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Do or Deer. Draft #1

By: GyroMan on Apr 5th, 2013  |  syntax: None  |  size: 4.62 KB  |  hits: 53  |  expires: Never
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  1. Opening: MLP logo with "presented by /mlp/ under it.
  2.  
  3. The mane six are walking through the WTW. Spike is riding on twilights back and pinkie is bouncing as usual.
  4.  
  5. Twilight: This is so exciting! The princess has given me the honor of welcoming the Nomadic Deer tribe who frequents these woods. She has tasked me to report back to her about everything I learn about them.
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  7. AppleJack: Ah am happy fer yew sugercube, but why did we have to come along?
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  9. Rarity: You know how I detest the outdoors!
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  11. Twilight: It will be a great learning experience and I thought we could all have some fun giving the Deer a warm welcome. Ponyville isn't too far from here so we are practically [NEIGH]bors(heh heh)
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  13. Pinkie: Ooh I love meeting new ponies-* pinky then goes off on a ramble of Deers being not ponies and how she loves new friends and general pinkie spaziness that I don't know how to write out.
  14.  
  15. Rainbow: I suppose I can show off some of my sweet moves to impress these Deers.
  16.  
  17. Fluttershy is looking nervously around. AppleJack stops infront of her and startles her when.
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  19. AppleJack: flutterShy-
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  21. FS: Eep! *Launches into the air and hangs on a treebranch.*
  22.  
  23. AppleJack: Whats' got yall all up ina tiffy FlutterShy?
  24.  
  25. FS: I-I'm not good with meeting new p-ponies.
  26.  
  27. Rainbow: Well you have nothing to worry about then. These aren't ponies, their Deers!
  28.  
  29. FS: That doesn't make it any better.
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  31. Twilight: FlutterShy the Deer nomads are very nice poni-er-Deers. I'm sure you will like them.
  32.  
  33. AppleJack: Speaking of which, look over there.
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  35. The POV looks over a small camp with an asortment of Tents and camping stuff. Many Bucks and Doe walk around foraging and hanging out(random background stuff)
  36.  
  37. Pinkie: Ooh Ooh! Lets go say hi!( She runs ahead of the group)
  38.  
  39. twilight: Pinkie wait!( She rushes after her)
  40.  
  41. Pinkie: (She appears at the entrance to the camp.) Hello everyone!
  42.  
  43. The POV shows all the deer gasp in fright then run into their tents.
  44.  
  45. Pinkie: Er, was it something I said?
  46.  
  47. The rest of the group arrive.
  48.  
  49. RD: Well it looks like they're more afraid of us, then you are of them eh Fluttershy? (Nudges FS)
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  51. Twilight: The Deer nomads are frightened easily pinkie, we must approach them with slowly.
  52.  
  53. One ADULT deer comes out from a bush he wears a sort of cloak hood with his face and antlers showing but not the top of his head. He approaches them slowly.
  54.  
  55. ???: W-welcome strangers. W-what can we do for you today?
  56.  
  57. Pinkie makes to speak but twilight quickly shuts her up with a hoof to the mouth. Twi gives a smile with the doll noise sound effect. You know the one. What you don't? Go watch the show again fgt.
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  59. Twilight: Hello. I am Twilight Sparkle and these are my friends (Introduces the Mane six plus spike) we all live in ponyville, a town not far from here. We would like to extend a welcome to the nomadic deer tribe.
  60.  
  61. TreeBark: N-nice to meet you all. My n-names Treebark. Sorry about the others, we deer kind are a nervous lot. We frighten very easily.
  62.  
  63. Rarity: Well its a pleasure to meet you as well.
  64.  
  65. Twilight: If you wouldn't mind, we would like to speak to the leader of your tribe.
  66.  
  67. Treebark: Oh, its no problem. I'm the son of the Tribe Head. I'm sure I can introduce you.
  68.  
  69. The next minute or so is of them following him while they speak about the various things the deer people do. The deer have come out of their tents once being given the all clear by Treebark.
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  71. In the background pinkie is enthusiastically introducing herself to people, but ends up startling them.
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  73. The arrive at a large tent.
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  75. Treebark: I ask that you be very respectful to my father, he is a very harsh man. He doesn't like outsiders very much.
  76.  
  77. Twilight: We will be on our best behavior.
  78.  
  79. The mane six plus Spike give him a wide smile.
  80.  
  81. They open the door
  82.  
  83. get on the floor
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  85. and everypony walks the dinosaur.
  86.  
  87. (The writer has just been sacked and has been replaced by a more competent one.)
  88.  
  89. They go inside the tent.
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  91. A large grizzly looking Buck is sitting on a rug with a small gentle doe sitting next to him.
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  93. ???: Treebark, has the commotion been resolved?
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  95. Treebark: Yes father, these ponies from ponyville came into the village to welcome us to their lands.
  96.  
  97. Twilight: Hello Mr-
  98.  
  99. Redwood: Redwood
  100.  
  101. Twilight: I would just like to extend my warmest welcomes to you and your people.
  102.  
  103. Redwood: Thank you Unicorn of ponyville, I'm sure you already know my son but let me introduce you to my wife Mapleleaf.
  104.  
  105. Mapleleaf: Its so nice to meet you.
  106.  
  107. The other ponies take turns to greet them. Pinkie of course is the most enthusiastic about it. FlutterShy is of course still nervous and, well, shy. Well what did you expect?
  108.  
  109. Twilight:
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