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Anon's Rebirth (Chapter 5)

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  1. >A seemingly invincible opponent is standing in front of you
  2. >A masked man who slaughtered innocent p0nies and who is now going to attack your friends
  3. >The only one standing between him and them is you
  4. >And you're almost out of strength, barely standing
  5. >It's a pretty desperate situation
  6. Go! Get some help! I can handle him!
  7. >You know you're lying but at least they should get away
  8. >You are in a city called Hollow Shades and finally you got the one who is responsible of abducting a bunch of p0nies
  9. >Unfortunately he's a skilled fighter too, especially in your current condition since you got drugged
  10. >Twilight is the first to react finally on your advice
  11. >"I've got an idea! Girls, let's retreat!
  12. >Thank Celestia, finally they're running away
  13. >The mane six gallop back where they came from
  14. >"Not so fast..."
  15. >The masked figure doesn't seem to be so happy about that
  16. >Well, you don't give a damn about his opinion
  17. >Taking a defensive stance you await him
  18. >He started to run at you, his eyes fixed on your friends
  19. >You lunge out but he just grabs your head and pushes you to the ground
  20. Wait!
  21. >He doesn't take notice of you and get's closer to Rarity who is the slowest of them
  22. >Grabbing her hind legs he throws her to the ground
  23. >"How, ouch, how dare you! Get your hands of me you brute!"
  24. Don't you dare!
  25. >You get up and dash at them but stop suddenly
  26. >He rose and dragged her up with himself, holding her hand locked in his arms
  27. >"Don't move or you'll regret it!
  28. >You don't care much about yourself but you don't want to put Rarity in harm's way
  29. Let her go! This is something between me and you!
  30. >He keeps silent for a while as if he's thinking through something
  31. >Eventually he raises his head and answers
  32. >"You're right! I won't harm her. But I wonder how you're going to act if she's the one to come after you!"
  33. >He laughs and touches her forehead with his hand
  34. >The fear in Rarity's eyes is indescribable
  35. >"Why you-! Anooon! Help me!"
  36. >Slowly the masked one disappears
  37. >His body turns into some kind of dust and invades Rarity's head
  38. >You run at her as she faints and falls to the ground
  39. >You're fast enough to catch her in mid-air
  40. Rarity. Rarity!
  41. >She opens her eyes carefully
  42. >"A-Anon? What happ-"
  43. >Her azure blue eyes are surrounded by a green sphere
  44. >You saw this once. This is going to be bad...
  45. Ra-Rarity! Come to your senses!
  46. >You shake her body but she remains limp
  47. >What are you going to do now? The masked man seems to possess her and she won't wake up!
  48. Rarity!!!
  49. >Her body tenses in you arms as she looks you in the eye
  50. Thank goodness! Are you alright? Err, Rarity?"
  51. >The very next moment she grabs you by your shoulder and throws you to the ground, standing on top of you
  52. W-what are you doing?
  53. >"Oh my. Have I ever told you how unbelievably beautiful you are, Anon?
  54. >She gives you the bedroom eyes. The same ones you often receive from Fluttershy
  55. Snap out of it!
  56. >Although she pins you down, you're easily able to push her over
  57. >The next moment you hold her hooves in your hands and hold her down on the ground
  58. Damn it! Let go of her you ... you THING!
  59. >Rarity doesn't take notice of your words
  60. >Instead she twist and turns to get free of your hold
  61. >"I didn't know you were so rude, Anon! But ... I like that. Come on, Anon, nobody would see us, let Rarity give you a special treatment."
  62. >The situation could be worst
  63. >You got the masked man in Rarity's head, forcing her to have sex with you, knowing that you wouldn't hurt your friends
  64. >But ,considered all, she's to weak to break your hold and he would have been able to extinguish the lifes of yourself and your friends
  65. >You just have to hold her down until the others arrive and afterwards you'd figure a solution out
  66. >What a shame she doesn't have a crush on you for real
  67. >She's a beautiful white unicorn with a good taste of clothing
  68. >Her deep blue mane and tail always curled in an admirable way (it must take hours to get them like this!) perfectly fitting with her eye color
  69. >Just as your mind drifts away on stupid thoughts like this something slams into your side
  70. What the -"
  71. >You got careless and Fluttershy sneaked up on you
  72. >Even though she is weak as well, she was able to push you off Rarity
  73. >While you're confused Rarity jumps at you and with Fluttershy's help they're able to hold you down
  74. HEY! Please, come back to your senses, both of you!
  75. >"Oh darling! Don't struggle like this, you're just making it harder for everyone of us. You're so cute when you're angry."
  76. >"That's what I'm saying! He IS cute, isn't he? Especially if he acts like he doesn't want it, too."
  77. >Your eternal yellow pesterer has joined the party
  78. >This is not going to end well
  79. Please, I beg you, don't make me hurt you!
  80. >They just ignore you
  81. >"Fluttershy, sweety, would you take off his pants? I'd like to see Anon's full glory.
  82. >"Of course, ma'am."
  83. >Rarity keeps your arms pressed on the ground as Fluttershy makes her way down to your pants
  84. >You try to push her away but meanwhile she got pretty dexterous in dodging your attempts to defend yourself
  85. >This whole mess wouldn't be a problem if they wouldn't work together or if you would have some time to recover your strength
  86. >Fluttershy reached your pants in no time, sitting on your legs to stop you from moving
  87. >She bends down and tries to open your pants
  88. >You try to relax a little bit in order to gather some strength for your final attempt to get them off you
  89. >Rarity feels your resistance melting away
  90. >"There, that's a good boy! Darling, how long does it take to get these pants off?"
  91. >Luckily the top button is giving Fluttershy a hard time
  92. >Guess it's easier to unzip your pants when you have fingers
  93. >"It'sh the button! I shust can't open it!"
  94. >She let's go of your pants
  95. >"It would be easier to tear them apart, i-if you don't mind..."
  96. >"NO!"
  97. >You can feel Fluttershy flinch on your lap
  98. >"Do you even know how much time I've spent on making these?! It would be a shame if these got ripped!!!"
  99. >"O-okay..."
  100. >Fluttershy bends down again and tries to unzip your pants hastier than before
  101. >Huh, this stupid jerk didn't consider the personalities of your friends before he took control over them
  102. >While Fluttershy is still trying to get you naked Rarity bends over your face
  103. >"You know, Darling, this is taking too long. I want you now."
  104. >She leans into a kiss and you ... you don't even try to resist
  105. >You could try to excuse it by saying you're still gathering strenght to free yourself
  106. >But since you're a terrible liar you don't even try to find an excuse like this
  107. >Instead you close your eyes and kiss her back
  108. >You feel her hot breath on your face as her tongue enters your mouth
  109. >Her flat tongue traces inside your mouth in slow circles as you feel her soft lips caressing yours
  110. >Meanwhile your tongue explores her mouth as well sliding playfully along her teeth
  111. >She's a real lady, kissing you with so much care
  112. >Her tongue never goes too deep into your mouth so you try to kiss her back as careful as you can
  113. >You don't know where she got that from, but she's a really skilled kisser
  114. >Eventually you break the kiss, swallowing some of her saliva
  115. >Taking a breath you recognize the sweet and a little bit minty taste of her
  116. >She didn't let you down on your expectation
  117. >"Wow, it's been a while since I had someone with this much passion."
  118. Pleasure's on my side...
  119. >"W-what?"
  120. >Did you just say that out loud
  121. >Well, doesn't matter now
  122. >Fluttershy finally succeeded in unzipping your pants and pulling them down a bit, letting Anon Jr. raise to his full glory
  123. >Wow, it's also been a while since you got aroused by a simple kiss
  124. Don't say I didn't warn you..
  125. >Just as Fluttershy wants to go for your dick, you lock her head between your legs
  126. >She squeals as you drag her head aside, causing her to fall down
  127. >Next you roll backwards, throwing Rarity off your chest in a fluent motion
  128. Alright, calm down you two!
  129. >Both of them stood up already and they're approaching you like a predator would approach his prey
  130. >You pull your pants up and get yourself ready for the upcoming...
  131. >"Anon, my dear, your body is clearly ready for a special treatment."
  132. >Huh, hinting at your boner won't make you change your mind
  133. >But otherwise, you don't want to hurt them
  134. >You have sworn to yourself to never use any unnecessary force ever again
  135. >And you are aware of them being controlled
  136. >Talking about a sticky situation...
  137. >They are jumping at you but you're able to dodge them while your brain frantically seeks a way out of this
  138. >Just as you're about to give up because of your fading strength, the others appear
  139. >And they have Cordan, your supervisor, brought with them
  140. >"Hey, kid, what are you doing? Where is the suspect?"
  141. Hello to you too, Cor. Twilight, he went into Rarity's head somehow, don't ask me how, and now they're coming at me! Get him out of there!
  142. >"Wha-what? Wait, I-I'll try something! Hey Rarity, Fluttershy!"
  143. >Both of them stop chasing you and turn around
  144. >Fluttershy squeals and flies away
  145. >Rarity's eyes fix on Twilight and she snarls at her
  146. >"You won't get my Anon! He's MINE!!!"
  147. >With this she tries to assault Twilight
  148. >The next moment Dash and AJ hold her down, giving Twilight the opportunity to cast a spell on her
  149. >Twi's eyes start to glow and as the tip of her horn touches Rarity's the eyes of the two of them glow
  150. >After a few seconds Twilight retreats, huffing with exhaustion, and Rarity's body goes slack once again
  151. I-is he gone?
  152. >"What exactly have you done, unicorn?"
  153. >All of you turn around in a split second
  154. >The mysterious figure stands right behind you with his arms folded
  155. >Twilight's face turns angry
  156. >"What have you done to her? I just cast a memory spell on her, because she acted like she'd forgotten who she is!"
  157. >"I'm impressed. It actually worked. Well, enough with the chit-chat, time to face your fate!"
  158. >And again he charges at you
  159. >Where does he take that strength?
  160. >And again you have to defeat your friends
  161. >They're frozen on place and if you don't do anything they'll get hurt
  162. >Just as he's about to hit Twilight you try to jump in between
  163. >Maybe you're lucky enough to grab his waist or something
  164. >You close your eyes and go for a leap
  165. >But instead of getting hit or hit something yourself you fall to the ground
  166. >You open your eyes
  167. >"Damn it.."
  168. >The masked one is holding his ribs, seemingly in pain
  169. >And your savior is none other than Cordan
  170. >"You are about to face SEVERE consequences.."
  171. >The next few minutes the masked figure fights again Cordan
  172. >Although he's incredibly fast, Cordan seems to be always a few steps ahead
  173. >He practically blocks every punch, every kick, and whenever his enemy gets careless he bucks him
  174. >The seven of you (Rarity came to her senses and Fluttershy returned) are left to watch the fight with open mouths
  175. >He truly earned his 'cutie'mark (a bolter on his navy blue coat)
  176. >His hooves hit the masked figure several times
  177. >Sometimes he hits his ribcage and twice he hit his head
  178. >The mask of the man is already cracked as he stops moving
  179. >He pants and holds his side
  180. >Cordan's expertly fighting style exhausted him completely and he seems pretty hurt
  181. >And your supervisor didn't even got hit once...
  182. Woah, Cordan... where did you...?
  183. >"Watch and learn, rookie! I won't let this filthy murderer lay a hoof on you!"
  184. >You're proud of your supervisor. You didn't know he is that awesome!
  185. >While you were talking the man got on the move again
  186. >He ran at you and got you into a choking hold
  187. What-?
  188. >He murmurs some words into your ear which you don't understand and unsheathes your knife
  189. >You want to say something but you're unable to, perhaps because of fear?
  190. >Cordan closes in and you can feel his hoof pistoning just inches away from your head
  191. >The mere force would have been enough to crack your skull open
  192. >The mysterious figure dodged his attack and runs at him with the knife raised in an amateur way
  193. >He gets bucked in his chest and falls to the ground not moving anymore
  194. >Cordan turns around
  195. >"The six of you! Get your elements and seal him away!"
  196. >All of them nod and Twilight hands out the elements of harmony she brought with her
  197. >This can't be it. Minutes ago this man was an unbeatable obstacle and now he got defeated?
  198. >You look at his corpse
  199. >He's still holding the knife
  200. >Great Celestia... it's a trap!!! He'll stand up just like before!
  201. >You try to warn Cordan who is talking to the mares but you are unable to speak
  202. >The words he mumbled into your ears ... he cursed you with silence!
  203. >You start to run
  204. >You have to warn him before he get's injured!
  205. >Time slows down as adrenaline starts to pump through your system
  206. >The others recognized you running at them and turn around
  207. >Their faces change into a shocked expression
  208. >But they aren't looking at you
  209. >They are looking behind you
  210. >You turn around while running
  211. >The man already got up and he is not aiming for Cordan
  212. >He is aiming for you
  213. >The knife flashes above your head
  214. >Your opponent clearly never lost his strength, nor his speed. He was playing with you the whole time
  215. >You take a last look forward
  216. >It will be the last time you see your friends
  217. >But ... Cordan is missing
  218. >Cor already reacted and dashed at you
  219. >He pushes you aside and the knife cuts deep into his neck
  220. >Time speed up again
  221. Cordan!
  222. >Your friends look disgusted and shocked as the mysterious figure pulls the knife out
  223. >Blood drips down from the blade
  224. >"Hmpf, stupid horse."
  225. >You can't believe what just happened
  226. >And it was your fault
  227. >How stupid can you be?!
  228. >Anger boils up inside you
  229. >Rage devours your system
  230. >Why did he save you?! It was your stupidity which got you into this!
  231. >Another innocent died ... in front of your friends' eyes
  232. This has to stop NOW!
  233. >"Huh?"
  234. >The masked one stops for a second
  235. >Enough time to get him
  236. >Burning pain gives you the power you need to absolutely obliterate every ounce of life within this maggot
  237. >Your hand grabs his throat in a spinning motion
  238. >You moved faster than you could imagine yourself
  239. >The speed and the force you used are enough to lift him up for second and in addition with the momentum you built up he loses his balance
  240. >With an inhuman scream you smash him on the ground, single-handed and with everything you got
  241. >He remains lying but still you won't let go of him
  242. >You already got fooled twice
  243. >But you got him this time. You're even able to speak again
  244. *pant* Who are you? *pant* Why are you doing this?!
  245. >"W-what do you mean...?
  246. >He is still able to answer?!
  247. Why did you murder them? Why do you want this city to be dark?
  248. >"I don't give a damn about this city..."
  249. Then why did you do this?
  250. >You start to beat his face with your free hand
  251. ANSWER ME!
  252. >Shards slice your hand open as your punches cause the mask to crack even more
  253. >But you don't care
  254. >"T-to get you and the elements to this city... I knew you'd come..."
  255. Well, seems it didn't turn out that well, huh? Twilight! Get the spell ready!
  256. >She nods and they start their special ceremony where they activate their elements and a giant rainbow defeats the evil
  257. Let's see who you are at least.
  258. >You pull the mask away and...
  259. No... Why? How?
  260. >This can't be real
  261. >"Surprised?"
  262. NO, I'm not like this!!!
  263. >It's almost like looking into a mirror
  264. >A second version of your face looks up and smiles at you
  265. >He looks exactly like you except the eyes
  266. >His eyes are surrounded by a green aura
  267. >"I told you, your heart is mine!"
  268. >He doesn't look hurt at all. His smiling face doesn't have a single scratch
  269. W-what do you mean? Are you me?!
  270. >"I am ... nobody."
  271. >The very next second a bright flash blind you
  272. >A rainbow surrounds the two of you and he disappears slowly in the same manner as he disappeared into Rarity's head
  273. >Your friends approach you
  274. >"Anon, are you alright?"
  275. Y-yeah, I'm fine.
  276. >"Have you seen his face?"
  277. >They took notice of his mask in your hands
  278. No, not really...
  279. >Twilight lays a hoof on your back and gives you an understanding and sad look
  280. >"At least we defeated him."
  281. Yeah...
  282. >You aren't sure about this either
  283. >He smiled at you. You can't imagine him smiling if he'd knew his end was near
  284. >But on the other hoof you don't know why he shouldn't be defeated. His body completely disappeared without a trace and he couldn't just run away, someone would have seen him
  285. >Something pokes your arm slightly
  286. >It's Pinkie
  287. >"A-Anon?"
  288. >Woah, she's completely hoarse
  289. Yes, Pinkie?
  290. >"W-what are we going to do w-with him?"
  291. >She points at Cordan's lifeless body
  292. He'll get a proper funeral. A hero's funeral like he deserves.
  293. >She starts to cry
  294. Calm down, Pinkie.
  295. >Your voice is also calm but soothing at the same time
  296. >You hug her and pet her mane
  297. >The others look pretty shaky themselves so you beckon them to close into the hug
  298. >As soon as you're hugging them they start to cry
  299. >A few tears fall down from your eyes as well...
  300.  
  301. >The next day you leave the city by train
  302. >Everyone looks sad and a bit dazed and you can't blame them
  303. >You feel upside down yourself
  304. >Never you had even thought of casualties once
  305. >The whole ride went quietly and no one was in the mood to say something
  306. >You are just happy to get back to Ponyville
  307. >Hollow Shades is still a dump, crowded by criminals but you hope it will get better someday
  308. >At least you got the one responsible for this mess
  309. >Or you just hope so
  310. >The first week in Ponyville was the worst one you've ever experienced
  311. >Not one of your friends was in the mood to go out and spend some time together
  312. >But eventually they got over it
  313. >The only time you've met them since the incident was at Cordan's funeral
  314. >It was nothing big but all the more depressing therefor
  315. >Meanwhile you got promoted by Princess Celestia
  316. >You're the head of Ponyville's security
  317. >Work keeps you occupied so you don't have to think about Hollow Shades or Cordan
  318. >Or the man with your face
  319. >It makes you feel even more guilty
  320. >After this horrible first week your friends start to ask you out and to catch up amongst themselves
  321. >Everything seems to take normal routine finally
  322. >Even Fluttershy started again to wake you up in the morning, trying to guess your fetish
  323. >You are quiet sure the happenings have scarred them mentally but you're somehow proud of them how they try to live on
  324. >It is evening once again and you're sitting at home
  325. >After having your work done you spent the time with RD doing some sport and afterwards you've met the others at Sugarcube Corner and spent a great time together
  326. >Still you feel like something is wrong
  327. >It's a feeling like a lost memory deep inside your head but every time you try to remember the memory just slips
  328. >You hear a knocking... and groan
  329. Flutters, do you have to bother me now in the evening as in the morning
  330. >The knocking gets louder
  331. >You're about to stand up and open the door, since it may be some other p0ny,  when your door gets broken down
  332. >"Have you missed me, pardner?"
  333. >This can't be true
  334. >The masked man, you, have returned
  335. W-what do you want? How is this even possible?!!
  336. >Before you're able to stand up he grabs your throat and presses you back on your couch
  337. >"I told you this already once. Your heart belongs to me!!!"
  338. >He adds more pressure to his grip and cuts off your breathing
  339. >You struggle but it's impossible to push him away
  340. >Everything turns dark slowly as he bursts out laughing
  341. >You're embraced by the cold gloom of unconsciousness while he just keeps laughing
  342. >But you hear something else besides his laughter
  343. >A soft but steady knocking
  344. S-stop it... STOP IT!!!
  345. >You rise in a sitting position and inhale sharply
  346. >Sweaty and panting you sit in your bed
  347. >Bright and warm morning light already invades your bedroom
  348. It ... it was just a dream, wasn't it?
  349. >You're unsure of the things you've experienced
  350. >It felt so real
  351. >While you try to get yourself together you hear the same soft knocking again
  352. >Damn Fluttershy
  353. >She is always her as punctual as a clock
  354. >You don't even need to set an alarm
  355. >You get up and do the triple S
  356. >She won't stop waiting in front of your house until you open the door but that doesn't mean you have to let your hygiene slide
  357. >After you've finished your morning ritual you go downstairs
  358. >Another knock
  359. >This is going to be unpleasant as always
  360. >You open the door and see
  361. >Flutterquiet, big surprise
  362. >Although she isn't that quiet, waking you up every morning and shit
  363. >She's chewing on something
  364. >"G-good mornin', Anon!"
  365. What is it this time?
  366. >You roll your eyes and tap impatiently with your foot on the ground
  367. >She spits a green mass into her hoof and reach out for you
  368. >Yuck.
  369. What the hay, Fluttershy?!
  370. >"I just ... err, I mean.. Anon? Is being fed like a foal your fetish?"
  371. >She blushes and shies away while still holding up the slobbery pile in her hoof
  372. >Saliva drops down as you stand and watch her
  373. >Does she really think you would eat something she had chewed for you?
  374. >"S-so?"
  375. This is one of the most disgusting things you've ever tried, are you really serious?
  376. >You wanted to say the upper line
  377. >But instead...
  378. Yes, being fed by you is my fetish.
  379. >What the fuck?!?!?!
  380. >She squeaks and raises her head
  381. >Her eyes shine brighter than ever before
  382. >"A-are you going to love me now? *Squee* I'm going to take the best care of you my sweet little Anon!"
  383. >You fucked up for good now...
  384.  
  385. END of CHAPTER 5
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