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Utopia Chapter 1

By: Lil_Macintosh on Jun 6th, 2012  |  syntax: None  |  size: 7.97 KB  |  hits: 88  |  expires: Never
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  1. >He was created at my expense, by an extension of my power.
  2. >I brought him into this wretched existence, and he was my charge, my responsibility
  3. >He showed promise
  4. >his power, extraordinary. Courage, bountiful. Sympathy? Limitless.
  5. >He was perfect. Not a single flaw.
  6. >The day I showed him the world, he accepted it
  7. >He knew what had to be done, and that he was the one to do it.
  8. >This once peaceful land, ravaged by tides of war, the chaos of it unbearable
  9. >But he is my savior, our savior
  10. >He is our last hope
  11. >Was, our last hope
  12. >He still stood strong, fighting, tirelessly
  13. >any forces advanced upon him, he decimated with ease
  14. >He was perfect, not a single flaw
  15. >He is perfect
  16. >But I am weak
  17. >Most powerful of my kind, but nothing to him
  18. >I was powerless to stop him, even if I had tried
  19. >But I couldn't, I could never harm him
  20. >I was blinded by my love
  21. >I knew he had to be stopped, but I wasn't the one to do it.
  22. >I'm not perfect
  23. >I don't know who can, if anyone can, stop him
  24. >I'm sorry, I have failed you, I have failed you all
  25. >I'm so sorry for causing this, for creating him, for being so weak
  26. >Please do not blame each other, this was my doing, my fault
  27. >This is my burden to bear alone, until my time ends
  28. >I'm so ... sorry
  29. >I'm .... sorry
  30. >I ...m .....sor......
  31.  
  32. >Celestia's head lay in the hooves of Twilight Sparkle, Who looked at the princess with misty eyes
  33. >Celestia's lips quivered, as if trying to speak, but there no sounds except her dullened breathes
  34. >She had tried to fight it, but she was powerless to it's corrupted magic
  35. >Only her head remained intact, for now
  36. >The remainder of her body, encased in stone, motionless
  37. >she was helpless to his attacks
  38. >And she would die here, in the care of her student
  39.  
  40. >Twilight's eyes glistened, her tears streaking down her cheeks
  41. >She only had herself to blame
  42. >She wasn't strong enough
  43. >Her friends, ..... her friends were just the same as her, weak.
  44. >They had stood their ground, the power of the Elements protecting them from Discords' chaotic magic
  45. >They overcame each others differences and faults, with their friendship alone
  46. >The power of the Elements embodied them, casting a most powerful of spells, pushing back Discord's new world
  47. >But something was wrong
  48. >the elements' power waned, it wasn't enough
  49. >Discord pushed back, overcoming the p0nies attempt
  50. >As the elements glow faded, Discord's laughter rang throughout the skies
  51. >Until a familiar snap, at which the elements faded to a dull grey, powerless
  52. >Rampant cackling taunted the p0nies' ears
  53. >They had failed, the elements failed
  54. >She failed
  55.  
  56.  
  57. >Twilight looked into the fading eyes of the princess, and smiled through her tears
  58. "Princess, I don't know if you can hear me, but, do you remember all those years ago when you told me that I'll always be your very best of friends?"
  59. >The purple unicorn tried to laugh, but could only choke back her sobs
  60. "I know that someday, We'll see each other again, on better terms."
  61. >She was nearing the princesses face, holding her in a loose half-hearted hug
  62. "And I hope then, .... you might be able to forgive me"
  63. >The stone crept up clestia's head, slowly, deafening
  64. >Her eyes were motionless, locked into place by the form they were taking
  65. "Princess, I'm so sorry, .... but we need your help...."
  66. >She looked as if she may burst out crying,
  67. "Even if you aren't here ... to help us!"
  68. >Closing her eyes, Twilight pushed down on Celestia's horn
  69. "I'm so sorry..."
  70. >With a final shove, the horn broke from celestia's head, the soft glow if it's magic dissapating, as the remaining portion of Celestia's head was quickly engulfed by the stone
  71. >Leaving the princess wide eyed, mouth ajar, cold, on the ground
  72. >Twilight, sat alone in the ruins of Canterlot, the silence piercing her ears, tormenting her
  73. "I'm sorry princess,....... I .... I love you ...."
  74. >With her final words, Twilight takes Celestia's horn in mouth, and makes her way out of the crumbling hall
  75.  
  76.  
  77. >It had been 14 years since Discord triumphed over the elements
  78. >So much had changed, Equestria was the first of the lands to fall to his wrath
  79. >Soon after, the Gryphon Kingdom, the Pride Savannah, even the scorched badlands of the Dragons' Peak fell to his wicked rule
  80. >The world was lost, what he called, 'chaos eternal'
  81. >All was forsaken
  82. >But there was hope
  83. >Celestia had gathered the fallen elements, and with her magic, gave them life
  84. >She had assembled the greatest and most powerful unicorns in the land to help with her task
  85. >Their raw magic power, shaped and combined by Celestia's to bring him into being
  86. >Celestia had given him the spark of life, from her own, weakening herself severely
  87. >But that did not matter, he was perfect, he would protect all
  88. >He batlled Discords' magic, and detroyed it with such ease
  89. >He too kit upon himself to save the world from this evil
  90. >But something wasn't right, upon his return, the world was still a disaster, if not worse
  91. >Nothing had changed
  92. >Nothing, except him
  93. >He spoke of how the world was perfect, how everthying was as it should be, he was wrong
  94. >He turned against us, allowed the chaos to spread, helped it spread
  95. >Celestia ordered his capture, but we stood no chance against him, he was perfect, after all
  96. >Equestria, the world, was at it's end
  97.  
  98.  
  99. >Twilight made her way through the dense forest, doing her best to avoid traps, pitfalls, trigger switches
  100. >After a few years of his tyranny, Discord tired of the same old tricks
  101. >He devised more elaborate, invasion tricks
  102. >His simple harmless fun, quickly became hazardous to anyone unlucky enough to be caught in them, ... like Pinkie ....
  103. >But he didn't care, it was his fun
  104. >but that was long ago
  105. >since then, no one has heard or seen Discord for nearly 4 years
  106. >It's said that he just grew bored and left to find a new world to corrupt
  107. >It doesn't matter, the world is gone, whether or not he's in it
  108. >There's no point in trying to save it now.
  109. >All that mattered was him, the one created to save everyone
  110. >The one who betrayed us
  111. >He had to be destroyed, at least then everyone could succumb to the corruption in peace.
  112.  
  113. >Twilight found her way to the enormous hole in the ground, large black stone tablets with strange writing lay around it, broken
  114. >The entrance to the Tartarus
  115. >Twilight carefully made her way down the spiraling slopes
  116. >Even this cursed place wasn't from his reach
  117. >He had breached the Tartarus long ago, brought chaos upon it too
  118. >Some say it's now better than Equestria, but anyone who ventured there, hasn't come back
  119. >Whether because it is better, and they just don't want to return to this husk of a home, or .....
  120. >They just didn't come back.
  121. >Except him. Of course he came back.
  122. >Of course.......
  123.  
  124. >Twilight came upon the ragged boulder that hid the shelter
  125. >With her magic she carefully moved the boulder enough to slip in, then qietly replace it
  126. >She proceded the walk down the maze of tunnels
  127. >Right, right, left, right, straight, left, straight, right, left, left.
  128. >along her way, she passed the familiar sights, the corpses of the ones lost along their way
  129. >Most unknown to her, but a few, Lyra, Roseluck, ....... Flutter- ....
  130. >She turned away, she can't look, not anymore, she can't cry for them, again.
  131. >Keeping her eyes to the floor, she continued until reaching her destination.
  132. >A wall
  133. >Just part of the endless tunnel, with her magic, she phased through the rock, layers and layers of stone
  134. >Until she finally came to the small room with various scratches all over the walls, not a place for happy memories
  135. >Leaving the room behind, she traveled down the small tunnel to a larger clearing
  136. >Her utopia
  137. >Grassy fields strecthced over acre, until meeting the far wall of rock
  138. >Various fruits in the orchards that massed about 2/3 of the clearing, multiple underground streams made their way across the field
  139. >A large sun like ball of light rested in the cavernous air, amidst the clouds, lingering about the wilting blue sky
  140. >Twilight's horn glowed as the blue sky seemed to reform to the cave ceiling, returning to it's lush blue allure
  141. >Home