Title:           Has she really changed? (Short story)
Author:          betrippin404
Pastebin link:   http://pastebin.com/hzbVGxjG
First Edit:      Thursday 12th of September 2013 04:30:23 PM CDT
Last Edit:       Thursday 12th of September 2013 04:30:23 PM CDT

Humanized Pinkamema
>Be Anon#1
>Be rushing to Pinky before it's too late
>See Anon#2's car parked outside
>Oh no...
>Fucking bolt at godspeed to her place
 
Ponka Vision
>Waking up
>Too dizzy to stand
>Collect myself
>Realize whats happening
>No sign of anon#2
>See anon#2's machete
>Fucking psycho tried to kill me with it
>Crawl over to it
>Almost there
>Feel a sharp pain hit my ribs
>Fucking Anon#2
>"Thought I was gone huh? You think a knife to the shoulder would scare me off?"
>Ignore the faggot and inch my way towards machete
>"Not giving up huh?"
>Feel another sharp pain at my ribs
>Fucker kicked me again
>Crouches over me like some dog
>Brings his head down towards my ear
>He whispers
>"Course... I do love me a bit of rough foreplay..."
>Eye's widen
 
Anon#1 Vision
>Make it to her front door
>Fucking locked
>Hammer at the door
PINKY!!! Are you in there?!
>Look through the window
>Can't see shit
>Bolt around the back
Ponka vision
>Hear Anon#1
>Try to scream
>End up coughing due to pain
>Anon#2 turns me over so I'm facing him
>"Looks like lover boy's a bit too late"
>Grabs me by the throat with one hand
>Slips his other hand in down my pan-
>Oh god please no! Anything but this!
>"That's it sweetie, that's the face I'm looking for...nothing but shock and fear"
 
Anon#1 vision
>Look through kitchen window
>Fucking anon#2's got her pinned and he's...
>OH HELL FUCKING NO!
>Reach for the patio door
>Locked
>Both of them look at me
PINKY!
>Anon#2's fucking smug smile
>FUCK THIS GUY!
>Look around for something to break through the window with
 
Pink Pony Vision
>Anon#1...Oh god...Anon#2 isn't this cruel...is he?
>"Well whadaya know, we got's us an audience"
>No....
>Grab his arm to try and stop him
>Still feel pain in ribs, too dizzy
>Puts pressure into his grip
>"Now you settle down, I want anon#1 to see you enjoy this but I ain't got no qualms about raping a dead girl"
>Try to reach for anything to knock him off me
>Hear something crash against the window
>Didn't break it
>Feel Handle of something with back of my hand
>"False alarm"
>Hear his buckle unfastening
>"Now lets see if we can make y'all cry"
 
Anon#1 Vision
>Fuck! Is this glass double glazed or some shit?!
>Pick up rock and start mashing the window as hard as I fucking can
 
Best Pony vision
>Grip handle of whatever the fuck I have and swing at Anon#2 while he's distracted with his belt
>He spotted it a bit too late and just managed to block with his arm that had me around the throat
>He falls off me in pain griping his arm
>Realize it's his machete
>Get up on top of him
>Raise machete as high as I can
>The look of terror in his face...
>He needs to die after what he did
>"Wait...please"
>That was all I needed to hear to set me off
>http://youtu.be/SVDMlk6K_Tk?t=6s
>That machete came down on him like a ton of bricks....and it did again...and AGAIN.... AND AGAIN AND AGAIN ANDAGAIN ANDAGAIN ANDAGAIN ANDAGAINANDAGAINANDAGAINANDAGAIN!
>DIE DIE DIE DIE!!!
 
Anon#1 vision
>One more smash
>Yes it broke!
>Rush into kitchen to see...
>Pinky...PINKY!
>Grab her around the waist to pull her off Anon#2
Pinky! Stop!
>She turns around and pins me to the ground
>Is that a machete
>She has it raised
>I slowly shift my eye's to her face
>It was almost entirly covered with blood
>Her eye's...are filled with nothing more then pure concentrated rage
>Yet still, she is reluctant to swing
>I mustered the courage to say
Pinky...
I said softly
It's me Pinky...It's me...Anon#1...
>Come on Pinky come back to reality!
>Her face remains in the same aggressive state
 
>Feel a drop of water hit my face
>Tears are forming in her eye's
>She drops the machete and leans back from me
>She's facing the ground while kneeling down
>I could now see her tears run down her cheek as she struggled not to sob
>Looking passed her, I saw anon#2...
>He's face was mutilated beyond recognition
>Even though He brought it all on himself, I darkishly thought he deserved much worse
>Turning my attention back to Pinky, I slowly approached her, keeping my height to match hers
>I stretched my arms and slowly put them around her to embrace her
>She didn't move
>I squeezed her slightly more
>She broke down in both tears and sobbing
>I had wished and hoped that this part of her would never come back
>But something tells me she didn't want to do it
>Here she was, crying on my shoulder
>Uttering she was sorry
>I kept assuring her that it was all OK
>That it wasn't her fault
>She genuinely feels remorse for what she's done
>That's a start
I'll never let this happen again pinky
>She stopped crying
....I promise
>There was silence
>I could feel her wrap her arms around my waist
>She dug her face into my chest
>I rested my chin on her head
>The only things I could here that night were Pinky's sobs and sirens of two squad cars approaching her house
 
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