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  1. PiE: Thread the Third  DakanFri Sep 21 20:43:38 2012No.4601604 [Reply] [Original]
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  3. What happens when ponies come to Earth?
  4. Lets find out!
  5. Welcome to PiE!
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  7. Old Thread:
  8. >>4316204
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  10. Ponyville Apartements
  11. http://pastebin.com/u/ChocolateChipPancake
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  13. Pillow Case: She likes Cloth
  14. http://pastebin.com/HtNbiz2s
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  16. The Roseluck Chronicles
  17. http://pastebin.com/u/Fourdak
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  19. Motor City
  20. http://pastebin.com/u/Mortimer_Mouse
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  22. First thread:
  23. http://pastebin.com/v4JgQzCv
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  29. AnonymousFri Sep 21 20:54:58 2012No.4601688
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  32.  should the other thread be also on a pastebin like the first?
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  39. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt6: A New Day  DakanFri Sep 21 21:43:38 2012No.4602084
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  41. Quoted by: >>4602091 >>4602213 >>4602735 >>4604792
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  44.  Didn't think I was going to have this till tommorow morning.
  45. But, here we are the next part.
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  47. >You slowly open your eyes the next morning
  48. >Weird you should be feeling the effects from last night
  49. >That and your bed is empty
  50. >Where’s Rose?
  51. >You don’t hear any movement in the apartment
  52. >You slowly get out of bed
  53. >The sheets are clean…
  54. >There is no rosy smell on the pillow next to you…
  55. >You look in the corner where Rose had discarded her dress
  56. >Missing
  57. >No, this can’t be…
  58. >You frantically get up and start searching the apartment
  59. >Not in the kitchen or living room
  60. >Not in the bathroom either
  61. >Her coat and bag are both gone from the hooks
  62. >The date, It should be November
  63. >It’s only the second weekend in September
  64. >Your mind slowly comes to terms on the truth
  65. >A dream…
  66. >The last month and a half
  67. >All that time with that beautiful pony
  68. >Just a dream
  69. >You collapse on the sofa and turn on the news
  70. >boring human news
  71. >No metions of ponies anywhere
  72. >Like they never appeared…
  73. >It never happened…
  74. >It was such a good dream
  75. >It was such a great story…
  76. >A great story…
  77. >Yes, I can write something from this
  78. >You rush to the computer and boot it up
  79. >Now where to write…
  80. >There’s only one place where something like this can go
  81. >4chan
  82. >/mlp/
  83. >Now where was that thread you saw 2 days ago
  84. >PiE, there it is
  85. >You click on the thread and type in the comment box the first line of your story
  86. >”It had been another long day…”
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  93. DakanFri Sep 21 21:44:17 2012No.4602091
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  95. Quoted by: >>4602411 >>4602561 >>4605754
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  98.  >>4602084
  99. End of Part 6
  100. End of Chapter 3
  101. The End...
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  108. AnonymousFri Sep 21 21:45:17 2012No.4602110
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  110. Quoted by: >>4602172 >>4602214
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  113.  Your second thread lasted over two weeks
  114. Is this really something that wouldn't fit in AiE under any circumstance?
  115. They've fudged the rules in the past.
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  122. DakanFri Sep 21 21:50:58 2012No.4602172
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  127.  >>4602110
  128. I'm not the orginalcreator in of the threads, I just happen to be the one who started the last 2. If you want answers talk to Mr. Blue
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  135. AnonymousFri Sep 21 21:54:18 2012No.4602213
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  138.  >>4602084
  139. >inb4 inception
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  146. AnonymousFri Sep 21 21:54:18 2012No.4602214
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  148. Quoted by: >>4602248 >>4604828
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  151.  >>4602110
  152. As far as I know they're pretty picky about anon having to be in Equestria at some point during the story. Which is why this thread was made in the first place, but you can ask them yourself if you want.
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  159. AnonymousFri Sep 21 21:57:37 2012No.4602248
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  161. Quoted by: >>4604828
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  164.  >>4602172
  165. >>4602214
  166. Not saying there's anything wrong with it, but in a sense,
  167. you're sort of competing with them for the same audience of fanfic readers on /mlp/.
  168. I dunno, it's your thread.
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  175. AnonymousFri Sep 21 22:17:17 2012No.4602411
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  181. Fuck, why i knew this would end up all being a dream?
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  188. AnonymousFri Sep 21 22:36:57 2012No.4602561
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  194. I will fucking murder you
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  196. Obligatory death threat aside, seriously dude?
  197. The 'It was all a dream" ending?
  198. Disappointing
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  205. AnonymousFri Sep 21 22:43:18 2012No.4602623
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  207. Quoted by: >>4603268 >>4610960
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  210.  >>4602411
  211. >>4602561
  212. It's not on his pastebin, so I wouldn't get too worried. I'm thinking this is just a cruel joke.
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  219. AnonymousFri Sep 21 22:56:58 2012No.4602735
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  222.  >>4602084
  223. ....
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  225. Seriously?
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  227. I could write a better ending with my dick tied in a knot.
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  234. AnonymousFri Sep 21 23:47:37 2012No.4603268
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  238. i sure hope so, i like that plot
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  245. AnonymousFri Sep 21 23:55:38 2012No.4603359
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  250.  Oh gosh. I feel a little let down man.
  251. I don't think there was any foreshadowing you just threw that at us.
  252. Oh well, it was a fun story.
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  259. AnonymousFri Sep 21 23:58:58 2012No.4603396
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  261. Quoted by: >>4610561
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  264.  >What happens when ponies come to Earth?
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  266. Those poor little fucks. Hopefully they die quickly and without much pain.
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  273. AnonymousSat Sep 22 01:53:38 2012No.4604361
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  277. I actually thought this would happen but was like "nah he wont do that and in the begining he proved he was not sleeping"
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  284. The Roseluck Chronicls Ch3 Pt6: A New Day  DakanSat Sep 22 02:34:54 2012No.4604792
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  286. Quoted by: >>4604805
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  290. Did you actually think I would end it like this...?
  291. Yes I know it was a cruel joke... but don't worry. There is a bit more of a brite future for Anon and Rose. The rest of part 6 below
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  293. >You wake with a start.
  294. >You are immediately greeted by a pounding head ache
  295. >Oh alcohol why must you be a cruel mistress?
  296. >Wait a head ache
  297. >That means…
  298. >You feel her; she is lying on your chest
  299. >You slowly open your eyes and witness rose fast asleep
  300. >This is real
  301. >Oh thank celestia this is real
  302. >You breathe heavily
  303. >As you reaffirm yourself, you feel the sleeping pony stir
  304. >A stifled moan escapes from her
  305. >She must be as hung over as you are
  306. >Her green eyes flutter open and she immediately looks to you
  307. >A smile crosses her face as she relaxes against your body
  308. “Good Morning, stallion.”
  309. >Stallion why does that sound so good to you?
  310. >You reach up and run you hand through her mane
  311. >”Good morning beautiful”
  312. >She looks into your eyes again
  313. “Last night… it was…”
  314. >You recognize the emotion of fear
  315. >Why is she scared
  316. >Oh, that’s why…
  317. >No, you are not going to do that to her again
  318. >She is your pony, she is your mare
  319. >”Last night was perfect”
  320. >You gently give her a kiss on the forehead
  321. >Her smile broadens
  322. “Last night was perfect.”
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  329. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt6: A New Day  DakanSat Sep 22 02:35:18 2012No.4604805
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  335. >You lie there with her for a good long while
  336. >”We really should get cleaned up, and start the day…”
  337. “Do we have to; I could try to convince you otherwise…”
  338. >This pony is going to be the death of you…
  339. >”Yes, we I have some laundry to do and some errands to run.”
  340. >Rose slowly lifts off of you and unsteadily gets out of bed
  341. >Time to start the day right
  342. >A quick shower should do the trick
  343. >Although “quick” is always a relative term…
  344. >Your bathroom you come to find out has really nice acoustics
  345. >Be it Roses singing or otherwise
  346. >After a nice friendly shower a big greasy breakfast
  347. >Everything just seems to taste better this morning
  348. >You wonder why
  349. >After breakfast you let rose relax on the couch while you do some of the weekly chores
  350. >You gather up the laundry, strip the bed of the now soiled sheets, and head down the laundry room
  351. >While downstairs you grab the Sunday edition paper.
  352. >Nothing to terribly interesting today
  353. >You jog up the stair back to the apartment
  354. >Rose still lies on the couch staring at the TV
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  361. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt6: A New Day  DakanSat Sep 22 02:36:58 2012No.4604814
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  367. >”Anything interesting on?”
  368. >She shakes her head no and continues to watch
  369. >You join her on the couch
  370. >as you sit down Rose places her head in your lap
  371. >She start up at you with the green eyes you have come to enjoy so much
  372. >The smell of roses hangs in the air around her
  373. >God how you love that
  374. “Anon?”
  375. >”hmm?”
  376. ”Where do we go from here?”
  377. >You take a pause
  378. >Where do we go from here…
  379. >While it looks like human and pony relationships aren’t rare
  380. >They are largely uncommon
  381. >There are still people who have a prejudice against the ponies
  382. >That prejudice may just grow when they come to find out the truth
  383. >Why is it when things get better, they also get more complicated.
  384. >This question makes you head pound that much harder…
  385. >You slowly pet Rose’s mane
  386. >”We’ll just have to take it one day at a time Rose.”
  387. >One day at a time…
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  394. HateBit !!8FC5lRlbeuJSat Sep 22 02:37:18 2012No.4604828
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  397.  >>4602214
  398. Relatively new AiE writer here.
  399. Some AiE guys will get a bit picky, I guess, but for the most part you would probably be fine. There are a few stories in AiE that already share the premise of Pony going to Humanland, instead of the other way around. One writer was clever enough to make their pony the Anonymous, but he stopped writing that story I believe.
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  401. >>4602248
  402. I wish this idea would take off, I don't care if we have competition just so long as you guys put out some product. I still haven't gotten a satisfactory answer as to why the Flutterrape threads branched off of the AiE ones.
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  409. DakanSat Sep 22 02:40:58 2012No.4604862
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  411. Quoted by: >>4605384
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  414.  >>4604814
  415. End of Part 6
  416. End of Chapter 3
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  418. I really want to get a good start on Chapter 4 this weekend. So expect some good updates. I again must apologive for the cruel joke. I thought it was an interesting way to follow up that clopfic I wrote.
  419.  
  420. Anyways...
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  422. Next time on The Roseluck Chronicles
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  424. The Truth is revealed!
  425. H&H!
  426. A special proposal!
  427. And Flowers!
  428.  
  429. Join us next time. Same poni time! Same poni channel!
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  436. Mortimer MouseSat Sep 22 03:15:37 2012No.4605247
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  439. Quoted by: >>4605458
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  442.  I thought we agreed on NOT starting new threads with just the plain old pastebin links and a link to the old thread, but instead with a story?
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  449. AnonymousSat Sep 22 03:25:17 2012No.4605384
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  452.  >>4604862
  453. Personally I'm amazed so many people fell for it, but I'm looking forward to more. That was a good update and gave me some good feels. Keep up the good work!
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  460. AnonymousSat Sep 22 03:25:17 2012No.4605390
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  463.  There was this Dovakin guy that wrote a story with this premise. Everyone else ignored him in the AiE thread. If he were still alive...
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  470. DakanSat Sep 22 03:29:37 2012No.4605458
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  472. Quoted by: >>4605795
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  475.  >>4605247
  476. Yes, but I had zero story read, and the old thread only had a few post left. Unless you wnat me to post the clop here...
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  483. fuck you...  W4rpSat Sep 22 03:46:57 2012No.4605686
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  485. Quoted by: >>4605774
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  488.  this is the same depression like when .hack twilight ended :<
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  490. Talk about a cruel joke...
  491. but good that you continue making these. at least 20 chapters okay?
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  498. AnonymousSat Sep 22 03:52:58 2012No.4605754
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  502. I almost shed a tear when i originally read this. Excited to read even more.
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  509. DakanSat Sep 22 03:55:38 2012No.4605774
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  513. 20 chapters...
  514. right...
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  521. DakanSat Sep 22 03:56:57 2012No.4605795
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  524.  >>4605458
  525. Why did I have zero story read? I had zero story written, but I had most of them read.
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  527. I just don't know what went wrong...
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  534. AnonymousSat Sep 22 07:40:17 2012No.4608846
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  537.  I really need that roseluck right now. Many feels are being felt. Keep up the good work!
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  544. AnonymousSat Sep 22 09:47:17 2012No.4610561
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  548. The sad truth of the matter
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  555. AnonymousSat Sep 22 10:14:53 2012No.4610960
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  559. I apologize for the knee-jerk reaction, I don't know what came over me.....this story has me in it's clutches
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  566. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesSat Sep 22 10:40:58 2012No.4611524  
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  570. Previously, on Ponyville Apartments:
  571. http://pastebin.com/u/ChocolateChipPancake
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  573. > Pinkie Pie takes the guitar-shaped controller in her hands.
  574. > She swipes the card on the machine, then she turns to me.
  575. "Play with me?" she asks.
  576. > Again with that bright smile upon her face.
  577. > I sigh as I take the other controller and swipe my card.
  578. > "Can we start with something easy? My legs are still-"
  579. "
  580. Ooo! Check it out! This one sounds really fun!"
  581. > She points her hoof at the screen. Looks like the very last song on the list.
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  583. > Wait. Wasn't this song used for an official world record before?
  584. > "Uh, Pinkie Pie!?"
  585. "It sounds easy enough. Let's play this on 'Expert'!"
  586. > The pony makes the selection before I can stop her.
  587. > She turns to me while the screen loads.
  588.  
  589. "Something wrong?" she asks. "You don't look so good."
  590. > I don't feel that good. Haven't yet recovered from the last one.
  591. > But for some reason, I grit my teeth and force a smile for her.
  592. > "I'm just fine. Let's do this!"
  593. "Okey dokey lokey!"
  594. > The screen fills up with a ridiculous number of notes.
  595. > And this is just the intro part.
  596. > I keep my attention focused on the screen.
  597. > Somehow, we make it to the beginning of the song.
  598. "On a cold winter morning, in a time before the light,"
  599. > Then, I finally realize it.
  600. "In flames of death's eternal reign, we ride towards the fight!"
  601. > The reason why I keep playing.
  602. "When the darkness has fallen down, and the times are tough alright,"
  603. > No matter how I look at it, this is...
  604. "The sound of evil laughter falls, around the world tonight!"
  605. > ... really FUN!
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  612. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesSat Sep 22 10:42:59 2012No.4611564  
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  616. Previously, on Ponyville Apartments: http://pastebin.com/u/ChocolateChipPancake
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  618. > Pinkie Pie takes the guitar-shaped controller in her hands.
  619. > She swipes the card on the machine, then she turns to me.
  620. "Play with me?" she asks.
  621. > Again with that bright smile upon her face.
  622. > I sigh as I take the other controller and swipe my card.
  623. > "Can we start with something easy? My legs are still-"
  624. "
  625. Ooo! Check it out! This one sounds really fun!"
  626. > She points her hoof at the screen. Looks like the very last song on the list.
  627.  
  628. > Wait. Wasn't this song used for an official world record before?
  629. > "Uh, Pinkie Pie!?"
  630. "It sounds easy enough. Let's play this on 'Expert'!"
  631. > The pony makes the selection before I can stop her.
  632. > She turns to me while the screen loads.
  633.  
  634. "Something wrong?" she asks. "You don't look so good."
  635. > I don't feel that good. Haven't yet recovered from the last one.
  636. > But for some reason, I grit my teeth and force a smile for her.
  637. > "I'm just fine. Let's do this!"
  638. "Okey dokey lokey!"
  639. > The screen fills up with a ridiculous number of notes.
  640. > And this is just the intro part.
  641. > I keep my attention focused on the screen.
  642. > Somehow, we make it to the beginning of the song.
  643. "On a cold winter morning, in a time before the light,"
  644. > Then, I finally realize it.
  645. "In flames of death's eternal reign, we ride towards the fight!"
  646. > The reason why I keep playing.
  647. "When the darkness has fallen down, and the times are tough alright,"
  648. > No matter how I look at it, this is...
  649. "The sound of evil laughter falls, around the world tonight!"
  650. > ... really FUN!
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  657. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesSat Sep 22 10:45:38 2012No.4611622
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  660. Quoted by: >>4612284
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  663.  Previously, on Ponyville Apartments:
  664. http://pastebin.com/u/ChocolateChipPancake
  665.  
  666. > Pinkie Pie takes the guitar-shaped controller in her hands.
  667. > She swipes the card on the machine, then she turns to me.
  668. "Play with me?" she asks.
  669. > Again with that bright smile upon her face.
  670. > I sigh as I take the other controller and swipe my card.
  671. > "Can we start with something easy? My legs are still-"
  672. "
  673. Ooo! Check it out! This one sounds really fun!"
  674. > She points her hoof at the screen.
  675. > Looks like the very last song on the list.
  676.  
  677. > Wait. Wasn't this song used for an official world record before?
  678. > "Uh, Pinkie Pie!?"
  679. "It sounds easy enough. Let's play this on 'Expert'!"
  680. > The pony makes the selection before I can stop her.
  681. > She turns to me while the screen loads.
  682.  
  683. "Something wrong?" she asks. "You don't look so good."
  684. > I don't feel that good. Haven't yet recovered from the last one.
  685. > But for some reason, I grit my teeth and force a smile for her.
  686. > "I'm just fine. Let's do this!"
  687. "Okey dokey lokey!"
  688. > The screen fills up with a ridiculous number of notes.
  689. > And this is just the intro part.
  690. > I keep my attention focused on the screen.
  691. > Somehow, we make it to the beginning of the song.
  692. "On a cold winter morning, in a time before the light,"
  693. > Then, I finally realize it.
  694. "In flames of death's eternal reign, we ride towards the fight!"
  695. > The reason why I keep playing.
  696. "When the darkness has fallen down, and the times are tough alright,"
  697. > No matter how I look at it, this is...
  698. "The sound of evil laughter falls, around the world tonight!"
  699. > ... really FUN!
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  706. AnonymousSat Sep 22 10:51:37 2012No.4611737
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  712.  Hey Pancakes! Just raced through your pastebin! Good stuff! :D
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  719. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesSat Sep 22 11:16:58 2012No.4612284
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  724.  >>4611622
  725. > "Uh, Pinkie? Are you sure Rainbow's around here?"
  726. "Yep! I saw her head this way earlier."
  727. > This side of the place is filled with racing games.
  728. > I don't doubt that the cyan pegasus would enjoy herself here.
  729. > But where is she? I just see the usual crowd of players.
  730. > It isn't like her to just disappear-
  731. > Then, I feel a hoof tap my shoulder.
  732. "Looking for me?" whispers a familiar voice.
  733. > I sigh in relief.
  734. > "Don't worry us like that, Rainbow. Huh?"
  735. > The pegasus pony seems to have acquired an over-sized biker helmet.
  736. > Complete with burning skull design.
  737. "Ooo!" cries Pinkie. "Where'd you get that? Did you win it from one of those games?"
  738. "Something like that," says Rainbow. "Check this out."
  739. > She holds out her hoof. Several game cards. A big wad of cash.
  740. "Isn't it great? I even got this awesome helmet!"
  741. > A shiver runs down my spine. I look at her uneasily.
  742. > "Uh, Rainbow? How did you get all this?"
  743. "Easy! Some tough guy challenged me to a race on those machines, so I cleaned him out!"
  744. > "You were gambling!?"
  745. "A few bets never hurt nop0ny! Err... something wrong?"
  746. > Rainbow gives me a worried look.
  747. > "I'll explain later," I manage. "Right now, we should get-"
  748. "Wait! Wait! Wait!" cries Pinkie. "Can we go try one of those before we go?"
  749. > The pink pony raises her hoof toward a crane game.
  750. > She seems to have an eye for the stuffed alligator in the corner.
  751. > "...fine."
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  758. Loscil !LoscilARtESat Sep 22 11:17:17 2012No.4612322
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  760. Quoted by: >>4612399 >>4612477
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  763.  >>4612284
  764. For some fucking reason, Pastebin can't load. Wat do?
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  771. PancakesSat Sep 22 11:21:17 2012No.4612399  
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  774. >>4612322
  775. Works fine from my end. Try clearing your browser cache and cookies?
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  782. AnonymousSat Sep 22 11:22:17 2012No.4612401
  783.  
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  785.  This thread is just as bad as the AiE fags. Good god just get off 4chan and take your faggotry with you!!
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  792. PancakesSat Sep 22 11:25:18 2012No.4612477
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  795.  >>4611737
  796. Thanks!
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  798. >>4612322
  799. Works fine from my end. Try clearing your browser cache and cookies.
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  806. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesSat Sep 22 11:54:58 2012No.4613045
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  808. Quoted by: >>4613741
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  811.  >>4612284
  812. > Rainbow yawns as she watches the two from afar.
  813. > They sure take their time.
  814. "What a bother," she mutters.
  815. > Someone taps her on the shoulder.
  816. > The pegasus quickly turns around.
  817. > A large, well-built human stands before her.
  818. > He is wearing an expensive looking suit and a pair of shades.
  819. "And what do you want?" asks Rainbow.
  820. "Woah! Take it easy! I just want to talk!"
  821. "Talk?"
  822. "A job, to be exact. But just to be sure, you ARE the fastest racer this side of town, right?"
  823. > Rainbow puffs out her chest proudly.
  824. "That's right! You got a problem with that!?"
  825. "Of course not! I just didn't think that you'd be a girl..."
  826. "And what is THAT supposed to mean?"
  827. "N-nothing! Here."
  828. > He pulls out an envelope from his pocket and hands it over.
  829. "We would like to employ your skills in transporting some goods. Just think of it as quick and easy money."
  830. "Easy money, eh?"
  831. > Rainbow takes the envelope cautiously.
  832. "And don't forget to wear that helmet so our people can recognize you."
  833. > He quickly walks away before she can respond.
  834. > Rainbow glances around her before opening the envelope.
  835. > Then, she smiles excitedly.
  836. "Yep! Easy money!"
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  843. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesSat Sep 22 12:34:54 2012No.4613741
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  849.  >>4613045
  850. > After dinner, I decide to talk to Rainbow Dash.
  851. > Probably just my paranoia, but I feel that I should warn her.
  852. > The video arcade is at the border of the east side gangs, after all.
  853. > I knock on the door again, but no answer.
  854. > "Rainbow? Are you in there?"
  855. "Nope. She isn't in here!"
  856. > The door opens, revealing the pink pony.
  857. > "Huh? Pinkie Pie?"
  858. "Yep. I just checked, but it looks like Rainbow isn't here!"
  859. > "Uh, right. What were you doing in there, anyway?"
  860. > She pulls out the alligator plushie she won earlier.
  861. "I wanted to introduce her to Gummy #2, of course!"
  862. > "Hmm. I'll see if I can find her, then."
  863. "Ooo! Sounds fun! Can I join you?"
  864. > "Uh, sure. I guess."
  865. "Yay!"
  866. > A pink pony carrying a plush toy joins the party!
  867. > Not sure if good idea, but whatever.
  868. > We check the other rooms, but the other ponies haven't seen her as well.
  869. > Then, as we reach the first floor.
  870. "Hey! Isn't that-"
  871. > Something wearing black just flew over the apartment gate.
  872. > It was carrying something round. But more importantly,
  873. > It had a rainbow-colored tail.
  874. > This cannot be good.
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  881. PancakesSat Sep 22 12:41:38 2012No.4613828
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  883. Quoted by: >>4614657
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  886.  >>4613741
  887. Ending here for now. Pastebin updated.
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  894. AnonymousSat Sep 22 13:31:37 2012No.4614657
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  901. Do you have anything else online besides on pastebin??
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  908. Parasite SteveSat Sep 22 14:14:17 2012No.4615381
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  910. Quoted by: >>4616135 >>4620425
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  913.  Can I get in on this?
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  920. DakanSat Sep 22 15:00:18 2012No.4616135
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  923.  >>4615381
  924. Sure can, all new writers are welcome!
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  931. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4:Hearts and Hooves Pt1:A Special Project  DakanSat Sep 22 18:02:58 2012No.4618705
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  933. Quoted by: >>4618714
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  935.  
  936.  More Roseluck? More Roseluck.
  937.  
  938. >”It’s perfect”
  939. >You star down at the object in the box
  940. >It had better be perfect, you’re paying a lot for it…
  941. >The store clerk smiles
  942. “I’m glad you find it satisfactory sir. She must be one special girl.”
  943. >You smile
  944. >”You could say that.”
  945. >You walk out of the shop into the February chill
  946. >Your thoughts drift to the past few months
  947. >Much to your dismay, the winter had been mild.
  948. >There was relatively no snow
  949. >But, this had worked to you advantage
  950. >The mild days allowed you to work on a special project
  951. >That including the package you just picked up was for Rose
  952. >The special somep0ny in your life
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  959. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt1  DakanSat Sep 22 18:04:18 2012No.4618714
  960.  
  961. Quoted by: >>4618725
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  963.  
  964.  >>4618705
  965. >Speaking of ponies, there was little news about them anymore
  966. >The truth has still yet to be revealed
  967. >It was probably for the best
  968. >Although one day the rest of the world will know about the destruction of Equestria
  969. >The rest of the ponies had settled and have been making a life for themselves on Earth
  970. >Even better, they seem to have a positive effect.
  971. >A lot that was negative for this world seems to be disappearing
  972. >The appearance of the ponies was indeed for the better of Earth
  973. >Your thoughts have carried you to your next destination
  974. >A local flower shop
  975. >As you enter you see a familiar pony working behind the counter
  976. >She is facing away for the counter arranging a few flowers
  977. >You approach the counter and clear your throat
  978. >”Excuse me miss, I need to place an order for a dozen red roses.”
  979. >The pony behind the counter doesn’t turn around
  980. “Mmm, A dozen red roses, must be for somep0ny special”
  981. >You chuckle
  982. >”She is wonderful…
  983. >”She has the most beautiful green eyes and this pink silky mane”
  984. >She giggles a bit
  985. “She sounds lovely, do I know her?”
  986. >”You may, she also works at a flower shop like this one.”
  987. >Rose turns around
  988. “You always know the way to my heart, Anon.”
  989. >”I have to, you are my special somep0ny”
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  996. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt1  DakanSat Sep 22 18:05:37 2012No.4618725
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  1001.  >>4618714
  1002. >You lean over the counter and give Rose a brief kiss.
  1003. “You really need to stop this while I’m at work”
  1004. >”You’re hardly ever home on the weekends anymore…”
  1005. “I know, but Hearts and Hooves day is always busy; I promise some more time after the holiday.”
  1006. >You smile
  1007. >”Good, what do you want for dinner tonight?”
  1008. >She frowns a bit
  1009. ”Im going to be home late, please don’t wait up from me…”
  1010. >”Are you sure? It would be no problem at all.”
  1011. “I’m sure, have a good day…”
  1012. >She quickly turns back to her work
  1013. >You leave the flower shop
  1014. >It’s great that rose can get some time in at work…
  1015. >But it meant less time together
  1016. >Thankfully though, her being away has given you time for the project
  1017. >Over the recent months Rose has seemed rather sad
  1018. >When you questioned her about it she always said it was nothing
  1019. >But you finally got it out of her
  1020. >She missed her garden
  1021. >More so she missed the chance to grow flowers
  1022. >She said she felt like it was a part that she was missing
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  1029. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt1  DakanSat Sep 22 18:05:18 2012No.4618738
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  1034.  >>4618725
  1035. >You then remembered something that your landlord, Mr. Williams had once said
  1036. >Back when you first signed the lease he mentioned an old green house on the roof that no one used
  1037. >Later that day you question Mr. Williams again about it
  1038. >He said it was free to use to any of the residence
  1039. >He reminded you that it had fallen into some disrepair
  1040. >It was up to anyone who used it to repair it
  1041. >That weekend, while Rose was at work you investigated the Greenhouse
  1042. >There was a little shed and as glass house up there alright
  1043. >The shed needed some patching on the room
  1044. >And some panes of glass needed to be replaced
  1045. >It was going to be a project
  1046. >But if you worked hard you would be able to have it done in time for Valentine’s day
  1047.  >You have a few more repairs to complete, but you were finally almost finished
  1048. >One week before Valentines
  1049. >You hoped that Rose would like it and she would be able to use it
  1050. >Although you had no doubts about it
  1051. >She said she could grow anything
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  1058. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt1  DakanSat Sep 22 18:06:58 2012No.4618749
  1059.  
  1060. Quoted by: >>4618759
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  1062.  
  1063.  >>4618738
  1064. >When you got home, you made sure to place the package into a safe place
  1065. >It was the other part of Roses Valentine’s Day surprise
  1066. >And it was also the only part you were worried about
  1067. >You head up to the top of the apartment building to finish up work on the greenhouse
  1068. >Nearly finished, just needed to replace one last panel of glass
  1069. >After a little work you step back and take a look at it
  1070. >It had been a true labor of love
  1071. >It was now complete
  1072. >All that was left was Rose’s flowers
  1073. >You head down stairs and prepare yourself dinner
  1074. >Ignoring her statement, you fix up a salad for Rose
  1075. >You leave a note on the counter about her dinner in the fridge you get ready for bed
  1076. >You lay there quietly difting in and out of sleep waiting for rose to come back
  1077. >Eventually you hear the door unlock
  1078. >The quiet hoof steps indicate that she is trying to make sure not to wake you
  1079. >You hear a quiet sigh come from the kitchen followed by the opening to the fridge
  1080. >Good she found the note
  1081. >You listen to her eat in silence and then quietly trot into the bedroom
  1082. >She slowly gets into to bed next to you trying to not wake you
  1083. >Even though you are already awake
  1084. >As she lays down next to you; you slowly put your arms around her drawing her close
  1085. >She sighs again as she relaxes into your body
  1086. “You didn’t have to make me the salad”
  1087. “Or wait up for me”
  1088. >You chuckle and give her a kiss on the neck
  1089. >”What kind of man would I be, if I didn’t take care of my special somep0ny?”
  1090. >She sighs again
  1091. “I love you, my stallion.”
  1092. >”I love you too, Rose.”
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  1099. DakanSat Sep 22 18:07:17 2012No.4618759
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  1102.  >>4618749
  1103. End of Part 1
  1104.  
  1105. Hmm sounds like someone is making some plans for valentines... I wonder what they are...
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  1112. 404  W4rpSat Sep 22 20:58:57 2012No.4620051
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  1115.  lol, the old thread is already gone :D
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  1122. PancakesSat Sep 22 21:37:37 2012No.4620425
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  1125.  >>4614657
  1126. This is my first MLP story.
  1127.  
  1128. >>4615381
  1129. Why not?
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  1136. AnonymousSun Sep 23 01:44:17 2012No.4622890
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  1139.  Bump.
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  1146. AnonymousSun Sep 23 06:57:17 2012No.4627827
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  1156. AnonymousSun Sep 23 11:04:56 2012No.4631459
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  1159.  4-hour bump? 4-hour bump.
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  1166. SlashySun Sep 23 11:08:58 2012No.4631536
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  1168. Quoted by: >>4633232 >>4633235 >>4633353
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  1171.  The idea interests me, what does this thread involve
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  1178. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesSun Sep 23 11:14:57 2012No.4631657
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  1181. Quoted by: >>4631680 >>4701157
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  1183.  
  1184.  >>4613741
  1185. > Rainbow arrives at the scene.
  1186. > As instructed, she is wearing the helmet.
  1187. > A small group of humans are loitering around.
  1188. > One of them notices her and smiles.
  1189. "Well, look at what we have here!"
  1190. > The humans stop their idle conversation and start approaching her.
  1191. "That's a nice, tight body you got there!"
  1192. "Hey, I saw her first!"
  1193. "Why don't we take her for a 'test drive' right here and-"
  1194. > Suddenly, a very large human appears behind the one talking.
  1195. > He grabs the smaller man and raises him up in the air effortlessly.
  1196. "W-w-what!?"
  1197. > Then, he tosses him into a nearby trash bin.
  1198. > The other humans quickly back off.
  1199. > After dusting his hands, he turns to Rainbow.
  1200. "You here for the job?" the big man asks.
  1201. > She nods quickly. The big man signals the rest of the humans.
  1202. > From the back, they bring out a black car.
  1203. "Pontiac Trans Am," says the big man. "Heavily modified, of course."
  1204. > Rainbow barely stops herself from squeeing.
  1205. "Think you can handle it?"
  1206. > The big man throws her a set of keys.
  1207. > Rainbow catches them and smiles.
  1208. "Just who the hay do you think I am!?"
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  1215. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesSun Sep 23 11:16:18 2012No.4631680
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  1217. Quoted by: >>4633034 >>4701157
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  1220.  >>4631657
  1221. > After a quick drive around the block, Rainbow returns to the humans.
  1222. "72 seconds," says the big man. "You're pretty good."
  1223. "Of course I am," says Rainbow. "I'm the fastest racer around these parts!"
  1224. "Looks like you weren't blowing hot air, after all."
  1225. > He motions at the other humans.
  1226. > They start loading several heavy crates into the vehicle.
  1227. "What are those?" asks Rainbow.
  1228. "I thought that professionals like yourself don't ask stupid questions."
  1229. "O-of course not! I was just, uh... testing you. Yeah, that's it!"
  1230. > The big man chuckles to himself.
  1231. "I like you, girl! Not many in our line of work have a sense of humor."
  1232. > He hands her a piece of paper. Written on it is an address.
  1233. "Take this car to this location. Once our boys on the other side check the goods, you'll have your money."
  1234. "Uh, right. Anything else I need to know?"
  1235. > The big man gives her an evil smile.
  1236. "Watch your back. Lot of dangerous folk out this night."
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  1246. Quoted by: >>4633100 >>4701157
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  1249.  >>4631680
  1250. > Ten minutes later, Rainbow is already halfway to the location.
  1251. "The guy from the arcade was right!" she cries. "Easy money!"
  1252. > And when she gets paid, she can buy all sorts of cool stuff for the girls!
  1253. > A new pet for Fluttershy.
  1254. > A new oven for Pinkie.
  1255. > A new dress for Rarity.
  1256. > A new hat for Applejack.
  1257. > A new book for Twilight. (one for me, too!)
  1258. > And maybe even something for the apartment manager!
  1259. > Err, you know? Just to be polite and stuff.
  1260. > She quickly shakes her head.
  1261. "Get it together, Rainbow!" she mutters. "It's not like you like him, or anything like that! He's just a really good guy and-"
  1262. > Her eyes widen in surprise. She slams on the brakes, hard.
  1263. > A number of vehicles block the road before her.
  1264. > She can't pass this way.
  1265. "W-what in the hay!?"
  1266. > Then, she hears voices from the blockade.
  1267. "The Trans Am is here! Get to your positions!"
  1268. "Isn't it too early? I haven't finished my beer, yet."
  1269. "Shut the hell up and stop that car! There'll be hell to pay if it makes it to the west side!"
  1270. > Several cars hum to life at the same time.
  1271. > Each of them is carrying three or four humans.
  1272. > And none of them look happy to see her.
  1273. "Oh, this is not cool!" cries Rainbow. "NOT COOL!"
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  1280. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesSun Sep 23 12:32:58 2012No.4633100
  1281.  
  1282. Quoted by: >>4633353 >>4640414 >>4701157
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  1285.  >>4633034
  1286. > To the left, one of the cars is closing in.
  1287. > The driver smiles widely as he rams the Trans Am from the side.
  1288. "SMASH!"
  1289. > Rainbow manages to stay in control of the vehicle.
  1290. > But only barely. She narrows her eyes.
  1291. > So they want to play rough, do they?
  1292. "Hit it again!" cries one of the humans.
  1293. > The driver backs away for a moment, preparing to ram her.
  1294. > Suddenly, Rainbow spins the wheel to the left.
  1295. > The side of the Trans Am hits the car at an angle,
  1296. "SMASH!"
  1297. > Causing it to spin violently as it crashes on the side of the road.
  1298. "Serves you right!" cries Rainbow. "Take that, you dumb humans!"
  1299. > Unfortunately, her victory is short-lived.
  1300. > Another car is closing in from the right. Its windows lower.
  1301. > A human holding a strange metal device smiles widely.
  1302. "Say hello to my little friend!" he cries.
  1303. > Suddenly, something like fireworks shoots out at the Trans Am.
  1304. > It cracks the glass on the rear of the vehicle,
  1305. > But it doesn't shatter it.
  1306. "Aw hell, NO! They bullet-proofed the damn thing!"
  1307. "Then shoot off the tires, you idiot!" cries the driver.
  1308. > The human takes aim once more. But before he can fire,
  1309. "Leave me, ALONE!" cries Rainbow.
  1310. > She rams the vehicle, hard.
  1311. "SMASH!"
  1312. > The second car spins out of control and crashes.
  1313. > She sighs in relief. Then, she glances at the rear view mirror.
  1314. > A dozen more vehicles are quickly gaining on her.
  1315. "Oh, sweet Celestia! What have I gotten myself into!?"
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  1322. AnonymousSun Sep 23 12:39:18 2012No.4633232
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  1325.  >>4631536
  1326. Ponies on earth and the scenarios that happen as a consequence, usually concerning an anon.
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  1333. AnonymousSun Sep 23 12:39:18 2012No.4633235
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  1344. PancakesSun Sep 23 12:46:57 2012No.4633353
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  1347.  >>4633100
  1348. Done for now. Pastebin updated.
  1349.  
  1350. >>4631536
  1351. Step 1: Ponies
  1352. Step 2: In Earth
  1353. Step 3: ????
  1354. Step 4: PROFIT!
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  1361. AnonymousSun Sep 23 15:09:38 2012No.4636360
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  1365. >mfw i read this thread everytime
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  1372. Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt2  DakanSun Sep 23 17:25:38 2012No.4638465
  1373.  
  1374. Quoted by: >>4638485
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  1376.  
  1377.  I have been running into a tough time writing recently. Im gonna dump what I have for now and call it quits for the night. Hopfully this will clear up tommorow.
  1378.  
  1379. >Another day at school
  1380. >Another day closer to Valentines
  1381. >You just left your Economics Class and about to go on lunch
  1382. >You feel a tap on the shoulder
  1383. >When you turn around you discover Robert is standing behind you
  1384. “Hey Anon, what’s up?”
  1385. >You smile, ever since that night at the dance you and Rob have become pretty good friends
  1386. >”Nothing much Rob, just about to get some lunch, do you want to join?”
  1387.  “Sure, I have sometime before my next class”
  1388. >You both head off to the campus café
  1389. >Sitting down at one of the inside table you begin to discuss how things have been going
  1390. >”So Rob, how are thing between you and lyra?”
  1391. “Lyra? Things are fine I’m hoping on getting some alone time with here this weekend.”
  1392. >”Yeah same thing between me and Rose.”
  1393. >”What kind of plans do you have for Valentines anyways?”
  1394. >He shrugs a bit
  1395. “Nothing special, a quiet dinner at home, maybe curl up on the couch for a nice movie.”
  1396. “Nothing to extravagant.”
  1397. “What about you and Rose.”
  1398. >”I have the exact opposite in mind for Rose.”
  1399. “Oh? Do tell…”
  1400. >“Well, as you know Rose works at the florist shops, and one of their busiest days is Valentines.”
  1401. >“So, I have nothing planned for that day, but the next night I have a nice dinner at a great restaurant.”
  1402. >“Its supposed to be one of the places that a pony started, they cater to both human and ponies, so I think that she will like it.”
  1403. >“Afterwords I’ll take her home, and show her a special project I have been working on.”
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  1410. Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt2  DakanSun Sep 23 17:26:57 2012No.4638485
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  1412.  
  1413.  >>4638465
  1414. >”Over the winter I have been fixing up a greenhouse that sits on top of our apartment building.”
  1415. >”She has been talking about how she wishes she could be gardening lately you see.”
  1416. >”So I thought that maybe this will help with that.”
  1417. >He nods
  1418. “Seems like you have a big night planned”
  1419. >”Yeah, but that’s not the best part.”
  1420. >”After I show her the greenhouse, I’m going to give her this.”
  1421. >You pull a small box out of your pocket
  1422. >You started keeping the present on you after Rose nearly discovered it while help you clean.
  1423. >You open the box and show it to Rob
  1424. >He lets out a low whistle
  1425. “Wow! That sure is something! I’m sure she’ll love it.”
  1426. >”I know she’ll love it. I just hope that she’ll accept it.”
  1427. “Why wouldn’t she accept it? I mean it’s not like…”
  1428. >It suddenly dawns on him
  1429. “Anon, what are you thinking?”
  1430. >”I know it hasn’t been that long, but me and Rose are prefect for each other.”
  1431. >”She makes me feel like no one has ever made me feel.”
  1432. >”I can’t let her just slip away.”
  1433. >Rob leans back in his chair
  1434. “I remember a time when you nearly broke a pony’s heart just on the basis of her being a pony.”
  1435. >”That was then, this is now.”
  1436. >Rob chuckles and shakes his head.
  1437. “If you feel like you are ready then man, go ahead and best of luck to you.”
  1438. >”Thanks man.”
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  1440. P.S. Wont be updating Pastebin until the current part is fully complete
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  1447. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesSun Sep 23 20:14:57 2012No.4640414
  1448.  
  1449. Quoted by: >>4640436 >>4701157
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  1451.  
  1452.  Suddenly, SURPRISE UPDATES!
  1453.  
  1454. >>4633100
  1455. > One epic car chase and several car crashes later,
  1456. > Rainbow finds herself being followed by one last vehicle.
  1457. "They just don't give up, do they?" she mutters to herself.
  1458. > The Trans Am has taken significant damage from earlier,
  1459. > She bites her lip as she watches the rear view mirror.
  1460. > Huh? The vehicle is slowing down.
  1461. > Suddenly, the sunroof of the vehicle opens up.
  1462. "Oh, what now!?"
  1463. > A human pops out carrying a large cannon-shaped device on his shoulders.
  1464. > Wait a minute! A cannon?
  1465. "AHAHAHAHAHA!" cries the human. "I'm gonna wreck your shit, BAD!"
  1466. > He starts aiming the device at the Trans Am.
  1467. > But before he can fire, something flies into his face.
  1468. *cough* *cough* *cough*
  1469. "What the hell was that?" asks the driver. "You okay, bro?"
  1470. "Yeah! It was just some... cream pie!?"
  1471. > Suddenly, PIES EVERYWHERE!
  1472. > Rainbow swerves quickly to dodge most of them,
  1473. > But the same can't be said for the car behind her.
  1474. > The windshield of the pursuing vehicle is instantly covered in cream.
  1475. > And moments later, it crashes on the side of the road.
  1476. "What the hay was that?" cries Rainbow.
  1477. "Banana cream pie, of course!"
  1478. > She watches with mouth agape as a large truck approaches the Trans Am from the side.
  1479. "P-P-Pinkie Pie!?"
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  1486. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesSun Sep 23 20:16:18 2012No.4640436
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  1489. Quoted by: >>4640452 >>4701157
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  1492.  >>4640414
  1493. > "Great work, Pinkie! That should stop them for a while!"
  1494. > I drive the truck closer to the Trans Am and give Rainbow a wave.
  1495. "W-where did you get that truck!?" she cries out.
  1496. "I 'found' it!" says Pinkie.
  1497. "You 'found' it?" repeats Rainbow.
  1498. > "Don't ask. Anyway, we need to get out of here before the next wave arrives."
  1499. "The next wave? You mean that there are more of them after me?"
  1500. > "Almost all of the east side gangs are out tonight. I have no idea what cargo you're carrying, but they want it BADLY."
  1501. "Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh!"
  1502. > "Calm down, Rainbow! I have an idea!"
  1503. "An idea? How are we supposed to-"
  1504. > I open the driver's side door and stretch out my hand.
  1505. > "Jump over to me!"
  1506. "What!? Are you crazy!?"
  1507. > "There isn't any time to slow down!"
  1508. > From behind them, they can hear the sound of more vehicles coming.
  1509. "This is insane! Maybe we can still lose them..."
  1510. > "Forget the Trans Am! Open the door, quickly!"
  1511. > Rainbow reluctantly complies. She takes a step closer.
  1512. > Then, she sees the pavement and realizes just how fast they are going.
  1513. "Oh my gosh!" she cries. "I, I, I can't do this!"
  1514. > She retreats back into the driver's seat.
  1515. > This is bad. There isn't much time left.
  1516. > "Pinkie! Grab the wheel!"
  1517. "Okey, dokey, lokey!"
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  1524. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesSun Sep 23 20:18:57 2012No.4640452
  1525.  
  1526. Quoted by: >>4640459 >>4701157
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  1528.  
  1529.  >>4640436
  1530. > I slowly climb out onto the side of the truck.
  1531. "What the hay are you doing!?" cries Rainbow. "Have you gone completely insane!?"
  1532. > "You're going to have to jump, Rainbow!"
  1533. "And what if we don't make it!?" she cries. "We'll both be killed!"
  1534. > I climb even further out onto the front of the truck.
  1535. > For some reason, a familiar song starts playing on the radio.
  1536. "So now we're flying, we're free,"
  1537. "We're free before the thunderstorm!"
  1538. "On towards the wilderness,"
  1539. "Our quest carries on!"
  1540. > "Pinkie Pie! What the heck are you doing!?"
  1541. "Just thought that you'd need an awesome theme for this scene!"
  1542. > Damn it, Pinkie Pie.
  1543. > We don't need no...
  1544. > Damn BGM for this scene!
  1545. > I turn back to Rainbow Dash and extend my hand as far as I can.
  1546. > "You're going to have to trust me!"
  1547. > The cyan pegasus takes one last glance at me. Then, she sighs to herself.
  1548. "Oh, buck-"
  1549. > In one swift motion, Rainbow leaps out of the Trans Am.
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  1556. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesSun Sep 23 20:19:38 2012No.4640459
  1557.  
  1558. Quoted by: >>4640475 >>4701157
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  1560.  
  1561.  >>4640452
  1562. > I manage to catch Rainbow by the waist.
  1563. > "Gotcha!"
  1564. "Oomph!"
  1565. > I quickly carry her back inside the truck.
  1566. > And as we make the turn, the Trans Am crashes straight into a ditch.
  1567. > Then suddenly...
  1568. "KABOOM!"
  1569. > A grand explosion fills the night sky of the city.
  1570. "Ooo, pretty!" says Pinkie Pie. "Let's do that again!"
  1571. > The cyan pony curls up beside me, shaking.
  1572. > I gently stroke her mane as we head back home.
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  1574. > Twenty minutes later.
  1575. "I'll be back soon," Pinkie says. "I just need to put this back where I found it."
  1576. > The pink pony drops us off at Ponyville Apartments before heading off with the truck.
  1577. > Where did she find that truck, anyway?
  1578. > Then, I feel a light tug on the side of my shirt.
  1579. > Rainbow Dash looks up at me, teary-eyed.
  1580. "S-sorry about that," she says. "I just wanted to earn some extra money, and I thought that if-"
  1581. > I raise a hand to interrupt her.
  1582. > "Forget about it," I say. "I'm too tired to scold you tonight, anyway."
  1583. "B-but!"
  1584. > "I said, forget about it!"
  1585. "Okay..."
  1586. > "And wipe away those tears! They don't fit such a pretty pony like you."
  1587. > Rainbow squeaks in surprise.
  1588. > Wait, what? Did I just say that?
  1589. > Ah, forget it. I probably lack sleep.
  1590. > Without turning back, I head back to my room and collapse on my bed.
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  1597. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesSun Sep 23 20:21:37 2012No.4640475
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  1603.  >>4640459
  1604. > The next morning, Rainbow Dash insists on making me breakfast.
  1605. > Probably hoping that I'd forget about last night's fiasco.
  1606. > "You do realize that I'm still telling Twilight about last night, right?"
  1607. "Oh, sure," says Rainbow. "I've already prepared myself for her lecture."
  1608. > "Alright, then."
  1609. > She watches me closely as I eat.
  1610. "How is the taste?" she asks.
  1611. > "Not bad. Have you been practicing?"
  1612. "N-not really," she says. "Anyp0ny can cook up something like this!"
  1613. > She gives me this awkward smile.
  1614. > Why does she seem so happy, anyway?
  1615. "Oh! And before I forget - can I ask you something?"
  1616. > "Go ahead."
  1617. "Where can I apply for a driver's license?"
  1618. > I almost choke in surprise.
  1619. > This pony just doesn't learn, does she?
  1620.  
  1621. "Dear Princess Celestia,"
  1622. "I used to think that loyalty was all about standing up for your friends,"
  1623. "But now I can see that it's more than that."
  1624. "Today, I learned that it's just as important to have faith in them."
  1625. "Because good friends will never leave you hanging!"
  1626. "P.S. I think I'll apply for a learner's permit this week."
  1627. "- Your Loyal Subject, Rainbow Dash"
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  1634. PancakesSun Sep 23 20:37:17 2012No.4640598
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  1637. Quoted by: >>4642838 >>4642867 >>4643283 >>4665476 >>4701157
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  1640.  >>4640475
  1641. And that ends the 4th chapter. Your feedback on this one is appreciated.
  1642.  
  1643. Updated on pastebin - http://pastebin.com/u/ChocolateChipPancake.
  1644.  
  1645.  The next chapter is going to be something a little bit... different from usual. It isn't all 'rainbows and unicorns' here on Earth, after all.
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  1652. AnonymousMon Sep 24 01:24:56 2012No.4642686
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  1657.  5-hour bump.
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  1664. SpartMon Sep 24 01:43:18 2012No.4642838  
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  1667. >>4640598
  1668. well done Pancakes ! i wonder what the ponies do against the gangs xDD
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  1675. SpartMon Sep 24 01:46:57 2012No.4642867
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  1680.  >>4640598
  1681. well done Pancakes, wonder what the ponies would do again the gang's and stuff...
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  1688. AnonymousMon Sep 24 02:19:17 2012No.4643283
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  1699. SpartMon Sep 24 04:04:17 2012No.4645051
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  1710. Parasite SteveMon Sep 24 04:06:58 2012No.4645109
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  1715.  Alright, I think I'll start mine tonight. It'll be a Trixie story.
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  1717. >inb4gotobedseth
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  1724. AnonymousMon Sep 24 09:05:17 2012No.4650390
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  1727.  >>4645109
  1728. seth pls
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  1735. AnonymousMon Sep 24 11:21:38 2012No.4653234
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  1745. LeStrangeMon Sep 24 12:58:38 2012No.4655589
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  1749. agreed
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  1756. AnonymousMon Sep 24 16:46:59 2012No.4659241
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  1761.  Indeterminate number of hours bump.
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  1768. SpartMon Sep 24 17:20:18 2012No.4659519
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  1772. bump to be sure
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  1779. TheUnbronyMon Sep 24 17:57:18 2012No.4659841    
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  1782. Quoted by: >>4659921
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  1785.  You know, I might take up writing for this. I want to do a realistic look at this. We know ponies are loving and accepting, but what about humans? A species built by war and violence and fears of that which is different. Our Little Ponies will be getting a first class ticket to Area 51, and our anon will be... silenced. Give me an hour or so to warm up.
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  1792. AnonymousMon Sep 24 18:08:58 2012No.4659921
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  1797.  >>4659841
  1798. I wondered when someone would take on the realistic route.
  1799. I look forward to it, show me what you got
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  1806. TheUnbronyMon Sep 24 18:18:58 2012No.4659996    
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  1809. Quoted by: >>4660000 >>4660043 >>4660337
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  1812.  >>4659921
  1813. It's a bit short, but hey, it's mainly to prove that PoE doesn't have the potential that AiE does. I still want someone to do a mirror of what I've done here in an AiE thread.
  1814.  
  1815. >You are Anon.
  1816. >You wake up early in the mornin’ round tha crack of dawn’n wave to your neighbors like wazzup.
  1817. >Not really.
  1818. >You live in a shitty apartment, work a boring 9 to 5, and make a humble income just like most of the other people in the Godforsaken United States of America.
  1819. >Well, you used to.
  1820. >Now you’re being executed.
  1821. >Why? For having six small colorful animals in your home.
  1822. >Now… you’re dead.
  1823. >The Men in Suits herd the six into a large trailer and enter the attached truck, driving off into the night, headed for the Nevada Desert.
  1824. >When they arrive, they take the shackled ponies deep into the base.
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  1831. TheUnbronyMon Sep 24 18:19:40 2012No.4660000  
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  1833. Quoted by: >>4660043 >>4660078 >>4660337
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  1836.  >>4659996
  1837.  
  1838. >Now they’d never actually harbored alien technology, but this place was one of the most well secured locations in the USA.
  1839. >The first to go is the blue one.
  1840. >She’s euthanized and laid on a cold metal table.
  1841. >Doctors in gas masks enter with scalpels and begin dissecting the small, blue, pastel horse.
  1842. >Feathers are taken for analysis and the brain is removed and placed in a glass jar filled with preservatives.
  1843. >Next comes the torso.
  1844. >Very similar to horse innards; nothing special here except the wing bones and the fact that the majority of the bones are hollow, like a bird’s.
  1845. >Next comes the orange one.
  1846. >Same process.
  1847. >Identical to a normal horse in terms of anatomy, except bones are more dense and more muscular.
  1848. >Third is a violet one with a horn.
  1849. >It’s put down and the horn is carefully extracted along with the brain, getting its own container.
  1850. >Its skeleton and muscles are at a midway point between the other two subjects.
  1851. >The last three are taken away.
  1852. >They will be injected with all sorts of diseases and other concoctions for testing purposes, and kept alive as long as possible.
  1853. >While they all have various different results, they seem to be susceptible to some human diseases and immune to some equine diseases.
  1854. >This leads to new medicines being produced, including a cure for autism and for cancer.
  1855. >Once again, Humanity triumphs.
  1856.  
  1857. Short, sweet, to the point. Consider it a one-shot.
  1858.  
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  1864. TheUnbronyMon Sep 24 18:25:18 2012No.4660043  
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  1866.  
  1867.  
  1868. >>4659996
  1869. >>4660000
  1870.  
  1871. Dubs, Trips, Quads. Now someone MUST do an AiE mirror of this.
  1872.  
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  1878. AnonymousMon Sep 24 18:30:58 2012No.4660078
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  1880.  
  1881. Quoted by: >>4660167
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  1883.  
  1884.  >>4660000
  1885. ......I think you missed your own point
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  1892. TheUnbronyMon Sep 24 18:45:18 2012No.4660167  
  1893.  
  1894. Quoted by: >>4660260
  1895.  
  1896.  
  1897.  >>4660078
  1898. >Implying I was intending to try.
  1899. >Implying I don't think this thread is a joke.
  1900. >Implying it wasn't a dead giveaway with curse for autism and aids.
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  1907. AnonymousMon Sep 24 18:58:58 2012No.4660260
  1908.  
  1909. Quoted by: >>4660289
  1910.  
  1911.  
  1912.  >>4660167
  1913. doesn't mean it couldn't be entertaining
  1914. Have some pride in what you do
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  1921. TheUnbronyMon Sep 24 19:01:39 2012No.4660289  
  1922.  
  1923. Quoted by: >>4660356
  1924.  
  1925.  
  1926.  >>4660260
  1927. >Implying I didn't post this thread for shits and giggles.
  1928. >Implying I didn't write this up in 2 minutes.
  1929. >Implying that I even care about writing for /mlp/ anymore.
  1930.  
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  1936. AnonymousMon Sep 24 19:07:18 2012No.4660337
  1937.  
  1938.  
  1939.  >>4659996
  1940. >>4660000
  1941. This somehow reminds me of that image that we post when /b/ comes here to complain about pony shitposters.
  1942.  
  1943. And I don't even into AIE..
  1944.  
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  1950. AnonymousMon Sep 24 19:11:39 2012No.4660356
  1951.  
  1952.  
  1953.  >>4660289
  1954. But it took you at least 22 minutes, to post? Go away and troll whatever tripfag that rustled your jimmies. The AiE folk hardly even pass by this thread.
  1955.  
  1956. Thanks for the bump.
  1957.  
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  1963. AnonymousMon Sep 24 23:34:00 2012No.4661926
  1964.  
  1965. Quoted by: >>4663526
  1966.  
  1967.  
  1968.  And bump.
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  1975. SpartTue Sep 25 01:52:19 2012No.4663526
  1976.  
  1977. Quoted by: >>4668874
  1978.  
  1979.  
  1980.  >>4661926
  1981. bump²
  1982.  
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  1988. AnonymousTue Sep 25 04:04:19 2012No.4665002  
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  1991. Quoted by: >>4665021
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  2001. AnonymousTue Sep 25 04:05:38 2012No.4665018
  2002. File: 300 KB, 800x600, I want to cum inside pillow case.png [View same] [google] [Report]
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  2004. Quoted by: >>4672292
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  2014. SpartTue Sep 25 04:05:19 2012No.4665021
  2015.  
  2016. Quoted by: >>4665050
  2017.  
  2018.  
  2019.  >>4665002
  2020. dat file name
  2021.  
  2022. captcha : rose couphly
  2023. what ?
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  2030. AnonymousTue Sep 25 04:07:18 2012No.4665050
  2031.  
  2032. Quoted by: >>4665179
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  2034.  
  2035.  >>4665021
  2036. Dude. What. I was hoping no one would see I posted the shadowless version but you managed to reply in 45 seconds.
  2037.  
  2038. Delete your post and requote it. Then I'll delete mine. No one will ever know
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  2045. SpartTue Sep 25 04:22:58 2012No.4665179
  2046.  
  2047.  
  2048.  >>4665050
  2049. sorry, but i just thought: fuck dat file name !
  2050. so i had to make a comment, why should i delet it ?
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  2057. AnonymousTue Sep 25 04:46:58 2012No.4665476
  2058.  
  2059.  
  2060.  >>4640598
  2061.  
  2062. Alright, but far from your best work.
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  2069. SpartTue Sep 25 08:21:19 2012No.4668874
  2070.  
  2071. Quoted by: >>4670792
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  2073.  
  2074.  >>4663526
  2075. bump up the jam
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  2082. SpartTue Sep 25 10:08:59 2012No.4670792
  2083.  
  2084.  
  2085.  >>4668874
  2086. hm another bump
  2087. hope i dont overdo it ...
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  2094. AnonymousTue Sep 25 11:15:39 2012No.4672292
  2095.  
  2096. Quoted by: >>4673234
  2097.  
  2098.  
  2099.  >>4665018
  2100. I lold
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  2107. LeStrangeTue Sep 25 12:00:58 2012No.4673234
  2108.  
  2109.  
  2110.  >>4672292
  2111. While i wait.
  2112.  
  2113. http://youtu.be/3xQmJ_vxHB4
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  2120. AnonymousTue Sep 25 15:43:19 2012No.4677221
  2121.  
  2122.  
  2123.  4 hour bump.
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  2130. AnonymousTue Sep 25 18:07:39 2012No.4678582
  2131.  
  2132. Quoted by: >>4678585
  2133.  
  2134.  
  2135.  Bumpdate:
  2136. Still having some writers block issues. Mayb just end the current part i am on and skip to the next part. Chapter may be shorter than planned...
  2137.  
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  2143. DakanTue Sep 25 18:07:18 2012No.4678585
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  2145. Quoted by: >>4678823
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  2147.  
  2148.  >>4678582
  2149. Forgot the name...
  2150. Been a long day...
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  2157. SpartTue Sep 25 18:38:58 2012No.4678823
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  2160.  >>4678585
  2161. no problem Dakan
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  2168. DakanTue Sep 25 22:11:38 2012No.4680146
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  2170. Quoted by: >>4681787
  2171.  
  2172.  
  2173.  Bedtime bump
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  2180. SpartWed Sep 26 01:24:19 2012No.4681787
  2181.  
  2182. Quoted by: >>4684016
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  2184.  
  2185.  >>4680146
  2186. bump
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  2193. AnonymousWed Sep 26 01:28:58 2012No.4681823
  2194.  
  2195.  
  2196.  I envy you bastards. I really do. Writing is so fucking difficult.
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  2203. SpartWed Sep 26 04:40:19 2012No.4684016
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  2206.  >>4681787
  2207. keep bumpin bumpin yeah
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  2214. IaTMWed Sep 26 08:10:59 2012No.4687413
  2215.  
  2216.  
  2217.  bumpin'
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  2224. SpartWed Sep 26 10:29:57 2012No.4689944
  2225.  
  2226.  
  2227.  good night bump from me
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  2234. DakanWed Sep 26 14:48:58 2012No.4694451
  2235.  
  2236.  
  2237.  Bring Up My Post
  2238.  
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  2244. AnonymousWed Sep 26 18:36:19 2012No.4697550
  2245.  
  2246.  
  2247.  And bump. Slow week.
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  2254. AnonymousWed Sep 26 18:37:38 2012No.4697562
  2255.  
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  2257.  bump before bed
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  2264. SpartWed Sep 26 20:46:58 2012No.4698467
  2265.  
  2266.  
  2267.  bump
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  2273.  
  2274. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt 3: The Big Night  DakanWed Sep 26 21:37:39 2012No.4698879
  2275.  
  2276. Quoted by: >>4698887
  2277.  
  2278.  
  2279.  Well, I decided to screw part 2 and continue on the part 3. So here is Roseluck!
  2280.  
  2281. >Before you know realize, it is Valentine’s Day.
  2282. >Rose is working late again
  2283. >Even though you and rose have a nice evening planned for tomorrow
  2284. >You still feel like doing something nice
  2285. >Earlier you get a dozen roses and make a small nice dinner
  2286. >You are sitting on the couch when she walks through the door
  2287. >You get up as she enters and start to help her with her coat
  2288. >She looks at the table and sighs
  2289. “You waited up, made dinner, and got me flowers…”
  2290. “How did I get this lucky?”
  2291. >”If you tell me how I got so lucky, I’ll tell you.”
  2292. >She giggles and gives you a hug and a kiss
  2293. >You both walk over and have a quiet meal together.
  2294. >After the dinner you clean up while Rose gets ready for bed
  2295. >When you walk into the bed room you she is already in bed waiting for you
  2296. >You crawl into bed and pull her close
  2297. “Thank you for the dinner, it was nice.”
  2298. >”Just wait for tomorrow night. It will be better.”
  2299. >She sighs and snuggles into your body
  2300. >The heat of her body presses against you
  2301. >You breathe in deeply and inhale the smell of roses
  2302. >You slowly drift off to sleep with her in your arms
  2303. >You are slow to wake the next morning
  2304. >You are roused by the smell of coffee
  2305. >You quickly realized that Rose isn’t lying next to you anymore
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  2312. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt 3  DakanWed Sep 26 21:37:19 2012No.4698887
  2313.  
  2314. Quoted by: >>4698894
  2315.  
  2316.  
  2317.  >>4698879
  2318. >As you gradually wake up you hear the sound of someone singing
  2319. >Not someone, somep0ny
  2320. >You get up out of bed and make your way into the kitchen
  2321. >You see Rose by the stove looking like she is trying to make some eggs
  2322. >However you stove isn’t exactly made for a pony
  2323. >She turns around and sees you staring at her
  2324. >She smiles at you
  2325. “I was trying to make some breakfast for us”
  2326. >She giggles
  2327. “I’m having a bit of a tough time though”
  2328. >You chuckle
  2329. >”Here, let me help, before you burn down the whole complex”
  2330. >Between you and Rose you finish up breakfast and sit down and start eating
  2331. >She looks across the table at you
  2332. “So what exactly are the plans for tonight anyways?”
  2333. >”I guess I can let you in on some of it.”
  2334. >”We are going out to dinner tonight, after words, I was thinking a quiet evening watching a movie together.”
  2335. >She smiles at you
  2336. “Oh is that all?”
  2337. >”Would it be any fun if I told you everything?”
  2338. >She shakes her head and continues to eat her breakfast
  2339. >The rest of the day passes by normally
  2340. >As the time grows closer to the dinner you and Rose start to get dressed
  2341. >You were a nice shirt and tie combo
  2342. >Rose wears a simple dress
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  2348.  
  2349. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt 3  DakanWed Sep 26 21:38:59 2012No.4698894
  2350.  
  2351. Quoted by: >>4698902
  2352.  
  2353.  
  2354.  >>4698887
  2355. >”You look beautiful”
  2356. >She smiles shyly at you
  2357. ”Thank you and you look as handsome as ever.”
  2358. >You open the door out of the apartment and escort her down to the streets
  2359. >You hail a cab and head off to the restaurant
  2360. >After a short ride you arrive at the restaurant
  2361. >She smiles at you as you get out of the cab
  2362. “I’ve wanted to eat here since this place opened.”
  2363. >”I know, I hope the food is as good as they say it is.”
  2364. >Inside you see most of the customers are ponies
  2365. >In fact most of workers are ponies also
  2366. >The restaurant seems to be built to accommodate ponies
  2367. >As you and rose are seated you take a look over the menu
  2368. >It’s a mostly vegan menu fit for both humans and ponies
  2369. >There are a few specialty meal made for ponies
  2370. >You don’t think that a daisy salad sound particularly tasty.
  2371. >You order a regular salad and Rose orders a lily salad
  2372. >The atmosphere here is nice; a good combination of human and pony taste
  2373. >You and Rose share a nice quiet dinner together
  2374. >After the dinner you and rose start making your way back to the apartment
  2375. >Rose starts questioning you about the rest of the night
  2376. “Come on, you need to tell me what next.”
  2377. >You smile slyly
  2378. >”You are just going to have to wait until we get back to the apartment”
  2379. “Can you at least tell me what movie you have planned.”
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  2386. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt 3  DakanWed Sep 26 21:39:39 2012No.4698902
  2387.  
  2388. Quoted by: >>4698908
  2389.  
  2390.  
  2391.  >>4698894
  2392. >You nod
  2393. >”We are going to watch your favorite”
  2394. >Her smiles grows broad and she wrap her arms around you again
  2395. >”But that is after the surprise”
  2396. >You arrive back at the apartment
  2397. >You and Rose start you climb up to the apartment
  2398. >As you get to your landing you continue your way up
  2399. >Rose gives you a strange look but follows you anyways
  2400. >Down inside the pocket of your pants you feel the box gaining wait
  2401. >You nerves begin to build and your hands shake a little
  2402. >Don’t worry, it’ll all be fine…
  2403. >At least you hope so…
  2404. >You continue to climb until you reach the doorway to the roof
  2405. >You wait for Rose to join you before you continue onto the roof
  2406. >Rose take a quick look around and then looks at you in puzzlement
  2407. “It’s a great view Anon, but what is the surprise”
  2408. >You walk over and stand next to greenhouse
  2409. >”I know its not a proper garden, but at least here you can grow some flowers.”
  2410. >”I checked with the landlord. No one else has ever used this. I have been building it through the winter.”
  2411. >You smile at Rose
  2412. >Rose looks surprised beyond words
  2413. >She looks between you and the greenhouse
  2414. “You rebuilt this, for me? So I can grow flowers?”
  2415. >She looks like she is almost on the verge of tears
  2416. >She trots over to you and throws herself into your arms
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  2423. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch4 Pt 3  DakanWed Sep 26 21:40:58 2012No.4698908
  2424.  
  2425. Quoted by: >>4698917
  2426.  
  2427.  
  2428.  >>4698902
  2429. “Anon, how can I ever thank you? This is the best thing anyp0ny could have ever gotten me.”
  2430. >You pull her into a tight hug
  2431. >”I’m glad you like it Rose, I can’t wait to see the flowers you will grow”
  2432. >After a long hug she lets go and admires the greenhouse some more
  2433. >Well, here we go, time for the leap…
  2434. >”Rose…?”
  2435. >She turns around and looks at you. A smile still locked on her face.
  2436. >”There is one more thing I have for you.”
  2437. >She smiles
  2438. “What more can a pony ask for from her special somep0ny?”
  2439. >You swallow hard before continuing
  2440. >”Rose, ever since you came into my life, you have changed me.”
  2441. >”Work became more bearable and so did school.”
  2442. >”You showed me that love can transcend between species”
  2443. >”You have shown me what it is like to be truly loved.”
  2444. >”And I don’t think I can live without that in my life.”
  2445. >Somewhere in the middle of the speech your brain had shut off
  2446. >You find yourself on one knee with the box in your outstretched hand
  2447. >You reach up and begin to open the box.
  2448. >”Roseluck, will you marry me?”
  2449.  
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  2455. DakanWed Sep 26 21:41:39 2012No.4698917
  2456.  
  2457. Quoted by: >>4698927 >>4699145
  2458.  
  2459.  
  2460.  >>4698908
  2461. Well, end of Part 3.
  2462.  
  2463. I'm not liking how Chapter 4 is comming out. It doesn't feel right...
  2464.  
  2465. Any feedback would be nice.
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  2472. SpartWed Sep 26 21:42:58 2012No.4698927
  2473.  
  2474.  
  2475.  >>4698917
  2476. great work Dakan, i love it!
  2477.  
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  2483. AnonymousWed Sep 26 22:15:39 2012No.4699145
  2484.  
  2485.  
  2486.  >>4698917
  2487. I'm sad to see the story progressing so quickly, but it's looking good so far.
  2488. Hope we can get maybe 2 or 3 more chapters. Still great work as always and looking forward to the next part.
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  2495. AnonymousWed Sep 26 23:24:53 2012No.4699631
  2496.  
  2497. Quoted by: >>4699734
  2498.  
  2499.  
  2500.  On Friday I will have a story for you guys. Its going to be about how wondrous a human civilisation is to a pony ( Lrya)
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  2507. AnonymousWed Sep 26 23:36:59 2012No.4699734
  2508.  
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  2510.  >>4699631
  2511.  Sounds good. I mean Equestria is great and all but it's too...stable. I'd imagine if you are not a Element of Harmony life would be pretty boring. Earth on the other hand you never really know whats going to go down. Shit would intrigue a pony to the point where'd they won't want to leave.
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  2518. AnonymousThu Sep 27 02:10:58 2012No.4700908
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  2521.  Bump before sleep.
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  2528. AnonymousThu Sep 27 02:35:38 2012No.4701157
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  2531.  
  2532. >>4631657
  2533. >>4631680
  2534. >>4633034
  2535. >>4633100
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  2537. >>4640436
  2538. >>4640414
  2539. >>4640452
  2540. >>4640459
  2541. >>4640475
  2542. >>4640598
  2543. I can´t wait for the next update.
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  2550. Mortimer MouseThu Sep 27 06:35:39 2012No.4704795
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  2553. Quoted by: >>4705913 >>4705957
  2554.  
  2555.  
  2556.  If anyone cares, I'll be putting my Pillow Case story on hold. I have plans for it, but I'm just not motivated enough.
  2557.  
  2558. On the other hand, I feel like writing a Tracy story, which I'll probably put FAR more effort into. Sound good?
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  2565. AnonymousThu Sep 27 07:25:38 2012No.4705913
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  2567.  
  2568.  >>4704795
  2569. Do it
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  2576. AnonymousThu Sep 27 07:27:18 2012No.4705957
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  2580. >>4704795
  2581. Go for it
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  2588. AnonymousThu Sep 27 11:25:18 2012No.4710949
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  2591.  4 hour bump.
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  2598. AnonymousThu Sep 27 15:30:58 2012No.4715761
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  2608. SpartThu Sep 27 18:38:19 2012No.4717383
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  2620. LeStrangeThu Sep 27 22:03:39 2012No.4719079
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  2631. AnonymousThu Sep 27 22:10:18 2012No.4719125
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  2633. Quoted by: >>4719289 >>4719448
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  2636.  If ponies come to earth they will be lost in a big city and be captured by pony ham and used as sex slaves for those spaghetti spilling bastards.
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  2643. AnonymousThu Sep 27 22:34:58 2012No.4719289
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  2646.  >>4719125
  2647. They'd be lost in a fuck huge city yeah, not sure about the sex slaves part.
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  2649. But thats what makes it interesting. Its the ultimate stranger in a strange land. The most peaceful being ever ends up in a land full of unpredictable hyper intelligent monkeys.
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  2656. DakanThu Sep 27 23:01:38 2012No.4719448
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  2659.  >>4719125
  2660. The last part would only happen if they appeared in an universe that mlp was a tv show. With my story mlp never existed.
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  2662. I'm actually thinking about doing a more realistic take on all of this once as roseluck is complete.
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  2669. DakanFri Sep 28 04:36:18 2012No.4723603
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  2672.  Good Morning Bump
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  2679. AnonymousFri Sep 28 09:06:19 2012No.4727671
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