Twilight (unbirth, unfinished, alternative version)

So yeah, if you guys haven't noticed, I frequently wind up writing these things... and then actually deciding they're TOO detailed and have TOO much story to post. With my target audience / posting place, a short attention span is something I have to anticipate. This is an example of that unbirth story I posted before I made dramatic cuts for length in the setup.

 

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"Maybe if I invert the third thaumic principle, and then - no, wait, that isn't taking into account the effects of Clover's Theorem. But if I don't invert the third, then the Resonance Effect is... ahhhh!" Twilight Sparkle rears up on both hind legs, running her hooves through her hair before turning to glare at the source of her frustrations: you. "Humans do not make ANY SENSE!"

 

By way of apology, you just shrug. You've gotten used to it; it's been nearly a week since Twilight had coerced you into being her guinea pig. It was just the latest in her neverending stream of experiments, and you've never been able to determine any sort of rhyme or reason behind what she chooses to research. This time, she had decided to catalogue the effects of magic on the incredibly rare extra-dimensional species homo sapiens. Most of Twilight's magic seemed to work just fine on you, but for some reason every single attempt at transformative magic failed utterly. Twilight had been excited to investigate further at first, but since then every attempt she'd made at explaining the phenomenon had fallen through. Her frustration was very much beginning to show.

 

Even more nonplussed at your non-reaction to her words, Twilight turned away with a huff, presumably to sulk some more before coming back for another try. Lord knows you'd seen it enough times already. Provoking her probably wasn't a particularly good idea given her mood, but damn it, you were almost as sick and tired of this as she was; being a guinea pig is BORING. You lean back against the wall, offhandedly making a smartass comment about how the only person who'd ever managed to convince you to change your looks was your mother.

 

"If I was your mother, I think I'd be just about ready to give you a good paddling by now!" Twilight snaps, turning around to glare at you as she does so. Almost instantly, though, her expression shifts, the anger being replaced by puzzlement, then blankness, then a dawning look of comprehension. "If I was... your mother..." Her expression now shifts to one of open, eager jubilation; it seems whatever she's thinking about, she's convinced she has the answer now. Twilight's face lights up in that goofy, dorky grin that you'd never admit to finding adorable. "If I was your mother, that's it! That's what's missing! The Sympathetic Principle of Magic, how could I have been so blind? You're too... otherwordly! My magic can't, you know, relate to you! All I need is a stronger physical and empathic bond between the two of us." She takes a step back and looks you over carefully. Appraisingly. You find a cold shiver passing through you at the unexpected intensity of that gaze. "And I think I know just how to get it."

 

Without warning, Twilight's horn lights up. You feel a powerful tingling sensation run through you an instant before your entire body goes stiff and ramrod straight, held up in the air by Twilight's magic. "First, let's get rid of those clothes. You won't be needing those where you're going." Almost before Twilight is done speaking, you find all of your clothes stripped from your body with the practised ease of one of the most powerful telekinetics in the world. Your eyes widen - Twilight's always been awfully forward about her experimentation, but this is going way too far and you're starting to get pissed. Unfortunately, the spell that has paralyzed the rest of your body seems to have paralyzed your vocal cords just as effectively, and you find your naked form helpelessly being inspected by the young unicorn, who nods in apparent approval. "Mmm, very nice. I should have just done this to start with." You still don't know what 'this' is, but you glare at her as much as you can on general principle. Twilight seems to notice and blushes. "I, I meant for the scientific value, of course! I'm... I'm not looking forward to how this will feel. Not at all."

 

Twilight quickly turns away from you, you assume to hide the fairly luminescent blush on her face. You turn out to be quite incorrect, however, when she lifts her tail, giving you quite the show. Your cock twitches in appreciation; she has always had an amazing ass. Letting your eyes wander a bit lower, you gasp - inwardly if not on the outside. She's soaked!