Title:           Gyroman's alt outline
Author:          Robo-Hobo
Pastebin link:   http://pastebin.com/XU8jsagg
First Edit:      Thursday 11th of April 2013 01:50:15 PM CDT
Last Edit:       Thursday 11th of April 2013 01:50:15 PM CDT

 
>Ponies and deer have a festival of peace and stuff between the two races.
>Ponies tie branches to head.
>The mane six are at the festival
>Good times are to be had.
>Aj and Rd are walking about together.
>Competing at booths and stuff.
>they both notice that a young buck is watching a doe from afar.
>They go over to him and ask him about the situation.
>Buck is redwood and the doe is mapleleaf.
>Redwood is shy and shit and needs to man the fuck up.
>Aj and RD decide to help him.
>They have conflicting views on how he should go about it.
>They decide to make a compition out of it.
>Their goal is to get mapleleaf watch the fetival fireworks with redwood at the end of the day.
>Tons of shenanigans ensue.
>The message of the story is to be barve
>It also happens to tie in with the working title "Do or Deer"
 
Things to keep in mind, Redwood could easily be changed out with Treebark, being that a young stallion has become love struck by a doe.
 
The pones who help out the young male can be switched out or even be the entire mane six.