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Do or deer: Call of the wild stars

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  1. Summary: The main6 meet a deer called Aidan Smoothleaf, with his cat Pangur Ban. He shows them the deer civilization and have some fun before the constellation festival with the macguffin begins.
  2. The festival gets interrupted by a hungry shapeshifting constellation which absorbs the celestial dust, countless
  3. deers and steals an artefact giving it access to the constellations.
  4. Main6 and Smoothleaf go to defeat the beast with help from the king's guards and a special chant if the creature isn't stopped then every star will die. They go in the astral plane by turning into phantoms. There the rest get captured but not Fluttershy, Twilight and Smoothleaf. They use the chant and various tricks available in that world, till Luna and Celestia come to help them buy some extra time. The creature bursts into a geyser of stars and releases all the captured deer and ponies.
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  6. The first part would be 10 minutes of world building and the main6+the deer having fun with tons of filler talking(if you want it like season 1)
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  8. Intro
  9. The constellation festival is being held at the deer capital.
  10. The mane6 decide to go early, because Fluttershy knows somebody who can get them inside.
  11. They wait at Fluttershy's rally point, meanwhile Pinkie plays with Angel, rides a fallen tree trunk like a horse, smells the flowers, eats some grass, etc. Then everyone hears loud giggling.
  12. They assume it's pinkie and tell her to be quiet for a second. Pinkie makes a dumbfounded reaction.
  13. Angel sees a cat and chases after it, the ponies lose Angel from their view, as they end up in a open forest area, with a giant tree in the middle of it.
  14. After a few noises and moments of silence, they see Angel as a ghostly rabbit, hopping in the air. Angel lands in Fluttershy's hooves and changes back to normal.
  15. A deer starts acrobatically hopping on the great tree's branches, he jumps down at the ponies.  A bunch of white roses heads and grass can be seen arising from his hooves.
  16. Pinkie eats the grass behind him, he finds Pinkie Pie to be funny.
  17. After Fluttershy makes the presentations, Aidan helps them get to the city. The vegetation retracts when he goes near it.
  18. The dead-end opens up and the camera pans on the city.
  19. End of Intro.
  20. (Or they could enter the deer camp akin to Peter Pan. Aidan turns them all into smoke phantoms, practice a while, climb the tree and leap into the town) (or be like ghosts and go through objects)
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  22. Act 1
  23. As the camera goes through the city for a while, it finally gets to the ponies and the deer.
  24. As they go through the deer capital, it visually shows what the deers can do, also Twilight asks additional questions about the festival while Smoothleaf answers.
  25. The festival is for creating new constellations in the skies. The deers also safeguard a powerful artefact that can modify all the stars.
  26. They go to the beautiful garden where they have the fun. Pinkie and Aidan bounce a lot and show off acrobatics. There's some small fairie ponies, sleeping inside the flowers and a flutterpony which drops dust from its wings and the dust forms all sorts of colored roses.
  27. Fluttershy gets some drawing skills. Angel & Pangur hop on some lilly pads. Twilight makes a tonic with the help of RoseDust(the flutterpony).
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  30. Intro - Deep inside whitetail woods.
  31. Act 1 - Deer city, garden, forest, giant trees.
  32. Act 2 - Main town square, astral plane.
  33. Act 3 - Astral plane
  34. Epilogue - Deer city, garden.
  35. Characters: Aidan Smoothleaf, an adventurous jack of all trades. He's playful and also laidback. He's slightly younger than the ponies, akin to pinkie pie.
  36. Footnotes: The deers have two forms: gold with stars and white like a fog.
  37. -Their magic comes through the form of a mist, through their mouth.
  38. -Some of them have their own signature mini flowers coming out when walking, they can produce it at will.
  39. -They're not niggas like elves.