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Diamond in the Rough remake (WARNING: Contains rape)

By: Uncle_Brainhorn on Apr 24th, 2012  |  syntax: None  |  size: 5.24 KB  |  hits: 488  |  expires: Never
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  1. >For some reason, you can't bring yourself to leave Ponyville.
  2. >You're compelled to stay near the ponies, but you don't know why.
  3. >Everyone knows what you've done.
  4. >Everyone wants your head on a platter.
  5. >Maybe you just like it here.
  6. >There's got to be something better than living in the woods though.
  7. >You've been out here for almost 3 months now.
  8. >Observing Ponyville.
  9. >It's not so bad, except your clothes are getting shredded.
  10. >You're down to your last wearable outfit, and even it's on it's last legs.
  11. >It's getting colder.
  12. >You'll need more clothes, soon. And some blankets.
  13. >Unfortunately, there's only one place you know of that has an abundance of cloth.
  14. >Fucking Rarity.
  15.  
  16.  
  17. ----
  18.  
  19. >It's well past midnight as you sneak into Ponyville.
  20. >The guards stopped patrolling for you weeks ago, so sneaking through the town isn't hard.
  21. >The posters are still everywhere, though.
  22. >"Wanted: Anonymous, for immediate questioning by Princess Celestia. Suspect not to be harmed."
  23. >At least it didn't say "Dead or Alive"
  24. >Guess ponies are just more forgiving that humans.
  25.  
  26. >You arrive in front of her boutique.
  27. >You were never good friends with Rainbow Dash, but you never had anything against her.
  28. >Rarity was different.
  29. >Rarity was an insufferable, snobbish drama queen with a superiority complex.
  30. >It didn't help she had the personality of a pile of soggy pasta.
  31. >The door's unlocked.
  32. >Thankfully, Ponyville is a trusting community.
  33. >You can barely see anything inside.
  34. >Feeling around, there's cloth everywhere, but you can't find any tools.
  35. >They might not be pretty, but with the right tools you can make your own clothes.
  36. >You walk into something.
  37. >Before you can grab it, it's it topples to the ground with a crash.
  38. >You hear a stirring from upstairs, then someone descending the stairs.
  39. >FUCK.
  40. >Well, it's dark. Maybe she won't see you.
  41. >You see a glow in the dark and suddenly, several candles around the room ignite.
  42. >"YOU!"
  43. >Well, shit.
  44.  
  45. ----
  46.  
  47. >She runs to the window and opens it.
  48. >Grabbing a large horn off the floor, sh hefts it up and blows it.
  49. >It's shockingly loud.
  50. >She looks at you haughtily.
  51. >"That was a signal for the guards. They'll be here within minutes!"
  52. "God DAMN it. I didn't want any trouble."
  53. >You take a step towards her.
  54. >Her smile fades.
  55. >"Stay back, you brute!"
  56. >You see her horn begin to glow.
  57. >You duck as a pair of shears miss you by inches.
  58. >You jump up and bound up to her before she can pull any other tricks.
  59. >You jab your finger under her ear.
  60. >She leaps away and tries to use her magic again.
  61. >A look of shock appears on her face.
  62. "Oh, Twilight didn't tell you about that trick?"
  63. >You advance on the white pony.
  64.  
  65. ----
  66.  
  67. >You backhand her across the face, sending her flying.
  68. "All I wanted was some clothes!"
  69. >She tries to climb to her feet, but she's still stunned.
  70. >You snatch her by the tail and swing her.
  71. >She hits a work bench and collapses.
  72. >She tries to get up, but it looks like her leg is hurt.
  73. >As you walk over, you grab a pair of scissors off a table.
  74. >Pinning her to the floor, you hold the blade to her throat.
  75. "Now, what to do with you?"
  76. >"Please, don't kill me! I'm sorry!"
  77. >Her nose is bleeding, and she chokes slightly on the blood.
  78. >You shush her and gently caress her face.
  79. "Hurt you? Why would I hurt you?"
  80. >You hold the scissors to her face.
  81. "We're friends, right? And what do friends do?"
  82. >You open the blades and head for her mane.
  83. "They give each other makeovers!"
  84.  
  85. ----
  86.  
  87. >She struggles as you chop her precious mane off, causing you to nick her flesh a few times.
  88. >Done. you drag her over to one of her mirrors so you can see your handiwork.
  89. >Her mane is ruined.
  90. >You cut off as much as you could, leaving just sparse, uneven clumps of hair.
  91. >"No! What have you done to me! I'm hideous!"
  92. >She tries to break free, but you throw her to the ground again.
  93. >You hold her down with one hand, and run your free hand across her flank and rump.
  94. >She's so soft...
  95. "Don't worry, Rarity. I still think you're pretty."
  96. >"No..."
  97. >She attempts to stand, but you put your weight on her.
  98. >She can't move.
  99. >With your free hand, you clumsily remove what remains of your pants.
  100. >"Please. Please not this."
  101. >You flip her over onto her stomach.
  102. >She jumps to her feet, but you hold her tightly.
  103. >As your erection brushes against her, she breaks down crying.
  104. >"No, you monster! You can't do this to me!"
  105. >Determined to prove her wrong, you slam it in her as hard as you can.
  106.  
  107. ----
  108.  
  109. >Rarity cries out in pain, gritting her teeth.
  110. >Her front lets begin to buckle as you violate her.
  111. >She screams through clenched teeth as you pound her from behind.
  112. >Harder and harder, while her screams become wails.
  113. >Finally, it's too much and you release inside her.
  114. >"No! You won't get away with this!"
  115. >Suddenly she jumps forward out of your grasp.
  116. >She kicks, hitting you right in the crotch.
  117. >You see stars as you go down.
  118. >She's going to pay.
  119. >Your rage sees you through the pain.
  120. >You grab wildly for the first thing you find.
  121. >A measuring tape.
  122. >As Rarity is trying to limp away you wrap it around her neck from behind like a garotte.
  123. >You put your knee into her back and pull for all you're worth.
  124. >Shes tries to get free but you're too powerful for her.
  125. >Her thrashing slows and finally stops.
  126. >She goes limp.