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A Feeling of Pain - 3 (Bad End)

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DISCLAIMER: This is the fake ending that I posted 2 days ago on /mlp/. It was written in about an hour as a joke.
It is in no way relative to the actual story. Again, this is fucking fake.
>You are now Anon.
>And you can't believe this is happening.
>You honestly can't.
>You can't hear anything.
>You can't see anything.
>You don't feel anything.
>The diamond dogs tear through the village.
>Up the trees, through the houses.
>Tearing everything to shreds.
>The bat p0nies are doing a good job holding their own.
>But you and Speck?
>Forget about it.
>The attack was so sudden that the two of you were isolated from any kind of safe house.
>The only p0ny you know that could have predicted this, who could have anticipated this...
>And she didn't give you the details.
>That damnable fortune teller.
"Speck! FLY."
>You turn on her and wave her off.
>A diamond dog jumps on your back.
>You're down.
>It rips into your back and you howl in pain.
>This isn't the end.
>You aren't going to leave Speck all alone.
>You worked too hard to find her.
>You worked too hard to get to where you are today.
>You swing your arm behind you as you twist.
>A successful hit lands across the diamond dog's throat.
>He's down.
>Your back is bleeding profusely, but you can't stop now.
>You look up to the sky, expecting to see Speck.
>She's gone.
>Or so you think, until you hear a blood curdling scream that could only be hers.
"No. No no no no."
>You sprint between the trees, stopping at nothing to find her.
>You come upon a clearing to find Speck cornered by a tree.
>Only one diamond dog?
>This won't be a problem.
>You pick up a hefty branch that one of the charging dogs must have broken down.
"Hey, ugly!"
>That got its attention.
>Weak insult though.
"Why don't you pick on someone your own size?"
>It charges you and leaps.
>The branch comes down across his face, slamming him to your side and into a tree.
>It doesn't move.
>You toss the branch away and approach Speck.
>Blood drips behind you.
>You kneel in front of her and caress her face.
>She isn't injured, thank Luna.
"Hey..."
>She looks up at you, but she's too blinded by fear to see you.
>She smiles at your voice though.
>That's a good sign.
>"A-anon..."
"Everything's alright, sweetheart. I've got you."
>She looks up at you, finally seeing through her fear.
>But the look on her face isn't a smile anymore.
>You didn't hear anything.
>You didn't see anything.
>You only felt a large, blunt object slam into your head.
>All that you know is that Speck screamed your name and rushed the diamond dog.
>It didn't die.
>But you were about to.
>All you could think, was to yell at Speck to run and hide.
>No words came out.
>It was over.
>You came to several minutes later.
>You look over to find Speck pinned by the throat against a tree.
>The diamond dog has his face buried deep in her crotch.
>You can see blood dripping from between her legs and into his mouth.
>You try to move, but you can't.
>Speck... why didn't you run?
>She screams as the diamond dog gives a lengthy lick to her folds.
>She looks away from you, tears running down her cheeks.
>You can do nothing but watch.
>The diamond dog flicks her clitoris with his tongue and clenches his teeth lightly over it.
>Speck screams again.
>You feel sick.
>Her screams increase in volume and intensity.
>The diamond dog clenches his teeth even more, gripping her clit with them.
>This isn't happening.
>Please say this isn't happening.
>The diamond dog tears her clit away from her snatch, blood spurting down his jaws and her legs.
>You vomit.
>Speck loses consciousness, but not before vomiting herself.
>You pass out as the diamond dog throws her into the center of the clearing and darts off into the woods.
>You come to a few hours later.
>How you didn't die of blood loss is a miracle.
>You look up in the clearing.
>A small beam of sunlight falls through the canopy.
>And there, in the very center of it all...
>Is the love of your life.
>Your bat p0ny.
>Speck.
>She lies in a pool of blood.
"No..."
>You crawl over to her as best as you can.
>You fight your pain.
>You fight through everything, just to get to her body.
"Speck... Speck, you're gonna be okay."
>You lay beside her and hold her close to you.
>You check her wound.
"You're going to be fine, Speck..."
>She wasn't.
>But if she was somehow still alive, she needed to hear your reassurance.
>"Anon...?"
>Her voice is faint.
>She looks at you, her eyes barely opening.
"Hey, sweetie..."
>She smiles faintly.
>"I feel... tired."
>You hold her close to your chest.
>A lump forms in your throat as you start to cry.
"Then... then go to sleep, Speck. You've earned it."
>She closes her eyes and snuggles into you as best as she can.
>"Goodnight Anon. I love you."
"I l-love you too..."
>Her breathing stops.
>You can't hear anything.
>You can't see anything.
>You can't feel anything.
>Nothing, but your sorrow, your pain, your anger, and now your absolute solitude in the world.
>You kiss her forehead as you pick her body up.
>You stumble through the forest.
>You think you hear Angels play you a melody.
>http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=zFEuGPhXPa4
>You finally reach the center of Hollow Shades.
>Many dead diamond dogs lie in the streets.
>There's a bat p0ny sitting by the fountain, discussing death tolls with one of the soldiers.
>"We have two dead in the west front, one in the north front, and zero in the east front."
>The first p0ny nods and sighs.
>"We seem to have damaged their numbers enough that they won't be attacking us any time soon."
>The soldier nods.
>You walk past them, heading north for Canterlot.
>You know what Speck would have wanted, should this day come.
>To be buried in Princess Luna's Garden of the Stars.
>Luna would oblige.
>As you walk through the village, many of the bat p0nies salute or give condolences.
>You can neither hear nor see them.
>It begins to rain.
>Even Angels can shed tears.
>You stop by Speck's house to gather some of your things.
>The journey to Canterlot would be long and arduous
>Your journal, a canteen of water, some bread.
>You continue your walk to Canterlot.
"Dear Anon,
I just wanted to write here to say thank you. For everything.
I'm sure I've told you before, but my mom always told me stories about Angels.
She said that they helped guide p0nies when they were weak and helped them flourish.
I've always liked to think of you as my very own Angel, ever since the first day you coaxed me out of that bush.
I'm sorry that I've driven you absolutely batty since then, and that I insisted on hanging around you constantly.
So again, thank you for being my Angel.
I love you,
Speck."

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DISCLAIMER: This is the fake ending that I posted 2 days ago on /mlp/. It was written in about an hour as a joke.
It is in no way relative to the actual story. Again, this is fucking fake.

>You are now Anon.
>And you can't believe this is happening.
>You honestly can't.
>You can't hear anything.
>You can't see anything.
>You don't feel anything.
>The diamond dogs tear through the village.
>Up the trees, through the houses.
>Tearing everything to shreds.
>The bat p0nies are doing a good job holding their own.
>But you and Speck?
>Forget about it.
>The attack was so sudden that the two of you were isolated from any kind of safe house.
>The only p0ny you know that could have predicted this, who could have anticipated this...
>And she didn't give you the details.
>That damnable fortune teller.
"Speck! FLY."
>You turn on her and wave her off.
>A diamond dog jumps on your back.
>You're down.
>It rips into your back and you howl in pain.
>This isn't the end.
>You aren't going to leave Speck all alone.
>You worked too hard to find her.
>You worked too hard to get to where you are today.
>You swing your arm behind you as you twist.
>A successful hit lands across the diamond dog's throat.
>He's down.
>Your back is bleeding profusely, but you can't stop now.
>You look up to the sky, expecting to see Speck.
>She's gone.
>Or so you think, until you hear a blood curdling scream that could only be hers.
"No. No no no no."
>You sprint between the trees, stopping at nothing to find her.

>You come upon a clearing to find Speck cornered by a tree.
>Only one diamond dog?
>This won't be a problem.
>You pick up a hefty branch that one of the charging dogs must have broken down.
"Hey, ugly!"
>That got its attention.
>Weak insult though.
"Why don't you pick on someone your own size?"
>It charges you and leaps.
>The branch comes down across his face, slamming him to your side and into a tree.
>It doesn't move.
>You toss the branch away and approach Speck.
>Blood drips behind you.
>You kneel in front of her and caress her face.
>She isn't injured, thank Luna.
"Hey..."
>She looks up at you, but she's too blinded by fear to see you.
>She smiles at your voice though.
>That's a good sign.
>"A-anon..."
"Everything's alright, sweetheart. I've got you."
>She looks up at you, finally seeing through her fear.
>But the look on her face isn't a smile anymore.

>You didn't hear anything.
>You didn't see anything.
>You only felt a large, blunt object slam into your head.
>All that you know is that Speck screamed your name and rushed the diamond dog.
>It didn't die.
>But you were about to.
>All you could think, was to yell at Speck to run and hide.
>No words came out.
>It was over.

>You came to several minutes later.
>You look over to find Speck pinned by the throat against a tree.
>The diamond dog has his face buried deep in her crotch.
>You can see blood dripping from between her legs and into his mouth.
>You try to move, but you can't.
>Speck... why didn't you run?
>She screams as the diamond dog gives a lengthy lick to her folds.
>She looks away from you, tears running down her cheeks.
>You can do nothing but watch.
>The diamond dog flicks her clitoris with his tongue and clenches his teeth lightly over it.
>Speck screams again.
>You feel sick.
>Her screams increase in volume and intensity.
>The diamond dog clenches his teeth even more, gripping her clit with them.
>This isn't happening.
>Please say this isn't happening.
>The diamond dog tears her clit away from her snatch, blood spurting down his jaws and her legs.
>You vomit.
>Speck loses consciousness, but not before vomiting herself.
>You pass out as the diamond dog throws her into the center of the clearing and darts off into the woods.

>You come to a few hours later.
>How you didn't die of blood loss is a miracle.
>You look up in the clearing.
>A small beam of sunlight falls through the canopy.
>And there, in the very center of it all...
>Is the love of your life.
>Your bat p0ny.
>Speck.
>She lies in a pool of blood.
"No..."
>You crawl over to her as best as you can.
>You fight your pain.
>You fight through everything, just to get to her body.
"Speck... Speck, you're gonna be okay."
>You lay beside her and hold her close to you.
>You check her wound.
"You're going to be fine, Speck..."
>She wasn't.
>But if she was somehow still alive, she needed to hear your reassurance.
>"Anon...?"
>Her voice is faint.
>She looks at you, her eyes barely opening.
"Hey, sweetie..."
>She smiles faintly.
>"I feel... tired."
>You hold her close to your chest.
>A lump forms in your throat as you start to cry.
"Then... then go to sleep, Speck. You've earned it."
>She closes her eyes and snuggles into you as best as she can.
>"Goodnight Anon. I love you."
"I l-love you too..."
>Her breathing stops.
>You can't hear anything.
>You can't see anything.
>You can't feel anything.

>Nothing, but your sorrow, your pain, your anger, and now your absolute solitude in the world.
>You kiss her forehead as you pick her body up.
>You stumble through the forest.
>You think you hear Angels play you a melody.
>http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=zFEuGPhXPa4
>You finally reach the center of Hollow Shades.
>Many dead diamond dogs lie in the streets.
>There's a bat p0ny sitting by the fountain, discussing death tolls with one of the soldiers.
>"We have two dead in the west front, one in the north front, and zero in the east front."
>The first p0ny nods and sighs.
>"We seem to have damaged their numbers enough that they won't be attacking us any time soon."
>The soldier nods.
>You walk past them, heading north for Canterlot.
>You know what Speck would have wanted, should this day come.
>To be buried in Princess Luna's Garden of the Stars.
>Luna would oblige.
>As you walk through the village, many of the bat p0nies salute or give condolences.
>You can neither hear nor see them.
>It begins to rain.
>Even Angels can shed tears.
>You stop by Speck's house to gather some of your things.
>The journey to Canterlot would be long and arduous
>Your journal, a canteen of water, some bread.
>You continue your walk to Canterlot.

"Dear Anon,
I just wanted to write here to say thank you. For everything.
I'm sure I've told you before, but my mom always told me stories about Angels.
She said that they helped guide p0nies when they were weak and helped them flourish.
I've always liked to think of you as my very own Angel, ever since the first day you coaxed me out of that bush.
I'm sorry that I've driven you absolutely batty since then, and that I insisted on hanging around you constantly.
So again, thank you for being my Angel.
I love you,
Speck."

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