Title: OFS commentary 11 Author: Tosxychor Pastebin link: http://pastebin.com/r80SdC32 First Edit: Monday 2nd of January 2012 03:10:44 PM CDT Last Edit: Monday 2nd of January 2012 03:10:44 PM CDT „So, you hung it on the ceiling?“  - Oh LOL, I really wanna hear an explanation for THAT.   Then, she suddenly burst out laughing, and the rest of her friends followed.  - Ah OK then, they have gone insane. I guess the new rockets will feature speed holes and bananas, for easier moon reaching.   Computeronic circuits, which can carry out an entire five operations per second.  - Still a long way to go xD but we all got throught that.   „I've kept a bit of the money for myself, sure, just enough to get by, but the rest is all yours! So make sure you don't spend it all on drinks! Wilhelmina?“  - Oh wow, so he did... feats of faith such as this must be quite heavy to undergo.   „Effective today, all of your wages are to be indefinitely suspended. Janitor, doctor, equenaut, it doesn't matter who you are, we just can't afford to pay you.“  - Aaaand all the mouths lay open.   Quite abruptly, they were all stopped in mid-air, then began slowly approaching the Star Walker, each from a different angle.  - That makes for quite an impressive scene.   ... „Daddy's worked it all out before selling the silly thing. I've made sure to keep enough to pay for everything. You don't think I am stupid, do you?“  - The amount of heartwarming insanity is stronger here than anywhere I've ever seen. Makes for quite an impressive reading.   „See?“ he smiled at her, „I'll get to watch my little Cherry fly above the skies, no matter how long it takes!“ ...  - I cannot contain it anymore, D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!   „Look, let me put it this way,“ she sighed, then flew up to him,  ...  - Wow, that's one darn scary way of putting it.   And let me tell you, a fiery end atop a hundred tonnes of burning rocket? It's a lot more awesome than freezing to death during a stupid training exercise.“  - Did RD teach her this along the way? xD   „Out of the famous Equestria Seven, four've already resigned. Which means it's gonna be either me, Bliz, or Dash. And if you know either of those two, you know damned well how they'd answer that question!“  - Ha! Ya just got it handed to yourself, mister!   But these things always are.  - Somehow, I just love these little tidbits of radical wisdom you throw in here ^^   „Right! Sorry, I can't help with any of that; I don't even understand half those words! But it's just a thinking problem, right? Even if we threw it twice as much money, it wouldn't get solved any faster.“  - You really get the characters down beautifully, they're so honest and smooth in their actions.   That frees up enough money to buy one extra 'Sara' stage.  - D'awwww, they named it after a worker here!   ...Oh, dad, will you ever change?  - Where's the excitement in owning a company that runs itself? If you want a thrill in life, you gotta risk it and wing it!   So, how on Equestria could he be that… normal?  - Crazy projects call for crazy minds involved.   „I thought of a great way to make some more money: Merchandise! ...  - Of course, here comes the "collateral profit" part of an entrepreneur.   „Hey, bosses! Can you restart the simulator? I want to try out a few more things with the roll control. This thing's way too much fun!“  - That's our Rainbow! xD   „Well, there's a few things money just can't buy, aren't there?“  - Hahahahaha, burned!   just imagine the spin the papers are going to put on this when they see what's happening here: They'll absolutely love it! ...  - Whoa whoa whoa, I never thought it that way! This is quite brilliant.   „And even if she doesn't, it's not like we can't avoid all this anyway,“ he suddenly beamed, „Pay a few journalists, a couple of politicians? Should derail everything quite nicely.“ What.  - Best flat what I've heard all year xD   ... „I like it,“ she eventually whispered, smiling warmly.  - Oh lawdy, this is genius :D   That made Dash pause. „But, aren't we all like, comrades here?“ Oh yeah.  - RD, getting cleverer by the month ^^   And what remained once it was all over, was a truly strange thing indeed; ...  - Ha! I guessed right, less ponies and more motivation would bring the remaining ones much closer. ^.^   „Here's to tape!“  - Duct tape's popularity breaks universe borders, and for good reason.   „Let's see, let's see, I knew this! How many protons was it again, silly little blue things… not twenty… not twenty five… thirty five? Aha! And thirty five electrons, too!“ ...  - I've never quite seen RD out of her element such as in this fic, and I love it so much, it's incredible ^^   „Aren't all these ponies supposed to be competing?“ she whispered, „I mean, there's just the one place. Why are they helping each other?“ ...ù  - Mood and friendship comes before competition!   Even you, Geist: Your food was hundred percent edible this time! Great success!“   The canteen resonated with the clapping of hooves against wood, and an embarrassed expression appeared across the tech-pony's face.  - Why did I laugh so hard at this? xD   The bickering, short-sighted Assembly had certainly succeeded in their original goal; the old Cosmodrome was dead and buried, and it would never be coming back. What had appeared in its stead, however, was a thing beyond anypony's wildest dreams.  - That's... so heartwarming.   „Yup!“ she smiled, taking another sip of coffee. It was fun watching the look of sheer terror slowly creep up across his face.  - The realization slowly hits hahaha xD   „Just preparing stuff for the next lesson. Seriously, that Ruby filly's insane. I almost have to prepare one class for her, and one for all the other foals!“  - Awwww, she's still in that teaching project. How adorable ^^   Zvezda blinked a few times to make sure she wasn't hallucinating, then looked at the faint jet of exhaust again. Strange, yet beautiful, geometric shapes sharply glowed in the exhaust, some resembling discs, others diamonds, all motionlessly hovering right in the centre of the thin plume.  - Magic! Oh, that's gonna upset some earth ponies.   From this point on, nothing was impossible any more. All that was left was for the rest of Equestria to realize that.  - A terrific way to end a chapter, well done!