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  1. I asked a friend to give me any pony story idea to write and I would do it and this is the one he gave me. Kind of ironic how it's a Twi fic.
  2.  
  3. >Be Anon
  4. >Be in Equestria for about 6 years
  5. >Be intimate with Twilight
  6. >Her friends are catching on you two being in a relationship, but they don't know for sure
  7. >You wake up in Twilight's bed, like usual
  8. >A stream of warm sunlight enters the room through the window
  9. >You turn to Twilight's side and give her a kiss on the cheek
  10. >She wakes up
  11. >But she's only half awake
  12. >Like usual this early in the morning
  13. Good morning Twi.
  14. >Twi: "Ugh... Good morning."
  15. >She positions herself facing you
  16. Hey, you were good last night
  17. >"Thanks. You were pretty good too." says Twilight with a laugh and a smile.
  18. >You can't help but smirk
  19. >You start petting her mane
  20. >Twi: "Anon... Let's talk about my friends
  21. Ok. What's up?
  22. >Twi: "Well... I think they're on to us..."
  23. So?
  24. >Twi: "Remember what Rarity said? That interspecies relationships are bad and should be banned?"
  25. Oh yeah, I remember Spike ran out of the room crying. *You chuckle*
  26. >Twi: "Anon! This is serious! What if they don't like me anymore! I mean they all agreed very deeply when Rarity said that."
  27. So what?
  28. >Twi: "What if they stop being my friend anymore..."
  29. Twilight a good friend will stay with you no matter what you do with your life, as long as it doesn't harm or bother anyone.
  30. >Twi: "I hope you're right... I'd hate to have to choose between you and my friends!"
  31. Well who would you choose? I mean if you had to choose one.
  32. >Twi: "I... I don't know..."
  33. >You feel disappointed and nervous because Twilight might have to make that decision
  34. >You thought it would be easy for her
  35. >She would pick you right?
  36. >Right?
  37.  
  38. >You get up
  39. >So does Twilight
  40. >You almost feel like proposing to her now, so she won't leave you over her friends
  41. >You already wanted to propose to this mare anyway
  42. >If she left you... Man you don't even want to think about that
  43. >You would either try to win her back, or an hero
  44. >You already had so many problems back on Earth
  45. >Twilight is the only thing that matters to you anymore
  46. >Twilight says she want's to have lunch with her friends, but that you should stay home with Spike
  47. >Those words felt like a death sentence
  48. >Her with her friends without you does not sound good at all right now
  49. >You begged her to stay, but she left anyway
  50. >Spike: "Damn man... Those ponies sure don't like us..."
  51. Twilight does...
  52. >Spike: "Yeah..."
  53. >You and Spike are just sitting on the couch feeling left out
  54. >Spike: "Hey... Did I ever tell you that I'm starting to crush on Rarity's sister?
  55. You know Rarity wouldn't let you anywhere near her right?
  56. >Spike: "Yeah but I think If I could win her over, then I'll win her sister over too right?"
  57. Just look at me and Twilight, they're probably already discussing about it. Fuck I wanted to propose to her.
  58. >You both feel each others pain
  59. >Spike: "I know that feel bro."
  60. >You look down at your empty hand and get an idea
  61. >You're going to go out and buy and ring, and you're going to propose marriage no matter what Twilight's friends say
  62.  
  63. >You get up off the couch
  64. >You head out the door and find the nearest jewelry store as quick as you can
  65. >Time is running out
  66. >You find a store that sells jewelry that isn't run by Rarity
  67. >You pick the ring with the biggest gem and pay with all the bits you've been saving up
  68. >You never had to use your money anyway, so you had a pretty big piggy bank
  69. >You hurry out the store and look for Twilight and her friends
  70. >You see them having a picnic
  71. >You approach Twilight, ignoring her friends
  72. >You didn't even plan, you just want to do this NOW
  73. >You're shaking but you don't care about that
  74. T-twilight... Will you...
  75. >Pulls out ring
  76. Will you marry me?
  77. >Her friends just laugh
  78. >Twi: "I... I..."
  79. >She starts tearing up
  80. >Shes looking at the ground filled with shame and worry
  81. >Twi: "I... I can't."
  82. What?! What do you mean you can't?!?!
  83. >Twi: "I'm sorry, we can't be together. ever..."
  84. ....... W-why?
  85. >Twi: "I'm picking my friends over you..."
  86. I... Ok.... Ok FINE! If they mean more to you then me then FINE! They won't even let you date who you want... FINE!!
  87. >You throw the ring to the ground
  88. >Twi: "Anon calm down!"
  89. >You turn around and walk away
  90. >Twilight is lying on the ground crying
  91.  
  92. >Fast forward to one week later
  93. >Ever since the incident you've been sleeping in random places across Ponyville
  94. >You never even returned to Twilight's house for your stuff
  95. >You're lying on the side of some house and you notice Twilight is walking with a Stallion
  96. >You pound the wall you're lying on and look away
  97. >You see the Stallion kiss Twilight
  98. >You fucking lose it
  99. >You get up and start walking towards them
  100. >Rainbow Dash flies at you from the sky and kicks you in the chest
  101. >Rainbow used to be your bro... And now she's betrayed you
  102. >You've lost everything, your friends, your lover, your home, everything.
  103. >You even lost your god damn home planet
  104. >The stallion Twilight was with sees you and approaches you
  105. >Stallion: "Look Anon, I think it's best you leave Ponyville. No one here wants you anyway, so do us all a favor and leave."
  106. >You look at him, focusing all anger and hate on this one fucking stallion
  107. >Twilight looks at you with sadness, almost as if she's begging you to stay with her
  108. >You remember when you were transported to Equestria, you had a handgun in your bag
  109. >You get an idea
  110. Ok, just let me get my stuff, I left it at Twilight's house.
  111. >Stallion: "You what?"
  112. You fucking heard me... I mean yeah I did ok.
  113. >Stallion: "Ok but we're coming with you, just to make sure you don't do any funny business."
  114. Fine by me.
  115. >The three of you walk to Twilight's house, the stallion constantly gives you looks
  116. >You don't even bother to learn his name
  117. >Twi and her stallion friend enter her house before you
  118. >Twilight has been crying the whole time, but she's doing a good job of hiding it
  119. >Stallion: "Alright, get your stuff and get the hell out of here."
  120. >You look around for your bag and notice it in the same place you left it, in the spare room on the first floor
  121. >Twilight and her stallion friend go upstairs
  122. >They enter her room, and lock the door
  123. >You pick up the gun and load it, making sure it's ready to kill
  124. >You think how you're going to pull this out, you constantly point the gun to your face
  125. >You hear loud thumps on the second floor, coming from Twilight's room
  126. >You listen for more and hear Twilight moan and scream quietly
  127. >Are they?
  128.  
  129. >...
  130. >Are they having sex in your old bed?
  131. >Your original plan was suicide
  132. >Fuck it
  133. >You go up the stairs
  134. >You kick open the door and see the stallion jizzing in Twilight's cunt
  135. >You're blown away by this site
  136. >Twilight sees you and screams "I'M SORRY!!! JUST GO!!"
  137. >She's probably going to be pregnant now, that was pretty deep in her
  138. >Stallion: "What the fuck?!!"
  139. >He pulls out of Twilight and rushes at you with his fucking dick spilling cum
  140. >You point your gun at him, but he keeps running towards you, having no clue what it is
  141. >This amuses you
  142. >Twilight screams, you've talked about human machines of killing with her before
  143. >You shoot the stallions dick off
  144. >he falls to the ground screaming in pain
  145. >You just smile and turn to Twilight, realizing she probably is pregnant
  146. GOD DAMMIT TWILIGHT! I F-FUCKING HATE YOU!!
  147. >Twi: "I'M SORRY!!"
  148. >She's sobbing and screaming, tears everywhere
  149. OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU! I FUCKING HATE YOU! I..... W-WHY!!
  150. >You shoot her horn off
  151. >You were actually aiming for her head but your hands are shaking so much
  152. >Twilight screams in pain
  153. >The stallion is yelling at you, cursing you
  154. SHUT THE FUCK UP!
  155. >You shoot him in the neck, silencing him
  156. >There's blood all over the stallion, and pouring out of Twi's horn
  157. >You puke
  158. >You can't stop puking
  159. >You get on the bed and put the gun in Twilights mouth
  160. >Her eyes are filled with fear, pain, and regret
  161. >Tears everywhere
  162. YOU DID THIS!
  163. >Twilight muffles something but you can't hear her
  164. >You pull the gun out
  165. What was that?
  166. >Twi: "I'M SORRY!"
  167. >You stick the gun in her mouth again and scream before pulling the trigger
  168. >The brains of the mare you once loved is now on the wall
  169. >You puke again, over her corpse
  170. >You stick the gun in your mouth and pull the trigger without hesitation
  171. *click*