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Shining Armor x Golden Brisk Story (UNFINISHED)

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  1. Shining Armor X Golden Brisk Story, by Anonymous
  2.  
  3. >Canterlot during Winter
  4. >Shining Armor woke up early to run a few laps and warm up before the new recruits arrived
  5. >This was going to be the first generation of colts he would get to train as a high rank of the Royal Guard
  6. >He was a bit nervous, and yet confident that, as long as he kept a steady hand on the newbies, everything should turn out fine
  7. >The train arrived right in time, after the steam cleared from the aisles of the station, all the colts descended in three organized rows.
  8. >They were all guided by escorts that already belonged to the ranks, they grinned as they imagined the long journey these young colts had ahead.
  9. >Though the Castles in Canterlot were astonishing, none of them had any time to admire them, they had to keep on moving until they reached the courtyard
  10. >And so they did, eventually.
  11. >Standing in a single line, Shining Armor inspected every single recruit. Much of them were doing penitence, much others were there because their parents forced them to, only a few stood there on their own free will, Shining Armor was looking for those on the last group
  12. >Most of them were shaking, in a terrible mix of cold and fear, others controlled their breathing to preserve calm and warmness
  13. >”Morning new Royal Guards...to be. My name is Shining Armor, captain of the Royal Guard. You will refer to me always as a superior, and address me as ‘Sir’, Do you understand!?”
  14. >”Yes, sir!”
  15. >”...ir”
  16. >Shining noticed one of the recruits barely vocalized his reply
  17.  
  18. >He feared he had already encountered the first troublemaker of the group
  19. >He continued
  20. >”Today is the first day of the rest of your lives, when you all will accomplish something that is beyond you, beyond all of you, beyond all of us”
  21. >Shining Armor moved from left to right, making sure everybody heard what he was saying. He was truly inspired, but he decided that it would be for the best to keep this nice and short. There was much to do today
  22. >”I want to make the best out of you, these next months are going to be though, in these following months I will be your best friend and your worst nightmare, so you better be prepared”
  23. >Shining wasn’t expecting a response, but all of them gave him a “Yes,sir!” anyway, louder than the last one, this wasn’t going to be as bad as...
  24. >...es s-sir
  25. >There he was again, that same colt being late and quiet
  26. >Shining Armor walked towards the source of this mischievous behavior
  27. >He was not going to tolerate this indiscipline so soon, he needed to show all of them he was up to the task.
  28. >He saw many white colts, it was not a surprise since most of the Royal Guards shared this color
  29. >They all looked ahead without losing their concentration, even with the inquisitive look of their Captain above them
  30. >If this was a joke, they could all give it up for themselves for not accusing the responsible
  31. >Shining Armor laid eyes on something hard to ignore
  32. >As he walked by he noticed one of the recruits in particular
  33.  
  34. >The recruit was shaking to no end, in any other condition, anyone would have offered to help him, thinking it could be a stroke or something
  35. >Shining inclined himself a little, giving particular attention on how much did the long and slender legs of the recruit could tremble
  36. >Shining Armor lifted his head, they finally met face to face
  37. >The first thing Shining Armor noticed was how round and symmetrical was the recruit’s face
  38. >Shining Armor realized the pony was just too...”pretty” to be a colt
  39. >It wasn’t weird, there were stories about mares that, in times of need, made themselves pass as colts to join the ranks, Shining Armor thought this could be the case, to the point that he considered calling him a “she”
  40. >”What’s your name?”
  41. >The yellow pony looked at him and looked at that far away point in the distance everyone was supposed to look at”
  42. >”Are you deaf? I asked for your name!”
  43. >Tears started to well up, Shining predicted a tear rolling down her face as soon as he decided to blink
  44. >”G-golden Brisket,s-sir!”
  45. >She tried to yell, but nerves truly got the best of the golden maned pony
  46. >Shining Armor flinched as he finally heard and confirmed his fears. The voice that came out was kind, high pitched, but with a little something he could not entirely describe
  47. >Golden Brisket was so fragile and beautiful, Shining Armor felt bad about yelling at her. Even so, he had to continue
  48. >”You know we only encourage colts to join the ranks,right ?”
  49.  
  50. >Golden looked at the Captain, unsure if he was being serious, it was only for a second, something on Shining’s face must have convinced her he was dead serious
  51. >”...I.I am a colt,sir”
  52. >Three stallions on the left chuckled, Shining Armor thought immediately on discipline them, but he had to know if she was actually telling the truth
  53. >He walked around Golden Brisket. Golden never moved her head, but she was curious on where was Shining Armor going.
  54. >Soon Shining Armor had a perfect view of Golden’s rear. Her ass looked round, fantastic, it was really impossible she was actually saying the truth
  55. >Golden blushed as she suddenly felt the hot breath of Shining Armor drawing nearer
  56. >Shining Armor took a closer look to Shining Armor...soon, with his head between the golden pony’s rear hooves, he looked up to have a look on what did she had between her legs
  57. >Shining Armor proved very confused that she...he was telling the truth, if it weren’t for those shrinked male genitals.
  58. >”There they are...” said Shining, all the recruits started laughing, all of them but Golden Brisk of course, who was about to faint with embarassment
  59. >”QUIET!” yelled Shining Armor “Do you think this is FUNNY!”
  60. >The recruits became mute all at once
  61. >”THIS recruit right here is going to be training side by side with you, and one day, not far from this one I assure you, your lives might be depending on him”
  62.  
  63. >Golden looked at the Captain, unsure if he was being serious, it was only for a second, something on Shining’s face must have convinced her he was dead serious
  64. >”...I.I am a colt,sir”
  65. >Three stallions on the left chuckled, Shining Armor thought immediately on discipline them, but he had to know if she was actually telling the truth
  66. >He walked around Golden Brisket. Golden never moved her head, but she was curious on where was Shining Armor going.
  67. >Soon Shining Armor had a perfect view of Golden’s rear. Her ass looked round, fantastic, it was really impossible she was actually saying the truth
  68. >Golden blushed as she suddenly felt the hot breath of Shining Armor drawing nearer
  69. >Shining Armor took a closer look to Shining Armor...soon, with his head between the golden pony’s rear hooves, he looked up to have a look on what did she had between her legs
  70. >Shining Armor proved very confused that she...he was telling the truth, if it weren’t for those shrinked male genitals.
  71. >”There they are...” said Shining, all the recruits started laughing, all of them but Golden Brisk of course, who was about to faint with embarassment
  72. >”QUIET!” yelled Shining Armor “Do you think this is FUNNY!”
  73. >The recruits became mute all at once
  74. >”THIS recruit right here is going to be training side by side with you, and one day, not far from this one I assure you, your lives might be depending on him”
  75.  
  76. >Golden Brisket opened his eyes widely, he wanted to sigh, but he felt it would have been inadequate before his savior.
  77. >Shining Armor finished his introduction, he ordered all the recruits to follow a single line into their bedrooms to organize and find their belongings.
  78. >All of them followed the line, all of them looking ahead, with a frowned look
  79. >All of them passed by the captain in silence, except for one...
  80. >Shining Armor could barely hear how one of them said “...thank you” just in the split second he had next to him
  81. >The Captain of the Royal Guard stood confused on the courtyard, pondering on how odd would the next months would be.
  82.  
  83. >The first three days passed so quickly Shining Armor couldn't remember a thing about them
  84. >No, he could remember something, and as a matter of fact, he couldn't do anything but remembering it
  85. >Golden Brisket...the young recruit who he mistakenly took as a girl...
  86. >The days turned colder and colder, Shining Armor tried to keep up the practices outside to build up the character, but as the deceases started to spread, he had to keep the practices indoors.
  87. >The turmoil was terrible, there was nothing but the sweat of several stallions, the intense odor burned his nostrils, made Shining Armor sick.
  88. >With no contact of any man around, and the fresh memory of Golden Brisket in his mind, Shining Armor started to have pretty strange emotions...
  89. >He could feel a tingling sensation in his genitals, sensation that he quickly (and desperately) fought to dismiss.
  90. >The training for the recruits was different depending on the race
  91. >Pegasus were encouraged to train their wings, they were trained to manipulate a spear beneath their feathers
  92. >Unicorns trained day by day, tuning the fierceness of their horns stronger each time, the boulder-lifting exercises made their magic stronger day by day
  93. >As for the earth ponies, they had the toughest training of them all
  94. >With the strength of their back legs alone, they were driven to defend themselves in 1vs1 battles
  95. >Dodging and bucking back was a fundamental part of the training of Earth ponies
  96. >It was now Golden Brisket's turn...
  97.  
  98. >"Brisket,you're up"
  99. >The Golden stallion shivered as he walked on the middle of the arena
  100. >Galloping Hooves, the grey stallion he had to go against, was already wetting his lips in excitement, he must have been waiting for this moment ever since the first day
  101. >Brisket looked pretty out of place in the middle of the whole thing, everyone around knew he was going to take a crash course of masculinity in the following fight
  102. >Shining Armor gave the signal, and the battle begun
  103. >Galloping Hooves moved forward and Golden Brisk moved back
  104. >"Come on pretty girl, I'm not going to hurt you"
  105. >"That is not necessary, Hooves" exclaimed Shining Armor
  106. >it didn't matter how much did Golden walked backwards, his comrades pushed him back into the center when he got too far from his foe
  107. >"I need you to focus Golden, stay closer to the center"
  108. >Golden did his best to obey Shining, as soon as he gave a few steps forward, Galloping gave a swift 180° turn and bucked him right in the face
  109. >Golden moaned in pain, he fell on the ground, shaking in pain, holding his face with one hoof
  110. >"Get up!" ordered Galloping Hooves
  111. >Despite the bone shaking pain that invaded him, Golden Brisk stood up
  112. >A few streams of blood started running down his face
  113. >Some stallions started to cause a riot, trying to encourage Brisk to fight back, Shining ushered these voices, this was no street fight
  114. >Golden and Galloping danced for a minute and a half inside the arena, then Galloping bucked him right in the ribs
  115.  
  116. >The whole show turned a little hard to see, it was pretty obvious to this point that Golden wasn't willing to defend himself
  117. >"Come on, fight me, what the hell are you doing?!"
  118. >Shining wasn't willing to accept any kind of indiscipline, but he had to allow all the noise building around, all the curses and hoarse talking, all directed to Golden, who was nothing but a whinny punching bag
  119. >"Golden, if you keep this attitude, you're are going to sleep outside, I am not going to repeat this" warned Shining
  120. >Golden stood back as good as pain let him, his eyes were already swollen, he couldn't see straight
  121. >"Galloping, don't buck him until he bucks you first"
  122. >The grey stallion grimaced in disgust, but accepted anyway
  123. >Gathering all his strength, Golden rushed towards his opponent and used the momentum to buck Galloping in the face
  124. >Galloping, however reacted fast enough to not only evade his attack, but counter attack on his chest
  125. >"Now it's MY turn"
  126. >With that last devastating blow, Golden fell into the ground. He was encouraged to get up, but he just couldn't
  127. >"Come on, I'm not done with you!"
  128. >Such level of violence was normal for the earth pony newbies, the weaker had to endure this, they just had to, but Shining just couldn't look
  129. >"Come on, get up!" the grey Pony pursued Golden even in the ground, the crowd cheered excited
  130. >Shining had enough
  131. >"Ok, that's it, get away from him"
  132. >The recruits couldn't believe the Captain had stopped the fight just like that
  133.  
  134. >"Yeah, that's enough for today"
  135. >Galloping was the most confused of them all, it didn't took him long to show his frustration
  136. >"B-but yesterday you said--"
  137. >"I know what I said; that a fallen foe deserves no mercy, but this is also your fellow, and in these conditions, he can't fight back"
  138. >Galloping frowned so hard his eyes were about to crack inside his sockets
  139. >"That's absolut--"
  140. >"I don't think you're questioning my commands, I also told all of you to address me as you superior all the time, isn't that right!"
  141. >"Yes..."
  142. >"YES WHAT!?"
  143. >"YES SIR!"
  144. >Golden flinched with all the screaming occurring above him
  145. >He eyed Galloping right into the eyes, he looked long enough to cause the angry grey stallion look elsewhere
  146. >"Good..."
  147. >Shining Armor blowed his whistle and ordered the recruits to run 90 laps, all these thanks to Galloping Hooves
  148. >"What!? But I--"
  149. >Before he could explain himself, he had several ponies bumping him, bludgeoning him, and even some pegasus that flew close and kicked him a bit.
  150. >Shining heard close to his hooves a guttural coughing
  151. >He couldn't believe what was he looking at, he had to let him get away a little bit further to know he wasn't bluffing, that he wasn't just showing up for mercy
  152. >But he wasn't; Golden Brisk literally crawled to the running fields, then stumbling towards them, ready to run
  153. >"Not you, Golden Brisk"
  154. >"Huh?"...
  155. >There was no way he could be of any use on the track anyways
  156. >"No, you will go straight to infirmary"
  157.  
  158. >Golden stood there for a while, he stuttered, knowing that if he took to much to respond, his superior would immediately raise his voice
  159. >"B-b-bbb-but..."
  160. >"No 'but's, you are in no condition of running, come on"
  161. >Golden limped towards the infirmary as fast as he could, Shining Armor aided him, letting him rest a hoof over his neck
  162. >"T-thank you..."
  163. >"Don't thank me, your performance today was terrible"
  164. >Golden looked down, Shining could notice he was actually sad of having disappointed his Captain
  165. >"I'm sorry captain..." muttered Golden, something in his voice moved Shining in the inside
  166. >"D-don't be, apply yourself instead"
  167. >At the distance Galloping could only see this act of kindness with nothing but disdain
  168. >It was him who did everything right, and still, Golden was the one who got a full day off
  169. >As Shining escorted Golden to the infirmary, he soon noticed it was locked
  170. >The gatekeeper was near, Shining asked for the whereabouts of the nurse
  171. >"She went outside, she must wait for the snow storm to end like all of us"
  172. >This was bad, Golden needed treatment, otherwise the wounds would infect quickly
  173. >"It's alright, just give me the key"
  174. >Shining and Golden entered the infirmary. It smelled like cleanliness and Ethyl alcohol.
  175. >"Lay down" ordered Shining Armor
  176. >Golden tried to smile, it was hard because of all the pain he felt, but it wasn't impossible
  177. >"I didn't know you were also a medic Captain"
  178. >"I'm not, but I do have the medic knowledge"
  179.  
  180. >Shining gathered bandages, disinfectant, some tweezers and some cotton too
  181. >"This is going to sting, be brave soldier"
  182. >Before Golden could say "Yes, sir", Shining applied the disinfectant soaked cotton over his sides
  183. >"Ahhhhhh~"
  184. >Shining couldn't believe how erotic that last moan was
  185. >"S-sorry captain,s-sir"
  186. >Golden clinched his lips shut, giving the cue to Shining to proceed
  187. >He was saying "I'll be a brave girl" or so it looked like for Shining, he saw that same face with her sister, he never thought he would find it in a place like this.
  188. >"Hold still"
  189. >The cotton kept burning his exposed flesh, Golden jumped and contracted a bit, even when he was trying to take it as best as he could, his soft short moaning could still be heard
  190. "Hnn~...hnnn~"
  191. >Shining did the best he could to ignore it, but at a certain point, he felt a direct connection between the tweezers and Golden's body
  192. >"Hnnn~Gg...ghaaa~"
  193. >Golden couldn't take it anymore
  194. >Shining snapped out of his trance, he realized he was being deliberately rough with his skin just to provoke a stronger reaction on him
  195. >"S-sorry..."
  196. >"It's fine soldier, w-we are almost done"
  197. >Shining wrapped some bandaged around Golden's chest to relocate and ensure everything was kept on it's place
  198. >"Raise your hooves" ordered Shining, Golden obeyed
  199. >Shining wrapped the bandages around him, he had to get close to the Golden pony to do so
  200. >Shining could smell his hair, he couldn't resist to give him a good sniff, he smelled so good...
  201.  
  202. >Golden shuddered a little, he felt his Captain's snorting directly into his ear
  203. >He jerked involuntarily, Shining retreated a little
  204. >"My apologies"
  205. >"I-it's ok..."
  206. >The bandages were done, just a few bruises in his face and it would be all good
  207. >His eyes wasn't as swollen as they used to, he was going to be ready in no time
  208. >"We are almost done here...tell me about yourself"
  209. >Shining gave small talk a try, to keep the situation a little less awkward
  210. >"W-what do you want to know captain, aww~"
  211. >The disinfectant burned part of his forehead and eyelid, but at least the inflammation was decreasing
  212. >"Well...what's your story?...Are you paying penitence or...
  213. >"No sir, I came here to become a real stallion"
  214. >Shining smirked as he kept working
  215. >"Well, one must assume you are already a stallion if you want to be here in the first place"
  216. >"I understand, is just a promise I made to...nevermind"
  217. >Shining thought on pursuing the topic, but he decided to ask something else.
  218. >"Are you married?"
  219. >"Engaged, she's waiting for me to return"
  220. >"So you made to promise to her huh?"
  221. >"M-more or less...ouch~"
  222. >"There we go..."
  223. >Shining was finished, after adding some bandages on his face, he was pretty much ready to go on
  224. >Shining passed a hoof over the recently treated area, he noticed the delicate anatomy of the recruit's face
  225. >"C-captain?"
  226. >He was doing it again, his hooves were caressing Golden's face too gently to be just a friendly touch
  227.  
  228. >"I'm sorry I-I was...uhm...just checking if the bandages were..."
  229. >"Yeah, no I..."
  230. >"Yes..."
  231. >Golden stood on his own, the pain was still there, but he could at least bear it now
  232. >"Thank you Captain"
  233. >"No need to thank me, just, get back to the dorm rooms, training is over for today"
  234. >"I'm really sorry I failed you today, I-I will keep it up tomorrow, I promise"
  235. >Shining Armor smiled. It was not just the enthusiasm he displayed what made him happy, Shining found himself smiling automatically
  236. >"Well, be dismissed"
  237. >Shining leaned forward towards Golden's face
  238. >Golden didn't reject him, he just paralyzed on the spot, oblivious to what was his Captain trying to do
  239. >Shining realized he wasn't a mare, he almost kissed him goodbye like he would do with a mare
  240. >"I'm...sorry, is just..."
  241. >"...it's alright, I don't mind"
  242. >Golden leaned forward, and before Shining could blink, he planted a sloppy kiss on his cheek
  243. >"I won't fail you Captain!" said Golden as he trotted away the best he could
  244. >Shining stood there, watching him go
  245. >He put the left hoof over his cheek, the kissed one, and tried to gather his thoughts
  246. >He could still feel the moisture gently lingering over his face