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  1. PiE Thread #2  AnonymousTue Sep 4 21:29:30 2012No.4316204 [Reply] [Original]
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  5. Writefag for Roseluck Chronicles here, so this is the new PiE thread!
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  7. Also enjoy the next Part of the Roseluck Chronicles below!
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  9. >You and roseluck start eating some breakfast
  10. >Your slightly surprised when Roseluck asks to have some of the eggs you made
  11. >"I thought ponies would be vegeterians"
  12. "Well, we are, but we also eat animal by-products as well"
  13. >You and Roseluck quickly eat and start to mkae your way down to Millennium Park
  14. >As you exit the apartment you notice you are not the only whole with a pony
  15. >Some ponies are indeed by themselves or with other ponies,
  16. >But several are accompanied by humans.
  17. >Looks like you weren't the only one to make a friend
  18. >You probably aren't the only one who thinks that they are going insane either.
  19. >You begin to take in the sights of a world now with ponies
  20. >Honestly not much has changed
  21. >Except for the inclusion of ponies
  22. >As you walk you notice a group of ponies being led my another pony with a map
  23. >A map that is floating infront of the lead pony.
  24. >Roselucks words about Unicorns comeback to you
  25. >Not only are you in a world of ponies now
  26. >You are in a world of magic.
  27. >You head still swims trying to comprehend the implications of ponies and magic
  28. >Something Catches you eye above you
  29. >You see several britly covered streaks zoom throught the air
  30. >Those aren't birds
  31. >Those must be pegasi
  32. >One seems faster than the rest
  33. >It also stands out the most from the rest too
  34. >Its streak is colored like a rainbow
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  40. The Roseluck Chronicles pt.4: The Millenium Park Speech  AnonymousTue Sep 4 21:32:49 2012No.4316239
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  46. >Ponies everwhere, magic wielding unicorns, flying pegasi
  47. >You stumble abit from all the thoughts that cloud your head
  48. >You look down at your pony companion
  49. >She doesn't appear to be faring any better
  50. >"Its alot to take in, isn't it?"
  51. >She sounds almost breathless
  52. "Its so big..."
  53. >You chuckle slightly
  54. >"The fresh air doesn't seem to be helping..."
  55. >She coughs slightly
  56. "This is fresh air? It feels like I can hardly breath"
  57. >Pollution and smog, they probably don't have it...
  58. >"Do you use fossile fuels in equestria."
  59. "What are those?"
  60. >That confirms it
  61. >"Humans haven't been the nicest to our planet..."
  62. "What do you mean?"
  63. >"Its a long story, I'll explain later..."
  64. >If theres a later...
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  71. The Roseluck Chronicles pt.4: The Millenium Park Speech  AnonymousTue Sep 4 21:33:10 2012No.4316250
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  77. >As you approach Millennium park the number of ponies and humans begins to swell
  78. >You also the notices an increase in one other department
  79. >Police officers
  80. >Most of them appear to be outfitted in normal patrol gear
  81. >But as you get closer and closer to Millennium park you begin to notice slight increase in armaments
  82. >What are they expecting?
  83. >You don't think that the ponies would hurt anyone
  84. >No, its not for fear of the ponies
  85. >Humans were the x-factor here
  86. >They are here to protect the ponies from us
  87. >It appears that all of the ponies are gathering around the ampitheater
  88. >As you approach you can hear several voices calling out different names in the crowd
  89. "Has anyp0ny seen Lyra anywhere?"
  90. "Applebloom! Applebloom! Where are you sis?!"
  91. "Oh Celestia, why is this happening"
  92. "Roseluck, Lily?!"
  93. >There to your right.
  94. >"Roseluck over here, I heard your name."
  95. >Roseluck follows you through the crowd
  96. >You eventually find a pink pony, with green hair.
  97. >She has two daisies as a cutie mark
  98. "Daisy!"
  99. >Roseluck runs over and puts her front legs around Daisy's neck
  100. "Im so glad I found you!"
  101. >You notice that daisy doesn't appear to be alone, a man is with her also
  102. >"I'm glad you found one of your friends Roseluck."
  103. "Oh, Daisy this is Anon, he saved me from a metal box last night."
  104. >You smile at daisy and she smiles back
  105. >The two ponies begin to converse with eachother about their other missing friend.
  106. >The man who is with daisy looks around nervously
  107. >"Something wrong buddy.?"
  108. "I-I don't like crowds much. Plus doesn't this strike you as kind of weird"
  109. >"Well, yes, ponies appear everywhere across the earth over night does strike me as kind of weird."
  110. >He laughs nervously
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  117. The Roseluck Chronicles pt.4: The Millenium Park Speech  AnonymousTue Sep 4 21:35:09 2012No.4316269
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  123. >You turn and look at the stage.
  124. >Up on the stage you can make out two figures.
  125. >One is the Mayor of the city
  126. >The other is a pony who is tan colored with a white mane
  127. >The Mayor of Chicago approaches the podieum
  128. "Good Morning citizens of Chicago. As you may or may not have noticed we have a few visitors with us today."
  129. >You hear a few nervous chuckles from the crowd, but its mostly silent now.
  130. "I have been told that they are from the land that they call Equestria."
  131. "I have also been told that they are quite friendly."
  132. "I am officially offering my hand in friendship to our new visitors"
  133. "Without further ado, I present Mayor Mare, to have a word with her people about the current state of affairs."
  134. >The mayor walks over and extends his hand down to Mayor Mare
  135. >The mayor extends her hoof and they both shake.
  136. >That will probably be the picture on the front page tommorow.
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  143. AnonymousTue Sep 4 21:36:50 2012No.4316277
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  149. >Mayor mare walks over and then take the podium
  150. >She clears her thoat and begins
  151. "Good morning Fillies and Gentlecolts, I hope that everp0ny out there is safe and sound."
  152. "As Mayor Emanuel stated, I am here to talk on the current situation."
  153. "We still do not know how we all ended up here."
  154. "We don't know exactly how may of us got transported here, or where all the rest of us are."
  155. "I know someone of you are missing friends and family memebers."
  156. "Every effort is being taken to reunite everyp0ny with their scattered families."
  157. "Most of all, we don't know where and of the Princesses are."
  158. >At this an audible gasp goes through the crowd
  159. >Murmurs spread and begin to get louder
  160. "Please calm down everyp0ny, we are looking for them, if they are here we will find them."
  161. "Finally comes up the question of shelter."
  162. "Mayor Emanuel has assured me that temporary shelters are being set up for us in several places around the city."
  163. "But, if you can find some hosts that are willing to take you in, we highly encourage this."
  164. "Thank you everyp0ny for your patience."
  165. >Mayor Mare steps down and Mayor Emanuel takes the podium again
  166. "Citizens I encourage you to be good hosts and open your homes to our visitors."
  167. "Thank you."
  168. >He steps down from the podium.
  169. >As he does there is a few moments of claps and some hoof stomping
  170. >But that is quickly overtaken by the rising clamour of voices shouting out names again.
  171. >You turn to Roseluck, who is already staring at you
  172. >"Well, its your choice Roseluck, what do you want to do."
  173. >She looks down at the ground and back up at you.
  174. "If you wouldn't mind, Anon, I would like to go back to your place."
  175. >You nodded and start making your way throught the crowd.
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  182. AnonymousTue Sep 4 21:38:50 2012No.4316293
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  188. And that is the end of part 4
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  190. I really enjoyed writing part 4. I am not the best speech writer though. Oh well...
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  192. Part 5 tommorow afternoon!
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  194. Constructive criticism always appreciated
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  201. Ponies in Earth: General Info  PancakesTue Sep 4 21:42:30 2012No.4316334
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  207.  Step 1 - Ponies
  208. Step 2 - Earth
  209. Step 3 - ????
  210. Step 4 - PROFIT!!!
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  212. Previously, on Ponies in Earth:
  213. > Casey expresses her love of soft human fabrics. Next stop: Socks!?
  214. > Rarity is kidnapped by suspicious characters! Next stop: Panic!!!
  215. > Pillow Case learns who has her apartment keys. Next stop: Awkward Time...
  216. > PC joins her friends on her first night out. Next stop: The City!
  217. > Anon sleeps uneasily, unsure of what lies next without either her memories or her cutie mark. Next stop: ???
  218. > Sky Bright is on her way to represent the Bank of Equestria at the office of their future partner bank in Earth. Next stop: Merger or Acquisition?
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  228. AnonymousTue Sep 4 21:48:50 2012No.4316375
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  234. Sorry, Pancakes, I didn't see your thread until after i had stopped dumping my story here, Please, don't hate me.
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  241. PancakesTue Sep 4 21:50:50 2012No.4316392
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  245. No issue. Just thought I'd include a quick summary of the active stories.
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  247. Removed my commentary on Roseluck Chronicles since you already updated.
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  254. PancakesTue Sep 4 22:37:10 2012No.4316709  
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  257. Decided to postpone today's update due to the shit storm on the first few pages. I can only hope that they end their idiocy in a few hours. lolnope
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  264. Loscil !LoscilARtETue Sep 4 23:01:09 2012No.4316986
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  269.  I'm loving these stories, and those draws of Pillow Case! Who drew them? I want moar~
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  276. AnonymousTue Sep 4 23:19:54 2012No.4317154
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  282. PC needs to be less adorable, Kill'in me here.
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  289. Loscil !LoscilARtETue Sep 4 23:20:29 2012No.4317171
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  293. I know, so much cuteness to handle.
  294. But awkward PC is... Damn.
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  301. MD !Tm27jGxpYkTue Sep 4 23:59:54 2012No.4317762
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  306.  Hello PiE.
  307. I write for AiE, and I'd like to know more about you guys.
  308. So is this basically an inversion of Anon in Equestria?
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  315. AnonymousWed Sep 5 00:01:09 2012No.4317805
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  321. Aside from a few spelling errors I can't really see anything that needs improving upon. Keep up the great work.
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  328. AnonymousWed Sep 5 00:16:50 2012No.4317935
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  334. Hello MD,
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  336. Roseluck writefage here, basicaly thats the concept. Any stories from any percepective about ponies on earth are welcome. Please see the previous thread for the othere stories of PiE. Since this is only our second thread, we don't have many yet.
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  339. Thanks for the critique. I probably should start running my stories though a proper word processor before posting them.
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  346. MD !Tm27jGxpYkWed Sep 5 00:18:29 2012No.4317951
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  352. You didn't link it in your OP.
  353. Is there a Pastebin archive of story links?
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  360. AnonymousWed Sep 5 00:23:29 2012No.4317980
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  366. I know, that was my bad, I probably the most novice writefag here.
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  368. See this post for it.
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  376. MD !Tm27jGxpYkWed Sep 5 00:29:09 2012No.4318019
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  380. Hmm. Seems promising. I'll keep tabs on you guys, for sure.
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  387. Mr. BlueWed Sep 5 00:44:09 2012No.4318108
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  391. I need to go ask the guy in the draw thread that did them because I forgot his name.
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  398. Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems  PancakesWed Sep 5 01:04:10 2012No.4318271  
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  402. "What do you mean, just wait!?" cries Twilight.
  403. > "I need to make a quick call."
  404. "Rarity just got FOALNAPPED! We need to go after her!"
  405. > "No way are we going to catch up to them on foot."
  406. > I keep focused on my mobile phone. I don't really want to do this.
  407. > But there isn't much choice. Just hope that he'd pick up.
  408. "Are you just going to stand there?"
  409. > Ah, good. I still had his number. Who knew this would come in useful?
  410. > But chasing after kidnappers? This will probably not end well.
  411. "Or are you ignoring all this just because she isn't human?"
  412. > I quickly dial the number and hold the phone to my ears.
  413. > "Yeah, yeah. Hold on..."
  414. "Just because she's a pony!?"
  415. > "Hello? Is this -"
  416. "UGH! I've had it! I'm going to go save Rarity!"
  417. > "Yes, it's been a long time. And yes, I haven't forgotten-"
  418. "With or without your help!"
  419. > "Anyway, the reason I called is that I need-"
  420. "- so just rot here, you damn dirty APE!"
  421. > "Sure, Twilight. Wait, what?"
  422. > The purple pony starts galloping in the direction of the black van.
  423. > No time to explain. I focus my attention back on the phone.
  424. > "Yes, that's right. I need to call in a big favor."
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  431. Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems  PancakesWed Sep 5 01:05:11 2012No.4318289
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  438. "What do you mean, just wait!?" cries Twilight.
  439. > "I need to make a quick call."
  440. "Rarity just got FOALNAPPED! We need to go after her!"
  441. > "No way are we going to catch up to them on foot."
  442. > I keep focused on my mobile phone. I don't really want to do this.
  443. > But there isn't much choice. Just hope that he'd pick up.
  444. "Are you just going to stand there?"
  445. > Ah, good. I still had his number. Who knew this would come in useful?
  446. > But chasing after kidnappers? This will probably not end well.
  447. "Or are you ignoring all this just because she isn't human?"
  448. > I quickly dial the number and hold the phone to my ears.
  449. > "Yeah, yeah. Hold on..."
  450. "Just because she's a pony!?"
  451. > "Hello? Is this -"
  452. "UGH! I've had it! I'm going to go save Rarity!"
  453. > "Yes, it's been a long time. And yes, I haven't forgotten-"
  454. "With or without your help!"
  455. > "Anyway, the reason I called is that I need-"
  456. "- so just rot here, you damn dirty APE!"
  457. > "Sure, Twilight. Wait, what?"
  458. > The purple pony starts galloping in the direction of the black van.
  459. > No time to explain. I focus my attention back on the phone.
  460. > "Yes, that's right. I need to call in a big favor."
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  467. AnonymousWed Sep 5 01:27:29 2012No.4318431
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  470.  HELL YEAH STORY THREAD !
  471. srysly someone should make a fanfiction out of this !
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  478. Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems  PancakesWed Sep 5 01:29:30 2012No.4318448
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  484. > A few minutes later, a yellow taxicab pulls up in front of me.
  485. > The car window lowers, revealing a familiar face.
  486. "Long time no see, professor!"
  487. > "Didn't I tell all of my students never to call me that?"
  488. "Of course you did. And that's exactly why we do, professor."
  489. > I shake my head as I get in the cab.
  490. > The driver eyes the bags I'm carrying and smiles widely.
  491. "Never thought you for a cross-dresser, professor."
  492. > "Huh? Oh these. They belong to a friend."
  493. "Oh, sure. Don't worry. Your secret's safe with me, professor."
  494. > "Never mind. Did you check up on the vehicle description I sent you?"
  495. > He suddenly stops smiling.
  496. "Yep. Word is that the van belongs to the east side gangs."
  497. > "So the east side are into kidnapping now?"
  498. "Hell, no!" says the driver. "They only deal in drugs and guns. But I heard that some idiots jacked one of their vans just a couple of hours ago."
  499. > "Oh, wow."
  500. > I cover my face and shake my head.
  501. > "Let's just try to catch up to them before the gangs arrive."
  502. "Sure thing, professor."
  503. > "And one last thing - you still never explained to me why a neurobiology major would drop out of college to be a professional cab driver."
  504. > He only smiles at me mysteriously.
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  511. Mr. BlueWed Sep 5 02:03:29 2012No.4318723
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  516.  Anyone else think this is going to be the way of these threads now that they start with a story? Seems like a fun idea to keep things fresh.
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  523. AnonymousWed Sep 5 04:26:49 2012No.4320395
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  529. don't suppose you'd offer me a link to your pastebin?
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  536. AnonymousWed Sep 5 04:35:09 2012No.4320505
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  542. Roseluck Writefag here
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  544. I'm having a hard time following you Mr.Blue. Are you saying that all of our stories should intertwine somehow, or that you really liked pancakes recap of the previous thread. Some better explination would be nice.
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  546. P.S. anyone think I should adapt some form of name for this thread so that way I don't start off each of my post with Roseluck writefag here.
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  553. Mortimer MouseWed Sep 5 05:24:00 2012No.4321128
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  560. You probably should get a name. Doesn't even have to be related to your story and it makes it easier to find your posts.
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  562. On a side note, I'm back in town and I'll be writing some stuff today and tomorrow. I'll be taking longer to post because each time I look back on what I write I see a simple mistake I could've fixed or a sentence I could've improved on. But when is anyone actually satisfied with their own work? On my last post I felt it was really short on actual content, and hopefully I'll be able to move this story along.
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  575. >But when is anyone actually satisfied with their own work?
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  577. Before the fall. When bad times start in.
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  579. I remember going to the artist's panel at Trotcon back in July. Some of the artists were more talented or popular than others, but none of them were too shabby at all.
  580. "What do you want to improve in your work?" one of the questions went.
  581. "Time," answered most of them; they wanted to draw faster, or to draw more in one style or another. There was one artist who didn't say either of those.
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  583. "I'm actually pretty content with where I'm at right now," he said.
  584. "And that really worries me."
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  586. >What does this have to do with PiE?
  587. >Nothing, but it's more fun to read than just "bump", isn't it?
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  594. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYWed Sep 5 07:56:29 2012No.4323556
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  597.  i hope for more great stuff tomorrow, read through all your storys, i like them all ... but i dont like the 4chan post by post format, sorry guys ... but thanks to your awesome story, i stick around longer here xDD
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  599. have fun writing more guys! thanks for your efforts !
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  616. PancakesWed Sep 5 11:41:10 2012No.4327481
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  619.  >>4320395
  620. None yet. I haven't been writing on /mlp/ that long. Will post it when I get some time to organize my notes. Old thread is still up, btw.
  621.  
  622. "One Small Step for Marekind", the first chapter starts here: >>4123767.
  623.  
  624. >>4320505
  625. A name is for convenience; a trip only if needed.
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  627. >>4323066
  628. When, indeed? But yes, time is the scarcest resource for both writers and artists.
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  635. Mr. BlueWed Sep 5 12:57:11 2012No.4328777
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  640.  >>4320505
  641. Not sure how you misread that, all I said was that I like how both our threads so far don't start off with the usual "This is the X thread about X, here are our pastbins, here are links to last thread, blablabla." It's good and all for people already interested, but I think doing what we've done now, starting with a story, will get more people interested and is a nice original twist to the usual thread series' on this board.
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  648. DakanWed Sep 5 14:02:50 2012No.4329697
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  651.  >>4328777
  652. Honestly it was really late at night for me when i read that. I wasn't all there, I don't even know what I was thinking then.
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  654. BTW. Update!
  655. I have a name now! woo! I just got off of work, Im going to eat something and take a little nap. Going to work on Part 5 later and will probably have it up later this evening.
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  662. Mr. BlueWed Sep 5 14:03:31 2012No.4329709
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  665.  
  666. Last thread went to bed. Here's a quick pastebin of my fic so far:
  667. http://pastebin.com/SW2aaL4m
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  669. And here's a quick one of that thread too:
  670. http://pastebin.com/v4JgQzCv
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  677. Longbow !iCBLUlGVNAWed Sep 5 17:02:31 2012No.4332027
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  680.  bump
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  682. Enjoying your work so far, Mr. Blue. Keep it up!
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  689. AnonymousWed Sep 5 21:01:31 2012No.4333657
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  694.  Still waiting for motorcity's pervert pillow case story.
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  696. Damn nigga you deliver more stories man. Its already been a week,
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  703. The Roseluck Chronicles pt5:The Long Road Ahead  DakanWed Sep 5 21:27:10 2012No.4333817
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  705. Quoted by: >>4333827
  706.  
  707.  
  708.  Took me longer than I expected, but here it is! The Roseluck Chronicles pt5. Now with feels!
  709.  
  710. >You and Roseluck make your way out of Millennium Park.
  711. >As the crowd begins to thin out, you turn around to Roseluck.
  712. > “So if we are going to be staying together, we had better go and get some groceries.”
  713. >Roseluck nods silently
  714. >”So what do Equestrians like to eat besides salad and eggs?”
  715. “We eat all kinds of fruits, vegetables and flowers, and as I said before some animal by-products.”
  716. >”You eat flowers?”
  717. “Yes, what do you use flowers for?”
  718. >”We use them as decorations; we also use them to display affection for another.”
  719. >”So does that mean the flowers that you grew were for food.”
  720. “Yes, they were the best flowers around. I won several prizes for my flowers.”
  721. >”Impressive.”
  722. >”Thank you, Anon.”
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  729. The Roseluck Chronicles pt5:The Long Road Ahead  DakanWed Sep 5 21:28:30 2012No.4333827
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  734.  >>4333817
  735. >You both continue to walk along in silence until you arrive at a small grocery store.
  736. >You, with Roseluck’s guidance pick up groceries suitable for the diet of a pony.
  737. >After leaving the grocery store you and Roseluck make your way back the apartment.
  738. “I really wish I had my bags with me so I could help you carry the groceries Anon.”
  739. >”It’s no trouble at all Roseluck.”
  740. “I appreciate you helping me out Anon.”
  741. >”Well, I just couldn’t leave you in the dumpster could I?”
  742. “It’s not just that, for letting me star with you until they can figure out what to do.”
  743. >”Like I said, it’s not trouble at all.”
  744. >The rest of the walk home is relatively quiet and uneventful.
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  751. The Roseluck Chronicles pt5:The Long Road Ahead  DakanWed Sep 5 21:29:11 2012No.4333835
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  756.  >>4333827
  757. >You eventually reach your apartment and begin to put away the food that you have bought.
  758. >There is something that you have forgotten.
  759. >It has been bothering you since you left the park.
  760. >But what was it…
  761. >Oh that’s right…
  762. >You probably should have checked with your landlord before agreeing to let a pony stay in your apartment.
  763. >Wouldn’t want to violate your lease by letting a talking pony from another world stay here.
  764. >That would be bad.
  765. >The more you turn that thought over in your mind the more alien it sounds.
  766. >Talking ponies, Equestria, and magic.
  767. >This is going to take some time to get used to…
  768. >You shake your head clear and turn to Roseluck.
  769. >”I’ll be right back Roseluck, I probably should have checked with my landlord to see if it would be ok if you stayed here.”
  770. “What’s a landlord exactly?”
  771. >”Well, I don’t own the apartment we are in, someone else does. I pay him for letting me stay in it.”
  772. >”He makes the rules about things we can do in his apartment.”
  773. >”So, I really should have seen if talking ponies are against the rules.”
  774. >She chuckles at the last statement.
  775. “If he is as nice as you are, there shouldn’t be a problem.”
  776. >”I don’t see one either, but its better if I do the courteous thing and check first.”
  777. >She nods and continues to put the food away as you exit the apartment.
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  784. The Roseluck Chronicles pt5:The Long Road Ahead  DakanWed Sep 5 21:30:31 2012No.4333839
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  789.  >>4333835
  790. >Mr. Williams lives on the first floor of the apartment complex.
  791. >He’s a very nice and understanding man.
  792. >He’s even been a little lenient when you’re late with the rent.
  793. >There really shouldn’t be a problem.
  794. >You get down to the first floor and knock on Mr. Williams’ door.
  795. >He quickly answers it.
  796. ”Hello Anon, how are you? Seen the news lately? Crazy stuff going on out there. Anything I can help you with?
  797. >”I’m fine Mr. Williams. The news is actually why I’m here.”
  798. >He chuckles…
  799. “Let me guess, you took one of them in didn’t you and you wanted to check with me about it?”
  800. >You scratch you head as he says this.
  801. >”Well, yes, but how did you know what I was going to ask?”
  802. “You’re not the first one to come knocking today.”
  803. “All I ask is that you keep no more than one, and any damage that they might cause you are liable for.”
  804. >You smile and nod.
  805. >”Thank you Mr. Williams, have a good day.”
  806. “Have a good day Anon.”
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  813. The Roseluck Chronicles pt5:The Long Road Ahead  DakanWed Sep 5 21:32:52 2012No.4333846
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  818.  >>4333839
  819. >You make your way upstairs to tell Roseluck the good news.
  820. >As you enter the apartment you find Roseluck is once again watching the news.
  821. >She doesn’t notices your entrance into the apartment until you speak.
  822. >”Anything new about your people?”
  823. >She shakes her head.
  824. “They aren’t people their ponies.”
  825. >Right ponies, need to start trying to use the right syntax.
  826. >She turns and looks at you.
  827. “Good news?”
  828. >You smile and nod.
  829. >She smiles and continues to look at you.
  830. “Anon, about what you said earlier…”
  831. >”What do you mean Roseluck?”
  832. >She laughs.
  833. “Stop calling me Roseluck, call me Rose.”
  834. >For some reason this sends you back to a moment in time watching the Titanic.
  835. >You’re barely listening to Rose as you play some of the scenes from the movie in your head.
  836. “Anon, are you listening to me?”
  837. >”Wha-“
  838. >She sighs.
  839. “You said that you would tell me about your planet and how you haven’t taken care of it later.”
  840. >You nod.
  841. >You really don’t want to tell her about the faults of humanity.
  842. >Especially to someone who hasn’t even been in this world for not even a day.
  843. >You realize a little too late that you are wearing your thoughts on your sleeve.
  844. >She is still staring at you.
  845. “Is it really that bad?”
  846. >She can see your hesitation at the question.
  847. >Your willingness to lie to her about the state of the world.
  848. >You finally are able to get out the words.
  849. >”It’s too early…”
  850. >She looks down at the floor from your answer.
  851. >”I’ll tell you someday, but I want you to see the world for yourself before you hear my opinion on it.”
  852. >She nods silently.
  853. >”I would love to hear about Equestria, if you would like to…”
  854. >She shakes her head, when she looks at you can see tears forming in her eyes.
  855. ”It’s too early, I just…”
  856. >That was too much for her.
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  863. The Roseluck Chronicles pt5:The Long Road Ahead  DakanWed Sep 5 21:33:51 2012No.4333856
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  865. Quoted by: >>4333880
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  868.  >>4333846
  869. >She begins to cry.
  870. >Good job Anon…
  871. >You walk over and sit down on the couch next to her.
  872. >As you do she reaches out and hugs you around the neck.
  873. >Her tear streaked face buried into your shoulder.
  874. >The smell of roses once again fills your nostrils.
  875. >Your surprised the by action.
  876. >You can barely make out the words between her sobs.
  877. “Wha-what if we ca-can’t go b-back…”
  878. “Wha-what if we-were st-stuck here…”
  879. >She continues to sob uncontrollably.
  880. >Your brain is slow to react.
  881. >You slowly begin to stroke her mane.
  882. >”Its ok, Rose, they will find a way to get you back home.”
  883. >”And, if they can’t we will just cross that bridge when we come to it.”
  884. >She continues to sob into your shoulder.
  885. >Her whole body trembling underneath your hands.
  886. >It’s an all too human emotion.
  887. >Wait…what…
  888. >No, she’s an animal…
  889. >A talking, sentient, animal, from a magical land called Equestria.
  890. >But an animal, none the less.
  891. >You look up and stare at the news.
  892. >It shows pictures from all around the world of gatherings of ponies.
  893. >Just like the one you were just at.
  894. >You can only comprehend one thought at the moment.
  895. >Between the mare sobbing in your arms and the ponies gathering all around the world.
  896. >Everything just got a lot more complicated.
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  903. DakanWed Sep 5 21:38:50 2012No.4333880
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  908.  >>4333856
  909. And that is the end of part 5
  910. In related news that is the end of Chapter 1.
  911.  
  912. I won't be able to start work on Chapter 2 Pt.1 until friday. So no updates until then.
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  914. I had some fun writing Pt.5, I hope it doesn't come off as trying to force the last part.
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  916. Next Time on The Roseluck Chronicles:
  917. -A Time Jump!
  918. -News on the Princesses!
  919. -Flowers!
  920. -And the continuing question on Humanity!
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  922. Constructive Criticism always appreciated.
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  929. AnonymousWed Sep 5 21:48:50 2012No.4333934
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  934.  >>4333880
  935. Looking good so far. You might want to start putting your story on a pastebin so newcomers can more easily catch up.
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  942. DakanWed Sep 5 21:51:30 2012No.4333943
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  945.  >>4333934
  946. I was actually considering that. I was going to wait until I had chapter 1 done. Now that it is. I am going though my previouse entries with Word and correcting all of the spelling and grammar mistakes. Might put one up tommorow.
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  953. Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems  PancakesWed Sep 5 21:53:12 2012No.4333952
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  958.  >>4318448
  959. "Unhand me, this INSTANT!" cries Rarity.
  960. > She raises her hoof threateningly at her captors.
  961. > Two humans. Even by human standards, their fashion sense is absolutely dreadful!
  962. > One of them holds her down forcefully against the back seat.
  963. "Ain't that cute?" he says. "Yer not afraid of us, are ye?"
  964. > The other one is seated up front. He takes a glance at the rear view mirror.
  965. > Rarity shudders as he gives her the dirtiest smile.
  966. "Hmmm, have a gander at this little beauty!" says the driver. "Maybe we should have a little fun with her, first."
  967. "No kiddin!" replies the other one. "Ye gotta have a feel of her skin, man! I've never felt anythin' so soft! It's so SOFT, man!"
  968. > Their eyes remind Rarity of crazed stallions in heat.
  969. > She gasps, realizing that they don't know that she's a pony.
  970. "How dare you!" she whispers. "To even consider doing such... dirty human things to a lady!"
  971. "That's the least of your problems," answers the driver. "You're worth a king's ransom to small time criminals like us."
  972. "Hell yeah!" adds the other one. "We'll be billionaires! That's like, 10 times a million, man!"
  973. "So just tell us your rich father's name. I'm sure he's some CEO or Arabian prince, considering all those jewels in your purse."
  974. > They would dare break the law and foalnap someone in broad daylight?
  975. > What is wrong with these humans? And all this fuss over a few gemstones?
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  982. Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems  PancakesWed Sep 5 21:55:11 2012No.4333957
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  989. "Damn, man! She's like, SO SOFT!"
  990. > The human beside Rarity starts rubbing his cheek against her leg.
  991. > Oh, that is the last straw!
  992. "GET OFF ME, YOU BRUTE!" she screams.
  993. > Rarity swings her free hoof right at his face.
  994. > It connects with his nose. A sickening crunch echoes inside the van.
  995. > The human lets go of her and backs off.
  996. "FUCK, MAN! FUCK! FUCK! FUCK! FUCK! FUCK!"
  997. "Hey!" cries the driver. "What the hell's going on back there?"
  998. "FUCK! SHE JUST BROKE MY NOSE! FUCK! FUCK! FUCK!"
  999. > Rarity rubs her hoof painfully. Human faces are harder than they look.
  1000. > She'll need to check if she ruined her pedicure later.
  1001. "Serves you right," says Rarity. "Now you better let me go, right now! Or else, you'll be-"
  1002. > Suddenly, the injured human points something strange at her.
  1003. > A handheld device with a long hollow tube.
  1004. "OH, YOU GONNA GET IT NOW, BITCH. I'M GOING TO BLOW YER BRAINS OUT!"
  1005. "Holy shit, don't you dare shoot her!" shouts the driver. "We need her alive to get any ransom, remember!?"
  1006. "B-BUT!"
  1007. "Keeping her under control is your job! I'd like to think that a big lug like you can do that without a gun!"
  1008. "UGH, DAMN IT!"
  1009. > He lowers his hand slightly. Rarity's eyes twinkle at this chance.
  1010. > So, they want her alive, do they?
  1011. > As Applejack would say:
  1012. "ONE LIVELY LADY, COMING RIGHT UP!" cries the angry pony.
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  1021. Quoted by: >>4334107
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  1024.  >>4333827
  1025. >“It’s not just that, for letting me star with you until they can figure out what to do.”
  1026. >letting me star with you
  1027. >me star with
  1028. >star
  1029. The correct word was "stay" yes?
  1030. It should be a reader's job to aid in these things
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  1041. Gah! Thanks will correct that before I upload to the pastebin. I probably should start proof reading these before I post...
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  1048. Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems  PancakesWed Sep 5 23:16:50 2012No.4334474
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  1053.  >>4333957
  1054. > "How much further is it?"
  1055. "Just a few more blocks. Don't worry, professor! They're sure to slow down as they approach the main intersection."
  1056. > This former student of mine is among the fastest cab drivers in the city.
  1057. > Rumor has it that he could get you from the west side to the east in less than half an hour.
  1058. > That is, if you offered a big enough tip. And now that I, oh shi-
  1059. > I cringe as a truck pops out from a blind corner.
  1060. "What's wrong, professor?" he says with a grin. "Not used to a little 'speed'?"
  1061. > "Err, yeah," I manage.
  1062. > Damn, this guy's crazy! His reflexes even more so!
  1063. > In fact, he somewhat reminds me of Rainbow Dash.
  1064. > Those two would probably hit it off right away.
  1065. > "..."
  1066. > And for the safety of the citizens of this city, I solemnly swear that I shall do everything in my power to make sure that they never meet.
  1067. "Woah! Look at that cutie!"
  1068. > He raises one hand to point at someone along the sidewalk.
  1069. > Hey, isn't that-
  1070. > "Turn around! I know that pon-err, girl!"
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  1082. > I hold out my hand to her. Twilight looks at it, still unsure.
  1083. "Y-you!?" she cries. "But I thought-"
  1084. > "Get in if you want to save your friend," I said.
  1085. "What? You're actually going to help us?"
  1086. > "Of course, I am. I wouldn't be much of an apartment manager if I'd loss any of my precious tenants, now would I?"
  1087. "I-I don't understand..."
  1088. > Seems like I have to explain this in a way she could relate.
  1089. > I cleared my throat and spoke in my classroom lecture voice.
  1090. > "A famous human poet once said, 'The world only goes round by misunderstanding.' Now tell me, Miss Twilight - how do you apply this to our current situation?"
  1091. > It takes her only a few moments.
  1092. > She slowly smiles, wipes off her tears and takes my hand.
  1093. > And with one more passenger, we drive off.
  1094. "Sweet line, professor!" cries the driver. "Is this how you used to pick up those smart girls back at the university?"
  1095. > Twilight suddenly blushes beet red.
  1096. > I shake my head dismissively.
  1097. > "Ahahaha! NO. And shouldn't you be keeping your eyes on the road?"
  1098. "Sure professor. Just one problem."
  1099. > He pushes a button to turn on the radio.
  1100. > Sounds like the police band. How is this relevant to-
  1101. > Then I hear it. An accident a couple of blocks away.
  1102. > A black van just crashed into a utility pole.
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  1116. > I hold out my hand to her. Twilight looks at it, still unsure.
  1117. "Y-you!?" she cries. "But I thought-"
  1118. > "Get in if you want to save your friend," I said.
  1119. "What? You're actually going to help us?"
  1120. > "Of course, I am. I wouldn't be much of an apartment manager if I'd lose any of my precious tenants, now would I?"
  1121. "I-I don't understand..."
  1122. > Seems like I have to explain this in a way she could relate.
  1123. > I cleared my throat and spoke in my classroom lecture voice.
  1124. > "A famous human poet once said, 'The world only goes round by misunderstanding.' Now tell me, Miss Twilight - how do you apply this to our current situation?"
  1125. > It takes her only a few moments.
  1126. > She slowly smiles, wipes off her tears and takes my hand.
  1127. > And with one more passenger, we drive off.
  1128. "Sweet line, professor!" cries the driver. "Is this how you used to pick up those smart girls back at the university?"
  1129. > Twilight suddenly blushes beet red.
  1130. > I shake my head dismissively.
  1131. > "Ahahaha! NO. And shouldn't you be keeping your eyes on the road?"
  1132. "Sure professor. Just one problem."
  1133. > He pushes a button to turn on the radio.
  1134. > Sounds like the police band. How is this relevant to-
  1135. > Then I hear it. An accident a couple of blocks away.
  1136. > A black van just crashed into a utility pole.
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  1146. Quoted by: >>4335766 >>4336368
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  1148.  
  1149.  Somewhat organized my notes and uploaded them to pastebin for readers, new and old.
  1150.  
  1151. Chapter 1: One Small Step for Marekind
  1152. http://pastebin.com/WbSyj7r2
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  1154. Chapter 2: A Foal And Her Gems (ongoing)
  1155. http://pastebin.com/JZ8pyMYU
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  1162. AnonymousThu Sep 6 00:34:51 2012No.4335445  
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  1165. Defensive Bump.
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  1172. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYThu Sep 6 00:52:10 2012No.4335766
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  1175.  >>4335062
  1176. i like you !
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  1183. Loscil !LoscilARtEThu Sep 6 01:17:50 2012No.4336368
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  1186.  >>4335062
  1187. Awesome, thanks!
  1188. Also, bump.
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  1195. Mr. BlueThu Sep 6 02:57:30 2012No.4337984
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  1198. Quoted by: >>4338288
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  1201.  >>4333657
  1202. I'm also waiting for a more literal 'pillow story'.
  1203. I didn't want to be the only one using this OC.
  1204.  
  1205. I want to see someone else's take on her! Come on guys!
  1206.  
  1207. I also got this OC from the drawfriend that made those last two pictures of her I used. He just read the name "pillow Case" and made this pic here, after I told him who she was he renamed this character Southern Comfort. I promised to use the character and make him flamboyantly gay. I just haven't had a chance yet...
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  1214. AnonymousThu Sep 6 03:23:10 2012No.4338288
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  1217.  >>4337984
  1218. I know you want to see someone else do a Pillow Case story. Your characterization of her sets the bar pretty high, though. Almost no conflict has happened yet, and many of us are on the edge of our seats because the character's discovery process is captivating.
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  1220. Moar, plox!
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  1227. Mortimer MouseThu Sep 6 04:15:31 2012No.4338867
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  1233.  >>4333657
  1234. Remember, this is something we do in our free time because we enjoy it, but we still don't spend every night writing pony fanfics. Especially when I need to focus on my other work.
  1235.  
  1236. But I have half of my update typed up and I plan on finishing it tonight AFTER I get some real life work done.
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  1243. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYThu Sep 6 04:46:30 2012No.4339219
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  1246.  >>4338867
  1247. i for my part, just want to let you know how much i like your story. hope that cheers you up and motivates you to keep writing in your valuable free time
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  1254. AnonymousThu Sep 6 09:08:50 2012No.4343075
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  1257.  Bump for moar!
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  1264. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseThu Sep 6 09:22:50 2012No.4343288
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  1267. Quoted by: >>4343299
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  1270.  Postan.
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  1272. >GAH! Why does everything always have to go wrong for you?
  1273. >You swear to yourself one day you'll get out of this stupid city and somewhere nice, somewhere warm and free of crime.
  1274. >Somewhere like home...
  1275. >But first, you need those keys back.
  1276. >You could just go up to Joe and ask him for your keys, he HAS to give them to you.
  1277. >But John is probably with him. Oh Celestia you'll never be able to look him in the eyes again if Joe tells him what you did.
  1278. >Not only that, but he'll know you weren't honest with him and he may never trust you again!
  1279. >That's definitely not an option.
  1280. >But stealing them back is! Stupid human probably keeps them in a box or something.
  1281. >You do another fly over of the building and land in the front, entering the store.
  1282. >Checking to make sure Joe or John aren't around, you make your way over to the nearest employee and ask them where the manager is.
  1283. >They direct you to the back of the store and tell you to just knock on the door labeled with "Manager."
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  1290. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseThu Sep 6 09:22:50 2012No.4343299
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  1292. Quoted by: >>4343309
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  1294.  
  1295.  >>4343288
  1296. >Knocking certainly isn't an option, but you thank the employee anyways and go on your way.
  1297. >Trotting down the aisles, you try to figure out a game plan for yourself.
  1298. >You need to find Joe, John, and your keys.
  1299. >Keep John away from Joe.
  1300. >Keep Joe away from your keys.
  1301. >Keep away from Joe and John when they're together.
  1302. >Get your keys and get the buck out of here.
  1303. >You got this Pillow, play it cool...
  1304. >WOAH LOOK AT THOSE JACKETS.
  1305. >You rush over to a clothing stand and begin to-
  1306. >Focus, you stupid pegasus! Focus!
  1307. >Right, sorry.
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  1314. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseThu Sep 6 09:23:31 2012No.4343309
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  1319.  >>4343299
  1320. >Before you know it you've reached the back of the building and subsequently the door you were looking for.
  1321. >You place the side of your face against the door, and try to listen for anyone inside.
  1322. >*WHAM*
  1323. >"I think you're worried over nothing."
  1324. >"Do you really? That pony and his team were arrested just last night. It was on the news, Joe. 'A drug epidemic' they called it. This isn't good. I was supposed to keep them calm and quiet. I didn't think they'd make such a big deal about a rumor. Now the guys are talking about moving down south because things are getting too heated up here-"
  1325. >That's all you can hear before they turn the corner and walk out of sight.
  1326. >The door swings shut, and you slowly peel off the wall in a cartoon fashion and float gently to the ground before popping back to life.
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  1333. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseThu Sep 6 09:23:11 2012No.4343317
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  1338.  >>4343309
  1339. >You shake your head rapidly to dispell the dizzieness.
  1340. >That was John and Joe!
  1341. >But what was John talking about?
  1342. >No time! The keys might be in there!
  1343. >You make a grab for the door.
  1344. >A few fruitless pulls on the handle tell you that Joe locked it on his way out.
  1345. >Great, now you need to get Joe to open the door...
  1346. >But he's probably still with John. You need a plan.
  1347. >Come on brain! Think! THINK!
  1348. >I'M TRYING STOP PRESSURING ME.
  1349. >Okay, okay. I got it. What if we-
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  1356. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseThu Sep 6 09:24:50 2012No.4343325
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  1361.  >>4343317
  1362. MEANWHILE
  1363. >You are Joe.
  1364. >John decided to pay a visit and check up on you while he did some grocery shopping and waits for a friend.
  1365. >You've both been exchanging information on your work.
  1366. >It's obviously a one sided conversation considering the kind of work you do compared to John.
  1367. >Man, why did you get stuck with managing while John gets the exciting job?
  1368. >Yeah you're jelly. He's your younger brother and he's doing better than you. He even says he has his eye on someone, and is considering asking them out sometime. You've been single for 4 years!
  1369. >You spend your nights alone and arguing with strangers over the internet while he gets to-
  1370. >Your train of thought is interrupted as you hear screams and the intercom plays throughout the store.
  1371. >"WILL THE MANAGER PLEASE REPORT TO THE CHANGING ROOMS. AGAIN, WILL THE MANAGER PLEASE REPORT TO THE CHANGING ROOMS."
  1372. >Oh, for fucks sake, not again...
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  1379. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseThu Sep 6 09:25:30 2012No.4343338
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  1384.  >>4343325
  1385. >You excuse yourself from John and make your way back to your office, probably the only thing you're proud of due to how clean and tidy you keep it.
  1386. >You think you have some minor OCD, you'd go nuts if your office was a mess.
  1387. >Anyways, you unlock your door, grab the broom you usually use to beat that stupid pony with, and make a hasty exit so you can get there before she tries to make off again.
  1388. >You swear that you'll knock her head in for harassing the customers.
  1389. >But by the time you make it, the lady informs you it's too late and she's already gone.
  1390. >"She was just here! She started bucking open doors and the customers were so terrified they collected their clothes and ran out!"
  1391. >In a fit of rage, you shout to the ceiling and snap the broom over your knee.
  1392. "WHICH WAY DID SHE GO!?"
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  1399. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseThu Sep 6 09:26:51 2012No.4343355
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  1401. Quoted by: >>4343367
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  1404.  >>4343338
  1405. >You are Pillow Case
  1406. >And that plan was perfect! Joe left his door open in his haste and he's probably shouting in anger that you're gone right this moment!
  1407. >His office is actually a lot more clean than you thought it would be. Maybe that will make finding your keys easier.
  1408. >The search begins!
  1409. >You don't have much time, and quickly begin to search the room. Starting with his personal locker.
  1410. >Nothing but a few coats and a uniform, but you unhook them and check their pockets before tossing them on the ground in a hurry.
  1411. "Nope."
  1412. >Moving to his desk, you push aside papers that flutter to the floor in your frantic search.
  1413. "Nope."
  1414. >You open and close multiple drawers, digging your hooves deep down them and ripping the contents out in hopes of finding what you're looking for.
  1415. "Nope."
  1416. >Nothing! Nothing at all! You've searched the entire room and you still can't find them!
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  1423. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseThu Sep 6 09:27:30 2012No.4343367
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  1425. Quoted by: >>4343383
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  1428.  >>4343355
  1429. >You sit down on your haunches in the middle of the room and feel yourself starting to tear up.
  1430. >That is, before you notice a shoebox on top of Joe's personal locker
  1431. >You slowly stand up, and make your way over to the box.
  1432. >http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iPZXxlckBSs
  1433. >Opening it reveals a multitude of personal items, such as phones, wallets, mp3's, but most importantly...
  1434. "MY KEYS!"
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  1441. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseThu Sep 6 09:28:51 2012No.4343383
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  1443. Quoted by: >>4343401
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  1446.  >>4343367
  1447. >You've found them! Finally!
  1448. >You didn't even have to have an awkward confrontation!
  1449. >A cough from behind you sends a sharp shiver up your spine and causes your heart to skip a beat.
  1450. >"Just what do you think you're doing!?"
  1451. >Turning around, Joe stands before you. His arms crossed and his face contorted to one of pure anger.
  1452. "I, uh, just wanted my keys. I'll be going now!"
  1453. >"Look at my office! What have you done to it!?"
  1454. >Looking around yourself, you kind of did make a mess of the place. It looks like a twister came through.
  1455. >You swear a single tear rolls down his cheek.
  1456. >"Not only that, but you've harrassed customers for the fourth time this week! I'll have you jailed for this, freak!"
  1457. >He grabs you by the sweater, only for you to try and buck him in the stomach.
  1458. >Only to aim too low and instead crush his testicles...
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  1465. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseThu Sep 6 09:29:30 2012No.4343401
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  1467. Quoted by: >>4343446
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  1470.  >>4343383
  1471. >You bust out of the office, and gallop your way out of the place.
  1472. >On your way out, you take flight and see John sitting on a bench talking on his phone.
  1473. >"Yeah, don't worry. I'll convince them not to."
  1474. >He notices you.
  1475. >"I'll call you back."
  1476. >Hanging up his phone, John stands up, grabs his grocery bags, and turns to you.
  1477. >"There you are. Find your keys?"
  1478. "YEAHIGOTEMLETSGETOUTOFHERE"
  1479. >You grab him under his arms and frantically beat your wings in a vain attempt to fly you and John away as fast as possible.
  1480. >Unfortunately, you don't have that kind of wing power and his feet are just dragging along the ground.
  1481. >Joe exits the building cupping his manhood as humans and other ponies stare in disgust.
  1482. >"Come back here again and I'll beat you senseless!" He shouts as tears flow from his eyes like a waterfall.
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  1489. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseThu Sep 6 09:32:11 2012No.4343446
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  1492. Quoted by: >>4351132
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  1495.  >>4343401
  1496. >Wow, you actually feel kind of bad for what you did today.
  1497. "LALALALALALALALALALA"
  1498. >"Pillow, what are you doing?"
  1499. >Trying to muffle your older brother's cries of pain and despair.
  1500. "I JUST FEEL IN THE MOOD TO SING JOHN LET'S GET TO YOUR CAR."
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  1504. And there we have it.
  1505.  
  1506. I really should learn to space these better. I keep going over the word limit and splitting up my posts.
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  1513. AnonymousThu Sep 6 11:33:31 2012No.4345232
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  1523. Loscil !LoscilARtEThu Sep 6 12:01:30 2012No.4345743
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  1525.  
  1526.  For those who lost the previous thread:
  1527. http://www.mediafire.com/?v4yvb02lsbqrpow
  1528. Plus, the most recent draws made for Pillow Case.
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  1535. AnonymousThu Sep 6 15:23:30 2012No.4348501
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  1538.  Slow thread today
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  1545. AnonymousThu Sep 6 15:31:30 2012No.4348590
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  1547.  
  1548.  going to bump the shit out of this thread today
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  1555. DakanThu Sep 6 18:19:55 2012No.4350074
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  1557. Quoted by: >>4350656
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  1559.  
  1560.  Hello all!
  1561.  
  1562. Update: The Roseluck Chronicles Chapter 1 has a pastebin!
  1563. http://pastebin.com/0j2XsQPn
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  1565. Please enjoy! Also update on Chapter 2 pt.1 still looks like friday evening folks, sorry
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  1572. .  LeStrangeThu Sep 6 19:44:50 2012No.4350656
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  1575. Quoted by: >>4350703
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  1578.  >>4350074
  1579. why do you remind me of good?
  1580. Nachos for you.
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  1587. DakanThu Sep 6 19:54:51 2012No.4350703
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  1590.  >>4350656
  1591. Who do I remind you of?
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  1598. AnonymousThu Sep 6 21:07:30 2012No.4351132
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  1601.  >>4343446
  1602. More of this man. Need to know what happens next.
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  1609. Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems  PancakesThu Sep 6 22:17:32 2012No.4351607
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  1615.  >>4334496
  1616. > We arrive at the scene. The black van is badly smashed.
  1617. > It looks like it ran straight at the utility post without braking.
  1618. > A familiar white unicorn pony with purple hair walks away from it.
  1619. "Rarity!" cries Twilight. "What happened!? Are you alright?"
  1620. > The purple pony jumps out of the vehicle. I quickly follow behind her.
  1621. "Hello, Twilight!" says Rarity. "You arrived just in time to assist me."
  1622. "B-but your hooves! They're all bloody!"
  1623. > The unicorn pony glances at them, as if noticing it for the first time.
  1624. "So they are!" she says calmly. "But not to worry! This isn't anything that a good pedicure can't fix. And besides, this isn't MY blood."
  1625. > She gives us the loveliest smile as she speaks.
  1626. > A few seconds pass as I take in what she just said.
  1627. > Hello, brain? Remind me never to piss off this pony.
  1628. > "Uh, right then. So what do you need our help for?"
  1629. "With those," Rarity says.
  1630. > She points her hoof at the black van.
  1631. > From the windows, I can see two human figures.
  1632. > They aren't moving.
  1633. > "Err, you aren't planning to eat them, are you?"
  1634. "Of course not," she says. "Those two need medical attention."
  1635. "Are you crazy!?" cries Twilight. "They're FOALNAPPERS! We should just leave them and-"
  1636. > Rarity puts a hoof to her mouth, silencing her.
  1637. "We're helping them, Twilight. No excuses."
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  1644. Ponyville Apartments: A Foal And Her Gems  PancakesThu Sep 6 22:18:31 2012No.4351623
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  1646. Quoted by: >>4351628
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  1649.  >>4351607
  1650. > Not sure if I should be impressed at Rarity's principles,
  1651. > Or worried that she is suffering from Stockholm syndrome.
  1652. > But either way, I'm not arguing against a pony who just beat the hell out of two full grown men with her bare hooves.
  1653. > After a few minutes, we manage to drag them out into the street.
  1654. "Good work!" says Rarity. "And the ambulance?"
  1655. "I've already called for one," says our driver. "They'll be here in five minutes."
  1656. "We probably should get going," says Twilight. "We don't want to be here when the authorities arrive."
  1657. > I nod in agreement. We should hurry back and-
  1658. "Ugh..."
  1659. > One of the kidnappers slowly regains consciousness.
  1660. > A big but dull-looking fellow. His eyes widen when he sees Rarity.
  1661. "OH MY GOD! I-IT'S THAT CRAZY LADY!"
  1662. > He cowers fearfully. The unicorn pony turns to him.
  1663. "And you! Do you promise never to do that again?" she asks.
  1664. "O-of course! Just please don't hurt me!"
  1665. > Rarity glares at him for a moment, then nods.
  1666. "Very good, then. Now be a good human and do only good human things from now on, alright?"
  1667. "Uh, sure. R-right."
  1668. > And with that, we start heading back to the cab.
  1669. "Wait!"
  1670. > The other kidnapper is awake now. He stares at Rarity, confused.
  1671. "Is that it?" he says. "What's the catch, lady? Why did you help us?"
  1672. > The unicorn pony turns around and smiles.
  1673. "Because this is a more beautiful way of doing things, don't you think?"
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  1683. Quoted by: >>4351785 >>4377121
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  1685.  
  1686.  >>4351623
  1687. "Dear Princess Celestia,"
  1688. "Today, I learned that humans and ponies value things very differently,"
  1689. "And we can't just assume that our way of looking at things is the only way."
  1690. "We need to try to understand the human point of view,"
  1691. "And communicate in actions that which is often misunderstood in words."
  1692. "- Your Loyal Subject, Rarity"
  1693.  
  1694. > Rarity lowers her quill for a moment. Someone is knocking at her door.
  1695. "Oh, hello, Twilight. Is dinner ready?"
  1696. "More or less," says the purple pony. "Rainbow Dash made something I can't recognize. Applejack says it's edible, though."
  1697. "I do hope so, darling."
  1698. "And Rarity? Have you gotten rid of those gems?"
  1699. "Of course, I have. And I found the perfect way to do so."
  1700. > She closes the door as she follows after Twilight.
  1701.  
  1702. > In Rarity's room, the television is still on.
  1703. > The local newscaster discusses today's big events.
  1704. "Glad to hear that no one died in that accident, Johnny! And now for tonight's shocking news!"
  1705. "We just learned that the city orphanage has received a HUGE donation from an anonymous donor."
  1706. "But that's not all! The donation was in the form of precious gems!"
  1707. "We haven't yet received word of their exact value, but this will likely cover the cost of the new buildings and facilities that the kids need."
  1708. "Is this the start of a new trend of philanthropy and giving?"
  1709. "Who knows? Only time will tell. Now, back to you, Johnny!"
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  1716. PancakesThu Sep 6 22:46:50 2012No.4351785
  1717.  
  1718. Quoted by: >>4352017 >>4356067
  1719.  
  1720.  
  1721.  >>4351628
  1722. And this ends Chapter 2. Still deciding between Fluttershy or Rainbow Dash for the next main heroine.
  1723.  
  1724. Let me know what you think so far.
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  1731. AnonymousThu Sep 6 23:29:54 2012No.4352017
  1732.  
  1733. Quoted by: >>4361112
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  1736.  >>4351785
  1737. So far so good.
  1738. >Rarity beating the shit out of criminals
  1739. FUCK YES
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  1746. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYFri Sep 7 00:34:10 2012No.4352403
  1747.  
  1748. Quoted by: >>4352938
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  1751.  fluttershy please ! would be fun to read what she's going to do in a zoo or kindergarten xD
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  1758. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYFri Sep 7 01:53:30 2012No.4352938
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  1760. Quoted by: >>4354948 >>4361112
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  1762.  
  1763.  >>4352403
  1764. or in a zoo, meeting a kindergarden group !!!
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  1771. AnonymousFri Sep 7 05:26:50 2012No.4354948
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  1775. >>4352938
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  1782. AnonymousFri Sep 7 06:09:53 2012No.4355563
  1783.  
  1784. Quoted by: >>4355629
  1785.  
  1786.  
  1787.  Just let me unleash this turd before i change my mind for the 100th time
  1788.  
  1789. World greeted me with cacophony of colors and loud sound of portal closing behind me.
  1790. Tall, ugly buildings were sorrounding me, all covered in flashing lights and weird drawings. Awful stench attacking my nostrils, coming from nearby pile of rubbish.
  1791. >"I thought this was supposed to be hi-tech world"
  1792. It appears i landed in a back alley of sorts, cluttered by metal boxes and strange four-wheeled contraptions.
  1793. >"Nevermind that, there will be plenty of time for sightseeing later. First thigs first - status. Limbs?"
  1794. I stretched my legs and tensed muscles.
  1795. >"Still on my hooves, all four of them. Other parts seem to be in place as well. Horn?"
  1796. Trash cans and walls began to reflect a faint blue glow.
  1797. >"Operational. Armour?"
  1798. I tried pulling my breastplates and straps.
  1799. >"Intact. Ready to deploy."
  1800. I chuckled to myself, reminiscencing sergeant Break Tooth's routine.
  1801. >"I have yet to meet someone who talks like that. Some stuff really doesn't leave the basic."
  1802. My train of tought was suddenly stopped. I could hear someone talking. In equestrian at that!
  1803. >"Other agents? Shooting Star is that you? Wait a minute..."
  1804. "Yeah, and they make you pay for it! What the hell is- "
  1805. A tall, bipedal creature was looking straight at me, wide eyes and mouth agape. It dropped a small black box it was talking to. Before it reached the ground i realized my mistake.
  1806. >"Camouflage."
  1807. >Shit!
  1808. I decided to stage a tactical withdrawal.
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  1815. AnonymousFri Sep 7 06:13:11 2012No.4355629
  1816.  
  1817. Quoted by: >>4355661
  1818.  
  1819.  
  1820.  >>4355563
  1821. >"Run run run! There's gotta be some cover here!"
  1822. I could hear the creature yelling something, it tried to follow me.
  1823. >"Wait! Come back! What are you!?"
  1824. >"Celestia dammit where are carton boxes when you need them?"
  1825. I noticed the wheeled metal things had actual keyholes in them. I tried opening them.
  1826. >"Come on, come on, work you piece of-"
  1827. Having all pins magically pushed in, the mechanism clicked and door stood wide open. I hopped in and shut it behind me, hiding between the seats.
  1828. >"Where are you? I don't want to hurt you, come out!
  1829. >"Go away you ape."
  1830. Despite my wishes i could still hear it though, rummagin around the place.
  1831. >"Just give up already"
  1832. It stops just outside of my metal hideout, oblivious to my presence. I risked a quick glance at it.
  1833. >"Damn, you're a stubborn one. What are you anyway?"
  1834. It sat on some box, combing it's long hair and looking around.
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  1841. AnonymousFri Sep 7 06:16:51 2012No.4355661
  1842.  
  1843.  
  1844.  >>4355629
  1845. >"Smooth skin, no scales, almost no fur. Sweet scent and that shade of pink on cheeks...a female. Female chasing after me, hah. Well at least she's a mammal."
  1846. Woman took off a piece of clothing, warmed up after the chase.
  1847. >"Correction, she's definitely a mammal. Those are...huge. Almost impractical. I could just bury my face in them..."
  1848. She turned around, forcing me to dive between seats again. However it seemed that she finally gave up, probably considering me a product of her imagination.
  1849. I leaned out of my cover to see her walking away. My eyes rested on her firm legs and nice, round flank, tightly packed inside those black pants, moving hypnotically.
  1850. >"Just look at it go...this may be the best world yet..."
  1851. >"What the hay am i even thinking about. I should be glad i managed to hide. Orders were clear - no engagement with locals unless necessary."
  1852. >"How could I have forgotten about my Standard Issue Disguise spell? It will take days to combine something from scratch."
  1853. >"Let's just focus on finding someplace safe."
  1854. I noticed black metal railing coming out of the brick wall. The ladder was no use for a pony. It required some old school hard way tweaking. With magic.
  1855. >"Oh you're coming down alright! Yeah, just a little bit further-"
  1856. Covered in blue light, ladder finally fell out of it's hinges, landing on metal carriage i was hiding in, with loud clang. I could use it to climb on top, before another close encounter.
  1857. >"I will admit it, this is the one moment i really wish i had wings instead of that horn. Now, onto the main objective..."
  1858. The Sun came out from behind the clouds, with the promise of transforming cold morning into hot day. There i was sitting on rooftop, considering my next move.
  1859. >"Gotta love them offworld assignments"
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  1866. ohmygoshohmygosh  LeStrangeFri Sep 7 06:48:10 2012No.4356067
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  1869. Quoted by: >>4361112
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  1871.  
  1872.  >>4351785
  1873. you are the main reason why i continue to follow this thread.
  1874. I come from school and hope for a new part of the story and it just... it makes my day.
  1875. Onward to awesomeness Pancakes!!!
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  1882. AnonymousFri Sep 7 10:33:11 2012No.4359490
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  1885.  Bump.
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  1892. PancakesFri Sep 7 12:16:30 2012No.4361112
  1893.  
  1894.  
  1895.  >>4352017
  1896. >>4356067
  1897. That's good to hear! I was afraid that this wasn't going to translate well into a story, since the concept was originally meant for a management / raising sim. Each day, the player would manage the activities for the ponies to help them integrate themselves with human society. Events would be available to influence their outlook, both good and bad. And this of course includes how much trust and affection they have for the player, and whether they would stay on Earth or return to Equestria at the end of the game.
  1898.  
  1899. >>4352938
  1900. This idea sounds fun. Will see if I can come up with something workable.
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  1907. DakanFri Sep 7 18:00:50 2012No.4365534
  1908.  
  1909.  
  1910.  Hello all, just wanted to make a quick update. I just got home from work, I'm currently working on roseluck chronicles ch 2 right now. Hope to have it done "soon"
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  1917. AnonymousFri Sep 7 21:33:10 2012No.4366576
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  1927. AnonymousSat Sep 8 00:50:51 2012No.4367741
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  1930.  poni
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  1937. AnonymousSat Sep 8 05:30:52 2012No.4369820
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  1947. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYSat Sep 8 09:50:51 2012No.4373134
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  1951. cute motivation cosplayer bump !
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  1958. PonyGone !RAGT.LOVE.Sat Sep 8 10:33:31 2012No.4373768
  1959.  
  1960. Quoted by: >>4373992 >>4375349
  1961.  
  1962.  
  1963.  So... I can use any one of the ponies? Even ScrewBall
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  1970. Mortimer MouseSat Sep 8 10:49:31 2012No.4373992  
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  1974. >>4373768
  1975. Yes.
  1976.  
  1977. Especially Screwball
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  1984. AnonymousSat Sep 8 12:18:31 2012No.4375349
  1985.  
  1986.  
  1987.  >>4373768
  1988. Screwball would be awesome. Just imagine the awkward moments.
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  1995. AnonymousSat Sep 8 12:42:52 2012No.4375714
  1996.  
  1997. Quoted by: >>4375757 >>4375758 >>4375760
  1998.  
  1999.  
  2000.  So, this works like AiE, but with Ponies on Earth?
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  2007. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYSat Sep 8 12:45:11 2012No.4375757
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  2009.  
  2010.  >>4375714
  2011. yes
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  2018. AnonymousSat Sep 8 12:45:11 2012No.4375758
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  2020.  
  2021.  >>4375714
  2022. Correctomundo.
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  2029. AnonymousSat Sep 8 12:46:11 2012No.4375760
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  2032.  >>4375714
  2033. That's right.
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  2040. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesSat Sep 8 14:13:12 2012No.4377121
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  2042.  
  2043. Quoted by: >>4377165
  2044.  
  2045.  
  2046.  >>4351628
  2047. > "Are you alright?"
  2048. "..."
  2049. > The yellow pegasus pony shakes her head.
  2050. > She seems a little bit nervous.
  2051. > More than usual, anyway.
  2052. > Of the pony residents, she is quietest one.
  2053. > "Here," I say as I hold out my hand.
  2054. "... okay," she whispers.
  2055. > I can feel her hoof shaking, but she seems to calm down a bit.
  2056. > From our first meeting, I learned that Fluttershy is afraid of humans.
  2057. > Probably because she thinks we are all carnivorous monsters.
  2058. > Truthfully, she isn't entirely incorrect.
  2059. > I mean, I understand that a vegetarian diet is actually very healthy.
  2060. > But this isn't something every human is used to.
  2061. > Even I have been secretly sneaking out at night for a burger or steak.
  2062. "Umm, excuse me?"
  2063. > "Yes, Fluttershy?"
  2064. "D-do you mind if I get a little closer to you?"
  2065. > "Uh, sure. I guess?"
  2066. "Oh, thank you..."
  2067. > We continue walking together, her hoof linked around my arm.
  2068. > I still don't understand why she is fine around me, though.
  2069. > But more than that, there is something that worries me.
  2070. > I feel a little uncomfortable around her.
  2071. > Especially when we're alone together.
  2072. > And I can't explain it.
  2073. "..."
  2074. > Well, it's probably just my imagination.
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  2081. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesSat Sep 8 14:16:12 2012No.4377165
  2082.  
  2083. Quoted by: >>4377376 >>4377608
  2084.  
  2085.  
  2086.  >>4377121
  2087. > I feel a gentle tug on my shirt.
  2088. > "Hmm? Something on your mind?"
  2089. "Well," says Fluttershy. "I just wanted to apologize."
  2090. > "Apologize? For what?"
  2091. "It must be troubling for you to accompany me outside like this."
  2092. > She lowers her head a bit.
  2093. "I mean, I know I asked you to, but it was really thoughtless of me. Applejack already agreed to come, and you probably have better things to do back home."
  2094. > I shake my head and pat her lightly on the head.
  2095. > I'd be an idiot not to come along with these ponies.
  2096. > Especially after what happened the other day with Rarity.
  2097. > I had better watch out for them more closely until they get a better handle of things here on Earth.
  2098. > "Don't worry about it. Let's just say that I did it for my own interests as well."
  2099. "Your own interests?" repeats Fluttershy. "Oh! Oh, my! B-but..."
  2100. > She turns away and blushes.
  2101. > I can't make out what she is mutters.
  2102. > "Eh? What is it?"
  2103. "N-nothing! I mean, you don't need to worry about it, right now."
  2104. > "I see."
  2105. > I wait a bit, but she doesn't say anything else.
  2106. > She does seem a little bit happier, though.
  2107. > Did I miss something here?
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  2114. AnonymousSat Sep 8 14:30:51 2012No.4377376
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  2118. >>4377165
  2119. >pancakes updates
  2120. pic related
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  2127. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesSat Sep 8 14:49:31 2012No.4377608
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  2130. Quoted by: >>4377639 >>4456837
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  2132.  
  2133.  >>4377165
  2134. > A hoof suddenly slams on my back. Hard.
  2135. > I cringe a bit as I turn around.
  2136. > Applejack is all smiles.
  2137. "Sorry for makin' y'all wait," she says. "I might've gotten a teeny bit distracted from all the different plants in this here garden show."
  2138. > "Yeah, I can see that."
  2139. > Her saddlebag is now full to the brim. It looks fairly heavy.
  2140. "When I mentioned that I ran a farm back home, they started sharing all sorts of stories! Some of 'em even let me buy their seeds so I can try growing 'em!"
  2141. "Oh, but Applejack," says Fluttershy. "Don't you think that there isn't enough space back in the apartment building?"
  2142. "It'll be fine, sugarcube. I'm sending most of these back to Equestria for the rest of the Apple family."
  2143. > "Send them to Equestria? But, how?"
  2144. "By mail, of course!"
  2145. > By mail? Like how that wall-eyed pegasus sent me that letter?
  2146. > Now that I think about it, how do these ponies move things between the two worlds, anyway?
  2147. > They act as if they are in constant communication with Equestria.
  2148. > Though I have never actually seen how they do it.
  2149. > Maybe I should ask Twilight when we get back.
  2150. "Hey, you alright, sugarcube?" asks Applejack. "You got quiet all of a sudden."
  2151. > "Ah, sorry about that. Just lost in thought."
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  2158. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesSat Sep 8 14:51:33 2012No.4377639
  2159.  
  2160. Quoted by: >>4456837 >>4485870
  2161.  
  2162.  
  2163.  >>4377608
  2164. "So, where'd y'all want to go to next?" asks Applejack.
  2165. > "I don't have any particular preference. How about you, Fluttershy?"
  2166. "Oh, me?" says Fluttershy. "Well, it would be nice to visit a place with lots of animals... or children. That is, if you two don't mind."
  2167. "Sounds great! I'd like to see the animals on Earth, myself. Heard that they look mighty different from ours back home."
  2168. > "Hmm, then I guess the best place would be the City Zoo."
  2169. > Fluttershy forms the biggest smile on her lips.
  2170. > She looks positively delighted.
  2171. "That sounds, wonderful!" she says. "What are we waiting for?"
  2172. > The yellow pegasus pulls my arm excitedly.
  2173. > Her wings brush at my side. They flap slightly.
  2174. > So soft. I shudder a bit from the feeling.
  2175. "Hold up, girl!" says Applejack. "Now don't get yourself too excited, y'hear?"
  2176. > The orange pony pulls Fluttershy away from me.
  2177. > She lowers her voice to a whisper.
  2178. "Remember what Twilight said - no flying! We need to keep ourselves secret from the humans. So try to relax, alright?"
  2179. "S-sorry about that," says Fluttershy. "I'll be on my best behavior."
  2180. > I sure hope so.
  2181. > We quickly head for the zoo.
  2182. > Fluttershy squeaks all the way.
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  2189. AnonymousSat Sep 8 14:52:11 2012No.4377655
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  2202. Ken D. Blackwell !PAGANm/9UkSat Sep 8 14:56:11 2012No.4377698
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  2213. Roseluck Chronicles Ch2: Flowers in the city, pt1: One week later  DakanSat Sep 8 21:04:12 2012No.4380619
  2214.  
  2215. Quoted by: >>4380630
  2216.  
  2217.  
  2218.  Hello all, sorry that this is kinda late.
  2219. I take that back, really late.
  2220. Something came up IRL.
  2221. So here it is the Next installment of the Roseluck Chronicles!
  2222.  
  2223. >One week
  2224. >One week since everything changed.
  2225. >Well not everything.
  2226. >Surprising little has changed since that night.
  2227. >The earth still turns the sun and the moon still rise
  2228. >Pegasi fly through the sky and unicorns perform magic
  2229. >Ponies roam the streets throughout the day.
  2230. >Not much has changed with the world at all.
  2231. >Something has changed with you though.
  2232. >You still go to work and school throughout the week.
  2233. >But there is something different.
  2234. >You feel happier.
  2235. >You really can’t explain it though.
  2236. >You feel like it’s less of a chore going to classes in the morning
  2237. >Your work in the afternoon is still tedious, but it feels less so.
  2238. >Maybe it’s the magic all around you now.
  2239. >It does make the world a more interesting place to live in.
  2240. >Maybe it’s because you’re finally getting used to the idea of the magic around you.
  2241. >Or maybe, just maybe…
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  2248. Roseluck Chronicles 2:1  AnonymousSat Sep 8 21:05:11 2012No.4380630
  2249.  
  2250. Quoted by: >>4380632 >>4380701
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  2252.  
  2253.  >>4380619
  2254. >The cold wind of a September night hits you as you leave work.
  2255. >It snaps you back to reality.
  2256. >You shiver and pull your jacket tighter around you.
  2257. >You start making your way back to your apartment
  2258. >And back to Rose.
  2259. >Rose…
  2260. >She is always happy to see you come back.
  2261. >Even though you are usually tired from a long day of classes and work.
  2262. > You always make some time to talk to her about how you day was
  2263. >She then talks about news about her pony friends.
  2264. >Maybe she is the reason…
  2265. >Only partially…
  2266. >It’s nice to go home and look forward to something.
  2267. >The conversation is always nice and it gives you a nice way to wind down from the day.
  2268. >You quicken your pace and begin to race your way home.
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  2275. Roseluck Chronicles 2:1  AnonymousSat Sep 8 21:06:52 2012No.4380632
  2276.  
  2277. Quoted by: >>4380649 >>4380701
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  2279.  
  2280.  >>4380630
  2281. >You make your way up the stair to your apartment.
  2282. >As you approach your door you can hear the sound of voices coming from inside
  2283. >Must be the news you reassure yourself.
  2284. >As you open the door you see rose sitting on the couch, watching the news
  2285. >Like she always is when you make it home.
  2286. >Upon the door open she looks up and smiles at you.
  2287. “Hello, Anon! How was your day?”
  2288. >You smile back, hanging your jacket up on the coat hanger.
  2289. >“It was fine, how was yours?”
  2290. “It was good, what’s for dinner tonight?”
  2291. >You shrug, you haven’t really thought about dinner.
  2292. >”How do you like the sound of spaghetti?”
  2293. “Sounds good to me.”
  2294. >With that you start on dinner
  2295. >It isn’t long before the noodles are boiled and the sauce is ready
  2296. >You bring to plates of spaghetti to the living room and sit down next to Rose on the couch
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  2303. Roseluck Chronicles 2:1  AnonymousSat Sep 8 21:09:32 2012No.4380649
  2304.  
  2305. Quoted by: >>4380653 >>4380701
  2306.  
  2307.  
  2308.  >>4380632
  2309. >You settle in next to Rose and prepare to eat
  2310. >Rose smiles at you.
  2311. “So tell me about your day…”
  2312. >You smile and start talking about your morning at school
  2313. >She listens quietly and slowly eats her spaghetti.
  2314. >you launch into a long explanation about what you learned today
  2315. >You don’t know if she understands what you are talking about.
  2316. >But she never says anything and is happy to listen to you talk.
  2317. >You often wonder if she likes to hear about your schooling or if it’s you just talking
  2318. >You finish off with how your afternoon was at work
  2319. >Although there is very little you seem to be able to talk to her about from work
  2320. >Its always the same thing over and over again after all.
  2321. >But, she doesn’t mind.
  2322. >You finish the story about your day and smile back at her.
  2323. >”So anything new in pony society today”
  2324. >She frowns a bit at the question.
  2325. >”Is there something wrong?”
  2326. “They still haven’t found the princesses, or any news about how we got here.”
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  2333. Roseluck Chronicles 2:1  AnonymousSat Sep 8 21:10:52 2012No.4380653
  2334.  
  2335. Quoted by: >>4380656 >>4380701
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  2337.  
  2338.  >>4380649
  2339. >You also frown at this.
  2340. >Right their princesses, Luna and Celestia. The ones who controlled their sun and moon
  2341. >No one has been able to find them in the past week.
  2342. >It has all the ponies worrying.
  2343. >Some even wonder if they might be still in Equestria
  2344. >And as far as the event that brought the ponies here.
  2345. >Well, an even bigger mystery.
  2346. >None of the unicorns have ever heard of a spell that would bring them to another world
  2347. >Although some good news has come out of this.
  2348. >As far as everyone can tell, all of the other ponies have been accounted for
  2349. >Save the princesses.
  2350. >You sigh as you remember the events from the past week
  2351. >”How is everyp0ny doing other than that though?”
  2352. >Everyp0ny, still need to get used to that.
  2353. “Everyp0ny seems to be fine. They are adjusting to your world.”
  2354. “There are a lot of differences, like the weather.”
  2355. >”Oh yeah, you mentioned that the pegasi control the weather in Equestria.”
  2356. >She nods
  2357. “Since weather happens automatically happens here, they are having hard time adjusting to the randomness.”
  2358. “It appears that the pegasi can still move clouds and stuff though.”
  2359. >”It seems like the unicorns’ magic is unaffected though.”
  2360. >She nods again
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  2367. Roseluck Chronicles 2:1  AnonymousSat Sep 8 21:11:32 2012No.4380656
  2368.  
  2369. Quoted by: >>4380689 >>4380701
  2370.  
  2371.  
  2372.  >>4380653
  2373. >By now both of you have finished you spaghetti
  2374. >You get up and bring the plate over to the sink
  2375. >You yawn as you place the plates down
  2376. >It’s getting late
  2377. >You turn to Rose who has been watching you since you got up
  2378. >”It’s getting late rose, aren’t you tired”
  2379. >At the mention of this she yawns herself
  2380. >She smiles and nods
  2381. “Anon? Can I ask you something?”
  2382. >”Sure rose what is it?”
  2383. “I was wondering if tomorrow we could go out and see the city…”
  2384. >You think back, has she even left the apartment since we went to the park…
  2385. >Probably not, maybe a day out on the city would do her some good.
  2386. >See the sights and sounds,
  2387. >Maybe experience our world first hand.
  2388. >You smile at Rose
  2389. >”That sounds like a great idea for tomorrow”
  2390. >”As a matter of fact, I’ll get up early and get everything going.”
  2391. >”We’ll make a whole day of it”
  2392. >She smiles back at you and slowly lays down on the couch.
  2393. “Thank you anon, goodnight.”
  2394. >”Goodnight rose…”
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  2401. Blender- !YZfhywTDsoSat Sep 8 21:15:31 2012No.4380680
  2402.  
  2403. Quoted by: >>4380692
  2404.  
  2405.  
  2406.  >>4316293
  2407. Where do you keep parts 1 - 3?
  2408. I'd like to have a read of them
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  2415. DakanSat Sep 8 21:16:51 2012No.4380689
  2416.  
  2417.  
  2418.  >>4380656
  2419. Ok end of Chapter 2 Part 1
  2420.  
  2421. Pastebin link for Chapter 2
  2422. http://pastebin.com/GGPmyxDw
  2423.  
  2424. I really want to have part 2 & 3 sometime tommorow. Hopefully I will. Enjoy part one, and as always...
  2425.  
  2426. Constructive Criticism is appreciated
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  2433. AnonymousSat Sep 8 21:17:12 2012No.4380692
  2434.  
  2435. Quoted by: >>4380701
  2436.  
  2437.  
  2438.  >>4380680
  2439. Here is the complete chapter 1
  2440.  
  2441. http://pastebin.com/0j2XsQPn
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  2448. DakanSat Sep 8 21:19:11 2012No.4380701
  2449.  
  2450. Quoted by: >>4380892
  2451.  
  2452.  
  2453.  >>4380692
  2454. >>4380656
  2455. >>4380653
  2456. >>4380632
  2457. >>4380649
  2458. >>4380630
  2459. On a side note...
  2460.  
  2461. Why does it keep clearing my name field!
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  2467.  
  2468. Blender- !YZfhywTDsoSat Sep 8 21:52:51 2012No.4380892
  2469.  
  2470. Quoted by: >>4380937
  2471.  
  2472.  
  2473.  >>4380701
  2474. No idea.
  2475.  
  2476. Storywise: I liked it for the most part, some of the pacing was a little off and the suggested feelings Anon had for Rose were a little too much too soon (maybe that was just me).
  2477. And grammar / spelling could be improved also.
  2478. But for the most part, I liked it. A nice change up to the AiE I usually read / write.
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  2485. DakanSat Sep 8 22:02:51 2012No.4380937
  2486.  
  2487.  
  2488.  >>4380892
  2489. I realized this about the pacing And the feeling. Since the I have tried to back off on that part. I feel like that early slip up is going to keep haunting me. As for the grammar, I'm trying to improve as I go. Honestly this is the first story I have ever written. So it's kind of an experiment. Thanks for your interest in the story.
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  2496. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYSun Sep 9 00:46:31 2012No.4382195
  2497.  
  2498. Quoted by: >>4383194
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  2500.  
  2501.  one week just TV ? is the programm that good in the states ?
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  2508. DakanSun Sep 9 02:39:58 2012No.4383194
  2509.  
  2510. Quoted by: >>4383546
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  2512.  
  2513.  >>4382195
  2514. As far as anon knows, and what they have talked about. She has been watching the News. Or it could be from a disease called Lack-of-a-plot-device-itis. I seem to suffer from that a lot. Will add to my notes of things I need to expand upon.
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  2521. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYSun Sep 9 03:16:52 2012No.4383546
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  2523. Quoted by: >>4387531
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  2525.  
  2526.  >>4383194
  2527. haha at least she learned how bad humans are...
  2528. guess books are a good plot device too xD
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  2535. AnonymousSun Sep 9 07:00:32 2012No.4386626
  2536.  
  2537.  
  2538.  Bamp
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  2545. DakanSun Sep 9 08:23:32 2012No.4387531
  2546.  
  2547. Quoted by: >>4387632
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  2549.  
  2550.  >>4383546
  2551. Book?! who would use a crazy idea like books? that is the most absurd thing i've ever heard. Honestly... books...
  2552.  
  2553. Update:working on part 2
  2554.  
  2555. also bump
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  2562. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYSun Sep 9 08:30:51 2012No.4387632
  2563.  
  2564.  
  2565.  >>4387531
  2566. ask Twilight Sparkel about books xD
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  2573. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt2:A Musical Morning  DakanSun Sep 9 09:58:52 2012No.4388779
  2574.  
  2575. Quoted by: >>4388793
  2576.  
  2577.  
  2578.  >You awake bright and early the next morning.
  2579. >You quickly dress and stroll into the kitchen.
  2580. >As you do you take a quick glance over at the couch where Rose
  2581. >Still asleep
  2582. >You shrug, might as well start on breakfast.
  2583. >You open up a few cabinets and retrieve the pancake mix.
  2584. >Pancakes, always a good way to start off a Saturday morning.
  2585. >It isn’t long before you’re flipping pancakes over a hot skillet.
  2586. >Above the hissing of the skillet you can hear Rose beginning to stir
  2587. >”Good Morning Rose, how many pancakes would you like?”
  2588. >She blinks a few times and yawns.
  2589. “Good morning Anon, just three please.”
  2590. >You hear her get up and trot into the bathroom
  2591. >The sound of running water makes you realize something.
  2592. >You have never heard her use the shower before.
  2593. >As a matter of fact, this was the first time you have ever seen her enter the bathroom
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  2600. Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt2:A Musical Morning  DakanSun Sep 9 09:59:12 2012No.4388793
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  2602. Quoted by: >>4388811
  2603.  
  2604.  
  2605.  >>4388779
  2606. >Your almost too caught up in your thoughts to catch the next sound that comes from the bathroom
  2607. >Humming
  2608. >No a little more than humming, singing a melody.
  2609. >No definite words, but singing nonetheless.
  2610. >It is this that brings an all too sudden realization to you.
  2611. >You know next to nothing about the mare that is living with you.
  2612. >You know about her other pony friends; you know a little about their society, you even know a few names of their important people.
  2613. >But you know next to nothing about Rose.
  2614. >You resolve to change that today
  2615. >After all, with the way things look, you two might be stuck together for a while.
  2616. >You really should get to know her.
  2617. >You finish up the last of the pancakes and put them over on the living room table
  2618. >You wait a few minutes for Rose to finish while enjoying the music summing from the shower.
  2619. >Eventually the singing and the water stops and you can hear in the process of drying off.
  2620. >She slowly walks out of the bathroom slightly damp from a shower and joins you on the couch
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  2627. Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt2:A Musical Morning  DakanSun Sep 9 10:01:33 2012No.4388811
  2628.  
  2629. Quoted by: >>4388829
  2630.  
  2631.  
  2632.  >>4388793
  2633. >As she sits down next to you, you are once again greeted with a strong smell of roses
  2634. >How does she always smell like roses…?
  2635. >The thought casually slips from you mind
  2636. >You smile at her, “So, you have a beautiful singing voice.”
  2637. >She blushes a bit and looks embarrassed
  2638. “I didn’t think you would hear it, I usually just sing to my flowers back at home…”
  2639. >She looks down at the pancakes, and smiles.
  2640. “The pancakes look delicious.”
  2641. >”Thank you; they are a secret family recipe.”
  2642. “Oh? What’s so secret about them?”
  2643. >”If I told you that, it wouldn’t be a secret anymore…”
  2644. >She laughs at this.
  2645. >”I have never seen you take a shower before.”
  2646. >That was a stupid comment to make
  2647. >She coughs slightly on the pancake she had in her mouth.
  2648. >The look that she gives is one of worry.
  2649. “I’m sorry, should I have not done that..?”
  2650. >”No it’s perfectly fine, I’m actually thankful, I wouldn’t want a smelly pony running around my apartment.”
  2651. >You chuckle at this, but she seems less than amused
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  2658. Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt2:A Musical Morning  DakanSun Sep 9 10:02:12 2012No.4388829
  2659.  
  2660. Quoted by: >>4388839
  2661.  
  2662.  
  2663.  >>4388811
  2664. >Good one knuckle head now try and save it.
  2665. >”I just didn’t know if you ponies used showers or not…”
  2666. >”I guess there is a lot I don’t know about you…”
  2667. >She nods.
  2668. “There is a lot that we don’t know about each other.”
  2669. >”I guess you’re right. But, anyways I want to let you know that you shouldn’t be embarrassed about taking a shower or making yourself something to eat. Mi casa es su casa.”
  2670. >She tilts her head at this.
  2671. “What does that mean?”
  2672. >Mental note, there is no Spanish language equivalent for ponies.
  2673. >”It means that ‘my house is your house.’ Basically, you should feel completely at home while you’re staying with me.”
  2674. >She smiles broadly at this.
  2675. “Thank you so much, Anon.”
  2676. >She immediately springs on you with a hug.
  2677. >You are overcome by the smell of damp fur and roses.
  2678. >You hug her back, running your fingers through her silky mane again.
  2679. >”It really is not trouble at all. I am glad to help.”
  2680. >She releases her hug and goes back to eating her pancakes.
  2681. >You both quickly finish up your breakfast and start getting ready for you day out in town.
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  2688. Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt2:A Musical Morning  DakanSun Sep 9 10:02:51 2012No.4388839
  2689.  
  2690. Quoted by: >>4388849
  2691.  
  2692.  
  2693.  >>4388829
  2694. >”So Rose, anything in particular that you want to do while we are out today?”
  2695. >She brings her hoof up and scratches her head.
  2696. “Well, I was hoping we could find somewhere with lots of flowers. I haven’t seen any since I’ve gotten here.”
  2697. >You nod, that’s right she loves flower.
  2698. >You make a quick mental note of that fact.
  2699. >”Anything else?”
  2700. “Well, since it does seem like I’m going to be here for a while, I was wondering if we could go shopping for some boots, and warm clothes. The News has been talking about how winter is coming and how cold it’s going to be.”
  2701. >Chicago winters get pretty chilly, you remind yourself
  2702. >”I don’t know if we will be able to find clothes that can fit you. I’m sure that we can make a good try to find some though.”
  2703. “There is also one other things I would like to do.”
  2704. >”What that…?
  2705. “I would like it if we could go see, what is it called, a movie.”
  2706. >You smile. You haven’t been to a movie in a long time.
  2707. >”Sure, a movie actually sounds great today.”
  2708. >”Well, let’s get a move on; looks like we have a long day ahead of us.
  2709. >You both make your way out of the apartment complex and down into the city streets of Chicago.
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  2716. DakanSun Sep 9 10:04:51 2012No.4388849
  2717.  
  2718. Quoted by: >>4389220
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  2720.  
  2721.  >>4388839
  2722. Ok end of Ch2 Pt2
  2723. I liked the way this turned out. I can't wait to start on the next part.
  2724.  
  2725. Part 3 this afternoon.
  2726.  
  2727. Constructive Criticism alway appreciated
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  2734. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYSun Sep 9 10:27:11 2012No.4389220
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  2736. Quoted by: >>4389549
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  2738.  
  2739.  >>4388849
  2740. nice hehe
  2741. what movie are they going to watch ?
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  2748. AnonymousSun Sep 9 10:30:51 2012No.4389278
  2749. File: 269 KB, 300x225, thumbs up batman.gif [View same] [google] [Report]
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  2751. Quoted by: >>4389541
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  2753.  
  2754.  Dark Knight Rises
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  2761. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYSun Sep 9 10:45:11 2012No.4389541
  2762.  
  2763. Quoted by: >>4426529
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  2765.  
  2766.  >>4389278
  2767. that's not even funny ... you know ... ah maybe on 4chan it was funny ...
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  2774. DakanSun Sep 9 10:46:52 2012No.4389549
  2775.  
  2776. Quoted by: >>4393960
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  2778.  
  2779.  >>4389220
  2780. I'll drop a hint. It's going to be horribly punny. Yet it sets up a terribly romantic moment a lot farther down the road.
  2781.  
  2782. Captcha: tiancle giving
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  2789. AnonymousSun Sep 9 12:45:11 2012No.4391480
  2790.  
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  2792.  Nightly bump.
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  2799. AnonymousSun Sep 9 13:15:11 2012No.4391979
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  2802. Quoted by: >>4393953
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  2804.  
  2805.  bumpety for The Roseluck Chronicles. Stim-ply amazing.
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  2812. AnonymousSun Sep 9 17:14:18 2012No.4393953
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  2814. Quoted by: >>4393960
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  2816.  
  2817.  >>4391979
  2818. That sounds like fun. Also 4 hour bump.
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  2825. AnonymousSun Sep 9 17:14:38 2012No.4393960
  2826.  
  2827.  
  2828.  >>4393953
  2829. Meant for
  2830. >>4389549
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  2837. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2. Pt3:A day in the City  DakanSun Sep 9 22:32:00 2012No.4396350
  2838.  
  2839. Quoted by: >>4396353
  2840.  
  2841.  
  2842.  Origianlly I wanted to have this up sooner. But IRL decided to rear its ugly head... but here it is, the longest part up to date of the Roseluck Chronicles! Enjoy!
  2843.  
  2844. >You and Rose step out into the morning streets of Chicago.
  2845. >And you are both immediately met by the chilly morning breeze
  2846. >Rose shudders against the chill and looks up at you.
  2847. >”Right first order of business, some warm clothes.”
  2848. >You both set off down the street toward the Mag Mile.
  2849. >Even at this semi early hour the streets are just starting to fill with people and ponies
  2850. >You notice that most of them aren’t that dissimilar than you.
  2851. >Usually a group of maybe two or three.
  2852. >Almost all of the groups have at least one pony with them.
  2853. >You occasionally see a lone pony walking along.
  2854. >Or you’ll hear the flutter of feathers above and see a pair of pegasi pass over.
  2855. >But most are exactly like you.
  2856. >It brings relief to you that you’re not the only one escorting around a pony.
  2857. >You notice that Rose is once again at awe with the city.
  2858. >You smile at the mare walking besides you.
  2859. >”If you have any questions, please ask…”
  2860. >Rose looks back up at you
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  2867. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2. Pt3:A day in the City  DakanSun Sep 9 22:33:39 2012No.4396353
  2868.  
  2869. Quoted by: >>4396358
  2870.  
  2871.  
  2872.  >>4396350
  2873. “Tell me about the city.”
  2874. >Such a broad topic
  2875. >Where to start…
  2876. >You begin by telling her about most of the major landmarks around the city.
  2877. >Millennium Park, Navy Pier, The Willis Tower, all the major sports stadiums, Union Station, The Mag Mile, and any others you can name off the top of your head.
  2878.  >You then launch into a brief explanation of some historical events from the city.
  2879. >By the time you are done with your history lesson you have reached the beginning of the Mag Mile
  2880. >As you turn and walk down the Mag Mile most of the stores are just opening for business.
  2881. >The streets are more crowded with people here.
  2882. >Now it’s your turn Anon…
  2883. >”Tell me about Ponyville.”
  2884. >You hear Rose sigh…
  2885. >She launches into an explanation of ponyville and the surrounding areas.
  2886. >You try and keep up with all of the terms she is talking about
  2887. >But to be honest you head is still swimming with the reality of it all
  2888. >You remind yourself that she probably feels the same about you and your world
  2889. >You try and soak up as much information as possible
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  2896. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2. Pt3:A day in the City  DakanSun Sep 9 22:34:59 2012No.4396358
  2897.  
  2898. Quoted by: >>4396366
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  2900.  
  2901.  >>4396353
  2902. >As you near the end of the talk you spot a store with a bunch of coats and boots in the shop window
  2903. >It’s rather a small and modest store, but they have a nice selection of clothing
  2904. > You and rose make your way over to the store and are greeted by one of the employees.
  2905. >You smile at the clerk, “Hello, I was hoping you can help me and my friend find some warm clothes that will fit her.”
  2906. >The store clerk sighs as he looks down at Rose.
  2907. “You aren’t the first Pony that has come looking for clothing…”
  2908. >The clerk walks into the back and returns a few minutes later with a few jackets
  2909. “These should fit you, although they are kind of hard to closes up since most of them are made with zippers.”
  2910. “If you’re looking for boots, you aren’t going to find much luck anywhere. Until someone makes some custom boots; human boots don’t fit comfortably on ponies…”
  2911. >You thank the store clerk
  2912. >You help rose try on some of the jackets.
  2913. >At first she even has a hard time getting them onto her body.
  2914. >You can see what the store clerk meant by having trouble with them.
  2915. >Roses hooves weren’t made to grip small object such as zippers.
  2916. >Maybe with enough practice she could use her mouth to zipper it up, but for right now, she will need some assistance.
  2917. >After picking out a few jackets, a scarf, and warm hat you two make your way out onto the streets again
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  2924. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt3;A day in the City  DakanSun Sep 9 22:35:18 2012No.4396366
  2925.  
  2926. Quoted by: >>4396373
  2927.  
  2928.  
  2929.  >>4396358
  2930. >After walking down a few stores you notice something that catches your eye
  2931. >You guide Rose into a store that specializes in hand bags.
  2932. >You start talking to the sales woman about a bag that would be comfortable on Rose.
  2933. >The sales woman doesn’t look exactly thrilled with the idea of having a pony in her store.
  2934. “I’m sorry but I have nothing that would be suitable for that thing. Please leave.”
  2935. >You feel anger build inside of you as you quickly escort Rose out of the store.
  2936. >Once outside slowly put your emotions in check.
  2937. >”I’m so sorry, you had to hear that Rose…”
  2938. >Rose is looking at the ground and barely even acknowledges you.
  2939. “It’s ok, I know that some humans don’t view us as you do, I just didn’t…”
  2940. >You reach down and slowly pet her mane.
  2941. >”I know, I think that enough shopping for today. Let’s make our way to the park.”
  2942. >You walk off of the Mag Mile and start to head for Millennium Park
  2943. >It is one of the closet places that you know of that has flowers that are in bloom right now.
  2944. >If it was earlier in the year, you would have probably have taken Rose to the Botanic Gardens.
  2945. >But, the park will have to do.
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  2952. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt3;A day in the City  DakanSun Sep 9 22:36:59 2012No.4396373
  2953.  
  2954. Quoted by: >>4396382
  2955.  
  2956.  
  2957.  >>4396366
  2958. >On your way to the park, Rose asks the question you have feared
  2959. “Tell me about the Earth and Humanity…”
  2960. >You might as well be blunt with her.
  2961. >She has already seen the cruelty of a human, and she has been watching the news all week.
  2962. >She should know the rest of the story.
  2963. >”We aren’t all like that…”
  2964. >”Most of us are good natured, hardworking, and mean the world good.”
  2965. >”It just seems that the bad are the ones who stand out the most.”
  2966. >Using that as a starting point, you launch into an abbreviated history of mankind
  2967. >You lightly touch on the differences of the beginnings of mankind.
  2968. >You go through the rise and fall of the great empires of mankind
  2969. >You move on to the discovery of America and the history leading up to present day.
  2970. >”Our history is marred with blood of the innocent and wicked, all in the name of the survival of the species.”
  2971. >”On top of all that we don’t take care of the planet and we continue to hurt others for our own personal gain.”
  2972. >By now, you are just reaching the park.
  2973. >”But even though all of that, there are the bright points in our history that make it all worthwhile.”
  2974. >You reach down and pat Rose on the head.
  2975. >”I believe that when man looks back and writes about the day when ponies came to the earth, it will be written as one of the brightest points in our history.”
  2976. >”Well, here we are, the closest in the city you are going to get to blooming flowers…”
  2977. >In truth there aren’t many flowers in bloom.
  2978. >But the ones that are bloom in patches on the side of the walkways that run through the park.
  2979. >You see Rose gallop over and take a deep breath over by the flowers.
  2980. >She looks the happiest she has been since she has arrived on Earth.
  2981. >For some odd reason, that makes you happy…
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  2988. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt3;A day in the City  DakanSun Sep 9 22:38:58 2012No.4396382
  2989.  
  2990. Quoted by: >>4396406
  2991.  
  2992.  
  2993.  >>4396373
  2994. >You spend a few hours walking through the park admiring the flowers.
  2995. >Eventually, you two rest on a park bench.
  2996. >Your turn again, Anon.
  2997. >”Tell me about the Land of Equestria, about the history of the ponies.”
  2998. >Rose smiles at you
  2999. “I guess that’s a fair question…”
  3000. “In all honesty, we aren’t that different.”
  3001. “Ponies have had wars and there are somep0nies that can be just as mean as humans.”
  3002. “The only real difference I can see is that we take better care of our land…”
  3003. >She goes on to explain that there might be a difference between our lack of magical ability
  3004. >She then jumps into an explanation of the land of Equestria, and its history.
  3005. >She was right of course seems like the human condition can be applied to ponies.
  3006. >Maybe it should be renamed as the living condition.
  3007. >Since all living things apply to it.
  3008. >You are so engrossed with her stories about Equestria that you nearly forget to check your watch.
  3009. >Its almost time get you should be leaving to get to the movies.
  3010. >You relay this to Rose
  3011. >She nods and gets up and follows you out of the park.
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  3018. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt3:A day in the City  DakanSun Sep 9 22:43:39 2012No.4396406
  3019.  
  3020. Quoted by: >>4399319 >>4399797
  3021.  
  3022.  
  3023.  >>4396382
  3024. >On the way to the movie theater you decide it is a good idea to tell Rose about the different kind of movies.
  3025. >You give her a summary of movie genres and what each entails.
  3026. >By the time you reach the theater you think she has a pretty good understanding about movies
  3027. >You point out each movie and tell her the genre that the movie falls under
  3028. >You also give her a mini summary about the movie making sure not to spoil anything.
  3029. >After you do this you ask her which movie she wants to see
  3030. >She takes a long look at the list of movies on the board and eventually point to the movie
  3031. >You chuckle to yourself about the movie selection
  3032. >”Ok, if you’re sure, I’ll tell you though, it’s a long one, we might want to get a big bucket of popcorn for this.”
  3033. >You walk up to the ticket counter
  3034. >”Hello, I would like two tickets to the next show of Titanic please.”
  3035.  
  3036. End of Part 3
  3037. I think that this part came together really well. I wasn't exactly sure if I should include that part with the saleswoman in it, but it turned out pretty good in the end.
  3038.  
  3039. So Part 4 hopefully sometime during the week, not sure though, definetly on Fri. or Sat. I will be wrapping up this chapter during the weeked. Optimisticaly, I want to have Ch3 Pt1 up sometime on Sunday.
  3040.  
  3041. Constructive Criticism alway appreciated
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  3048. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYMon Sep 10 03:32:59 2012No.4399319
  3049.  
  3050.  
  3051.  >>4396406
  3052. thought you would add the moonlanding ...
  3053. because that would be quiet funny ...
  3054.  
  3055. anyway good work so far
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  3062. AnonymousMon Sep 10 04:05:19 2012No.4399797
  3063.  
  3064. Quoted by: >>4410646
  3065.  
  3066.  
  3067.  >>4396406
  3068.  
  3069. You and Pancake are the reasons I frequent when i can to this thread. Keep up the work and I'm sure you won't disappoint, at least not me anyway
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  3076. DakanMon Sep 10 06:37:38 2012No.4401996
  3077.  
  3078.  
  3079.  Good morning PiE bump
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  3086. LimeLightMon Sep 10 07:03:39 2012No.4402559
  3087.  
  3088. Quoted by: >>4404393
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  3090.  
  3091.  Well... I guess I'll never hear about pillow again qq
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  3098. DakanMon Sep 10 09:03:19 2012No.4404393
  3099.  
  3100.  
  3101.  >>4402559
  3102. Hey, I'm sure they want to tell their story as much as you want to hear it. But like most of these stories. They are written for the entertainment of both reader and writer. And most of them are written on their free time. Patience is a virtue my friend, and it will be rewarded in time.
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  3109. DakanMon Sep 10 11:59:38 2012No.4407314
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  3112.  Time for a bump...
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  3119. AnonymousMon Sep 10 15:15:19 2012No.4410646
  3120.  
  3121. Quoted by: >>4410671
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  3123.  
  3124.  >>4399797
  3125. Seconded.
  3126.  
  3127. BTW did Mr. Blue die or something?
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  3134. Mr. BlueMon Sep 10 15:17:19 2012No.4410671
  3135.  
  3136.  
  3137.  >>4410646
  3138. Real life is eating me up. I have no time for things. I'm having to take a break from anything more than a little late night and rare early day browsing on this board. Just a busy time of year.
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  3145. AnonymousMon Sep 10 18:55:19 2012No.4412564
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  3147. Quoted by: >>4414158
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  3150.  4-hour bump.
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  3157. AnonymousTue Sep 11 00:10:00 2012No.4414158
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  3159. Quoted by: >>4416386
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  3162.  >>4412564
  3163. Another bump here.
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  3170. AnonymousTue Sep 11 05:49:00 2012No.4416386
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  3172.  
  3173.  >>4414158
  3174. And another.
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  3181. Mortimer MouseTue Sep 11 10:41:19 2012No.4421180
  3182. File: 92 KB, 732x485, 1346118816500.png [View same] [google] [Report]
  3183.  
  3184.  
  3185. Sorry about not posting anything if any of you were wondering where I've been. I've just been having some outside problems. Anyways- I have a little of the next part written up and I plan on completing it and posting soon
  3186.  
  3187. Anyways; pastebin is here in case anyone wants to catch up on my extremely slow but progressing story http://pastebin.com/u/Mortimer_Mouse
  3188.  
  3189. Also bump.
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  3196. AnonymousTue Sep 11 14:06:20 2012No.4425120
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  3199.  Page 9 bump.
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  3206. AnonymousTue Sep 11 15:46:01 2012No.4426529
  3207.  
  3208. Quoted by: >>4429771
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  3210.  
  3211.  >>4389541
  3212. >that's not even funny
  3213.  
  3214. Sorry, did that joke offend you? Because it was pretty good to me. Also stop with the whole "4chan internet hate machine" thinking.
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  3221. DakanTue Sep 11 20:00:59 2012No.4428599
  3222.  
  3223.  
  3224.  An little update...
  3225.  
  3226. Starting to look like that pt4 will be late friday, and more so saturday...
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  3228. Also bump...
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  3235. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYTue Sep 11 23:38:59 2012No.4429771
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  3237.  
  3238.  >>4426529
  3239. lol hell no, i have no problem with jokes like that. as long as shit don't happend in my country xD
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  3246. AnonymousWed Sep 12 04:36:43 2012No.4431674
  3247.  
  3248.  
  3249.  Giving the thread the ol 5-hour bump.
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  3256. AnonymousWed Sep 12 05:10:23 2012No.4432121
  3257.  
  3258. Quoted by: >>4433925 >>4434561 >>4436340 >>4439192
  3259.  
  3260.  
  3261.  A question for those here...
  3262.  
  3263. Back in the AiE thread a few weeks back there were two stories that would qualify as PiE rather than AiE.
  3264.  
  3265. The first involved an amnesia troubled unicorn mare named 'Anon' coming to Earth and rescued by a human named Jack. What ever happened to that and does anyone remember who wrote it?
  3266.  
  3267. The second involved Applejack coming to Earth while the other ponies were all trying to figure out what happened to her, while she was dealing with appearing in some Anon's home.
  3268.  
  3269. Does anyone know who wrote either/have their pastebins/know if anything more is being done with either?
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  3276. AnonymousWed Sep 12 07:37:04 2012No.4433925
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  3278.  
  3279.  >>4432121
  3280. I wish I did. Those two were actually really well.
  3281.  
  3282. Also, bump
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  3289. Ponygone !RAGT.LOVE.Wed Sep 12 08:22:04 2012No.4434561
  3290.  
  3291.  
  3292.  >>4432121
  3293. I remember those, good stuff
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  3300. AnonymousWed Sep 12 10:02:23 2012No.4436340
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  3302.  
  3303.  >>4432121
  3304. I can answer your first one with a pastebin and name of the story
  3305. http://pastebin.com/u/Blazang
  3306. Anon in Earth
  3307. I really wish the writer would continue that story, it was shaping up to be quite interesting.
  3308.  
  3309. As for the second one I remember seeing it but I can't for the life of me remember the name of the writer, sorry.
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  3316. AnonymousWed Sep 12 12:35:23 2012No.4439192
  3317.  
  3318.  
  3319.  >>4432121
  3320. Found it, it was Hobbypony. Here's his pastebin:
  3321. http://pastebin.com/u/Hobbypony
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  3328. AnonymousWed Sep 12 16:49:00 2012No.4443328
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  3331.  bumparu
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  3338. AnonymousWed Sep 12 21:30:44 2012No.4445305
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  3341.  Bump!
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  3348. AnonymousThu Sep 13 00:55:51 2012No.4446814
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  3351.  4 hour bamp
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  3358. AnonymousThu Sep 13 01:51:03 2012No.4447274
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  3361. Quoted by: >>4448640
  3362.  
  3363.  
  3364.  Needs more motor city/pervert pillow story.
  3365.  
  3366. We need more of it man, dont abandon it without an ending.
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  3373. Mortimer MouseThu Sep 13 04:09:24 2012No.4448640
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  3376.  
  3377. >>4447274
  3378. I never said I was abandoning it.
  3379.  
  3380. Also I updated my pastebin with maybe four or five paragraphs of writing because I got stuck for a day or two and decided not to post it here because it wasn't a whole lot, but I'll be continuing from there.
  3381.  
  3382. And I may have hinted at when I'll actually do a proper update.
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  3389. AnonymousThu Sep 13 09:41:03 2012No.4453454
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  3392.  Page 8 bump.
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  3399. AnonymousThu Sep 13 12:37:24 2012No.4456683
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  3409. AnonymousThu Sep 13 12:45:03 2012No.4456837
  3410.  
  3411.  
  3412.  >>4377639
  3413. >>4377608
  3414. It is always a pleasure
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  3421. AnonymousThu Sep 13 16:59:24 2012No.4460391
  3422.  
  3423. Quoted by: >>4460421
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  3425.  
  3426.  sooo...who is gonna make all this into some pics so i can save an read later?
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  3433. AnonymousThu Sep 13 17:01:03 2012No.4460421
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  3435.  
  3436.  >>4460391
  3437. >reading from pics
  3438. >2012
  3439. nigga, we use google docs and pastebin
  3440. get on our level
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  3447. AnonymousThu Sep 13 22:11:04 2012No.4462575
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  3450.  5 hours? Bump.
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  3457. AnonymousThu Sep 13 23:46:43 2012No.4463267
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  3470.  almost Friday bump
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  3477. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYFri Sep 14 04:58:43 2012No.4465641
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  3481. 2 hours befor frieday bumb xD
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  3491. Ohshitniggerwhatareyoudoingonpage10?
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  3498. PancakesFri Sep 14 09:54:43 2012No.4469926
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  3501. Quoted by: >>4471085
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  3503.  
  3504.  Just posting to let you know that I am already dead tired. Updates maybe tomorrow. Week's been hell.
  3505.  
  3506. Pic unrelated, but would make a crazy fun story. Hitler starts WW2 after Fluttershy returns to Equestria.
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  3513. AnonymousFri Sep 14 12:39:24 2012No.4471085
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  3516.  >>4469926
  3517. Updates whoot! Can't wait you guys!
  3518. You writefags got us hooked so eedwe're cool with waiting. Take all the time you n
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  3538.  patient waiting bump
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  3545. AnonymousFri Sep 14 19:32:44 2012No.4476184
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  3547. Quoted by: >>4476203 >>4477702 >>4479046
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  3550.  I might consider writing for this thread since a lot of the original writefags appear to have been busy during the last several days
  3551. Some questions,the first one heavily related... As this is pretty much my first trip in writelandia,I'd like to know if I should write my story first,proofread it before posting,or should I attempt to wirte it on the go
  3552. Another a bit unrelated topic I'd like to ask upon is if AiE ever had a story in which the ponies and humans actually don't share language and they have to figure out how to communicate with each other
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  3559. Mortimer MouseFri Sep 14 19:34:23 2012No.4476203
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  3564.  >>4476184
  3565. I personally always try to do a quick proof-read of whatever I write before posting. As for the language barrier, AiE usually solved that problem with Twilight or Celestia casting some kind of translator spell.
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  3572. AnonymousFri Sep 14 19:48:24 2012No.4476291
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  3575.  >>4476203
  3576. This... honestly sounds lazy as fuck
  3577. Personally I think it would be interesting to see how far anons on both sides would reach if they had to figure out what the hell the other side is mostly talking about on daily basis
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  3584. AnonymousFri Sep 14 23:03:23 2012No.4477500
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  3587.  3 hour bump before bed.
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  3594. DakanFri Sep 14 23:29:55 2012No.4477664
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  3597.  Hey all, I know i pormise a new chapter on fri night. but, honestly im pretty drunk rightnow. so im gonna sllep off my stupor. See you all tommorow morning. When i will have a new chapter. ready.
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  3604. AnonymousFri Sep 14 23:34:43 2012No.4477693
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  3607.  The direct inverse of AiE? Paint me interested. Lurk mode initiate!
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  3614. AnonymousFri Sep 14 23:35:03 2012No.4477702
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  3617.  >>4476184
  3618. There has been a story where they didn't share a language, I just don't remember who wrote it. Although, the writefag has been inactive so it's discontinued.
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  3625. Mr. BlueSat Sep 15 02:50:44 2012No.4479046
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  3628.  >>4476184
  3629. For me it depends on if you're doing the alternate universe route or the other planet in same universe route. If it's an alternate earth then you can easily write off similarities between worlds. If you want to be serious and mess around with language then you'll have to work in the possibility that Equestria and Earth had been connected somehow because if you want scifi realism then you need to acknowledge that an alien world would not have creatures that looked anything like us, the closest you could hope is 'also carbon based and exist in the only 3 dimensions."
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  3631. So unless you're writing a simple thing where the language deal will be handled like all other mainstream scifi (by ignoring it) then you don't need to pretend at realism. Otherwise the options are 1. alternate universe/timeline, or 2. The world had been in contact before, resulting in myhtology concerning Unicorns, pegasi, Griffins, dragons etc.
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  3633. I have ideas for a scifi version of Equestria where certain portals connected the two worlds and maybe others at various times. I have the griffins being less lionlike and more reptilian, hailing from the same world as the dragons. Things like that. all ideas for stories I'll never even think up.
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  3640. AnonymousSat Sep 15 03:56:44 2012No.4479750
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  3643.  /r/questing list of all stories in a pastebin or something like that. That'd be appreciated.
  3644. Also It'd easier to read instead clicking backlinked posts.
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  3681. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesSat Sep 15 11:05:05 2012No.4485870
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  3688. "Oh! Are those baby bears? They're so cute!"
  3689. > Fluttershy squees in delight.
  3690. "And those little lion cubs! And those tiny tortoises!"
  3691. > Her wings flap a bit. I pat her back quickly to flatten them.
  3692. > She notices and lowers her head.
  3693. "S-sorry," she whispers. "I got a little too excited."
  3694. > I gently pat her on the head.
  3695. > "Try to relax. You have plenty of time to enjoy yourself."
  3696. "That's right, sugarcube!" says Applejack. "We'll be followin' right behind you."
  3697. "But how about you two? Won't you be bored if we stay here too long?"
  3698. "Ah, don't sweat it! Me and this here human have a lot to talk about."
  3699. > Huh? We do? I don't think Applejack mentioned anything before we left.
  3700. > Fluttershy looks a little worried.
  3701. "A-are you sure, Applejack? Twilight said that-"
  3702. "Don't worry. I know what Twilight said."
  3703. > The pegasus pony glances at me for a moment.
  3704. > She slowly lets go of my arm and sighs.
  3705. "Alright then," says Fluttershy. "If you say so."
  3706. > She looks back at us one more time before running up to the lion cage.
  3707. > And in an instant, she returns to her excited self.
  3708. > Fluttershy seems to be enjoying the place.
  3709. > And I doubt if she can cause much trouble here.
  3710. > So I clear my throat and turn to Applejack.
  3711. > "So, what is it that you wanted to talk about?"
  3712. "The truth," whispers the earth pony.
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  3732.  >>4485870
  3733. Hell yeah, story time! Keep 'em rollin'!
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  3740. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesSat Sep 15 11:32:45 2012No.4486349
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  3745.  >>4485870
  3746. > Applejack doesn't say anything else.
  3747. > Looks like it is my turn to ask questions.
  3748. > "Well then, let's start with a simple one. How did you ponies learn about Earth?"
  3749. "Heh," says the earth pony. "That one isn't simple at all."
  3750. > She pauses for a moment, thinking.
  3751. "From what I reckon, Equestrian folk discovered this place only recently. And by accident, too. Can't tell you much besides that, since I don't know much about the first incident myself."
  3752. > "You aren't the first ponies to arrive here?"
  3753. "Nope. The existence of Earth is being kept secret from everyp0ny. Only a few are even aware that humans exist. Heck, my friends and I only learned about y'all a few weeks ago."
  3754. > "I see. Then humans and ponies met in the past?"
  3755. "Yep. Don't know much of how those encounters went, though. All I know is what our researchers and scientists told us during our briefing."
  3756. > "And that is?"
  3757. "They said that the technology and magic on Earth is on a similar level as Equestria. And that it was only a matter of time until humans discover a way to travel to our world."
  3758. > I see. So that's what it is.
  3759. > That's why they want to observe human behavior.
  3760. > "So I'm guessing that you're supposed to be ambassadors of Equestria, or something?"
  3761. "Hmm."
  3762. > She pauses to think again. Applejack looks a little sad when she speaks.
  3763. "I'm not really sure, to tell you the truth. We've just been instructed to send reports about humans while we're here."
  3764. > Then, she cheers up and gives me an encouraging smile.
  3765. "But I do hope that y'all can live in peace with us Equestrian folk, someday."
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  3772. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesSat Sep 15 12:07:05 2012No.4486926
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  3778. > A group of excited children pass by.
  3779. > Their guardian seems to be a single middle-aged woman.
  3780. "Remember children," says the woman. "It was thanks to our anonymous donor that we can spend the day at the zoo. So be on your best behavior, alright?"
  3781. "Can we have some ice cream?" asks one of the children.
  3782. "We'll all have ice cream after we see the animals."
  3783. > The children cheer at this.
  3784. "Now go ahead and explore, but come back here with your partner when it's time."
  3785. > With that, the children from the orphanage scatter in different directions.
  3786. > Hmm? Fluttershy seems to have noticed the children.
  3787. > She watches them very closely, covering her mouth to stop from squeaking.
  3788. > The pegasus pony is even more excited than before.
  3789. > But she is no longer looking at the animals.
  3790. > Is it my imagination, or...
  3791. > Suddenly, I feel a tug on my shirt.
  3792. "Is that all you wanted to ask?" says Applejack.
  3793. > "Oh, sorry. I got a little distracted."
  3794. > The earth pony looks up at me, worried.
  3795. "So what else would you like to know?"
  3796. > Hmm. I paused to think.
  3797. > "Well, how about you tell me more about your farm?"
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  3809. "And that's how we buck apples back at Sweet Apple Acres!"
  3810. > "Interesting. Never thought that one could harvest apples that way."
  3811. > Mental note: do not get kicked by this pony.
  3812. > It will likely hurt. A whole lot.
  3813. "Well, thanks for listenin'."
  3814. > We both fall silent for a while. Then, Applejack stops.
  3815. "That... wasn't what you really wanted to ask me, was it?"
  3816. > "What makes you say that?"
  3817. "Well, I know that Twilight hasn't been perfectly honest with you and-"
  3818. > I raise my hand to interrupt.
  3819. > "Don't worry about it. You told me more than enough already."
  3820. "But-"
  3821. > "I said, don't worry about it."
  3822. > Applejack sighs and smiles back at me.
  3823. "Heh, if you say so. I'm startin' to see what Twilight meant about you."
  3824. > "Meant about what?"
  3825. "Err, never mind!"
  3826. > The earth pony blushes. She quickly tries to continue the conversation.
  3827. "B-but anyway, I need to tell you that I still disagree with all of this secrecy. If all humans were even half like you, I'm sure we'd have no trouble getting along!"
  3828. > Then, her smile slowly fades away.
  3829. "But humans aren't all like that, are they?" she whispers.
  3830. > I shake my head sadly.
  3831. > Applejack sighs.
  3832. > "By the way, why are you telling me all this?"
  3833. "Oh that?"
  3834. > The earth pony brightens up and smiles.
  3835. "Why that's because I like you, of course!"
  3836. > She speaks without hesitation. I feel myself blushing a little.
  3837. > But before I could reply, a shrill scream fills my ears.
  3838. > And only then did we realize.
  3839. > Fluttershy is missing.
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  3852.  >>4486926
  3853. "And that's how we buck apples back at Sweet Apple Acres!"
  3854. > "Interesting. Never thought that one could harvest apples that way."
  3855. > Mental note: do not get kicked by this pony.
  3856. > It will likely hurt. A whole lot.
  3857. "Well, thanks for listenin'."
  3858. > We both fall silent for a while. Then, Applejack stops.
  3859. "That... wasn't what you really wanted to ask me, was it?"
  3860. > "What makes you say that?"
  3861. "Well, I know that Twilight hasn't been perfectly honest with you and-"
  3862. > I raise my hand to interrupt.
  3863. > "Don't worry about it. You told me more than enough already."
  3864. "But-"
  3865. > "I said, don't worry about it."
  3866. > Applejack sighs and smiles back at me.
  3867. "Heh, if you say so. I'm startin' to see what Twilight meant about you."
  3868. > "Meant about what?"
  3869. "Err, never mind!"
  3870. > She quickly tries to continue the conversation.
  3871. "B-but anyway, I need to tell you that I still disagree with all of this secrecy. If all humans were even half like you, I'm sure we'd have no trouble getting along!"
  3872. > Then, her smile slowly fades away.
  3873. "But humans aren't all like that, are they?" she whispers.
  3874. > I shake my head sadly.
  3875. > Applejack sighs.
  3876. > "By the way, why are you telling me all this?"
  3877. "Oh that?"
  3878. > The earth pony brightens up and smiles.
  3879. "Why that's because I like you, of course!"
  3880. > She speaks without hesitation. I feel myself blushing a little.
  3881. > But before I could reply, a shrill scream fills my ears.
  3882. > And only then did we realize.
  3883. > Fluttershy is missing.
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  3893.  >>4487470
  3894. Ending here for now. The current chapter isn't in pastebin yet, but the first two chapters are there.
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  3903. Mr. BlueSat Sep 15 13:37:04 2012No.4488536
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  3906.  've got some goodies ready but I'm working on more and might want to make some changes. So I'll be posting them all tomorrow,earlier in the day I guess.
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  3913. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt4: The best in the City  DakanSat Sep 15 14:33:05 2012No.4489397
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  3915. Quoted by: >>4489413
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  3918.  Welcome back PiE time for the next chapter in the Roseluck Chronicles!
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  3920. >You and Rose exit the movie theater a few hours later
  3921. >You can tell that Rose really enjoyed the movie
  3922. >She can’t seem to keep still as she talks about every scene in great detail
  3923. “It was so sad at the end, when Rose had to let Jack go…”
  3924. >You nod, only half listening to her go on about the movie.
  3925. “Anon, did that all really happen?”
  3926. >The question catches you by surprise.
  3927. >”Huh? What was the question…”
  3928. >She sighs
  3929. “Have you been listening?”
  3930. >You shrug, “No not really, I’m sorry”
  3931. >She bumps into playfully
  3932. “You told me that the movie was about an actual event in the past.”
  3933. “I asked if it all really happened.”
  3934. >”Well, it’s based on actual events. There was a ship that was named the Titanic.”
  3935. >”That ship also went down after being struck by an iceberg.”
  3936. >”The love story between Rose and Jack is fictional though.”
  3937. >Rose looks slight disappointed by this
  3938. >”Is something wrong?”
  3939. “It was such a great love story though, it’s just a shame that it was made up.”
  3940. >You smile and pet rose’s head.
  3941. >”Somewhere, there is a great love story that is similar, and it actually happened.”
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  3948. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt4: The best in the City  DakanSat Sep 15 14:34:23 2012No.4489413
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  3954. >Suddenly you feel yourself grow hungry.
  3955. >You remember one of you favorite restaurants is near by
  3956. >”Rose, are you hungry?”
  3957. “I am a bit hungry; do you have something in mind?”
  3958. >You smile and continue on down the road
  3959. >”You have told me a lot about your friends and Equestria, but I still don’t know much about you.”
  3960. >You see Rose turn her head away from you
  3961. >What is that about…
  3962. >It’s almost as if…
  3963. “There is nothing to really tell about me.”
  3964. “I have already told you about my shop and my garden back at home.”
  3965. “I have also told you about my cutie mark…”
  3966. >”You have never told me how you got it…”
  3967. “I haven’t? It’s not that great of a story…”
  3968. >”I want to hear it.”
  3969. >She turns back to you and smiles broadly
  3970. >”Ok, It all starts with my mother’s garden…”
  3971. >She tells you about her mother who also grew and sold flowers.
  3972. >How there was a particular bush in her Mother’s garden that wouldn’t bloom
  3973. >Her mother had given up on the bush
  3974. >But Rose didn’t
  3975. >She kept taking care of the bush watering it and singing to it everyday
  3976. >One day while she was singing to it the bush began to bloom beautiful red roses.
  3977. >It was at the same time that her cutie mark appeared; the exact same rose that bloomed on that bush
  3978. >”That is a great story”
  3979. >Rose smiles and turns her head away again
  3980. “Thank you.”
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  3987. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt4: The best in the City  DakanSat Sep 15 14:35:04 2012No.4489426
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  3993. >You arrive at the restaurant.
  3994. >It’s a local pizza joint
  3995. >And by your opinion the best pizza in the city
  3996. >You hold open the door and let Rose in and follow.
  3997. >You smile at the waitress.
  3998. >”Hello Joy, table for two and a vegetarian special please.”
  3999. >Joy raises an eyebrow at you and rose.
  4000. >”Is there something wrong?”
  4001. >She shakes her head and leads you both to a table in the back of the restaurant.
  4002. “Anything you want to drink?”
  4003. >”I’ll have a Bud, please.”
  4004. “And for the pony…”
  4005. >Rose turns to you and shrugs
  4006. “What is a Bud?”
  4007. >”It’s a type of beer, an alcoholic drink.”
  4008. >She nods and looks down at the menu
  4009. “Hmm, an appletini sounds nice…”
  4010. >”Are you sure about that…”
  4011. “It has apples in the name, how bad can it be…”
  4012. >”Well it is alcoholic, I don’t know if Equestria has alcohol or not.
  4013. “We have cider, it is made of apples.”
  4014. >”Ok, one Bud and one appletini then Joy.”
  4015. >Joy shrugs and walks off to get the drinks
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  4022. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt4: The best in the City  DakanSat Sep 15 14:36:24 2012No.4489446
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  4028. >You turn back to rose.
  4029. >”Do you have pizza in Equestria?”
  4030. >She shakes her head
  4031. “No, what is it?”
  4032. >”It’s an Italian dish. It has a pie crust, tomato sauce and cheese.”
  4033. >”Chicago has the best pizza in America and this pizza parlor has the best pizza in Chicago.”
  4034. >”So it’s the best of the best here.
  4035. >Rose nods and the drink arrive a short time later.
  4036. >Rose delicately picks up the martini glass
  4037. >How do they pick up stuff like that…
  4038. >Ponies hooves must not be like normal hooves…
  4039. >Maybe they are made of marshmallows…
  4040. >She slowly sips from the glass
  4041. >”Well, how does it taste?”
  4042. >She smiles
  4043. ”It’s delicious”
  4044. >She takes a bigger drink from it.
  4045. >”You may want to slow down; you wouldn’t want to get drunk…”
  4046. >She nods again and puts down the glass.
  4047. “You haven’t told me a lot about yourself either you know…”
  4048. >You chuckle
  4049. >”You’re right, what do you want to know?”
  4050. “Well, I already know humans don’t have cutie marks. How do you all know what you’re good at?
  4051. “More so, what do you do? You tell me about your work and everything, but I want to know more.”
  4052. >”Well, we kind of learn through school and life what we are good at.”
  4053. >”Humans don’t have a specific skill. We are more versatile. We can be good at a wide range of things.”
  4054. >”With me, my current job is something to get me by until I get done with college. Then I hope to start my own business.”
  4055. “What kind of business do you want to start?”
  4056. >You lean back in your chair.
  4057. >”I don’t know, I guess I always told myself I would figure that out when I get my degree.”
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  4064. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt4:The best in the City  DakanSat Sep 15 14:39:04 2012No.4489503
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  4069.  >>4489446
  4070. >The pizza arrives at your table; rose finishes her appletini and orders another.
  4071. >It’s a deep dish vegetarian pizza, topped with all sorts of fruits and vegetables.
  4072. >Personally you don’t mind vegetarian, but you would rather have a nice sausage and peperoni pizza.
  4073. >You help yourself to a slice and help serve rose a slice.
  4074. “It looks great!”
  4075. >”It tastes even better”
  4076. >You both dig in
  4077. >Always the best pizza in Chicago
  4078. >As you eat you can’t help but notice that Rose finishes her second martini and orders a third.
  4079. >”You really need to slow down Rose, it will make you sick if you drink that fast.”
  4080. “It’s no problem really”
  4081. >You can hear a slight slur creeping into her voice.
  4082. >As you both finish the pizza, she finishes her third and begins to order her second.
  4083. >”You have had enough, you don’t need anymore.”
  4084. “Awww, but Anon I’m fine perfectly fine.”
  4085. >Her speech is heavily slurred.
  4086. >”Right… it’s time to get home, check please Joy.”
  4087. >After paying your bill you start your walk back to the apartment.
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  4094. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt4:The best in the City  DakanSat Sep 15 14:40:23 2012No.4489519
  4095.  
  4096. Quoted by: >>4489585
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  4098.  
  4099.  >>4489503
  4100. >A walk for you, more so a drunken stumble for Rose.
  4101. “Anon, the lights in the city are so pretty…”
  4102. >”Yes they are Rose; they are beautiful.”
  4103. >Rose leans against you as you continue to walk
  4104. “I think you were right Anon; I have had one too many…”
  4105. >You arrive at the apartment and help Rose up the stairs
  4106. >You help her over to the couch and sit down on it.
  4107. >She moves and lays her head down on your lap
  4108. >The smell of roses fills your nostrils…
  4109. “Pet my mane, Anon, it feels nice when you do that…”
  4110. >You slowly start to run your hands through her silky mane.
  4111. >You feel Rose relax in your lap and slowly drift off to sleep.
  4112. >You sit there petting her for a while; feeling yourself grow more and more tired.
  4113. >It wouldn’t hurt anything to fall asleep here.
  4114. >You wouldn’t want to disturb Roses peaceful sleep
  4115. >You lean back into the couch and close your eyes.
  4116. >It’s just like falling asleep with a cat or a dog in your lap.
  4117. >She’s just a pony after all
  4118. >She’s just a friend after all
  4119. >You slowly drift off, the smell of roses help fill your head with flowers.
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  4126. DakanSat Sep 15 14:45:24 2012No.4489585
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  4128. Quoted by: >>4493211
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  4131.  >>4489519
  4132. That is the end Pt 4! Part 5 later today.
  4133. Pastebin updated with the pastest part. You can find it and all previous entries here.
  4134. http://pastebin.com/u/Fourdak
  4135.  
  4136. I liked this part and didn't. I felt the first conversation came off as a bit awkward. I don't know why. By the end I was really enjoying writing this part.
  4137.  
  4138. Constructive Criticism always appreciated.
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  4145. DakanSat Sep 15 18:47:03 2012No.4492031
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  4148.  Update, working on pt5 right now. soon it shall be completed
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  4155. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt5:The Morning Revelation  DakanSat Sep 15 21:07:05 2012No.4492954
  4156.  
  4157. Quoted by: >>4492961
  4158.  
  4159.  
  4160.  And I'm back. Here is Part 5!
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  4162. >Your eyes flutter open with the morning light
  4163. >The nostrils are still filled with the smell of roses
  4164. >You look down and see Rose still fast asleep on your lap
  4165. >You slowly move her head off of your lap to try and get up
  4166. >As you do you feel her stir in your hands
  4167. >You stop quickly to see if she has awoken
  4168. >She is still asleep
  4169. >Get up and begin the day
  4170. >A quick shower, a change of clothes, and you are ready to begin breakfast
  4171. >You start scramble some eggs, toast some bread, and quarter an apple
  4172. >You also make a few cups of coffee, you sense somep0ny will need it.
  4173. >As you finish up you hear a groan come from the living room
  4174. >”Good Morning Rose, how do you feel?”
  4175. >Another groan comes from the living room
  4176. >”I told you to slow down on the appletinis last night”
  4177. >Another groan and something about equestrian cider never doing this
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  4184. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt5:The Morning Revelation  DakanSat Sep 15 21:08:25 2012No.4492961
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  4186. Quoted by: >>4492970
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  4189.  >>4492954
  4190. >You chuckle and pick up a plate of food and coffee, and deliver it to Rose
  4191. >She looks between you and the food with half closed eyes
  4192. ”Why does it hurt…?”
  4193. >”It’s called a hangover, it happens when you drink a lot of alcohol to a point where it dehydrates you.”
  4194. >”Usually it comes with a headache, nausea…”
  4195. >She covers her ears with her hooves
  4196.  “Too loud… too loud…”
  4197. >You drop you voice down to barley above a whisper
  4198. >”Sensitivity to light and sound.”
  4199. >”The best way to take care of this is with a good breakfast and a strong coffee.”
  4200. >She eyes the coffee again and grabs her stomach and groans
  4201. >You chuckle again
  4202. >”No rush to eat it, but it will help in the long run.”
  4203. >”I’ll be right back; I’m going to grab the paper from down stairs.”
  4204. >She nods and continues to groan and hold her stomach
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  4211. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt5:The Morning Revelation  DakanSat Sep 15 21:09:05 2012No.4492970
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  4213. Quoted by: >>4492974
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  4215.  
  4216.  >>4492961
  4217. >You walk out of the apartment and down the stair and pick up a morning paper
  4218. >You flip it open and start to read it as you ascend the stairs
  4219. >Adorning the front page is news about ponies from around the world
  4220. >It is nice to see such uplifting news there instead of the usual fare
  4221. >A piece of news catches your eye
  4222. >A word from Mayor Mare
  4223. >She first addresses the concerns about the missing princesses
  4224. >She then goes on to state about the possibility of going home
  4225. >As the paper quotes ‘With no princesses in sight and out unicorns unable to determine source of what brought us here, I am urging the ponies to beginning to settle in for a longer stay on Earth.’
  4226. >’This includes a more permanent living and work.’
  4227. >You fold the paper up and soak in the news
  4228. >Permanent
  4229. >They must know something they aren’t telling us, it’s only been a week and they are calling for ponies to settle down…
  4230. >This isn’t the first time that the ones in power have hidden something for the public’s own good.
  4231. >If you had to guess, maybe they did discover something…
  4232. >Maybe something connecting the missing princesses to the event…
  4233. >Maybe the discovery that there is no way back to Equestria…
  4234. >The thoughts spin in your mind you barely notice you are standing in front of your door
  4235. >You have yet to even think about how to tell Rose
  4236. >Easy enough, just tell her the truth
  4237. >She has handled this fairly well
  4238. >You just need to discuss with her getting a job.
  4239. >And then when she is better off, you can discuss a more permanent living arrangement
  4240. >You flash back to Rose crying on your shoulder
  4241. >Asking you what would happen if they were stuck here
  4242. >How you assured her you would cross that bridge when it came to it.
  4243. >Well here is that bridge.
  4244. >Now it is time to cross it
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  4251. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt5:The Morning Revelation  DakanSat Sep 15 21:10:24 2012No.4492974
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  4253. Quoted by: >>4492979
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  4255.  
  4256.  >>4492970
  4257. >You take a deep breath and enter into the apartment
  4258. >Rose is still lying on the couch, but it looks like she tried to eat some of the food on the plate
  4259. >She seems to perk up when you enter though
  4260. >”Looks like you have at least eaten something.”
  4261. >She smiles and looks at the food again
  4262. “Yes, I still feel a bit queasy, but the food tasted great.”
  4263. “I think the coffee is helping.”
  4264. >You notice that the cup of coffee is now empty
  4265. >”I’ll get you another cup”
  4266. >You quickly pick up the empty cup and refill it.
  4267. >You hand it back to Rose and sit down next to here on the couch
  4268. >She takes a sip and looks at the paper in your hand
  4269. “Anything new?”
  4270. >You look down at the paper
  4271. >”Yes, there is actually something that we need to discuss”
  4272. >She looks at you worried
  4273. “Is there something wrong?”
  4274. >”Nothing is wrong, there is just something we need to discuss”
  4275. >She looks at you patiently
  4276. >You take a deep breath and explain to her what you read in the paper
  4277. >She quietly listens to you as you tell her about what the paper said
  4278. >And then about what you think might be going on behind the scenes
  4279. >Her expression is unchanged
  4280. >When you finished, she only nods
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  4287. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt5:The Morning Revelation  DakanSat Sep 15 21:11:04 2012No.4492979
  4288.  
  4289. Quoted by: >>4492985
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  4291.  
  4292.  >>4492974
  4293. >”Rose, I’m going to help you find a job. And then, we shall find somewhere for you to stay on a longer basis.”
  4294. >At this she turns away from you.
  4295. “I’m going to take a shower.”
  4296. >She gets up and goes into the bathroom; leaving you puzzled on the couch
  4297. >You hear the water start and wait for the singing to begin
  4298. >No song reaches your ears
  4299. >Only the sounds of heart break
  4300. >Over the sound of falling water comes the quiet sound of tears
  4301. >Maybe she couldn’t handle it
  4302. >No, she was perfectly fine about taking the news.
  4303. >There was something else
  4304. >You go over what you said in your mind one more time.
  4305. >You will help her find a job and a place of living
  4306. >How can that be bad?
  4307. >Your puzzlement continues echoed only by the hollow sound of falling tears
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  4314. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt5:The Morning Revelation  DakanSat Sep 15 21:12:24 2012No.4492985
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  4316. Quoted by: >>4492989
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  4319.  >>4492979
  4320. >You pick up the newspaper again and flip to the want ads
  4321. >Let’s see, all the normal job offerings…
  4322. >New paperboy needed, dog walker, a cook for a local diner, florist needed…
  4323. >Wait go back
  4324. >Florist…
  4325. >Rose is great with flowers!
  4326. >You quickly rip the add out of the paper and place it off to the side
  4327. >You slowly hear the crying subside and the sound of water falling quickly stops
  4328. >Rose walks out of the bathroom and sits down next to you.
  4329. >”Good news, I found a job you would be perfect at.”
  4330. >”It’s a job at a local floral shop; it’s not far from the apartment either.”
  4331. >She stares blankly at you.
  4332. “That nice.”
  4333. >The coldness in her voice cuts through you like a hot knife through butter
  4334. >Ok, now you know it is something you said.
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  4341. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch2 Pt5:The Morning Revelation  DakanSat Sep 15 21:13:04 2012No.4492989
  4342.  
  4343. Quoted by: >>4493011
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  4345.  
  4346.  >>4492985
  4347. >Before you can even ask about what might be wrong she is already on the move
  4348. >She grabs the piece of paper from you hand with her mouth and trots over to the coat rack
  4349. >She start to put on her jacket but she has trouble getting it on
  4350. >You move over to her to give her a hand with zipping it up
  4351. >She moves away from you as you approach
  4352. “Don’t worry about me; I can handle it.”
  4353. >Wow, sadness and anger
  4354. >You really fucked up.
  4355. >You try to stop her from leaving
  4356. >But she rushes from out of the door
  4357. >You hope in your head that she will return
  4358. >Why wouldn’t she, this is where she is staying after all…
  4359. >Ding, Ding, Ding…
  4360. >Yeah, you’re an idiot.
  4361. >She has to return
  4362. >And when she does you’ll explain everything.
  4363. >Why are you so worried though…?
  4364. >She is just an animal
  4365. >She is just a pony
  4366. >She is just a friend
  4367. >She is just…
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  4374. DakanSat Sep 15 21:17:03 2012No.4493011
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  4376. Quoted by: >>4493211 >>4493258 >>4494550 >>4495981
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  4379.  >>4492989
  4380. End of Part 5
  4381. End of Chapter 2
  4382.  
  4383. ok, so wow. That was probably some of the best writing I think I have done. I am really eager to get to chapter 3. Which will be up tommorow morning.
  4384.  
  4385. Next time on the Roseluck Chronicles
  4386. >rape
  4387. Deception!
  4388. Inception
  4389. and War...
  4390. Wait a minute that can't be right...
  4391.  
  4392. Here we go!
  4393. Next Time!
  4394. It's Halloween!
  4395. Feelings revealed!
  4396. And the Future begins to unfold...
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  4398. <Insert signature here>
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  4405. AnonymousSat Sep 15 21:52:23 2012No.4493211
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  4407. Quoted by: >>4493225
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  4410.  >>4489585
  4411. >>4493011
  4412.  
  4413. Fantastic work so far, and I would agree it is some of your finest work to date.
  4414.  
  4415. I was a little worried after the premature romantic feelings that you might shy away from romance altogether but its nice to see it slowly working its way back in and feeling very natural.
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  4422. DakanSat Sep 15 21:57:23 2012No.4493225
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  4427.  >>4493211
  4428. You never had to worry about me shying away all together...
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  4430. I just realized that I showed my hand to quickly. I think the correction is going well so far. I feared that I had permenatly fucked my story though. I'm glad to see that it is still enjoyable
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  4437. AnonymousSat Sep 15 22:02:43 2012No.4493258
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  4440.  >>4493011
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  4442. You are amazing.
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  4449. AnonymousSat Sep 15 23:02:43 2012No.4493656
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  4452.  >>4493225
  4453. I for one didn't mind the cards being flashed that quickly. I can see somebody in such a surreal situation having an equally strange emotional reaction, but oh well. I certainly wouldn't say it could permanently fuck a story though just create an awkward part.
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  4460. A Simple Wish  DakanSat Sep 15 23:33:05 2012No.4493907
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  4463.  Hey all can't sleep. Im not going to work on chapter 3 until tommorow, but since I can't sleep Im going to write something. The story that follow is something I was thinking about writing in the future. But i guess you can call this a teaser for now. I call the following A Simple Wish.
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  4465. >Night had fallen accross the land of Equestria
  4466. >Lyra once again stares off into the night sky
  4467. >Her thoughts of far away land and different creatures
  4468. >Her thoughts are of humans
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  4470. >Worlds away underneath a simular sky
  4471. >Mathew stares into the blackness of space
  4472. >His thoughts are along the same lines of Lyras
  4473. >Visions of ponies and friendship dances through this Brony's head
  4474.  
  4475. >This is a dangerous night to stare into the sky
  4476.  
  4477. >Lyra continues to stare far into the distance
  4478. >She wishes humans were real
  4479. >She wishes to live with them and experience their world
  4480. >She knows they are real, out there somewhere.
  4481. >She just wishes to be with them, instead of here.
  4482.  
  4483. >Back on Earth, mathews thoughts mirror Lyras
  4484. >He wishes for a pony friend
  4485. >He wishes for magic and friendship
  4486. >He too knows that ponies are real, somewhere out there.
  4487.  
  4488. >This night is a dangerous night for such wishes
  4489.  
  4490. >In the sky of both worlds a shooting star appears
  4491. >two indviduals cloes their eyes and make a wish
  4492. >it is a simple wish
  4493. >"I wish I could live in the world of humans"
  4494. >"I wish I could have a pony friend"
  4495.  
  4496. >It is very dangerous to make such simples wishes
  4497. >Becareful what you wish for
  4498. >Because sometimes
  4499. >Wishes come true...
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  4509.  >>4493011
  4510. Man Roseluck is favorite background pony since the moment i saw her, keep the good jo
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  4517. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYSun Sep 16 04:04:56 2012No.4495981
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  4520.  >>4493011
  4521. great work ! and nice story twist ! i like it!
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  4528. AnonymousSun Sep 16 04:47:36 2012No.4496532
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  4558. AnonymousSun Sep 16 05:26:57 2012No.4497254
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  4563.  We've survived the great page deletion exodus.
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  4580. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYSun Sep 16 05:52:16 2012No.4497792
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  4584. bump to be sure
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  4591. Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth  Mr. blueSun Sep 16 06:06:56 2012No.4498129
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  4594. Quoted by: >>4498137
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  4596.  
  4597.  Time for PiE! Got a little bit written and then a prize at the end. Here we go!
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  4599.  
  4600. “Don’t act so disappointed Pillow, I was only messing with you. I didn’t think you’d actually ‘like’ looking at socks. I didn’t know you were like ‘that’.”
  4601. > “I’m not! I am not Strawberry! ...They’re just so—”
  4602. “Yeah, we know Pillow.” Emily giggles. “The cutie marks says it all.”
  4603. > “It’s not like I’d wear those things in public anyway. I just like human made fabrics.”
  4604. >I’m no ‘tail lifter’.
  4605. >Unlike some ponies in my family.
  4606. >Stupid cousin Cross Stitch. Slut.
  4607. >What did he even see in her anyway...
  4608. >Beside, socks wouldn’t look nearly so ‘provocative’ with something like that dress Strawberry’s wearing.
  4609. >They’re only slutty if that’s all you’re wearing. That’s what Stitch always said at least.
  4610. >Gah! No, no more thinking about her. She makes me so angry!
  4611. >I could just... I don’t know what, but it wouldn’t be very nice.
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  4618. Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth  Mr. blueSun Sep 16 06:07:36 2012No.4498137
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  4623.  >>4498129
  4624. >We were done shopping and moved to checkout.
  4625. >Strawberry said not to worry about paying her back when I got my bits exchanged for American money. That was real nice of her.
  4626. >Ugh! That checkout line!
  4627. >It looked so short with only humans waiting in it, but you can fit so many humans in one space.
  4628. >That many ponies inf lines would have already stretched across the store
  4629. >It took forever!
  4630. >Then we had to go outside to the parking lot again.
  4631. >They kept telling me not to be afraid because the cars had to stop at the crosswalk in front of the doors no matter what.
  4632. >But those things are scary when they’re moving!
  4633. >They just growl like some kind of monster and they could trample a pony easily, even at their slower speeds.
  4634. >Riding in them isn’t so bad though. They can move super fast but aren’t stuck on a track or anything.
  4635. >I liked Emily’s car though. It’s a lot smaller than any others I’ve seen, and it’s such a pretty light blue color.
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  4642. Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth  Mr. blueSun Sep 16 06:07:37 2012No.4498146
  4643.  
  4644. Quoted by: >>4498168
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  4647.  >>4498137
  4648. >Strawberry was telling me on the ride over about all the complicated rules they made so the cars can move so fast without crashing.
  4649. >They’ll stay in nice neat lanes, flash some lights to move to other lanes or turn, there were signs everywhere saying so many things that you had to obey, and there were the red lights that turned on when you have to wait your turn so others could drive in front of you.
  4650. >There was so much, I don’t think I could ever learn enough to drive myself.
  4651. >Strawberry said very few ponies drive anyway, especially in the city, and especially pegasi.
  4652. >The three of us are getting in the car again. Berry opened the door for me because I couldn’t figure it out.
  4653. >How was I supposed to know that you needed to lift that tiny metal handle with your hoof? I guess it makes more sense for human hands.
  4654. >The same goes for the seatbelts. They are so uncomfortable, but Emily said she’d have to pay a fine if anyone in her car didn’t have one.
  4655. >How would they even know that anyway?
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  4662. Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth  Mr. blueSun Sep 16 06:08:56 2012No.4498168
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  4664. Quoted by: >>4498177
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  4667.  >>4498146
  4668. >As soon as I get in I dig through the bags for my new sweater and hoodie.
  4669. >I had to take them off until we bought them and it’s a little chilly outside, but I don’t need an excuse.
  4670. >I tear their tags off with my teeth and slip them on.
  4671. >Much better. I almost feel safer with them on somehow.
  4672. >I don’t know.
  4673. >It’s probably a psychological thing.
  4674. >Like that blanket that I carried everywhere when I was a little filly.
  4675. >Whatever happened to Blankey? I bet mom threw her away.
  4676. >She always complained about me dragging the thing across the ground.
  4677. >I lean back in the seat and hug my forelegs again.
  4678. >So soft.
  4679. > “So where are we going now?”
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  4686. Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth  Mr. blueSun Sep 16 06:08:36 2012No.4498177
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  4688. Quoted by: >>4498186
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  4691.  >>4498168
  4692. “Well Emily has plans later so she can’t drive us around all day. So I was planning on keeping things simple for today if that’s fine. I was thinking we’d go out to eat and then head back to my place.”
  4693. > Berry looks back at me for confirmation and I just nod. I was already feeling overwhelmed just watching everything fly by the window of the car.
  4694. >I’d also forgotten about my lunch back at the station. I just left it there when I saw Strawberry.
  4695. “So what were you thinking then?” Emily asks.
  4696. “How about that vegan place Becki’s been talking about?”
  4697. “Yeah, she took me there. It’s alright I guess. Their only selling point is ‘being vegan’ though. They’re really sort of bland.”
  4698. “I guess I should have assumed that with Becki. I was just worried about Casey.”
  4699. >She looks back at me.
  4700. “I’m used to it but I’m not sure how you are around the smell of meat. I’ve known some ponies to be a little touchy about it, and this is your first day here.”
  4701. > “Oh. Umm. I guess I’ll be fine.” Just as long as I don’t have to eat any.
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  4708. Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth  Mr. blueSun Sep 16 06:09:36 2012No.4498186
  4709.  
  4710. Quoted by: >>4498194
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  4712.  
  4713.  >>4498177
  4714. >I don’t know if I’m just being a pushover or if I’m actually ok with it.
  4715. >Hey! I already decided I wouldn’t judge anypo-anyone. If humans have an... interesting diet then that's fine! They don’t eat hay right? I bet they’d feel just as weird being in an Equestrian restaurant.
  4716. >Except hay isn’t part of an animal...
  4717. >No. I can handle it. I’ve got my new security sweater to keep me safe right? I had Blankey to hide from the monster humans under my bed as a filly.
  4718. >This is just like that except they’re not really monsters anymore.
  4719. >Because that was racist Granny.
  4720. >Shame on you. You shouldn’t tell those horrible stories to impressionable little pagasus fillies who are afraid of the dark.
  4721. “So how does Chinese sound?” Strawberry asks, looking back and forth between the two of us.
  4722. > Emily just shrugs.
  4723. > I have no idea what that is. It might be good if Berry likes it. I’m in the mood for something else though.
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  4730. Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth  Mr. blueSun Sep 16 06:09:17 2012No.4498194
  4731.  
  4732. Quoted by: >>4498199
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  4734.  
  4735.  >>4498186
  4736. > “Um, would it be fine if we got some pizza?”
  4737. >I read a thing about Chicago when I was trying to decide on coming here. It said something about pizza I think. No wait, was that another city? I don’t know. They all sound the same sometimes.
  4738. “Really? Pizza?” Berry looks at my skeptically.
  4739. > What? It’s not like they can put meat on something as good as pizza right?
  4740. “Actually I’m feeling in the mood for pizza too.” Emily says.
  4741. “You sure that’s what you want Casey?” Berry asks.
  4742. > “Yeah. I like pizza.”
  4743. “Alright then. Pizza it is. You know is area better than me Em, but pick something pony friendly.”
  4744. > “There are places that aren’t friendly to ponies?”
  4745. “What? No, well yes, I mean,” Berry facehoofed and turned to look at me. “I meant with a pony friendly ‘menu’ Casey, I don’t know any pizza places that hate ponies. A lot of them love hiring pegasi for deliveries. There are people that don’t like ponies, just like how there are ponies that don’t like humans, but most of both are very friendly together. So don’t worry about it, alright?”
  4746. >”Alright Berry.”
  4747. “And some ponies and humans,” Emily said flashing Strawberry a sinister grin, “are a little more ‘friendly’ together than others.”
  4748. >I try not to giggle. I’m not sure if I should laugh at that, but it is funny.
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  4755. Pillow Case - She Likes Cloth  Mr. blueSun Sep 16 06:10:56 2012No.4498199
  4756.  
  4757. Quoted by: >>4498292
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  4759.  
  4760.  >>4498194
  4761. >Berry’s getting all flustered now. Awww. How does she even get more red than that anyway? That’s just making me laugh harder.
  4762. “not you too Pillow.” Strawberry says sounding wounded.
  4763. > “Sorry Berry.”
  4764. “She’s right Casey, you shouldn’t laugh at ponies just because they keep their roommates up all night shouting their boyfriend’s name.”
  4765. “ALRIGHT THAT’S-that’s quite enough.” Strawberry’s voice gets really high when she’s upset.
  4766. >I giggle some more for that.
  4767. >Wait. Why was she shouting his na-OMIGOSH TOO MUCH INFORMATION EMILY!
  4768. >Sweet Celestia I need some brain bleach or something.
  4769. >Bad thoughts! Bad thoughts! >Not That There Is Anything Bad, Wrong, OrImmoral About What Two Sentient Adults Of Any Race Do Together In The Privacy Of Their Homes Of Their Own Volition.
  4770. >Or Even Showing A Small Amount Of Affection In Public As Any More ‘Traditional Couple Would.
  4771. >Nice save there Pillow Case. Nice save. Fight the racism.
  4772. >I thump my head lightly against the glass window stare out at the city speed by.
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  4779. Mr. blueSun Sep 16 06:16:56 2012No.4498292
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  4782. Quoted by: >>4500067 >>4509772
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  4785.  >>4498199
  4786. And that's all I've got for now, all except this thing I drew yesterday. I feel accomplished for once. Yay me.
  4787.  
  4788. Here's the pastebin of everything so far:
  4789. http://pastebin.com/HtNbiz2s
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  4796. AnonymousSun Sep 16 07:11:17 2012No.4499079
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  4806. Mr. BlueSun Sep 16 08:21:36 2012No.4500021
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  4816. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYSun Sep 16 08:23:16 2012No.4500067
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  4819.  >>4498292
  4820. bookmarked, thank you Mr Blue !
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  4827. AnonymousSun Sep 16 08:39:55 2012No.4500300
  4828.  
  4829. Quoted by: >>4500385 >>4501180 >>4502123
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  4831.  
  4832.  OK guys, before I start work on my story, I want you guys to tell me what you think of my idea.
  4833.  
  4834. Basically Earth and Equestria's planet ( Equestia is just a country, all other nations gotta come with it) merge into one, including the sun and the moon. When this happens there is great chaos, riots, food supplies running low, massacre's committed by everyone, alliances and nations formed, discord has a ball etc. But surely the most peculiar thing is that some , not all, humans gain magical abilities and some, not all ponies adopt human charactertistics like standing upright and hands. Eventually things begin to stabilize and a new world starts to emerge.
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  4841. AnonymousSun Sep 16 08:44:57 2012No.4500385
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  4843. Quoted by: >>4500835
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  4846.  >>4500300
  4847. Anyone? Or have I arrived too late?
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  4854. Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:10:17 2012No.4500835
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  4856. Quoted by: >>4501045
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  4859.  >>4500385
  4860. It sounds like a good plot. That part about ponies with hands sounds really weird, though.
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  4867. AnonymousSun Sep 16 09:23:16 2012No.4501045
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  4869. Quoted by: >>4501114
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  4872.  >>4500835
  4873. Weird in a bad way?
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  4880. Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:28:16 2012No.4501114
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  4882. Quoted by: >>4501175
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  4885.  >>4501045
  4886. Hard to say. It sounds like you're essentially making Anthro ponies.
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  4893. AnonymousSun Sep 16 09:31:36 2012No.4501175
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  4895. Quoted by: >>4501215
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  4898.  >>4501114
  4899. oh god I wanna avoid that. I'll scrap hands. How about uncontrolled magic runs rampant across the lands?
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  4906. AnonymousSun Sep 16 09:31:16 2012No.4501180
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  4908. Quoted by: >>4501313 >>4501436
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  4911.  >>4500300
  4912. Sounds pretty grim at the start. Although is that the background of the plot and you plan to start after things begin to stabilize? Like will it begin in the aftermath or will you go into detail on this game-changing incident? Either way could be worth a story.
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  4919. Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:33:37 2012No.4501215
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  4925.  >>4501175
  4926. Now you're talking. Magic is always fun.
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  4933. AnonymousSun Sep 16 09:38:56 2012No.4501313
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  4936.  >>4501180
  4937. Starts off in Times Square, things start appearing, things start to go belly up.
  4938.  
  4939. Then it switches to one year later. With a multi species group of bewildered survivors making their way to the emerging civilisations. Here they go into details bout what happened to the world.
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  4946. Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:41:37 2012No.4501354
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  4950. Haha! Time to post!
  4951.  
  4952. I've been REALLY sick these past few days and I hope that doesn't show in my writing. Anyways, enjoy.
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  4959. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:41:16 2012No.4501361
  4960.  
  4961. Quoted by: >>4501373
  4962.  
  4963.  
  4964.  >The car ride home was embarrassingly uneventful.
  4965. >John kept looking like he was about to ask you something, only to withdraw when you two made eye contact.
  4966. >You've made it back to the apartment building and you're helping John with his groceries.
  4967. >Even though he insists he can take all of the bags in one trip, you take one in your mouth anyways.
  4968. >You help John store his food away, and move towards his door.
  4969. "I guess this is a good-bye, John."
  4970. >"Don't be like that. We'll see each other around."
  4971. >Yeah, on our way out in the morning...
  4972. "Okay."
  4973. >You hang your head, and twist the knob on the door.
  4974. "Before I go, is there anything you want to tell me?"
  4975. >He hesitates briefly before shaking his head.
  4976. "Okay....bye."
  4977. >"Bye, Pillow."
  4978. >You exit John's apartment and enter your own with a jump onto your couch.
  4979. >You let out a disappointed sigh while hugging one of your couch pillows.
  4980. "I miss him already..."
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  4987. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:42:56 2012No.4501373
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  4989. Quoted by: >>4501384
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  4991.  
  4992.  >>4501361
  4993. >You don't have a lot of friends.
  4994. >Well, you did, but they all found jobs with their special talents and opted for warmer locations when they moved to Earth.
  4995. >And then when you moved to Earth, all of the humans you made friends with moved to Equestria.
  4996. >They wanted you to come back with them at first, but eventually they realized the allure of a whole new dimension.
  4997. >Maybe one day you'll go back.
  4998. >Michigan weather sucks.
  4999. >You're currently living off the benevolence of the human government, everyp0ny receives a monthly check if they've recently moved between worlds for three years on their first move.
  5000. >It's your first year.
  5001. >It was difficult working the whole money thing out, but after humans learned that Unicorn magic could power their machines and solve something called an "energy crisis", they were practically kissing Celestia's hooves.
  5002. >In exchange, you and other new ponies get lods of mone for a few years.
  5003. >You don't get much, but it's enough to live off of.
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  5010. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:42:38 2012No.4501384
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  5012. Quoted by: >>4501394
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  5015.  >>4501373
  5016. >A few knocks on your door gain your attention.
  5017. >You poke your head over the couch, and take a deep breath.
  5018. >You launch yourself over to it with speed that could rival a Wonderbolt's, knocking your sofa over and sending papers on your table flying in the air.
  5019. >Whipping open the door reveals John, more nervous than you've ever seen him.
  5020. >OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHYMYGOSH
  5021. >"Hey, Pillow, uh, how's it going?"
  5022. "GREAT JOHN HOW ARE YOU!?"
  5023. >Smooth.
  5024. >He seems a bit taken back by your eagerness, but continues on anyways.
  5025. >"You know, I was thinking, you're new to Earth, right?"
  5026. "Yeah!"
  5027. >"So I figured I could show you around the city sometime."
  5028. "Like...on a date?"
  5029. >"Well, it doesn't have to be-"
  5030. "IT'S A DATE!"
  5031. >Did you just say that out loud?
  5032. >John stares at you while blood rushes to your cheeks.
  5033. "I dunno. I'm a pretty busy mare so-"
  5034. >"Oh, alright. Well I'll see you around." He begins to turn back to his apartment.
  5035. "NOWAIT"
  5036. >You wrap your hooves around his arm and pull him back to your door.
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  5043. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:43:38 2012No.4501394
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  5045. Quoted by: >>4501402
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  5048.  >>4501384
  5049. "I would love to."
  5050. >"You sure?"
  5051. "Yes! Of course! When?!"
  5052. >"This weekend, Saturday."
  5053. "Great! We'll have tons of fun!"
  5054. >"I sure hope we do. I'll see you then. If you need anything, just knock on my door."
  5055. "Okay!"
  5056. >"Don't worry about money, I'll pay for everything. See you tomorrow!" He opens his door and waves good-bye through that last part.
  5057. "You too!"
  5058. >You too. Really?
  5059. >You shut your door and facehoof.
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  5066. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:43:16 2012No.4501402
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  5068. Quoted by: >>4501424
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  5071.  >>4501394
  5072. >Saturday greets you with a rude awakening, sunlight burns through your eyelids before being hidden by the clouds in the sky.
  5073. >But you're not going to let that get you down, you're spending the day with John!
  5074. >As you try to rise out of bed, your sheets wrap around your back leg and trip you to the floor.
  5075. >Sweet Celestia that hurt.
  5076. >You flutter back to your hooves and rub your aching face on your way to the bathroom.
  5077. >A glance at the mirror and an exhale into your hoof reveals your mane is a mess and your morning breath is so bad the entire city can probably smell it.
  5078. >You brush your teeth and hop in the shower.
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  5085. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:44:36 2012No.4501424
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  5087. Quoted by: >>4501444
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  5089.  
  5090.  >>4501402
  5091. >With your morning routine done, you exit the bathroom with a wet mane
  5092. >If only John could see you now, he'd probably buck you right there.
  5093. >You know you would.
  5094. >You sit down on your couch and flick through the channels on your television, only listening to the program briefly before switching to the next channel.
  5095. >"The other girls must be crazy if they think they're gonna beat me honey boo-boo chiiiiild-"
  5096. >*click*
  5097. >"Aaaaaaaand, we're back! Welcome to Cooking with Carrot Top!"
  5098. >*click*
  5099. >"Police are in the process of tracking a suspected member of an organized drug cartel. Citizens are advised to be on the look out for suspicious activity."
  5100. >Hours pass as you burn daylight by watching television and being a lazy fat ass.
  5101. >Not your most productive day so far.
  5102. >You press the remote again and turn off the television.
  5103. >T.V sucks. When is John supposed to be here?
  5104. >Maybe you should just check up on him.
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  5111. BakalightSun Sep 16 09:45:36 2012No.4501436
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  5113. Quoted by: >>4501806
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  5116.  >>4501180
  5117. >>4501215
  5118. Well I've started writing this now. It will be first fore way into writing so be as harsh as you can when critiquing it, Hoefully I'll have it up by tormorrow. I'll be posting with this trip
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  5125. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:45:17 2012No.4501444
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  5127. Quoted by: >>4501451
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  5129.  
  5130.  >>4501424
  5131. >You throw on your sweater and exit your apartment, only to knock on John's.
  5132. >No answer.
  5133. >You knock again.
  5134. >Nothing.
  5135. >Is he asleep or something?
  5136. >It's 6 in the afternoon!
  5137. >Maybe you should find a way to burn time, he'll wake up sooner or later.
  5138. >Too bad. You're starving
  5139. >"What's going on, Pillow?"
  5140. >Speak of the devil, John just came up the stairs.
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  5147. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:46:17 2012No.4501451
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  5149. Quoted by: >>4501460
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  5151.  
  5152.  >>4501444
  5153. >He looks out of breath and he's sweating profusely.
  5154. >You bite your lower lip, control yourself you stupid pony!
  5155. "Were you out jogging or something?"
  5156. >"You could say that" He says in between breaths
  5157. >"So. Whatcha' doing at my door?"
  5158. "I was just wondering when you wanted to head out. You never gave me a specific time yesterday"
  5159. >He looks around nervously, like he's searching for something.
  5160. >"Yeah, we should leave now. Let me just go inside and get my car keys."
  5161. >He opens his door, but when you try to follow him inside he blocks you.
  5162. >"Uh, sorry. You can't come in. I'll be out in a second, promise."
  5163. >What is he trying to hide?
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  5170. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:46:56 2012No.4501460
  5171.  
  5172. Quoted by: >>4501470
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  5175.  >>4501451
  5176. >Whatever, he takes a little while than you expected but he's out in a few minutes.
  5177. >"Alright. Let's go."
  5178. >As you and John descend the stairs, you press him a little bit.
  5179. "What took you so long? It's rude to keep a mare waiting."
  5180. >"Funny."
  5181. >You exit the apartment building and slide into John's car.
  5182. >Police sirens echo off of the buildings from the distance and John accelerates before you can even buckle up.
  5183. "Whoa there, what's the rush?"
  5184. >"I just don't want to waste time. That's all."
  5185. >That sounds a little fishy to you, something's off here.
  5186. >Come to think of it, John's been acting very suspicious lately.
  5187. >You'll have to keep an eye on him today.
  5188. "So, where are we headed?"
  5189. >"I haven't decided officially, but I have more than a few places in mind."
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  5196. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:47:36 2012No.4501470
  5197.  
  5198. Quoted by: >>4501477
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  5200.  
  5201.  >>4501460
  5202. >"We could head to a place called Comedy Castle. They do Stand-Up and it's usually a hit or miss but their food is fine."
  5203. >That actually sounds pretty neat.
  5204. >After that, I was thinking we could do the River-walk."
  5205. "The River-walk?"
  5206. >"The River-walk is one of the biggest attractions in downtown Detroit and is one of my favorite things about it. The walk way starts at around Cobo and goes all the way down a few miles to Rivard Park."
  5207. >You could use a walk. You feel like a vegetable after your day so far.
  5208. "Sounds great. Especially that Comedy Castle place, I've never seen human comedy."
  5209.  
  5210.  
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  5214.  
  5215. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:47:17 2012No.4501477
  5216.  
  5217. Quoted by: >>4501488
  5218.  
  5219.  
  5220.  >>4501470
  5221. >Okay. This isn't what you were expecting.
  5222. >First of all, it's only the first comedian and he's failing miserably.
  5223. >He's an Earth Pony and a mumbler. His cutie mark is a robot, but you don't need that to know comedy is NOT his special talent. His face is covered in acne, even though he appears to be an adult. The rest of the audience is getting bored and hungry because the food hasn't come out yet.
  5224. >Second, this place isn't even a castle!
  5225. >Not like you were expecting something reminiscent of Canterlot or anything.
  5226. >John seems to be enjoying himself, though.
  5227. >"Oh man, this is good."
  5228. "What are you talking about? He's stuttering and we can hardly hear him."
  5229. >"I know! Listen, there's two ways to enjoy Stand up. Either laugh because they're great at what they do, or laugh because they're failing miserably."
  5230.  
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  5235.  
  5236. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:48:56 2012No.4501488
  5237.  
  5238. Quoted by: >>4501510
  5239.  
  5240.  
  5241.  >>4501477
  5242. >"And, uh, uh, anyone out here ever-"
  5243. >The audience starts to boo him off stage, and he begins to shuffle his way off before bumping into one of the waitresses and spilling the tray of spaghetti she was carrying.
  5244. >Pasta flies everywhere, and the audience laughs for the first time tonight.
  5245. >You and John can barely control your laughter, that was the funniest thing you've ever seen.
  5246. >"Glad to see you two are having fun."
  5247. >Oh, it's the waiter. She snuck up on you.
  5248. >She sets down your food and John chips in.
  5249. >"Well now we are! Let's hope the next the one is just as good."
  5250. >"The next one is a regular here. I'm sure you'll love him."
  5251. >The host comes on stage carrying the microphone and addresses the audience.
  5252. >"Alright folks, I apologize for that one. I guess you could say he had too much on his plate to handle!"
  5253. >This is going to be a long night.
  5254.  
  5255.  
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  5257.  
  5258. >>
  5259.  
  5260. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:49:37 2012No.4501510
  5261.  
  5262. Quoted by: >>4501524
  5263.  
  5264.  
  5265.  >>4501488
  5266. >About 7 mediocre comedians later, the last one for the night is preparing to come on.
  5267. >Most of the audience has left by now. You can't blame them. You, John, and another small group of ponies and humans on the other side of the room are the only ones left now.
  5268. >You and John have finished your food, and are discussing leaving to spend more time walking.
  5269. >You can't wait, you're definitely going to make a move on John.
  5270. >If he makes a move on you first? Oh Luna you'll be the happiest pony alive!
  5271. >This is going to be THE. BEST. NIGHT. EVER.
  5272. >The host comes on stage again and speaks up.
  5273. >"Alright people and ponies, we've had a good night so far and it's time for our final act. He signed up just about half an hour ago so technically I'm not supposed to let him perform, but he made me an offer I just couldn't refuse!"
  5274. >With that, the host makes his way off stage while counting a huge wad of cash.
  5275.  
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  5280.  
  5281. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:50:16 2012No.4501524
  5282.  
  5283. Quoted by: >>4501534
  5284.  
  5285.  
  5286.  >>4501510
  5287. >A hulk of a man wearing an overcoat and a hat that covers his face saunters on stage and turns out to the small audience.
  5288. >He immediately makes eye contact with you and John.
  5289. >"Hope you all are having a good time out here tonight. Because it's about to get even better!" His voice sounds as deep as the ocean, and at the same time it's as if he's speaking through a fan.
  5290. >You have a bad feeling about this...
  5291. >Even John is looking at you worriedly.
  5292. >"Especially our lovely couple here." He motions his hand towards you two.
  5293. >You try to cover your flushed face with your hoof, and the man speaks up again.
  5294. >"Oh, come on now. Don't be shy. I thought such a mysterious, and more importantly, dangerous man would attract more of a hotblooded mate."
  5295. "Wait...what?"
  5296. >"Oh. You haven't told her?"
  5297. >The man looks at John, you do as well.
  5298. >"Pillow, we need to leave."
  5299.  
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  5304.  
  5305. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:50:56 2012No.4501534
  5306.  
  5307. Quoted by: >>4501541
  5308.  
  5309.  
  5310.  >>4501524
  5311. "What is he talking about?"
  5312. >"Pillow, we need to leave NOW."
  5313. >The crowd on the other side of the room stands up and begins to slowly make their way over to you.
  5314. >"Don't you all just HATE liars?" The man begins.
  5315. >John grabs you and moves for the door, but it won't budge.
  5316. >He whips around to face the group as you cower behind him.
  5317. >One of the ponies in the group launches himself at John only for him to kick the pony in the jaw with a loud crack.
  5318. >A human throws a punch at John, but he grabs him by the arm, turns, twists, and slams him down on one of the tables.
  5319. >"I know I do. They're the worst kind of men. Cheating, useless scumbags. The lot of them."
  5320.  
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  5325.  
  5326. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:51:37 2012No.4501541
  5327.  
  5328. Quoted by: >>4501590
  5329.  
  5330.  
  5331.  >>4501534
  5332. >"Do you know what happens when a liar dies, 'John'?"
  5333. >A different human grabs John from behind while a pony bucks him in the stomach.
  5334. >One of the humans grab make a grab for you. But you fly over his head and kick the human restricting John in the head, freeing him and knocking the human unconscious.
  5335. >John turns around with a kick in your direction, but instead his leg flies over your head and connects with the face of another human behind you.
  5336. >"They lie still."
  5337. >The man on stage reaches into his coat, and removes a pistol.
  5338. >One shot in John's leg is all it takes to bring him to the ground.
  5339. >You try to scream, but a cloth covering your mouth prevents you from doing so.
  5340. >Darkness fills your vision as a sweet antiseptic-like smell whisks you to sleep.
  5341.  
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  5346.  
  5347. AnonymousSun Sep 16 09:51:16 2012No.4501552
  5348.  
  5349. Quoted by: >>4501590 >>4501650
  5350.  
  5351.  
  5352.  So is this going to be a new thing now? The next Anon in Equestia?
  5353.  
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  5358.  
  5359. The Motor City  Mortimer MouseSun Sep 16 09:53:36 2012No.4501590
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  5362.  
  5363. >>4501541
  5364. </walloftext>
  5365.  
  5366. Man colds suck. That's all for now. Pastebin is here again in case anyone wants to catch up.
  5367. http://pastebin.com/u/Mortimer_Mouse
  5368.  
  5369. >>4501552
  5370. Yes.
  5371.  
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  5376.  
  5377. AnonymousSun Sep 16 09:57:36 2012No.4501650
  5378.  
  5379. Quoted by: >>4501829 >>4510210
  5380.  
  5381.  
  5382.  >>4501552
  5383. I wonder how the Old Guard ( AiE writers) are gonna take to us?
  5384.  
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  5389.  
  5390. AnonymousSun Sep 16 10:07:17 2012No.4501806
  5391.  
  5392. Quoted by: >>4501838
  5393.  
  5394.  
  5395.  >>4501436
  5396. >tormorrow
  5397. >Hoefully
  5398. You're off to a great start already!
  5399. Joking aside you have an interesting concept and threads like these should always be looking for new writers.
  5400.  
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  5405.  
  5406. AnonymousSun Sep 16 10:09:37 2012No.4501829
  5407.  
  5408. Quoted by: >>4501926
  5409.  
  5410.  
  5411.  >>4501650
  5412. Just asked them. They are indifferent to this rising phenomenon and will check us out when they have the time.
  5413.  
  5414. What where you expected some petty tribalism between threads or something?
  5415.  
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  5420.  
  5421. AnonymousSun Sep 16 10:10:16 2012No.4501838
  5422.  
  5423.  
  5424.  >>4501806
  5425. Oh fuck I'm sorry. I'm a wee drunk at the moment.
  5426.  
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  5431.  
  5432. AnonymousSun Sep 16 10:16:56 2012No.4501926
  5433.  
  5434.  
  5435.  >>4501829
  5436. Yes.
  5437.  
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  5442.  
  5443. AnonymousSun Sep 16 10:30:57 2012No.4502123
  5444.  
  5445. Quoted by: >>4502130 >>4502155 >>4502299
  5446.  
  5447.  
  5448.  >>4500300
  5449. I know a fic where Equestria is magically transported to earth in the middle of the paciffic. It takes place pre-WWI though and it's more about the ponies adapting their political structure and way of life to fit with the new world. It has Teddy Roosevelt in it.
  5450.  
  5451. Look up Interesting Times on Fimfiction if you're interested.
  5452.  
  5453. Anyway, concept sounds interesting, but might I suggest a something to make it more interesting? What if the humans didn't develop magic but rather the means to use it, like all human invention, being able to unlock it through tools of a kind. Maybe it didn't exist in their world before merging with another so not that it does a few are able to learn it through the use of a sort of compound made from the same material as a unicorn's horn. This will allow some fun things to pop up, like maybe this substance from their horns is just more concentrated there. Maybe all ponies have some amount of it in their bones, the pegasi using it to 'levitate' themselves enough for their tiny wings to carry them, and earth ponies maybe becoming more durable and stronger for it.
  5454.  
  5455. So then you can have the humans use it in similar ways. A concentrated amount used to made a staff or rod with which, after very much practice and much skill, one holding it could have the same magical potential of the average unicorn but unlike unicorns not taking naturally to it. It would also allow the other races to use magic too.
  5456.  
  5457. the ponies with hands thing takes the fun away from a lot of the thing though. It's more interesting when there are more physical differences between the various races involved in this sort of meeting of worlds. It's like how there's no good humanized mlp fanfiction because once they're more human the fun is gone, unless it's some kind of tf thing and you focus on that.
  5458.  
  5459. I could go on and on, I always have too many ideas.
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  5465.  
  5466. Mr. BlueSun Sep 16 10:30:57 2012No.4502130
  5467.  
  5468.  
  5469.  >>4502123
  5470. Forgot my name.
  5471.  
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  5476.  
  5477. Mr. BlueSun Sep 16 10:32:56 2012No.4502155
  5478.  
  5479. Quoted by: >>4502466
  5480.  
  5481.  
  5482.  >>4502123
  5483. Oh, and one more interesting thing to note.
  5484. The word Alicorn actually means 'the stuff that unicorns horns are made from' and its use for winged unicorns was incorrectly spread by certain bits of fantasy writing in more recent times.
  5485.  
  5486. Add that in to all the stuff I was saying.
  5487.  
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  5490.  
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  5492.  
  5493. BakalightSun Sep 16 10:41:16 2012No.4502299
  5494.  
  5495.  
  5496.  >>4502123
  5497. Thats actually a great idea. The ponies could have show some resentment and wonder to the concept. Resentment because it seems that anyone can use magic now and wonder over humanities ingenuity.
  5498.  
  5499. I was also thinking that a magical item could form a bond with its user. Kind of a DNA coded staff or rod.
  5500.  
  5501. The hands idea has been stripped from the story, dont worry.
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  5507.  
  5508. AnonymousSun Sep 16 10:51:16 2012No.4502466
  5509.  
  5510. Quoted by: >>4502767
  5511.  
  5512.  
  5513.  >>4502155
  5514. Wait... so what IS the proper term for a winged unicorn? The term "winged unicorn" sounds like it could get stale much faster than "Alicorn."
  5515.  
  5516. I know it's kind of off-topic, but I am very curious.
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  5522.  
  5523. BakalightSun Sep 16 10:52:16 2012No.4502471
  5524.  
  5525.  
  5526.  GTG and get some shut eye now. Thanks for the advice guys.
  5527.  
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  5532.  
  5533. Mr. BlueSun Sep 16 11:09:37 2012No.4502767
  5534.  
  5535.  
  5536.  >>4502466
  5537. Technically Pegasus is the name of a specific Winged Horse and not the name of winged horses in general.
  5538.  
  5539. and because there are differences in origin between the myths that both creatures come from there relaly is no true name for a combination of the two.
  5540.  
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  5545.  
  5546. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3:Nightmare NIght Pt1: Making Amends  DakanSun Sep 16 12:05:17 2012No.4503769
  5547.  
  5548. Quoted by: >>4503790
  5549.  
  5550.  
  5551.  What is that? Chapter 3 is ready now? Well why not!
  5552.  
  5553. >She came back
  5554. >Eventually
  5555. >It felt like an eternity to you
  5556. >But in reality it was only a few hours
  5557. >Immediately when she got back you tried to explain what you meant
  5558. >She was free to stay here with you as long as she liked
  5559. >Even if she wanted to live with you permanently
  5560. >For some reason though, you word seem to come awkwardly
  5561. >Your thoughts we half formed and rushed
  5562. >You half expected that she wouldn’t return
  5563. >As the words leave your mouth you know that she doesn’t believe what you say
  5564. >She is cold and distant as she tells you her experience at the floral shop
  5565. >How when she entered the shopkeeper had practically thrown the job at her
  5566. >How she had instantly fallen in love with the idea of a pony with the talent of a botanist working for her
  5567. >You never really understood subtext
  5568. >But you sense that she was trying to convey something more to you.
  5569.  
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  5574.  
  5575. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt1  DakanSun Sep 16 12:07:37 2012No.4503790
  5576.  
  5577. Quoted by: >>4503832 >>4503928
  5578.  
  5579.  
  5580.  >>4503769
  5581. >The next month passes by all too quickly
  5582. >Life feels like it is returning to normal
  5583. >As normal as life can be in a world full of ponies
  5584. >Although in about a month and a half since the arrival of ponies, life is pretty much the same
  5585. >It is pretty much accepted fact that the princesses may be gone forever
  5586. >It is also accepted that the ponies may be staying on earth.
  5587. >Many of the earth ponies have moved out of the Cities to the country, most starting small towns and farms
  5588. >The unicorns stay in the major cities finding comfort in the busy city life
  5589. >The pegasi had a harder time of it
  5590. >They finial had “some” control over the weather
  5591. >The were basically limited to moving clouds and causing them to rain
  5592. >The clouds still moved to the power of the winds though
  5593. >So when the pegasi tried to build a settlement in the clouds; it ended up drifting through the air on its own accord
  5594. >Pegasi became nomadic floating wherever their cloud cities would take them
  5595. >That is what the world calls normal now
  5596. >Things don’t seem to be returning to normal between you and rose though
  5597. >Between work, school and her job
  5598. >You and Rose barely talk to each other
  5599. >You work and school performance start to suffer from it
  5600. >The easy going feeling you had when rose first arrived on earth has all but disappeared
  5601. >You and rose slowly drift away from each other
  5602. >When you do talk; she often talks about moving out of the city, to the country where she can start a garden
  5603. >You know this is a constant reminder that one day she will try and leave you
  5604. >And sometimes, you wish she would leave.
  5605. >But then you remember, you promised you would help her through this
  5606. >You remember, that she is your friend
  5607. >A good friend…
  5608.  
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  5613.  
  5614. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt1  DakanSun Sep 16 12:09:16 2012No.4503832
  5615.  
  5616. Quoted by: >>4503964
  5617.  
  5618.  
  5619.  >>4503790
  5620. >These thoughts preoccupy you as you walk through the hallways of the university
  5621. >You have just finished you last class of the morning
  5622. >You have an hour or two before you need to be at work for the afternoon shift
  5623. >You shake your head trying to clear your thoughts
  5624. >Your eyes settle on a poster in front of you
  5625. >It’s a poster for the university Halloween party
  5626. >Dancing, booze, and music
  5627. >Special Guest DjP0n3
  5628. >Theme this year is Masquerade
  5629. >Hmmm…idea…
  5630. >It’s been awhile since you and Rose have been out together for some fun
  5631. >Maybe a night at a party would be good
  5632. >Maybe you can talk to her about what you said that day
  5633. >The party is this weekend, that doesn’t leave much time to get a suit together
  5634. >You hope that you can convince Rose to come…
  5635. >The rest of the day at work drags on way to long
  5636. >You leave work once again tired and frustrated
  5637. >But you remind yourself about the plan
  5638. >Convince Rose to come with you to the Halloween Party
  5639. >Shouldn’t be that difficult
  5640. >You swallow hard as you step out into the chilly evening air
  5641. >As least you hope not
  5642. >You find yourself, in the first time in a month, rushing home again
  5643.  
  5644.  
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  5648.  
  5649. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt1  DakanSun Sep 16 12:15:37 2012No.4503928
  5650.  
  5651.  
  5652.  >>4503790
  5653. >When you get back to the apartment Rose is not there
  5654. >It’s ok, you remind yourself, Rose said she was closing the shop today.
  5655. >You have time to throw something together for dinner.
  5656. >You quickly raid through the refrigerator and cabinets
  5657. >You come up with a salad, two apples, a half jar of sauce and spaghetti
  5658. >Why do you always have spaghetti on hand?
  5659. >Doesn’t matter…
  5660. >You set the water to boil and quickly make a small pre dinner salad with sliced apples as a side
  5661. >Ok now for the main course
  5662. >You boil the noddle and the sauce
  5663. >You make up to plates and place them on the table
  5664. >You hear the lock on the door click as you just finish up dinner
  5665. >In walks Rose and she looks exhausted
  5666. >She has gotten quite good at taking on and off her coat without your help
  5667. >She looks between you and the dinner you have prepared
  5668. “Evening Anon, are we having guests?”
  5669. >You shake your head
  5670. >”I just feel like have a nice dinner together”
  5671. >She cocks her head to the side and sighs
  5672. “Ok, let me get settled in and I will join you in a few minutes.”
  5673. >You sit down at the table and patiently wait for Rose
  5674.  
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  5679.  
  5680. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt1  DakanSun Sep 16 12:17:36 2012No.4503964
  5681.  
  5682. Quoted by: >>4503989
  5683.  
  5684.  
  5685.  >>4503832
  5686. >She appears from the bathroom a few minutes later and sits down across from you
  5687. >The immediately starts eating her salad
  5688. >Ok, so this is going to be a little tougher than you thought
  5689. >”So Rose, how was your day?”
  5690. >She looks up at you, almost surprised by the question
  5691. “It was fine, how was yours…”
  5692. >Good, you got her talking
  5693. >”It was boring as always, saw something interesting there…”
  5694. >Rose interrupts you before you can finish
  5695. “What is this about Anon?”
  5696. >You’re taken aback by the suddenness
  5697. >”What do you mean?”
  5698. >She looks at the food and back at you again
  5699. “A full dinner and talking like we used to…”
  5700. “We haven’t done this in a while, something is up.”
  5701. >You lower your head
  5702. >”I liked it when we talked and spent time together…”
  5703. >She stares at you
  5704. >”That why when I saw a poster at the University, I thought that we could try and get back to that.”
  5705. >She eyes you suspiciously
  5706.  
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  5711.  
  5712. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt1  DakanSun Sep 16 12:18:57 2012No.4503989
  5713.  
  5714. Quoted by: >>4504013 >>4509010
  5715.  
  5716.  
  5717.  >>4503964
  5718. “What poster?”
  5719. >You perk up a bit, you’ve caught her interest
  5720. >”The annual Halloween dance is this weekend. I thought maybe we could go together and have some fun.”
  5721. >She cocks her head at you again
  5722. “Aren’t Halloween and Nightmare Night the same concept?”
  5723. >You think back to everything that Rose told you about Equestria’s celebration
  5724. >”Yes, essentially everybody dresses up in costumes and goes door to door for free candy”
  5725. >She smiles slightly
  5726. “And you want to go out to a dance with me?”
  5727. >”Well yes, the theme is Masquerade; it’s dressing up in suits and dresses while wearing a mask to cover the face.”
  5728. >Her smile grows bigger
  5729. >”I know its short notice for a dress, but do you want to go?”
  5730. >She nods
  5731. “Don’t worry; I know the perfect pony to go to for a dress.”
  5732. >You smile back across the table
  5733. >”That’s great; it’ll be nice to go out as friends again.”
  5734. >You turn back to your meal
  5735. >You don’t notice her smile fade away from her face.
  5736. ”Right, as friends…”
  5737.  
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  5742.  
  5743. DakanSun Sep 16 12:20:17 2012No.4504013
  5744.  
  5745. Quoted by: >>4504491
  5746.  
  5747.  
  5748.  >>4503989
  5749. End of Part 1
  5750. Looks like things are off to kind of a Rocky start
  5751.  
  5752. Part 2 later today maybe
  5753.  
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  5759. AnonymousSun Sep 16 12:43:37 2012No.4504491
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  5762.  >>4504013
  5763. oh man you and pancake are the reason why i come to here, keep it up
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  5770. AnonymousSun Sep 16 17:04:16 2012No.4509010
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  5773.  >>4503989
  5774. Damn this anon is the most oblivious idiot ever. I know, I know, pacing etc.
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  5781. AnonymousSun Sep 16 17:13:16 2012No.4509143
  5782.  
  5783. Quoted by: >>4509167
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  5785.  
  5786.  Update on Ch3 Pt2, it's written! But storm knocked out the power. No power = no Internet (posting from my phone) so I'll post once I have power.
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  5793. DakanSun Sep 16 17:15:36 2012No.4509167
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  5796.  >>4509143
  5797. Forgot my name, grr
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  5804. AnonymousSun Sep 16 18:09:37 2012No.4509772
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  5808. >>4498292
  5809. Mr. Blue you're alive! Its great to see your story continued.
  5810.  
  5811. All these continuations from everybody over the past few days are fantastic.
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  5818. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt2:Before the Party  DakanSun Sep 16 18:51:17 2012No.4510138
  5819.  
  5820. Quoted by: >>4510160
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  5823.  Power is back on, more Roseluck!
  5824.  
  5825. >The rest of the week flashed by at lightning pace
  5826. >After that dinner you once again didn’t have time to talk to Rose
  5827. >But you spirits have been kept high by you Saturday night date
  5828. >Date…
  5829. >No not a date
  5830. >This is an outing between friends
  5831. >Nothing more…
  5832. >It is now noon on Saturday
  5833. >Rose had taken off early morning to get ready for tonight
  5834. >Doesn’t matter if you’re from Earth or Equestia, women take forever to get ready
  5835. >You have just left to pick up your suit and find a suitable mask
  5836. >As the clerk went to the back to find you’re suit you take time to look through their masks
  5837. >There are several masks out for the holiday
  5838. >Several are made to fit humans; some are made to fit the face of a pony
  5839. >As time goes on you notice more items have been made with ponies in mind
  5840. >As mask jumps out from the rest
  5841. >A simple green mask that only covered the area around the eyes
  5842. >You pick it up and hold it up to your face in front of a mirror
  5843. “It fits you nicely”
  5844. >The clerk has returned with your suit.
  5845. >You pay the man for the suit rental and for the mask
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  5852. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt2:Before the Party  DakanSun Sep 16 18:54:17 2012No.4510160
  5853.  
  5854. Quoted by: >>4510170
  5855.  
  5856.  
  5857.  >>4510138
  5858. >You return back to the apartment
  5859. >It’s still a few hours before you need even start getting ready
  5860. >You spend your time relaxing and thinking
  5861. >It’s going to be great to go out with Rose for the night
  5862. >Something nags at the back of your mind
  5863. >Your thoughts turn to Rose
  5864. >Even though you both have drifted apart for the past month, you still count her as a good friend
  5865. >She has a beautiful singing voice
  5866. >She always smells of roses
  5867. >A mystery you still don’t understand
  5868. >And yet you don’t really wish to know why
  5869. >That time she got drunk on appletinis and fell asleep on your lap
  5870. >How beautiful she looked laying there…
  5871. >The feeling you felt when you realized she might leave you…
  5872. >There is something more…
  5873. >No, there can’t be anything more there…
  5874. >She’s an animal
  5875. >She’s a Pony!
  5876. >She’s a friend!
  5877. >You feel a conflict building inside of you
  5878. >Every time you think about rose you can’t help but smile to yourself
  5879. >But, she’s a fucking pony! An animal! It is wrong on so many levels…
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  5886. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt2:Before the Party  DakanSun Sep 16 18:55:36 2012No.4510170
  5887.  
  5888. Quoted by: >>4510178
  5889.  
  5890.  
  5891.  >>4510160
  5892. >Who says…
  5893. >This makes you pause.
  5894. >How is she exactly different?
  5895. >Besides the obvious physical difference
  5896. >She still has feelings
  5897. >She when you look in her eyes you can see intelligence there
  5898. >The conflict bothers your mind so much you barely notice the passage of time
  5899. >Swearing to yourself, you rush to the bathroom to wash up before Rose gets back
  5900. >After a good shower you go and change quickly into your suit
  5901. >You just about finished changing when you hear the door open to the apartment
  5902. “Anon, are you in here?”
  5903. >”Yes, I’m just about finished getting dressed”
  5904. >You grab your mask and exit the bedroom
  5905. >As you lay your eyes on Rose you mouth drops open
  5906. >She is wearing an elegant light rose colored dress
  5907. >the bottom edge is adorned with roses
  5908. >It looks like her shoes are roses also; the stems wrap themselves up her legs
  5909. >Her mas covers the upper half of her face and is decorated with miniature roses
  5910. >She is beautiful
  5911. >She smiles and giggles at you
  5912. “I hope that mean that you like it.”
  5913. >You hardly can form words, and only manage a small nod
  5914. >She giggles again
  5915. “Rarity said that the dress may have that effect on you. I didn’t believe her until now.”
  5916. “Are you ready to go then Anon?”
  5917. >You finally find your voice.
  5918. >”Yes, I’m ready to go. You look beautiful Rose”
  5919. >She turns her head away from you again
  5920. >You come along side and place a hand on the back of her mane.
  5921. >”Let’s go we have a full night ahead of us”
  5922. >You lead her out the door and down to the streets
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  5929. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt2:Before the Party  DakanSun Sep 16 18:56:58 2012No.4510178
  5930.  
  5931. Quoted by: >>4510190
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  5933.  
  5934.  >>4510170
  5935. >The university would usually be a simple short walk from you apartment
  5936. >But considering the occasion and the type of dress you hail a taxi instead
  5937. >As you get into the taxi you notice that Rose has taken the seat very close to you
  5938. >The smell of roses fills the cab
  5939. >To you the smell has almost become intoxicating
  5940. >These feelings for her are real, you tell yourself
  5941. >You reach up and start to run your fingers thorough her silky mane
  5942. >As you touch her mane though she pulls away slightly
  5943. >What was that about…
  5944. >Might as well try and break the silence
  5945. >”So Rose, have you ever heard of Dj P0n3?”
  5946. >She turn hear head towards you and smiles
  5947. “Yes, that’s Vinyl Scratches stage name. She is a pony from Ponyville.”
  5948. >You nod
  5949. >Then you notice something peculiar
  5950. >Her hoof is resting on your thigh
  5951. >When did that happen?
  5952. >You guess it wouldn’t hurt
  5953. >You reach down and wrap your hand around her hoof
  5954. >You were expecting something hard; you were met with something soft.
  5955. >When you do this Rose sighs and you can see she relaxes a bit…
  5956. >The rest of the taxi ride is relatively uneventful
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  5963. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt2:Before the Party  DakanSun Sep 16 18:57:18 2012No.4510190
  5964.  
  5965. Quoted by: >>4510208
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  5968.  >>4510178
  5969. >You shortly arrive at the University and make your way to the Hall
  5970. >As you enter the Hall is decked out in all sorts of Halloween decor
  5971. >Several tables line the hall with the middle open as a dance floor
  5972. >At the back you can see a white pony behind a turntable
  5973. >You escort Rose over to one of the tables
  5974. >”Do you want something to drink?”
  5975. >She simply nods
  5976. >As you make your way over to the refreshments table you notice that you aren’t the only “mixed” couple
  5977. >You can see that other humans have their arms wrapped around ponies
  5978. >Although they are the minority by far
  5979. >And all of these couples are getting the strangest looks from those around them
  5980. >You reach the refreshment table and grab yourself a beer
  5981. >As you look over the difference punches they have to offer, you realize one thing
  5982. >Every single one of them has already be spiked
  5983. >You sigh slightly and grab a ladle full of the least foul smelling of the brews
  5984. >You return to the table and hand Rose her glass
  5985. >You lean in close as you do
  5986. >”Please be careful, the punch is already spiked”
  5987. >She giggles and nods
  5988. >She takes a sip of the punch and coughs a bit
  5989. >”Is something wrong?”
  5990. “The punch is a bit strong”
  5991. >You chuckle a bit
  5992. >This is most certainly going to be an interesting night…
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  5999. DakanSun Sep 16 18:59:37 2012No.4510208
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  6001. Quoted by: >>4510714
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  6004.  >>4510190
  6005. End of Part 2
  6006.  
  6007. It goes deeper and deeper...
  6008. I really want to update next sometime during the week. But, I may not be able to until friday...
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  6015. HateBit !!8FC5lRlbeuJSun Sep 16 18:59:37 2012No.4510210
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  6018.  >>4501650
  6019. Hurry up and write some goddamn stories so we can read 'em already. The AiE writers are working on AiE at the moment, myself included, so it's up to you jerks to pump this shit out until all our current stories are stale and suck and we move here.
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  6026. AnonymousSun Sep 16 20:00:56 2012No.4510714
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  6030. >>4510208
  6031. Thanks for the heads up. we'll be patiently waiting for moar.
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  6038. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesSun Sep 16 21:26:57 2012No.4511184
  6039.  
  6040. Quoted by: >>4511198 >>4519583
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  6042.  
  6043.  >>4487470
  6044. > I take a moment to catch my breath.
  6045. > Damn, this pony can run fast!
  6046. > "Finally... caught up..."
  6047. "What in tarnation is going on around 'ere!?" cries Applejack.
  6048. > I look in the direction of her hoof.
  6049. > Animals are running loose everywhere.
  6050. > Some children from the orphanage are riding them.
  6051. > While the other orphans cheerfully lead the smaller animals around.
  6052. > The zoo keepers try desperately to keep the animals under control.
  6053. > The adult visitors scream and panic. A few have fainted in shock.
  6054. > My brain quickly puts two and two together.
  6055. > I turn to the orange pony.
  6056. > "Where's Fluttershy?" I ask carefully.
  6057. "Fluttershy? I thought that you were watching her."
  6058. > Then, her eyes widen.
  6059. "T-this is bad! Really bad! We need to find her! And fast!"
  6060. > "But you said that she's really good with animals."
  6061. "That's exactly why! We need to stop her before-"
  6062. > Another shrill scream. We both turn around.
  6063. > A young girl, no more than 4 or 5 years old, is riding on the back of a full-grown grizzly bear.
  6064. > She seems to think that bear cavalry is a great idea.
  6065. > The grizzly roars at the nearby zoo keepers.
  6066. > They quickly back away. The little girl just laughs, thinking that this is a game.
  6067. > I turn to Applejack, who quickly pulls something out of her saddlebag.
  6068. "I'll handle this one, sugarcube!"
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  6075. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesSun Sep 16 21:28:57 2012No.4511198
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  6078. Quoted by: >>4511845 >>4519583
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  6081.  >>4511184
  6082. > "Er, Applejack? You aren't seriously considering-"
  6083. "Hold on to this for a while!"
  6084. > The orange pony pushes her saddlebag into my arms.
  6085. > I collapse painfully under its weight.
  6086. "Careful now! That might be a bit heavy."
  6087. > A bit heavy? This weighs heavier than a sack of grain!
  6088. > She was carrying this around the whole time!?
  6089. "Just stay here and wait for my signal."
  6090. > "Your signal? Wait! What are you-"
  6091. > Applejack dashes off before I can stop her.
  6092. > She runs straight at the grizzly bear.
  6093. > The pony holds something in its mouth. A rope!?
  6094. "Time to hogtie this little doggie!"
  6095. > With incredible accuracy, she twirls the lasso and throws it around one of the grizzly's paws.
  6096. > Then, she pulls on the rope at an angle with her mouth.
  6097. > Before it can react, the grizzly topples over and lands face first.
  6098. "And now for some lil' pon-er, human toss!"
  6099. > Applejack quickly hops up on the bear's back while it is confused.
  6100. > She grabs the cuff of the little girl's shirt with her mouth.
  6101. > And tosses her all the way over... to me!?
  6102. "You're on!" cries Applejack. "Catch her!"
  6103. > I drop the saddlebag full of seeds and raise my arms.
  6104. > And by some miracle, I manage to catch the little girl safely.
  6105. "Yeah!" cries the child. "That was fun! Let's do it again!"
  6106. > "Oh, wow," I mutter.
  6107. > After putting the girl down, a bloodcurdling roar fills the area.
  6108. > I turn around to see that the grizzly bear has recovered.
  6109. > And it does not look particularly pleased at Applejack.
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  6116. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesSun Sep 16 23:14:57 2012No.4511845
  6117.  
  6118. Quoted by: >>4511894 >>4519583
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  6120.  
  6121.  >>4511198
  6122. "Now get back in there before I get REALLY mad, y'hear!?"
  6123. > Bruised and badly beaten, the grizzly obediently returns to its pen.
  6124. > The zoo keepers lock the enclosure behind it.
  6125. > And after one last whimper, the bear retreats inside its den.
  6126. > Applejack sighs in relief.
  6127. "That took a little longer than I thought. Sorry about that."
  6128. > "Are you alright?"
  6129. "Just a bit tired. But what's up with them?"
  6130. > She points at the adults watching the scene.
  6131. > They look more than a bit shocked.
  6132. > "Well, here in the city," I explain. "Humans generally don't expect to see someone wrestle a full-grown grizzly bear into submission."
  6133. "Oh," she says, "S-sorry 'bout that. Kinda forgot about where we were, back there."
  6134. > Applejack looks crestfallen as she picks up her saddlebag.
  6135. > I can feel a number of eyes watching us closely.
  6136. > "We should find Fluttershy before things get any worse."
  6137. "I suppose you're right. Well, then-"
  6138. > One of the zoo keepers suddenly comes up to us.
  6139. "W-wait! Are you leaving already!?" he cries out.
  6140. > Applejack and I stop walking.
  6141. "We could really use your help," says the zoo keeper. "There are a number of dangerous animals still running about, and our staff are spread thinly enough as it is."
  6142. "But, I-"
  6143. "Please, Miss?"
  6144. > Applejack turns to me. Her eyes tell me that she wants to help.
  6145. > I look around for a moment. Then, I pause to think.
  6146. > Wild animals running about. Stray orphans that need to be found.
  6147. > I sigh and give her a nod.
  6148. > "Go ahead. I'll look for Fluttershy."
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  6155. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesSun Sep 16 23:23:36 2012No.4511894
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  6158. Quoted by: >>4519583 >>4529613 >>4529630
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  6160.  
  6161.  >>4511845
  6162. > After half an hour of searching, I pause to rest.
  6163. > My legs ache and still no trace of Fluttershy.
  6164. > If she left the zoo, then she could be anywhere in the city by now.
  6165. > But that isn't like her. She loves this place.
  6166. *sob*
  6167. > She must still be here.
  6168. *sniff*
  6169. > I close my eyes and try to think.
  6170. *sob*
  6171. > Where could she be?
  6172. *sniff*
  6173. > And what was that crying noise?
  6174. *sob*
  6175. > Crying noise? I quickly turn around.
  6176. > I notice a familiar pink mane hidden among the bushes.
  6177. > The sobbing continues as I carefully walk closer.
  6178. > "Fluttershy?" I ask slowly.
  6179. > The noises suddenly stop.
  6180. "N-nop0ny here," whispers someone from the bushes.
  6181. > I approach closer. Sure enough, it's the yellow pegasus pony.
  6182. > "Fluttershy? Are you alright?"
  6183. "Ah! D-don't come any closer!"
  6184. > I freeze in my tracks. Fluttershy just spread her wings.
  6185. > Gotta calm her down before she flies off in panic.
  6186. > Last thing we need right now is for someone to see her flying.
  6187. > The ponies' illusion spell might work perfectly, but we'll have a hell of a time explaining a flying human girl.
  6188. > "It's just me," I whisper. "I've come to find you."
  6189. "A-are you here to take me away? I wasn't human-napping! I-I just-"
  6190. > Fluttershy's eyes are filled with fear and panic.
  6191. > She retreats from me and takes a step back.
  6192. > Her wings start to flap. Her hooves rise from the ground.
  6193. > There is no more time.
  6194. > My body moves on its own.
  6195. > And grabs her in a tight embrace.
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  6202. AnonymousMon Sep 17 02:49:00 2012No.4513841
  6203.  
  6204.  
  6205.  bumping this thread. Soon I shall start my own story here.
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  6212. AnonymousMon Sep 17 04:28:57 2012No.4514976
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  6215.  Bumpity. Anyone else here?
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  6222. BakalightMon Sep 17 04:44:57 2012No.4515175
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  6224.  
  6225.  Hey to anyone who gives two shits, I'm having some trouble writing this fucker. Going through some rewrites and shit at the moment. So nothing from me tonight but I will post my story this week.
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  6227. Christ writing is fun but hard. Especially when your doing it for the first time.
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  6234. AnonymousMon Sep 17 05:37:16 2012No.4515865
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  6237. Quoted by: >>4516975
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  6239.  
  6240.  MORE PONIES
  6241. MORE PONY POV STORIES
  6242. PONYPONYPONYPONY
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  6249. AnonymousMon Sep 17 06:41:37 2012No.4516975
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  6251. Quoted by: >>4517843
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  6254.  >>4515865
  6255. Christ almighty where did everyone go?
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  6262. AnonymousMon Sep 17 07:37:17 2012No.4517843
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  6265.  >>4516975
  6266. It'll pick up soon. People just aren't online.
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  6273. AnonymousMon Sep 17 08:34:56 2012No.4518867
  6274.  
  6275.  
  6276.  I'll have a story ready for you guys tomorrow but in my meantime keep this thread alive or have a new one readily available.
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  6283. AnonymousMon Sep 17 09:04:58 2012No.4519302
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  6286.  good update
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  6293. AnonymousMon Sep 17 09:27:16 2012No.4519583
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  6297. >>4511894
  6298. >>4511845
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  6300. >>4511184
  6301. pic related
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  6308. AnonymousMon Sep 17 13:49:36 2012No.4524949
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  6311.  bumpin
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  6318. AnonymousMon Sep 17 18:03:16 2012No.4528399
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  6321.  4-hour bump.
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  6328. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt3:The Dance  DakanMon Sep 17 21:10:17 2012No.4529476
  6329.  
  6330. Quoted by: >>4529488 >>4529490
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  6332.  
  6333.  I know what I said about the next update wouldn't be until friday. But, I got some free time and I wrote something. I present part 3.
  6334.  
  6335. >The music started soon after you take your seat next to rose
  6336. >The bass pounded heavy over the speakers
  6337. >Well, from the sound of it Vinyl knows her audience
  6338. >A few people get up and start to dance
  6339. >You and rose stay seated for the moment
  6340. >As you watch the people around you dance you occasionally glance over at rose
  6341. >She sits quietly drinking her punch, staring at the people dancing
  6342. >You begin to wonder what she is thinking…
  6343. >Wasn’t that why you asked her to come out with you tonight?
  6344. >So you can restrengthen your friendship with Rose?
  6345. >So why do you sit here and do nothing…
  6346. >As you start thinking about doing something you hear a voice behind you
  6347. ”Hey Anon, didn’t expect to see you here!”
  6348. >You turn around in your seat and see one of your class mates
  6349. >His name is Robert; he is from your Economics class.
  6350. >Accompanying him is a turquoise unicorn, it appears to have a Lyre as a cutie mark
  6351.  
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  6356.  
  6357. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt3:The Dance  DakanMon Sep 17 21:11:36 2012No.4529488
  6358.  
  6359. Quoted by: >>4529494
  6360.  
  6361.  
  6362.  >>4529476
  6363. “And you brought a date! Mind if we sit?
  6364. >As he mentions the word date, you see Rose turn away from you
  6365. >”Sure have a seat Rob; this is my friend Rose. Rose, this is a classmate of mine Robert.”
  6366. >He bows before pulling a chair out for his pony friend.
  6367. >He then takes a seat himself
  6368. “Nice to meet you Rose, and this beautiful mare is my date Lyra.”
  6369. >”Nice to meet you Lyra.”
  6370. >She smiles at you and then turns to Rose
  6371. “Rose and I know each other from Ponyville; she always had the best flowers.”
  6372. >Rose smiles back at Lyra
  6373. “Thank you Lyra, that is very nice to say”
  6374. >Robert clears his throat
  6375. “Do you want something to drink lyra?”
  6376. >She responds with a polite nod
  6377. >You notice that Rose’s glass is almost empty
  6378. >”Would you like a refill on your drink Rose?”
  6379. “Yes please”
  6380. >She responds without looking at you
  6381. >You and Rob get up and head over to the refreshment table
  6382.  
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  6387.  
  6388. Rózowa RózaMon Sep 17 21:11:36 2012No.4529490
  6389.  
  6390.  
  6391.  >>4529476
  6392. Thank God!
  6393.  
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  6399. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt3:The Dance  DakanMon Sep 17 21:12:17 2012No.4529494
  6400.  
  6401. Quoted by: >>4529503
  6402.  
  6403.  
  6404.  >>4529488
  6405. >Strikes up the conversation
  6406. “I never thought you would be dating a pony Anon.”
  6407. >You chuckle
  6408. >”We aren’t dating; we are just friends, why would you say that anyways?”
  6409. >He looks at you with a strange look
  6410. “Just friends huh? You fooled me! Especially the way she looks at you…”
  6411. >”What do you mean?”
  6412. >You take a look back at your table.
  6413. >Rose is in deep conversation with Lyra
  6414. >Every so often she glances in your direction before quickly turning back to Lyra
  6415. >“Besides, she’s a pony”
  6416. “So, what’s your point?”
  6417. >You laugh a little harder
  6418. >”She’s an animal man! She’s not human! She’s…”
  6419. “What, different?”
  6420. >”Well, yes she’s different”
  6421. “They aren’t that different you know…”
  6422. >You look at Rob who is now staring in Lyra’s direction
  6423. “She’s helped me a lot, and I have helped her.”
  6424. >”Wait, have you…?”
  6425. >He chuckles a bit
  6426. “They are not different, no matter what you think. You just need to give them a chance.”
  6427. >You look back over at Rose again
  6428. >This time she is staring at you.
  6429. >”A chance huh?”
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  6436. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt3:The Dance  DakanMon Sep 17 21:13:37 2012No.4529503
  6437.  
  6438. Quoted by: >>4529512
  6439.  
  6440.  
  6441.  >>4529494
  6442. >You grab Rose’s drink and head back towards the table
  6443. >When you get back you realize Rose hasn’t taken her eyes off of you
  6444. >You place her drink down and hold out your hand
  6445. >”Would you like to dance Rose?”
  6446. >Her eyes light up as you ask her
  6447. >Her voice is breathless as she answers you
  6448. “Yes”
  6449. >Roses leaves her seat and trots next to you out onto the dance floor
  6450. >The DJ continues to “drop the bass”
  6451. >As you dance with Rose the crowd keeps getting denser and denser
  6452. >Pretty soon the dancing is just glorified grinding
  6453. >You and rose dance closely her body grinding against yours
  6454. >The smell of roses only heighten the feeling
  6455. >You both occasionally take break to get some more drinks
  6456. >As you go on you can feel a decent buzz coming on
  6457. >You are also pretty sure that Rose has one by now too
  6458. >As the night continues on the songs start to slow up
  6459. >Until you recognize the beginning chords of it.
  6460. >You look at Rose who also recognizes the song
  6461. >She smiles drunkenly at you and you back at her
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  6467.  
  6468. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt3:The Dance  DakanMon Sep 17 21:14:38 2012No.4529512
  6469.  
  6470. Quoted by: >>4529530
  6471.  
  6472.  
  6473.  >>4529503
  6474. >She rises up and places one hoof on your shoulder and the other in your hand
  6475. >You pull her close and begin to slowly turn in circles to My Heart Will Go On
  6476. >Rose slowly leans her head against your shoulders
  6477. >The smell of roses mixes with your intoxication
  6478. >You bury your head into her mane
  6479. >You would give anything for with moment to go on forever
  6480. >But like all good things…
  6481. >She pulls her head back and stares into your eyes
  6482. >A smiles slowly creeps across her face
  6483. >She closes her eyes
  6484. >And slowly moves towards you
  6485. >Time slows to a crawl and you are left to your thoughts
  6486. >This is it…
  6487. >The culmination of everything
  6488. >A start of something new…
  6489.  
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  6494.  
  6495. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt3:The Dance  DakanMon Sep 17 21:16:58 2012No.4529530
  6496.  
  6497. Quoted by: >>4529534
  6498.  
  6499.  
  6500.  >>4529512
  6501. >But…
  6502. >NO BUTS!
  6503. >She’s an animal
  6504. >She’s a Pony
  6505. >She’s a friend
  6506. >You can’t do this
  6507. >You begin to panic
  6508. >Think brain think!
  6509. >Your brain takes over
  6510. >A decision is made
  6511. >At the last moment
  6512. >You turn your head…
  6513. >Wrong answer brain!
  6514. >You feel her kiss against your cheek as you try to take stock about what just happened
  6515. >You feel Rose pull back against you
  6516. >You look back into her eyes
  6517. >Your gaze is met with questions
  6518. >Oh god you really fucked up this time Anon.
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  6524.  
  6525. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt3:The Dance  DakanMon Sep 17 21:17:16 2012No.4529534
  6526.  
  6527. Quoted by: >>4529539 >>4530633
  6528.  
  6529.  
  6530.  >>4529530
  6531. “Anon, I don’t…”
  6532. >Say something
  6533. “Is this something wrong…”
  6534. >Say something…
  6535. “Is it me?
  6536. >ANYTHING!
  6537. >”You’re a pony”
  6538. >...but that…
  6539. >Her eyes fill with confusion, fear, and rage
  6540. >And then nothing but sadness
  6541. >She pushes you away and gallops out of the Hall
  6542. >You look around for some help
  6543. >You see Robert and Lyra standing near by
  6544. >You can’t hear what he is saying, but you get the gist
  6545. >You run after Rose.
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  6551.  
  6552. DakanMon Sep 17 21:18:57 2012No.4529539
  6553.  
  6554. Quoted by: >>4529548
  6555.  
  6556.  
  6557.  >>4529534
  6558. End of Part 3
  6559.  
  6560. Yeah...
  6561.  
  6562. Im going to go hide in a bunker now...
  6563.  
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  6568.  
  6569. Rózowa RózaMon Sep 17 21:20:57 2012No.4529548
  6570.  
  6571.  
  6572.  >>4529539
  6573. You'd better, I'm coming after you for that cliffhanger.
  6574.  
  6575. I still love you though.
  6576.  
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  6582. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesMon Sep 17 21:27:37 2012No.4529613  
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  6584.  
  6585.  
  6586. >>4511894
  6587. > Soft. Fluttershy feels so soft to the touch.
  6588. > It takes me a minute to realize what I just did.
  6589. > And it takes me a few seconds more to notice that she isn't backing away.
  6590. *sob*
  6591. > Instead, she leans her head on my shoulder.
  6592. > The pegasus pony continues crying softly.
  6593. *sniff*
  6594. > Unsure of what to do, I start stroking her mane very slowly.
  6595. > Slowly, so as not to scare her.
  6596. *sob*
  6597. > Slowly, so she can get used to me.
  6598. > Slowly, so she has time to let it all out.
  6599. *sniff*
  6600. > And slowly, I feel her stop shaking. She lowers her wings.
  6601. > Then, she whispers in the tiniest voice.
  6602. "I'm... sorry."
  6603. > I hold her tighter in response.
  6604. > Not because I'm afraid that she'll run off.
  6605. *sob*
  6606. > But because...
  6607. > "It's alright, Fluttershy. It's alright."
  6608. *sob*
  6609. > I don't remember how long it took.
  6610. > But I didn't care. I stayed with her.
  6611. > More than a pony from another world, I realized.
  6612. > She was just a young girl, scared and lost in this world.
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  6619. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesMon Sep 17 21:29:37 2012No.4529630
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  6621.  
  6622. Quoted by: >>4529653 >>4547375
  6623.  
  6624.  
  6625.  >>4511894
  6626. > Soft. Fluttershy feels so soft to the touch.
  6627. > It takes me a minute to realize what I just did.
  6628. > And it takes me a few seconds more to notice that she isn't backing away.
  6629. *sob*
  6630. > Instead, she leans her head on my shoulder.
  6631. > The pegasus pony continues crying softly.
  6632. *sniff*
  6633. > Unsure of what to do, I start stroking her mane very slowly.
  6634. > Slowly, so as not to scare her.
  6635. *sob*
  6636. > Slowly, so she can get used to me.
  6637. > Slowly, so she has time to let it all out.
  6638. *sniff*
  6639. > And slowly, I feel her stop shaking. She lowers her wings.
  6640. > Then, she whispers in the tiniest voice.
  6641. "I'm... sorry."
  6642. > I hold her tighter in response.
  6643. > Not because I'm afraid that she'll run off.
  6644. *sob*
  6645. > But because...
  6646. > "It's alright, Fluttershy. It's alright."
  6647. *sob*
  6648. > I don't remember how long it took.
  6649. > But I didn't care. I stayed with her.
  6650. > More than a pony from another world, I realized.
  6651. > She was just a young girl, scared and lost.
  6652.  
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  6658. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesMon Sep 17 21:33:18 2012No.4529653
  6659.  
  6660. Quoted by: >>4530010
  6661.  
  6662.  
  6663.  >>4529630
  6664. > "Are you sure that you're alright now?"
  6665. "Y-yes. I think so."
  6666. > Very slowly, I pull myself away from the yellow pegasus.
  6667. > She clings to me again the moment I step back.
  6668. > "Umm, Fluttershy?"
  6669. "Oh! Sorry, about that. I just..."
  6670. > She lets go of me reluctantly.
  6671. > Her voice becomes almost inaudible.
  6672. "...felt so safe in your arms."
  6673. > She blushes beet red. Maybe I held her a little bit too long.
  6674. > I clear my throat and politely pretend not to catch that last part.
  6675. > "You were right, though. I should have watched you more closely."
  6676. "I was right?
  6677. > "Yep. You certainly are a lot more troublesome that I expected."
  6678. "I'm so sorry," she whispers. "This is all my fault."
  6679. > She lowers her head sadly.
  6680. "If I didn't get too excited around the children and animals-"
  6681. > "Don't worry about it. I had an idea of what I was getting into when I took this job."
  6682. "Eh? What do you mean?"
  6683. > "Heh, forget about it. Instead-"
  6684. > I take her by the hoof and give her a gentle smile.
  6685. > "Why don't you tell me a little more about your special talent."
  6686. "Oh, my!" she says, blushing. "It's not really that special, but I can-"
  6687.  
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  6692.  
  6693. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesMon Sep 17 22:19:37 2012No.4530010
  6694.  
  6695. Quoted by: >>4530030 >>4547375
  6696.  
  6697.  
  6698.  >>4529653
  6699. "Where are we going?"
  6700. > "Somewhere with the equipment we need."
  6701. > All Fluttershy and I need now is a way to get inside this place.
  6702. > I check the door. It's locked. Figures.
  6703. "Oh, no! What are we going to do now?"
  6704. > "Hmm."
  6705. > I quickly look around. Then, I see it.
  6706. > "Fluttershy? Do you think you could find me a large rock?"
  6707. "A large rock? O-okay..."
  6708. > A short while later, she returns.
  6709. "Will this one do?"
  6710. > "That's perfect. Now, stand back."
  6711. > I toss the rock through one of the windows. It shatters.
  6712. > Then, I unlock the window through the hole and open it.
  6713. > I'm too large to fit through, but-
  6714. "Are you sure? But isn't this breaking and entering?"
  6715. > "We'll just say that some crazy neighborhood kids took advantage of the chaos."
  6716. > I carefully push her through the window.
  6717. > "Watch the broken glass."
  6718. "A-alright."
  6719. > She quickly opens the front door from inside.
  6720. > After a quick glance around, I head in after her.
  6721. "I'm sorry for asking," whispers Fluttershy. "But is this your first time doing this? You act like you've done this before."
  6722. > I just give her an evil smile in reply.
  6723. > Yep. This really takes me back.
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  6730. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesMon Sep 17 22:22:58 2012No.4530030
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  6732.  
  6733. Quoted by: >>4530633 >>4547375 >>4547873
  6734.  
  6735.  
  6736.  >>4530010
  6737. "Are you sure that this is going to work?"
  6738. > "Honestly? I have no idea."
  6739. > But we need to try something. Applejack can't do this alone.
  6740. > I quickly switch on all of the speakers.
  6741. > Then, I signal at Fluttershy to start.
  6742. "H-hello? Can you hear me?"
  6743. > She whispers to the microphone softly.
  6744. > I turn up the volume so her voice can be heard.
  6745. "I know that it's a little troublesome, but I'd like to share something with all my new animal friends."
  6746. > I glance outside. Looks like her voice is being carried nicely.
  6747. > Good thing that the zoo's P. A. system still works.
  6748. "Oh! And to all my little human friends, too!"
  6749. > I turn to Fluttershy. She looks fairly calm.
  6750. > Probably because she can't see her audience.
  6751. "I'd like to dedicate this song to all my new friends here in the city zoo."
  6752. > She pauses. Then she covers the microphone for a moment.
  6753. "And I'd like you to listen, too," she whispers. "That is, if you don't mind."
  6754. > I give her a thumbs-up. She smiles, blushing a little.
  6755. "T-thanks."
  6756. > Fluttershy is ready now. She looks surprisingly confident.
  6757. > The pegasus pony puts her lips to the microphone.
  6758. > And she begins to sing.
  6759.  
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  6765. SPart !HPI3kcpRZYTue Sep 18 00:00:57 2012No.4530633
  6766.  
  6767.  
  6768.  >>4530030
  6769. >>4529534
  6770. two cliffhangers for one afternoon ! how could you guys be so cruel ?
  6771. @ Dakan you better be productive in your bunker xD
  6772. @Pancakes
  6773. nice cliffhanger, hope that no troll post a Jigglypuff xD
  6774.  
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  6780. BakalightTue Sep 18 00:16:58 2012No.4530782
  6781.  
  6782. Quoted by: >>4530853 >>4530888
  6783.  
  6784.  
  6785.  OK flexing my writing muscle here.
  6786.  
  6787. >You and Twilight Sparkle were running away from a ever increasing horde of demented bronies.
  6788. >You'd stop every now and again to take down some with your revolver but you were running out of ammo.
  6789.  
  6790. >There JUST had to be a Bronycon in town.
  6791.  
  6792. "DEAR PRINCESS CELESTIA"
  6793.  
  6794. >Twilight had conjured a letter out of thin air along with a magical floating quill scribbling furiously.
  6795.  
  6796. "TODAY LEARNT THAT MOST HUMANS ARE GREAT PEOPLE, SOME A ROTTEN TO THE CURE AND SOME DOWN RIGHT INSANE.
  6797.  
  6798. SEND HELP
  6799.  
  6800. Your faithful student Twilight Sparkle.
  6801.  
  6802. >"Your god is not here Twilight" I said back to her
  6803.  
  6804. "We'll see"
  6805.  
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  6810.  
  6811. BakalightTue Sep 18 00:25:37 2012No.4530853
  6812.  
  6813. Quoted by: >>4530888
  6814.  
  6815.  
  6816.  >>4530782
  6817. >CAN YOU TAKE ME TO RAINBOW DASH? I WANT TO CUM INSIDE HER!
  6818.  
  6819. >No go away PLEASE begged Twilight. I downed the brony who said using up my last bullet.
  6820.  
  6821. >We head into the alley ways in a attempt to lose them but to no avail. We end up in a dead end, our backs against the wall as if we were facing a firing squad.
  6822.  
  6823. >"No where to run now my sweety waifu"
  6824.  
  6825. >Just as they were about the pounce, Twilight noticed a sewer entrance to magically threw me and herself into the sewer. They tried to follow but the hole was too big for those with a cheetos and big mac diet.
  6826.  
  6827. "WE'LL FIND YOU TWILIGHT. WE'LL FIND YOU ALL...
  6828.  
  6829. >"So this is what is feels like to have someone head over hoofs for you I guess".
  6830.  
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  6835.  
  6836. BakalightTue Sep 18 00:30:16 2012No.4530888
  6837.  
  6838.  
  6839.  >>4530782
  6840. >>4530853
  6841. Sorry if its a bit shit. But as of the moment I'm just getting some writing practise down. Anyone wanna tell me what they think.
  6842.  
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  6847.  
  6848. AnonymousTue Sep 18 05:05:17 2012No.4533565
  6849.  
  6850. Quoted by: >>4535447
  6851.  
  6852.  
  6853.  4.5 hour bump.
  6854.  
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  6859.  
  6860. AnonymousTue Sep 18 06:59:37 2012No.4535447
  6861.  
  6862.  
  6863.  >>4533565
  6864. evening bump
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  6871. AnonymousTue Sep 18 09:30:37 2012No.4537857
  6872.  
  6873.  
  6874.  After dinner bump.
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  6881. AnonymousTue Sep 18 12:42:17 2012No.4542161
  6882.  
  6883.  
  6884.  morning bump
  6885.  
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  6891. AnonymousTue Sep 18 15:45:18 2012No.4544989
  6892.  
  6893.  
  6894.  I-should-be-in-bed bump
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  6901. AnonymousTue Sep 18 18:46:17 2012No.4546354
  6902.  
  6903.  
  6904.  bumpity bumpity bump
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  6911. AnonymousTue Sep 18 19:15:18 2012No.4546482
  6912.  
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  6914.  high noon bump
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  6921. writerTue Sep 18 19:26:58 2012No.4546537
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  6923.  
  6924. Quoted by: >>4546926 >>4546941 >>4547198 >>4548136
  6925.  
  6926.  
  6927.  >write stuff I like, feel happy about it
  6928. >a few likes/favs which really make me pleased
  6929. >write clop
  6930. >feel like shit when I publish it due to guilt
  6931. >instantly more favs and views then other things
  6932.  
  6933. but why :(
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  6940. SPartTue Sep 18 20:37:38 2012No.4546926
  6941.  
  6942.  
  6943.  >>4546537
  6944. don't write it if you dont feel like it @__@
  6945. people who are into clop are easier with faves and likes
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  6952. AnonymousTue Sep 18 20:38:58 2012No.4546941
  6953.  
  6954.  
  6955.  >>4546537
  6956. To answer your question: sex sales
  6957. btw, what are you referring to?
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  6964. DakanTue Sep 18 21:17:38 2012No.4547198
  6965.  
  6966. Quoted by: >>4547508 >>4547661
  6967.  
  6968.  
  6969.  Hey all, an update from the bunker...
  6970.  
  6971. I'm writing Pt4 and i have had some...interesting developements.
  6972. Nothing bad... I promise...
  6973. Dont' know if it is going up tonight...
  6974. Be prepared...Revelations are coming...
  6975.  
  6976. >>4546537
  6977. I am personally not against clopfics
  6978. I am interested in what exactly you are talking about...
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  6985. AnonymousTue Sep 18 21:50:57 2012No.4547375
  6986. File: 32 KB, 291x267, slapmyass.png [View same] [google] [Report]
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  6989. >>4530030
  6990. >>4530010
  6991. >>4529630
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  6998. SPartTue Sep 18 22:05:38 2012No.4547508
  6999.  
  7000.  
  7001.  >>4547198
  7002. great to hear Dakan!
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  7009. AnonymousTue Sep 18 22:26:17 2012No.4547661
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  7012.  
  7013. >>4547198
  7014.  
  7015. Delightful news Dakan! As embarrassing as it is to admit, I've actually lost sleep over your story.
  7016. This shit better have a happy ending.
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  7023. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt4:Revelations pt1  DakanTue Sep 18 22:26:58 2012No.4547663
  7024.  
  7025. Quoted by: >>4547674
  7026.  
  7027.  
  7028.  >Dakan emerges from the bunker
  7029. Don't shoot! I have part 4!
  7030.  
  7031. >You chase Rose through the halls of the university
  7032. >Even in her gown she is faster than you are
  7033. >The sound of her hooves striking the ground disappear ahead of you
  7034. >From the sounds of it she may have exited the building
  7035. >As you turn the corner you spot a door leading out onto the central main grounds
  7036. >As you exit the building you can see the grounds are illuminated only by the full moon
  7037. >It is a clear star filled sky above you
  7038. >A beautiful night
  7039. >Or at least what should have been a beautiful night
  7040. >You took care of that quite handily
  7041. >You had to go and tell her that, didn’t you?
  7042. >You could have said anything, but you said that.
  7043. >You need to find Rose
  7044. >You have to explain to her everything
  7045. >But, what exactly are you going to explain to her?
  7046. >That you can’t see past the fact she is a pony?
  7047. >That she is too much of a friend for you to even get past that?
  7048. >What the fuck exactly is wrong with you?
  7049. >You were having such a great time with her
  7050. >Well, you aren’t going to get closer to an answer standing here talking to yourself
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  7057. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt4  DakanTue Sep 18 22:27:18 2012No.4547674
  7058.  
  7059. Quoted by: >>4547687
  7060.  
  7061.  
  7062.  >>4547663
  7063. >A quick sweep of your surroundings already confirm your suspicions
  7064. >Rose is nowhere within sight…
  7065. >But wait…
  7066. >On the light wind you can hear the fain sound of crying
  7067. >It’s difficult to place the direction…
  7068.  >You move further onto the main grounds searching for Rose
  7069. >On the ground up ahead you spot her discarded mask
  7070. >Ok so you’re on the right direction
  7071. >Another round of sobs finally gives you a solid direction
  7072. >Off to your right
  7073. >You head off the path to your right
  7074. >Rose’s sobs grow louder as you get closer and closer to her hiding spot
  7075. >Up ahead you can make out a silhouette of a pony sitting on the ground
  7076. >That’s her, it has to be Rose
  7077. >She is facing away from you
  7078. >You get closer and closer you slow your advance
  7079. >Through her sobs you can hear her talking to someone
  7080. >No somep0ny
  7081. “Oh dear Celestia, why…?”
  7082. >Is she… praying?
  7083. >You stop moving and listen in on what she is saying
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  7090. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt4  DakanTue Sep 18 22:29:38 2012No.4547687
  7091.  
  7092. Quoted by: >>4547696 >>4547698
  7093.  
  7094.  
  7095.  >>4547674
  7096. “Why did you and your sister have to send us here?”
  7097. >Wait…
  7098. “I know it was for the best, but why did you have to leave us in the process?”
  7099. >…What…
  7100. ”and now we will never see equestria…”
  7101. “It’s all gone”
  7102. >…gone? What does she mean…?”
  7103. >She starts to cry again
  7104. >Through the sobs you can tell she is trying to catch her breath
  7105. “Gone…it’s all gone…”
  7106. “And worst of all… is him”
  7107. >Well fuck…
  7108. “I understand we are different…”
  7109. “But, that doesn’t change the way I feel…”
  7110. “I’m in love with a human…”
  7111. “And he cares nothing about me…”
  7112. “If only I wasn’t a pony…”
  7113. “Maybe then I could make him happy.”
  7114. >She cries even harder now
  7115. >You can tell she is near hysteria
  7116. >Barely able to catch a breath between sobs
  7117. >Even when she does, you can hear it clearly
  7118. “Anon…”
  7119. >She cries your name…
  7120. >And all you can do is stand by and watch her suffer in silence
  7121. >No, you refuse to let this mare to be hurt any further.
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  7128. Loscil !LoscilARtETue Sep 18 22:30:38 2012No.4547696
  7129.  
  7130. Quoted by: >>4547757
  7131.  
  7132.  
  7133.  >>4547687
  7134. Do you have by any chance a pastebin?
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  7141. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt4  DakanTue Sep 18 22:31:38 2012No.4547698
  7142.  
  7143. Quoted by: >>4547714
  7144.  
  7145.  
  7146.  >>4547687
  7147. >You take a few steps forward and clear your throat
  7148. >”Rose…”
  7149. >She turns around and looks at you
  7150. >She is surprised to see you
  7151. >She tries to stifle her cries and wipes her tears away
  7152. “Anon, what are you…?”
  7153. >You immediately see the change of emotions in her face
  7154. “NO! Get away from me! You are just a human!”
  7155. >Ok so you deserve that, you did call her a pony
  7156. >You take a few steps towards her
  7157. >”I just want to talk Rose.”
  7158. >She stares you down, her green rage filled eyes glinting in the moon light
  7159. “I don’t want to talk to you! Stay away from me!”
  7160. >You take another few steps forward
  7161. >”We need to talk Rose…”
  7162. >Pure rage flashes through her eyes
  7163. “I! SAID! NO!”
  7164. >Before you can comprehend what is happening you are flying flat on your back
  7165. >Your shoulder and your chest are in severe pain
  7166. >It takes you a few seconds to realize exactly what happened.
  7167. >She kicked you
  7168. >Her hooves had made connection with the middle of your chest and your right shoulder
  7169. >You try to move but waves of pain wash over you when you do
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  7176. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt4  DakanTue Sep 18 22:32:59 2012No.4547714
  7177.  
  7178. Quoted by: >>4547723
  7179.  
  7180.  
  7181.  >>4547698
  7182. “Anon! Mother of Celestia! I am so sorry!”
  7183. >You cough a bit, the pain continues
  7184. “Are you ok?”
  7185. >You slowly start to sit up and take an internal check of your body
  7186. >From what you can tell your chest and shoulder are heavily bruised
  7187. >She really knocked the wind right out of you
  7188. >”I’m fine, I think…”
  7189. >”I deserve that actually…”
  7190. >She turns away from you
  7191. “You deserve a little more than that…”
  7192. >You chuckle
  7193. >Ouch, ok it hurts to laugh
  7194. >”Rose, I don’t know what to say…”
  7195. >She turns back towards you
  7196. >You can still see a glint of anger in her eyes, but you see mostly sadness.
  7197. ”I just want to know the truth…”
  7198. >You nod
  7199. >”You deserve that much, but I want the truth also…”
  7200. >She looks at you with confusion
  7201. >Then the sudden realization of what you’re talking about
  7202. “How much did you hear…”
  7203. >”I heard enough to know there is something more going on.”
  7204. >She looks at the ground
  7205. ”I’ll tell you everything, but you need to go first.”
  7206. >You nod again
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  7213. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt4  DakanTue Sep 18 22:33:38 2012No.4547723
  7214.  
  7215. Quoted by: >>4547735
  7216.  
  7217.  
  7218.  >>4547714
  7219. >”I care about you Rose.”
  7220. >You can tell that got her attention
  7221. “You sure have a funny way of showing it”
  7222. >Ok not the good kind of attention
  7223. >”I know, I’m sorry about what I said…”
  7224. >”It’s just you’re such a good friend…”
  7225. “That is not what you said.”
  7226. >You swallow hard
  7227. >”I know…”
  7228. >”Rose, we are different…you’re such an amazing pony…”
  7229. “Why should it matter then?”
  7230. >It shouldn’t
  7231. >”I’m scared.”
  7232. >Where did that come from…
  7233. “And, you think I’m not?”
  7234. >That’s right
  7235. >She is the one out of place
  7236. >This is worse for her than it is for you
  7237. >She walks up to you and rubs against your side
  7238. >”I just want to be happy”
  7239. “I want you to be happy”
  7240. “Then what’s stopping you from being happy…?”
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  7247. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt4  DakanTue Sep 18 22:34:59 2012No.4547735
  7248.  
  7249. Quoted by: >>4547757
  7250.  
  7251.  
  7252.  >>4547723
  7253. >You kneel down and look into her eyes
  7254. >You can see how much she cares for you reflected back
  7255. >There should be nothing stopping me
  7256. >You take a deep breath; inhaling the smell of roses.
  7257. >You’re not going let anything stop you…
  7258. >You put both hands up on her face
  7259. >Why should you care what other people think?
  7260. >She closes her eyes as you begin to stroke her neck
  7261. >You want to be happy
  7262. >You close your own eyes and move forward
  7263. >You want Rose to be happy
  7264. >You lips meet hers
  7265. >You are going to be happy
  7266. >An electric feeling shoots down your whole body
  7267. >You feel Rose’s body tense and relax
  7268. >You pull her in closer, wrapping her in your arms
  7269. >The kiss seems to go on forever…
  7270. >As you break away you are both left breathless
  7271. >”Wow…”
  7272. >You can see Rose’s coat turn a deeper red
  7273. “Wow…”
  7274. >You can’t seem to take your eyes of her
  7275. >This mare, this beautiful mare
  7276. >You’re life just seems to become more and more complicated
  7277. >But there is another matter to attend to
  7278. >”I told you the truth, now you need to tell me…”
  7279. “Right, the truth…”
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  7286. DakanTue Sep 18 22:38:17 2012No.4547757
  7287.  
  7288. Quoted by: >>4547785 >>4547833 >>4547976 >>4548176 >>4551790
  7289.  
  7290.  
  7291.  >>4547735
  7292. End of Part 4
  7293.  
  7294. Originally I had Roseluck's secret in Part 4. But Part 4 became so long that I am putting it off for part 5.
  7295.  
  7296. >>4547696
  7297. http://pastebin.com/u/Fourdak
  7298. It gets updated right after I post here, all previous chapters are there aswell
  7299.  
  7300. Now for a question to the audience...
  7301. If I were to right something *ahem* intimate for this story, would you be interested? *cough* clopfic *cough*
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  7308. Loscil !LoscilARtETue Sep 18 22:42:17 2012No.4547785
  7309.  
  7310.  
  7311.  >>4547757
  7312. Awesome.
  7313.  
  7314. IMO, clopfics are OK.
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  7321. AnonymousTue Sep 18 22:49:37 2012No.4547833
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  7324.  
  7325. >>4547757
  7326.  
  7327. Well, I've been reading for the romance myself, but if you're good at writing, um, more... intimate romance, then go for it.
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  7334. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesTue Sep 18 22:54:59 2012No.4547873
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  7336.  
  7337. Quoted by: >>4547896
  7338.  
  7339.  
  7340.  >>4530030
  7341. "When I look in your eyes," she sings.
  7342. "I see the wonder of the world in your eyes."
  7343. > Lovely?
  7344. "I see the flight of a thousand butterflies,"
  7345. "When I look in your eyes..."
  7346. > Slender?
  7347.  
  7348. "And it is no surprise,"
  7349. "To see the softness of the clouds in your eyes,"
  7350. > Graceful?
  7351. "The bright reflection of rainbows in the skies,"
  7352. "When I look in your eyes..."
  7353. > Tender?
  7354.  
  7355. > Where are the words that describe her?
  7356. > Caring? Angel?
  7357. > Kind and gentle?
  7358. > There are no words to describe her.
  7359.  
  7360. > Easier by far, say I,
  7361. > To steal the sky
  7362. > From the songbirds.
  7363. > Than to find the words that seem right.
  7364. > How do you describe a dream right?
  7365. > Rare are the words,
  7366. > Where are the words?
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  7373. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesTue Sep 18 22:58:59 2012No.4547896
  7374.  
  7375. Quoted by: >>4547943 >>4548213
  7376.  
  7377.  
  7378.  >>4547873
  7379. > Fluttershy covers the mic with her hoof after her song.
  7380. "Do you think that was alright?" she whispers.
  7381. > "Err... Uhh..."
  7382. "Oh! I'm so sorry," she says. "You see, I haven't been singing at all recently. I guess I might have missed a note or two..."
  7383. > She lowers her head sadly.
  7384. > "What are you talking about? That was great!"
  7385. "Eh? R-really?"
  7386. > "You have an amazing voice, Fluttershy! I can't see why you would think like that."
  7387. "Oh, you flatterer, you!"
  7388. > The pegasus pony blushes bright red.
  7389. > I am in a rare dilemma.
  7390. > Half of me wants her to continue singing,
  7391. > While the other half says that I should get these ponies out of here.
  7392. > Hmm. Why is this so hard?
  7393. "Umm, excuse me?"
  7394. > "Huh? What is it?"
  7395. "Should I sing another song?"
  7396. > I pause for a moment. Logic wins through (barely).
  7397. > And I reluctantly shake my head.
  7398. > "We need to find Applejack and head out before things get even more troublesome."
  7399. "I see. You're right, of course."
  7400. > Fluttershy sighs as she puts down the mic.
  7401. > "But if you'd like, I can take you to karaoke to sing again. That is, if you don't mind..."
  7402. "Eh?"
  7403. > She brightens up immediately.
  7404. "Okay. I'd like that."
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  7411. AnonymousTue Sep 18 23:05:37 2012No.4547943
  7412.  
  7413. Quoted by: >>4548335
  7414.  
  7415.  
  7416.  >>4547896
  7417. I recently tried to open your Pastebin and it didn't load.
  7418. Do you have an account?
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  7425. SPartTue Sep 18 23:09:37 2012No.4547976
  7426.  
  7427. Quoted by: >>4548006
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  7430.  >>4547757
  7431. do as you pleased and it's going to please us, in the worest case senario, you could upload the clop part just on pastebin ? so everyone who don't want to read it, can easily skip it ?
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  7438. DakanTue Sep 18 23:12:57 2012No.4548006
  7439.  
  7440. Quoted by: >>4548109
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  7442.  
  7443.  >>4547976
  7444. That's actually what I was thinking about doing. Since the clop would be more of fluff that actually adding any content to the story. I was trying to get an interest gauge before I actually wrote anything.
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  7451. SPartTue Sep 18 23:23:38 2012No.4548109
  7452.  
  7453.  
  7454.  >>4548006
  7455. on the internet is allways place for porn in one or the other way
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  7462. AnonymousTue Sep 18 23:26:57 2012No.4548136
  7463.  
  7464.  
  7465.  >>4546537
  7466. Twilit, is that you?
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  7473. AnonymousTue Sep 18 23:31:17 2012No.4548176
  7474.  
  7475.  
  7476.  >>4547757
  7477. i wouldnt mind a clopfic
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  7484. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesTue Sep 18 23:36:58 2012No.4548213
  7485.  
  7486. Quoted by: >>4548224 >>4548236
  7487.  
  7488.  
  7489.  >>4547896
  7490. > Fluttershy and I sneak back to where we last saw Applejack.
  7491. > On the way, I see that the remaining animals have returned to their pens.
  7492. > They wait patiently as the zoo keepers lock their cages one by one.
  7493. > Even the most vicious ones have a strangely calm look in their eyes.
  7494. > And that isn't all.
  7495. "Oh! That's so cute!" cries the pegasus.
  7496. > I quickly pull her back behind the bushes.
  7497. > She's right, though.
  7498. > All of the orphan children are obediently assembled near the entrance.
  7499. > The orphanage matron quickly confirms that they are complete.
  7500. > Fluttershy's song certainly has a powerful effect.
  7501. > Almost like magic.
  7502. "And there's Applejack!"
  7503. > Sure enough, the orange pony is standing together with a few zoo staff.
  7504. > They thank her again before leaving.
  7505. > After making sure they are out of sight, she turns around and winks at us.
  7506. > We quickly leave the bushes and walk up to her.
  7507. > "Everything alright on your side?"
  7508. "More or less," says Applejack. "We were gettin' overwhelmed back there! Good thing you got Fluttershy to sing on that P.A. thingy."
  7509. "Sorry about that," says the pegasus. "This is all my fault..."
  7510. > "Forget about it for now. It's time we make like a tree and -"
  7511. "Get the hay out of here!" cries Applejack.
  7512. > All three of us make a mad dash for the exit.
  7513. > Thus ends our visit to the city zoo.
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  7520. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesTue Sep 18 23:38:19 2012No.4548224  
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  7524. >>4548213
  7525. > Her pet white rabbit sticks his tongue out in disgust.
  7526. "Oh, don't be like that, Angel! Despite all the trouble I caused, he was a perfect gentlehuman."
  7527. > Fluttershy closes the door behind her and trots over to her desk.
  7528. > She pulls out a bottle of ink and a feather pen.
  7529. > Then, she sings to herself softly as she writes.
  7530.  
  7531. "In your eyes," sings Fluttershy.
  7532. "I see something that fills me with glee!"
  7533. "I see the deepness of... something,"
  7534. "Something I feel you feel for me."
  7535.  
  7536. > When she finishes, the pegasus stands up.
  7537. > Angel pretends to vomit to further express his disgust.
  7538. > But Fluttershy ignores him and continues humming to herself.
  7539. > To Angel's chagrin. She continues singing in the shower happily.
  7540.  
  7541. "Dear Princess Celestia,"
  7542. "Today, I found out how easy it is to be misunderstood by humans,"
  7543. "They can be really scary and dangerous!"
  7544. "But I've also learned that they can be kind and gentle."
  7545. "And that we can't give up on them!"
  7546. "Because someday, I'm sure that we can all sing a beautiful song together."
  7547. "- Your Loyal Subject, Fluttershy"
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  7554. Ponyville Apartments: Mission Adorable  PancakesTue Sep 18 23:39:18 2012No.4548236
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  7557. Quoted by: >>4548335 >>4548364 >>4565017
  7558.  
  7559.  
  7560.  >>4548213
  7561. > Her pet white rabbit sticks his tongue out in disgust.
  7562. "Oh, don't be like that, Angel! Despite all the trouble I caused, he was a perfect gentlehuman."
  7563. > Fluttershy closes the door behind her and trots over to her desk.
  7564. > She pulls out a bottle of ink and a feather pen.
  7565. > Then, she sings to herself softly as she writes.
  7566.  
  7567. "In your eyes," sings Fluttershy.
  7568. "I see something that fills me with glee!"
  7569. "I see the deepness of... something,"
  7570. "Something I feel you feel for me."
  7571.  
  7572. > When she finishes, the pegasus stands up.
  7573. > Angel pretends to vomit to further express his disgust.
  7574. > But Fluttershy ignores him and continues humming to herself.
  7575. > To Angel's chagrin, she continues singing in the shower happily.
  7576.  
  7577. "Dear Princess Celestia,"
  7578. "Today, I found out how easy it is to be misunderstood by humans,"
  7579. "They can be really scary and dangerous!"
  7580. "But I've also learned that they can be kind and gentle."
  7581. "And that we can't give up on them!"
  7582. "Because someday, I'm sure that we can all sing a beautiful song together."
  7583. "- Your Loyal Subject, Fluttershy"
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  7590. AnonymousTue Sep 18 23:50:57 2012No.4548327
  7591.  
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  7593.  Bump
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  7600. PancakesTue Sep 18 23:51:38 2012No.4548335
  7601.  
  7602. Quoted by: >>4548353 >>4548377 >>4548412 >>4548442 >>4548466 >>4548484 >>4548502 >>4548506 >>4553868 >>4554052 >>4555243
  7603.  
  7604.  
  7605.  >>4548236
  7606. And that ends the third chapter. All uploaded on my pastebin for easy access.
  7607.  
  7608. >>4547943
  7609. http://pastebin.com/u/ChocolateChipPancake
  7610.  
  7611. Someone else took the Pancakes account first. I can change my 4chan handle to ChocolateChipPancake if you guys like.
  7612.  
  7613. In other news, I have reached an impasse between myself and I. I'll need YOUR help to make a decision for the next chapter.
  7614.  
  7615. A. Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie visit the local video arcade.
  7616. B. The Mane 6 follow our protagonist on his day off (for varying reasons).
  7617. C. The Mystery Box
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  7624. AnonymousTue Sep 18 23:53:38 2012No.4548353
  7625.  
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  7627.  >>4548335
  7628. A.
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  7635. PancakesTue Sep 18 23:54:17 2012No.4548364
  7636.  
  7637. Quoted by: >>4563089 >>4566901
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  7639.  
  7640.  >>4548236
  7641. Also, an internet to those who figured out where the songs in this chapter are based on. Two internets if you can guess the song titles.
  7642.  
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  7648. AnonymousTue Sep 18 23:55:37 2012No.4548377
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  7651.  
  7652. >>4548335
  7653. THE BOX
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  7660. AnonymousWed Sep 19 00:00:17 2012No.4548412
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  7663.  >>4548335
  7664. B
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  7671. AnonymousWed Sep 19 00:03:37 2012No.4548442
  7672.  
  7673.  
  7674.  >>4548335
  7675. C, you cant resist a mistery box man
  7676.  
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  7682. AnonymousWed Sep 19 00:06:17 2012No.4548466
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  7685.  >>4548335
  7686. A
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  7693. AnonymousWed Sep 19 00:09:37 2012No.4548484
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  7696.  >>4548335
  7697. A
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  7704. AnonymousWed Sep 19 00:10:38 2012No.4548502
  7705.  
  7706.  
  7707.  >>4548335
  7708. If you can, write all of them, it would be great.
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  7715. SPartWed Sep 19 00:11:17 2012No.4548506
  7716.  
  7717. Quoted by: >>4548725
  7718.  
  7719.  
  7720.  >>4548335
  7721. in that order ?
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  7728. AnonymousWed Sep 19 00:39:37 2012No.4548725
  7729.  
  7730. Quoted by: >>4549011
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  7732.  
  7733.  >>4548506
  7734. I think he means you should pick the choice for the next chapter. Sorta like voting, I guess.
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  7741. SPartWed Sep 19 01:09:17 2012No.4549011
  7742.  
  7743.  
  7744.  >>4548725
  7745. i know, but i want all 3 !
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  7752. AnonymousWed Sep 19 04:55:18 2012No.4551790
  7753.  
  7754.  
  7755.  >>4547757
  7756. Hey, personally, I don't mind intimacy in any story as long as it's well written and not mindless; has a basis for it. So, if intimate is what you're going to do, it won't sway me. Go for it
  7757.  
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  7763. AnonymousWed Sep 19 05:08:38 2012No.4551983
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  7766. Quoted by: >>4553384 >>4553973
  7767.  
  7768.  
  7769.  Keeping this alive for the return of Dakan and moar Rose.
  7770. Christ, if I lose any more sleep over his story, I'll go full autism.
  7771. I'm seriously jerking off with my own tears.
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  7778. AnonymousWed Sep 19 06:40:58 2012No.4553384
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  7781. Quoted by: >>4553973
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  7783.  
  7784.  >>4551983
  7785. Pic related
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  7792. AnonymousWed Sep 19 07:08:57 2012No.4553868
  7793.  
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  7795.  >>4548335
  7796.  
  7797. Although the mystery box is as tempting as ever, for the continuity's sake I'll pick A.
  7798.  
  7799. Besides, we're bound to get a heap load of those boxes after the initial exposition chapters will end and the story switches to the next gear.
  7800. >Implying that point A. is one of the last character introduction chapters
  7801.  
  7802. Anyways, have fun writing the next batch, Pancakes! We'll be waiting.
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  7809. DakanWed Sep 19 07:15:17 2012No.4553973
  7810.  
  7811. Quoted by: >>4555666 >>4556406
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  7813.  
  7814.  >>4553384
  7815. >>4551983
  7816. Um thanks... I think
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  7823. AnonymousWed Sep 19 07:21:38 2012No.4554052
  7824.  
  7825.  
  7826.  >>4548335
  7827. C. Always go with the mystery box!
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  7834. AnonymousWed Sep 19 08:44:17 2012No.4555243
  7835.  
  7836.  
  7837.  >>4548335
  7838. A!
  7839. A for the love of celestia!
  7840.  
  7841. I can just imagine what shenanigans RD and Pinkie can get up in an arcade
  7842.  
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  7848. AnonymousWed Sep 19 09:15:18 2012No.4555666
  7849.  
  7850. Quoted by: >>4558202
  7851.  
  7852.  
  7853.  >>4553973
  7854. We can go back to the death threats if you'd like
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  7861. AnonymousWed Sep 19 10:03:17 2012No.4556406
  7862.  
  7863. Quoted by: >>4558202
  7864.  
  7865.  
  7866.  >>4553973
  7867. You took one of my favorite ponies and made a love story around her so my feels are justly felt Sir.
  7868. You're also quite good at your writing.
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  7875. DakanWed Sep 19 11:37:17 2012No.4558202
  7876.  
  7877. Quoted by: >>4561480
  7878.  
  7879.  
  7880.  >>4555666
  7881. Well, satanic trips confirm...
  7882.  
  7883. I'm kidding...
  7884.  
  7885. >>4556406
  7886. Your welcome. And thanks for the compliment. I don't consider my writing that good though...
  7887.  
  7888. Update bump: Idk if update tonight... I kind of want a little bit of a buffer before I post the next chapter...
  7889.  
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  7895. AnonymousWed Sep 19 14:47:38 2012No.4561480
  7896.  
  7897.  
  7898.  >>4558202
  7899. gotta dig that demonic timing
  7900. You are skilled bro, I find this story enjoyable
  7901.  
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  7907. AnonymousWed Sep 19 16:46:57 2012No.4563089
  7908.  
  7909. Quoted by: >>4565044
  7910.  
  7911.  
  7912.  >>4548364
  7913. Dr. Dolittle (1967).
  7914.  
  7915. How did you get the lyrics for a deleted scene?
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  7922. SpartWed Sep 19 21:02:57 2012No.4564606
  7923.  
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  7925.  bump
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  7932. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt5:Revelations Pt2  DakanWed Sep 19 21:23:18 2012No.4564739
  7933.  
  7934. Quoted by: >>4564752
  7935.  
  7936.  
  7937.  Ok, so I decided to stay up late again and write something... Looks like chapter 3 is going to be a long one... ;)
  7938.  
  7939. >”So what is the truth then?”
  7940. >You and Rose have moved to a nearby bench
  7941. >She lies next to you on the bench with her head in your lap
  7942. >You rub her stomach as she looks up at you with concern in her eyes
  7943. “It’s all gone…”
  7944. >Her eyes begin to fill with sadness and tears
  7945. “My home, my garden, Ponyville, all of Equestria; it’s all gone.”
  7946. >A tear rolls down her face
  7947. >You automatically wipe it away
  7948. >”What do you mean it’s all gone? What happened?”
  7949. >Her eyes stare off into the night sky
  7950. “I remember the events like they happened yesterday”
  7951. “It all began with a meeting held in the town square.”
  7952. “We were all gathered there awaiting an important announcement”
  7953. “Celestia and her sister, Luna, suddenly appeared on the stage in front of the crowd.”
  7954. “But they looked different, Celestia said it was because she was and image projected throughout Equestria”
  7955. “She said that she, Luna, and several high ranking Unicorns had been following a developing situation.”
  7956. “She said that she didn’t want to alarm the population until she was sure about what it was or that it couldn’t be avoided.”
  7957. “Celestia told us that our world was dying.”
  7958. “And there was nothing we could do to stop it.”
  7959.  
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  7965. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt5:Revelations Pt2  DakanWed Sep 19 21:25:39 2012No.4564752
  7966.  
  7967. Quoted by: >>4564766
  7968.  
  7969.  
  7970.  >>4564739
  7971. “There was a short panic the followed shortly after”
  7972. “But the crowd was soon calmed by Celestia”
  7973. “She went to explain that tremors would happen throughout the land.”
  7974. “They will only get worse and more frequent as we get closer”
  7975. “She ended by offering us hope.”
  7976. “She said that it was Luna who had discovered a far off place, which would be safe from this disaster.”
  7977. “She promised when the time was right we would go there.”
  7978. “During the following month earthquakes shook our land”
  7979. “We got more news about the land we would soon be going to.”
  7980. “It was filled with creatures that walked on two legs and were called humans.”
  7981. “Celestia had made contact with them and was in negoations about us coming to their world”
  7982. “We were told we would be welcomed and well taken care for by the humans.”
  7983. “There were only a few restrictions.”
  7984. “The most important one that was stressed is that we couldn’t tell the general populace about this until it was announced.”
  7985. “Then came that final day.”
  7986.  
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  7992. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt5:Revelations Pt2  DakanWed Sep 19 21:26:18 2012No.4564766
  7993.  
  7994. Quoted by: >>4564783
  7995.  
  7996.  
  7997.  >>4564752
  7998. “I wasn’t lying to you when I said I was working in the garden before it happened”
  7999. “The ground began to shake, but it was different”
  8000. “On this day, morning became night.”
  8001. “I looked up into the sky and the sun was no longer there”
  8002. “I rushed to the center of town with everyp0ny else.”
  8003. “There Princess Celestia spoke with us one final time.”
  8004. “She told us it was time to leave.”
  8005. “She then apologized”
  8006. “Because she and Luna had to stay behind”
  8007. “It was going to take all of their magical ability to transport us to earth”
  8008. “They had to stay back to make sure they got everyp0ny.”
  8009. “She ended by saying that she loved us all and good luck.”
  8010. “There was a bright flash of light, and I found myself in the metal box where you found me.”
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  8017. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt5:Revelations Pt2  DakanWed Sep 19 21:28:59 2012No.4564783
  8018.  
  8019. Quoted by: >>4564792
  8020.  
  8021.  
  8022.  >>4564766
  8023. >Her eyes refocus and look up at you
  8024. >As she does, her eyes quickly fill with tears again
  8025. >There is nothing that you and her can do to stop the incoming water works
  8026. >You pick her up and hold her close as she cries on your shoulder
  8027. “It’s all gone…Anon…”
  8028. “My garden…my beautiful garden…”
  8029. “My home…Equestria… all gone…”
  8030. “We can never…go back”
  8031. “Even our princesses…”
  8032. >She continues to cry
  8033. >You hold onto her tightly slowly stroking her mane trying to console her
  8034. >But what can you do?
  8035. >It’s not like a regular loss of a home
  8036. >Her whole world was erased from somewhere
  8037. >All that is left is her and everp0ny else that now resides on Earth
  8038. >You can only try
  8039. >”At least you and all of your friends are ok”
  8040. >She sobs a little less and starts to calm down a little
  8041. >”I know that we can’t rebuild your home exactly like it was…”
  8042. “But, you can build you a new one here.”
  8043.  
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  8049. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt5:Revelations Pt2  DakanWed Sep 19 21:30:17 2012No.4564792
  8050.  
  8051. Quoted by: >>4564803
  8052.  
  8053.  
  8054.  >>4564783
  8055. >She looks at you.
  8056. “You mean build ourselves one here.”
  8057. >You stare into her gorgeous green eyes
  8058. >”You and me, it won’t be easy, but we find a way to make it work.”
  8059. >”That is if you still want an idiot human like me.”
  8060. >She smiles and giggles
  8061. “I’ll take you, stallion; if you’ll take just a pony.”
  8062. >You chuckle
  8063. >She called you a stallion
  8064. >For some reason you find that… enticing.
  8065. >”I guess I’ll have to settle for just a pony.”
  8066. >You pull her in close again
  8067. >Your lips meet hers for a second time
  8068. >You move your tongue across her mouth begging for an opening
  8069. >She slowly gives way allowing your tongue to enter her mouth
  8070. >Your tongues intertwine around one another
  8071. >You slowly move your hands down her back
  8072. >Your hands stop at her cutie marks
  8073. >You can feel a change in texture underneath your hands
  8074. >You’re about to explore further when Rose breaks off the kiss
  8075. >She smiles at you
  8076.  
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  8082. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt5:Revelations Pt2  DakanWed Sep 19 21:31:39 2012No.4564803
  8083.  
  8084. Quoted by: >>4564812
  8085.  
  8086.  
  8087.  >>4564792
  8088. >”Is something wrong”
  8089. >Gets off the bench and start to walk away, she turns her head back towards you
  8090. “I can’t let you discover everything in one go can I?”
  8091. >You smile broadly
  8092. >Oh Rose, you are a tease…
  8093. >”Well, the night is still fairly young…”
  8094. “Oh? What do you have in mind?”
  8095. >”Well the dance is here winding down, but that doesn’t mean this is the only place…”
  8096. “I would like to have some more of that punch”
  8097. >You smile and put your arm around her neck
  8098. >”I got a good place for that…”
  8099. >You and rose exit the university grounds and hail a taxi
  8100. >As you ride to your next destination you get some very interesting looks from the taxi driver
  8101. >What? He acts like he has never seen a grown man make out with a pony before…
  8102. >The taxi driver lets you out at a bar that is only a few blocks from your apartment
  8103. >As you enter you know that you and Rose are clearly over dressed
  8104. >If that wasn’t enough to grab the attention of the bar
  8105. >Your and Rose’s behavior is
  8106.  
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  8112. The Roseluck Chronicles Ch3 Pt5:Revelations Pt2  DakanWed Sep 19 21:32:58 2012No.4564812
  8113.  
  8114. Quoted by: >>4564822 >>4569795
  8115.  
  8116.  
  8117.  >>4564803
  8118. >You both sit at a booth in the back
  8119. >Always close to one another
  8120. >You drinking down a few beers
  8121. >Rose is drinking down appletinis again
  8122. >The hour gets late and pretty soon the bar is calling for last call
  8123. >You and Rose stumble into the street
  8124. >Now just to get back to the apartment
  8125. >Which way was that again…
  8126. >You somehow manage to find your way home
  8127. >Although you have a pretty hard time trying to open the door
  8128. >Why is it so hard to use keys with a pony constantly bumping into you?
  8129. >You finally master the lock and practically fall into the apartment
  8130. >You and Rose stumble drunkenly over to the couch
  8131. >You sprawl out onto the couch first
  8132. >Rose falls second right on top of you
  8133. >You both are laughing hard
  8134. >Rose, alcohol, that smell
  8135. >It’s almost too much for you to bear
  8136. >You wrap your arms around her
  8137. >You pull her in close and whisper in your ear
  8138. >”Are you tired?”
  8139. >She laughs
  8140. “Mmm, not yet…”
  8141. >”Well then, let’s see how much energy you have left…”
  8142.  
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  8148. DakanWed Sep 19 21:34:57 2012No.4564822
  8149.  
  8150. Quoted by: >>4565062
  8151.  
  8152.  
  8153.  >>4564812
  8154. End of Part 5
  8155.  
  8156. Hehe...next update will be pastebin only...;)
  8157. I'll post here when its ready
  8158. Time for bed!
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  8165. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesWed Sep 19 22:06:58 2012No.4565017
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  8168. Quoted by: >>4565033
  8169.  
  8170.  
  8171.  >>4548236
  8172. > I slowly open my eyes.
  8173. > And my world is filled with...
  8174. "Oh! Are you awake now? Earlier, I thought that you were awake but-"
  8175. > Pink.
  8176. "-you weren't. So I decided to stay here and wait. But it was really hard to-"
  8177. > Pinkie.
  8178. "-keep quiet so I started playing a song in my head. And before I knew it-"
  8179. > Pinkie Pie.
  8180. "-I was humming a tune. And then you started to stir. So I stopped, and then-"
  8181. > "Pinkie Pie!" I cry out.
  8182. "Yes!?"
  8183. > I still can't figure out how this pony breaks into my room.
  8184. > No locks damaged. No walls or doors tampered.
  8185. > It's almost like a closed room murder mystery.
  8186. > Minus the murder, thankfully.
  8187. > She gives me this great big smile.
  8188. > Her clear blue eyes are filled with excitement.
  8189. > Ugh! I sigh to myself and decide against scolding her.
  8190. > "Good morning," I manage.
  8191. "And good morning to you! While I was waiting, I came up with this song just for you!"
  8192. > "Huh? Wait, what-"
  8193. "Good morning, little sleepyhead! Today's the day at LAST!"
  8194. > Oh, no.
  8195. "With Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie, complete now is our CAST!"
  8196. > Tell me she's not...
  8197. "Today's the day you promised us! We won't let you say NO!"
  8198. > I plant my palm upon my face.
  8199. "So fun and laughter, here we come! Just please get up, let's GO!"
  8200. > She is. Oh, wow.
  8201.  
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  8206.  
  8207. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesWed Sep 19 22:09:18 2012No.4565033
  8208.  
  8209. Quoted by: >>4565044 >>4565528
  8210.  
  8211.  
  8212.  >>4565017
  8213. > One random song later, Pinkie and I head to Rarity's apartment.
  8214. > "Are you sure that Rainbow's here?"
  8215. "Yep! She said that she wanted to look all 'nice' today!"
  8216. > "Nice? That doesn't sound like her, at all."
  8217. "That's exactly what I said! But when Rarity heard, she insisted to fix Rainbow up at her place."
  8218. > "Well, this sounds promising..."
  8219. > I knock a few times on the door, but no answer.
  8220. > The door doesn't seem locked, but-
  8221. "Let me take care of this!" says Pinkie Pie.
  8222. > She lets herself inside without hesitation.
  8223. "Rainbow! Rarity! Are you in here?"
  8224. "We're in the back, darling!" answers Rarity. "Can you help us out for a moment? I can't seem to get this right..."
  8225. "Okey, dokey, lokey! We're coming in right now!"
  8226. "We?" repeats Rainbow. "W-wait a second! D-do you mean that he's in the room!?"
  8227. "Right you are!" says Pinkie. "I'm sure that he'd love to see-"
  8228. "No, wait!" cries Rainbow. "He can't come in here! Don't let him in here!"
  8229. "Stop struggling!" says Rarity. "You'll rip the hem!"
  8230. "B-but!"
  8231. > I quickly clear my throat to interrupt.
  8232. > "Go ahead, Pinkie," I say. "I'll just wait outside."
  8233. "What? But your fingers could really help us out with this!"
  8234. "Hush, Pinkie," says Rarity. "A lady needs time to get prepared."
  8235. > An awkward silence. An idea comes to mind.
  8236. > Why don't I wait and see what happens next?
  8237. > But the better part of me pulls through.
  8238. > And I let myself out the apartment without incident.
  8239.  
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  8245. PancakesWed Sep 19 22:12:58 2012No.4565044
  8246.  
  8247.  
  8248.  >>4563089
  8249. That's right! Have an internet! inb4 oldfag. Not really my generation of theater, but let's just say that I have a taste in classics.
  8250.  
  8251. >>4565033
  8252. Continuation after a break.
  8253.  
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  8258.  
  8259. SpartWed Sep 19 22:14:58 2012No.4565062
  8260.  
  8261.  
  8262.  >>4564822
  8263. GREAT !
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  8269.  
  8270. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesWed Sep 19 23:17:17 2012No.4565528
  8271.  
  8272. Quoted by: >>4565721
  8273.  
  8274.  
  8275.  >>4565033
  8276. "So, what do you think?" asks Rainbow Dash.
  8277. > Honestly, I'm not sure what I'm supposed to be seeing here.
  8278. > After all, the human illusion spell doesn't work on me.
  8279. > All I see is a cyan pegasus pony with a rainbow-colored mane and tail.
  8280. > But of course, I can't tell her that.
  8281. > "You look... nice."
  8282. "Really!?"
  8283. > Rainbow smiles widely at those words.
  8284. > From the back, Rarity calls out to us.
  8285. "Rainbow, dear?" she says. "If he is to see your new look, then he'll have to look through this mirror."
  8286. "Eh? B-but that means that he'll see my human form!"
  8287. "That's the point, dear."
  8288. "Forget it!" she says. "Besides, he says that I look fine just as I am."
  8289. > "Uh, sure. Right."
  8290. "Enough idle chatter, girls!" cries Pinkie Pie suddenly.
  8291. > We all jump at her sudden outburst.
  8292. > She is the last person I'd expect to say that.
  8293. "We are wasting precious minutes!" says the pink pony. "Neigh! We waste precious SECONDS!"
  8294. > She grabs my arm with one hoof and Rainbow with the other.
  8295. "ONWARD TO FUN AND ADVENTURE!" she cries.
  8296. > With that as her battlecry, she pulls us both with her as she jumps out of the window.
  8297. > Wait, what? Out the window? What the hell?
  8298. > Those are the last thoughts in my head as the three of us fall toward the ground.
  8299.  
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  8305. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesWed Sep 19 23:35:39 2012No.4565721
  8306. File: 62 KB, 870x919, 37.jpg [View same] [google] [Report]
  8307.  
  8308. Quoted by: >>4565779 >>4596596
  8309.  
  8310.  
  8311.  >>4565528
  8312. > "Pinkie Pie?" I ask. "Where did you get that trampoline earlier?"
  8313. "I found it," she answers.
  8314. > "Yes, but where did you find it?"
  8315. "I dunno. It was just lying around, I guess."
  8316. > A hoof taps my shoulder.
  8317. "Don't bother trying to figure it out," says Rainbow. "It's just Pinkie Pie being Pinkie Pie."
  8318. > Ugh, never mind. This is making my head hurt.
  8319. > Let's just try to forget that she just had us jump out of a building.
  8320. > And we just 'happened' to land on one of her trampolines to break the fall.
  8321. "So, this 'video arcade' place," continues the cyan pony. "What's so cool about it, anyway?"
  8322. "Really, Rainbow?" interrupts Pinkie. "It's just one the most fun and wonderful places in this city! You act like you haven't learned anything from human television!"
  8323. "That doesn't really answer my question," says Rainbow. "And didn't Twilight tell you that too much TV will rot your brain?"
  8324. "Oh, Rainbow! You know that I don't believe that old mare's tale."
  8325. > I chuckle to myself as I watch their exchange.
  8326. > Rainbow frowns at me.
  8327. "And you haven't been much help, either. Some guide you are!"
  8328. > "Take it easy, Rainbow. I just thought that rather than describing it..."
  8329. > I raise my hand and point at the entrance dramatically.
  8330. > "It would be easier for you girls to see the place yourselves."
  8331. > I can't help but smile as both of them fall silent.
  8332. > Their eyes widen and glitter with excitement.
  8333. > Great big smiles form on their mouths.
  8334. > Like children in a candy factory.
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  8341. PancakesWed Sep 19 23:41:38 2012No.4565779
  8342.  
  8343. Quoted by: >>4565787 >>4571707
  8344.  
  8345.  
  8346.  >>4565721
  8347. Ending here for now. Updated pastebin, too.
  8348.  
  8349. Starting to think that I'm having far too much fun writing Pinkie Pie. But then, who doesn't?
  8350.  
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  8355.  
  8356. AnonymousWed Sep 19 23:42:17 2012No.4565787
  8357.  
  8358. Quoted by: >>4566061
  8359.  
  8360.  
  8361.  >>4565779
  8362. Pinkie is fun indeed.
  8363.  
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  8368.  
  8369. AnonymousThu Sep 20 00:20:58 2012No.4566061
  8370. File: 22 KB, 337x335, 1345255462004.jpg [View same] [google] [Report]
  8371.  
  8372.  
  8373. >>4565787
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  8379.  
  8380. AnonymousThu Sep 20 01:52:58 2012No.4566901
  8381.  
  8382.  
  8383.  >>4548364
  8384. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cAbCNtk8sOM
  8385.  
  8386. The scene reads so differently now.
  8387.  
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  8392.  
  8393. Loscil !LoscilARtEThu Sep 20 03:48:17 2012No.4568204
  8394.  
  8395.  
  8396.  Bumpan
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  8403. AnonymousThu Sep 20 05:35:37 2012No.4569795
  8404. File: 210 KB, 455x492, lololololololol.png [View same] [google] [Report]
  8405.  
  8406. Quoted by: >>4569924 >>4571079
  8407.  
  8408.  
  8409.  >>4564812
  8410. OP This story is fukken amazing, you better fucking not leave out ANYTHING. WE want details and feels. Feels I've had plenty from this now I want details. Keep it up OP!
  8411.  
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  8417. AnonymousThu Sep 20 05:43:37 2012No.4569924
  8418. File: 81 KB, 475x538, 134338255237.png [View same] [google] [Report]
  8419.  
  8420.  
  8421. >>4569795
  8422. I agree with this Anon, you're hitting everyone right in the feels. Autism levels are off the charts Sir; we would like MOAR
  8423.  
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  8429. DakanThu Sep 20 06:37:37 2012No.4571079
  8430.  
  8431.  
  8432.  >>4569795
  8433. Glad to hear that you are enjoying the story. But, I'm not THE OP. im just the writefag who happened to have his story ready to start a new thread. The title of OP belongs to Mr. Blue. It was his original post about pillow case that got us here.
  8434.  
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  8440. again and again.  LeStrangeThu Sep 20 07:13:37 2012No.4571707
  8441. File: 50 KB, 640x448, 197612_125918840778864_4525056_n.jpg [View same] [google] [Report]
  8442.  
  8443.  
  8444. >>4565779
  8445. Never a disappointing story when I read those words of yours.
  8446.  
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  8451.  
  8452. AnonymousThu Sep 20 07:32:18 2012No.4572009
  8453.  
  8454. Quoted by: >>4573635
  8455.  
  8456.  
  8457.  These roselucks fics are for some reason bring more love in my relationship.....ugh damn autism just oozing out of my pores.
  8458.  
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  8463.  
  8464. AnonymousThu Sep 20 09:18:17 2012No.4573635
  8465.  
  8466.  
  8467.  >>4572009
  8468. you dont have to have autism to be inspired silly
  8469.  
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  8474.  
  8475. AnonymousThu Sep 20 09:44:17 2012No.4574154
  8476.  
  8477. Quoted by: >>4574195
  8478.  
  8479.  
  8480.  What is the pastebin link for the Roseluck fics? I'm going to be pissed if i miss them
  8481.  
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  8486.  
  8487. AnonymousThu Sep 20 09:46:57 2012No.4574195
  8488. File: 502 KB, 702x721, 133444205942.png [View same] [google] [Report]
  8489.  
  8490. Quoted by: >>4574577 >>4575259
  8491.  
  8492.  
  8493.  >>4574154
  8494.  
  8495. http://pastebin.com/u/Fourdak
  8496.  
  8497. Here you are Anon.
  8498.  
  8499.  
  8500.  
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  8503.  
  8504. AnonymousThu Sep 20 10:04:17 2012No.4574577
  8505.  
  8506.  
  8507.  >>4574195
  8508. >http://pastebin.com/u/Fourdak
  8509.  
  8510.  
  8511. Ok, now I am gonna sound like a tard.
  8512.  
  8513. But that's DAMN handy. Thanks for the link.
  8514.  
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  8520. AnonymousThu Sep 20 10:40:38 2012No.4575259
  8521.  
  8522.  
  8523.  >>4574195
  8524. Thank you.
  8525.  
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  8530.  
  8531. AnonymousThu Sep 20 10:54:18 2012No.4575497
  8532.  
  8533. Quoted by: >>4575607 >>4575673
  8534.  
  8535.  
  8536.  That feel when you read through the entire thread and a feeling of pure want fills you more and more as you hit the refresh button.
  8537.  
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  8542.  
  8543. AnonymousThu Sep 20 11:00:58 2012No.4575607
  8544.  
  8545.  
  8546.  >>4575497
  8547. Read through these two threads?
  8548. >>/mlp/thread/4115172
  8549. >>/mlp/thread/4164403
  8550.  
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  8552.  
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  8555.  
  8556. SpartThu Sep 20 11:04:58 2012No.4575673
  8557.  
  8558.  
  8559.  >>4575497
  8560. i know that
  8561.  
  8562. >ponyvill appartments
  8563. http://pastebin.com/u/ChocolateChipPancake
  8564.  
  8565. >Pillow Case - She likes Clothes
  8566. http://pastebin.com/HtNbiz2s
  8567.  
  8568. >The Roseluck Chronicles
  8569. http://pastebin.com/u/Fourdak
  8570.  
  8571. >The Motor City
  8572. http://pastebin.com/u/Mortimer_Mouse
  8573.  
  8574.  
  8575. so you have them all in one handy post
  8576. thanks to all authors again ! great job you do here!
  8577.  
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  8582.  
  8583. AnonymousThu Sep 20 11:22:17 2012No.4576053
  8584.  
  8585. Quoted by: >>4579664
  8586.  
  8587.  
  8588.  PiE > AiE
  8589.  
  8590.  
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  8594.  
  8595. AnonymousThu Sep 20 14:21:37 2012No.4579664
  8596.  
  8597.  
  8598.  >>4576053
  8599. Agree
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  8604. >>
  8605.  
  8606. W4rpThu Sep 20 17:47:18 2012No.4582657
  8607.  
  8608.  
  8609.  Ooooh! I can see an awesome moment with Rose!
  8610.  
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  8616. AnonymousThu Sep 20 21:05:37 2012No.4583670
  8617.  
  8618.  
  8619.  Might as well bump; its been 3.5 hours.
  8620.  
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  8624. >>
  8625.  
  8626. SpartThu Sep 20 22:49:37 2012No.4584117
  8627.  
  8628.  
  8629.  bump for best thread
  8630.  
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  8636. AnonymousThu Sep 20 22:53:37 2012No.4584146
  8637.  
  8638.  
  8639.  Bump
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  8645.  
  8646. AnonymousThu Sep 20 23:05:37 2012No.4584214
  8647.  
  8648. Quoted by: >>4584329 >>4586050 >>4589479
  8649.  
  8650.  
  8651.  You know, this pastebin would fit so well in this whole PiE thread...
  8652.  
  8653. http://pastebin.com/u/Dovapony
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  8660. SpartThu Sep 20 23:22:57 2012No.4584329
  8661.  
  8662.  
  8663.  >>4584214
  8664. thanks for the new stuff to read ^.~
  8665.  
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  8671. SpartFri Sep 21 02:33:37 2012No.4586050
  8672.  
  8673. Quoted by: >>4588507
  8674.  
  8675.  
  8676.  >>4584214
  8677. god damn it, that i good i have to say
  8678.  
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  8684. .  LeStrangeFri Sep 21 05:19:38 2012No.4588507
  8685.  
  8686. Quoted by: >>4589123
  8687.  
  8688.  
  8689.  >>4586050
  8690. Lol wut?
  8691.  
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  8696.  
  8697. SpartFri Sep 21 05:58:57 2012No.4589123  
  8698.  
  8699.  
  8700. >>4588507
  8701. sorry i bucked this up
  8702. i mean "god damn it, that is goot i have to say"
  8703.  
  8704. better now ?
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  8711. SpartFri Sep 21 06:16:59 2012No.4589479
  8712.  
  8713.  
  8714.  >>4584214
  8715. man that was cool, thanks for this anon
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  8722. Dein Donut Deutschlands erster Donut Online Shop  WalaheriaFri Sep 21 06:25:18 2012No.4589636  
  8723.  
  8724. Quoted by: >>4589982 >>4590072 >>4590807
  8725.  
  8726.  
  8727.  DeinDonut ist Deutschlands 1. offizieller Donut Online Shop. Bei uns findest Du eine riesen Auswahl an leckeren Donuts, ob schokoladig oder fruchtig, bunt oder nussig-
  8728. hier findet jeder etwas f?r seinen Geschmack! Falls nicht-dann kannst Du Dir DeinDonut selbst kreieren. der Fantasie sind dabei keine Grenzen gesetzt!
  8729. [url=http://www.deindonut.de]DeinDonut[/url]
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  8736. AnonymousFri Sep 21 06:47:38 2012No.4589982
  8737. File: 147 KB, 726x590, wut.jpg [View same] [google] [Report]
  8738.  
  8739. Quoted by: >>4590072
  8740.  
  8741.  
  8742.  >>4589636
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  8749. AnonymousFri Sep 21 06:52:57 2012No.4590072
  8750.  
  8751. Quoted by: >>4590113
  8752.  
  8753.  
  8754.  >>4589636
  8755. Your donut is Germany's first official donut shop. With us you can find a huge selection of delicious donuts that chocolaty or fruity, colorful and nutty
  8756. everyone can find something f? r his taste! If not, then you can make your donut itself create. the possibilities are limitless!
  8757.  
  8758. >German
  8759. L2 Google Translate
  8760. >>4589982
  8761.  
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  8767. AnonymousFri Sep 21 06:55:37 2012No.4590113
  8768. File: 6 KB, 204x258, 45465768.jpg [View same] [google] [Report]
  8769.  
  8770. Quoted by: >>4590807
  8771.  
  8772.  
  8773.  >>4590072
  8774. Oh, well, of course someone would want to advertise their german donut shop on an Anonymous image board within a my little pony fanfiction thread. You gotta know your target consumers and all that.
  8775.  
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  8780.  
  8781. AnonymousFri Sep 21 07:44:18 2012No.4590807
  8782.  
  8783.  
  8784.  >>4589636
  8785. >>4590113
  8786. lel
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  8793. AnonymousFri Sep 21 09:14:57 2012No.4592236
  8794.  
  8795. Quoted by: >>4593099
  8796.  
  8797.  
  8798.  Damnit i want more roseluck so bad.
  8799.  
  8800.  
  8801.  
  8802.  
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  8804.  
  8805. DakanFri Sep 21 10:14:18 2012No.4593099
  8806.  
  8807. Quoted by: >>4593428 >>4593613 >>4593904 >>4594288 >>4594895 >>4595398
  8808.  
  8809.  
  8810.  >>4592236
  8811. And you will have her...
  8812.  
  8813. Later tonight...
  8814.  
  8815. Right now I'm at work...
  8816.  
  8817. Prepare your body...
  8818.  
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  8824. AnonymousFri Sep 21 10:35:38 2012No.4593428
  8825. File: 16 KB, 469x320, pleased.jpg [View same] [google] [Report]
  8826.  
  8827.  
  8828. >>4593099
  8829.  
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  8835. SpartFri Sep 21 10:45:17 2012No.4593613
  8836.  
  8837.  
  8838.  >>4593099
  8839. ready 2 read more
  8840.  
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  8845.  
  8846. AnonymousFri Sep 21 10:47:17 2012No.4593659
  8847. File: 53 KB, 429x410, 1343318790853.png [View same] [google] [Report]
  8848.  
  8849.  
  8850. So where are Mouse and Blue?
  8851.  
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  8857. AnonymousFri Sep 21 10:59:52 2012No.4593904
  8858.  
  8859.  
  8860.  >>4593099
  8861. oh god mah dick
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  8868. ChrysalisFri Sep 21 11:16:57 2012No.4594288
  8869. File: 105 KB, 1000x800, 133574170465.jpg [View same] [google] [Report]
  8870.  
  8871.  
  8872. >>4593099
  8873.  
  8874. I love you sir
  8875.  
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  8880.  
  8881. AnonymousFri Sep 21 11:18:57 2012No.4594349
  8882.  
  8883.  
  8884.  requesting Lyra and Octavia in the midst of a musical battle.
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  8891. AnonymousFri Sep 21 11:40:38 2012No.4594895
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  8893. Quoted by: >>4599260
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  8896.  >>4593099
  8897. Based Dakan i cant wait
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  8904. AnonymousFri Sep 21 12:02:58 2012No.4595398
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  8906. Quoted by: >>4600623
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  8909.  >>4593099
  8910. How long have you been writing this kind of stuff anyways?
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  8917. Suborn Hoodia Gordonii Absolute  SarnulebFri Sep 21 12:14:55 2012No.4595660  
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  8919. Quoted by: >>4596506 >>4596751
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  8932. AnonymousFri Sep 21 12:54:58 2012No.4596506
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  8935.  >>4595660
  8936. Wrong thread,
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  8943. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesFri Sep 21 12:58:59 2012No.4596596
  8944.  
  8945. Quoted by: >>4596660 >>4596936
  8946.  
  8947.  
  8948.  >>4565721
  8949. > "Here."
  8950. > I hand each of them a magnetic card worth 200 credits.
  8951. "Uh, okay?" says Rainbow. "So, what are these?"
  8952. "Oh!" cries Pinkie. "I know! I know! These are 'credit card' thingies, aren't they?"
  8953. > "Close, but not exactly. We call these 'game cards'. As long as there are credits on them, you can swipe these on the machines here and play games."
  8954. > Rainbow holds her card with both hooves and stares at it closely.
  8955. "I don't get it," she says finally. "Can you run that by me again?"
  8956. > I look around and spot a familiar light gun shooting game.
  8957. > "Let me show you two."
  8958. > I swipe my card. Then, I pull out the gun and ready my foot on the pedal.
  8959. > "Wonder if Wild Dog finally dies for good in this one?"
  8960. "Wild Dog? Who's that?" asks Pinkie.
  8961. > "Heh. You'll see."
  8962. > In the next few minutes, I demonstrate a quick run of the game.
  8963. > My reflexes certainly aren't what they used to be, but I manage to clear the first couple of stages with a couple of swipes.
  8964. > Both ponies watch excitedly, and by the time I finish, their eyes are practically popping out of their sockets.
  8965. "Everything was like," says Pinkie. "Bang! Bang! Bang! Bang! Bang! Bang! RELOAD! And then suddenly, KABOOM!"
  8966. "That was so... AWESOME!" cries Rainbow. "Are all the games like this?"
  8967. > "Of course not," I say sternly. "The newer ones are a lot more fun!"
  8968. > The two ponies start squeaking excitedly.
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  8975. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesFri Sep 21 13:02:19 2012No.4596660  
  8976. File: 48 KB, 824x970, 38.jpg [View same] [google] [Report]
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  8978.  
  8979. >>4596596
  8980. "Wow!" cries Pinkie. "What's that machine called?"
  8981. > The pink pony tugs on my shirt and points toward one of the machines.
  8982. > How perfectly fitting. I can't help but smile to myself.
  8983. > "That one's a popular rhythm and dance game."
  8984. "Ooo! Can you tell me how that one works?"
  8985. > "It's pretty simple, really. See those arrows on the dancing platform? You need to step on them according to the timing of the arrows shown on the game screen. More points if you can step to the beat, so to speak."
  8986. "That sounds really fun!"
  8987. > Without another word, Pinkie swipes her card on the machine.
  8988. > Then, she looks at me expectantly.
  8989. "Aren't you joining me?" she asks.
  8990. > "Uh, I think I'll pass."
  8991. "Oh, don't be silly!"
  8992. > She pulls on my arm with both hooves.
  8993. > "But Pinkie! I'm not really a good dancer..."
  8994. "Everyp0ny how's to dance, silly!"
  8995. > "B-but -"
  8996. > The pony covers my mouth and gives me a wink.
  8997. "Besides, everyp0ny knows that it's more fun to dance with a partner!"
  8998. > Pinkie gives me the biggest smile.
  8999. > "... ugh, fine."
  9000. > Damn it. I just can't refuse her when she does that.
  9001. > I swipe my card on the machine beside her.
  9002. > And the music starts to play.
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  9009. PancakesFri Sep 21 13:06:53 2012No.4596751
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  9012.  
  9013. Unrelated, but...
  9014. >>4595660
  9015. .. wat?
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  9022. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesFri Sep 21 13:14:54 2012No.4596936
  9023. File: 48 KB, 824x970, 38.jpg [View same] [google] [Report]
  9024.  
  9025. Quoted by: >>4597860 >>4598163
  9026.  
  9027.  
  9028.  >>4596596
  9029. "Wow!" cries Pinkie. "What's that machine called?"
  9030. > The pink pony tugs on my shirt and points toward one of the machines.
  9031. > How perfectly fitting. I can't help but smile to myself.
  9032. > "That one's a popular rhythm and dance game."
  9033. "Ooo! Can you tell me how that one works?"
  9034. > "It's pretty simple, really. See those arrows on the dancing platform? You need to step on them according to the timing of the arrows shown on the game screen. More points if you can step to the beat, so to speak."
  9035. "That sounds really fun!"
  9036. > Without another word, Pinkie swipes her card on the machine.
  9037. > Then, she looks at me expectantly.
  9038. "Aren't you joining me?" she asks.
  9039. > "Uh, I think I'll pass."
  9040. "Oh, don't be silly!"
  9041. > She pulls on my arm with both hooves.
  9042. > "But Pinkie! I'm not really a good dancer..."
  9043. "Everyp0ny knows how to dance, silly!"
  9044. > "B-but -"
  9045. > The pony covers my mouth and gives me a wink.
  9046. "Besides, everyp0ny knows that it's more fun to dance with a partner!"
  9047. > Pinkie gives me the biggest smile.
  9048. > "... ugh, fine."
  9049. > Damn it. I just can't refuse her when she does that.
  9050. > I swipe my card on the machine beside her.
  9051. > And the music starts to play.
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  9058. .  LeStrangeFri Sep 21 13:57:37 2012No.4597860
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  9061.  >>4596936
  9062. i hope anon will play one easy or medium.
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  9069. AnonymousFri Sep 21 13:57:37 2012No.4597869
  9070.  
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  9072.  moar? Anyone?
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  9079. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesFri Sep 21 14:12:59 2012No.4598163
  9080.  
  9081. Quoted by: >>4598697 >>4598841
  9082.  
  9083.  
  9084.  >>4596936
  9085. > We start with a few easy songs.
  9086. > At first, Pinkie doesn't do all that well.
  9087. > Which is perfectly understandable because 'hooves'.
  9088. > But after several more songs and a few more card swipes...
  9089. "Ooo! Why don't we try this song!"
  9090. > "Uh, Pinkie? This song is at 'Challenge' difficulty. I don't think-"
  9091. "It'll be fine. Let's go!"
  9092. > She makes the selection before I can respond.
  9093. > Well, this can't be too hard.
  9094. > The music starts. Sounds like the usual techno/dubstep remixes.
  9095. > Suddenly, ARROWS EVERYWHERE.
  9096. > "What the fu-"
  9097. "Woo! Now that's what I'm talkin' about!" cries Pinkie.
  9098. > She steps on the platform without missing a single beat.
  9099. > I watch with mouth agape, missing a number of moves on my side of the screen.
  9100. > Isn't this her first try on this song?
  9101. > How does she even-
  9102. "Eyes on the screen, human!" she bellows.
  9103. > "H-huh? Oh right!"
  9104. > I turn back to the screen and try my best to hit at least some of the easier steps.
  9105. > Up. Down. Right. Left. Left. Left. Split.
  9106. > My legs start to ache painfully. But I grit my teeth and try to keep up.
  9107. > And after what seems like an eternity, the song finally ends.
  9108. > I crumple down on the platform.
  9109. > Can't feel... my legs.
  9110. > I glance up at the screen. Yep. My score is horrible.
  9111. > Then, I turn toward Pinkie's side of the screen.
  9112. "Ooo, look at that!" she says. "I just KNEW that all of the previous songs were too slow!"
  9113. > Zero Misses. Nearly all of her moves scored "Marvelous", with a few "Perfect".
  9114. > H-how did she even!?
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  9121. Ponyville Apartments: Need for Steed  PancakesFri Sep 21 14:47:39 2012No.4598697
  9122. File: 74 KB, 1024x768, 39.jpg [View same] [google] [Report]
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  9124. Quoted by: >>4598794 >>4599058 >>4600032
  9125.  
  9126.  
  9127.  >>4598163
  9128. > At the other side of the video arcade, Rainbow swipes her card again.
  9129. > After trying a few different games, she settles on a racing machine.
  9130. > Her first few tries are unimpressive, but she learns quickly.
  9131. > And soon, her skills start attracting a small crowd of spectators.
  9132. "H-how did she do that? That hairpin curve is impossible at that speed!"
  9133. "Dude, check it! That chick's got mad skills!"
  9134. "Man, I never even seen anything past that stage!"
  9135. > Naturally, Rainbow enjoys the attention.
  9136. "Oh this?" she says. "This is nothing! Wait till you see... this!"
  9137. > She does a 360 degree turn as a stunt for her audience,
  9138. > All the while maintaining her first place position.
  9139. > The crowd cheers as she crosses the finish line.
  9140. "Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! You're all very kind!"
  9141. > Then, suddenly, the cheers stop.
  9142. > Someone walks through the crowd - a man wearing a biking helmet.
  9143. > The helmet is painted like a burning human skull.
  9144. > There is a trace of menace in his voice as he speaks.
  9145. "Not bad!" he says. "Not bad at all! You new in town?"
  9146. "As a matter of fact, I am," she answers proudly.
  9147. "Well, isn't that cute?" says the man. "Unfortunately, I don't appreciate some little girlie showing off in my territory."
  9148. > He puts down three fresh game cards on top of the machine.
  9149. "So why don't we have a few matches? For keeps, of course."
  9150. > Rainbow takes a careful glance around.
  9151. > Neither Pinkie nor the apartment manager are nearby.
  9152. "You're on, tough guy!"
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  9159. PancakesFri Sep 21 14:54:57 2012No.4598794
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  9161. Quoted by: >>4599058
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  9163.  
  9164.  >>4598697
  9165. Done for now. Pastebin updated, etc.
  9166.  
  9167. Let me know what you guys think of the chapter so far.
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  9174. AnonymousFri Sep 21 14:58:58 2012No.4598841
  9175.  
  9176.  
  9177.  >>4598163
  9178. Evidently, Pinkie is Korean
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  9185. AnonymousFri Sep 21 15:17:37 2012No.4599058
  9186. File: 428 KB, 914x634, 1339095787936.jpg [View same] [google] [Report]
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  9188. Quoted by: >>4599338
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  9190.  
  9191.  >>4598794
  9192. >>4598697
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  9199. AnonymousFri Sep 21 15:36:58 2012No.4599260
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  9201. Quoted by: >>4600573
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  9203.  
  9204.  >>4594895
  9205. >still no clopfic
  9206. well fuck
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  9213. AnonymousFri Sep 21 15:44:57 2012No.4599338
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  9216.  >>4599058
  9217. My sentiments exactly
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  9224. SpartFri Sep 21 16:56:57 2012No.4600032
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  9226. Quoted by: >>4600989 >>4601698
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  9228.  
  9229.  >>4598697
  9230. guess RD would like Initial D xD
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  9237. DakanFri Sep 21 17:59:37 2012No.4600573
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  9240.  >>4599260
  9241. Hold ur ponies, people! I just got back from work. Im gonna relax a bit then start pounding out some clop. I promise it will be out tonight!
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  9248. DakanFri Sep 21 18:06:57 2012No.4600623
  9249.  
  9250.  
  9251.  >>4595398
  9252. As far a greentext stories and stories in general, this is my first one. I am pulling alot of the stuff from when I used to DM a D&D campaign.
  9253.  
  9254. Why do you ask?
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  9261. AnonymousFri Sep 21 19:03:38 2012No.4600989
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  9263.  
  9264.  >>4600032
  9265.  
  9266. >"xD"
  9267. >x fucking D
  9268.  
  9269. you bring shame to your family.
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  9276. DakanFri Sep 21 20:20:57 2012No.4601428
  9277.  
  9278. Quoted by: >>4601620 >>4601721
  9279.  
  9280.  
  9281.  I made a promise, and I always deliver
  9282.  
  9283. http://pastebin.com/kEdjeGDw
  9284.  
  9285. Happy Clopping
  9286.  
  9287. captcha: hand copinm
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  9294. AnonymousFri Sep 21 20:45:37 2012No.4601620
  9295. File: 46 KB, 500x500, 131886618392-Rainbow_Dash_-_clop.jpg [View same] [google] [Report]
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  9298. >>4601428
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  9305. DakanFri Sep 21 20:45:37 2012No.4601624
  9306.  
  9307.  
  9308.  A new piece of PiE:
  9309. >>4601604
  9310. >>4601604
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