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An Orange Amongst Apples: Chapter 1

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  5. >"ALL ABOARD!"
  6. >Thick black smoke fills the warm, dry Fillydelphian air.
  7. >Passengers hurry as the bells ring, warning them that the train was leaving.
  8. >The luggage handlers are finishing up as you sneak onto the train.
  9. >You lie yourself down on the suitcases and start to sleep for the first time in two days.
  10. >Running from the police is never a tireless job.
  11. >This all had to happen over a sweet roll.
  12. >All you wanted was something to eat.
  13. >And the sweet roll was just sitting there on the window sill.
  14. >All warm and soft...
  15. >You slap yourself for letting your hunger get the best of you again.
  16. >Maybe if you asked for one, the sweet pony would have let you have one.
  17. >But of course, you resorted to stealing.
  18. >How could you help yourself?
  19. >You had been doing it for years since you came to this world.
  20. >It had been merciless to you and you to it.
  21. >Thus is the life of a human in Equestria.
  22. >Your eyes grow heavy as you look out the window of cart.
  23. >Passings of lucious green trees and wide lakes ease your mind.
  24. >The sun begins to set and emits a beautiful warm glow on your face.
  25. >Some rest might calm you down.
  26. >As you fall into a deep slumber, a cart inspector finds you and ushers the crew.
  27. >The ticket gather gives a nudge to wake you up.
  28. >You don't move.
  29. >"What do we do with it?"
  30. >They look at each other and shrug.
  31. >"Did one of the passangers bring it aboard as a pet?"
  32. >The gruffy coal shoveler shakes his head.
  33. >"The pet cart is two more down. This thing looks like a hairless monkey. No one will miss it.
  34. >They all nod in agreement.
  35. >The inspector opens the cart door and signals everyone by waving his hoof.
  36. >They all lift you and throw you out the cart.
  37. >As you hit the first bounce on the ground, you wake up, and not in the nicest way.
  38. >The second bounce leaves behind a huge 'CRACK!' as your side makes contact with the a large boulder.
  39. >There goes two ribs.
  40. >Rolling down the edge of the hill, you scream in agonizing pain.
  41. >By the time you come to a stop, you've lost conciousness.
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  43. >BARK BARK!
  44. >Opening your eyes, you gaze at to the stars outside your window.
  45. >BARK BARK BARK!
  46. >You pull yourself from the covers.
  47. "What in tarnation is going on?"
  48. >Applebloom wearly trots into your room.
  49. >"Sis, what's goin' on?"
  50. >Pulling yourself from the covers, you get up and look out the window.
  51. >Winona is sitting at the front door barking.
  52. >BARK BARK!
  53. >Sluggishly, you walk down the stairs and open the door.
  54. "What's a matter, girl? You wanna come inside?"
  55. >The dog begins to run back and forth within a meter's distance.
  56. >Maybe she wants you to follow her?
  57. >You step outside and Winona takes off towards the edge of the forest.
  58. >Not far behind, you follow her.
  59. >She stops at a strange figure lying on the ground.
  60. >You walk up to this unknown creature and look at it.
  61. >It seems to be injured, what ever it is.
  62. >Did it come from the forest?
  63. >Winona nuzzles the creature, trying to assist it.
  64. >You've never seen such a creature before.
  65. >It doesn't look like it walks on all fours, and isn't that hairy.
  66. >Maybe a new species of monkey?
  67. >Putting your hoove on its side, you nudge it to wake it from its slumber.
  68. >Instead it lets out a terrible moan of pain.
  69. "Winona, keep an eye on this poor thing. I'm gonna get some help."
  70. >You sprint back to the house as fast as you can.
  71. >If you don't hurry, the creatures of the Everfree will get a hold of it and Winona.
  72. >Big Mac and Applebloom are in the small kitchen awaiting your arrival.
  73. >Applebloom jumps up almost instantly at the sight of you coming in.
  74. >"Everything alright Sis?"
  75. >You look at them both as you try to catch your breathe.
  76. >Big Mac raises a brow on his sleepy face.
  77. "Winona found some creature, ah don't know what it is. But it's hurt badly."
  78. >You turn to your older brother.
  79. "We gotta help it. Big Mac, go get the cart."
  80. >He gives a sleepy nod and heads out towards the barn.
  81. "Applebloom, I need you to run to Twilight's. She might be able to help us figure out what this thing is."
  82. >She raises her hoof in salute and hurries out the front door.
  83. >You give a silent prayer, hoping you can help this poor being before it's too late.
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  85. >Waking up was the easy part.
  86. >Dealing with this emence pain from a couple broken ribs?
  87. >Not so much.
  88. >Something sloppy and wet is hitting your face.
  89. >Opening your eyes you see a dog trying to comfort you.
  90. >It knows you're in pain.
  91. >You manage to crack a smile and attempt to scratch behind the dog's ear.
  92. >Your broken ribs decide otherwise that you don't want to.
  93. >The pain strikes up your entire side and you let out a menacing groan.
  94. >The dog whimpers and nuzzles you, possibly as a sign to tell you not move.
  95. >It's best to comply.
  96. >You look up to the sky and see all the stars.
  97. >You never saw these many stars in Phillydelphia.
  98. >It was quite a sight to see.
  99. >They make one realize how insignficant they were.
  100. >Much like yourself, you were a star stuck amoungst many.
  101. >But an odd star, like the North Star.
  102. >One that stuck out and could be noticed from miles away.
  103. >Wait, what are you doing?
  104. >This wasn't the time for reminiscing.
  105. >You're fucking dying man!
  106. >Letting out a heavy sigh, you plant both hands on the ground and attempt to lift yourself.
  107. >Ribs used 'nope'.
  108. >It's super effective!
  109. >Falling right back down to the ground, you agonize in pain.
  110. >There's no way you're getting back up.
  111. >"It's over here y'all!"
  112. >You hear galloping in the distance and attempt to turn your head to see the source of the noise with no luck.
  113. >Looks like you're a dead man, Anon.
  114. >Hopefully they'll end you swiftly and quickly.
  115. >The starry sky is blocked out by multiple heads looking down on you.
  116. >They all look at you, concerned.
  117. >The hatted one pipes up.
  118. >"Any idea what it is Twi?"
  119. >A bright purple light is emitted and you close your eyes from the brightness.
  120. >"I think it's a human. He seems to still be alive."
  121. >She pokes your side and you scream in pain.
  122. >Everyp0ny backs up, not knowing what will come from you.
  123. >You just lie there, hurting.
  124. >They come back to you and the glowing one examines you further.
  125. >"He has fractures in his left rib cage. Look's like he had something impact them hard."
  126. >Her horn glows again and you feel an emense pain on your side.
  127. >You snap to the only reaction you can think of.
  128. >Clenching your fist, you punch the purple horn with an adrenline powered punch.
  129. >A loud yelp is release from it.
  130. >The big one stands on top of your arms pinning you down.
  131. >You struggle to be released from this grip with no success.
  132. >"Twilight, you alright?!"
  133. >The purple horn stands back up and shakes her head.
  134. >You seemed to daze her pretty good.
  135. >The hatted one comes back and glares down on you.
  136. >"She was only tryin' ta help. What did you do that for?"
  137. >Purple horn puts a hoof in front to silence her.
  138. >"It was an instinct. I should have warned him first, this spell can sometimes be very painful to other creatures."
  139. >She moves in again, horn glowing.
  140. >"I'm just trying to help. Please be still."
  141. >You stop struggling and give in.
  142. >There's no way of moving and her mending these bones was possibly the only way of getting better.
  143. >She lowers her horn and begin the treatment once again.
  144. >The pain is too immense.
  145. >You can't take it.
  146. >It's like someone is taking a sledgehammer to your rib cage and striking it at a thousand times per second.
  147. >The stars begin to fade as she continues her healing.
  148. >Everything is dark and the pain is gone.
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  150. >You pace back and forth as Twilight continues to use her healing.
  151. >She's sweating profusely, despite the cool breezes passing by.
  152. >You don't know this creature, why its here, or how it got here.
  153. >But you're still concerned about it's will being.
  154. >It's still a living creature.
  155. "Is he gonna be alright Twi?"
  156. >She continues to heal him and doesn't take a single eye off.
  157. >"He's gonna be alright. He's lost conciousness, but he should be fine."
  158. >She turns to Big Mac.
  159. >"You can get off him now."
  160. >The large stallion releases he weight and moves back.
  161. >Twilight stops using her magic and let's out a heavy sigh.
  162. >"His ribs are fine now, but he should get some rest."
  163. >Letting out a sigh of relief, you grab the cart and pull it up to the motionless human.
  164. "Big Mac, help me lift this fella onto the cart."
  165. >He lowers his head and clamps his teeth on the human's shirt.
  166. >You follow in suit and lift.
  167. >He's big, and heavy as well.
  168. >You both put him on the cart, dragging him back to the barn.
  169. >Carefully placing him on the hay, you cover him in some blankets.
  170. >He's had a rough night, so it was best to leave him be.
  171. >You turn around and look at his face.
  172. >He has bags under his eyes and he's malnuroiused.
  173. >The poor thing has been through much before coming here.
  174. >Hopefully he can find peace in Ponyville.