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Anon in Equestria: Chapter 8 (Peak of Chaos)

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  1. >The door slams shut behind you, echoes flowing through the tower.
  2. >You regroup with the ponies as dread begins to take you.
  3. >Discord is definitely here. You can feel it.
  4. >He said he’d be here and give you a fair fight.
  5. >It’s not like Discord to go back on his word.
  6. >A slight tingle arises in your head, and you quickly shield your mind.
  7. >Yep, he’s here.
  8.  
  9. >”What’s wrong Anon? Didn’t you have fun last time?”
  10. >He calls that shit fun?
  11. “I guess if you call having your brain eviscerated fun, then I it was yes.”
  12. >He lets out another hearty laugh. All it does is piss you off.
  13. “We got all got here Discord,” you shout drawing your sword, “So come out!”
  14. >”Tsk tsk tsk tsk, Oh Anon, don’t you remember the rules?”
  15. >You think back and try to remember what he meant.
  16. >Make it to the tower, all of you together, come by hoof.
  17. “We didn’t do anything wrong, now uphold your end!”
  18.  
  19. >”I don’t think so. I told you no cheating, and you broke that rule.”
  20. >You got here entirely by foot, he’s bluffing.
  21. “Bullshit! I never broke any rule.” Right?
  22. >You don’t know what you could have done wrong.
  23. >”It was when you were fighting that delicious marshmallow man if that helps you remember.”
  24. “How did I cheat? All I did was…”
  25. >Dammit.
  26. “Teleport.”
  27.  
  28. >”There you go. It’s sad really, coming so far only to fail at the last moments.”
  29. >He is practically bubbly at your defeat.
  30. “Sorry everyone.” Pointing your head down.
  31. >”Now don’t feel so bad, you only let down all of those people you claim to be your friends.”
  32. >Another mind game, but poor execution on his part.
  33. >”Why didn’t Celestia just pull you back in? Or Rarity? Or Twilight?”
  34. “Save it, it’s not going to work.”
  35. >He pauses, acknowledging your statement.
  36. >”So it would seem.”
  37. >You can feel him circling you, his unformed eyes stalking you.
  38. >”How about I give you another chance?”
  39. >Another chance?
  40. “What do you have in mind?”
  41.  
  42. >Celestia speaks up, “We can find another way…”
  43. “No we can’t. Discord is holding all the cards now.”
  44. >”Listen to the poor man Celestia. He knows the stakes.”
  45. “It’ll be ok princess,” though you know it won’t, “so what’s the catch?”
  46. >”Just a simple rule change really,” his voice engulfing you, “I’ll overlook your mistake…”
  47. >”…if you let me add another player.”
  48. >You take a step back; he could pull anything out of your mind again. It’s too big of a risk.
  49. >He senses your hesitation.
  50. >”Nothing from your mind, rest assured. Just another, acquaintance… in Equestria.”
  51. >You regroup with everyone to discuss this.
  52.  
  53. >“I’m not so sure about this y’all.”
  54. >”Me neither,” Fluttershy agrees.
  55. “Discord has us… well me at least, by the balls. We don’t have any other choice.”
  56. >”Classy Anon,” Rarity snuffs, “but correct.”
  57. >”Let’s just buck‘em up. We’ve done it before.” Rainbow blurts out.
  58. “What do you think Twilight?”
  59. >”I don’t like it, but we can’t do much about it. We won’t get another chance.”
  60. “Princess?”
  61. >”Twilight is correct. We must agree to his terms.”
  62.  
  63. >You all eventually come to a consensus.
  64. “We agree Discord.”
  65. >”How delightful.” *snap*
  66. >Discord appears in a blaze of fire, his grin disheartening.
  67. >”Now let me present a new friend of mine…”
  68. >He points to a window which creaks open allowing some sort of mist inside.
  69. >It slithers towards Discord, purple and starry in appearance.
  70. >The mist explodes in light, taking the form of a large female alicorn her hide as dark as night.
  71. >”Nightmare Moon.”
  72.  
  73. >Nightmare fucking Moon. You have got to be shitting me.
  74. >It took the elements to take her down before, and now she’s teaming up with Discord.
  75. >”Sister!” Celestia yells taking a few steps forward.
  76. >Nightmare Moon gawks at the princess, “Stay back vixen!”
  77. >She releases a small wheel of fire at her sister, Celestia quickly dispersing the flames harmlessly.
  78. >”What have you done to my sister Discord!?”
  79. “The same thing he tried to do to me.”
  80. >You step back to Celestia, trying to comfort her.
  81. “He tried to turn my pain and anger against me, twisting my views to fit his needs.”
  82. >You look over the corrupted Luna attempting to understand her.
  83. >How much pain does she hold to do this…?
  84. “She was overcome by her feelings, corrupting her into Nightmare Moon once more. She isn’t your sister anymore Celestia, just a puppet of Discord.”
  85.  
  86. >”Bravo Anon. Though I had hoped it would be you standing beside me, but it appears that Ms. Luna will have to do.”
  87. >This bastard fails at turning you, so he corrupts someone else…
  88. >Unacceptable.
  89. >You raise your sword and take stance.
  90. “I’ll die before I join you,” you say taking a few lessons from heroes past.
  91. >Discord chuckles, “So be it.”
  92.  
  93. >You charge at Discord, tackling him to the floor.
  94. >First Strike!
  95. >Raising your sword, you plunge down at him.
  96. >A pair of hooves pounds your ribs, forcing you off Discord.
  97. >You look over at the group, who are staring in disbelief.
  98. “Any help?”
  99. >”CHARGE!” Rainbow Dash screams as she bolts into the fray.
  100. >The others holler and enter the combat to your aid.
  101.  
  102. >You stand up, Discord and Luna busy with the others.
  103. >You wince in pain as you breathe; Luna probably broke a few ribs with that hit.
  104. >Discord notices you and leaves Nightmare Moon to the others.
  105. >”Hello Anon, need a hand!?”
  106. >He strikes you with the back of his paw. Your body is launched across the room at his sheer power.
  107. >It’s going to be one of those days isn’t it?
  108. >You get up in time to see him slithering back towards you.
  109. >Sword ready and mind focused.
  110. >Time to fight back.
  111.  
  112. >You toss a few blasts of energy at him, each fizzling away at impact.
  113. >Discord closes in, simply absorbing every attack you use.
  114. >You slash at him, Discord dodging them merrily.
  115. >Fuck, I hope the others are faring better than me.
  116. >Slash at him again, dodged.
  117. >Chaos ball, fizzle.
  118. >”Having fun Anon?”
  119. >He grabs you by the throat and picks you up.
  120. >”I thought you had learned to use your magic by now.”
  121. >You’re thrown into air, grasping for something to hold.
  122. >”Apparently not…”
  123.  
  124. >You land on a chandelier as you swing to and fro.
  125. >Damn him, you only trained a couple weeks with Twilight. How could he expect you to have mastered the art of magic?
  126. >Peering down, the battle rages.
  127. >Celestia and the others are steadily advancing on Nightmare Moon.
  128. >Even in that form she can’t take on all of them.
  129. >”Enjoying the view?”
  130. >You hear a quick snap and gravity does the rest.
  131.  
  132. >He’s just toying with you.
  133. “Asshole.”
  134. >”Now now, I know you can do better than that,” he replies, pulling you to your feet.
  135. >”I’ve seen you do better than this.”
  136. >Discord slashes you across the chest with his talon.
  137. >Fuck!
  138. >Blood soaking through your shirt.
  139. >You clench your chest in desperation.
  140. >”That was just a scratch, now fight me!” *snap*
  141.  
  142. >A shortsword appears in Discord’s hands, mimicking your own.
  143. >”En garde!” Discord yells as he takes a stab at you.
  144. >You barely manage to block his attack before he comes in for another.
  145. >Retreating is the only option you have; you never fenced in your life.
  146. >Shuffling your feet you back away from Discord, his attacks still spiraling towards you.
  147. >”Going so soon?” He asks casually.
  148. “How do-“ You’re interrupted as you clash swords with his.
  149. “How are you so good at this?”
  150. >”I’m not, you just suck worse than me.”
  151.  
  152. >That dick!
  153. >Taste my chaos blast!
  154. >You lower your sword and unload your magic on him.
  155. >The explosion sends Discord stumbling backwards.
  156. >Finally, one of your attacks works.
  157. >Discord snickers at this little surprise.
  158. >”Good, give in to your anger.”
  159. >Fucking Emperor Discord.
  160.  
  161. >Another blast is sent at him, striking his upper body.
  162. >*cough cough* “Keep it up Anon and you might live till daybreak.”
  163. >Why won’t he fucking die!
  164. >Lightning courses from your sword and engulfs Discord.
  165. >And all he does is laugh.
  166. “Stop laughing and DIE!!!”
  167. >You sprint at him, only for him to catch you by the neck again.
  168. >He looks over you, assessing your damage.
  169. >He crooks another smile and throws you back down.
  170.  
  171. >”Do you see now?”
  172. >You rise to your knee, this fight not going very well.
  173. “See what? I know you’re not even trying.”
  174. >”See the power within you. Only by releasing your emotions will you even hope to defeat me.”
  175. >His words puzzle you; magic is mastered through focus not emotion. Unless…
  176. >You rethink your past, the cloud, the diamond dogs, and even here. The emotions gave you strength….
  177. >He’s right, your magic, unlike those of unicorns, relies on the strength of your feelings as opposed to your mind.
  178. >Your rage, fear, love, hate… It empowers you.
  179. >Another shit-eating grin, “Now you get it…”
  180. >He pulls you back to your feet, readying his sword.
  181. >”Again!”
  182.  
  183. >You raise your sword, allowing your anger guide you.
  184. >Discord lets loose another flurry of strikes catching you off-guard.
  185. >”Release it Anon, show me what you can do.”
  186. >Fuck him.
  187. >You kick Discord’s lower half knocking him back.
  188. >You look him dead in the eye.
  189. “Hello, my name is Anon Ymous. You killed my father. Prepare to die!”
  190. >You would’ve made Mr. Patinkin proud today…
  191.  
  192. >You tighten your grip on the handle.
  193. “Suck it Trebek!”
  194. >Your blade jolts at Discord, now barely able to block.
  195. >You smile as your sword cuts towards him.
  196. >Discord backs away as he is unable to go back on the offensive.
  197. >He should have thought of this beforehand.
  198. >With a swipe of your sword, you mange to disarm him, leaving him defenseless.
  199. >You have him right where you want him. One chop and he’d be out like a light.
  200. >Discord looks slightly worried now, his odds falling rapidly.
  201. >You look back over to Nightmare Moon, who’s cornered by your friends.
  202. >The battle won’t last much longer.
  203. >But for now, let’s savor the moment.
  204. >*clang* Your sword hits the floor.
  205. >You ready your fists, Discord confounded.
  206. “No sport,” cracking your knuckles and returning to your stance, “Come on.”
  207.  
  208. >The two of you face off, each ready to strike at the first sign of weakness.
  209. >You grin at Discord who’s gotten fairly serious.
  210. “Hey Discord, what has two eyes but can’t see?”
  211. >”Hmm-“
  212. “You. Solar Flare!”
  213. >Discord brings his hands to his burning eyes, opening himself up.
  214. >Works like a charm.
  215. >You leap at Discord, landing a blow on his head, and slide down his back.
  216. >Taking his tail, you swing him around, gaining momentum.
  217. >Vigor courses through your veins, augmenting your sheer strength.
  218. >This is incredible, you feel amazing!
  219. >You release Discord sending him flying into a nearby wall.
  220. >Why haven’t you done this sooner?
  221.  
  222. >You walk over to Discord, your muscles twitching in anticipation.
  223. >You grab him by the wings and toss him around.
  224. >This guy isn’t even a threat.
  225. >You kick him in the ribs trying to get a reaction.
  226. “Get up! I’m tired of waiting on you.”
  227. >Another kick, no reaction.
  228. “I said get up damn you!”
  229. >You bring down your fist, Discord catching it in one swipe.
  230. >He looks at you and laughs.
  231. >He played you…
  232.  
  233. >Discord pins you against the wall, helpless.
  234. >”Poor Anon. So tough, but so arrogant.”
  235. >He tightens his grip on your throat.
  236. >”Did you really think you could defeat me with the power I gave you!?”
  237. >You attempt to fire a blast of energy, but he digs his talons into your stomach, siphoning your power.
  238. >You clutch at his hands trying to loosen them from you.
  239. >But to no avail.
  240. >”I brought you into this world, and I can take you out!”
  241. >Can’t… breathe…
  242. >You look to Celestia, who’s keeping Nightmare Moon trapped for now.
  243. >The mane 6 gather behind Discord to prepare the Elements.
  244. >Just have… to last… a little longer…
  245.  
  246. >”I gave you a chance to join me…”
  247. >He slams you against the wall repeatedly.
  248. >”To be by my side...”
  249. >Again.
  250. >”But I’m done asking…”
  251. >He locks his talons atop your head.
  252. >”Now you’re mine!”
  253. >He tightens his grip again, cutting off your flow of oxygen completely.
  254. >Hurry up girls…
  255. >You can feel him trying to invade your mind.
  256. >His claws tearing through your defenses.
  257. >You have to buy the girls more time…
  258.  
  259. >You made a promise to your friends.
  260. >You told them you wouldn’t rest until Discord was defeated.
  261. >It appears you’re not going to make good on that promise.
  262. >Discord continues to penetrate your mind.
  263. >Images flash in your mind.
  264. >You see your home that you left behind.
  265. >The ponies you now call your friends.
  266. >Your night with Rainbow Dash.
  267. >The power of your rage.
  268. >The betrayal you felt when they left you.
  269.  
  270. >You will stop Discord, if not for them, then for you.
  271. >He needs to learn a valuable lesson.
  272. >A lesson only you can teach.
  273. >No one fucks with Anon.
  274. >No one…