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  1. >Your name is Anon.
  2. >You are eleven years old.
  3. >You have found your way into a strange world.
  4. >A colorful world.
  5. >With ponies.
  6. >Talking ponies!
  7. >You walk through their town in awe of all it's wonders.
  8. >Ponies stare at you and talk among themselves, afraid to approach you.
  9. >You didn't think you were THAT scary...
  10. >A yellow pony with wings and pink hair flies to you and sniffs your hair.
  11. >You stop walking and stare.
  12. >She flies around you, investigating.
  13. >"You're a funny looking monkey... and so big!"
  14. >You feel a little offended at being called a monkey but say nothing.
  15. >She lands in front of you, "did you run from home?"
  16. >Her voice is soothing and you feel a warm kindness emanating from her presence.
  17. No, I just found this place.
  18. >She gasps along with the nearby ponies and her wings shoot out.
  19. >Suddenly she's shy and backs away from you.
  20. >"Y-y-you can talk..."
  21. Sure I can! So can you! This is really weird.
  22. >You hear a whine from her and she quickly runs away.
  23. What did I do?
  24.  
  25.  
  26. >You continue strolling aimlessly through the town until you come to a building that smells strongly of cake.
  27. >'Sugarcube Corner' the sign reads.
  28. >Sounds and smells like the place for you.
  29. >You enter.
  30. >You are a little dissatisfied to find that the inside of the shop smells like fire and burned hair.
  31. >The smell fades quickly and is replaced by the aroma of freshly baked pumpkin pie.
  32. >A pink pony without wings jumps over the counter and is instantly in your personal bubble.
  33. >"How did you get in here Mr. Monkey?!"
  34. >There it is again.
  35. I walked. And I'm not a monkey!
  36. >"WOOOOOOOOOOOW YOU CAN TALK!"
  37. >Her words literally blow you back.
  38. >"If you're not a monkey then what are you?"
  39. >You roll your eyes.
  40. A kid?
  41. >"A what?"
  42. >She's genuinely confused.
  43. You know, a child? A human child?
  44. >She bucks for some reason and laughs.
  45. >"Neeto! I always wanted a filly like the Cakes, but then something came up, I don't remember what it was but sometimes I get this twitch, not like my normal twitchy twitch twitches but a real wiggly one and my belly feels weird, you wanna rub my belly Mr. Muman?!"
  46. >This pony sure could babble.
  47. Actually... I was looking for something to eat.
  48. >"We have plenty to eat! Come on over to the counter!"
  49.  
  50.  
  51. >Pinkie Pie fills you up with plenty of baked sweets.
  52. >You chat for a while.
  53. >Mostly you listen.
  54. >She tells you a lot about the world of Equestria.
  55. >About her friends.
  56. >She wants to throw you a party.
  57. >Just as you start talking about parties on Earth, the yellow winged pony returns.
  58. >"Hi Fluttershy!" Pinkie waves her friend over.
  59. >Thanks to Pinkie you now know this is Fluttershy, the element of kindness and timid caregiver of Ponyville's animals.
  60. >She smiles at Pinkie Pie and looks nervously at you.
  61. >"Have you met Anon yet?" Pinkie asks.
  62. >Fluttershy whimpers and looks down, "y-yes..."
  63. >You start to feel awkward.
  64. Maybe I should let you two talk?
  65. >Fluttershy edges forward, "a-actually *mumble* I wanted to know if you'd *mumble* with me to my cottage?"
  66. Huh?
  67. >"Awww!" Pinkie Pie pushes you forward, "she wants you to come see the critters at her house."
  68. >You look back,
  69. Are you coming too?
  70. >"No silly, I have to work!"
  71. >You eye Fluttershy.
  72. >Things are a little awkward around her.
  73. >You don't want to frighten her.
  74. >But you don't want to seem rude.
  75. Okay Fluttershy.
  76. >She smiles weakly and turns to leave.
  77. >"Bye Pinkie."
  78. >You follow as Pinkie Pie gives an exaggerated goodbye.
  79. Thanks Fluttershy. I don't think any of these ponies really like seeing me here.
  80.  
  81.  
  82. >It's an uncomfortably quiet walk to her home.
  83. >The cottage looks cozy.
  84. >Like a summer home your parents owned.
  85. >Animals run here and there.
  86. >They all greet Fluttershy in their own ways.
  87. >They all make sure to keep their distance from you.
  88. >"I-it's okay... they'll learn to trust you."
  89. >She never makes eye contact with you.
  90. >This is probably the most bashful person- uh, pony you've ever met.
  91. >That wasn't a good description.
  92. >She leads you into the house.
  93. >She instantly flies to the kitchen and begins making tea.
  94. >You sit on the couch to seem less awkward.
  95. >Huh.
  96. >There's even places for animals everywhere in here.
  97. >Some squirrels run around.
  98. You have a nice home Fluttershy.
  99. >She sets down a tray of tea cups and spoons, the water still heating.
  100. >"Oh.. thank you..."
  101. >You want to make things a little more smooth.
  102. So what do you do aside from taking care of animals?
  103. >Fluttershy plays with her mane and looks at the ground, "I go to the spa with Rar- my friend Rarity... I like... picnics?"
  104. >You nod and scrounge for something else.
  105. >Luckily, the teapot starts whistling and Fluttershy rushes to grab it.
  106. >Her home smells like the woods.
  107. >You could see yourself living here...
  108. >Gotta get home.
  109. >Mom and definately dad are probably worried.
  110. Fluttershy, am I the only human you've seen?
  111.  
  112.  
  113. >She nods and pours you some tea.
  114. >You both sip in silence.
  115. Flutters-
  116. >"Anon-"
  117. >You speak at the same time and both stop.
  118. Hehe... go ahead.
  119. >"Oh no, y-you first..."
  120. It's nothing big, I was just going to ask about hotels here.
  121. >"Hotels?"
  122. >Oh.
  123. >They probably didn't have those here.
  124. A place to stay for a night?
  125. >She looks at your eyes for the first time, then quickly averts them.
  126. >"Y-you can s-stay here for t-t-t-tonight. If that's okay with you."
  127. I don't want to seem like a bum.
  128. >Her teacup wobbles in her hooves.
  129. >"Oh it's n-no problem. I live alone."
  130. >It is a nice place.
  131. >And there's the whole food situation.
  132. >Did this place even accept Earth currency?
  133. >No way.
  134. Thanks a lot Fluttershy. I'm sure I'll be out of your hair tomorrow.
  135. Or mane.
  136. >She looks a little disheartened.
  137. >"Where will you go?"
  138. >You finish your tea.
  139. I need to get home. To my family.
  140. >The sun is setting outside.
  141. >Fluttershy looks melancholy.
  142. >"Well... you should get some good sleep tonight."
  143. I'm sure I can get some nice sleep on this couch.
  144. >"Oh no, I have a b-bed..."
  145.  
  146.  
  147. >You accepted her offer.
  148. >What you failed to realize was that this bed she offered was the one she was also sleeping in.
  149. >It's just big enough.
  150. >If you had been an adult that came to this place, your knees would be hanging off the bed.
  151. >Fluttershy flies around you and begins tucking you in after you lay down.
  152. Uh thanks Fluttershy... but that's not necessary.
  153. >She gives one last tuck and lands beside the bed.
  154. >"Do you *mumble* anything else before bed?"
  155. >The way she hides in her mane is cute.
  156. >Actually, everything about her leaks cuteness.
  157. I'm good Fluttershy. Thanks a lot. I don't know what I would have done without you.
  158. >She blushes and flaps her wings.
  159. >"I would do anything for someone in need..."
  160. >You smile and close your eyes.
  161. >There's a feeling of her laying beside you on the bed.
  162. >You can tell she's nervous about the proximity.
  163. >Her teeth chatter and you hear a gulp.
  164. >Knowing she would most likely do this all night, you reach over and pull her into your side without opening your eyes.
  165. >She gives an *eep* and ruffles against your ribs.
  166. >She's warm.
  167. >And soft like a blanket.
  168. Is this alright?
  169. >She lays her tail over your leg,
  170. >"This is p-perfect."
  171. Goodnight Fluttershy.
  172. >You both fall asleep in a mutual embrace.
  173. >At least you weren't just lost in this strange world.
  174. >At least you had someone to look out for you.
  175. >You are thankful for Fluttershy.
  176.  
  177.  
  178. >In the morning Fluttershy makes you breakfast.
  179. >She's a great cook.
  180. >You discuss your plans to go home.
  181. >She won't be able to come.
  182. >She's been summoned by the princess and will be gone until evening.
  183. >You tell her if you find the way back you will wait to leave so you can say farewell to her and Pinkie Pie.
  184. >With a light snack packed you leave down the road.
  185. >Fluttershy waves as you go.
  186. >The plan was to simply go back to the field you arrived in yesterday.
  187. >It hadn't been long enough to forget the way.
  188. >You make an effort not to be spotted by any ponies.
  189. >One with a rose cutie mark (as Pinkie Pie called them) spots you and stares open-mouthed.
  190. >You rush to the woods.
  191. >As you run under the canopy, you can't help but notice how peaceful this place is.
  192. >It's colorful and scenic.
  193. >The only thing driving your feet back home is the thought of your parent's worry.
  194. >You break free of the trees and you're free.
  195. >This is the field.
  196. >You walk around the perimeter.
  197. >Was some sort of spell needed?
  198. >You didn't use one to get here.
  199. >Maybe that pony Pinkie was talking about could help you.
  200. >Twilight Sparkle, the element of magic.
  201. >She could get you right back to your parents.
  202. >You chuckle at the thought of a unicorn meeting your parents and continue to look around the field.
  203.  
  204.  
  205. >There's a rustling in the leaves of the wood's edge.
  206. >You snap up from examining a rock and look.
  207. >A small pony with a curly pink and purple mane and tail trots out smiling cheerily.
  208. >This was a filly.
  209. >"Hi, my name's Sweetie Belle, what's yours?"
  210. >She's the cutest thing you've ever seen.
  211. >You feel your masculinity reduced slightly.
  212. Hi, I'm Anon...
  213. >She stops near you and stares smiling.
  214. >Were all these ponies uncomfortable to be around except for Pinkie Pie?
  215. >"What are you doing out here?"
  216. >Her voice is cute.
  217. >Her little horn is adorable.
  218. I'm looking for my home.
  219. >She looks excited and ready to help.
  220. >"Ponies have been talking about a funny animal in town, that is probably you!"
  221. >At least she didn't call you a monkey...
  222. >"I'll help you look for your home Anon!"
  223. Really? Thank you.
  224. >She starts looking under rocks and brushing leaves aside with her tail.
  225. >"What's it look like?"
  226. >The two of you look around the field for another hour.
  227. >Sweetie Belle is enjoyable to talk to and doesn't treat you like some freaky animal.
  228. >You decide the search is pointless without magic and call it quits.
  229. I'll come back tomorrow.
  230. >"Alright, I can get my friends to help! We're trying to get cutie marks."
  231. >The two of you say goodbye and you head back to Fluttershy's.
  232. >You'd have to ask to stay another night.
  233.  
  234.  
  235. >Fluttershy isn't back when you arrive at her cottage.
  236. >She told you to just make yourself at home if this happened.
  237. >You decide to check out the living room.
  238. >You notice she has a lot of pictures set up.
  239. >Mostly pictures of other ponies.
  240. >Now you have faces to put with the elements of harmony you've heard about.
  241. >They must be them, there's one with a rainbow mane, a purple one with a large book, Pinkie Pie...
  242. >Fluttershy must care a lot about her friends.
  243. >You wonder if she has any other friends besides those.
  244. >She's probably too timid to meet anyone besides the other elements...
  245. >"I'd like to get a picture of you too, if t-that's okay with you..."
  246. >You turn.
  247. >Fluttershy stands in the doorway with Angel on her back.
  248. Sure. How was your trip?
  249. >She comes in and scuffs the ground with a hoof.
  250. >"It was... Nice."
  251. >Looks like you'll have to lead the conversation again.
  252. I didn't really find anything in that field.
  253. >She perks up.
  254. >"You can try tomorrow. Twilight and I c-can help!"
  255. Thanks. Listen... Can I ask you another favor?
  256. >"Of course."
  257. >You rub the back of your head.
  258. Can I... stay one more night?
  259. >Her wings flap excitedly.
  260. >"Of course! You just stay as long as you need mister!"
  261. >She seems embarrassed by her outburst and retreats into her mane.
  262. >"I mean... I j-just live alone..."
  263. >You walk over and stroke her mane.
  264. >Ponies seem to not find this weird.
  265. >They like affection.
  266. >Especially Fluttershy.
  267. Thank you Fluttershy.
  268. >You both talk and she makes a filling dinner.
  269. >Fluttershy falls asleep mid-conversation.
  270. >You smile and carry her to bed.
  271. >You really are thankful for Fluttershy.
  272.  
  273.  
  274. >That night you lay awake thinking of home.
  275. >Your parents must have called the police by now.
  276. >Fluttershy mumbles in her sleep and squeezes into you.
  277. >She's one of the kindest people you have ever met.
  278. >Or ponies rather.
  279. >She has the right idea.
  280. >You close your eyes and try to drift off.
  281. >Her hoof moves up your chest.
  282. >It's kind of uncomfortable that you chose to sleep shirtless, but you figure there's no harm what with her being a pony and you a human.
  283. >It was just like sleeping with your dog back home.
  284. >"A-anon, are you awake?"
  285. >You pretend to be deep asleep.
  286. >She looked really tired today and you didn't want to keep her up.
  287. >She lays her head back down beside you and lightly rubs your chest.
  288. >It tickles.
  289. >You feel her face move closer to yours and she kisses your cheek quickly.
  290. >You still feign sleep.
  291. >After waiting for a reaction she continues planting kisses on you.
  292. >This is getting a little uncomfortable for you.
  293. >Her hoof moves from your chest to your belly.
  294. Fluttershy?
  295. >She squeaks and rolls over on top of you.
  296. What are you doing?
  297. >Her lips fall upon yours.
  298. Mmmmf!
  299. >You're unable to push her away.
  300. >She sits up breathing heavily and looks down at you.
  301. >"A-anon I I I I.... I REALLY like y-you!"
  302.  
  303.  
  304. >She pins your arms down to the bed.
  305. >You had always been a scrawny kid.
  306. >But it still surprised you that Fluttershy could overpower you.
  307. Fluttershy please let me go!
  308. >She looks conflicted.
  309. >"If... If I don't do this, you could be gone t-tomorrow!"
  310. >She bends down and locks lips with you again.
  311. >Her tongue frantically scrambles against your lips.
  312. >This was surreal.
  313. >Were you really being molested by a colorful talking pony?
  314. >You feel a wetness on your stomach where she is sitting on you.
  315. Mmmmmf! Mmmf!
  316. >Fluttershy reaches back and begins working your pants down.
  317. >You break away from her mouth.
  318. HEY STOP!
  319. >She's on your mouth again and gets your pants to your knees.
  320. >Her hoof goes to your crotch and begins awkwardly fondling.
  321. >"Anon please don't h-hate me... I've been so lonely! And then you came along..."
  322. >You begin to tear up in panic.
  323. I'm only eleven!
  324. >"Age doesn't matter, we can still be together..."
  325. >She holds you up to her folds.
  326. >"A-are you ready?"
  327. Stop stop don't please!
  328. >She rocks back and you slide in.
  329. OH GOD NO! YOU'RE A HORSE! MAKE IT STOP! HELP!
  330. >She puts her mouth on yours again.
  331. >Your feet kick the air behind her.
  332. >She sits up, "please don't cry Anon... I want to make you feel good."
  333. >You sob and stop fighting.
  334. >You just want to go home.
  335. >"There. That's more like it mister."
  336. >She starts working herself up and down.
  337.  
  338.  
  339. >You don't know what to do.
  340. >Fluttershy begins moaning as she works herself up and down on you.
  341. >You feel helpless.
  342. >Her hooves are beginning to hurt you where they press your arms down.
  343. >How could she do this?
  344. >You trusted her.
  345. >How could this shy pony force herself on you?
  346. I... I trusted you! You're supposed to be the element of kindness!
  347. >She frowns and continues pumping, "But I am kind. I'm showing you how much I care for you."
  348. >She leans down and kisses up your neck.
  349. >Her mouth presses against your ear.
  350. >"I'm s-sure this is what your parents would want for you... To be loved and taken care of while your gone."
  351. >Your tears cloud your vision.
  352. >"They can rest easy knowing I'm taking care of their little foal."
  353. >She moans and her insides give a squeeze.
  354. >"Now please s-stop crying... I'm going to take good care of you."
  355. >You feel yourself release into her.
  356. >"That's better Anon."
  357. >Fluttershy rolls off of you and wraps you in an embrace.
  358. >"Even if you can't go home, I'll still be here for you..."
  359. >She kisses your forehead.
  360. >"I love you Anon."
  361. >You fall asleep wrapped in her arms crying silently.
  362. >Tomorrow you would leave.
  363. >And never see Fluttershy again.
  364.  
  365.  
  366. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0tlfKhiArCM&feature=youtube_gdata_player