Title:           oh god why this shouldn't be seen by mortal eyes
Author:          Wuten
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First Edit:      Wednesday 17th of October 2012 08:25:33 PM CDT
Last Edit:       Wednesday 17th of October 2012 08:25:33 PM CDT

Someone sent me this as a potential end to Colors of a Rainbow. Enjoy.
 
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prespective: anon
 
all i felt was fear.all i knew was pain. All around me darkness. for what felt like an eturenity that was all.
then something changed. i herd voices ,thoughts ,all kinds of things. the voices sounder scared
the thoughts were frantic, but they all called out for help' things like "help us" ,"Save us"
"I want to go home".
 
But the strongest of all was a small "why..."
 
then i remberd what happend. The Factory, flutershy, dash, and lastly the mechine. i knew we
were dead that the machime had taken us. i mentally screamed for them to "BE QUIET".
the sound of it must have surpased even the royal canterlot voice for they all
fell quiet. i told them that panicking wouldent help us that the machine had taken us.
then i felt it such unbriddled rage and rightus fury ,the fury of thousands of innosent pegusi
 
the something changed again. i somehow felt alive again. felt form, felt the power from
all the anger and richus fury the innosence had given me and sudbnley i saw a light and started to will
myself twourd it after what seemed like forever i pased threw it.
 
I found my self in the factory in the tank where they stored the spectra.i saw them going about there day
like nothing was wrong that there werent the ones responsable for the deaths of thousands if
not millions of pegusi you and old. And that caused something in me i sudnly felt all the rage
from before returne full force and i felt my self swinge at the wall of the tank. it shatured like it was nothing
the spectra and i came pouring out. the staff lost it trying to find a way to
close the gaping hole in the tank when they all stoped and stared at me .
 
i looked down and saw that i didnt have my old body any more. i looked like a human with skin shining
bright as the sum with at leas half a dosen wings with all the colors of the rainbow in them.
Then i remberd the ponies rage that gave me this form and decided that i would free all the ponies
hear to be feed to the machine and tear this place apart at the seams. then the alarm whent off and guard
stormed in tho the room. when they saw me
the stoped and stared the guards moved forward aprensevly and drew there lightning prods. i readied myself for the fight of my life
They charged , i ran forward to meet them befor they even took a whole dosen steps i was on them
swinging with all my might. the first punch conected with the lead pegasus chest. he simply explowed
like a water ballon. the others just stared at what just happedend. one in the back took a step
backwards and i said in a voice that sounded like a thousand ponies saying at once "No Escape"
 
I charged them swinging fist and wings killing whatever got in my way till the room was
empty. once that was done i made my way to the door. once i opend it  i say an empty hall way.
i flew down the hall wit one thing on my mind 'FIND ATHMOSPHERE'. when ever i ran in to workers
i dispached them with a flick of my wrist or a twitch of my wings.
 
eventualy i found the room where i worked seperating the colors. and i felt sickend at the site
but i knew it ment the machine was right above me. so i jumped sraight up threw the cealling
into the machine room. i saw what must have been a hundred of the Masked pegasi armed with swords spears
and lightnighting prods. and in the back above the machine i saw the i saw the doctor and dash next to the
pin where the other ponies that were to be given to the mechine were being kept. i charged.
i swung fists, threw kicks and swiped wings at whoever got in my way and they all fell as
if there were made of paper. when i had killed all the Masked pegasi i looked up and saw the doctor
with a look of pure terror in his eye and dash with a odd look that i couldent figure out.
 
with a flap of my wings i was there in an instant looking down at the two of them.
Doctor Atmosphere tried to run but i caught him in an second and held him up by his neck. and
in my voice of the thousand s of pegusis said"you will die for what you have done here'
"PLEASE DONT , I WANT TO LIVE HAVE MERCY" he said
"MERCH!!!!What about the thousands of others who begied for mercy . no ,no mercy for you"
with that i slowley tightend my hand and watched as he franticly tried to get away from
his enevitable death. soon his strugles started to slow down geting slower and slower untill
he stoped and just stared at me with eyes that said please dont and with that i snaped his neck
and droped him to the floor like the trash he was.
 
then i turned and saw dash still siting there. i was sure she would have tried to run but she
just sat there staring at me like she was waiting when then she stood up went over to the pin and opend the gate.
hundreds of ponies ran out of the cage and into the factory i could here them causing havic
out in the factory.
i asked here in my new voice "why"
she said "because of what you said.
and she walked away. i dont know why i let her go even with the voices of the victims screeming away in my head
but i did.
slowley but surly i walked over to the device and with all the might of the ponies that were fed to this machine
swung my fist and with an blast as intence as the sun a beam of magic explouded frome my fist and reduced the
device to little more that metal slag.
then i felt almost all the power of the victums leave me. i fell to my left knee
and felt the world darken and i felt myself fallithrew the clouds to the ground befor
unconsneness took me
 
when i awoke i saw a cealing above me and relived that i was in a building
with a quick look to my side i saw a heart moniter and relized that i was in a hospital.
i tried to sit up but that only cause pain to shoot threw my back and sides
as i ley out a yelp
somepony must of heard me because not more that 20 seconds later a pony i recongized as
nurse redheart come in with a very unhappy looking princess Celestia.
after relizing i was a wake nurse redheart told me to take it easy and closed the door as she left.
but princes celestia stayed.
once we were alone she asked only one Question "how did this happen."
i took a deep breath and told her my story.