Captain Pone 1/2

>This story all started on a cold and stormy night in the middle of Ponyville.

>The wind was howling and the scum of the town lurked in the shadows.

>Always waiting for an opportunity to get a break.

>Always skulking...

>Okay actually it was another sunny, cheerful, non-skulking, non-lurking, rainbows and smiles bullshit day in Ponyville.

>You walk past the school in deep thought.

>Where was the action?

>Where was the adventure?

>You always were a big comic fan.

>Back on Earth you were a regular comicon attendee.

>And no one had better dare get you started on /co/...

>You look over at the school grounds.

>Fillies laugh and prance around playing games.

>You feel a sense of warmth fill you.

>Sure, you wished for action and adventure, but seeing those young ponies happy and carefree made you really appreciate the peace.

>You notice Applebloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo together.

>Two fillies walk over to them.

>If you remember correctly, those two were called Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon...

>You stop and watch as they talk.

>Suddenly Silver Spoon pushes Sweetie Belle.

>She stumbles and falls back into a mud puddle created by yesterday's heavy rain.

>You gasp.

>Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara laugh and walk off around the building.

Not on MY watch!

>You make sure your beloved friend Sweetie Belle is helped up by her friends,

>Then take off at a steady pace after the two bullies.

Not on my watch...

 

 

>You catch up to the two fillies in an empty court yard.

>Perfect.

>They gossip and giggle as they walk, swaying their little hips.

>You take off toward them at a run.

>As you get close they stop and look back at you.

>Fear fills their eyes as they see the only human in Equestria charging at them full tilt.

>They drop to the ground and cover their heads as you jump over them.

>You close your eyes and smile, imagining how awesome you must look.

>You land and skid to a stop in the dirt, turning and posing with your hands on your hips.

>The two fillies look up in awe at your form.

>You raise two fingers to the sun and give them a dashing smile.

Hello girls!

>They look at eachother, back to you, then back to eachother and roll over laughing.

>"W-what are you DOING monkey man?!"

>You frown.

>That was a totally lame super hero name.

I saw what you did to my friends.

>Diamond Tiara makes a constipated face, "you're friends with the LOSER crusaders?!"

>Silver Spoon nods after failing to kiss Diamond Tiara when she's thinking not looking, "y-yeah! We thought better of you Anon!"

>You smile menacingly.

I don't appreciate you bullying my friends.

>Diamond Tiara tosses her mane back with a *hmph!*

>"What are you gonna do, tell on us to Cheerilee?"

>You step forward and rub your hands together.

I suppose you girls have never heard of corporal punishment?

 

 

>You grab both fillies.

>They scream and flail.

>Placing them over your knee, you raise your free hand.

Let this be a lesson,

>You swing your hand forward and slap Silver Spoon's little rump.

Bullies will learn fear,

>The fillies scream and begin to apologize and sob as you go to town spanking their bottoms.

BY TAKING IT IN THE REAR! HAHA!

>After a few good spanks you place them back down.

>They both rub their plots with tears in their eyes and back away from you.

>"My *hic* m-my father will hear about this!"

>You take a sudden threatening step at them.

>They turn and flee with a yell.

>You practice another pose accompanied by a hearty laugh.

>That felt great!

>You really saved the day!

>"Anon!"

>You turn to see Sweetie Belle running to you

>She stops in front of you in a crouching position like she's ready to pounce.

>Her eyes are wide with excitement and her cute little tail flails around behind her.

>"I saw the whole thing! You're my hero!"

>She jumps into your arms and hugs you.

>You laugh and rub her head.

All in a days work Sweetie Belle! HaHA!

>You feel your pride swell.

>You were a hero.

>You ARE a hero!

>Time for a visit to Rarity.

 

 

>You bring Sweetie Belle back home.

>Rarity greets you and Sweetie Belle goes into giddy mode telling her sister of your feats.

>Rarity approves.

>She offers you some lunch as thanks.

>"Sweetie Belle has told me of those AWFUL little brats, I'd say it's about time they got a little slap on the hoof."

>She smiles at you with sparkling eyes.

>"Or on their BUTTS!" Sweetie Belle busts into a fit of giggles and spews her sandwich everywhere.

>"Manners Sweetie!" Rarity scolds.

>What a pleasant family.

Rarity, I actually had a favor to ask...

>A few hours later you are back in Carousel Boutique after a trip to your house.

>You had made some quick sketches and brought them to Rarity.

>She puts on her glasses and spreads the drawings out on a workbench.

>"Oh my, darling this is... Simply marvelous!"

>You grin at her praise.

>"And this spandex would look so fetching on your tight tushie!"

>You blush.

>"I'll get started right away! We'll have two done by midnight."

>You thank her over and over as she starts her work.

>It was happening.

>Your suit would strike fear and awe into all those who opposed the peace.

>All those who opposed

>CAPTAIN PONE!

 

 

>The next night you take to the streets.

>Or whatever the ponies call them.

>Your suit feels good on you.

>All green spandex covering your whole body.

>Black boots and gloves.

>A simple eye cover like Robin wore.

>Rarity sewed a large logo on the chest in black lettering.

>Two letters.

>Your symbol as Captain Pone:

>'CP'

>Wait a minute...

>Well shit, probably should have thought this out more...

>The ponies won't make that connection though.

The name stays!

>You stand on a roof and scope out your town.

>There must be SOME trouble going on.

>A movement below catches your eye.

>There's a pony skulking around in the shadows.

It's... Pone time.

>You jump from the roof and land in front of the villain.

For great justice!

>No no, that's no good.

>You pinch the bridge of your nose and try another phrase.

What are... YOU doing here?!"

>It's a work in progress.

>The pony drops a bottle of what you see is cider.

>You look up from it and get a full view.

Rainbow Dash??

>She hiccups and her eyes go wide.

>"What the... That's- that's so AWESOME!"

>She runs to you and examines your suit.

>"Is that a CAPE?!"

>You can't help but pose for her.

Yes it is I! Defender of peace! CAPTAIN POOOOOOONE!

>She cheers and clops her hooves together,

>"You are seriously the COOLEST pony ever!"

>Wait what?

P-pony?

 

 

>She thinks you're a pony...

>Rainbow Dash circles around you.

>You will let her admire your glory for a while before walking a beat again.

>You feel her pull up your cape.

>"Oh yeah... That's one nice ass you got there Captain."

>What?

>You turn and step back.

Thank you?

>Her face is flushed. This pony is drunk.

>In public!

Rainbow Dash, I'm sorry.

>She tilts her head.

This is against the law and must therefore punished.

>She turns and shakes her rear at you.

>You can see her naughty bits as her tail sways.

>She looks back and moans.

>"Come punish me then Captaiiiiin..."

>You stutter and back away.

Actually... Just head home Dash.

>She puts a hoof to her head.

>"Oh but what if I pass out on the way? Or get mugged?!"

>Good point.

>You have a civil duty.

Okay Rainbow let's-

>Before you can finish she zips under your legs and you're riding her through the air.

Whoa! What are you-

>She cheers and performs her Sonic Rainboom.

>You can't help but laugh along with her.

This is amazing!

>"You ain't seen nothing yet Captain Bone, wait until we get to my place."

 

 

>You get to her place.

Wait this isn't your home!

>She's brought you to the hotel.

>"Of course not. I'm crashing here for the week while my house is re-fluffed."

>Couldn't she do that herself?

>Whatever.

Well, I must take my leave now Rainbow Dash. Take care!

>You turn to leave but feel a tug on your cape.

>"Wait..."

>You turn back and see her holding onto you sheepishly.

>"Captain Pone, you're so cool... And... I r-really would like it if you maybe hung out with me for a little maybe?"

>But

>But crime!

>And... And villains!

>She gives you the puppy eyes.

>Shit.

Alright. But, only for a little young mare!

>She squees and drags you inside.

>You get to her room and have a seat on the couch.

>She pops open a bottle of Punch Berry Wine and pours two glasses.

>Your weakness is wine.

>So classy.

>She sits beside you and gives you a glass.

So Rainbow Dash, what do you do for fun?

>She takes a long swig, "what do YOU do for fun Captaiiiin?"

>Is there something in her eyes?

>Why is she looking at you like that?

>And why are her wings stuck out like that?

>And WHY is she massaging your thigh?

>You didn't even get into a brawl today, so you're not sore.

Well, I like to fight crime!

>Rainbow places a hoof on your spandex-bound crotch.

>"And I like to do this!"

>She latches on to you and forces her tongue into your mouth.

 

 

>The fiend!

>You push her away.

Rainbow Dash what are you thinking?!

>Her hoof shoots up and rips away your mask.

>Your secret identity!

>You cover your face, but hear her gasp.

>"Wait, y-you're not a pony! You're... Anon?"

Damn...

>You uncover yourself and look away.

You've revealed my identity. And on my first night too...

>What a poor excuse for a hero.

>Dash hands you your mask back, still in shock.

>"Anon I didn't know you could be so..."

>You cringe.

>"... AWESOME!"

What?

>When you look at her she tackles you onto the bed.

Rainbow wait, I have to go!

>She rubs her body on your spandex and kisses you again.

>"I'm so turned on right now. I think- I think spandex is my fetish."

>You struggle under her.

>She looks down, "I don't think you came armed, so I'll assume that isn't your weapon jabbing into my crotch..."

>Oh no.

>Of all the rotten times to deploy an erection...

Rainbow Dash let me go!

>She frowns.

>"You wouldn't want all the ponies in town to know Captain Pone's secret identity now would you?"

>Your dreams!

Now uh, let's not be hasty!

>She smiles and paws at your suit.

>"Good. Now I don't know how to get this suit off of you so, whip out that cock!"

 

 

>The next thing you know, you're behind Rainbow on the bed with your hands on her rear.

>Your super cock is at full power, exposed through the zipper hole Rarity installed for super urination purposes.

>Rainbow moans and wiggles her butt.

>"I don't even care about foreplay, just rut me!"

>You look over at the wall.

>There's a large mirror.

>You see yourself wearing your full suit, positioned for action.

>She let you put the mask back on.

>Actually she insisted.

>Suddenly you feel cool.

>You stare at the mirror as you squeeze her marshmallowy flanks and thrust into her.

>She moans and collapses forward.

>You smile at your reflection as you begin to pump into her wet hole.

>"Oh yes Captain! I've been a baaaad mare!"

>You take your hands off of her flanks and flex into the mirror as you rut her.

>The way the spandex hugs your curves pleases you.

>Rainbow Dash cums and gives a bleat before she passes out.

>You salute your reflection and exit her.

>After you zip yourself up and tuck her in, you snap a piture of yourself with the spy camera you keep on you and sign it.

>'To my adoring fan Rainbow Dash, xoxo CP'

>With that final touch you lay the photo next to her and leave.

>Of course you pose and flex in the mirror some more before jumping from the window.

 

 

>You are Fluttershy.

>For the past two days you have watched Anon's antics.

>To say the least, your groin had been a melting pot of sugar honey iced tea.

>His Captain Pone costume made your heart flutter.

>The way his cape and hair flapped in the wind when he ran made your wings flap.

>That tushie in those spandex made-

>"O-oh my..."

>You whine and back into the wall, lightly rubbing your flanks back and forth.

>"I'm so... Naughty."

>You see Ano- Captain Pone jump gracefully from the window of the hotel he entered with Rainbow Dash.

>Like a beautiful hawk, he lands on the ground

>On his face.

>You wince as Captain Pone belly flops into the grass.

>Not the best landing....

>You flitter from the pile of trash you're hiding in and over to him.

C-captain Pone, a-are you okay?

>He looks up in shock.

>"Who are you fiend?!"

>You attempt a pose and whimper.

>The suit Rarity made you is sure to impress him.

>It's an all pink fuzzy fluffy bunny suit, complete with floppy ears.

>So cute~

>But you don't wear a mask, the ears are connected to a hood, so your face sticks out.

>Why doesn't he recognize you?

Um... I'm B-Bunny Mare, y-your sidekick!

>He stands and dusts his suit off.

>Your legs wobble.

>"Sidekick?!"

>You cower as he rubs his chin in thought.

>"BRILLIANT! My very own sidekick! Are you ready to fight for peace?!"

>He poses with one arm raised behind him as though he's running.

Um, y-yes?

>He punches the air.

>Sooooo cute!~

YES! YES I'M READY FOR YOU!

>"Then let us go forth BM!"

>Captain Pone hops onto your back and points to the sky.

>"WE RIDE!"

 

 

>You are Anon.

>No, you are Captain Pone!

>For the next few nights you ride with your sidekick, B-Bunny Mare, or as you call her: BM.

>There's actually crime everywhere in this god forsaken town!

>Fillies not returning books on time to Cheerilee!

>Jay walkers!

>Litter bugs!

>The Mayor is now aware of your presence and has hired ponies to capture you.

>A wanted man.

>It made you hard.

>B-Bunny Mare was a strange one.

>Every time you rode her, she secreted a mist behind her through the air.

>Was this a form of cloaking device?

>And what about those squeaks she would emitt during your rides?

>You had begun to suspect she employed sonar for flight.

>Pretty cool.

>This night, you land at the newest fiend's lair.

>The library...

>Twilight Sparkle had been using an ungodly amount of electricity in that tree of hers.

>What was she doing in there?

>You knock on the door.

>When the purple mare answers, she looks tired and frazzled.

>"What do you want?"

Twilight Sparkle, I have come to do battle!

>She groans, "Listen, you REALLY don't know what you're dealing with here, I'm on a day off and I haven't even gone in my basement today, DON'T make me change my mind!"

>The door slams in your face.

>Fucking Twilight Sparkle.

 

 

>Looking for more crime, you fly through the air on your trusty sidekick.

BM! Down there!

>You point down to a pony standing on a roof.

>B-Bunny Mare swoops down, in a fluster of cloaking mist and sonar squeals as you press your body against her.

TRIXIE!

>BM lands and you do a barrel roll off, stopping in a pose the Power Rangers would cream over.

Trixie you villain! What are you doing?!

>The unicorn smiles.

>"The Great And Powerful Trixie has heard of you Captain Pone!"

>She removes her hat.

>"And your sidekick, B-Bunny Mare!"

>B-Bunny Mare squeaks, "Um, a-actually it's just Bunny Mare..."

>Trixie reaches into her hat, "Whatever! Behold!"

>She pulls a filly from the magical hat.

Sweetie Belle?!

>Sweetie squirms as she is held in the air.

>"Help me Captain Pone!"

>Your act almost falters

Trixie what are you...

>She walks to the edge of the building and holds Sweetie Belle over the empty space.

NO!

>You run forward but stop when Trixie holds up a hoof,

>"Ah ah ah Captain Pone, you wouldn't want me to slip now would you?"

>You grit your teeth, frozen in confliction.

What is your game Trixie? Why do this?

>She flips her mane.

>"To send a message! A message that it is not okay to steal the spotlight in this town!"

>Bunny Mare whimpers from behind you, "b-but you're just a b-background pony..."

Easy now Trixie...

>"You're only a p-plot device for Twilight Sparkle t-to grow..."

Put Sweetie Down and we can end this!

>Trixie tilts her head.

>"Hmmm, okay."

>She lets Sweetie Belle drop.

 

 

NOOOOOOO!

>You run and jump from the building.

>You can hear Bunny Mare yell behind you.

>Trixie laughs and disappears in a cloud of smoke.

SWEETIE!

>You reach out for her as she plummets.

>This three story fall would surely end her.

>She screams and reaches for you.

>Almost touching...

>You feel hooves wrap around your stomach from behind as Bunny Mare stops your fall.

NO! NOT ME! HER!

>You reach futily as Sweetie Belle falls.

>Her scream is silenced as she smacks headfirst into the ground.

SWEETIE BELLE!

>Bunny Mare is crying as the two of you stare at her unmoving body.

Oh god... Take us down!

>You are lowered and collapse on your knees over her.

>You put an ear to her mouth.

She's breathing! We need to get her to a hospital!

>You scoop up her little body and hop on Bunny Mare.

Hurry!

 

 

It's been two days since the fall.

>You sit in a hospital room at the bedside.

>You've never left her side.

>Your costume had been thrown away.

>The other ponies all came and went every day.

>Rarity almost never left.

>Rainbow Dash had come to comfort you when she could.

>You sob and drag your nails down your face.

>This was all your fault.

>You never asked for this.

>You had only wanted to help these ponies.

>To help this town.

>But instead, you had gotten a filly hurt.

>A filly that trusted you.

>A filly that could possibly not make it...

>No amount of apologies could wake Sweetie from her coma.

>You grab her tiny hoof and bury your face into her bed.

>"Anon?"

>You look up in shock.

Sweetie Belle?

>She smiles weakly at you, the setting sun illuminating her from behind.

>"You're here..."

I-I'm here... I'm always here. I'm so sorry Sweetie Belle I'm SO sorry!"

>You break down.

>Her hoof rubs your hair.

>"Captain Pone may be super, but... You'll always be my... Hero... Anon..."

>She fades into slumber.

 

 

>You are Fluttershy.

>Emotions cannot describe how hard it was to see Anon cast aside the mask.

>The thing that made him happy.

>That bond you had shared on those magical nights.

>All gone.

>Burned.

>By Trixie.

>Sure it was sad what happened to Sweetie Belle, but...

>You are in your cottage.

>The whole night was spent preparing this.

>A new costume.

>Makeup smeared across your face.

>Grease in your mane.

>This character you had seen in Anon's beloved comic books.

>This was the way to get your time back.

>You lick your lips and leave your home.

>This was for Anon.

>You would be the villain.

>Not the villain he wanted.

>But the one he needed...

>You had made a decent nurse outfit with the help of Rarity.

>It gets you into the hosptial unnoticed.

>You find Sweetie Belle's room.

>Anon had finally decided to go home.

>Oh well.

>You walk up to the bed.

>Sweetie opens her eyes weakly.

>"F-Fluttershy?"

>You smile wickedly down at her.

Hi.

@

 

 

END PART 1