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Dovah in Equestria
Chapter 2: Call of the Dragon born
>Darkness
>That's all you saw before coming to this strange land.
>You awoke in a forest.
>Thinking it would be of no use to walk around just to get lost you sit down.
>It was day you could tell, but the sun was blocked by rain clouds.
>As you look up to the grey skies the words you learned sort themselves out like a categorized list in your head.
>At the top of the list was one word.
>As if it were second nature to you, you look to the sky and say the word.
"Lok Vah Koor"(Clear skies)
>Nothing happened
>Mad at you inevitable outcome you shout the words instead.
"LOK VAH KOOR"
>As you finish shout it a pulse of energy comes out of your mouth and into the sky.
>The sky parts to reveal a sunny day.
Rainbow dash's POV
>You are Rainbow dash.
>The greatest flier in Equestria and the loyalist friend.
>You and your friends are having a kicking party at Twilight's house.
>Then you notice something weird
>You look out Twi's window to see that it is sunny as Celestia's mother bucking flank.
>Today was a scheduled thunderstorm, but why was it so sunny?
Rarity: “Rainbow darling, why do you keep looking out the window so much?"
"Today there was supposed to be thunderstorms but now it’s sunny."
Twilight: “Something probably just went wrong come on let's get back"
"Yeah, okay"
>You still weren't reassured; something happened the workers don't mess up this big.
Anon's POV
>As your lazy side kicks in you think what would be an easy way to get to a nearby village.
>If you call a dragon you could just fly it into a village.
>As you finish your thoughts the categorized list in your head kicks in and the word: OD AH VIING(Call dragon), pops out like a sore thumb.
>Learning from your past mistake you shout the word.
"OD AH VIING"
>Unlike the pulse of energy like the last shout this one is like radar sending echoes around you the go into the distance.
Spike's POV
>I, Spike, am the luckiest dragon alive.
>The mane six and you were playing spin the bottle and it was your turn.
>Now was your chance to kiss Rarity.
>You took the bottle and you spun it with all your might.
>You start sweating as the bottle slows down.
>You look up to see that everybody was sweating bullets too...except Rarity who just casually watched the bottle.
>You swear everyone knew you like here except for Rarity.
>The 5 looked like if the bottle landed on anyone but Rarity they would make you spin it again.
>As the bottle stopped you look up and almost let out a squee.
>It actually landed on Rarity!
>Rarity looks up at you.
Rarity: "Alright Spikey-Wickey pucker up"
>This is the happiest moment of your life
>You lean in closer to kiss her but stop in your tracks.
"Did you guys hear that?"
>They give a collective "no."
>You look to pinkie who is giving you a look of 'just do it already'.
"I can't do it!"
>The girls all gasp.
Rarity:"Why is there something wrong with me, what's wrong with my face!"
"No, I really can't move!"
>Then you whole body gives a collective shudder and you do a 180 and run at the door.
>You turn to see the Mane 6 running after you.
Twilight: "Spike, what are you doing and where are you going!"
"My legs are moving on their own and whatever’s doing it is in the everfree forest!"
Fluttershy: "No Spike, It's too dangerous to go in there!"
"I know, but I can't move on my own so let's go where it takes me!"
Anon's POV
"Man what's taking it so long?"
>You reach to pick up Dawnstar and the elder scroll but only to find the elder scroll missing.
"God dammit!"
>You pick up your sword and start walking when you hear voices.
>In your years of adventuring you learned you could tell a lot by someone voice.
>They were six female, and one male and they were running at you.
>The first voice you heard made you feel as though you were drinking a cup full of overconfidence.
>The second one had an accent that came along with the package.
>The third one was speaking a mile a half-second.
>Another one spoke of a posh tongue, was she a princess?
>One spoke with curiosity, interest, and exploration.
>The last one scared you the most, the only word she said was, wait.
>It's always the quiet ones.
>You can now see them approached.
>The male was a small purple...lizard?
>He stops in his tracks out of fear when he sees you.
>Lizard:"Wha...what are you?
"I could ask the same, what are you a lizard"
>Lizard: “No, I'm a dragon!"
"You don't look like...
>Dragon: “I’m a baby dragon"
"Okay, kid what’s your name?"
>Baby dragon: “Spike...yours?"
"Anonymous the dragon born"
>Spike: “Dragon what?"
"Here"
>You place your index finger, Middle finger, and thumb on his forehead.
>With your other hand you place your index finger on his heart.
>Both of your eyes fill up with a familiar white glow before visions of what you are flash between you two.
>You're almost done when the girls from before come.
>To your surprise these weren't girls, hell they weren't even humans.
>They were small, pastel colored, ponies.
>Four of them weren't even ponies, two had wings and two had horns.
>The blue winged one with a rainbow mane charges you.
>You don't blame her; you even scare yourself when doing this (http://tinyurl.com/7rhu77v).
>Blue: “Get away from spike monster!"
>You were in no mood for this bullshit.
>You drop to the ground and just as the blue pony flies you yell at the top of your lungs.
"FUS RO DAH!"
>She flies in the air and doesn't fall down.
>The yellow one let's out an "eep" and flies up to find her friend.
>You quickly jump up and grab Dawnstar.
>You charge the orange one but she uses a rope she had to grab Dawnstar and throw it away.
>Still determined you run to the orange one.
>But as you run you notice you are not moving and are being pulled in the air
>You turn to see the purple one stopping you with her magic.
>She throws you with all the force she can muster into a tree.
>The force of your impact causes the tree to break.
>You check around to find your arm broken and several ribs broken.
>You knew this battle was coming to an end.
>To thing you Anonymous the great dragon born killed by small colorful horses.
>No
>Ignoring your body's cries to stop you stand up.
>You limp back to the ponies.
>The six look at you with confusion and disbelief.
>You limp towards the purple one with your hands out ready to do to her what you did to Spike.
>You inches away when the motherfucking blue one slams into you!
>You black out from the pain.
>Darkness
\Elsewhere/
>???: "It seems as though a new being has entered Equestria."
>???: "Yes, and it has brought chaos to the elements how lovely."
>???: "This is the perfect chance to attack why not now."
>???: "Because now is not the time"
>???: "How much longer do we have to wait."
>???: "Only a little while longer my friends."
Anon's POV
>You look around the train cart they had put you in.
>You see the six ponies from before around you and in front of you was spike.
>You tried to move but you were bound by ropes and gagged.
>The only thing you could do now was waiting.
>That’s when all the lights in the train cart go dark.
>You look up to see the pink one take out a light from nowhere and shine it one you.
>The blue only speaks up.
>"What did you do to spike!"
>She slaps you before you can even give a reaction of any kind.
>"Tell me what you did!"
>Is the mare serious, is she just blind or just really stupid, whatever it was she needed to chill the fuck down.
>It isn’t long before the purple one speaks up.
>"Rainbow seriously, If he can talk, which is unlikely he couldn't even do it because of the gag."
>That one just earned the smartest dumbass award.
>She releases the gag the steps back as if I could spit out acid or something.
>The blue or Rainbow as she was called was still swimming in a pool made out of liquid rage.
>You look to her and shout.
"KAAN DREM OV!"(Kyne's Peace)
>A burst of energy shoots out of your mouth Rainbow seeing this as an attack lunges at you.
>But unknowingly she passes through the energy burst.
>As she passes through it she stops and her ears droop and she backs away.
>"Sorry mister I promise not to do it again."
>She drops on her haunches and starts crying.
>The yellow pony consoles her.
>Rainbow:"I'MSORRYI'MSORRYI'MSORRYI'MSORRYI'MSORRY"
>What the fuck did you do, whatever that shout was worked!
>She had not only calmed but was balling her eyes out apologizing.
>You look around once again.
"Um...what is this?"
>All of them gasp with the purple one having a smile that would rival the size of a crescent moon.
>"You can talk!"
"Yes I can, just because I look different than you doesn't mean I'm automatically a savage animal.
>All of them look sad now, god damn it now you need to cheer them up.
"But its okay you didn't know that."
>They look better now.
>Good, any second longer with those sad faces would've made you die of a heart attack.
"So can you tell me what and who you are?"
>Twi: “I’m Twilight sparkle, the white one with the horn is Rarity, the blue one with wings is Rainbow Dash, next to her is Fluttershy, then there's Applejack and Pinkie Pie. Now if you wouldn't mind could you tell us what you are and what you did to spike there?
"Well I am Anonymous the great dragon born; I am a nord which is a descendant of the human rac..."
>Twi: “I’ve never heard of that race"
>Oh God how you hate being interrupted.
"Now if you untie me I can help spike there.
>Twilight looks at the other girls everyone nods except for Applejack who instead glares daggers at you.
>She doesn't trust you.
>But you don't need trust.
>Applejack walks up to you never dropping eye contact.
>As she unties you she whispers in your ear.
>"lookie here pardner ah don't like you an if you hurt any of mah friends ah will beat you near death an have Twalight fix you just to do it again."
"Aw, I love you too applejack"
>Apple jack was now the color of the red on Rainbow Dash's mane as she finishes untying you.
>As you stand up you wince in pain as you remember your broken ribs and your broken arm.
>You slowly limp to Spike.
>But not before shooting Applejack a wink and a pelvic thrust.
>Yes it hurt doing that but you deemed it necessary
>You stand above Spike getting into the four finger stance ready to send him out of his limbo.
Spike's POV
>What happened?
>What did Anon do?
>Did the girls do something to him?
>All these questions rushed in your mind.
>You've been in this grassy field for about an hour now.
>You tried the find an exit but the grassy field was never ending so you just sat there waiting
Twilight's POV
>You weren't quite sure what anon was about to do to spike but you let him.
>As anon approaches spike he places his claw thingies on him.
>Spike eyes start to glow; now you’re worried.
>You look at Applejack who is already charging him, but about five feet away from him she was knocked back.
>Anon looks at you with void white eyes.
>"Do not interrupt"
>His voice was no longer his but was filled with the other five girls and you can also recognize princess Celestia's voice.
>Applejack looks at you
>"Twah what do we do"
"Just wait"
Anon's POV
>You turn to the girls and see Applejack charging at you.
>Expecting this you had put up a shield before hand
>Fool me once...
"Do not interrupt"
>You are taken to a field inside spike's mind.
>Oh God is it really like this when you get interrupted
>This must be...
>No, Need to focus.
>Wandering for a bit you finally find spike sitting there.
"Hey Spikey-Wikey, are you ready leave yet?
>"Yeah let's go"
>You take his claw and restore his soul to his body.
>Spike shakes his head and goes to hug Twilight.
>All the girls go for a group hug around him.
>You look out the train to see a city resting on a mountain and you wonder how it has now fallen down.
>But as you pull into the station you can already tell today is going to be a long day.
>But now...rest.

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Dovah in Equestria
Chapter 2: Call of the Dragon born
 
>Darkness
>That's all you saw before coming to this strange land.
>You awoke in a forest.
>Thinking it would be of no use to walk around just to get lost you sit down.
>It was day you could tell, but the sun was blocked by rain clouds.
>As you look up to the grey skies the words you learned sort themselves out like a categorized list in your head.
>At the top of the list was one word.
>As if it were second nature to you, you look to the sky and say the word.
"Lok Vah Koor"(Clear skies)
>Nothing happened
>Mad at you inevitable outcome you shout the words instead.
"LOK VAH KOOR"
>As you finish shout it a pulse of energy comes out of your mouth and into the sky.
>The sky parts to reveal a sunny day.
 
 
Rainbow dash's POV
>You are Rainbow dash.
>The greatest flier in Equestria and the loyalist friend.
>You and your friends are having a kicking party at Twilight's house.
>Then you notice something weird
>You look out Twi's window to see that it is sunny as Celestia's mother bucking flank.
>Today was a scheduled thunderstorm, but why was it so sunny?
Rarity: “Rainbow darling, why do you keep looking out the window so much?"
"Today there was supposed to be thunderstorms but now it’s sunny."
Twilight: “Something probably just went wrong come on let's get back"
"Yeah, okay"
>You still weren't reassured; something happened the workers don't mess up this big.
 
 
Anon's POV
>As your lazy side kicks in you think what would be an easy way to get to a nearby village.
>If you call a dragon you could just fly it into a village.
>As you finish your thoughts the categorized list in your head kicks in and the word: OD AH VIING(Call dragon), pops out like a sore thumb.
>Learning from your past mistake you shout the word.
"OD AH VIING"
>Unlike the pulse of energy like the last shout this one is like radar sending echoes around you the go into the distance.
 
 
Spike's POV
>I, Spike, am the luckiest dragon alive.
>The mane six and you were playing spin the bottle and it was your turn.
>Now was your chance to kiss Rarity.
>You took the bottle and you spun it with all your might.
>You start sweating as the bottle slows down.
>You look up to see that everybody was sweating bullets too...except Rarity who just casually watched the bottle.
>You swear everyone knew you like here except for Rarity.
>The 5 looked like if the bottle landed on anyone but Rarity they would make you spin it again.
 
>As the bottle stopped you look up and almost let out a squee.
>It actually landed on Rarity!
>Rarity looks up at you.
Rarity: "Alright Spikey-Wickey pucker up"
>This is the happiest moment of your life
>You lean in closer to kiss her but stop in your tracks.
"Did you guys hear that?"
>They give a collective "no."
>You look to pinkie who is giving you a look of 'just do it already'.
"I can't do it!"
>The girls all gasp.
Rarity:"Why is there something wrong with me, what's wrong with my face!"
"No, I really can't move!"
>Then you whole body gives a collective shudder and you do a 180 and run at the door.
>You turn to see the Mane 6 running after you.
Twilight: "Spike, what are you doing and where are you going!"
"My legs are moving on their own and whatever’s doing it is in the everfree forest!"
Fluttershy: "No Spike, It's too dangerous to go in there!"
"I know, but I can't move on my own so let's go where it takes me!"
 
Anon's POV
"Man what's taking it so long?"
>You reach to pick up Dawnstar and the elder scroll but only to find the elder scroll missing.
"God dammit!"
>You pick up your sword and start walking when you hear voices.
>In your years of adventuring you learned you could tell a lot by someone voice.
>They were six female, and one male and they were running at you.
>The first voice you heard made you feel as though you were drinking a cup full of overconfidence.
>The second one had an accent that came along with the package.
>The third one was speaking a mile a half-second.
>Another one spoke of a posh tongue, was she a princess?
>One spoke with curiosity, interest, and exploration.
>The last one scared you the most, the only word she said was, wait.
>It's always the quiet ones.
 
>You can now see them approached.
>The male was a small purple...lizard?
>He stops in his tracks out of fear when he sees you.
>Lizard:"Wha...what are you?
"I could ask the same, what are you a lizard"
>Lizard: “No, I'm a dragon!"
"You don't look like...
>Dragon: “I’m a baby dragon"
"Okay, kid what’s your name?"
>Baby dragon: “Spike...yours?"
"Anonymous the dragon born"
>Spike: “Dragon what?"
"Here"
>You place your index finger, Middle finger, and thumb on his forehead.
>With your other hand you place your index finger on his heart.
>Both of your eyes fill up with a familiar white glow before visions of what you are flash between you two.
>You're almost done when the girls from before come.
 
>To your surprise these weren't girls, hell they weren't even humans.
>They were small, pastel colored, ponies.
>Four of them weren't even ponies, two had wings and two had horns.
>The blue winged one with a rainbow mane charges you.
>You don't blame her; you even scare yourself when doing this (http://tinyurl.com/7rhu77v).
>Blue: “Get away from spike monster!"
>You were in no mood for this bullshit.
>You drop to the ground and just as the blue pony flies you yell at the top of your lungs.
"FUS RO DAH!"
>She flies in the air and doesn't fall down.
>The yellow one let's out an "eep" and flies up to find her friend.
>You quickly jump up and grab Dawnstar.
>You charge the orange one but she uses a rope she had to grab Dawnstar and throw it away.
>Still determined you run to the orange one.
>But as you run you notice you are not moving and are being pulled in the air
>You turn to see the purple one stopping you with her magic.
>She throws you with all the force she can muster into a tree.
 
>The force of your impact causes the tree to break.
>You check around to find your arm broken and several ribs broken.
>You knew this battle was coming to an end.
>To thing you Anonymous the great dragon born killed by small colorful horses.
>No
>Ignoring your body's cries to stop you stand up.
>You limp back to the ponies.
>The six look at you with confusion and disbelief.
>You limp towards the purple one with your hands out ready to do to her what you did to Spike.
>You inches away when the motherfucking blue one slams into you!
>You black out from the pain.
>Darkness
 
\Elsewhere/
>???: "It seems as though a new being has entered Equestria."
>???: "Yes, and it has brought chaos to the elements how lovely."
>???: "This is the perfect chance to attack why not now."
>???: "Because now is not the time"
>???: "How much longer do we have to wait."
>???: "Only a little while longer my friends."
 
Anon's POV
>You look around the train cart they had put you in.
>You see the six ponies from before around you and in front of you was spike.
>You tried to move but you were bound by ropes and gagged.
>The only thing you could do now was waiting.
>That’s when all the lights in the train cart go dark.
>You look up to see the pink one take out a light from nowhere and shine it one you.
>The blue only speaks up.
>"What did you do to spike!"
>She slaps you before you can even give a reaction of any kind.
>"Tell me what you did!"
>Is the mare serious, is she just blind or just really stupid, whatever it was she needed to chill the fuck down.
>It isn’t long before the purple one speaks up.
 
>"Rainbow seriously, If he can talk, which is unlikely he couldn't even do it because of the gag."
>That one just earned the smartest dumbass award.
>She releases the gag the steps back as if I could spit out acid or something.
>The blue or Rainbow as she was called was still swimming in a pool made out of liquid rage.
>You look to her and shout.
"KAAN DREM OV!"(Kyne's Peace)
>A burst of energy shoots out of your mouth Rainbow seeing this as an attack lunges at you.
>But unknowingly she passes through the energy burst.
>As she passes through it she stops and her ears droop and she backs away.
>"Sorry mister I promise not to do it again."
>She drops on her haunches and starts crying.
>The yellow pony consoles her.
>Rainbow:"I'MSORRYI'MSORRYI'MSORRYI'MSORRYI'MSORRY"
>What the fuck did you do, whatever that shout was worked!
>She had not only calmed but was balling her eyes out apologizing.
 
>You look around once again.
"Um...what is this?"
>All of them gasp with the purple one having a smile that would rival the size of a crescent moon.
>"You can talk!"
"Yes I can, just because I look different than you doesn't mean I'm automatically a savage animal.
>All of them look sad now, god damn it now you need to cheer them up.
"But its okay you didn't know that."
>They look better now.
>Good, any second longer with those sad faces would've made you die of a heart attack.
"So can you tell me what and who you are?"
>Twi: “I’m Twilight sparkle, the white one with the horn is Rarity, the blue one with wings is Rainbow Dash, next to her is Fluttershy, then there's Applejack and Pinkie Pie. Now if you wouldn't mind could you tell us what you are and what you did to spike there?
"Well I am Anonymous the great dragon born; I am a nord which is a descendant of the human rac..."
>Twi: “I’ve never heard of that race"
>Oh God how you hate being interrupted.
"Now if you untie me I can help spike there.
>Twilight looks at the other girls everyone nods except for Applejack who instead glares daggers at you.
>She doesn't trust you.
>But you don't need trust.
 
>Applejack walks up to you never dropping eye contact.
>As she unties you she whispers in your ear.
>"lookie here pardner ah don't like you an if you hurt any of mah friends ah will beat you near death an have Twalight fix you just to do it again."
"Aw, I love you too applejack"
>Apple jack was now the color of the red on Rainbow Dash's mane as she finishes untying you.
>As you stand up you wince in pain as you remember your broken ribs and your broken arm.
>You slowly limp to Spike.
>But not before shooting Applejack a wink and a pelvic thrust.
>Yes it hurt doing that but you deemed it necessary
>You stand above Spike getting into the four finger stance ready to send him out of his limbo.
 
Spike's POV
>What happened?
>What did Anon do?
>Did the girls do something to him?
>All these questions rushed in your mind.
>You've been in this grassy field for about an hour now.
>You tried the find an exit but the grassy field was never ending so you just sat there waiting
 
Twilight's POV
>You weren't quite sure what anon was about to do to spike but you let him.
>As anon approaches spike he places his claw thingies on him.
>Spike eyes start to glow; now you’re worried.
>You look at Applejack who is already charging him, but about five feet away from him she was knocked back.
>Anon looks at you with void white eyes.
>"Do not interrupt"
>His voice was no longer his but was filled with the other five girls and you can also recognize princess Celestia's voice.
>Applejack looks at you
>"Twah what do we do"
"Just wait"
 
Anon's POV
>You turn to the girls and see Applejack charging at you.
>Expecting this you had put up a shield before hand
>Fool me once...
"Do not interrupt"
>You are taken to a field inside spike's mind.
>Oh God is it really like this when you get interrupted
>This must be...
>No, Need to focus.
>Wandering for a bit you finally find spike sitting there.
"Hey Spikey-Wikey, are you ready leave yet?
>"Yeah let's go"
>You take his claw and restore his soul to his body.
>Spike shakes his head and goes to hug Twilight.
>All the girls go for a group hug around him.
>You look out the train to see a city resting on a mountain and you wonder how it has now fallen down.
>But as you pull into the station you can already tell today is going to be a long day.
>But now...rest.

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