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A'Nown (Part 3)

By: Pony_Azathoth on May 13th, 2012  |  syntax: None  |  size: 7.29 KB  |  hits: 271  |  expires: Never
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  1. >A'Nown stretched out his cosmic form
  2. >The statue was his anchor, and his power was strongest there
  3. >The farther away he went, the weaker he became
  4. >Regardless, he could still influence some things
  5. >He saw a pair of lovers walking through the words near his statue
  6. >He nudged them in his direction
  7.  
  8. >The lovers walked down the path until the female one spoke up
  9. "Hey, let's go check out what's over there; off the path."
  10. "What? Why?"
  11. "I don't know, I just have a hunch."
  12. >The male lover shrugs and they both walk off the path in the proper direction
  13. >Jackpot
  14.  
  15. >The lovers walk in the forest for a minute, keeping in mind where they came from as to not get lost, and find that statue
  16. >They look over it with a mix of disgust and awe, and wonder at how it got here and what it is for.
  17. >The male one walks up and pokes it, shrinking away at the nasty sensation if gives off
  18. >The female one speaks
  19. "...I don't like this, let's go."
  20. >They turn to leave
  21. >They are lost
  22. >They look around, everything around them has changed.
  23. >They start to panic, trying to figure out what happened
  24. >The male immediately blames the statue
  25. >Suddenly, a voice rings out, silencing the two.
  26. "One of you may return home, but the other must stay. Make your choice."
  27. >They freeze, and look at each other.
  28. >They were scared, frightened
  29. >The two, who were madly in love, immediately stepped back from each other
  30. >They watched each other all day, not trusting
  31. >They had to force themselves to stay awake
  32. >They slowly began to wither away in hunger
  33. >Until one day, the male made up his mind
  34.  
  35. >He strut up to the female
  36. >He was bigger and stronger then her, even though they were both weak
  37. >He also managed to find some food, where as she didn't, and there was no way she could fight him off
  38. >She shrank back in fear
  39. >He spoke
  40. "Please, go. I'll stay here. I don't want to see you suffer; I love you. Please enjoy life without me..."
  41. >The female smiled and felt tears coming from her eyes
  42. "No! I can't leave you! I will stay with you, forever!"
  43. >The two embrace, tears running down their faces
  44. >They both curled up together for a passionate night, and the next morning they were both dead, still holding each other.
  45. >The statue watched them the whole time
  46. >It glared at them
  47. >How disgusting.
  48.  
  49. >The Statue looked down at the bodies of the two lover p0nies
  50. >Their dedication was a bit sickening to him.
  51. >They didn't create nearly as much fun as he wanted.
  52. >You know what? Fine. He would have his fun.
  53.  
  54. >The air whispered across the backs of the skin-and-bones lover p0nies
  55. >They could feel their lungs being refilled with precious air, heat returning to their cold limbs
  56. >They were alive once again.
  57. >They opened their eyes and they looked into each others eyes
  58. >They smiled, their love rekindled
  59. >Suddenly, with a powerful pull, the male p0ny was pushed away from the female one
  60. "No!" She cried out, clawing her way to her feet even though her limbs cried out in agony
  61. >The male disappeared through the fog
  62. >She turned to the statue with a hateful gaze
  63. "What have you done with him?!" She asked, stomping a hoof
  64. >The statue did not respond
  65. "Why did you bring us back? To torture us!? We were together on the other side! We were happier!"
  66. >The statute did not respond
  67. >She screamed
  68.  
  69. >The girl p0ny ran forward and struck the statue with her hoof
  70. >Again and again she attacked it
  71. >But she got nothing from it except a sore hoof
  72. >The statue seemed indestructible and hateful in it's tyrannical gaze
  73. >She shivered and backed off
  74. >She looked around, and saw a shadow in the fog
  75. "Is it you!? My lover!"
  76. >She called but the shadow moved away
  77. "Come back!"
  78. >She ran after the shadow
  79. >Right underneath her the real male p0ny got up and saw her running
  80. "No! Stop! I'm here!"
  81. >She didn't hear him
  82. >She couldn't hear him
  83. >He ran after her, and she ran after nothing
  84. >The goose chase would go on, forever and ever.
  85. ----------------------------
  86.  
  87. >Many years have passed
  88. >The local legends of the two lovers have passed around
  89. >Eventually, a group of 5 young colts leave their town to explore the woods to find the strange statue
  90. >They walk down the road in the woods of a few hours
  91. >They see somep0ny walking down the path a ways ahead of them
  92. >It looks like a he
  93. >He seems to be wearing a ratty cloak and hood, and suddenly turns and walks straight into the woods
  94. >The boys run and look around but he is gone
  95. "Should we follow him...?"
  96. >The other boys nod and follow the strange stallion, perhaps he was looking for the statue as well.
  97.  
  98. >They go deeper and deeper into the woods
  99. >It gets darker
  100. >the boys start to get scared, they start seeing a few strange animals
  101. >They swear the animals seemed deformed or acting insane, but they can't really tell as they all seem to disappear a second after they've been spotted
  102. >One boy keeps complaining and wants to go back
  103. "...Come on guys, our mothers are going to kill us if we don't-"
  104. "Come on, don't be such a chicken-shit!"
  105. >He gulps and keeps on going with them
  106.  
  107. >They soon see something strange
  108. >It looks like a fire, actually two fires
  109. >It is very dark, unnaturally dark
  110. >They go forward
  111. >They enter the famous clearing
  112.  
  113. >They see the strange stallion from before standing before a thing with a large piece of cloth covering it completely
  114. >There are two fires on the sides
  115. >They hear a very, very strange noise
  116. >The stallion turns around
  117. >the sounds are coming from him
  118. >They notice he is missing his tongue
  119.  
  120. >He motions, and divides up the boys
  121. >He takes four of the five boys, who sit in a small circle with no complaint
  122. >He puts a sheet over all of them
  123. >The last boy, the leader of the bunch, sits alone a few feet away
  124. >The tongue-less stallion walks over to the covered thing
  125. >And he slides the covering off
  126. >The single colt freezes as he sees that statue
  127. >It seems to stare right at him, filled with authority and dark secrets and rebellion
  128. >The tongue-less stallion seems to gargle out a command
  129. "Bow."
  130. >The young colt hesitates and bows down before the statue
  131. >He hears a voice in his head
  132. "Do you wish to have power, young colt?"
  133. "...Yes."
  134. "Then follow my commands, and get your friends to do so as well. You will be richly rewarded if you do as I say."
  135. >The colt seems to like this idea
  136. "Alright!"
  137. "From now on, you will refer to me as lord."
  138. "Oka- I mean, yes my lord."
  139. "Good. Now, speak to your friends."
  140. >The young colt walks over to his friends and removes their covering.
  141.  
  142. >The young mares all look up in amazement at the statue
  143. >They seem like they are torn between screaming and getting closer to inspect it
  144. >Suddenly, their eyes seem to flicker and they all gain blank expression
  145. >They all sit upright and begin to chant soflty
  146. "A'Nown... A'Nown... A'Nown..."
  147. >The boys are confused
  148. >The statue speaks out again
  149. "You have brought these young virgins before me. I will enjoy watching you deflower them."
  150. >The young mares suddenly all get up and present their hindquarters, their faces down on the ground, butts high up
  151. >The boys all shudder with the sudden display, but their young hormones make them not hate this
  152. "Enjoy it, boys. You'll gain all of this and much, much more if you just follow me."
  153. >Without any more resistance, the boys approach and mount the receptive mares
  154. >They sang on high the glory of A'Nown
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  156. End of Part 3