36 MB, 500x295, 1343934764935.gif)
  2950.  
  2951. >>4168388
  2952. Thanks Durry
  2953. You know, I'm writing something for Dark Equestria that'll involve the best pony in a way
  2954. Replies to this post:
  2955. >>4168473
  2956. >>
  2957.  Ponygon !Gi8l6ezzXk  08/27/12(Mon)09:45 No.4168473
  2958.  
  2959. >>4168435
  2960. Ooohhh! you've caught my attention
  2961. Replies to this post:
  2962. >>4168516
  2963. >>
  2964.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)09:47 No.4168498
  2965.  
  2966. >>4168188
  2967. Well, I like it. It's good enough at least that I think I'll keep reading (assuming you keep writing). I'll be frank; I don't like your writing so much that I'm going to spend time browsing your pastebin, but I'm already burning more time than I'd like to admit on one of the other pony fic threads, so you've got to factor that in to things. Keep up the good work, anyway.
  2968. Replies to this post:
  2969. >>4168516
  2970. >>
  2971.  Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)09:51 No.4168516
  2972.  
  2973. File: 1346075460314.png-(189 KB, 519x564, 167158 - applejack applet(...).png)
  2974.  
  2975. >>4168473
  2976. Don't get your hopes too high, she's not the main character but she is an important side character for this fic
  2977.  
  2978. What role does she play?
  2979. >pic related
  2980.  
  2981. >>4168498
  2982. Writing in second person does feel awkward for me, got any tips on how I can improve with that?
  2983.  
  2984. One thing I'm looking forward to with this dark equestria is that in the greentext style, more like an actual story, feels nice to write a proper fic again
  2985. Replies to this post:
  2986. >>4168524 >>4168855
  2987. >>
  2988.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)09:52 No.4168522
  2989.  
  2990. So this is like pony on earth thing? I highly recommend reading Anthropology if you're into that kind of stuff. It's on fimfiction and it's quite good.
  2991. Replies to this post:
  2992. >>4168855
  2993. >>
  2994.  Blazang !PQ27teK/J6  08/27/12(Mon)09:52 No.4168524
  2995.  
  2996. >>4168516
  2997. >that it's NOT the greentext style
  2998. My bed is looking real nice right now
  2999. >>
  3000.  Mr. Blue  08/27/12(Mon)10:34 No.4168855
  3001.  
  3002. >>4168522
  3003. I've got a long list of recommended fics on fimfiction with the 'human' tag. Anthropology is nice but overrated. Not the best written thing out there. There is a lack of PiE type fics worth reading though, except of course for the MLD types and TCB atrocities and parodies. That's why I hope this takes off.
  3004.  
  3005. >>4168516
  3006. I'm bad at greentext. This is the longest thing I've written using it.
  3007. Replies to this post:
  3008. >>4168892
  3009. >>
  3010.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)10:39 No.4168892
  3011.  
  3012. >>4168855
  3013. >implying MLD type fics are worth reading
  3014.  
  3015. By the way, Colourburst seems to be awake over in the drawthread. Might wanna go check that out. I've said words about the PiE thread and Pillowcase, but you could probably say things better.
  3016. Replies to this post:
  3017. >>4168945
  3018. >>
  3019.  Mr. Blue  08/27/12(Mon)10:46 No.4168945
  3020.  
  3021. >>4168892
  3022. I implied nothing! I was listing that crap as a reason why this thread should exist.
  3023.  
  3024. Well... There is one fic like those that's alright. Poor grammar, needs proofreading and faster updates, but it's a better story with some good feels.
  3025. Replies to this post:
  3026. >>4169000
  3027. >>
  3028.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)10:51 No.4169000
  3029.  
  3030. >>4168945
  3031. Well, actually, you did.
  3032. >There is a lack of PiE type fics worth reading though, except of course for the MLD types and TCB atrocities and parodies.
  3033.  
  3034. Breaking the sentence down:
  3035.  
  3036. There is a lack of PiE type fics worth reading.
  3037. There is an exception to this statement; this implies that there are PiE type fics worth reading.
  3038. MLD-type fics and TCB atrocities and parodies are the exceptions.
  3039.  
  3040. This implies that there are PiE type fics worth reading, and MLD type fics are among them.
  3041. Replies to this post:
  3042. >>4169070
  3043. >>
  3044.  Mr. blue  08/27/12(Mon)11:01 No.4169070
  3045.  
  3046. File: 1346079714352.jpg-(76 KB, 865x971, 131930784172.jpg)
  3047.  
  3048. >>4169000
  3049. You win this time tripsanon... but I'll proofread more so you won't get another shot at me! I'll be watching in case you're the next one to trips
  3050. Replies to this post:
  3051. >>4224483
  3052. >>
  3053.  Sneaky !9hxdci9Eg.  08/27/12(Mon)11:42 No.4169412
  3054.  
  3055. >>4168145
  3056. Thats good stuff.
  3057. Watch out though, any romance can easily turn cliché
  3058. like mine usually do ;_;
  3059. >>
  3060.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)11:43 No.4169421
  3061.  
  3062. >>4162580
  3063. This nigga.
  3064. This nigga right here.
  3065. >>
  3066.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)12:05 No.4169550
  3067.  
  3068. Mr Blue, please write moar! I need to hear more about Pillow's adventures in Chicago, and her friend's icky human clotfriend.
  3069. >>
  3070.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)14:05 No.4170648
  3071.  
  3072. Bump.
  3073. >>
  3074.  MrSilver  08/27/12(Mon)16:45 No.4172738
  3075.  
  3076. 2-Hour and 40-minute since last bump bump.
  3077. >>
  3078.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)19:29 No.4175769
  3079.  
  3080. Think another bump is in order.
  3081. Replies to this post:
  3082. >>4176591
  3083. >>
  3084.  MrSilver  08/27/12(Mon)20:05 No.4176591
  3085.  
  3086. >>4175769
  3087. Smart.
  3088. >>
  3089.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)21:08 No.4177906
  3090.  
  3091. File: 1346116082561.gif-(13 KB, 633x758, 133713129182.gif)
  3092.  
  3093. I need more pillowcase.
  3094.  
  3095. >Her face when she see pony and horses on earth.
  3096. Replies to this post:
  3097. >>4178239
  3098. >>
  3099.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)21:22 No.4178239
  3100.  
  3101. File: 1346116971788.jpg-(9 KB, 200x240, 1301191522002.jpg)
  3102.  
  3103. >>4177906
  3104. Pillow Case speculation time
  3105.  
  3106. >mfw for eventual and inevitable spilling of spaghetti by PC at school or public places.
  3107. >mfw for eventual and inevitable harassment from men.
  3108. >mfw for eventual and inevitable out of place pony in school.
  3109. >mfw for eventual and inevitable bullying at school.
  3110.  
  3111. Why am I having all these feels man, I mean what the fuck?
  3112. Replies to this post:
  3113. >>4178314 >>4178320
  3114. >>
  3115.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)21:26 No.4178314
  3116.  
  3117. >>4178239
  3118. Because you likely experienced it yourself and you can't bare to watch another person go through the same thing. Even if it is a fictional pony.
  3119. >>
  3120.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)21:26 No.4178320
  3121.  
  3122. File: 1346117211094.gif-(1.19 MB, 250x200, 1342149014882.gif)
  3123.  
  3124. >>4178239
  3125. >tfw she gets a human bf too
  3126. Replies to this post:
  3127. >>4178355
  3128. >>
  3129.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)21:29 No.4178355
  3130.  
  3131. >>4178320
  3132. >yfw she's gay
  3133. >>
  3134.  Anonymous  08/27/12(Mon)23:31 No.4181220
  3135.  
  3136. Come on, writers!
  3137. Replies to this post:
  3138. >>4182328
  3139. >>
  3140.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)00:24 No.4182328
  3141.  
  3142. >>4181220
  3143.  
  3144. This is remind of many day we wait for update to story of Anon in place of Equestria. Have patience comrade, writings will come.
  3145. Replies to this post:
  3146. >>4184251
  3147. >>
  3148.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)01:05 No.4183134
  3149.  
  3150. File: 1346130324049.jpg-(23 KB, 440x274, BuffaloNickels.jpg)
  3151.  
  3152. Post nickels till writers come back!
  3153. >>
  3154.  Wanders-Far  08/28/12(Tue)01:44 No.4183916
  3155.  
  3156. Pillow Case is amazing.
  3157.  
  3158. I love this thread.
  3159. >>
  3160.  Globebutt Writer  08/28/12(Tue)02:06 No.4184251
  3161.  
  3162. >>4182328
  3163. I have faith. I know the writers will arrive!
  3164. But it doesn't make the waiting any easier.
  3165. Not in this thread or the one I should be writing for.
  3166. >>
  3167.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)02:11 No.4184315
  3168.  
  3169. File: 1346134260150.gif-(69 KB, 449x491, 1338177533554.gif)
  3170.  
  3171. great thread ill read like every afternoon while smoking a cigar. its just great.
  3172.  
  3173. > keep calm and pony write on
  3174. >>
  3175.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)02:39 No.4184706
  3176.  
  3177. pancake and mr.blue finish the stories please
  3178. >>
  3179.  . LeStrange  08/28/12(Tue)03:49 No.4185509
  3180.  
  3181. File: 1346140141071.jpg-(137 KB, 964x723, 11241.jpg)
  3182.  
  3183. pancake pls
  3184. pancake
  3185. pls
  3186. >>
  3187.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)03:51 No.4185534
  3188.  
  3189. File: 1346140303243.jpg-(55 KB, 300x400, dafuq is this shit.jpg)
  3190.  
  3191. >mfw this thread
  3192. >>
  3193.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)07:49 No.4187098
  3194.  
  3195. 4 hours? Yea, no. BUMP!
  3196. >>
  3197.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)07:58 No.4187164
  3198.  
  3199. >thinking about the title
  3200. >anon in equestra
  3201. >pony in earth
  3202. OOOOOOOOOH
  3203. >>
  3204.  Utukku  08/28/12(Tue)07:59 No.4187173
  3205.  
  3206. could i join you? i want to drawfag. because it seems like there's none here.
  3207. plus i'm kind of a writefag myself, I've just never posted anything. probably never will.
  3208. Replies to this post:
  3209. >>4188434
  3210. >>
  3211.  Pancakes  08/28/12(Tue)08:26 No.4187395
  3212.  
  3213. >>4166152
  3214. > "Not so fast, Pinkie. These tools aren't exactly light."
  3215. "Hurry up!" cries the pink pony. "This way! This way!"
  3216. > Where does all her energy come from, anyway?
  3217. > She hops off and disappears into a dark room at the end of the hallway.
  3218. > Huh? Why didn't she turn on the light?
  3219. "Come inside! It's in here!"
  3220. > Pinkie's voice comes from inside the dark room.
  3221. > She sounds as cheerful as ever.
  3222. > But why doesn't that make me feel better?
  3223. > "Pinkie? Could you turn on the lights in there?"
  3224. "..."
  3225. > Suddenly, silence. I wait a little longer.
  3226. > But still no answer.
  3227. > Something doesn't feel right.
  3228. > "Hey, Pinkie! If this is a joke, it isn't funny!"
  3229. "..."
  3230. > Not good. I feel like I'm walking right into a trap.
  3231. > And if I had any sense left in me, I had better get help.
  3232. > But I can't just leave. Not while Pinkie is still in there.
  3233. > "Pinkie Pie? Are you in there?"
  3234. "..."
  3235. > Alright. Guess it's time to do something really stupid.
  3236. > I slowly put down my toolbox and pull out my wrench.
  3237. > Not exactly a weapon, but it'll have to do for now.
  3238. > Then, while holding it behind my back, I slowly step into the room.
  3239. Replies to this post:
  3240. >>4188111
  3241. >>
  3242.  Pancakes  08/28/12(Tue)10:03 No.4188111
  3243.  
  3244. File: 1346162599099.jpg-(58 KB, 876x912, 15.jpg)
  3245.  
  3246. >>4187395
  3247. > The moment I step inside, everything turns white.
  3248. > I shield my eyes with my free hand.
  3249. > Time seems to slow down.
  3250. > And then.
  3251. "SURPRISE!"
  3252. > ... wait, what? I blink twice, confused.
  3253. > All of the pony residents are smiling at me.
  3254. > They are wearing party hats, and the room is decorated with streamers.
  3255. > Pinkie Pie speaks first.
  3256. "Wasn't that the BEST surprise, ever? Huh? Huh?"
  3257. "Then why ain't he smilin?" says Applejack.
  3258. "And why is he carrying that wrench?" Twilight adds.
  3259. "I have no idea," replies Fluttershy. "Do you think that this is one of those strange human dances?"
  3260. "Well, I certainly hope not," says Rarity. "That pose hasn't a shred of elegance."
  3261. "Could definitely be a lot cooler," Rainbow adds.
  3262. > I pause for a moment to take in the surroundings.
  3263. > Balloons. Cake. Punch. Confetti. Sweets.
  3264. > Was this...
  3265. > "...a surprise party?" I whisper.
  3266. "Of course!" cries Pinkie Pie. "Why else would I distract you all afternoon with errands and maintenance work that could easily be put off for tomorrow or even next week?"
  3267. > Very slowly, I start laughing at myself.
  3268. > Why else, indeed?
  3269. Replies to this post:
  3270. >>4188326 >>4189234
  3271. >>
  3272.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)10:25 No.4188326
  3273.  
  3274. File: 1346163928493.gif-(90 KB, 146x93, 132346121077.gif)
  3275.  
  3276. >>4188111
  3277. >Pancakes updated.
  3278. HELL YEAH
  3279. >>
  3280.  Breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/28/12(Tue)10:35 No.4188434
  3281.  
  3282. File: 1346164509050.png-(99 KB, 464x361, 1343669464838.png)
  3283.  
  3284. >>4187173
  3285. Please do! Draws would be cool.
  3286.  
  3287. (also nobody get on my case for not writan, I was sick)
  3288. Replies to this post:
  3289. >>4188709
  3290. >>
  3291.  Utukku  08/28/12(Tue)11:02 No.4188709
  3292.  
  3293. >>4188434
  3294. awesome! one problem. i have no idea where to start.
  3295. Replies to this post:
  3296. >>4189043
  3297. >>
  3298.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)11:40 No.4189043
  3299.  
  3300. File: 1346168431842.jpg-(79 KB, 458x210, shut the fuck up faggot a(...).jpg)
  3301.  
  3302. >>4188709
  3303. Replies to this post:
  3304. >>4189070 >>4189073
  3305. >>
  3306.  Utukku  08/28/12(Tue)11:43 No.4189070
  3307.  
  3308. File: 1346168621814.png-(87 KB, 180x280, tumblr_m77rvacQOn1qc4itio4_250.png)
  3309.  
  3310. >>4189043
  3311. >>
  3312.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)11:44 No.4189073
  3313.  
  3314. >>4189043
  3315. Write something about Pillow Case and then draw her. She's sort of the thread mascot and the original idea was for her to be in most of the stories, sort of like all the AiE fics having an Anon in them but not so strict.
  3316. Replies to this post:
  3317. >>4189105
  3318. >>
  3319.  Utukku  08/28/12(Tue)11:48 No.4189105
  3320.  
  3321. >>4189073
  3322. oh, i was planning on drawing for other stories, but that'll be fine too.
  3323. Replies to this post:
  3324. >>4189139
  3325. >>
  3326.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)11:52 No.4189139
  3327.  
  3328. >>4189105
  3329. Draw what you like. Whoever you draw it for would be happy for it.
  3330. >>
  3331.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)11:56 No.4189179
  3332.  
  3333. Waiting for Mr Blue. Need moar Pillow Case!
  3334. >>
  3335.  Ponyville Apartments: One Small Step for Marekind Pancakes  08/28/12(Tue)12:01 No.4189234
  3336.  
  3337. File: 1346169672180.gif-(189 KB, 426x389, 16.gif)
  3338.  
  3339. And as I finish this part, I finally put in the series and chapter titles.
  3340.  
  3341. >>4188111
  3342. "So, did you enjoy the party?" asks Twilight.
  3343. > "Of course I did. It's been a while since I've been to a party like that."
  3344. "You didn't talk much."
  3345. > "I didn't think I had to."
  3346. "I see."
  3347. > Then, we arrive at the first floor.
  3348. "My room is just right over there, so good night."
  3349. > "..."
  3350. > "Hey, Twilight."
  3351. "Eh?"
  3352. > "I think I might really enjoy working here."
  3353. "Really?"
  3354. > "Really. Thanks for everything."
  3355.  
  3356. > Back in her room, Twilight takes a quill and begins to write.
  3357. "Dear Princess Celestia,"
  3358. "Today, we prepared a welcome party for our guide here in the human world."
  3359. "In the future, he will be teaching us a number of new things."
  3360. "But I do hope that he can learn something from us, as well."
  3361. "Since today, I discovered something very important:"
  3362. "Humans and ponies aren't so different, after all."
  3363. "- Your Faithful Student, Twilight Sparkle"
  3364. Replies to this post:
  3365. >>4189383 >>4189385 >>4223718
  3366. >>
  3367.  Pancakes  08/28/12(Tue)12:16 No.4189383
  3368.  
  3369. >>4189234
  3370. Moving forward, I'm planning to write a series of character-driven, slice-of-life short stories with this setting. I already have some ideas, but let me know which ponies you'd like me to focus on first.
  3371.  
  3372. tl;dr Choose 1-2 ponies for next chapter
  3373. Replies to this post:
  3374. >>4202934 >>4203245 >>4214732
  3375. >>
  3376.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)12:16 No.4189385
  3377.  
  3378. File: 1346170580259.gif-(73 KB, 323x272, 1345841439946.gif)
  3379.  
  3380. >>4189234
  3381. If you put a lesson at the end of each chapter I will love you forever.
  3382. >>
  3383.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)14:56 No.4191245
  3384.  
  3385. Page five bump after two and three-quarters hours.
  3386. >>
  3387.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)17:03 No.4193028
  3388.  
  3389. File: 1346187787885.jpg-(155 KB, 670x694, 1338806402575.jpg)
  3390.  
  3391. >>4168145
  3392. >This entire post.
  3393. Rev up them feels. Well done.
  3394. I'm gonna need more cheap whisky.
  3395. >>
  3396.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)17:44 No.4193656
  3397.  
  3398. File: 1346190299931.jpg-(62 KB, 481x278, mfw 32.jpg)
  3399.  
  3400. Mr. Blue
  3401. Pancake
  3402.  
  3403. You guys.
  3404. >>
  3405.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)19:32 No.4195370
  3406.  
  3407. Twoish hour bump time.
  3408. >>
  3409.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)21:08 No.4197185
  3410.  
  3411. Bump
  3412. >>
  3413.  Anonymous  08/28/12(Tue)21:55 No.4198227
  3414.  
  3415. As much as I don't want to get this thread closer to the post limit with something other than content, just wanted to say: Blazang, keep it up. Read part 2 on your Pastebin and seeing more would be great.
  3416. >>
  3417.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)00:17 No.4201208
  3418.  
  3419. Nothing tonight, writers?
  3420. Replies to this post:
  3421. >>4202310 >>4202410
  3422. >>
  3423.  Mr. Blue  08/29/12(Wed)01:19 No.4202310
  3424.  
  3425. >>4201208
  3426. Just a busy day on a busy week. I'll post something tomorrow if I can.
  3427.  
  3428. Anyone else want to start writing 'pillow stories' of some kind? I'd like to see her used more. There's no rules for it, just have her in earth somehow and give her something to wear.
  3429. Replies to this post:
  3430. >>4202370 >>4228922
  3431. >>
  3432.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)01:22 No.4202370
  3433.  
  3434. File: 1346217753076.png-(387 KB, 453x695, 1341481978468.png)
  3435.  
  3436. >>4202310
  3437. Oh god. This just gave me the greatest idea. I'll try my hand at writing something in the morning if I see the thread again and we'll see where it goes. I'll make sure to use Pillow Case.
  3438. >>
  3439.  Breakbeat !!E9eoAr45C/j  08/29/12(Wed)01:25 No.4202410
  3440.  
  3441. >>4201208
  3442. I got drunk. Sorry! I really do intend to continue the adventures of my lil' pony, and more stories besides.
  3443.  
  3444. Any general thoughts on what people would like to see? More action? more character interaction? more CLAWP?
  3445. Replies to this post:
  3446. >>4202460
  3447. >>
  3448.  AtomXai !6vE..m2XaM  08/29/12(Wed)01:25 No.4202414
  3449.  
  3450. I don't have anything close to finished but i was playing with a story idea in my head. I haven't really read much Anon In Equestria so I wasn't certain if the idea fits there or here better.
  3451.  
  3452. Something about a diplomat sent to equestria to try and run damage control after 'first contact' goes very poorly.
  3453. Reason i was considering here is that I was planning to draw upon this canon that our more modern tech doesn't work properly in equestria as a starting point for the conflict.
  3454. Replies to this post:
  3455. >>4202934
  3456. >>
  3457.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)01:27 No.4202460
  3458.  
  3459. >>4202410
  3460. I'm from a different fiction thread; I don't think you'd write quite what I want to read if I asked for it, anyway.
  3461. Just write about some cute pones. They're always nice.
  3462. >>
  3463.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)01:53 No.4202853
  3464.  
  3465. Come on writers!
  3466.  
  3467. Pancakes!
  3468. Mr. Blue!
  3469. Replies to this post:
  3470. >>4202934
  3471. >>
  3472.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)01:57 No.4202934
  3473.  
  3474. >>4202414
  3475. If the human goes to Equestria, AiE.
  3476. If the pony goes to earth, PiE.
  3477. That simple.
  3478.  
  3479. >>4202853
  3480. Blue already said he's got nothing tonight. Pancakes asked you all a question, and you haven't answered it yet. >>4189383
  3481. Can't all be winners, anyway.
  3482.  
  3483. And for the love of tiny pastel horses, wait a while longer before bumping if you don't have anything good to post!
  3484. >>
  3485.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)02:35 No.4203245
  3486.  
  3487. >>4189383
  3488. Needs more culture shock they're all just kind of taking being on earth and around human a little too well in stride, as far as where you go next I have no real opinion that would help.
  3489. >>
  3490.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)03:08 No.4203597
  3491.  
  3492. Bumping before bed.
  3493.  
  3494. Thanks to all the writers, your stuff has been a lot of fun so far. Especially Blazang. That second chapter is fine except for the dishes scene dragging on.
  3495.  
  3496. Looking forward to more of it!
  3497. >>
  3498.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)04:25 No.4204611
  3499.  
  3500. Mr. Blue and pancakes
  3501. If you have a pastebin, please post it.
  3502. on that note, i may have already missed it.
  3503. Replies to this post:
  3504. >>4206283
  3505. >>
  3506.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)05:50 No.4205247
  3507.  
  3508. I want to cum inside Pillow Case
  3509. Replies to this post:
  3510. >>4206789
  3511. >>
  3512.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)05:59 No.4205298
  3513.  
  3514. I like to imaging myself with Pillow Case. Her little wings are outstretched as far as they can go, and her mouth is closed around my pillow. Her moans are barely heard through it. I cum inside her, with Strawberry watching.
  3515. Then I realize she ruined my pillow. I beat the shit out of her, throwing her out my window."THAT PILLOW WAS 20 BUCKS YOU LITTLE BITCH!"
  3516. >>
  3517.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)08:35 No.4206283
  3518.  
  3519. >>4204611
  3520. second this.
  3521. >>
  3522.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)09:30 No.4206660
  3523.  
  3524. clear...
  3525.  
  3526. *bump*
  3527. >>
  3528.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)09:50 No.4206789
  3529.  
  3530. >>4205247
  3531. That's all you'll ever have.
  3532. >>
  3533.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)09:53 No.4206811
  3534.  
  3535. Mr Blue and Pancake are great, but let's not forget Blazang. I think it's a shame he hasn't written any more Anon In Earth.
  3536. >>
  3537.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)13:54 No.4209132
  3538.  
  3539. Bump time again.
  3540. >>
  3541.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)17:01 No.4211533
  3542.  
  3543. Hope the people who said they were gonna write are just still off at school or work.
  3544. >>
  3545.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/29/12(Wed)17:55 No.4212328
  3546.  
  3547. File: 1346277310882.png-(56 KB, 184x184, raritychips.png)
  3548.  
  3549. This is a Pillow Case story. Depending on how much you guys like it or how much you hate it I'll write more.
  3550.  
  3551. >"And stay out! You stupid horse!"
  3552. >You land on the stoney ground, skidding slightly before coming to a harsh stop against the back alley wall.
  3553. >You open your eyes just in time for your saddle bags to smack against your face, spilling their contents all over the ground.
  3554. >"You need to learn to keep your hooves and those saucers you call eyes to yourself, freak!"
  3555. >The door slams loudly, cats and dogs bark in response.
  3556. >That was Joe, he manages the Wal-mart Super Center here in Detroit.
  3557. >And you were just ejected from his place of business for peeking in the changing rooms
  3558. >For the third time this week.
  3559.  
  3560. 1/x
  3561. Replies to this post:
  3562. >>4212344 >>4212468
  3563. >>
  3564.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/29/12(Wed)17:56 No.4212344
  3565.  
  3566. >>4212328
  3567. >You were originally just there for groceries.
  3568. >You can't help yourself! Stupid sexy apes.
  3569. >The first time you saw them you thought they were the most disgusting things imaginable.
  3570. >But the more time you spent on Earth, the more they grew on you.
  3571. >Maybe it had something to do with your love of clothes, and their need for them.
  3572. >...
  3573. >Who are you kidding? You're a huge pervert.
  3574. >You sigh to yourself, flapping your wings and adjusting back onto your hooves so you can gather your items.
  3575. >You better get out of here and back to your shitty apartment before it gets dark, the streets of Detroit aren't exactly the best places to be at night.
  3576. >Not that your apartment is really any better.
  3577. >Just as you step out of the alley, a raindrop lands on your head.
  3578.  
  3579. 2/x
  3580. Replies to this post:
  3581. >>4212373 >>4212468
  3582. >>
  3583.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/29/12(Wed)17:57 No.4212373
  3584.  
  3585. >>4212344
  3586. >You got about maybe ten feet down the street before it started pouring.
  3587. >You've broken into a sprint, hopefully you can get home before you catch a cold.
  3588. >Or even worse! Your clothes might get ruined!
  3589. >You don't even want to try flying. You've never really been good at it in the first place, and the rain will only make it more difficult.
  3590. >Earth is some weird, yet magical place. The weather changes on it's own! You don't need to do anything! It just happens!
  3591. >You wish it was like that back on Equestria.
  3592. >Oh Celestia, do you miss Equestria.
  3593. >Even if it isn't as cool as Earth.
  3594. >That reminds you of your parents.
  3595. >You hated your parents.
  3596. >Go to Earth they said, it will be fun they said.
  3597. >While the sights and the weather are refreshing, it's difficult when all of the jobs here you can do, the humans and other ponies can do better.
  3598.  
  3599. 3/x
  3600. Replies to this post:
  3601. >>4212390 >>4212468
  3602. >>
  3603.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/29/12(Wed)17:58 No.4212390
  3604.  
  3605. >>4212373
  3606. >Humans...
  3607. >Suddenly, you're jolted to the real world when you accidently boop your nose on the front door to the apartment complex.
  3608. >You notice you've been drooling a little, and quickly wipe it away.
  3609. >Using your wings, you flip open your saddlebags, fishing inside for your keys and with them the sweet, sweet relief from this cold rain.
  3610. >Oh no...
  3611. "Where are they!? Where are my keys!?"
  3612. >You probably lost them when that stupid human hit you in the face with your bag.
  3613. >You can't hold it in anymore, the anger swells and builds inside you until...
  3614. "BUUUUUUCK!"
  3615.  
  3616. 4/x
  3617. Replies to this post:
  3618. >>4212431 >>4212468
  3619. >>
  3620.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/29/12(Wed)18:00 No.4212431
  3621.  
  3622. >>4212390
  3623. >"Hahahahah!"
  3624. >You snap around, coming face to face with your neighbor, John. He's holding an umbrella over his head.
  3625. >He's always seemed like a cool guy, but you've never really spoken to him before. You only know his name because it's on his door, and he only knows yours because it's on yours.
  3626. "What's so funny!?"
  3627. >"N-nothing, i-it's just...Buck! Ahahaha!"
  3628. >He continues to laugh harder.
  3629. "Why don't you just shut it? Huh?"
  3630. >"Sorry, Pillow. I didn't mean to offend you."
  3631. >He quits laughing, and his face quickly shifts to a more serious one.
  3632. >You're about to offer him some smart-ass remark, but stop when he shares his umbrella with you.
  3633. "Thanks..."
  3634. >"No problem. Lost your keys?"
  3635. "Yeah.."
  3636. >"That's fine. I can let you in."
  3637. >He moves ahead of you, unlocking the door.
  3638. >That's a pretty nice flank he has there...
  3639. >The door creaks open, and you shake your head to attention.
  3640.  
  3641. 5/x
  3642. Replies to this post:
  3643. >>4212441 >>4212468
  3644. >>
  3645.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/29/12(Wed)18:01 No.4212441
  3646.  
  3647. >>4212431
  3648. >Once you're inside, you follow John upstairs and to your respective doors.
  3649. >"Here we are. You stay safe, okay?"
  3650. "Yeah, yea-"
  3651. >You cut yourself short when you realize you can't get into your actual apartment without your own keys.
  3652. "Ugh...this is bullspit."
  3653. >"Can't get in? Do you not have a spare key?"
  3654. "They give you spare keys?!"
  3655. >"The Landlord should've given you a pair when you moved in."
  3656. >Screw these stupid humans and their racism!
  3657. >"You want to come inside my place and dry off?"
  3658. >At least John is nice.
  3659. "I'd like that..."
  3660.  
  3661. 6/6
  3662. Replies to this post:
  3663. >>4212468
  3664. >>
  3665.  Mortimer Mouse  08/29/12(Wed)18:02 No.4212468
  3666.  
  3667. File: 1346277753143.gif-(1.31 MB, 448x405, 1346004396941.gif)
  3668.  
  3669. >>4212328
  3670. >>4212344
  3671. >>4212373
  3672. >>4212390
  3673. >>4212431
  3674. >>4212441
  3675.  
  3676. That's it for now.
  3677.  
  3678. Feedback, anyone?
  3679. Replies to this post:
  3680. >>4212625
  3681. >>
  3682.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)18:07 No.4212543
  3683.  
  3684. >>4212408
  3685. Wait, Pillow?
  3686. is it a thing to make every PiE named Pillow?
  3687. Replies to this post:
  3688. >>4212656
  3689. >>
  3690.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)18:11 No.4212625
  3691.  
  3692. >>4212468
  3693. This better not turn into rape, but that's just mine personal preference. I like it so far.
  3694. Replies to this post:
  3695. >>4212656
  3696. >>
  3697.  Mortimer Mouse  08/29/12(Wed)18:13 No.4212656
  3698.  
  3699. >>4212543
  3700. No. But he said he wanted some more Pillow Case stories. So I wrote one. The P stands for pony. So it doesn't have to be Pillow.
  3701.  
  3702. >>4212625
  3703. I can assure you it won't turn into rape.
  3704.  
  3705. At least not with John
  3706. >>
  3707.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)20:06 No.4214307
  3708.  
  3709. bump
  3710. >>
  3711.  Pancakes  08/29/12(Wed)20:35 No.4214732
  3712.  
  3713. >>4189383
  3714. No update for tonight, but I've managed to complete a rough outline for the next chapter. Entitled, "A Foal And Her Gems", it will be focused on Rarity. While she isn't my personal favorite, the question of the Equestria economy always bothered me.
  3715.  
  3716. Still deciding which other pony will join her on this little adventure (hint, hint).
  3717. Replies to this post:
  3718. >>4216566 >>4217372
  3719. >>
  3720.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)22:12 No.4216424
  3721.  
  3722. Bump
  3723. Bump
  3724. Sugar lump rump
  3725. >>
  3726.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)22:22 No.4216566
  3727.  
  3728. >>4214732
  3729.  
  3730. twilight sparkle
  3731. >>
  3732.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)23:06 No.4217372
  3733.  
  3734. >>4214732
  3735. Spike obviously.
  3736. >>
  3737.  Anonymous  08/29/12(Wed)23:19 No.4217650
  3738.  
  3739. Bump.
  3740. >>
  3741.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)00:06 No.4218616
  3742.  
  3743. File: 1346299597222.png-(82 KB, 500x500, 1341255353011.png)
  3744.  
  3745. One bump before I go to sleep. I'll write more tomorrow evening. Perhaps It'll be longer than the first one.
  3746. >>
  3747.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)05:04 No.4222793
  3748.  
  3749. 5-hour bump
  3750. >>
  3751.  Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems Pancakes  08/30/12(Thu)07:32 No.4223718
  3752.  
  3753. File: 1346326354732.jpg-(22 KB, 515x496, 17.jpg)
  3754.  
  3755. >>4189234
  3756. > "So, did you get everything on your list?"
  3757. "Let me check," says Twilight. "Yep! That about does it. Thanks for helping us out, Rarity!"
  3758. "Anytime, darling. I must say that these 'supermarkets' are amazing! I haven't seen such a comprehensive selection of goods since I last visited Canterlot."
  3759. > "That's great. Any trouble with the cashier, Twilight?"
  3760. "Well, not really," says Twilight. "I'm still not used to human currency. You have so many different types of paper bills and coins."
  3761. "But don't you think that the designs are simply exquisite?" says Rarity. "Just look at the detail!"
  3762. > "I suppose," I reply. "Guess I never really considered it before."
  3763. > Though I find it refreshing to watch such reactions to human money.
  3764. > So innocent and honest. Just sad that people get killed over it.
  3765. > I glance at my watch.
  3766. > "Looks like we have time to spare. Any place you two want to visit before we head back?"
  3767. "No thanks," says Twilight. "I'm fine for today. How about you, Rarity?"
  3768. "Well, there is one thing. Would it be alright if we take a look at some nearby shops?"
  3769. "I don't really mind, but..."
  3770. > Twilight turns to me. Eh? What did I think?
  3771. > For some reason, she looks rather worried.
  3772. > On the other hand, Rarity gives me this pleading look.
  3773. > Hmm, well...
  3774. > I do suppose that she has been a good girl today.
  3775. > A little reward wouldn't hurt.
  3776. > I smile at Rarity and nod.
  3777. > "We can probably pass by that boutique at the corner, if you like."
  3778. Replies to this post:
  3779. >>4224058
  3780. >>
  3781.  . LeStrange  08/30/12(Thu)07:58 No.4223844
  3782.  
  3783. File: 1346327916329.jpg-(188 KB, 873x921, I.jpg)
  3784.  
  3785. 5 in the morn and i come to this...
  3786. ohgawdthankyou!
  3787. >>
  3788.  Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems Pancakes  08/30/12(Thu)08:35 No.4224058
  3789.  
  3790. >>4223718
  3791. "Twilight, dear? Can you come in here and help me put this on?"
  3792. "Oh, Rarity! Can't you just alter the spell to mimic the dress?"
  3793. "Of course not. I need to see how this dress actually looks and feels. A mental design is just as complex as the real thing, you know."
  3794. "Ugh, fine. Let me see that..."
  3795. > I glance over curiously as Twilight enters the changing room.
  3796. > Come to think of it, I've never seen Twilight's human form.
  3797. > For some reason, I'm unaffected by the illusion spell the ponies use.
  3798. > But if the glances they were getting earlier were any indication,
  3799. > I'd say she's quite easy on the eye.
  3800. > Since Rarity wasn't the only one grabbing attention.
  3801. > Hmm, maybe I should take a quick look and-
  3802. > "..."
  3803. > Wait, what? What the hell? How did that even pop up?
  3804. > I quickly shake off the thought.
  3805. > There wouldn't be any point peeking on them.
  3806. > I can only see their human forms through Rarity's special mirror.
  3807. > And even if I could, don't forget.
  3808. > These girls are still ponies.
  3809. "Thanks a lot, Twilight. I think I'll wear this one on the way back. It is surprisingly comfortable, and I like its style."
  3810. "Uh, sure. I still don't see the point of it, since you had to alter the spell anyway."
  3811. "Dresses are meant to be worn, Twilight. Worn."
  3812. Replies to this post:
  3813. >>4224220
  3814. >>
  3815.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)08:59 No.4224206
  3816.  
  3817. >She likes cloth
  3818.  
  3819. Someone's going to have to tl;dr or explain what the fuck that means to me before I dive into this wall of fucking text
  3820. Replies to this post:
  3821. >>4224381 >>4224469
  3822. >>
  3823.  Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems Pancakes  08/30/12(Thu)09:00 No.4224220
  3824.  
  3825. >>4224058
  3826. > "Only three dresses? I don't get it. You tried out so many."
  3827. "It's the quality that matters," Rarity explains. "Not the quantity. Anyone can make a dress, but it takes talent to create 'Art'."
  3828. > Twilight nudges me from the side.
  3829. "Just nod and smile," she whispers. "Don't worry. I don't get it, either."
  3830. > As advised, I politely nod to Rarity in agreement.
  3831. "Miss?" interrupts the cashier. "Would you like me to wrap these for you?"
  3832. "Ah, yes please! But would you mind if I wore this one right now? It is positively lovely~"
  3833. "Sure, miss. Just let me deactivate the tag... like so."
  3834. "Thank you very much," says Rarity. "Now let me take care of the payment to your good establishment."
  3835. > The white pony opens her purse and glances inside.
  3836. > Her eyes open in surprise for a bit.
  3837. "Hmm. Well isn't this strange," she mutters.
  3838. > She starts rummaging through her bag more quickly.
  3839. > But still, nothing. She looks flustered.
  3840. > Twilight sighs and smiles politely at the cashier.
  3841. "Excuse us for a moment."
  3842. > She quickly pulls Rarity and I aside.
  3843. Replies to this post:
  3844. >>4224357
  3845. >>
  3846.  Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems Pancakes  08/30/12(Thu)09:24 No.4224357
  3847.  
  3848. File: 1346333044004.jpg-(19 KB, 410x410, 18.jpg)
  3849.  
  3850. >>4224220
  3851. "What do you mean you forgot to bring money!?" cries Twilight.
  3852. > Her voice causes a few bystanders to stare.
  3853. > Good thing the cashier didn't hear us.
  3854. > Well, either that or she is politely pretending not to hear.
  3855. "Oh, don't get your tail in a knot!" says Rarity. "As I said, I simply brought the wrong purse when we left this morning."
  3856. "Rarity! I only brought enough money for the groceries! How are we going to pay for the dresses?"
  3857. > I sigh loudly. My wallet didn't have much, either.
  3858. > But I was never the type to ignore a damsel in distress.
  3859. > "Take it easy, girls. I can pay-"
  3860. > Suddenly, Rarity covers my mouth with a hoof.
  3861. "Not another word," she says.
  3862. > "But..."
  3863. "I appreciate your chivalry, but a lady must always act gracefully."
  3864. "Are you sure, Rarity?" says Twilight. "How are you going to pay?"
  3865. "Oh, Twilight! You make it sound like this is going to be hard."
  3866. > Rarity starts walking back to the cashier.
  3867. "Apologies, but I seem to have forgotten my wallet."
  3868. "I see," replies the cashier. "Then, you'll be returning the dresses?"
  3869. "Oh, of course not!" says Rarity. "That would be quite rude and unbecoming of a lady."
  3870. > She turns to her purse and grabs something small and shiny.
  3871. "I'll be paying for the dresses with these, instead."
  3872. > My eyes widen in shock and awe. The whole shop goes silent.
  3873. > Rarity just dropped several diamonds and rubies into the cashier's hand.
  3874. Replies to this post:
  3875. >>4224381 >>4224636 >>4231817 >>4254139
  3876. >>
  3877.  Pancakes  08/30/12(Thu)09:28 No.4224381
  3878.  
  3879. >>4224357
  3880. Ending here for now. Need to get some work done today.
  3881.  
  3882. >>4224206
  3883. PiE = Ponies in Earth
  3884. Essentially the reverse concept of Anon in Equestria, this thread houses stories about various ponies who find themselves on Earth.
  3885. Replies to this post:
  3886. >>4224449
  3887. >>
  3888.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)09:49 No.4224449
  3889.  
  3890. >>4224381
  3891. YES I FIGURED THAT ONE OUT.
  3892. But
  3893. >She likes cloth
  3894. What the fuck?
  3895. Replies to this post:
  3896. >>4224457
  3897. >>
  3898.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)09:51 No.4224457
  3899.  
  3900. File: 1346334694072.jpg-(54 KB, 400x458, 1345902120562.jpg)
  3901.  
  3902. >>4224449
  3903. She likes to wear clothes. What do you not understand about it?
  3904. >>
  3905.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)09:53 No.4224469
  3906.  
  3907. >>4224206
  3908. At this point, it just means "Mr. Blue Didn't Spend Long Proofreading And Made A Silly TItle". Still a damn good story.
  3909. >>
  3910.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)09:55 No.4224483
  3911.  
  3912. >>4169070
  3913. I read all your posts and seriously ... I'm not a big fan of fanfic pony related but you gave me a good reason to be interested by it ! I mean the story is so cute...
  3914. >>
  3915.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)10:19 No.4224636
  3916.  
  3917. >>4224357
  3918. My God. That was amazing.
  3919. >>
  3920.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)12:24 No.4225838
  3921.  
  3922. File: 1346343889469.jpg-(44 KB, 500x346, 1345902203673.jpg)
  3923.  
  3924. Bumping with Part 2.
  3925.  
  3926. >As you step into John's apartment, you notice that the weather has only gotten worse.
  3927. >And that his apartment is A LOT better than yours. Much cleaner and more updated appliances.
  3928. >"Pretty nasty out there, huh? You're lucky I came by when I did. It will probably storm all night."
  3929. "Great. I'll have to wait until morning to go back for my keys and I'll be lucky if they're even still there."
  3930. >You toss your bag to the side and sit on John's couch, burying your face into your hooves despondently while John wraps a towel over you.
  3931. >"Try not to soak my couch, will ya?"
  3932. >You laugh nervously before scooting a little closer to John.
  3933. "You're a pretty cool human. How come we've never talked before?"
  3934. >You know why. You're very aware of how you get around some humans.
  3935. >"What are you talking about? Of course we've talked before."
  3936. "If you count saying hello in the morning on our way out the door, sure. But I mean we've never tried to really get to know each other."
  3937. Replies to this post:
  3938. >>4225846
  3939. >>
  3940.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)12:25 No.4225846
  3941.  
  3942. >>4225838
  3943. >John grabs his remote and flicks on the television. Something about a drug epidemic breaking out before he switches the channel and turns up the volume to drown out the storm outside.
  3944. "You know, the ponies used to have a saying."
  3945. >"Oh yeah? What was it?"
  3946. >You give John the most adorable face you can muster.
  3947. "Friendship is magic."
  3948. >You both burst out laughing, even you're aware how childish of a concept that was.
  3949. Replies to this post:
  3950. >>4225863
  3951. >>
  3952.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)12:27 No.4225863
  3953.  
  3954. >>4225846
  3955. >A few hours pass all too quickly and it's now dark outside.
  3956. >As dark as it gets for a city.
  3957. >You took your soaked sweater off so John could place it in his dryer, and you're currently leaning against him while on the couch.
  3958. >Your stomach rumbles and you pat it with your hoof.
  3959. "Hey John, got anything good to eat?"
  3960. >"How do you feel about chicken?"
  3961. >Oh gross! You almost vomit just thinking about it. Spending so much time around humans almost makes you forget they eat all of those cute and fluffy animals.
  3962. Replies to this post:
  3963. >>4225871
  3964. >>
  3965.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)12:27 No.4225871
  3966.  
  3967. >>4225863
  3968. >John probably notices your reaction and laughs.
  3969. >"Heheh, I'm just kidding. Jeez. You think I'd try to feed you meat?"
  3970. >You punch him in the arm.
  3971. "Very funny, jokester. But seriously, I'm starving here."
  3972. >"How about some peanut butter and jelly sandwiches? It's either that or meat. I'll stock up on groceries tomorrow."
  3973. "That sounds....delicious~"
  3974. >Wow. That came a lot out more seductively than you had intended.
  3975. >You blush, and look away from John. Hopping off of the couch and making your way into the kitchen.
  3976. >You look over your shoulder back at John.
  3977. "You coming?"
  3978. >"Huh? Oh- Oh yeah."
  3979. >Hm. Looks like he was lost in thought.
  3980. Replies to this post:
  3981. >>4225879
  3982. >>
  3983.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)12:28 No.4225879
  3984.  
  3985. >>4225871
  3986. >You and John are now sitting on opposite ends of his table eating these delicious sandwiches.
  3987. >He keeps staring at your hooves...weird.
  3988. >You hope he's not some kind of creep with a hoof fetish.
  3989. >Oh no! What if this is all part of some plot!? What if he tries to kidnap you and do- things- to you...
  3990. >Not that you you wouldn't enjoy that...
  3991. >SNAP OUT OF IT!
  3992. >That's disgusting. Those are not clean thoughts and you should be ashamed of yourself!
  3993. >Buck you brain, I think what I want.
  3994. >What kind of freak would ever love some human? You're a pony! You should love other ponies!
  3995. >Wow, brain. You're a bit of a downer.
  3996. >Well how else are you supposed to hold things?
  3997. Replies to this post:
  3998. >>4225895
  3999. >>
  4000.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)12:29 No.4225895
  4001.  
  4002. >>4225879
  4003. >That's a stupid question. I just- Wait, what?
  4004. >"I said, how are you even holding that sandwich with hooves?"
  4005. "Oh!"
  4006. >You zoned out for a second there.
  4007. "Everyp0ny knows how to. What kind of question is that?"
  4008. >"Yeah, but you don't even have fingers. How do you grab stuff?"
  4009. "You don't even have hooves. How do YOU grab stuff?"
  4010. >"With these babies."
  4011. >John holds up his hand and wiggles his fingers for emphasis.
  4012. >Those hands...
  4013.  
  4014. I just realized I forgot the subject in the last 3 posts....Oh well, too late now.
  4015. Replies to this post:
  4016. >>4225902
  4017. >>
  4018.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)12:30 No.4225902
  4019.  
  4020. >>4225895
  4021. >*POMF*
  4022. >"Uhh..."
  4023. >Your wings are fully extended for John's viewing pleasure.
  4024. "Uhh..."
  4025. >This is so embarrasing! Your face is probably as red as a tomato right now!
  4026. >You struggle to pull your wings down, while John smiles like a big goofball.
  4027. "Stop staring!"
  4028. >He looks off to the side, whistling to himself and leaving you to deal with your 'problem'
  4029. >He's still snickering.
  4030. >"Don't worry. I'm a man. It's not like I've never had a similar problem before."
  4031. "Then why are you laughing!?"
  4032. >"Because you look so adorable when you're embarrased."
  4033. >That only makes you blush harder.
  4034. >"Look! See! There it is. Don't sweat it, Pillow. Just let me know when I can look again."
  4035. Replies to this post:
  4036. >>4225911
  4037. >>
  4038.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)12:31 No.4225911
  4039.  
  4040. >>4225902
  4041. >You finally get your wings back into place, but your face is still completely flushed.
  4042. "You can look now."
  4043. >John turns back to you, smiling.
  4044. "Stop smiling!"
  4045. >You cross your forelegs and bury your chin in them, giving John a pouty look.
  4046. >"D'aww, don't be like that."
  4047. >You yawn, slowly blinking your eyes.
  4048. >A glance at the clock tells you it's 12:43
  4049. >Woah! That's way later than you're used to!
  4050. >You still don't have a way back into your apartment.
  4051. "Hey, uh...John."
  4052. >"Yeah?"
  4053. "I know you've done a lot for me tonight. But I need one last favor..."
  4054. >"You want to spend the night?"
  4055. >You nod, smiling hopefully at him. Begging him with your eyes.
  4056. >He stares intensly right back at you, before sighing and breaking the stare.
  4057. >"Fine. You seem nice. I'll go back tomorrow morning and get your keys."
  4058. >He gets up out of his chair and walks to the bathroom.
  4059. >Now that he's gone, you're no longer focusing and you realize just how tired you really are.
  4060. >Maybe..if you just lay your head down...
  4061. Replies to this post:
  4062. >>4225931
  4063. >>
  4064.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)12:32 No.4225931
  4065.  
  4066. >>4225911
  4067. >Honking cars, police sirens, and dripping rainwater bless your ears with their music when you wake up.
  4068. >You shuffle around under your blankets for a few minutes before your head pops out from under the sheets.
  4069. >You turn over and cuddle against your pillow.
  4070. >You love a good...
  4071. >Wait, pillow?
  4072. >Sheets? Blankets!?
  4073. >You look around the room and guess that John must've carried you in here and laid you on his bed after you fell asleep.
  4074. >Slowly, you pick yourself up off the bed and into the main room.
  4075. >You make your way over to the couch and peer over it.
  4076. >There lies John, in deep slumber as a pillow muffles his snores.
  4077. Replies to this post:
  4078. >>4225951
  4079. >>
  4080.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)12:34 No.4225951
  4081.  
  4082. File: 1346344493236.jpg-(44 KB, 450x368, 1345902073578.jpg)
  4083.  
  4084. >>4225931
  4085. That's where I stop for today.
  4086.  
  4087. Hate? Love? More? Stop what you're doing right now and destroy your computer? Let me know.
  4088. Replies to this post:
  4089. >>4226511 >>4226618 >>4227353 >>4230552
  4090. >>
  4091.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)13:34 No.4226511
  4092.  
  4093. >>4225951
  4094. Love. You got a fan in this lurker
  4095. Replies to this post:
  4096. >>4231211
  4097. >>
  4098.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)13:42 No.4226618
  4099.  
  4100. >>4225951
  4101. Love it.Pony digging human hands, humans in general...i like it, never read anything like that before.
  4102. Replies to this post:
  4103. >>4231211
  4104. >>
  4105.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)14:46 No.4227353
  4106.  
  4107. File: 1346352384785.jpg-(61 KB, 612x432, i_want_it_i_need_it_by_ge(...).jpg)
  4108.  
  4109. >>4225951
  4110. Replies to this post:
  4111. >>4231211
  4112. >>
  4113.  sage  08/30/12(Thu)15:31 No.4227910
  4114.  
  4115. More Pillow case when?
  4116. >>
  4117.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)16:09 No.4228388
  4118.  
  4119. My attempt at a Pillow Case story
  4120.  
  4121. >Day 20 in the human world
  4122. >I was in need of money so it was natural to find a place to work
  4123. >One of the few jobs I was qualified for was at a call center, only headphones and a microphone, so I was set
  4124. >It was weird the first few days, till I got the hang of it
  4125. >There were other p0nies working there, and they were kind enough to help me
  4126. >However, there was one that worked right next to me
  4127. >A human
  4128. Hey, PC, tonight me and some of the guys and girls are thinking of going out.
  4129. You wanna join? It'll be fun!
  4130. >Oh Celestia
  4131. >This is it
  4132. >It's time to socialize
  4133. >"Uh.. Where are we going?"
  4134. I dunno, that's the charm of it. We go out, see where the city takes us. It's all about the atmosphere, you know?
  4135. >"I don't know.. It's my first week here. I barely know any of you."
  4136. >"I mean, I know you and the blonde girl over there."
  4137. You mean Alex? Yeah, she's cool. She'll be joining us too.
  4138. Come on, you'll love it.
  4139. >Oh, buck, I'm gonna go
  4140. >"S-sure thing, when is the meet-up?"
  4141. At 8 this evening, we;ll pick you up. You game, then?
  4142. >"Yes.. I'm game."
  4143.  
  4144. 1/X
  4145. Replies to this post:
  4146. >>4228525
  4147. >>
  4148.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)16:21 No.4228525
  4149.  
  4150. >>4228388
  4151.  
  4152. Later that night.
  4153.  
  4154. >Oh Celestia what am I going to wear?
  4155. >Where are we even going?
  4156. >What if we're going in a classy place? Like those I've seen in the magazines
  4157. >But I don't have anything elegant with me
  4158. >My fancy saddle is at home
  4159. >Better go as neutral as possible
  4160. >My purple hoodie will do, I guess
  4161. >It will even bring out my eyes
  4162. >What time is it, anyway? I don't want to keep anyone waiting on my first going out
  4163. >It's 7:50
  4164. >Only 10 minutes
  4165. >I'll just wait
  4166. >8:05
  4167. >Where the buck are they?
  4168. >Am I being d-ditched?
  4169. >8:10
  4170. >I am being ditched.
  4171. >Suddenly, a loud honk
  4172. >IT'S THEM
  4173. >I lock my door and scurry down the stairs
  4174. >There they were, in a blue convertible
  4175. >My colleague was behind the steering wheel
  4176. >Next to him the seat was empty
  4177. >In the back were Alex, the girl with the blonde hair from work with another man
  4178. >Are they a couple?
  4179.  
  4180. 2/X
  4181. Replies to this post:
  4182. >>4228557 >>4228671
  4183. >>
  4184.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)16:26 No.4228557
  4185.  
  4186. File: 1346358403537.png-(546 KB, 624x466, 1346127543475.png)
  4187.  
  4188. >>4228525
  4189. >Suddenly, a loud honk
  4190. >IT'S THEM
  4191. I know this feel all too well
  4192. >>
  4193.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)16:36 No.4228671
  4194.  
  4195. >>4228525
  4196.  
  4197. COME ON PC, HOP ON
  4198. >I've never been in one of these before
  4199. >Only in the big ones, where there are many others there
  4200. >I've been once in a smaller one, but it was yellow, and it was covered at the top
  4201. >And I had to pay the driver to get me home
  4202. >It's a good thing I still have some money on me, in case they will ask for some for riding with them
  4203. >"O-Ok! I'm coming!"
  4204. PC, since this is your first night out, you're riding with me.
  4205. >I am starting to feel very nervous.
  4206. >This is THE first time I am doing something like this
  4207. >It was comfy in the front, though
  4208. >The device started to purr, gently at first
  4209. >Then it started roaring, and we were on our way
  4210. >I could see everything
  4211. >The town was so beautiful
  4212. I was thinking we would ride for a while. Watch the city, you know? This is what I like most. The guys agree, too.
  4213. >"Yeah, it's beautiful. No town in Equestria has as many lights. Not even Canterlot."
  4214. Is that like the capital of your world?
  4215. >"Yes, it's where our princesses reside."
  4216. I see. Well, enjoy the ride, PC.
  4217.  
  4218. 3/X
  4219. Replies to this post:
  4220. >>4235334
  4221. >>
  4222.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)16:40 No.4228727
  4223.  
  4224. Man I'm really digging these. I'm tempted to write up one myself for the next thread involving a socially awkward nerdy young earth pone who wants to be a superhero. How long has there been a connection between Equestria in Earth, or is it up in the air and up to the author?
  4225. Replies to this post:
  4226. >>4228753 >>4228922
  4227. >>
  4228.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)16:42 No.4228753
  4229.  
  4230. >>4228727
  4231.  
  4232. I'm writing the one above your post. It's getting increasingly difficult, man. Also, I get the feeling we play this by ear. This is the first thread of its kind, right?
  4233. Rules haven't been established yet.
  4234. >>
  4235.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)16:54 No.4228922
  4236.  
  4237. File: 1346360093447.png-(175 KB, 789x791, 5645657868.png)
  4238.  
  4239. >>4228727
  4240. See
  4241. >>4202310
  4242.  
  4243. Even if you don't use Pillow Case, the only rule seems to be that you have to be on Earth At some point. Go nuts. Make a name for yourself. LET YOUR IMAGINATION RUN FREE.
  4244. >>
  4245.  QuestionS RnR66 !!HdaKK1FxUnh  08/30/12(Thu)17:10 No.4229187
  4246.  
  4247. Does it have to be Pillow Case or can it be an OC or somep0ny from the show?
  4248.  
  4249. Also is it through the eyes of the ponies?
  4250. >inb4 duh, dumnbass
  4251.  
  4252. Can there be more than one pony?
  4253.  
  4254. I'm just asking because I am too lazy to read every post in here
  4255. Replies to this post:
  4256. >>4229218 >>4229239
  4257. >>
  4258.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)17:12 No.4229218
  4259.  
  4260. >>4229187
  4261. Let me help you out
  4262. ...
  4263. Read the post right above yours
  4264. Replies to this post:
  4265. >>4229234
  4266. >>
  4267.  RnR66 !!HdaKK1FxUnh  08/30/12(Thu)17:13 No.4229234
  4268.  
  4269. >>4229218
  4270. It wasn't posted when I wrote my post
  4271. >>
  4272.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)17:13 No.4229239
  4273.  
  4274. >>4229187
  4275. >>4229187
  4276.  
  4277. Well since it's PiE I'd say it's p0ny perspective. The rest is up to you. It could even be in a future dystopia, or in the middle-ages.
  4278. Go nuts.
  4279. Replies to this post:
  4280. >>4229336 >>4229462
  4281. >>
  4282.  I just don't do AiE RnR66 !!HdaKK1FxUnh  08/30/12(Thu)17:20 No.4229336
  4283.  
  4284. >>4229239
  4285. Okay, well I know I may not be a good writer but I will love to write for you guys as well.
  4286. Replies to this post:
  4287. >>4229645
  4288. >>
  4289.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)17:28 No.4229462
  4290.  
  4291. >>4229239
  4292. So stories like the one's in >>4164403 wouldn't fit in here since they're written from anon's point of view?
  4293. I'd rather not have two threads for a concept so similar, but that's up to you guys to decide.
  4294. Replies to this post:
  4295. >>4229645
  4296. >>
  4297.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)17:40 No.4229645
  4298.  
  4299. >>4229336
  4300.  
  4301. Go ahead, man. The more the merrier.
  4302.  
  4303. >>4229462
  4304.  
  4305. As long as the writing is solid, no problems. Most of us go for the culture shock, though.
  4306. >>
  4307.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)18:40 No.4230552
  4308.  
  4309. >>4225951
  4310. I wish for MOOOOAR.
  4311.  
  4312. I HUNGER!
  4313.  
  4314. *cough*
  4315.  
  4316. Please more? Your story is very fun to read and the idea of it is awesome.
  4317. Replies to this post:
  4318. >>4231211
  4319. >>
  4320.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)18:57 No.4230835
  4321.  
  4322. Hey guys.
  4323.  
  4324. I'm one of the chief writefags over in >>4164403 and we were wondering something:
  4325.  
  4326. Could we merge the two concepts here? PiE seems to be chiefly from the pony's perspective, but what we were writing in the thread I linked was the same concept (Ponies in Earth) but from the Anon's perspective.
  4327.  
  4328. Sorry if this has been asked before, it's a big thread and might have gotten lost in the shuffle.
  4329. Replies to this post:
  4330. >>4231211
  4331. >>
  4332.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)19:21 No.4231211
  4333.  
  4334. File: 1346368918156.gif-(861 KB, 180x220, 1343622810065.gif)
  4335.  
  4336. >>4226511
  4337. >>4226618
  4338. >>4227353
  4339. >>4230552
  4340. >mfw people actually like it
  4341.  
  4342. You guys are great. REALLY great. But you'd be even better if you wrote your own stories, even if they're just anonymous shorts.
  4343.  
  4344. I'll put out my own whenever I can. Usually once a day. Obviously that's impossible to do it every day, same applies to the other writers.
  4345.  
  4346. We'll be going out and into the city in the next part.
  4347.  
  4348. >>4230835
  4349. Tough to say. Your stories fit like a puzzle piece right between AiE and here, even though I've seen those kinds of stories there before, but they never really took off. It also looks like you guys are pumping out stories much faster than us. Also there's a ton of sex. So far we haven't had any. Not to say I won't get a bit 'sensual' in my story sometime soon.
  4350.  
  4351. TL;DR It's a little too cloppy and seems like the Anon perspectives would overrun the pony perspectives, which these stories are mainly about. Try AiE. They shouldn't mind.
  4352. Replies to this post:
  4353. >>4231256 >>4231300
  4354. >>
  4355.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)19:24 No.4231256
  4356.  
  4357. >>4231211
  4358.  
  4359. Well...shit.
  4360.  
  4361. AiE is about Anons in Equestria, and they're very anal about that.
  4362.  
  4363. There's really no rules other than that.
  4364.  
  4365. Looks like I'm going to have to make a new thread to dump my story, UNLESS you guys don't mind if I dump it here.
  4366. Replies to this post:
  4367. >>4231553
  4368. >>
  4369.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)19:26 No.4231300
  4370.  
  4371. >>4231211
  4372.  
  4373. Oh, also, I don't write clop. Flutter-Twi-Rarity-writefag here.
  4374.  
  4375. I get a little adult, yes, but I don't write actual clop. I think. Unless alluding to sexual activity counts as clop.
  4376. >>
  4377.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)19:44 No.4231553
  4378.  
  4379. >>4231256
  4380. If AiE absolutely won't let you post then making a new thread is your best option. Worst case scenario people complain about 3 threads on page 0 because they're too lazy to filter and click page 1. If that happens then we'll cross that bridge when we reach it.
  4381.  
  4382. It looks like enough people are liking your stories for another thread to be fine, anyways.
  4383. >>
  4384.  Pancakes  08/30/12(Thu)20:05 No.4231817
  4385.  
  4386. >>4224357
  4387. > inb4 people realize Ponyville Apartments is written from the perspective of a human
  4388. > inb4 people notice it has no OC ponies
  4389. > inb4 people point out that the genre is closer to slice-of-life vs. romance
  4390. > inb4 gtfo Pancakes
  4391.  
  4392. But seriously, I've been around 4chan far too long to worry about that. Just let me know the consensus and I'd be glad to either stay here or move to >>4164403.
  4393. Replies to this post:
  4394. >>4231882
  4395. >>
  4396.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)20:10 No.4231882
  4397.  
  4398. File: 1346371850261.jpg-(6 KB, 200x105, 1345932152476.jpg)
  4399.  
  4400. >>4231817
  4401. I can't believe I just realized that it was human's perspective. You make a fine point. They could post here, then. Even if they are too sexual for my own tastes. Besides, I would hate for you to leave.
  4402.  
  4403. N-not that I like you or anything..
  4404.  
  4405. BUT I WANT MORE PONY PERSPECTIVE WRITERS
  4406. Replies to this post:
  4407. >>4232058
  4408. >>
  4409.  Pancakes  08/30/12(Thu)20:21 No.4232058
  4410.  
  4411. >>4231882
  4412. No idea. I started writing something slightly different from OP's / Mr. Blue's original concept for the thread since PiE started before >>4164403.
  4413.  
  4414. If anything, I'd like to see his opinion as well before I move or stay. Also, I saw that >>4231884 was just created.
  4415. Replies to this post:
  4416. >>4232624 >>4232756
  4417. >>
  4418.  Pancakes  08/30/12(Thu)20:35 No.4232309
  4419.  
  4420. Hmm. I see possible shitstorm at >>4231884.
  4421.  
  4422. Where is Mr. Blue? This madness must end before it is too late and we are all banished to ponychan!
  4423.  
  4424. But seriously, where is he?
  4425. Replies to this post:
  4426. >>4232624 >>4232798
  4427. >>
  4428.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)20:54 No.4232624
  4429.  
  4430. >>4232309
  4431. >>4232058
  4432.  
  4433. Hey guys, major writefag from >>4164403
  4434. here.
  4435.  
  4436. I'm probably going to delete my thread (>>4231884) and move my story here or the next PiE thread.
  4437.  
  4438. There are differences in the way stories here are written and the way stories were written in the first thread, but I tend to agree the more I think about it: better to post them here than make another writing general.
  4439. Replies to this post:
  4440. >>4232693 >>4232874 >>4239559
  4441. >>
  4442.  Pancakes  08/30/12(Thu)20:59 No.4232693
  4443.  
  4444. >>4232624
  4445. Just posting my opinion, but I do agree that merging the threads may be more practical at this point in time.
  4446.  
  4447. While there are nuances between the writing styles, we really are beginning to clutter up the board with all these threads.
  4448. Replies to this post:
  4449. >>4232713
  4450. >>
  4451.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)21:00 No.4232713
  4452.  
  4453. >>4232693
  4454.  
  4455. Yeah, I apologize. I was just too excited to get the story out of my head and went a bit full-retard.
  4456. >>
  4457.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)21:02 No.4232756
  4458.  
  4459. >>4232058
  4460. Opinion: Meh.
  4461. Replies to this post:
  4462. >>4232936
  4463. >>
  4464.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)21:04 No.4232798
  4465.  
  4466. >>4232309
  4467. Real life giving me shit. I'm trying to spend as little time here as possible this week to stay on top of things. Just bad timing I started this thread when I did.
  4468. Replies to this post:
  4469. >>4232828 >>4232893 >>4232936
  4470. >>
  4471.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)21:05 No.4232828
  4472.  
  4473. File: 1346375148226.png-(115 KB, 1005x795, 1346185532905.png)
  4474.  
  4475. >>4232798
  4476.  
  4477. We understand. Real life sucks more often than it blows.
  4478.  
  4479. Keep calm and don't look at the chicken.
  4480. >>
  4481.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)21:07 No.4232874
  4482.  
  4483. >>4232624
  4484. Overall opinion: AiE is humans/pony stories taking place in Equestria, PiE is human/pony stories taking place on Earth. It's about which of the two goes where. While AiE might be picky about whether or not you have an anon, really all you should worry about here is that a pony at some point spends some amount of time on earth.
  4485. Replies to this post:
  4486. >>4232936 >>4232940 >>4232993
  4487. >>
  4488.  Pancakes  08/30/12(Thu)21:08 No.4232893
  4489.  
  4490. >>4232798
  4491. Tell me about it. Also, you forgot to post your name.
  4492.  
  4493. Gotta take for for a bit. later.
  4494. >>
  4495.  Mr. Blue  08/30/12(Thu)21:10 No.4232936
  4496.  
  4497. Shit. Name got eaten on all three posts. These are all me.
  4498. >>4232874
  4499. >>4232798
  4500. >>4232756
  4501. Replies to this post:
  4502. >>4232993
  4503. >>
  4504.  Anonymous  08/30/12(Thu)21:10 No.4232940
  4505.  
  4506. >>4232874
  4507.  
  4508. Yeah, that's what I came to.
  4509.  
  4510. I'm probably going to wait until tomorrow to re-post my story. A lot more tired than I thought I was.
  4511.  
  4512. Got it saved, probably going to write it out completely for a quick, clean dump.
  4513.  
  4514. Thanks for all the understanding. /mlp/ always surprises me in how civil it can be when you check your faggotry at the door.
  4515. >>
  4516.  Pancakes  08/30/12(Thu)21:13 No.4232993
  4517.  
  4518. >>4232936
  4519. >>4232874
  4520. Agreed. Now enough arguing and more writing!
  4521.  
  4522. Except for us who need to get IRL stuff done.
  4523. >>
  4524.  Mortimer Mouse  08/30/12(Thu)23:03 No.4235334
  4525.  
  4526. File: 1346382189258.png-(1.43 MB, 2092x1479, AHHHH.png)
  4527.  
  4528. >>4228671
  4529. Yo. Anon. You gonna finish that story of yours?
  4530.  
  4531. Also bump.
  4532. Replies to this post:
  4533. >>4237742
  4534. >>
  4535.  Anonymous  08/31/12(Fri)01:09 No.4237742
  4536.  
  4537. >>4235334
  4538. Sure hope e is.
  4539. >>
  4540.  Anonymous  08/31/12(Fri)03:16 No.4239559
  4541.  
  4542. >>4232624
  4543. Same boat as this fine gentlemen here. Enough people seemed to like the stories, so I guess I'm coming here too. Congratulations, you guys have another writer to add to your collection.
  4544. I just didn't want to go to AiE. I participated in the old Flutterapist and Rainbro days but its just become a husk of what it once was... so yeah. Hi.
  4545. >>
  4546.  Anonymous  08/31/12(Fri)03:53 No.4239949
  4547.  
  4548. File: 1346399638096.png-(199 KB, 800x1300, 1343077287532.png)
  4549.  
  4550. At the beginning of this thread I really didn't want to like it, but dammit I want moar Pillow Case stories. So quit your day job and get to writing already, writefags.
  4551. >>
  4552.  Anonymous  08/31/12(Fri)06:52 No.4241627
  4553.  
  4554. I NEED MOAR
  4555. >>
  4556.  Loscil !LoscilARtE  08/31/12(Fri)11:34 No.4243443
  4557.  
  4558. Bumps
  4559. >>
  4560.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/31/12(Fri)12:28 No.4244005
  4561.  
  4562. File: 1346430510874.png-(282 KB, 593x604, BRILLIANT.png)
  4563.  
  4564. Part 3
  4565.  
  4566. >John appears to be talking in his sleep, but you can’t quite make out what he’s saying through the pillow.
  4567. >He tosses and turns on the couch a few times before letting out one big yawn and stopping again.
  4568. >He’s kind of cute when he’s sleeping.
  4569. >You find yourself staring at John’s sleeping form a lot longer than you should be.
  4570. >Maybe if you’re careful, you could just sneak a peek…
  4571. >BAD PONY. YOU CANNOT MOLEST THE HUMAN WHO PUT A ROOF OVER YOUR HEAD.
  4572. >You decided it was best not to wake John up.
  4573. >After all, he did you huge favor by letting you sleep at his place.
  4574. >It’s only fair you try to pay him back.
  4575. >Non-sexually.
  4576. Replies to this post:
  4577. >>4244011
  4578. >>
  4579.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/31/12(Fri)12:29 No.4244011
  4580.  
  4581. >>4244005
  4582.  
  4583. >After thinking to yourself for a few seconds, you’ve come up with a brilliant plan!
  4584. >Everyp0ny loves to wake up to breakfast, you’re sure John will appreciate you making him some.
  4585. >Like Mom always said, the fastest way to a stallion’s heart is through his stomach!
  4586. >You walk into his kitchen and open his cupboard.
  4587. >Oh, right, he said last night all he had was mostly bread.
  4588. >Nothing in here but some empty medication bottles.
  4589. >Disappointed, you shut the cupboard. There’s no way you can make a nice breakfast for John without some real food.
  4590. >Oh well, you hope he likes jelly toast.
  4591. >In just under a minute, you have the bread in the toaster and jelly standing by.
  4592. “Prepare to initiate launch sequence…”
  4593. >You twist the dial on the toaster for five minutes.
  4594. “Launch time set to three minutes, cap’n!
  4595. “Excellent! Begin!”
  4596. >You push down on the plunger, and the bread drops into the toaster.
  4597. >The timer clicks away in response.
  4598. Replies to this post:
  4599. >>4244019
  4600. >>
  4601.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/31/12(Fri)12:29 No.4244019
  4602.  
  4603. >>4244011
  4604.  
  4605. >Looking around to make sure John didn’t wake up and see that embarrassing display, you giggle to yourself, grab your saddlebag, and tip-hoof to the bathroom.
  4606. >You consider showering, but you don’t want to risk John waking up and seeing you use his shower without permission.
  4607. >You go about your morning routine, brushing your mane and banding it into a ponytail.
  4608. >You want to brush your teeth, but remember that you don’t have your toothbrush here. The only one is John’s.
  4609. >There’s no way you’re putting that thing in your mouth.
  4610. >You exhale into your hoof a few times to check your breath.
  4611. >Ugh! It’s disgusting!
  4612. >You’ll have to settle for the mouthwash. It will get rid of it for now, but it won’t stop it from coming back.
  4613. >Swishing it around in your mouth a few times, you spit into the sink and smile into the mirror.
  4614. “Lookin’ good.”
  4615. >Content with your less than perfect mouth hygiene, you trot out through the main room and back into the kitchen.
  4616. Replies to this post:
  4617. >>4244023
  4618. >>
  4619.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/31/12(Fri)12:30 No.4244023
  4620.  
  4621. >>4244019
  4622. >Just in time, too. The toast is about done.
  4623. >You get low next to the counter so that only your eyes are poking over it, and you stare at the toaster.
  4624. “Launching in 3…2…1...”
  4625. >DING!
  4626. >Oh Celestia does that smell go-
  4627. >”AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH-“
  4628. “AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!”
  4629. >After a few seconds, you both stare at each other.
  4630. >John is up, and staring at you with a confused look on his face.
  4631. “What’s wrong!?”
  4632. >”I, uh, just had a bad dream.”
  4633. “Then why were you screaming!?”
  4634. >”I heard a loud noise and it scared me!”
  4635. “You mean the toaster?”
  4636. Replies to this post:
  4637. >>4244031
  4638. >>
  4639.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/31/12(Fri)12:31 No.4244031
  4640.  
  4641. >>4244023
  4642. >You and John share an awkward stare at each other before you burst out laughing.
  4643. >”Haha, laugh it up. You scared a grown man with an ordinary kitchen appliance.”
  4644. >His displeasure only makes you laugh harder.
  4645. “Oh- oh stop it John! You’re going to make me bust my sides! Bwahahaha!”
  4646. >A few minutes later and you’ve calmed down enough to form a complete sentence.
  4647. “That made my morning.”
  4648. >”Well I’m glad it did. Are you going to share some of that toast or what?”
  4649. “I don’t know. Doesn’t it scare you?”
  4650. >You set a plate of toast down in front of John and then hold your hooves above your head in a mock ghost impression.
  4651. “OoOooOooOhhh”
  4652. Replies to this post:
  4653. >>4244036
  4654. >>
  4655.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/31/12(Fri)12:31 No.4244036
  4656.  
  4657. >>4244031
  4658. >After you and John finish your not so filling breakfast, you grab your bag, and you head downstairs to the streets to look for your keys.
  4659. >”So where’d you last see your keys?”
  4660. >Uh oh…can’t let him know HOW you lost your keys, better play it safe.
  4661. “I think Wal-mart. I dropped my bag and they just must’ve fallen out.”
  4662. >”Really?”
  4663. “Yeah.”
  4664. >”That’s great! My brother works over there! Think we can stop by and say hello?”
  4665. “Sure. What does he do?”
  4666. >”He manages.”
  4667. “Oh, that’s nice.”
  4668. >Wait. WHAT.
  4669. Replies to this post:
  4670. >>4244061 >>4251121
  4671. >>
  4672.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/31/12(Fri)12:33 No.4244061
  4673.  
  4674. File: 1346430829178.jpg-(60 KB, 894x894, screwball_shrug_by_darksa(...).jpg)
  4675.  
  4676. >>4244036
  4677.  
  4678. There you have it. Although I promised we'd be going out to the city which we technically did I wrote more than I had intended and I didn't want to figuratively slam a huge string of posts on your figurative desks. To make up for it I'll update again later tonight.
  4679. Replies to this post:
  4680. >>4244402 >>4251101
  4681. >>
  4682.  Anonymous  08/31/12(Fri)13:12 No.4244402
  4683.  
  4684. >>4244061
  4685. Can't wait to see more. This is getting interesting.
  4686. >>
  4687.  Anonymous  08/31/12(Fri)15:55 No.4246275
  4688.  
  4689. Think a bump's now well in order.
  4690. >>
  4691.  PNKCKAE LeStrange  08/31/12(Fri)17:59 No.4248116
  4692.  
  4693. File: 1346450342588.png-(44 KB, 588x493, 1345854444663.png)
  4694.  
  4695. PANCAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  4696. pls come back.
  4697. Replies to this post:
  4698. >>4248788
  4699. >>
  4700.  Anonymous  08/31/12(Fri)18:49 No.4248788
  4701.  
  4702. >>4248116
  4703. I don't think he left.
  4704. >>
  4705.  Anonymous  08/31/12(Fri)20:39 No.4250633
  4706.  
  4707. bump
  4708. >>
  4709.  Anonymous  08/31/12(Fri)20:44 No.4250709
  4710.  
  4711. Holy shit this thread has been up or like a week just kill it already
  4712. Replies to this post:
  4713. >>4250941
  4714. >>
  4715.  Anonymous  08/31/12(Fri)21:00 No.4250941
  4716.  
  4717. >>4250709
  4718. You don't understand how young fiction threads like this run, do you?
  4719.  
  4720. Last TF thread was up from the 11th to the 30th. Current Fat Pony thread's been up since the 20th (eleven days), and this thread's only about as old as the latest Dark Equestria General.
  4721.  
  4722. This type of thread usually moves pretty slow, but when they move, there's mountains of words.
  4723. And the payoff is tremendous.
  4724. >>
  4725.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/31/12(Fri)21:11 No.4251101
  4726.  
  4727. File: 1346461912328.jpg-(354 KB, 750x1000, Chaos!.jpg)
  4728.  
  4729. >>4244061
  4730. Back from real life. Continuing from where I last left off earlier today. I switched to my laptop and I'm not exactly used to typing with it, so make sure to point out mistakes you see so I can edit it when I put it on a pastebin.
  4731. >>
  4732.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/31/12(Fri)21:12 No.4251121
  4733.  
  4734. >>4244036
  4735. >You look up to John with a nervous smile
  4736. "Ya know, I don't think that's such a good idea."
  4737. >"What? Why not? He's my brother."
  4738. "I just don't think we'll have the time and all. I mean, he's probably working, and we shouldn't disturb him!"
  4739. >"He's my brother. It'll be fine."
  4740. "But I'm pretty sure I dropped my keys outside! There's no need for us to go inside, right?"
  4741. >"Actually I need to pick up food. I can't live off toast forever."
  4742. >John leads you to his car.
  4743. >It looks like a nice. But you've never been interested in cars, so you have no idea what to look for.
  4744. >He opens the door, and motions to the passanger seat.
  4745. > These things weren't exactly made for ponies. Even when you finally get strapped in you still sit awkwardly.
  4746. >"Comfortable?"
  4747. "Not at all."
  4748. >"Don't worry, it's a short drive. We'll be there in no time."
  4749. >He starts up the engine and before you know it you're on your way.
  4750. Replies to this post:
  4751. >>4251142
  4752. >>
  4753.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/31/12(Fri)21:13 No.4251142
  4754.  
  4755. >>4251121
  4756. >Might as well make small-talk while you try and think of a plan.
  4757. "So what do you do for a living?"
  4758. >"Me? I, uh, why?"
  4759. "Just wondering. We are friends now, right?"
  4760. >"Yeah. Sure."
  4761. >Not really the answer you were looking for...
  4762. "And friends tell friends everything, right?"
  4763. >Hypocrite.
  4764. >Shut up, brain.
  4765. >"I work a boring office job. You wouldn't like to hear about it."
  4766. >Wow. He sure seems defensive. Maybe it's because of the rude awakening this morning.
  4767. >You're pretty sure he's lying, but considering you haven't told him the real reason you lost your keys it's probably fair you don't dig any deeper.
  4768. >"How about you tell me a little about yourself, huh? I know ponies are practically born with special talents. What does a pillow have to do with yours?"
  4769. "Looking at my flank?"
  4770. >You giggle to yourself before he jerks the steering wheel and you have a mini heart attack.
  4771. "Hey!"
  4772. >He shoots you a toothy grin. "Sorry, hand slipped."
  4773. Replies to this post:
  4774. >>4251161
  4775. >>
  4776.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/31/12(Fri)21:14 No.4251161
  4777.  
  4778. >>4251142
  4779. >You harumph and cross your forelegs.
  4780. "If you must know, my special talent is-"
  4781. >"We're here."
  4782. >You and John pull into the parking lot.
  4783. >Blast! You were so caught up in the small talk you completely forgot to come up with a plan!
  4784. >Buck it. You'll wing it.
  4785. "Hey, maybe I should go look for my keys myself while you go talk to your brother and get your groceries."
  4786. >"What's the matter? Are you embarrased to be seen with me?"
  4787. "No! No, no, no! Of course not!"
  4788. >"Then what's the problem?"
  4789. "I just think that we can save time if we split up!"
  4790. >You give him an innocent smile.
  4791. >He shakes his head, "Fine. Find me inside if you find your keys. Try not to take too long."
  4792. >You nod up and down eagerly.
  4793. "You got it!"
  4794. Replies to this post:
  4795. >>4251187
  4796. >>
  4797.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/31/12(Fri)21:15 No.4251187
  4798.  
  4799. >>4251161
  4800. >With that, you and John exit the car and go your seperate ways.
  4801. >You flap your wings and lift yourself into air. It's good to get some exercise.
  4802. >During your fly over of Wal-Mart, you notice there's some pegasus kids hanging out up on the roof. Probably doing drugs.
  4803. >You grunt to yourself, kids these days need to watch what they put into their bodies.
  4804. >Whatever, it's not your problem.
  4805. >You land in the back alley and begin the epic search your keys.
  4806. "Come on, they have to be here somewhere..."
  4807. >You hear a door open and shut, a male unicorn dressed as an employee steps out.
  4808. >"Excuse me, ma'am?"
  4809. "Oh, hi."
  4810. >"Are you looking for something?"
  4811. "Yes! Actually I think I dropped a pair of keys back here yesterday. Have you seen them?"
  4812. >He uses magic and begins to levitate boxes into the back of a truck, but addresses you while he does so.
  4813. Replies to this post:
  4814. >>4251207
  4815. >>
  4816.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/31/12(Fri)21:16 No.4251207
  4817.  
  4818. >>4251187
  4819. >"Yeah, I have. I was out here last night and one of the lights reflected off some keys so I could see 'em better."
  4820. "Great! Do you have them?"
  4821. >"Nope. All personal items like that have to be turned it to the manager. I could go get him if you want?"
  4822. "Uh, no. That's fine. I'll go inside and talk to him myself."
  4823. >With that, the unicorn finishes loading boxes, and slams down the door.
  4824. >"Alright missy. Have a nice day."
  4825. >The unicorn heads inside, leaving you to your matters.
  4826. "BUUUUUUUUUCK!"
  4827. Replies to this post:
  4828. >>4251352
  4829. >>
  4830.  The Motor City Mortimer Mouse  08/31/12(Fri)21:23 No.4251352
  4831.  
  4832. File: 1346462581757.png-(340 KB, 800x800, screwball_and_derpy_hoove(...).png)
  4833.  
  4834. >>4251207
  4835. Here we stop again.
  4836.  
  4837. What will happen to our poor Pillow Case? Will she ever get her keys back? Or will she die of embarrassment when she confronts Joe again? Will those Pegasus kids ever say no to drugs? Why does John still have yet to tap that sweet pony ass? Tune in next time while I answer all of these questions while I go along.
  4838. >>
  4839.  Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems Pancakes  08/31/12(Fri)23:40 No.4254139
  4840.  
  4841. File: 1346470800187.jpg-(23 KB, 478x473, 19.jpg)
  4842.  
  4843. >>4224357
  4844. "B-b-buh!"
  4845. > The cashier's jaw drops, and she starts muttering incoherently.
  4846. > There must be enough gems in that pile to afford a small island!
  4847. > Rarity, however, looks unperturbed.
  4848. "Is it not enough?" she asks. "Sorry, but I'm not familiar with the exchange rate in this city."
  4849. > The cashier looks back at her, dumbfounded.
  4850. "S-sorry, Miss! B-but I don't think we can accept-"
  4851. > Suddenly, a man dressed in a fancy suit pops out from the back room.
  4852. > Looks like he is the owner of the establishment.
  4853. > The cashier holds out the pile of gems towards him.
  4854. > He walks up to the cashier, and takes one diamond from the pile.
  4855. > Then, he pulls out a jewelry magnifying lens to examine it.
  4856. > His eyes widen for a moment. Then he turns to Rarity.
  4857. "Yes, we will accept this as payment," he says. "This single gemstone is more than sufficient."
  4858. > He nods to the cashier, who quickly returns the rest of the gems.
  4859. "Oh, thank goodness!" says Rarity. "I was afraid that I didn't bring enough with me."
  4860. "Pardon me," says the owner. "But you misunderstood. I meant that this diamond is sufficient payment for all of the dresses currently on display. We can have them delivered at your convenience."
  4861. "All of the dresses? Oh, no, no, no! I'm perfectly fine with just these three."
  4862. "Just those three?" cries the owner. "B-but, Miss!"
  4863. "No need to worry," says Rarity. "You may keep the change, as it were."
  4864. Replies to this post:
  4865. >>4254784
  4866. >>
  4867.  Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems Pancakes  09/01/12(Sat)00:09 No.4254784
  4868.  
  4869. >>4254139
  4870. > Upon learning that she could pay with gems, Rarity insists on visiting the rest of the shops in the area.
  4871. > Word gets around quickly, and all of the nearby shops welcome us like celebrities.
  4872. > A diamond for a pair of shoes.
  4873. > A ruby for a fancy hat.
  4874. > "Keep the change," she says again.
  4875. > Two hours later, I find myself carrying a few extra bags and packages.
  4876. "Can we go home, Rarity?" says Twilight. "I think you've bought enough for today."
  4877. "After we visit that shop. Those scarves on display are absolutely lovely!"
  4878. > She excitedly runs off ahead of us.
  4879. > Twilight sighs and turns to me.
  4880. "Sorry about having you carry all her bags."
  4881. "No problem. I'm actually surprised she didn't buy all that much."
  4882. "Yeah. Rarity is really picky when it comes to clothes and fashion."
  4883. > I decide not to mention the huge gap between the pony and human perception of value.
  4884. > We have gathered a fair amount of attention already as it is.
  4885. > But I'm fairly certain that ponies consider gemstones much less valuable than we humans do.
  4886. > Perhaps gemstones are more common in Equestria?
  4887. > In any case, I can ask Twilight about it later.
  4888. Replies to this post:
  4889. >>4255295
  4890. >>
  4891.  Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems Pancakes  09/01/12(Sat)00:37 No.4255295
  4892.  
  4893. File: 1346474266964.jpg-(17 KB, 399x374, 20.jpg)
  4894.  
  4895. >>4254784
  4896. > Twilight and I wait patiently as Rarity checks out the shop.
  4897. "I really don't get her fascination with human fashion."
  4898. > "Yeah. Neither do I."
  4899. > But now that I think about it, Twilight hasn't bought anything for herself.
  4900. > "Hmm. Why don't you look around, too? No need to hang around with me."
  4901. "That isn't necessary," she says. "I don't keep up with fashion and trends."
  4902. > "Then have Rarity pick something out for you."
  4903. "I'd rather not bother her about it."
  4904. > "Why not? She offered several times today. Rather than bother her, I'd think that she'd enjoy it."
  4905. "Y-yeah, she probably would."
  4906. > "Then?"
  4907. "..."
  4908. > Twilight sighs and lowers her voice.
  4909. "I enjoy books. I study magic. But I'm not exactly the prettiest pony in the park, you know."
  4910. > She sighs again and gives me a sad look.
  4911. > Yep, I've seen that face on a few of my students before.
  4912. > Especially the studious ones.
  4913. > "Well, that's a shame," I say aloud.
  4914. "Eh?"
  4915. > I ruffle her mane playfully and give her a gentle smile.
  4916. > "I'm no expert on ponies, but you look pretty cute to me."
  4917. > Twilight just blushes in reply.
  4918. Replies to this post:
  4919. >>4255641
  4920. >>
  4921.  Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems Pancakes  09/01/12(Sat)00:57 No.4255641
  4922.  
  4923. >>4255295
  4924. "And we're finally done!" cries Twilight. "I can't wait till we get home!"
  4925. > "Yep. Just in time for dinner. So, who's cooking tonight?"
  4926. "Rainbow volunteered today, oddly enough."
  4927. > "Rainbow Dash? Didn't she almost set the place on fire last time?"
  4928. "Don't worry. Applejack said that she'd watch over her."
  4929. > "That's good to hear. Which reminds me, last night's pasta was excellent, Rarity."
  4930. "..."
  4931. > "Uh, Rarity?"
  4932. > I turn around to see that she isn't following us.
  4933. "That's strange," says Twilight. "Why would she stop without telling us?"
  4934. > I get a bad feeling.
  4935. > Should have taught them about mobile phones.
  4936. > "Let's trace our steps and find her."
  4937. "Alright."
  4938. > Twilight and I head back the way we came.
  4939. > A suspicious man is talking to Rarity.
  4940. > Then, I see it.
  4941. > "RARITY! Get away from there!"
  4942. > But it is too late.
  4943. > A black van pulls over beside Rarity.
  4944. > The man covers her mouth and grabs her by the waist.
  4945. > He carries her inside the van. And the van drives off.
  4946. Replies to this post:
  4947. >>4255800 >>4257649 >>4261081
  4948. >>
  4949.  Pancakes  09/01/12(Sat)01:05 No.4255800
  4950.  
  4951. >>4255641
  4952. Ending here for tonight.
  4953.  
  4954. Welcome to Earth.
  4955. >>
  4956.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)02:49 No.4257649
  4957.  
  4958. File: 1346482191039.jpg-(20 KB, 206x184, it's on.jpg)
  4959.  
  4960. >>4255641
  4961. >>
  4962.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)07:21 No.4260977
  4963.  
  4964. Bump.
  4965. >>
  4966.  MrSilver  09/01/12(Sat)07:36 No.4261081
  4967.  
  4968. >>4255641
  4969. Dude wat
  4970.  
  4971. Captcha: becomes izationr
  4972. >>
  4973.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)09:44 No.4261848
  4974.  
  4975. Hello there, new writefag here. I was hoping to get some critique on my story. If you all like it. I'll write some more. If you don't thats ok also. I'll go back to the writing board
  4976.  
  4977. >It had been another long day.
  4978. >It's just a job, you think to yourself
  4979. >It's only to help through college and then start your business
  4980. >You slowly walk out of the office building where you work.
  4981. >You have been working as a desk jockey here since you started college
  4982. >The work is remedial and repetitive
  4983. >But its a job you can do for some money until you graduate
  4984. >You start to make you way back to your appartment
  4985. >The walk home is automatic by now
  4986. >You're preoccupied with thoughts about the future
  4987. >As you pass by an alleyway something happens
  4988. >Something magical
  4989. Replies to this post:
  4990. >>4261855
  4991. >>
  4992.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)09:45 No.4261855
  4993.  
  4994. >>4261848
  4995. >A bright flash and a loud crack eminate from the alleyway
  4996. >The suddeness of this knocks you out of your thoughts
  4997. >As you stare down the now dark alleyway you swear you can hear something struggling
  4998. "Hello?"
  4999. >Ok you know you heard someone say that.
  5000. "Hello, is somep0ny out there?"
  5001. >Did they say somep0ny?
  5002. >You must have heard it wrong
  5003. >None the less, sounds like someone needs some help
  5004. >You start to walk down the alley
  5005. >"Hello?" you say into the darkness
  5006. >"Do you need some help?"
  5007. >You hear some clanging coming from a nearby dumpster
  5008. "Oh good, somep0nys there, I seem to be stuck inside of this metal box."
  5009. "If you could give me a helping hoof, I would appreciate it."
  5010. >Now you know that someone had said somep0ny, but did they also say hoof?
  5011. Replies to this post:
  5012. >>4261866
  5013. >>
  5014.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)09:46 No.4261866
  5015.  
  5016. >>4261855
  5017. >You slowly approach the dumpster
  5018. >You grab onto the lid and lift it open and peer into the darkness
  5019. >In the low light you can make out the vague shape of what appears to be a four legged creature
  5020. "H-Hello..."
  5021. >The voice now sounds shakey
  5022. >You slowly extend you hand down into the dumpster
  5023. >You feel something move into it.
  5024. >Its soft and fur covered.
  5025. >You start to pull the creature out of the dumpster
  5026. >As you pull it out into the light you get a better look
  5027. >You nearly let go when you see her
  5028. >She looks like a horse
  5029. >But thats imposssible, horses don't talk
  5030. "W-what are you..."
  5031. >you lose your grip leaving her hanging half out the the dumpster
  5032. >"You can talk!
  5033. Replies to this post:
  5034. >>4261878
  5035. >>
  5036.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)09:47 No.4261878
  5037.  
  5038. >>4261866
  5039. >She seems to be able to get herself the rest of the way out of the dumpster and jumps down to the ground
  5040. >You can now make out her full appearance
  5041. >She appears to stand at around the height of your waist when on all four
  5042. >Her coat is a pale yellow, her mane is two shades of pink, you can barely make out the shape of a flower on her flank.
  5043. >"Thats impossible! Horses can't talk!"
  5044. >She appears to be taken aback by this
  5045. "I'm not a horse, I'm a pony. And you haven't answered my question."
  5046. >In all the shock, you nearly forgot the question she asked you.
  5047. >What are you...
  5048. >"I'm human..."
  5049. "What's a human?"
  5050. >You can't think straight, you still can't get over the impossibility of the situation.
  5051. >You are standing in an alleyway, in the middle of the night, talking to a pony that you pulled out of a dumpster
  5052. >There was only one logical explination for it all
  5053. >You job has finally cost you your sanity
  5054. Replies to this post:
  5055. >>4261885
  5056. >>
  5057.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)09:48 No.4261885
  5058.  
  5059. >>4261878
  5060. >Why not play along...
  5061. >"Humans, I guess we can be described as intelligent, talking apes."
  5062. >Yeah that sounds good
  5063. "Ok, where am I at? This doesn't look like Ponyville. Is this even Equestria?"
  5064. >Equestria, right...
  5065. >"Your in Chicago. It is a city in America. On a planet called Earth."
  5066. >Your starting to have some fun with this, and why not, if you're going to go insane might as well have some fun along the way.
  5067. >She looks around nervously
  5068. >"Whats you name, and whats with the tattoo on you flank"
  5069. >She tilts her head to the side when you metion the word tattoo
  5070. "My name is Roseluck, and what do you mean tattoo?"
  5071. >"The rose, right there." You point to the rose
  5072. "Oh that's my cutie mark. It means my special talent is growing and selling roses. I just love flowers."
  5073. >Cutie marks, special talents, roseluck...
  5074. >Yep you're definetly headed to the loony bin.
  5075. >You look at your watch, its getting late.
  5076. >You don't want to leave her out her, even if she was a figment of your insane mind.
  5077. >"It's starting to get late, you shouldn't stay out here at night like this."
  5078. >"Come with me back to my apartment. We can figure everything out in the morning."
  5079. >She slowly nods and follows you out of the alley
  5080. Replies to this post:
  5081. >>4261895
  5082. >>
  5083.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)09:49 No.4261895
  5084.  
  5085. >>4261885
  5086. >The rest of the walk back to your apartement was silent.
  5087. >You climb the stair case leading to your apartment
  5088. >Behind you the sound of hooves reminds you of your delusion
  5089. >You open the door and let yourself and Roseluck into your studio apartement
  5090. >Your apartement is spacious and kind of bare.
  5091. >You have set up some temporary walls to make the place feel like it has seperate rooms
  5092. >You have your semi-combined kitchen/living room, some office space, and your bedroom.
  5093. >You lead Rosebud over to your couch in the living room.
  5094. >"you can sleep here tonight, I'll get you some blankets and a pillow"
  5095. >"The kitchen is over there, if your hungry I think I have a salad in the refirgerator."
  5096. >You walk over to your bedroom and grab a few blankets and an extra pillow.
  5097. >When you return you find roseluck already half-asleep
  5098. >You place the pillow under her head and cover her with the blankets
  5099. >As you do so you catch her scent in the air
  5100. >She smells of roses
  5101. >You quickly undress and crawl into bed
  5102. >Your final thoughts as you drift off to sleep are of your delusions and the smell of roses.
  5103.  
  5104. Well thats the end of it for now, let me know what you think
  5105. Replies to this post:
  5106. >>4261960 >>4264700 >>4266010 >>4268926
  5107. >>
  5108.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)09:56 No.4261960
  5109.  
  5110. >>4261895
  5111. You should make a new religion and let us worship you, there isn't enough Roselove
  5112. Replies to this post:
  5113. >>4262021 >>4266344
  5114. >>
  5115.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)10:03 No.4262021
  5116.  
  5117. File: 1346508221025.jpg-(259 KB, 809x747, roseluck_by_chibi_jen_hen(...).jpg)
  5118.  
  5119. >>4261960
  5120. New Religion created
  5121. Name: Order of the Rose
  5122. Now accepting new members
  5123.  
  5124. Pic related: Our benevolent Deity
  5125. Replies to this post:
  5126. >>4262076 >>4262227
  5127. >>
  5128.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)10:10 No.4262076
  5129.  
  5130. >>4262021
  5131. Do I need a soul for this? A lot of religion ask for souls nowadays. Not that I wouldn't give mine in a heartbeat, it's just a nice thing to know.
  5132. Replies to this post:
  5133. >>4262148 >>4262227
  5134. >>
  5135.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)10:18 No.4262148
  5136.  
  5137. >>4262076
  5138. No soul needed, however it does help with the conversion process, so it is recrommended.
  5139. Replies to this post:
  5140. >>4262180 >>4262227
  5141. >>
  5142.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)10:24 No.4262180
  5143.  
  5144. File: 1346509468880.png-(448 KB, 1000x849, 1332456425259.png)
  5145.  
  5146. >>4262148
  5147. >mfw Ditsy delivers our souls to Roseluck
  5148. Replies to this post:
  5149. >>4262227
  5150. >>
  5151.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)10:31 No.4262227
  5152.  
  5153. File: 1346509904261.jpg-(147 KB, 726x590, wut.jpg)
  5154.  
  5155. >>4262021
  5156. >>4262076
  5157. >>4262148
  5158. >>4262180
  5159. >>
  5160.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)14:25 No.4264454
  5161.  
  5162. bumpy afternoon we're having, isn't it
  5163. >>
  5164.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)14:51 No.4264700
  5165.  
  5166. >>4261895
  5167. I am intrigued. You may continue
  5168. Replies to this post:
  5169. >>4266344
  5170. >>
  5171.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)16:40 No.4266010
  5172.  
  5173. >>4261895
  5174. I liked it, continue please.
  5175. Replies to this post:
  5176. >>4266344
  5177. >>
  5178.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)17:03 No.4266344
  5179.  
  5180. >>4261960
  5181. >>4264700
  5182. >>4266010
  5183. Ok, then I shall write the next part of the Roseluck chronicles. And just to prove how much of a novice I am. I just noticed a few errors I made in the first draft. (sigh) I need more coffee.
  5184.  
  5185. Next part should be up soon.
  5186. >>
  5187.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)19:35 No.4268342
  5188.  
  5189. File: 1346542527124.png-(55 KB, 342x313, Shelikescloth.png)
  5190.  
  5191. >>4115172
  5192. I like music. And, um... cloth.
  5193. Replies to this post:
  5194. >>4269493
  5195. >>
  5196.  The Roseluck Chronicles pt.2: The Next Morning Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)20:17 No.4268926
  5197.  
  5198. >>4261895
  5199. >You awake from a restful sleep
  5200. >As you slowly stretch one thought goes through your mind
  5201. >Roseluck
  5202. >It must have been a dream
  5203. >There is no such thing as talking ponies from a land called Equestria
  5204. >You were really tired
  5205. >You must have walked all the way home, collapsed into your bed, and dreamnt the whole thing
  5206. >It is the only explination
  5207. >It's a good idea for a t.v. show though
  5208. >Maybe you can wirte a story about it and sell it and make millions
  5209. >Yeah...Right...
  5210. >You roll out of bed and quickly throw on some shorts
  5211. >Time to enjoy a nice Saturday morning
  5212. >You walk into your kitchen not even taking a glance at the couch
  5213. >You pour yourself a cup of coffee that the machine has already made for you
  5214. >You turn around and lean against the counter and look out into the living area
  5215. >Thats when you see it
  5216. Replies to this post:
  5217. >>4268945
  5218. >>
  5219.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)20:18 No.4268945
  5220.  
  5221. >>4268926
  5222. >The blanket
  5223. >The pillow
  5224. >The Pony
  5225. >You really have lost it
  5226. >You feel yourself go numb as the coffee cup slips from you hand
  5227. >It falls and crashes into the floor, shattering upon impact
  5228. >The sound of breaking glass wakes up the sleeping Mare
  5229. >She's up with a start and looking around at her surroundings
  5230. >Her eyes finally settle on you
  5231. >She looks just as shocked as you feel
  5232. "So it is real then?"
  5233. >You slowly feel yourself nod
  5234. "I'm not in Equestria, I'm on Earth."
  5235. >Again you nod
  5236. "And you're a human."
  5237. >You nod again
  5238. >"And you're a talking pony"
  5239. >Your voice sounds foriegn and distant
  5240. >Pull yourself together Anon
  5241. >You have a talking pony inside your apartment
  5242. "You never told me you name last night?"
  5243. >"Wha..." You barely comprend the question
  5244. >For some reason she speaks slower
  5245. "Your name..."
  5246. >Work brain, work! What is our name?!
  5247. >You finally manage to utter your name.
  5248. >"Anon"
  5249. >She nods and continues to stare at you
  5250. Replies to this post:
  5251. >>4268958
  5252. >>
  5253.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)20:19 No.4268958
  5254.  
  5255. >>4268945
  5256. "Well, what now?"
  5257. >Now, I call a doctor to get my head examined...
  5258. >A talking pony, in my apartment
  5259. >For some reason your brain can't get passed with thought
  5260. >"Are there more of your kind?"
  5261. >Stupid question anon
  5262. "Well yes, equestria is filled with all different kind of ponies"
  5263. >"Different kinds of ponies" you repeat slowly
  5264. "Well yes, I'm an earth pony, there are also Unicorns, Pegasi, and Alicorns"
  5265. >You nod slowly, trying to take in all the information
  5266. >You walk over and sit down the couch next to her
  5267. >The smell of roses fills you nostrils again
  5268. >For some reason the smell is calming
  5269. >To take a deep breath, lean back, and carefully listen
  5270. "Unicorns have horns, which they are able to cast magic from."
  5271. "Pegasi have wings, and are able to control the weather."
  5272. "Alicorns have both, most are considered roalty."
  5273. >You start to slowly digest the situtation
  5274. >"And all of you have these cutie marks, that denote you special ability..."
  5275. "Your starting to catch on!"
  5276. >Right, I'm stating to catch on.
  5277. >Never mind that this is insane and impossible
  5278. >"How did you get here?"
  5279. >She hangs her head and shakes it
  5280. "I don't know, one minutes I'm taking care of my flower garden, the next I'm stuck inside of that metal box."
  5281. >All of the events from last night are in clear focus in your mind
  5282. Replies to this post:
  5283. >>4268968
  5284. >>
  5285.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)20:19 No.4268968
  5286.  
  5287. >>4268958
  5288. >It finally dawns upon you that this might all be happening
  5289. >Your mind still needs one last thing to be sure
  5290. >Your hand slowly reaches out to touch her
  5291. >At first she recoils from your outstreched hand
  5292. >But then she moves closely towards it.
  5293. >Her mane feels like silk between your fingers.
  5294. >Slowly you start to pet her mane
  5295. >with each pass, she press herself against your hand
  5296. >You slowly move your hand down to her back
  5297. >She is soft
  5298. >So very soft
  5299. >She arches her back against your touch.
  5300. >You feel something begin to build inside of you
  5301. >What is this feeling?
  5302. >Woah! No, you can't have that feeling.
  5303. >She's...she's a pony
  5304. >A talking pony
  5305. >But still an animal
  5306. >You remove you hand from her
  5307. >Shes looks at you in a mixture of surprise and disappointment
  5308. "Is something wrong?"
  5309. >No, nothings wrong...
  5310. >I just had strong feelings for a talking pony that magicaly appeared in a dumpster last night
  5311. >Yes, there is something terribly wrong
  5312. >But, all you can utter is "No, not at all."
  5313. Replies to this post:
  5314. >>4268982
  5315. >>
  5316.  Strelnikov !TXwGaUHWDw  09/01/12(Sat)20:20 No.4268970
  5317.  
  5318. WHAT IS GOING ON IN HERE?
  5319. >>
  5320.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)20:20 No.4268982
  5321.  
  5322. >>4268968
  5323. >A sudden thought crosses your mind
  5324. >"Do you think that you're the only one that came to this world?"
  5325. >She looks at you in puzzeled
  5326. >She brings her to front hooves up and shrugs
  5327. >"Well if there is more of you here, the news will have caught wind of something."
  5328. >You reach over and grab the remote and flip on the T.V.
  5329. >You surf the channels to the nearst news station
  5330. >It looks like your supicions were right.
  5331. >Ponies
  5332. >Ponies Everywhere
  5333. >As the news reports it, last night at the same time around the globe, ponies appeared
  5334. >They all came in a pallet of different colors.
  5335. >Earth ponies, unicorns, pegasi, a few alicorns.
  5336. >All each having a unique cutie mark
  5337. >"Well, looks like I'm not going crazy after all."
  5338. >Roseluck looks at you with a tilted head
  5339. "You thought you were going crazy?"
  5340. >"Well yes, how insane is it that there are talking ponies
  5341. "How insane is it that there are talking monkies..."
  5342. >Touche...
  5343. >"Are you hungry?"
  5344. >Almost as if on cue her stomach growls
  5345. >She makes the funniest and maybe cutest face you have ever seen...
  5346. >No, not those feelings again...
  5347. >"Let me get you that salad. It looks like we have alot to discuss."
  5348. Replies to this post:
  5349. >>4269012
  5350. >>
  5351.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)20:22 No.4269012
  5352.  
  5353. >>4268982
  5354. Ok that is it for now, will be back maybe this afternoon with some more.
  5355.  
  5356. Critisism is always welcome
  5357. Replies to this post:
  5358. >>4269503 >>4277372
  5359. >>
  5360.  Mr. Blue  09/01/12(Sat)20:51 No.4269493
  5361.  
  5362. File: 1346547101641.png-(152 KB, 567x517, 1346204807333.png)
  5363.  
  5364. Ok. As much as I'd like to catch up and read some of the awesome things that have appeared in my absence, I should probably just get writing right now.
  5365.  
  5366. >>4268342
  5367. >Did that dude just tell you she likes cloth?
  5368. if someone draws that scene for Teen Girl Squad and replaces So-and-So with a stick figure version of Pillow I'll make that the head of the next thread. Seriously.
  5369. Replies to this post:
  5370. >>4269655
  5371. >>
  5372.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)20:52 No.4269503
  5373.  
  5374. >>4269012
  5375. The sexual attraction came too soon.
  5376. TOO too soon.
  5377. At this stage it should feel like petting a dog or a horse, also neither Rose nor Anon should be this prepared or ready or even this CALM while explaining their respective species' attributes.
  5378. Make it innocent for longer please!
  5379. Replies to this post:
  5380. >>4269765 >>4269792
  5381. >>
  5382.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)21:02 No.4269655
  5383.  
  5384. >>4269493
  5385. Please, Blue. Been waiting for days for moar Pillow Case.
  5386. >>
  5387.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)21:10 No.4269765
  5388.  
  5389. >>4269503
  5390. This. I feel that if something like this were to happen the shock would take at least a week to recede enough for feelings to be felt. Maybe if this had happened to one of us it could be this quick, but a random person would need a while to digest it. Still enjoyed reading it though. Keep up the good work.
  5391.  
  5392. Should I screencap these two parts or is it in a pastebin somewhere?
  5393. Replies to this post:
  5394. >>4269834
  5395. >>
  5396.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)21:12 No.4269792
  5397.  
  5398. >>4269503
  5399. Ur probably right, I'll try to back it off a bit when writing the future installments, thanks for the feed back
  5400. >>
  5401.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)21:15 No.4269834
  5402.  
  5403. >>4269765
  5404. Screencap if you want, I prewrite it all in notepad before I post, so it's saved on my computer.
  5405. Replies to this post:
  5406. >>4270023
  5407. >>
  5408.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)21:26 No.4270023
  5409.  
  5410. File: 1346549172030.png-(237 KB, 1067x2100, The Roseluck Chronicles pt.1.png)
  5411.  
  5412. >>4269834
  5413. Okay, here's part 1.
  5414. Replies to this post:
  5415. >>4270034 >>4270087
  5416. >>
  5417.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)21:26 No.4270034
  5418.  
  5419. File: 1346549207371.png-(228 KB, 707x2408, The Roseluck Chronicles p(...).png)
  5420.  
  5421. >>4270023
  5422. And part 2.
  5423. Replies to this post:
  5424. >>4270087
  5425. >>
  5426.  Anonymous  09/01/12(Sat)21:29 No.4270087
  5427.  
  5428. >>4270023
  5429. >>4270034
  5430. Thank you anon
  5431. >>
  5432.  Anonymous  09/02/12(Sun)00:12 No.4273104
  5433.  
  5434. bump
  5435. >>
  5436.  Anonymous  09/02/12(Sun)04:59 No.4277372
  5437.  
  5438. >>4269012
  5439. writefag of chronicles of roseluck here, ran into some writers block, probably not going to have something this evening, maybe something tommorow morning
  5440. >>
  5441.  Anonymous  09/02/12(Sun)09:04 No.4279117
  5442.  
  5443. 4-hour bump.
  5444. >>
  5445.  Anonymous  09/02/12(Sun)12:13 No.4280948
  5446.  
  5447. bump
  5448. >>
  5449.  Anonymous  09/02/12(Sun)17:20 No.4284990
  5450.  
  5451. bump
  5452. >>
  5453.  Mortimer Mouse  09/02/12(Sun)17:43 No.4285484
  5454.  
  5455. File: 1346622238237.png-(418 KB, 1024x585, a_new_special_kind_of_der(...).png)
  5456.  
  5457. Hey guys. I'm going off and won't be able to post for a few days. But when I get back I'll make sure to write SOMETHING.
  5458. Replies to this post:
  5459. >>4287622
  5460. >>
  5461.  Anonymous  09/02/12(Sun)19:59 No.4287622
  5462.  
  5463. >>4285484
  5464. AWWWW!
  5465.  
  5466. Well ok then! See you in a few days!
  5467. >>
  5468.  Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)00:05 No.4291618
  5469.  
  5470. page 9 bump
  5471. >>
  5472.  Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)00:06 No.4291624
  5473.  
  5474. Anyone writing anything tonight?
  5475. Replies to this post:
  5476. >>4293066
  5477. >>
  5478.  Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)01:22 No.4293066
  5479.  
  5480. >>4291624
  5481. Writefag for the Roseluck Chronicles, Im working on the next part of mine, Just kind of running into some major writers block with it. Mainly trying to fix the pacing issue that appeared in Pt.2 i "might" have something later. but idk at this point.
  5482.  
  5483. also bump
  5484. >>
  5485.  Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)02:37 No.4294148
  5486.  
  5487. I'm liking the story so far Mr. Blue, please continue
  5488. >>
  5489.  The Roseluck Chronicles pt.3: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)05:52 No.4296138
  5490.  
  5491. I wrote something! Took me long enough! Anyways Time for Part 3 of The Roseluck Chronicles. Enjoy!
  5492.  
  5493. >You get up off the sofa and make your way to the kitchen
  5494. >As you walk into the kitchen you nearly step on a piece of your broken coffee cup
  5495. >Ok, step 1 clean up mess from coffee
  5496. >You slowly bend down and start picking up the larger pieces of the cup
  5497. >Your thoughts drift off
  5498. >There is a talking pony sitting on your couch
  5499. >She smells of roses
  5500. >Her and a bunch of ponies from the land of Equestria have magicaly appeared in your world
  5501. >No matter how real it feels
  5502. >No matter how you try and logic it out
  5503. >It still doesn't feel right
  5504. >Maybe it isn't, maybe your still dreaming
  5505. >Thats it, this is still a dream
  5506. >A really complex and vivid dream
  5507. >But a dream none the less
  5508. >You finish picking up the pieces of glass and you throw them away
  5509. >You grab a few paper towls and start to mop up the spilt coffee
  5510. >>
  5511.  The Roseluck Chronicles pt.3: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)05:53 No.4296143
  5512.  
  5513. >Your mind continues
  5514. >What about "that"
  5515. >You stop moping up
  5516. >You take a look over at the mare sitting on your couch
  5517. >She is engrossed in the news about her people on earth
  5518. >You go back to your cleaning
  5519. >It was nothing
  5520. >Are you sure about that...
  5521. >You slowly start to push "those" thoughts to the back of your mind
  5522. >Yes, I'm sure any kind of feelings I have can be explained by this being a dream
  5523. >She is nothing but an animal, an intelligent talking animal
  5524. >My feelings need to reflect as much.
  5525. >Plus at any moment, I'll wake up and this dream will fade away into distant memory
  5526. >I might as well enjoy this dream while I have the chance.
  5527. >You finish cleaning up the coffee
  5528. >You walk over to the refrigerator and pull out the salad
  5529. >Do ponies even like salad?
  5530. >>
  5531.  The Roseluck Chronicles pt.3: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)05:55 No.4296153
  5532.  
  5533. >You look up from the salad to ask and notice that roseluck is already staring at you.
  5534. >She looks worried
  5535. >"Is something wrong?"
  5536. "It looks like chaos out there"
  5537. >You nod in agreement
  5538. >"Talking ponies appear overnight, people aren't going to handle it well."
  5539. "What about you? You seem to be handling it just fine."
  5540. >You nod to yourself
  5541. >Yes what about me
  5542. >Whatever you do don't tell her you think it's a dream
  5543. >It might end it early
  5544. >"I don't know, maybe its because I watch alot of sci-fi movies..."
  5545. >"Not to say that I'm not freaked out about this, its just maybe I can handle it..."
  5546. >"I mean there's a talking pony in my appartment..."
  5547. >"And talking ponies just randomly appeared all over the world..."
  5548. >The more you talk the more light headed you get
  5549. >"And now its all over the news...
  5550. >"And I think the realization of the whole situation just hit me..."
  5551. >Houston we have a problem...
  5552. >>
  5553.  The Roseluck Chronicles pt.3: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)05:56 No.4296158
  5554.  
  5555. >"Your a talking pony, from another world..."
  5556. >"The whole idea of it is impossible...
  5557. >"Insane..."
  5558. "Didn't we just go over that?"
  5559. >"I think... I wasn't... This isn't..."
  5560. "I don't understand it either..."
  5561. >"Im just having a hard time now...
  5562. >"Talking about it doesn't seem to be helping any..."
  5563. "The talking box says that everyp0ny is gathering at some park downtown."
  5564. >Park, downtown right...
  5565. >"Which park did they say?"
  5566. "Millennium Park."
  5567. >Ok relatively close by.
  5568. "I would like to see if any of my friends are down there, maybe Mayor Mare or even Princess Celestia."
  5569. >Mayor Mare? Princess Celestia? Who?
  5570. >"I'll walk you down there... I could use some fresh air..."
  5571. >"You might want to eat first before we go."
  5572. >You can hear her stomach growl across the room
  5573. "Good Idea."
  5574. >>
  5575.  Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)05:59 No.4296179
  5576.  
  5577. Ok end of part 3. I know its a little shorter than the first 2. Anyways most of this I spent trying to explain away some problems that developed in Part 2 due to the fact I have a pacing problem with my writing.
  5578.  
  5579. I kind of feel the scene may come off a little awkward due to the fact the character had come off level headed and then decended into insanity pretty quickly there.
  5580.  
  5581. Let me know what you think. Constructive Criticism is always appreciated.
  5582. Replies to this post:
  5583. >>4296220
  5584. >>
  5585.  Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)06:05 No.4296220
  5586.  
  5587. File: 1346666718259.png-(123 KB, 756x1463, The-Roseluck-Chronicles-p(...).png)
  5588.  
  5589. >>4296179
  5590. Didn't seem that awkward to me, but then again its 6AM and I've been up all night. Maybe I'll think of something after some sleep. Thanks for writing this, looking forward to the next part.
  5591. Replies to this post:
  5592. >>4296257
  5593. >>
  5594.  Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)06:11 No.4296257
  5595.  
  5596. >>4296220
  5597. Thanks for the cap mate and the critique I appreciate it
  5598. >>
  5599.  Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)09:49 No.4297788
  5600.  
  5601. Bumping up to the top then getting some sleep, goodnight PiE, see u in the morning
  5602. >>
  5603.  Pancakes  09/03/12(Mon)10:48 No.4298299
  5604.  
  5605. If there is still interest in this, I'll create a new thread tomorrow. We're getting close to bump limit.
  5606.  
  5607. No update today because Monday.
  5608. Replies to this post:
  5609. >>4299035
  5610. >>
  5611.  yes. LeStrange  09/03/12(Mon)11:04 No.4298427
  5612.  
  5613. File: 1346684658275.jpg-(23 KB, 500x549, 1346137998178.jpg)
  5614.  
  5615. please do, include past written stories as well please.
  5616. >>
  5617.  Loscil !LoscilARtE  09/03/12(Mon)12:12 No.4299035
  5618.  
  5619. >>4298299
  5620. I'm interested. Link it here when you do.
  5621. Replies to this post:
  5622. >>4301019
  5623. >>
  5624.  Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)15:15 No.4301019
  5625.  
  5626. >>4299035
  5627. ditto
  5628. >>
  5629.  Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)15:21 No.4301081
  5630.  
  5631. Oh fuck yeah this is still alive.
  5632. On a related note.
  5633. HOW is it still alive.
  5634. Replies to this post:
  5635. >>4302644 >>4304101
  5636. >>
  5637.  Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)16:58 No.4302644
  5638.  
  5639. >>4301081
  5640. Easy. A small but dedicated, fan and writefag base that want nothing more to see this thread succeed.
  5641.  
  5642. At least that's what I would like to believe.
  5643. Replies to this post:
  5644. >>4304101
  5645. >>
  5646.  Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)18:28 No.4304101
  5647.  
  5648. >>4301081
  5649. >>4302644
  5650. Yep. Same way Dark Equestria, Fat Pony, Macro/Micro Ponies, and Pony TF've stayed alive. MLP's not too fast of a board for this sort of thing to work. Just takes some dedication.
  5651. And a small or silent fanbase; AiE is so filled with circlejerk and banter that they'll go through several threads a day at times.
  5652.  
  5653. Protip for writefags: Write updates to your story before you post, then post bits of it over time.
  5654. If you can get your readers to expect that sort of thing (maybe even assume you're writing real-time), you'll be able to make your thread look better by making more content bumps, instead of giving us swaths of empty "bump" and "write more" posts and then bursts of awesome writing.
  5655. Replies to this post:
  5656. >>4308512 >>4311719
  5657. >>
  5658.  none to pleased Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)21:04 No.4306442
  5659.  
  5660. File: 1346720658757.png-(158 KB, 600x568, why.png)
  5661.  
  5662. nigger wat
  5663. >>
  5664.  Anonymous  09/03/12(Mon)22:55 No.4308512
  5665.  
  5666. >>4304101
  5667. I dig what this cat is puttin down
  5668. >>
  5669.  Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth Mr. Blue  09/04/12(Tue)00:29 No.4310426
  5670.  
  5671. File: 1346732952475.png-(199 KB, 800x800, 1346082094253.png)
  5672.  
  5673. You guys ready for this? I don't think you're ready for this. I know I'm not. I'm on a roll tonight! getting things done!
  5674.  
  5675. >>4161824
  5676. “No it’s not working. Try it without the hat.”
  5677. “I think the hat looks cute, don’t listen to her Casey, keep it on.
  5678. >I don’t like this dress either way. The hat isn’t even a factor.
  5679. >It’s like, why are all the prettiest clothes so uncomfortable?
  5680. >Humans had a lot of clothes and wore them all the time, they couldn’t all be this bad.
  5681. > “I like the hat but not the dress. Can I just have the hat?”
  5682. “If you want to be taken seriously in this world hon you need to at least be comfortable wearing casual clothes.”
  5683. >That’s the problem Strawberry.
  5684. >I pull off the dress and they both cringe a little.
  5685. >Why are humans so weird? And yes, berry counts as a human in this case.
  5686. >It’s not like I was wearing anything before, but they insist on making me go into that little closet room to change.
  5687. “Not entirely sure on your philosophy Jam,” Strawberry’s human friend says, “but I can’t argue with clothes shopping. So I’ll just pretend I agree.”
  5688. >I look at the hooded jacket the human girl is wearing.
  5689. >That seems much more comfortable.
  5690. > “Do they make anything like that in pony sizes?” I gesture with my hoof.
  5691. “Sure,” Emily says, “I think they’re over this way”
  5692. >She leads us through the maze of clothes, further from where they kept the dresses Strawberry liked.
  5693. Replies to this post:
  5694. >>4310454
  5695. >>
  5696.  Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth Mr. Blue  09/04/12(Tue)00:30 No.4310454
  5697.  
  5698. >>4310426
  5699. >I see more comfortable looking human clothes here.
  5700. >She finds a rack with the magenta “Mares” sign that was common in distinguishing pony clothes here.
  5701. >Strawberry had told me that some stores had the pony clothes all in one section but that usually meant they didn’t have very much of it.
  5702. >It would be easier though. If we didn’t have a tall human with us to see over the racks I don’t know how we’d find anything.
  5703. >At least the pony clothes racks weren’t so tall, but that was mostly because the clothes on them were smaller anyway.
  5704. > “Ooh! I love the colors on this sweater.” It’s so very blue. I knew a pony that was this color once. He was nice.
  5705. >But I never met a pony who was this soft before.
  5706. >How did they make the cotton here so fluffy? I could just rub my face in it all day.
  5707. “PC, stop rubbing your face on all the clothes!”
  5708. > “But it’s sooooo soft Strawberry.”
  5709. “Oh, so that’s what the cutie mark is for.” Emily says.
  5710. >I blush with embarrassment and stop. But now I feel wrong. It was so soft! I need to wear it!
  5711. “No you don’t want that one,” Strawberry says as I hook my roof around the hanger.
  5712. > “Why not?”
  5713. “Because it’s way too big for you, and it doesn't have wing holes.”
  5714. “I always think it’s weird how they organize some of the racks.” Emily muses, rummaging through the clothes higher up. She stands on the tips of her shoes to reach and pulls something down. “Have you ever noticed it Jam? Whenever they get the chance they put the pegasus stuff on the higher shelves.”
  5715. Replies to this post:
  5716. >>4310478
  5717. >>
  5718.  Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth Mr. Blue  09/04/12(Tue)00:31 No.4310478
  5719.  
  5720. >>4310454
  5721. > “Yeah, it’s not like we can fly up there with their ‘no flying in the store’ signs all over the place.”
  5722. > Seriously, those signs were getting annoying. And apparently there were altitude limits too depending on where you lived.
  5723. > So I wouldn’t get to fly around those buildings tall buildings without a permit or something, and you needed to live here to get them.
  5724. >Though Emily said there’s less human sky traffic in a lot of places now anyway with pegasus powered carriages and stuff becoming popular.
  5725. >Which is sad because I wanted to see a helicopter. They sound really cool. Even with the spinning blades of death.
  5726. >But apparently getting a job as a pegasus on earth is easier than for unicorns even.
  5727. >Even with most of the weather being ‘untamable’.
  5728. >It was all about being able to deliver small amounts of stuff faster and more direct than other human transport
  5729. >and without using gasoline or anything like most cars did.
  5730. >I don’t think I could ever do that though. I’m too small for a one pony cart and I’m always the weak link on the team pulls.
  5731. >I’d hate to be a delivery mare but I don’t know what else I could do here.
  5732. >I was asking Emily and Berry about it on the way over. Emily seemed to know more somehow.
  5733. >I think she mentioned some pegasus friend of hers. I hope she didn’t mean coltfirend...
  5734. >Except I’m not judgemental! Stop being judgmental Pillow Case! You’re a terrible friend!
  5735. >Ponies can be with whoever they want! You’ve been alone since graduation. Stop judging others!
  5736. >Oh Celestia I’ve been alone since graduation...
  5737. Replies to this post:
  5738. >>4310519
  5739. >>
  5740.  Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth Mr. Blue  09/04/12(Tue)00:33 No.4310519
  5741.  
  5742. >>4310478
  5743. “Try this one on Casey. It looks about your size. A ‘pXS’?”
  5744. >Pegasus, Extra Small, with fries. That’s me.
  5745. > “Yes. Aww, what a pretty stripes.”
  5746. > I take the sweater from Emily and it instantly becomes fused to me face.
  5747. >OMIGOSHTHISISTHESOFTESTTHINGEVEROMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSSSHHH!!!
  5748. “Pillow..?”
  5749. “Casey are you ok?”
  5750. > “Yes.” I say, my voice muffled in the fabric.
  5751. “Why don’t you, you know, try it on..? Or at least stop breathing into it please”
  5752. > “Sorry Berry.” I say to her, “It’s just so very soft.”
  5753. > I hug it one more time before putting it over my head.
  5754. >Once my hooves are through the sleeves and my wings find the holes I start hugging myself instead.
  5755. > So. Very. Soft!
  5756. >I squee with joy and Emily starts laughing along.
  5757. >Strawberry rolls her eyes and smiles.
  5758. “What am I gonna do with you Casey.”
  5759. > “Lend me some more American bits. I still need to get what I brought exchanged.”
  5760. “They’re called Dollars. Bits are just Equestrian currency, no other country uses that.”
  5761. >Always lecturing ponies Berry, lighten up. Wear softer clothes instead of itchy dresses.
  5762. >I need more clothes now.
  5763. Replies to this post:
  5764. >>4311449
  5765. >>
  5766.  Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth Mr. Blue  09/04/12(Tue)01:12 No.4311449
  5767.  
  5768. >>4310519
  5769. Emily pulls down something else from the out of reach rack. “Why don’t they make anything like this in human sizes?”
  5770. >Maybe because you don’t have fur on your arms? Or do you?
  5771. >I swear I saw a human with fur on his arms. There wasn’t much but I thought they were supposed to be balder than that.
  5772. > “Is it my size at least?”
  5773. “No but I think there might be another one that is. Hold on.”
  5774. >Her fingers have trouble grabbing the edge of the hanger.
  5775. >She’s not very tall compared to most other humans I’ve seen. I think she’d actually be just as big as me if she were a pony.
  5776. >That makes me feel more comfortable around her.
  5777. >Even if I might maybe be sort of, a little bit, maybe, still,kinda, afraid a human will eat me...
  5778. >I blame you granny. You crazy old mare.
  5779. “It might be a little loose but I think this one will fit fine.”
  5780. >I take the weird hooded vest from her.
  5781. >It’s such a small silly looking thing.
  5782. >It’s not as soft as the thin sweater but it’s still a nice cotton.
  5783. >I pull it on over my head and put my limbs through the appropriate holes.
  5784. >I think I meant to take off the sweater first but I’m going to pretend I didn’t.
  5785. >It’s half a size too big but it works with the sweater.
  5786. >I try out the hood and play around with the drawstrings.
  5787. Replies to this post:
  5788. >>4311496
  5789. >>
  5790.  Mr. Blue  09/04/12(Tue)01:15 No.4311496
  5791.  
  5792. File: 1346735703627.png-(99 KB, 800x800, 1346078870253.png)
  5793.  
  5794. >>4311449
  5795. >Why don’t they make these in Equestria, they would be perfect for flying.
  5796. >And it’s so soft and warm...
  5797. “Casey, are you ok in there?”
  5798. > “Yes, but I’m never coming out. You can’t make me.”
  5799. >Emily laughs and Strawberry sighs.
  5800. “Come on Jam. You’re the same about those dresses. Casey just has a softer side. You should get something like that, maybe show off that cutie mark for once.” Emily lowers her voice a little, “And I bet Michael would like it if you showed a little more tail too.”
  5801. >I’m so glad they can’t see me blushing inside this hood. Though I bet Strawberry is even more red, if that’s even possible for her.
  5802. >She’s sort of already red.
  5803. “You know how I feel about... that, Emily.”
  5804. “Sorry Jam, I think you overreact though. I don’t know many ponies who worry about clothes as much as you, but that’s part of what I like about you.”
  5805. >I pull the hood down. “So can I get these then? Are we done looking at clothes because I know what I want now.”
  5806. Strawberry Jam smiles smugly. “Oh we’ve barely even started Pillow! We still have more shopping to do before you’re ready for life on earth.”
  5807. >I guess that’s not too bad. I only have on condition.
  5808. > “Okay but I’m not taking these off.”
  5809. >She and Emily both start giggling together.
  5810. “Fine then!” Berry says, “Let’s go look at socks!”
  5811. >What.
  5812. Replies to this post:
  5813. >>4311520
  5814. >>
  5815.  Mr. Blue  09/04/12(Tue)01:16 No.4311520
  5816.  
  5817. >>4311496
  5818. I think that's it for tonight. If I get any more down before turning in I'll save it for later.
  5819. goodnight /mlp/!
  5820. >>
  5821.  Anonymous  09/04/12(Tue)01:26 No.4311719
  5822.  
  5823. >>4304101
  5824.  
  5825. Helps to also install 4ChanX if you haven't already. It comes with a nifty 1500 character limit count so you don't overtype and have to edit blindly.
  5826. >>
  5827.  Anonymous  09/04/12(Tue)01:37 No.4311919
  5828.  
  5829. Hey guys, dropping in to say that I'm going to be dumping a CMC-centered story in the next thread. Hopefully you'll all like it. I certainly have been liking writing it.
  5830. Replies to this post:
  5831. >>4313844
  5832. >>
  5833.  Anonymous  09/04/12(Tue)03:50 No.4313844
  5834.  
  5835. >>4311919
  5836. >next thread
  5837. Shit, yeah, um. This is gonna be the 495th post. Someone oughta make a new thread sooner, rather than later.
  5838. CMC writefag, I nominate you.
  5839. I don't write here; I'm not doing it.
  5840. >>
  5841.  Anonymous  09/04/12(Tue)08:30 No.4316221
  5842.  
  5843. >>4316204
  5844. >>4316204
  5845. >>4316204
  5846. >>4316204
  5847. >>4316204
  5848.  
  5849. Writefag for Roseluck Chronicles here. The new thread is up!
  5850. Replies to this post:
  5851. >>4316367
  5852. >>
  5853.  Pancakes  09/04/12(Tue)08:47 No.4316367
  5854.  
  5855. >>4316221
  5856. Links bugged.
  5857.  
  5858. New Thread:
  5859. >>4316204
  5860. >>4316204
  5861. >>4316204
  5862.  
  5863. General Info:
  5864. >>4316334
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