ST's review of Even if It's Wrong

Ok so I'll start with the only competent character in the whole fic

Calhoun

She is totally against the whole relationship, and is the only character that the author didn't change. The sad part is, she's in only one chapter, so say goodbye to the only good character.

Felix is slightly better in the first few chapters. He is also against Ralph and Vanellope being together, even telling Ralph he can't be with Vanellope. But he sadly becomes OOC and agrees with Ralph about dating Vanellope out of no where. Next is Ralph.

 

Ralph

You know the big lovable oaf that that wrecked things, and we all learned to love? He has been completely changed. He has no personality, and his obsession with Vanellope is beyond creepy. The author absolutely butchered him for a horrible ship. Next are the ones that the author absolutely ruined, Rancis and Vanellope.

 

Ralph

You know the big lovable oaf that that wrecked things, and we all learned to love? He has been completely changed. He has no personality, and his obsession with Vanellope is beyond creepy. The author absolutely butchered him for a horrible ship. Next are the ones that the author absolutely ruined, Rancis and Vanellope.

 

Before I talk about Vanellope and Rancis, let me talk about a certain scene.

The author set up Rancis as a humongous douche. She set up Vanellope as this shrinking violet that need Ralph for everything. How do we use this for drama you ask? Make a horribly written rape scene of course!

It comes right the fuck out of no where, and the worst part? This is between 2 9 year olds. She made a 9 year old almost rape another for drama. I mean seriously, why? You already have her and Ralph having sex (I'm serious look at her other WiR stories) why make Rancis almost rape her out of jealousy? I love these 2 characters, and I hat what this author has done to them so her ship would seem much more loving. But it isn't, it is still creepy as hell.